1. Hard - 5Key (2.45 stars, 578 notes)
2. Normal - 5Key (1.67 stars, 377 notes)

Fated Love wrote:

Love this map do you love this map because this map is the shit. Boom! Awesome. Keep up the great work!

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Muu . . . M4M

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1. 00:18:481 - can be add note here, like other pattern 00:16:115 (16115|1,17186|1) - same sound imo i'll keep since combination drum and bass are little bit harder here :3
2. 00:20:757 - i suggest to add note here, it's strong enough as 00:20:668 (20668|0) - honestly, i feel weird playing here (something missing) sure^^
3. 00:30:311 - hmmm, try this http://puu.sh/kF1Ji/24ea4415c9.jpg it's more fit and balance imo of course xD
4. 00:31:650 (31650|2,31695|1) - well, hard to get rainbow here (for normal diff) , i suggest to delete that, that pattern is more suitable for next level diff imo (even, the sound is not really important to follow i think) bcuz too low, following main rythim and clear or loud sound is fine for lowest diff imo sure deleting this note 00:31:695 (31695|1) -
5. 00:32:990 - add note here, same as 00:33:793 - for consistency pattern okieee~
6. 00:34:418 (34418|4) - well, i think this sound is not really important to be LN, not like 00:36:561 (36561|3) - . . . maybe try to change into single note only i'll keep this. Actually they're same <3
7. 00:38:436 - add note like 00:37:365 - ? same sound actually yess~
8. 00:50:490 (50490|4,50757|3) - i suggest to move into 2 and 5 column, it plays better, i love it <3 sure~
9. 00:51:829 (51829|4,51829|1) - swap column, according balance pattern to 00:53:436 (53436|4,53704|0) - of course xD
10. 00:52:900 (52900|4) - delete? it's really low sound, compared to other sound in this section i'll keep this for pattern flow~
11. 00:57:186 - actually have same sound as 00:57:097 - i put double for vocal ^^
12. 01:01:472 (61472|3) - low sound, consider to delete it, this is more loud 01:01:740 - same~
13. 01:07:365 (67365|0) - change into single note only, well, hihat sound is not really important to be LN, bcuz this sound is more important 01:06:829 (66829|4,67900|4) - i suggest to make a difference here sorry but i'll keep it~
14. 01:08:436 (68436|0) - same reason as above
15. 01:19:686 (79686|4) - still have sound, it's actually ends here 01:20:490 - yea, but i suggest to delete this note 01:20:400 (80400|2,80445|1) - a litlle hard for newbie playing this, and the sound is not strong enough as 01:15:199 (75199|1,75266|2,75333|3) - yess xD
    
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16. 00:04:954 (4954|3) - well, actually the long sound is end here 00:05:132 - like your other pattern 00:07:632 -
17. 00:06:829 - add note here, i feel strange here, it's good to make a sense for LN ends transition both sure with ^
18. 00:09:418 - add note here, totally confused bcuz you've already put a note here 00:09:240 (9240|3) - so i suggest it for make it more sync with music i'll keep this one. Those note are only for snare drum
19. 00:12:900 - 00:12:990 - same, add note for drum . . . since this is the highest diff, and for make it consistent cuz you've alrealy do this too 00:13:704 - keep desu~
20. 00:22:900 - actually have same drum sound as 00:22:811 - so, consider to make it same amount of note too keep~
21. 00:23:347 - i can hear a sound like 00:22:900 - here, add note on it sure^^
22. 00:32:543 - add note, kick sound in here is an exception, bcuz it contains other big sound too, like cymbal suree~
23. 00:41:561 - add note here, for kick sound (it's really clear) of course
24. 00:46:204 - and 00:47:007 - i suggust to add a single note on that point, cuz the instrument sound is really big (have a little impact) compared other single LN keep desu~
25. 00:56:561 (56561|0) - really low, even its almost unaudible, i suggest to delete that . . . compared with this note 00:57:186 - keep~
26. 00:57:186 - add note here, same sound as 00:57:097 - keep~
27. 00:58:257 - start here, to avoid boring pattern sorry i suggest to map other instrument too, like drum 00:59:240 - 01:00:043 - and many more . . . well, your LN is nonstop until here 01:06:829 - and it's same type with 1 LN and 1 single note repetitively . . . so i suggest to make a more creativity on here keep lol rip me
28. 01:15:668 (75668|2) - same as my first mod, LN is end here 01:15:847 - yess~
29. 01:17:543 - add note here for kick, and make a better transition for next LN okiee
30. 01:18:525 - add note here, same reason as ^ keep desu
31. 01:20:490 (80490|4,80668|3) - ctrl g ? well, i think something like this http://puu.sh/kF3j0/24ff65c722.jpg is really bad for reaction in playingkeep too ^^

okay mod done . . . good luck, nice btw

Muu-chan wrote:

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00:38:436 - add note like 00:37:365 - ? same sound actually yess~

NlHIL wrote:

Muu-chan wrote:

[Normal]
00:38:436 - add note like 00:37:365 - ? same sound actually yess~

lol

Muu-chan wrote:

xD omj. actually the difference just what is the reason and how you say it xD im that kind of person ><" lol rip me

NlHIL wrote:

It's only the fun of mine today. thank you. so I shot stars. good luck ><

CloudHolic wrote:

Hi from CloudHolic's modding queue!
Here are my suggestions. You can reject all of them.

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Normal

1. 00:35:143 (35143|2) - Delete. This sound is too faint to mapping in NM.
2. 00:45:143 - There is a beat here. How about adding a note?
3. 01:06:571 - ^
4. 01:15:678 (75678|2) - This LN ends with 01:15:901.
5. 01:15:946 (75946|1) - This LN starts with 01:15:901.
6. 01:18:357 (78357|4) - This LN ends with 01:18:580.
7. 01:18:625 (78625|2) - This Ln starts with 01:18:580.

Hard

1. 00:04:964 (4964|3) - This LN ends with 00:05:187.
2. 00:05:232 (5232|0) - This LN starts with 00:05:187.
3. 00:07:643 (7643|3) - This LN ends with 00:07:866.
4. 00:07:910 (7910|4) - This LN starts with 00:07:866.
5. 00:32:285 - There is a beat here. How about adding a note?
6. 00:45:143 - ^
7. 00:47:018 (47018|2) - Add another LN. The sound is larger from this point.
8. 01:15:678 (75678|2) - This LN ends with 01:15:901.
9. 01:15:946 (75946|0) - This LN starts with 01:15:901.
10. 01:18:357 (78357|0) - This LN ends with 01:18:580.
11. 01:18:625 (78625|4) - This Ln starts with 01:18:580.

andykaakmald wrote:

Hi Muu-Chan

Why don't you set this map's offset to 400 (but first, you must uncheck the "move already placed notes with **************"). Then add a timing section at the very beginning of the map. After that, CTRL+A, cut it, and place the very first note at the line when the sound comes in.

One more, check AiMod frequently. Ignore "this should at least have 1 easy or normal diff" or sth.

Those are just suggestion though. I'm still a newbie actually.. So I don't know how to use those kind of writing like them :''')

xanibabe wrote:

ooo jazzy!~
(this mapset is like, "i hope you like grace notes")

normal

00:02:553 (2553|0) - i think this should be a regular note, or at least not following the next LNs in suuccession (like how hard looks) because they're mapped to different things (like LN is mapped to piano note but 00:02:821 (2821|1,3089|2,3357|3,3625|4) - is strings)
00:23:089 - at the risk of trading comfortable patterns for pitch relevancy, this could be mapped like
hmmm after some long examination, overall this map seems solid. at first i thought the mapping in the verse was a bit random, but it seems to follow the pattern of focusing on drums > vocals > string bass ?
also, i think some sections such as 00:49:696 - could have pitch relevancy, but it's your choice

hard

00:02:553 (2553|2) - could change this note to an LN to follow pattern of 2 LNs for two piano notes
00:45:143 - add note for toms (since 00:45:053 (45053|3) - kinda leads into it)
00:45:321 - i think there's another note here like 00:45:053 - but im not sure
00:47:821 (47821|0,47821|4,48089|2,48089|1,48357|0,48357|3) - i think you have been mapping the strings as one note/LN? (unless there's something else here i'm not hearing)

overall i think you aim for very comfortable patterning, which is fine, but i think you could consider pitch relevancy every once in a while, even though its a lower keymode. good luck with this set! (and sorry this mod was so short, first time modding 5k)