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Shiena Nishizawa - Meaning

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Topic Starter
Arusamour
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Lasse
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General
You aren't using the maximum possible BG quality, here is 1366x768 version of your BG:
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/fjI3vpTt.png


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ugh I don't really like thos "half overlaps" you use so often, but it seems to be the style you prefer and I've seen plenty of maps ranked with those so I won't comment more on them

00:01:709 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - this clockwise flow into -> straight stream feels weird to play with 00:01:393 (3) - and 00:01:867 (3) - stacked
I suggest you move 00:01:867 (3) upwards a bit and maybe curve the start of the stream too
00:02:815 (1,1,2) - same shape would look better here imo, you could curve 00:04:078 (1) - instead
00:05:657 (1,1,1,1) - nc spam seems a bit too much
00:06:131 (1,1) - those look rather "choppy", 00:06:605 (1,1) - would feel way smoother if the first one was curved normally and blanketing the second one
00:07:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - star looks slightly off
00:08:183 (1,2) - I don't think that antijump fits here
00:09:131 (3,4) - blanket is a bit off
00:08:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I can't really seem to understand the ds reasoning here ,the changes feel rather random
00:08:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so many stars
you should try to make some different jump patterns too, the increasing star here feels nice to play, so consider changing some of the others?
00:12:605 (1,2,1,2) - kinda confusing for no reason
00:14:499 (1) - nc?
or here 00:14:815 (3) - it's not a downbeat, but still a really strong beat
00:16:710 (1,1) - I don't think those should be at the edges of the play area, makes them really awkward to play
00:22:236 (1,1) - thos fit the vocals well, but there are really strong drums on the white ticks, so maybe at least hitosund those?
00:26:341 (1) - slider would look better if it was symmetric
00:26:815 (2) - this should be slightly more right as the slider curve suggests a movement there
00:28:236 (8,9) - blanket is off
00:29:183 (1) - mapping to the vocals is fine and all, but you are really missing on so many strong drum beats etc. like this one on the white tick here
00:32:499 (2) - you are using a clap here, so how about adding a custom one?

00:33:447 (6) - nc this please, it's a downbeat and the song changes tempo and yo ucut the sv to 1/3
currently this looks like a kickslider
00:35:657 really strong beat, should be clickable

00:37:394 (4) - you should really moce those whistles from the slider body to the head
00:41:183 (4,1) - this flow break feels kind of awkward to play, do sth with 00:41:341 (1,2,3,4) -
00:55:710 (3,1) - this is really nice, but the blanket could use some tiny tweaks
00:56:657 (1,1) - ^
01:01:236 adding just a single note here would nicely emphasize the vocal here
01:02:499 (4) - there should really be a nc here

Generally there are lots of spacing changes that seem really random...
Topic Starter
Arusamour

Lasse wrote:

M4M reply

General
You aren't using the maximum possible BG quality, here is 1366x768 version of your BG:
http://lasse.s-ul.eu/fjI3vpTt.png This is just a random bg i found, i will find a new one tho


Extra
ugh I don't really like thos "half overlaps" you use so often, but it seems to be the style you prefer and I've seen plenty of maps ranked with those so I won't comment more on them

00:01:709 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - this clockwise flow into -> straight stream feels weird to play with 00:01:393 (3) - and 00:01:867 (3) - stacked
I suggest you move 00:01:867 (3) upwards a bit and maybe curve the start of the stream too I think it's fine.
00:02:815 (1,1,2) - same shape would look better here imo, you could curve 00:04:078 (1) - instead aligned to shape shape.doesn't need a curve.
00:05:657 (1,1,1,1) - nc spam seems a bit too much Fixed
00:06:131 (1,1) - those look rather "choppy", 00:06:605 (1,1) - would feel way smoother if the first one was curved normally and blanketing the second one Fixed
00:07:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - star looks slightly off Fixed
00:08:183 (1,2) - I don't think that antijump fits here Will think about remaking that section
00:09:131 (3,4) - blanket is a bit off Fixed
00:08:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I can't really seem to understand the ds reasoning here ,the changes feel rather random I will remake that section like i said.
00:08:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so many stars
you should try to make some different jump patterns too, the increasing star here feels nice to play, so consider changing some of the others? Keeping the stars until i can find a cooler pattern
00:12:605 (1,2,1,2) - kinda confusing for no reason Changed
00:14:499 (1) - nc? Fixed
or here 00:14:815 (3) - it's not a downbeat, but still a really strong beat Added NC
00:16:710 (1,1) - I don't think those should be at the edges of the play area, makes them really awkward to play It's fine.
00:22:236 (1,1) - thos fit the vocals well, but there are really strong drums on the white ticks, so maybe at least hitosund those? added
00:26:341 (1) - slider would look better if it was symmetric its fine
00:26:815 (2) - this should be slightly more right as the slider curve suggests a movement there fixed
00:28:236 (8,9) - blanket is off fixed
00:29:183 (1) - mapping to the vocals is fine and all, but you are really missing on so many strong drum beats etc. like this one on the white tick here fixed
00:32:499 (2) - you are using a clap here, so how about adding a custom one? will find one

00:33:447 (6) - nc this please, it's a downbeat and the song changes tempo and yo ucut the sv to 1/3
currently this looks like a kickslider fixed
00:35:657 really strong beat, should be clickable added

00:37:394 (4) - you should really moce those whistles from the slider body to the head added
00:41:183 (4,1) - this flow break feels kind of awkward to play, do sth with 00:41:341 (1,2,3,4) - fixed
00:55:710 (3,1) - this is really nice, but the blanket could use some tiny tweaks fixed
00:56:657 (1,1) - ^ remade
01:01:236 adding just a single note here would nicely emphasize the vocal here added
01:02:499 (4) - there should really be a nc here added

Generally there are lots of spacing changes that seem really random...
thx for the mod
Asserin

Extra

  1. Rounding shloud start there 00:01:868 (1) - for perfect flow
  2. 00:02:815 (1,1) - I think this will be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3638558
  3. 00:06:131 (2,3) - I think u can do nicer sliders then those that have
  4. 00:10:710 (4) - Delete this cirlce and do longer slider
  5. 00:18:605 - Missing note
  6. 00:27:368 (5,6) - Change it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3638565
I see that you have a lot of good ideas but you have a problem with the implementation of their :/ It looks chaotic/random and u shlould map for melody not for vocal cus its mistake .
Good luck !
Akitoshi
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[Extra]
  1. 00:12:605 (1,2,1) - extra? why not stream around here? I heard very strong instrumental 1/4 here
  2. 00:14:973 (1) - I can't get why you put single NC here.,
  3. 00:18:605 - Y u no beat, very strong Drum here D:
  4. 00:54:762 (6) - make it further with (5)
  5. 00:54:920 (7,1) - pls swap them, your red-ticked slider sounds pretty awkward
  6. 01:03:762 (10) - I know you'll know what's the NC~
  7. 00:22:236 (1,1,1) - you'll remove these NCs or make some Slider Velocity changes in every slider.
  8. 00:41:657 (3) - how about put this on center of 00:40:868 (2,3,4) - you can emphasize the strong pre-chorus much better
Very short mod? Never curse me.
Topic Starter
Arusamour

Asserin wrote:

Extra

  1. Rounding shloud start there 00:01:868 (1) - for perfect flow I don't know how to work it. I'm going to stick with the current one tho.
  2. 00:02:815 (1,1) - I think this will be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3638558 Tried it. Plays out awkward. I would have to change a lot of the things after it. I don't think this would really make this better, just a different form of the same concept.
  3. 00:06:131 (2,3) - I think u can do nicer sliders then those that have I have no idea on how to improve this part. i know it's ugly. i'm just not creative enough.
  4. 00:10:710 (4) - Delete this cirlce and do longer slider heard i should do this from other people. I'll try, if i don't think it's 100% necessary, ill keep it as it is.
  5. 00:18:605 - Missing note whoops. That whole jumpy section was pushed down in the timeline.
  6. 00:27:368 (5,6) - Change it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3638565
Fixed!
I see that you have a lot of good ideas but you have a problem with the implementation of their :/ It looks chaotic/random and u shlould map for melody not for vocal cus its mistake .
Good luck !
Thanks for the mod!
Topic Starter
Arusamour

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:

All of these are optional
[Extra]
  1. 00:12:605 (1,2,1) - extra? why not stream around here? I heard very strong instrumental 1/4 here I've tried. It's wayyy to random for a stream to be there. I would have to remake a the big parts after it. i don't want to do that.
  2. 00:14:973 (1) - I can't get why you put single NC here., When i was remapping that section; i forget about NC's often.
  3. 00:18:605 - Y u no beat, very strong Drum here D: added
  4. 00:54:762 (6) - make it further with (5) fixed
  5. 00:54:920 (7,1) - pls swap them, your red-ticked slider sounds pretty awkward Fixed, but i had to replace one of the notes. Pretty shit placement i have to say. I just can't think of a better placement tho.
  6. 01:03:762 (10) - I know you'll know what's the NC~ fixed
  7. 00:22:236 (1,1,1) - you'll remove these NCs or make some Slider Velocity changes in every slider.changed.
  8. 00:41:657 (3) - how about put this on center of 00:40:868 (2,3,4) - you can emphasize the strong pre-chorus much better
Implemented. I replaced the circles so now they place out much smoother. thx for this help!

Very short mod? Never curse me.
thx for the mod. really helpful; that last bit!
Bara-
Diff+sounds

Oh
Fix the tags please
艦隊これくしょん -艦これ is already the source, so no need to be in tags
Also add Synpoo (and my name, just as xChippy and Teyjang for when they finish their diff) to tags
Taeyang
done

http://puu.sh/k7BSg/9be49823fa.zip

never give up plz!
if you need my help when ever call me
i will help you :)
osu
Topic Starter
Arusamour

osu wrote:

http://puu.sh/kcZBn/c4cab5d70b.jpg

Taeyang's Extra FC >.<
1. nice name
2. nice score
Taeyang
IRC
01:07 Boobs: http://puu.sh/kdoYY.rar look over
03:26 Taeyang: are you there?
03:26 Boobs: yes
03:27 *Taeyang is editing Shiena Nishizawa - Meaning [Normal]
03:27 Taeyang: come on
03:27 Taeyang: you have time?
03:27 Boobs: ?
03:27 Taeyang: now i will teach you
03:27 Boobs: okokokok
03:27 Boobs: i have plenty of time
03:28 Taeyang: make normal and hard :) let's go for rank
03:28 Boobs: ok
03:28 Taeyang: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Normal
03:28 Taeyang: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
03:28 Taeyang: here spinners part read plz
03:29 Taeyang: Easy and normal rule almost same
03:29 Boobs: ok
03:29 Taeyang: 00:01:868 (1) -
03:29 Boobs: fixed spinner
03:29 Taeyang: and see your spinner
03:29 Taeyang: can you send me puush?
03:30 Boobs: ok
03:30 Boobs: http://puu.sh/kdxQJ.osu
03:30 Taeyang: nono
03:30 Taeyang: pictuer
03:30 Boobs: oh
03:30 Boobs: ok
03:31 Boobs: http://puu.sh/kdxUA.png
03:31 Taeyang: no.. :P
03:32 Taeyang: in spiner need 3 white tick
03:32 Taeyang: so i recommend just remove
03:32 Taeyang: that too unrank able
03:32 Boobs: alright
03:33 Boobs: umm, the intro is remapped
03:33 Boobs: use that .osu file instead
03:33 Boobs: it's better
03:34 Taeyang: umm
03:34 Taeyang: see more QATs and BNs map
03:34 Taeyang: This game is 'rhythm game'
03:35 Taeyang: so rhythm is important
03:35 *Taeyang is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651490 Shiena Nishizawa - FUBUKI [Normal]]
03:35 Taeyang: come here
03:36 Taeyang: let's see Kawaiwkyik's normal
03:36 Boobs: it's hard to understand how he maps it
03:36 Taeyang: make like this
03:36 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdye8/b2839b43f2.jpg
03:36 Taeyang: wite
03:37 Boobs: ohhh
03:37 Boobs: i understand how
03:37 Taeyang: and see rhythm term
03:37 Boobs: now*
03:37 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdyhS/61bdfe5b10.jpg
03:37 Taeyang: he only used
03:37 Taeyang: 1/1 1/2 rhythm term
03:38 Taeyang: you know 1/1 1/2?
03:38 Boobs: i dont know
03:38 Boobs: http://puu.sh/kdym3.png do i change to 1/1 and 1/2?
03:39 Taeyang: no.
03:39 Taeyang: and see your map
03:39 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdyoL/b97b1d5de8.jpg
03:40 Taeyang: you need understand 1/1 1/2 1/4 2/1 4/1
03:41 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdywK/a23de9f1b0.jpg
03:42 Taeyang: quiz)~00:06:085 (1) - what is this slide
03:42 Boobs: 4/1?
03:42 Taeyang: no D:
03:43 Taeyang: that's 2/1 slide
03:43 Boobs: 1/1
03:43 Boobs: wtf
03:43 Boobs: oh. ok
03:43 Taeyang: if your take mods you need understand this
03:43 Taeyang: wait
03:44 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdyKJ/9777a8d075.jpg
03:44 Taeyang: 00:11:418 (1) -
03:44 Taeyang: what is this?
03:45 Boobs: 4/1?
03:45 Taeyang: yeap!! :D
03:45 Taeyang: 00:10:085 (1) -
03:45 Boobs: 1/1
03:45 Taeyang: what is this?
03:45 Taeyang: :DDD
03:45 Taeyang: 00:40:752 (1) -
03:45 Boobs: am i right?
03:45 Taeyang: yse you right
03:47 Boobs: 1/6?
03:47 Taeyang: lol nah
03:47 Taeyang: 2/3
03:47 Taeyang: 3/2
03:47 Taeyang: ah sry
03:47 Taeyang: 3/2
03:47 Boobs: how do you know that
03:47 Boobs: do you count the white ticks?
03:48 Taeyang: yes
03:48 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdz39/d1bf92460a.jpg
03:48 Taeyang: 00:42:752 (4) -
03:48 Taeyang: what is this?
03:49 Boobs: 1/1
03:49 Taeyang: yse
03:49 Taeyang: and same 2/2
03:49 Taeyang: 4/4
03:49 Taeyang: 1/1=2/2=/4/4=1
03:49 Taeyang: it's all same
03:49 Boobs: ooo
03:49 Taeyang: 00:40:418 (5) -
03:49 Taeyang: whait this?
03:50 Boobs: 1/2
03:50 Taeyang: what*
03:50 Taeyang: yse cool
03:50 Taeyang: now plus
03:50 Taeyang: 00:40:418 (5,5) -
03:50 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdzcY/8da7be31c8.jpg
03:50 Taeyang: 1/2 +1/1 =?
03:51 Boobs: 1/3???
03:51 Taeyang: nah lol
03:51 Boobs: wtff
03:51 Boobs: this is so hard
03:51 Taeyang: 1/2 +2/2= 3/2
03:51 Boobs: to understand
03:51 Taeyang: anyway skip this
03:52 Taeyang: you already some understand
03:52 Taeyang: i think you can
03:52 Boobs: wait
03:52 Taeyang: now
03:52 Boobs: is 1/2 + 1/1 = 2/2 ??
03:52 Taeyang: no
03:52 Boobs: fk
03:52 Taeyang: umm
03:52 Taeyang: find your mathbook
03:52 Taeyang: 00:40:418 (5) -
03:53 Taeyang: this is 1/2
03:53 Taeyang: its ok?
03:53 Boobs: yeah
03:53 Taeyang: 00:42:752 (4) -
03:53 Taeyang: 1/1 right?
03:53 Boobs: 1/1
03:53 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdzpQ/1957660eee.jpg
03:53 Taeyang: see
03:54 Taeyang: connect two slide
03:55 Taeyang: now understand 1/1+1/2=3/2 ?
03:55 Taeyang: 2/2+1/2=3/2 it's same
03:55 Taeyang: i know your still 15years
03:56 Taeyang: so i think you do not study this in math class
03:56 Taeyang: anyway one whitetick is 1/1
03:57 Taeyang: you understand this
03:57 Boobs: ok
03:57 Taeyang: it's all fine
03:57 *Taeyang is editing Shiena Nishizawa - Meaning [Normal]
03:57 Taeyang: now come here
03:58 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdzHW/1ec60df7be.jpg
03:58 Taeyang: and see
03:58 Taeyang: 00:04:552 (2) -
03:58 Boobs: the intro is changed
03:58 Boobs: i updated map
03:58 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdzL5/7383971768.jpg
03:59 Taeyang: send your puush
03:59 Taeyang: nor upload your map
03:59 Taeyang: *send me
04:00 Boobs: http://puu.sh/kdzQu.osu
04:00 Boobs: i cant send you .osk because it might overwrite your difficulty
04:01 Taeyang: 00:04:868 (2) -
04:01 Taeyang: it's now fine
04:02 Taeyang: 2refit is not god in easy and normal
04:02 Taeyang: 00:04:078 (1,1) -
04:02 Taeyang: and 3/2 rhythm
04:02 Boobs: is that bad?
04:04 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdAb2/0e743ddc67.osu
04:04 Taeyang: see
04:04 Taeyang: only rhyth,
04:04 Taeyang: rhythm
04:06 Boobs: -why do you only use slider?
04:06 Taeyang: there is all same rhythm term
04:06 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdAg6/733e6cfe2d.jpg
04:06 Taeyang: only see rhythm
04:06 Boobs: ok, i understand now!
04:06 Taeyang: i did't mapped :P
04:06 Taeyang: yse :D
04:06 Taeyang: what is there rhythm term?
04:07 Boobs: ??
04:07 Taeyang: i only used same rhythm term
04:07 Taeyang: see puush
04:08 Boobs: ah
04:08 Boobs: it's only 1/1 and 1/2
04:08 Taeyang: yse
04:08 Taeyang: and see your map
04:08 Taeyang: rhythm term
04:09 Taeyang: some time use 1/1 ,sometime 1/2 ,3/2 etc...
04:09 Taeyang: that's make hardly
04:09 Boobs: okok
04:09 Taeyang: use only 1/1 2/1 rhythm term
04:10 Taeyang: and see your map
04:10 Taeyang: 00:01:552 (3,1) -
04:10 Taeyang: what is this here rhythm term :P
04:12 Boobs: shit
04:12 Boobs: i deleted difficulty
04:12 Boobs: sorry
04:12 Taeyang: and only use
04:12 Taeyang: you only use
04:13 Taeyang: 2/1 1/1 1/2 2/3(reverse slide) and circle
04:13 Boobs: i will try
04:13 Taeyang: and only use same same rhythm term
04:13 Taeyang: 1/1,2/1
04:13 Boobs: 00:01:552 (3,1) - is 1/1
04:14 Taeyang: yse
04:14 Taeyang: ah
04:14 Taeyang: no
04:14 Taeyang: 4/1
04:14 Boobs: omg
04:14 Taeyang: and
04:14 Taeyang: you use same DS
04:14 Taeyang: see here
04:15 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdATk/655cad63ee.jpg
04:15 Taeyang: uncheck grid snap
04:15 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdAUT/426cafa6da.jpg
04:15 Taeyang: and check distance snap
04:16 Boobs: what does "next:" and "prev:" mean?
04:16 Taeyang: all
04:16 *Taeyang is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/779041 Shiena Nishizawa - Meaning (TV Size)]
04:17 Taeyang: 00:01:868 (1) -
04:17 Taeyang: See he's easy map
04:17 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdB59/c95733fb68.jpg
04:18 Taeyang: he only use 1.2 DS
04:18 Taeyang: all
04:18 Taeyang: 00:10:710 (1) - here too
04:18 Taeyang: 00:51:131 (1) - here too
04:18 Taeyang: all same DS
04:18 Boobs: is it okay if it's 1.18 instead of 1.2?
04:19 Taeyang: almost same
04:19 Taeyang: 1.2x
04:19 Taeyang: 1.15~1.25
04:19 Taeyang: and your normal too
04:19 Taeyang: use same DS
04:20 Taeyang: 00:12:605 (3,4,5,6,7) -
04:20 Taeyang: here DS fine :)
04:20 Boobs: how come he uses 0.8 ( http://puu.sh/kdBcT.png ) for map but he has 1.2 slider velocity change?
04:21 Taeyang: no..
04:21 Taeyang: that's slide velocity
04:21 Taeyang: be no skin off one's nose
04:21 Taeyang: with DS
04:22 Taeyang: you already used same DS
04:22 Taeyang: 00:11:026 (2) -
04:22 Taeyang: but like here
04:22 Taeyang: a liiiiiiiiiiittle bit not good
04:22 Taeyang: 0.96 1.05
04:23 Taeyang: that's make low quality
04:23 Boobs: o
04:23 Taeyang: understand?
04:23 Boobs: so do i have it 1.00 and 1.00
04:24 Taeyang: yeap
04:24 Boobs: not 0.95 and 1.03
04:24 Taeyang: no you can
04:24 Taeyang: 0.95~1.05
04:24 Taeyang: but little bit big
04:25 Taeyang: 00:30:920 (27,28) -
04:25 Taeyang: see here DS
04:25 Taeyang: 0.5 DS :P
04:25 Boobs: LOL
04:25 Taeyang: now understand? how to check DS?
04:25 Boobs: yes
04:26 Boobs: i learn something new
04:26 Boobs: i never knew about this
04:26 Taeyang: ok
04:26 Taeyang: now mapping
04:26 Taeyang: 00:33:447 -
04:26 Taeyang: here
04:26 Taeyang: 00:00:605 - 00:33:447 -
04:26 Taeyang: dont mind your pattern
04:26 Taeyang: almost think rhythm
04:27 Boobs: i understand now
04:27 Taeyang: never use long term 3/2 term
04:27 Taeyang: slides is too never use long slide and 1/4 like this very short slides
04:27 Boobs: 00:04:078 (1) - is 3/2 ?
04:27 Taeyang: yse
04:28 Taeyang: 00:05:657 (1,2,3) -
04:28 Taeyang: you can like this
04:28 Taeyang: same rhythm term
04:28 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/kdBOr/c161eeae54.jpg
04:29 Taeyang: 1/1
04:29 Taeyang: ok
04:29 Taeyang: mapping now
04:29 Boobs: 00:08:183 (1,1,2,3) - rhythm good?
04:29 Boobs: ok
04:29 Taeyang: yse
04:29 Taeyang: really good
Beomsan

osu wrote:

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Taeyang's Extra FC >.<
nice
Taeyang
WHERE ARE YOU GOING BOOBS ;w;...
Taeyang

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WHERE ARE YOU GOING BOOBS ;w;...
???you cant send me a message?
taeyang95@naver.com here is my E-mail
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