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guineaQ

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-09-27T14:52:48+00:00

K i A i wrote:
마지막 부분에서 BPM이나 Offset이 약간 바뀌는 듯한 느낌이 들어요~~
혹시나 모르니까 타이밍에 관해서 BN이신 분들께 체크 반드시 꼭 받아보세요!

답변 없음 - 수정

[hard]
00:09:138 (2) - 클랩 빼먹으셨어요~!
00:37:292 (1) - 시작 부분에 휘슬~
00:50:215 (1) - ~ 00:51:599 (5) - 이 부분도 여전히 드럼 킥 베이스 사운드가 진행되기 때문에 휘슬 사운드를 바로
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 이전 노트들의 사운드 패턴처럼 일정 간격으로 넣어주는게 좋아보여요~
00:52:061 (1) - , 00:53:907 (1) - , 00:55:753 (1) - , 00:57:599 (1) - 마지막 부분에 휘슬 제거해요! 그리고 이후 패턴도
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 01:02:445 까지 똑같이 적용~
00:56:445 (2,3) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 추가
01:09:599 (3) - 차라리 이 부분은 그냥 soft-hitclap(1) 그대로 적용하고, 거기에 soft-hitfinish(1) 사운드를 추가하는게 더 나을 것 같아요!
　　　　　　　그 이후 패턴들도 01:34:061 까지 같은 패턴으로 적용해보세요~
여기서 나오는 벨(? 이거 악기 이름은 자세히 모르겠네요) 소리가 너무 튀어서 충분히 이런소리로도 커버가 가능하다고 생각함
01:30:830 (1) - 시작 부분에 휘슬 추가
01:35:445 (1) - 시작 부분에 클랩 추가 + 휘슬 제거, 마지막 부분에 휘슬 추가 해보세요~
01:35:907 (2) - 휘슬 제거 하고 전부 클랩으로 넣는게 더 듣기 괜찮아 보여요~
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00:07:753 (1) - 해당 슬라이더의 모양을 이후에 나오는 00:09:138 (2) - 노트보다는 바로 앞에 나오는 00:07:292 (5) - 노트와의
　　　　　　　 커서 흐름에 맞춰서 슬라이더 모양이 위를 향해서 굽어있도록 변경해보는건 어떤가요?
　　　　　　　 추가로 슬라이더의 두 번째 컨트롤 포인트를 슬라이더의 중앙에 맞춰서 놓는건 어떤가요?
　　　　　　　 ex) http://puu.sh/knyzh/1623c11dfa.png
여기는 뉴콤보가 들어가있기 때문에 전 패턴의 흐름에 맞추는 것보다 새로 나올 노트들의 흐름에 맞추기 때문에 패스합니닼
00:17:907 (3) - 점프가 적용될거라면 차라리 이 노트를 Ctrl + G로 처리하는게 흐름에는 더 자연스럽게 보여요~!
점프가 강조하고 싶은 부분은 4의 고음 부분이기 때문에 3을 점프로 하는 건 맞지않아요 ㅇㅅㅇ
00:38:215 (3) - 점프를 적용시킨 김에 차라리 이 노트를 해당 노트를 Ctrl + >> 시켜서 00:37:292 (1) - 이 노트와 비슷한 모양으로 만들고,
　　　　　　　 기존의 자리에 배치 시키면 커서의 움직임이 좀 더 자연스럽게 느껴질거라 생각합니다~
　　　　　　　 그 후에 리버스 하나를 없앤 뒤에 빈 자리에 서클노트 하나를 적용시키는건 어떤가요?
Aㅏ 이건 고민해봐야 될듯 이거 고치면 일관성 이유로 줄줄이 고쳐야 되기 때문에
　　　　　　　 ex) http://puu.sh/knyMC/b37d2f4ecb.png
01:14:215 (1) - 이후의 2번 슬라이더에 맞춰서 위치를 약간 변경하는건 어떤가요?
　　　　　　　 + 이후 4, 5번 서클 노트도 의도한 배치에 따라 적당하게 맞추기
　　　　　　　 ex) http://puu.sh/knyVZ/a5a7e5a3a4.png
　　　　　　　　　http://puu.sh/knyYE/051ef81082.png
　　　　　　　　　http://puu.sh/knyZA/1a939c678f.png
01:16:984 (3) - 의도한 패턴같기는 하지만.. 대칭 패턴인 Ctrl + G는 어떤가요? 의도한 패턴임 ㅇㅇㅇ
01:23:907 (2) - ^ ^

많이 늦어져서 죄송해요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ 도움 됐기를 바래요~!

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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2015-09-28T09:56:07+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
대충 한명 불러뒀으니 기달려보세영
시간이 없어서 일단 스레드로... 카톡아이디 taeyang9510 궁금한게 있으면 이쪽으로:3

장난전화 ㄱㄱ(?)

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-09-28T18:52:04+00:00

Waiting for Yuii-, ByBy13's modding

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-09-28T18:55:19+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
Waiting for Yuii-, ByBy13's modding

오 드디어 븡의 모딩을...

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-09-28T18:56:48+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Beomsan wrote:
Waiting for Yuii-, ByBy13's modding
오 드디어 븡의 모딩을...

발품 엄청나게 팔았습니다... 읽씹 정말 많이 당하는군요 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-09-29T06:53:57+00:00

K i A i wrote:
마지막 부분에서 BPM이나 Offset이 약간 바뀌는 듯한 느낌이 들어요~~
혹시나 모르니까 타이밍에 관해서 BN이신 분들께 체크 반드시 꼭 받아보세요!

[eINsane]
00:17:907 (5) - 휘슬!
00:21:599 (3) - 해당 부분의 사운드를 잘 들어보면 드럼의 킥 베이스 사운드가 빠져있어요~ 해당 포인트를 잘 잡아서 이 노트에서도
　　　　　　　휘슬 사운드를 빼는게 어떤가요? // 기본 소프트 휘슬로 바꾸도록하겠습니다. 피아노 무시하기는 조금 아쉬운 감이 있는거같네요.
00:43:753 (3) - 휘슬!
00:47:445 (3,4,5,6) - 여기도 잘 들어보면 00:40:061 (3,4,5,6) - 여기에 나왔던 음이 조금 들리긴 해요~! 한 번 같은 패턴을 볼륨을 줄여서 넣어보는건 어떨까요?// 아무래도 샘플 약 드럼과 소프트 휘슬 둘다사용하면 너무 시끄럽지 않나...? 싶어 일단은 샘플 약드럼으로 커버하고싶네요.
　　　　　　　　　
00:51:599 (6) - 슬라이더의 시작 부분에 휘슬 대신 클랩 사운드를 넣으면 사운드가 좀 더 세련되게 들려요~~
00:59:445 (1) - 휘슬!
01:04:522 (3) - 휘슬 추가!
01:06:369 (1,2,3,4) - 곡을 잘 들어보면 킥 베이스가 아니라 스네어 사운드가 약하게 들어가 있어요~
　　　　　　　　　 근데 키아이 타임 바로 전에 고조되는 부분이니까 볼륨을 똑같이 약하게 할 필요까지는 없고,
　　　　　　　　　 사운드만 휘슬에서 클랩으로 바꿔보시는걸 추천해요!
01:08:676 (1) - 너무 자주 피니시 사운드를 넣지 않아도 돼요~ 오히려 자주 넣으면 역효과가 날 수도 있어요 ㅋㅋㅋ
　　　　　　　제가 추천하는 피니시 사운드 간격은 01:06:830 (1,1) - 이 정도 간격만 해도 충분할 것 같습니다!
01:13:753 (4) - 이 부분은 01:10:061 (5) - 이 노트의 사운드 패턴에 맞춰서 피니시를 추가하는것도 괜찮을 것 같네요~~
　　　　　　　이후의 사운드 패턴도 여기에 맞춰서 피니시를 넣어주면 괜찮을 것 같아요!
01:20:215 (4) - 휘슬 대신 클랩이 나아요~
01:20:907 (9) - 여기 부분도 클랩을 추가하는건 어떤가요?
01:21:138 (10,11,12,13) - 마찬가지로, 이 부분도 휘슬 대신 클랩 사운드로 대체하는게 좋을 것 같습니다~
01:36:138 (8,9) - ^
01:41:907 (3) - 클랩 대신 휘슬로 대체하는게 더 괜찮을 것 같아요!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
00:01:753 (4) - 해당 노트는 00:02:215 (1) - 노트와의 간격을 1.3정도로 맞춰주는게 나을 것 같아요~
　　　　　　　ex) http://puu.sh/knAb1/a3ac73c559.png
00:14:215 (1,2,1) - 이 삼각형 패턴도 좋지만, 좀 더 곡 흐름에 맞춰서
　　　　　　　　00:14:676 (2) - 이 노트를 서클노트로 대체해서 강조해보는건 어떨까요?
　　　　　　　　ex) http://puu.sh/knAIi/7662221cb1.png <- 패턴에 맞춰 적당하게 1번 슬라이더는 직선으로 바꿔봤어요 ㅋㅋ // 이런 패턴 좋아해서.. ㅠㅠ
01:03:369 (2,3) - Ctrl + G는 어떤가요? // 키아이도 아닌 부분에서 키아이보다 더 긴 점프를 사용하긴 약간 부담감이있다고 생각합니다.
01:04:522 (3,4) - ^ // 위와 동일
01:41:676 (2,3) - Ctrl + G를 하고 맨 마지막 서클노트를 중앙에 넣는건 어떤가요? (개인적으로 좋아하는 패턴이에요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ)

많이 늦어져서 죄송해요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ 도움 됐기를 바래요~!

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꿀모딩 감사합니다 ~~

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-09-29T12:23:17+00:00

update!

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2015-09-29T17:09:23+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Beomsan wrote:
Waiting for Yuii-, ByBy13's modding
오 드디어 븡의 모딩을...

나는 한국어 이해가 안 돼요 ... don't blame us (?)

hiii!

soft-hitclap5.wav is unused. Remove it after confirming it, please.

[Easy*]

00:22:753 - Don't tell me you got lazy, Beom! I know you can do something! Aaaanyway, let me explain you something, when you leave such break on an Easy, you SHOULD stack or at least put the notes very close to each other, I'm referring to 00:22:522 (1,2) - . Newbies still don't know what followpoints are, they don't know what are their purpose. This also hurt a lot to FL farmers... but that's another thing. Although I'd strongly recommend you to add something in the middle, that seems really empty.
00:24:369 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why you didn't put any hitsounds? This is unrankable, Beom! Come on, time to work on this for a while.

[*Normal's Fantastic, Marvelous and Splendid Kayod]

00:02:215 (3,4,5,1) - Why is this part so dense? I think it's the "hardest" part of the map hah.

[GUINEAq's Hard*]

00:32:907 - Did you forget to add something here or it was intentional? Seems to be a very important beat, in my opinion. And also, something similar to what I'm saying below... 00:33:138 (3,4) - space them!!
00:36:369 (1,2) - Don't be lazy and add a bit of spacing to them, come on!
00:44:676 (1,2) - This stack on Hard is harsh and inconsistent. If I were you, I wouldn't do it, especially under the head of a reverse slider, it's quite counter-intuitive for these difficulties.

[Insane*]

Try lowering the HP to 6, maybe. When I was playing, my HP bar was constantly dropping, I can't imagine that with HR.
Your hitsounds are quite fucked. You should rework them a bit, or ask eINess to let you use the ones from him. Let's just take a look at the triplets:
00:15:830 (2,3,4) - why are you using triple whistle? Don't you think (4) should have a clap?
00:18:599 (6,7,1) - Why double clap on the tiniest sound (6,7) but then the prominent beat (1) isn't emphasised enough, as it could have a Finish?
00:21:599 (4,5,6) - Wrong hitsounds!

01:03:599 (3,4,1) - Wow, what?
01:16:753 (3,4,5,6,7) - What an awkward transition of notes haha. After playing around a bit with the notes I found it quite hard to replace with the current patterns you have. Maybe you can find something else, but you definitely need a fix here, especially with the jump from (6,7).
01:31:061 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can I recommend you to use this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3745043 ? The problem with the current one is the transition between every object, for example, 01:31:061 (2,3,4) - plays quite bad for the fact that then you have to go up onto (5) again and then make a super forced movement to (6) in order to catch it, since it's far distanced from the previous object. Moreover, I don't get why 01:31:522 (4,5) - has such a short spacing if then you are going to fire a spacing like 01:31:753 (5,6) - .

[EinESS' Insane*]

The volume of the first red and green line are incredibly low. Try running 35% instead, you can barely listen to the hitsounds... and it's unrankable.
Also you want to lower the HP to 6, maybe. When I was playing, my HP bar was constantly dropping, I can't imagine that with HR.
Widescreen support should be off!

00:07:753 (1) - Good spot for a Finish hitsound! Additionally, I may not agree with the spacing used in 00:07:522 (7,1) - . Throughout the map you're using a very "constant" ds to show the player it's a transition of sliders, although here you are separating them, that could mislead players to think there's a "break" in the middle of both.
00:13:292 (5) - Usually this kind of sliders are NC'd for the sake of the 1/6 or 1/8, since it's hard for the player to recognise 'em as far as they are not 1/4s.
00:17:215 (2,3) - May be a bit too much spacing here, I don't know if it's worth emphasising it that much. At least I wouldn't do it. Although I don't know if it's the distance of the movement you have to do in order to catch (3).
01:09:830 (4,5) - It plays quiiiite bad, the sharp angle makes the player to do kind of a very awkward movement. The spacing you are using here isn't bad, since you are emphasising the Finish+Clap sound, but the transition could definitely be improved. For example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3744943 .
01:42:022 (1) - Could you silence this spinner with a 5% green line? It'd be cool!

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-09-29T19:32:10+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
hiii!

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[GUINEAq's Hard*]

00:32:907 - Did you forget to add something here or it was intentional? Seems to be a very important beat, in my opinion. And also, something similar to what I'm saying below... 00:33:138 (3,4) - space them!! I was completely ignoring everything else except vocals there so I LITERALLY stopped listening to other red tick sounds, so thats why its left blank and yeah I did space 3,4 (had to change some parts screw u for ruining my lazy day wwwwwww)
00:36:369 (1,2) - Don't be lazy and add a bit of spacing to them, come on! I see where you are getting at but I'm CUT OFF, there isn't any place where I can place the 2 at besides, 1 and 2 are basically same pitch/type of sound so it isn't completely random to stack them
00:44:676 (1,2) - This stack on Hard is harsh and inconsistent. If I were you, I wouldn't do it, especially under the head of a reverse slider, it's quite counter-intuitive for these difficulties. unstacking is magic

im lazy

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-09-29T19:35:13+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
Doyak wrote:
오 드디어 븡의 모딩을...
나는 한국어 이해가 안 돼요 ... don't blame us (?) I said, "Oh finally BN's mod..." xD

[Yes My Diff Is Superior*]

00:02:215 (3,4,5,1) - Why is this part so dense? I think it's the "hardest" part of the map hah. But I think there are a lot harder parts after, like 01:16:061 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 01:23:445 (4,5,6,7,1) - 01:32:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - . Though it seems dense, 00:02:215 (3,4,5,1) - these doesn't have really much for players to do. It doesn't have 3 1/2 hits in a row and gives a lot of preparing time on 00:02:215 (3) - and recovering time on 00:04:061 (1) - . If it's REALLY a big problem I'll fix it but not now.

Thanks for your mod!

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2015-09-29T19:57:23+00:00

The problem with that, Doyak, is the fact that is creating a big gap compared to the calm part in the intro. As you can see, you could only point out things that are at the very end of the map. I didn't and won't complain about those, since by then the song is much more stronger and requires that amount of density. I would strongly recommend you to nerf that pattern since you are supposed to be kind of consistent in the beginning, ruining the pace of that section would be bad.
I don't think I will negotiate this, since is the only thing I can find as "inappropriate". You are a really really good mapper, come on, think about it!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-09-29T23:23:22+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
The problem with that, Doyak, is the fact that is creating a big gap compared to the calm part in the intro. As you can see, you could only point out things that are at the very end of the map. I didn't and won't complain about those, since by then the song is much more stronger and requires that amount of density. I would strongly recommend you to nerf that pattern since you are supposed to be kind of consistent in the beginning, ruining the pace of that section would be bad.
I don't think I will negotiate this, since is the only thing I can find as "inappropriate". You are a really really good mapper, come on, think about it!

Well ok... I will simply that when I get home, thanks!

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2015-09-30T03:50:01+00:00

Quick mod:

[General]

Your soft-hitclap5.wav is unused.
Your video file has muted audio in it. I removed it for you: http://puu.sh/ktao4/67d0f1483a.avi
guineaQ's Hard is missing a video. Please add the video along with the correct offset of the video.

[Easy]

I'll probably add a note at 00:23:445.

The rest of the difficulties plays fine imo.

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-09-30T08:40:14+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
hiii!

[EinESS' Insane*]

The volume of the first red and green line are incredibly low. Try running 35% instead, you can barely listen to the hitsounds... and it's unrankable.
Also you want to lower the HP to 6, maybe. When I was playing, my HP bar was constantly dropping, I can't imagine that with HR. // change 6.5
Widescreen support should be off!

00:07:753 (1) - Good spot for a Finish hitsound! Additionally, I may not agree with the spacing used in 00:07:522 (7,1) - . Throughout the map you're using a very "constant" ds to show the player it's a transition of sliders, although here you are separating them, that could mislead players to think there's a "break" in the middle of both.
00:13:292 (5) - Usually this kind of sliders are NC'd for the sake of the 1/6 or 1/8, since it's hard for the player to recognise 'em as far as they are not 1/4s.
00:17:215 (2,3) - May be a bit too much spacing here, I don't know if it's worth emphasising it that much. At least I wouldn't do it. Although I don't know if it's the distance of the movement you have to do in order to catch (3). // no.... that's DS still playable I guess.
01:09:830 (4,5) - It plays quiiiite bad, the sharp angle makes the player to do kind of a very awkward movement. The spacing you are using here isn't bad, since you are emphasising the Finish+Clap sound, but the transition could definitely be improved. For example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3744943 . // playable to me. and I think 01:10:061 - can be emphasize. so that's parttern looks ok.
01:42:022 (1) - Could you silence this spinner with a 5% green line? It'd be cool! // change 30%

SPOILER

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thanks mod

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-09-30T10:33:48+00:00

Update guineaQ, eINess's diff and fixed BeatofIke's mod. thanks~
also waiting for Doyak's translation. (Yuii-'s mod)

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2015-09-30T11:39:03+00:00

Kayod's outstanding and magical translation*

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-09-30T11:42:53+00:00

oh I forgot update ;_; hah

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-09-30T12:07:59+00:00

Fixed Yuii-'s mod, thanks!

업뎃

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Log Horizon ED - Your song  by Yun chi HD.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 66830
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15138
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Your song*
TitleUnicode:Your song*
Artist:Yun*chi
ArtistUnicode:Yun*chi
Creator:Beomsan
Version:Doyak's Normal*
Source:ログ・ホライズン
Tags:TV Size Log Horizon ending loghora Doyak guineaQ eINess
BeatmapID:778778
BeatmapSetID:352479

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.15
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"LogHorizon.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-09-30T12:30:29+00:00

Translation request from Beomsan

Yuii-nyan :3

Yuii-nyan wrote:
안녕하세요오오오!

soft-hitclap5.wav가 사용되지 않았습니다. 확인하고 지워주세요.

[Easy*]

00:22:753 - 게을러진 거라고 하지 마세요, 범! 당신이 뭔가 할 수 있다는 걸 압니다! 어째애애앴든, 하나 설명해드리자면, 이지에서 저런 쉼을 넣을 땐, "반드시" 스택을 시키거나 노트를 아주 가까이에 놓아야 합니다, 00:22:522 (1,2) - 이걸 말하는 거에요. 뉴비들은 팔로우포인트가 뭔지 아직 모르고, 무엇에 쓰이는 건지 모릅니다. 이건 또한 플라꾼들을 해칩니다... 뭐 그건 다른 이야기지만요. 아무튼 저는 중간에 뭔가 넣길 바랍니다, 너무 비어 보여요.
00:24:369 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 왜 여기에 아무런 힛사를 넣지 않았나요? 이건 언랭커블이에요, 범! 어서요, 여기에 작업을 좀 할 시간이에요.
[Insane*]

HP를 6으로 낮춰보세요, 아마도. 제가 플레이할 때, HP 바가 계속 떨어졌어요, 하드락으로 플레이하는 건 상상도 못 하겠네요.
힛사가 좀 망했네요. 다시 작업을 하거나, eINess 님께 그 분이 쓰신 것 중 하나를 쓰게 해달라고 요청해야 되겠네요. 3연타들을 좀 보자면:
00:15:830 (2,3,4) - 왜 여기에 3연속 휘슬링 들어갔나요? (4)는 클랩이 들어가야 할 것 같지 않나요?
00:18:599 (6,7,1) - 가장 작은 소리인 (6,7)에 클랩이 들어갔는데 제일 중요한 비트인 (1)은 충분히 강조가 안 됐네요, 피니시를 쓸 수 있을 것 같은데 말이에요?
00:21:599 (4,5,6) - 잘못된 힛사!

01:03:599 (3,4,1) - 와, 뭐라고요?
01:16:753 (3,4,5,6,7) - 노트의 이동이 정말 이상하군요 하하. 잠깐 노트를 이리저리 움직여보니 지금 님이 사용한 패턴에서는 재배치하기가 어렵다는 걸 알아냈어요. 아마도 뭔가 다른 걸 찾을 수 있을 것 같은데, 하지만 여긴 반드시 고쳐야 해요, 특히 (6,7)의 점프는요.
01:31:061 (2,3,4,5,6) - 이 패턴을 추천해도 될까요 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3745043 ? 지금 패턴의 문제점은 각각의 노트 사이의 움직임인데, 예를 들면, 01:31:061 (2,3,4) - 이건 이후에 다시 (5)로 올라가야 하고 그러고 나서 (6)이 이전 노트와의 거리가 멀어서 치기 위해 매우 강제적인 움직임을 요구한다는 점에서 꽤 나빠요. 게다가, 저는 이후에 01:31:753 (5,6) - 이런 큼직한 스페이싱을 쓸 거면서 왜 01:31:522 (4,5) - 이런 짧은 스페이싱이 쓰였는지 모르겠네요.

Beomsan

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Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-09-30T13:03:43+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
hiii! <3

soft-hitclap5.wav is unused. Remove it after confirming it, please. oki

[Easy*]

00:22:753 - Don't tell me you got lazy, Beom! I know you can do something! Aaaanyway, let me explain you something, when you leave such break on an Easy, you SHOULD stack or at least put the notes very close to each other, I'm referring to 00:22:522 (1,2) - . Newbies still don't know what followpoints are, they don't know what are their purpose. This also hurt a lot to FL farmers... but that's another thing. Although I'd strongly recommend you to add something in the middle, that seems really empty. OK ADD ONE NOTEEEEEEEEEE
00:24:369 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why you didn't put any hitsounds? This is unrankable, Beom! Come on, time to work on this for a while.
I'M WORKING

[Insane*]

Try lowering the HP to 6, maybe. When I was playing, my HP bar was constantly dropping, I can't imagine that with HR. SURE
Your hitsounds are quite fucked. You should rework them a bit, or ask eINess to let you use the ones from him. Let's just take a look at the triplets:
00:15:830 (2,3,4) - why are you using triple whistle? Don't you think (4) should have a clap?
00:18:599 (6,7,1) - Why double clap on the tiniest sound (6,7) but then the prominent beat (1) isn't emphasised enough, as it could have a Finish?
00:21:599 (4,5,6) - Wrong hitsounds!

Sorry for sucks hitsounding ahhh I removed all hs for now. I cant add hs omg

01:03:599 (3,4,1) - Wow, what? fixed?
01:16:753 (3,4,5,6,7) - What an awkward transition of notes haha. After playing around a bit with the notes I found it quite hard to replace with the current patterns you have. Maybe you can find something else, but you definitely need a fix here, especially with the jump from (6,7). Modify as I thought???
01:31:061 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can I recommend you to use this pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3745043 ? The problem with the current one is the transition between every object, for example, 01:31:061 (2,3,4) - plays quite bad for the fact that then you have to go up onto (5) again and then make a super forced movement to (6) in order to catch it, since it's far distanced from the previous object. Moreover, I don't get why 01:31:522 (4,5) - has such a short spacing if then you are going to fire a spacing like 01:31:753 (5,6) - .change pattern
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thank you so much yuii!
and thanks Doyak!!

Yuii-

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Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2015-09-30T13:08:19+00:00

You want me to hs this for you?

Beomsan

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Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-09-30T13:17:40+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
You want me to hs this for you?

You already gave me a lot of help.
I'll find a way maybe. don't worry!

(yum yum)

Sonnyc

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Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-09-30T23:18:37+00:00

[Easy]

00:00:369 - 00:14:215 - 힛사 어디갔나요? 일부러 안하신거면 높은 음 / 명백한 클랩 소리가 존재하기 때문에 음악과 어울리지 않는다고 말씀드리고 싶습니다.
00:00:369 (1,2) - 간격의 상태가?
01:20:676 (4,1) - (4)의 리버스가 (1)을 향하고 있기 때문에 리버스의 개수가 1개인지 2개인지 혼란스럽습니다. 슬라 방향을 좌측 하단으로 바꾸시는게 더 적절한 패턴입니다.

[Doyak's Normal]

마찬가지로 초반 부분 힛사 넣어주세요.
00:29:907 - 힛사 넣어주세요.
00:52:984 - 00:54:830 - 00:56:676 - 00:58:522 - 01:00:369 - 음악에 존재하지 않는 휘슬 소리를 넣으셔서 1/2 박자 전후로 등장하는 진짜 휘슬 소리들이 강조가 되지 않고 있습니다. 무엇보다 없는 소리 넣으셔서 어색하게 들리기도 하고요.
01:24:138 (5) - 01:27:369 (5) - 01:27:830 - 01:31:061 - 01:31:522 - 01:32:907 - 01:33:369 (2) - 01:37:522 - 휘슬 제거요. 불필요한 휘슬들 때문에 01:34:522 (5,6,7) 강조가 되지 않습니다.
01:28:984 - 다음 모더들 안헷갈리게 쓸모없는 그린라인 지워주세요.
박자가 좀 구식스러운데 괜찮네요ㅋ

[guineaQ's Hard]

키아이 구간에 간격을 굳이 준 인세인 급으로 늘려서 깔끔함을 희생시킬 필요가 있었는지는 개인적으로 의문이었습니다.

[Insane]

초반 힛사
00:11:445 (1,2) - 굳이 직선이 아니라 살짝 꺾은 이유가 계신가요? 00:11:215 (3)이 수직 직선이었던 점을 고려할 때 상당히 시각적으로 불안정했습니다.
00:26:907 (2,3) - 음악이 비교적 일정한 구간이라 이렇게 큰 점프가 전혀 어울리지 않는 패턴입니다.
00:41:907 (3,1) - 00:45:599 (3,1) - 갑자기 간격이 감소했는데 그럴 이유가 없는 패턴입니다. 시각적 효과를 위해서 원래대로 늘려주세요.
00:44:215 (6,7,1) - 간격이 달라서 불안정한 패턴입니다.
00:40:984 (1,2) - 00:44:676 (1,2) - 비슷한 패턴 사용하셨는데 간격이 다릅니다. 패턴간의 통일성이 저해된 모습입니다.
00:52:061 (1,2,3) - 간격이 불일치한 이유가 00:53:907 (1,2,3)와 달리 타당한 이유가 존재하지 않습니다. 기본을 지키지 않을 때에는 타당한 이유가 존재해야 하고 그렇지 않으면 그냥 퀄리티 떨어져 보입니다. 00:55:753 (
1,2,3) - 00:57:599 (1,2,3) - 00:59:445 (1,2,3) - 개인적으로는 뒤의 부분들은 지금 지적한 곳 보다는 나름은 괜찮게 생기긴 했습니다만 역시 간격 유지하는게 나아보입니다.
01:03:830 (4,1) - 아직 비트맵은 가속하지 않았습니다. 차분한 상태로 키아이를 바라보고 있으며 본격적인 가속은 01:04:984 에서 시작한다고 봐도 좋아보이는데 여기에서 이렇게 큰 1/4 점프를 넣는 패턴은 적절하지 않습니다.
01:09:599 (1) - 콤보 주기가 너무 짧았습니다. 풀어주세요.
01:21:022 (4,5) - 두 노트가 너무 가까워서 저는 슬라이더인 줄 알았습니다. 이 간격도 1.00x로 맞추셔서 숫자 (5)가 보이게 해 주셔야 더 읽기 편한 패턴이 됩니다.

[eINess' Insane]

00:05:907 (1,2) - 아무리 마음의 귀로 들어도 00:07:753 (1,2) 만큼 타당한 1/4 소리는 들리지 않았습니다. 하나의 슬라이더로 묶는게 최선입니만 굳이 이 박자 쓰시겠다면 (2) 머리의 휘슬을 지워주세요.
00:15:138 - 다른 난이도와 달리 키아이가 없는데 의도하신 건가요? 적어도 분수 한번은 터뜨려주실 수 있을 것 같아요.
00:22:061 (1,1) - 개인적으로 가속은 어울리나 2배속은 너무 높은 수치였다고 생각합니다. 1.7배속도 충분해요. 또한 애매한 수동 스택이어서 1/4로 혼동할 여지가 있어서 완벽한 스택을 취하는 것도 고려해볼만한데 가속 수치를 낮추면 또 모르겠네요.
00:58:061 (3,4,5) - (4)의 곡률만 눈에 띄게 다른 상태입니다. 모두의 곡률이 똑같은게 더 통일감 있을 것 같네요.
00:53:907 (1,2,3) - 00:55:753 (1,2,3) - 01:01:292 (1,2,3) - 마지막의 연타 패턴 설정이 다른데 통일감 있게 패턴 구성해주세요.
01:42:022 (1) - 이거도 타 난이도들처럼 끝 페이드아웃 해주세요.
다음 중 과도한 점프가 어울리지 않는 구간은?
①00:00:369 - 00:15:138 - 음악의 도입부
②00:15:138 - 00:22:522 - 준 키아이
③00:22:522 - 00:36:830 - 준 키아이 이후의 얌전한 파트
④00:36:830 - 00:52:061 - 얌전한 파트가 끝난 이후 힘찬 전개
⑤00:52:061 - 01:06:830 - 하이라이트를 위해 잠시 충전하는 파트
⑥01:06:830 - 01:43:522 - 키아이

Beomsan

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Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-10-01T09:44:42+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[Easy]
00:00:369 - 00:14:215 - 힛사 어디갔나요? 일부러 안하신거면 높은 음 / 명백한 클랩 소리가 존재하기 때문에 음악과 어울리지 않는다고 말씀드리고 싶습니다.
00:00:369 (1,2) - 간격의 상태가?
01:20:676 (4,1) - (4)의 리버스가 (1)을 향하고 있기 때문에 리버스의 개수가 1개인지 2개인지 혼란스럽습니다. 슬라 방향을 좌측 하단으로 바꾸시는게 더 적절한 패턴입니다.
[Doyak's Normal]
마찬가지로 초반 부분 힛사 넣어주세요.
00:29:907 - 힛사 넣어주세요.
00:52:984 - 00:54:830 - 00:56:676 - 00:58:522 - 01:00:369 - 음악에 존재하지 않는 휘슬 소리를 넣으셔서 1/2 박자 전후로 등장하는 진짜 휘슬 소리들이 강조가 되지 않고 있습니다. 무엇보다 없는 소리 넣으셔서 어색하게 들리기도 하고요.
01:24:138 (5) - 01:27:369 (5) - 01:27:830 - 01:31:061 - 01:31:522 - 01:32:907 - 01:33:369 (2) - 01:37:522 - 휘슬 제거요. 불필요한 휘슬들 때문에 01:34:522 (5,6,7) 강조가 되지 않습니다.
01:28:984 - 다음 모더들 안헷갈리게 쓸모없는 그린라인 지워주세요.
박자가 좀 구식스러운데 괜찮네요ㅋ
[Insane]
초반 힛사
00:11:445 (1,2) - 굳이 직선이 아니라 살짝 꺾은 이유가 계신가요? 00:11:215 (3)이 수직 직선이었던 점을 고려할 때 상당히 시각적으로 불안정했습니다.
00:26:907 (2,3) - 음악이 비교적 일정한 구간이라 이렇게 큰 점프가 전혀 어울리지 않는 패턴입니다.
00:41:907 (3,1) - 00:45:599 (3,1) - 갑자기 간격이 감소했는데 그럴 이유가 없는 패턴입니다. 시각적 효과를 위해서 원래대로 늘려주세요.
00:44:215 (6,7,1) - 간격이 달라서 불안정한 패턴입니다.
00:40:984 (1,2) - 00:44:676 (1,2) - 비슷한 패턴 사용하셨는데 간격이 다릅니다. 패턴간의 통일성이 저해된 모습입니다.
00:52:061 (1,2,3) - 간격이 불일치한 이유가 00:53:907 (1,2,3)와 달리 타당한 이유가 존재하지 않습니다. 기본을 지키지 않을 때에는 타당한 이유가 존재해야 하고 그렇지 않으면 그냥 퀄리티 떨어져 보입니다. 00:55:753 (
1,2,3) - 00:57:599 (1,2,3) - 00:59:445 (1,2,3) - 개인적으로는 뒤의 부분들은 지금 지적한 곳 보다는 나름은 괜찮게 생기긴 했습니다만 역시 간격 유지하는게 나아보입니다.
01:03:830 (4,1) - 아직 비트맵은 가속하지 않았습니다. 차분한 상태로 키아이를 바라보고 있으며 본격적인 가속은 01:04:984 에서 시작한다고 봐도 좋아보이는데 여기에서 이렇게 큰 1/4 점프를 넣는 패턴은 적절하지 않습니다.
01:09:599 (1) - 콤보 주기가 너무 짧았습니다. 풀어주세요.
01:21:022 (4,5) - 두 노트가 너무 가까워서 저는 슬라이더인 줄 알았습니다. 이 간격도 1.00x로 맞추셔서 숫자 (5)가 보이게 해 주셔야 더 읽기 편한 패턴이 됩니다.

전부 고쳤습니다! 도약님 난이도 힛사 제가해서 힛사도 제가 수정했어요
정말 감사합니다 (_ _)

Startrick

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Startrick 2015-10-01T10:44:56+00:00

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Beomsan

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Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-10-01T11:11:48+00:00

Startrick wrote:
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General

Doyak's Normal* 난이도에 비디오 적용이 안 되어있습니다.
굳이 Doyak님과 eINess님 난이도만 키아이가 달라야 할 필요가 있나요?일단 겟난이라 자율판단으로 맡기겠습니다.

Easy*

00:03:599 (4) - 에디터가 원래 이런 거긴 하지만 AR이 느려서 0.04x 정도만 차이 나도 티가 난달까... 좀 좁아 보이네요.
00:13:292 (3,1) - 범산님 맵에서 몇 번 이런 걸 본 거 같은데 이게 범산님 스타일이라면 죄송하지만 하위 난이도에서 이렇게 살짝씩 겹쳐 보이는 건 개인적으로 미관상 별로 좋다곤 생각하지 않는데 안 겹치게 둬보시는 건 어떠신지?
00:46:522 (3,1) - ^
01:07:753 (2,4) - ^ 제일 바꾸기 힘들었네요 ㅋㅋ
00:22:522 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 이건 그렇다 쳐도 00:29:907 (1,2,3,4) - 는 00:29:907 (1) - 여기서 강한 비트가 나오니까 흐름 바꿔보셨어도 좋았을 거 같은데 3번이나 비슷한 흐름이 나와서 아쉽네요.
01:35:445 (4) - 끝 점 x:235 y:325로 옮기시면 01:34:522 (3) - 이거랑 같은 각도로 기울어지게 돼서 좀 더 깔끔해 보일 수 있을 듯

Insane*

00:12:369 (1) - 무의미한 뉴 콤보
00:22:753 (2) - 리버스 없애고 00:23:215 - 3번 슬라이더 시작점에 노트 하나 놓으시면 좀 더 보컬을 따른다는 느낌? 지금 박자는 좀 어색한 거 같네요. 어떤게 어색하다고 생각하신지 잘은 모르겠지만 보컬이 1/2박마다 꽉 차있어서 따른다면 지금이 맞는 거 같습니다.
00:40:292 (5,6,7) - 직선 흐름이 아닌 지그재그라던가 뭔가 흐름에 변화를 주셨으면 좋겠습니다. 들리는 음에 비해 흐름이 직선이라 좀 심심하다는 느낌을 받았네요. 진짜 조금 넣어봤어요
00:40:984 (1) - 이런 강한 비트에 이전 노트와 스택 한 이유가 있을까요 ?_? 굳이 스택 하시고 싶으시다면 좀 더 완벽하게 해주시면 깔끔해 보여서 좋을 듯
00:41:445 (1) - 무의미한 뉴 콤보
01:02:215 (5,1) - 인세인 이상 난이도 오면 이런 겹침은 지적 잘 안 하는데 이건 미관상 보기 좋다는 느낌을 주진 않는 거 같아요. 달리 빼낼 수 있는 공간이 없네요
01:09:599 (1) - 좀 더 일관성 있는 뉴 콤보를 원하신다면 제거
01:26:907 (5,1) - 키아이에서 해오셨던 뉴 콤보 주기를 생각하신다면 서로 바꿔주셔야 할 듯

도움 많이됐어요! 감사합니다.

Insane* - re Hitsounding done!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-10-01T15:22:37+00:00

Startrick wrote:
Doyak's Normal*

01:09:369 (5) - 6번 슬라이더 위치를 좀 건드리셔야 하겠지만 x:444 y:144 같은 곳으로 조금만 옮기셔도 부드러운 흐름으로 바꿀 수 있는데 어떨까요? 노래가 이런 자 대고 놓은 마냥 딱딱한 흐름으로 진행할 만한 노래는 아니라고 생각해서... 다른 곳에도 비슷한 게 있긴 한데 여기만 좀 어색하다고 느껴졌달까 고쳐 보았습니다.

모딩 감사합니다!

수정

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Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-10-02T16:32:14+00:00

this post is just my 500 post
I'm Rhythm Incarnate

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-10-03T20:52:13+00:00

Startrick wrote:
Forum PM request

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Purple - Questionable
Black - Suggestion

General

Doyak's Normal* 난이도에 비디오 적용이 안 되어있습니다.
굳이 Doyak님과 eINess님 난이도만 키아이가 달라야 할 필요가 있나요?

guineaQ's Hard*

00:22:522 (1,2) - 너무 달라붙어 있어서 보기 좋다는 느낌은 잘 안 드는데 조금만 수정해보시는 건? 이건 수정
00:40:984 (1,2) - ^ 이 슬라이더는 고치기 쬐금 애매해서 그냥 놔둠

코두 아 그리고 BN 더 부르시죠

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guineaQ 2015-10-03T20:55:10+00:00

아 ㅁㅊ 더블 포스트

Doyak

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Doyak 2015-10-03T21:07:03+00:00

아참 그리고 제 난이도 키아이 님 난이도랑 맞게 조정 좀 해주세요.

Yuii-

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Yuii- 2015-10-04T05:55:27+00:00

Hellooow~! (again aww)

Offset 376~378 maybe? I don't know if I'm deaf, but it's more accurate, in my opinion.

@Beomsan: I really recommend you to copy the hitsounds for EinESS' difficulty. I opened the Insane and found 00:00:369 (1) - has no hitsound at all, whilst 00:00:369 (1) - has a Finish on its head. Hitsounding is hard, and I'm not expecting you to learn it in one day, but sometimes looking at other people's hitsounds make things easier! I could give you a couple of tips on how to improve your hitsounding, but not for this map because I'm hella lazy, bud

Regarding hitsound, let's just talk about it for a while so Ttaemuniya will have more work to do!!

[Easy]

00:14:676 - This is clearly a missing hitsound, don't worry, we all miss something sometimes. I don't, though (?)
00:22:522 (1) - I do understand the reason for this Finish and the sampleset you use, however you have to understand that where you have 2 different beats landing at the same time, things can get a bit complicated. For example, in this case you have a cymbal sound and drums, so it's quite hard sometimes, at to a certain point in which we have to ruin with what you are trying to do. In this case, and after trying and trying I found that the sampleset you are using isn't the best one, although adding a Whistle to it will emphasise the beat properly.
00:23:445 (2) - I guess this a missing hitsound again. It sounds the same as 00:24:369 (3,4) - do. And you also did it in 00:27:138 (2) - so let's avoid inconsistency \:D/.
00:29:907 (1) - This is really worth emphasising! It has a similar connotation to 00:22:522 (1) - so let's try adding a Finish!
00:37:292 (1,1,1,1) - Huh, using sliderticks is very hard, especially if you are not familiarized with hitsounding, this can ruin your life ;w;. Anyway, let's explain this a bit. On the first three sliders, you use a green line just to properly make the beat sound, that's perfect. But then comes the problem, since from
00:37:753 - to 00:38:215 - a wild sound appears! This is because you are not using a silent slider hitsound, but I'm not planning you to understand this so fuck all. Why did I even mention that? Aaaanyway, 00:48:369 (1) - you forgot to add something in 00:48:830 - ! Just a tip: Usually, U S U A L L Y (not always) in TV Sizes, you will have to copy hitsounds every 4 stanzas (or just one big white tick), because they will have the same rhythm over and over again.
I got lazy of hitsounding, I always get lazy easily. Kill me, please.
01:40:061 (1,2) - I'd make this completely different. Replacing (1) for two circles and shorten (2) in order to make it a reverse one. Why? Because 01:41:215 - shouldn't be ignored like that! Also hitsounding (2) is REALLY hard, to take it easy here! (or ask for help ww).

[Gan Ttaemuniya]

You're my God.
Check your hitsounds, bae <3. There are some parts that are really quiet.

00:02:215 (3,4,1) - 00:05:907 (3,4,5) - Why are they mapped so differently? It's because you wanted to be cool and original? No, that's not how this works!!!111!1one
00:42:369 (2,3,4) - This sounds really odd. You know? I tried a lot of different patterns to make it sound better, but it's really hard, like you'll have to change the whole thing, especially that (2,3) it really sounds bad. It differs from 00:46:061 (2,3,4) - for example, since (2,3) have a similar sound according to the vocals as a whole, and (4) is a slider, so that gives more momentum to recover for the following object.
00:52:061 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is absolutely great! Well done.
01:16:061 (4) - I'd recommend you to rotate the tail a bit (clockwise) that way it'll flow better with 01:15:138 (3) - . In 01:14:215 (1,2,3) - you are making a circular movement, which plays really well but then you end up on 01:16:061 (4) - on a linear thingy that doesn't flow that good with the previous pattern at all.

[Q]

Hi, based mom!
Take a thoroughly look at the map, you need to add at least 2~3 more triplets, having only ONE in 01:04:753 (3,4,1) - is counter-intuitive. There are a lot of other spots that could have three notes! Find it out! (Sorry for this, but I will have to insist over and over for difficulty spread).

00:11:215 (3) - Stacks are evil, this can easily be misread
00:18:369 (4) - Shouldn't this be a circle for the consistency between 00:16:522 (4,4) - these? Making a 1-1-1 pattern isn't bad at all, though, but... on this kind of difficulties, they are quite rare. You could also reduce the distance a bit, because (4) is really far from (3). Overall, you'll have to work on this pattern if you agree, because if you happen to place a circle, then you will have to stack it with 00:18:830 (1) - no matter what.
01:17:676 (1) - This hitsound is pretty random haha.
01:31:753 (3,4) - Hmmm, I'm a bit unsure about this anti-flow pattern. If I'm not wrong, it's the only one you are using throughout the Kiai, correct me in the opposite case, although I wouldn't do that, is literally killing the pattern you are trying to do here and the constant and magnificent flow you're doing.

[Insane]

OD7 for the spread!

00:58:522 (3,4) - Weird... you've been using (3) as a reverse throughout all this section, why would you do this, Beom! W H Y? It'll fit perfectly with 00:54:830 (3,4) - so you will build a 1-1-1-1 pattern!
01:01:061 (4,1,2,3) - I find these to be quite overmapped. Just look at the previous patterns, in all of them (1) is being mapped as a 1/1 slider followed by a circle and then another slider. This pattern, although, doesn't make much sense, it's breaking your style and the rhythm as a whole. The song is still very calm so start spamming circles just to make an Insane look as one.
01:11:215 (3) - You could also curve this, it'll make much more sense and match more with 01:11:676 (4) - !
01:12:830 (2) - Potential off-screen slider, take care.
01:13:753 (4) - 01:21:138 (5) - 01:28:522 (5) - NC to maintain a 4-notes stream consistent.

[Ayyness]

00:09:599 (1,2) - This part looks so empty compared to the other ones, you ran out of inspiration, right? So sad!
00:14:215 (3) - NC will look cool here, for the sake of readability.
00:17:215 (2,3) - This isn't negotiable. I didn't mention some others that have a potential spacing such as 2.2x ds or similar because they flow really good. But this jump not only flows quite bad, but also it has a tremendous distance from the previous object. Consider reducing it and making a more circular flow for this pattern.
00:22:061 (1) - Too sudden, 1.5x SV will play better. Just imagine this with HR or even DT... that's not funny
00:34:061 (2,3) - Interesting jump, but quite counter-intuitive I'd say, especially considering you are making really small spacings between (2,3) in this part. This anti-flow pattern isn't the best option, in my opinion. I might be wrong, though!
01:13:753 (4) - I really think this slider should have more spacing compared to the previous object, after all, try find it by yourself, you'll notice all the finish hitsounds are being emphasised by a considerable jump.
01:41:445 (1,2) - What's up with this? If we are talking about emphasis, then (1) should have the whole spacing, but why did you decide to create such a huge gap with (1,2) instead?
01:41:907 (3) - Clap seems much better, there's a drumkick sound over there.

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@guineaQ: Please, do a talk with Beomsan. The gap between Hard and Insane is just ridiculous. Whilst in Hard there is only one triplet, in Insane he spams streams during the whole Kiai. You might want to use some triplets, as I said!

Call me backa

Beomsan

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Beomsan 2015-10-04T06:27:33+00:00

oh sorry I give 2 kds
miss click ww

Yuii-

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Yuii- 2015-10-04T06:29:21+00:00

Fixed
ww

Doyak

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Doyak 2015-10-04T07:35:47+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
[Doyak made the diff!]

You're my God. .doG ym er'uoY
Check your hitsounds, bae <3. There are some parts that are really quiet. I'll let Beomsan to fix those, since he mapped all the hitsounds for my diff.

00:02:215 (3,4,1) - 00:05:907 (3,4,5) - Why are they mapped so differently? It's because you wanted to be cool and original? No, that's not how this works!!!111!1one lol though they're not very same. First one is continuous, while the second one is a bridge to a new section, so they're different.
00:42:369 (2,3,4) - This sounds really odd. You know? I tried a lot of different patterns to make it sound better, but it's really hard, like you'll have to change the whole thing, especially that (2,3) it really sounds bad. It differs from 00:46:061 (2,3,4) - for example, since (2,3) have a similar sound according to the vocals as a whole, and (4) is a slider, so that gives more momentum to recover for the following object. I can't think of a better pattern too. At least, there's nothing to emphasize on 00:44:215 - here, but rather clicking 00:43:753 - is better. On the other hand, 00:47:907 (5) - this is very good to emphasize, so letting it clickabe by making 00:47:445 - this as a slider end also makes sense.
00:52:061 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is absolutely great! Well done. Thanks!
01:16:061 (4) - I'd recommend you to rotate the tail a bit (clockwise) that way it'll flow better with 01:15:138 (3) - . In 01:14:215 (1,2,3) - you are making a circular movement, which plays really well but then you end up on 01:16:061 (4) - on a linear thingy that doesn't flow that good with the previous pattern at all. I know what you mean, but that pattern is more focused on making linear pattern for both 01:16:061 (4,5,6) - AND 01:17:445 (7,1) - . If I break it then maybe second one should be broken too.

Very uncertain to fix any, but well... I guess all those should be fine. Thanks for your mod!

Beomsan

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Topic Starter

Beomsan 2015-10-04T14:22:20+00:00

omg It takes long to interpret. please wait lol
I hate me

guineaQ

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guineaQ 2015-10-04T18:26:14+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
Hellooow~! (again aww)

Offset 376~378 maybe? I don't know if I'm deaf, but it's more accurate, in my opinion.

@Beomsan: I really recommend you to copy the hitsounds for EinESS' difficulty. I opened the Insane and found 00:00:369 (1) - has no hitsound at all, whilst 00:00:369 (1) - has a Finish on its head. Hitsounding is hard, and I'm not expecting you to learn it in one day, but sometimes looking at other people's hitsounds make things easier! I could give you a couple of tips on how to improve your hitsounding, but not for this map because I'm hella lazy, bud
Regarding hitsound, let's just talk about it for a while so Ttaemuniya will have more work to do!!

[Q]

Hi, based mom! Hi, based Tomori
Take a thoroughly look at the map, you need to add at least 2~3 more triplets, having only ONE in 01:04:753 (3,4,1) - is counter-intuitive. There are a lot of other spots that could have three notes! Find it out! (Sorry for this, but I will have to insist over and over for difficulty spread). I do agree that the Insane - Hard gap is indeed ridiculous, but that means I'll need to completely restructure the kiai section and that WILL take some time. Due to how I map, just simply making some parts triplet WILL hurt the quality of this difficulty really bad since I didn't design this difficulty with triplets in mind.

00:11:215 (3) - Stacks are evil, this can easily be misread ay ok
00:18:369 (4) - Shouldn't this be a circle for the consistency between 00:16:522 (4,4) - these? Making a 1-1-1 pattern isn't bad at all, though, but... on this kind of difficulties, they are quite rare. You could also reduce the distance a bit, because (4) is really far from (3). Overall, you'll have to work on this pattern if you agree, because if you happen to place a circle, then you will have to stack it with 00:18:830 (1) - no matter what. Ah, the thing is, the other patterns have a circle due to held vocal, but in this part, vocal shifts into another long hold, so thats why it has a slider instead of a single circle. If you look at 01:36:369 - part, the same rhythm is used on EXACTLY IDENTICAL set of sound.
01:17:676 (1) - This hitsound is pretty random haha. ?? If Beomsan added more hitsounds that messed something up I have no idea what's wrong with this on my side D: maybe I need to redl
01:31:753 (3,4) - Hmmm, I'm a bit unsure about this anti-flow pattern. If I'm not wrong, it's the only one you are using throughout the Kiai, correct me in the opposite case, although I wouldn't do that, is literally killing the pattern you are trying to do here and the constant and magnificent flow you're doing. Kiai is gonna get major overhaul anyways
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@guineaQ: Please, do a talk with Beomsan. The gap between Hard and Insane is just ridiculous. Whilst in Hard there is only one triplet, in Insane he spams streams during the whole Kiai. You might want to use some triplets, as I said! Yeah, that means I'm remapping the kiai part unfortunately

Call me backa

@Beomsan: 하드 인세인 난이도 차가 너무 큰 관계로 하드에 1/4를 좀 추가해야 되는데... 일단 고치는데 시간이 좀 걸릴 듯 하네요

Beomsan

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Beomsan 2015-10-04T18:35:36+00:00

저는 괜찮으니 느긋하게 부탁드릴게요 owo

Ujimatsu Chiya

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Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-10-05T12:35:50+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
[eINess' Insane]
00:05:907 (1,2) - 아무리 마음의 귀로 들어도 00:07:753 (1,2) 만큼 타당한 1/4 소리는 들리지 않았습니다. 하나의 슬라이더로 묶는게 최선입니만 굳이 이 박자 쓰시겠다면 (2) 머리의 휘슬을 지워주세요. // 저는 들리는데 투명한(?)소리라고해야하나 맑은소리라고해야하나.. 일단 휘슬은 빼볼게요 소리가 약하긴하니
00:15:138 - 다른 난이도와 달리 키아이가 없는데 의도하신 건가요? 적어도 분수 한번은 터뜨려주실 수 있을 것 같아요.
00:22:061 (1,1) - 개인적으로 가속은 어울리나 2배속은 너무 높은 수치였다고 생각합니다. 1.7배속도 충분해요. 또한 애매한 수동 스택이어서 1/4로 혼동할 여지가 있어서 완벽한 스택을 취하는 것도 고려해볼만한데 가속 수치를 낮추면 또 모르겠네요.
00:58:061 (3,4,5) - (4)의 곡률만 눈에 띄게 다른 상태입니다. 모두의 곡률이 똑같은게 더 통일감 있을 것 같네요.
00:53:907 (1,2,3) - 00:55:753 (1,2,3) - 01:01:292 (1,2,3) - 마지막의 연타 패턴 설정이 다른데 통일감 있게 패턴 구성해주세요.
01:42:022 (1) - 이거도 타 난이도들처럼 끝 페이드아웃 해주세요.
다음 중 과도한 점프가 어울리지 않는 구간은? // 아니 이 시험문제같은 모딩 뭡니까 썜요? ㅋㅋ... 1번 3번 5번
①00:00:369 - 00:15:138 - 음악의 도입부
②00:15:138 - 00:22:522 - 준 키아이
③00:22:522 - 00:36:830 - 준 키아이 이후의 얌전한 파트
④00:36:830 - 00:52:061 - 얌전한 파트가 끝난 이후 힘찬 전개
⑤00:52:061 - 01:06:830 - 하이라이트를 위해 잠시 충전하는 파트
⑥01:06:830 - 01:43:522 - 키아이

Yuii- wrote:
Hellooow~! (again aww)
[Ayyness]

00:09:599 (1,2) - This part looks so empty compared to the other ones, you ran out of inspiration, right? So sad! // When only continue the same pattern is rather boring. and That place is a place for rest.
00:14:215 (3) - NC will look cool here, for the sake of readability.
00:17:215 (2,3) - This isn't negotiable. I didn't mention some others that have a potential spacing such as 2.2x ds or similar because they flow really good. But this jump not only flows quite bad, but also it has a tremendous distance from the previous object. Consider reducing it and making a more circular flow for this pattern. // Slight decrease, but no more.
00:22:061 (1) - Too sudden, 1.5x SV will play better. Just imagine this with HR or even DT... that's not funny // change 1.7x instead then
00:34:061 (2,3) - Interesting jump, but quite counter-intuitive I'd say, especially considering you are making really small spacings between (2,3) in this part. This anti-flow pattern isn't the best option, in my opinion. I might be wrong, though!
01:13:753 (4) - I really think this slider should have more spacing compared to the previous object, after all, try find it by yourself, you'll notice all the finish hitsounds are being emphasised by a considerable jump. // make same DS with 01:12:369 (1,2) - can better play, I think.
01:41:445 (1,2) - What's up with this? If we are talking about emphasis, then (1) should have the whole spacing, but why did you decide to create such a huge gap with (1,2) instead?
01:41:907 (3) - Clap seems much better, there's a drumkick sound over there. // change samlpeset -N finish, that's make more rich sound.
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@guineaQ: Please, do a talk with Beomsan. The gap between Hard and Insane is just ridiculous. Whilst in Hard there is only one triplet, in Insane he spams streams during the whole Kiai. You might want to use some triplets, as I said!

Call me backa

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