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Mekki

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2015-09-16T15:53:34+00:00

Hestia- wrote:
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It's missing the last 30 seconds? It's WIP.

Leorda wrote:
Hola! Hello!

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01:33:787 - Add note here? Feels empty btw No, i prefer follow the vocals at this part.

Good luck~ Ty!

Thank you for modding!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-09-16T18:34:20+00:00

Hello, from my queue!

AlejandroMedia's Modding

General

The artist has japanese name: "れをるとギガ". Put this and the current to Romanised Artist

Easy

No problems found.

Normal

02:18:556 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - So many objects for this part
03:11:171 - 03:45:325 - Add notes T-T

Not many problems founded. Congratulations, well beatmaped

If I helped you, give me kudosu. Good luck

Mekki

1,793 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2015-09-17T00:46:28+00:00

AlejandroMedia wrote:
Hello, from my queue!

Normal

03:11:171 - 03:45:325 - Add notes T-T It's a WIP...

Not many problems founded. Congratulations, well beatmaped Thank you.

If I helped you, give me kudosu. Good luck Thank you.

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2015-09-17T14:43:44+00:00

Hello, M4M from my queue.

Easy
- 00:31:479 (1,3) - Try to balance these sliders so that the point in the middle of the slider lands on the slider tick. Fairly easy to do; just move ther red tick ontop of the slider point. You may have to disable grid snapping.

Example

- 01:44:864 (4) - Minor: Perhaps move this up slightly (about 452:112) so that 3-4-1 follows a more curved pattern instead of a linear one.
- 03:21:325 (3) - Not sure about this double repeater at this part of the music. Usually these are pretty difficult to read at this SV since you don't get much time to see the reverse arrow. They worked in the other sections of the music where you used these since the build up to the kiai matched it perfectly, but here it seems to be used somewhat randomly. I think using a more standard rhythm woud suit this better (perhaps remove one repeat and use a circle?).

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- 00:05:633 (1) - Minor: This blanket could be improved. View the approach circle from [00:04:710].
- 00:41:402 (4) - Minor: And this one [00:41:979].
- 00:44:402 (5,1) - Minor: The visual flow of these aren't quite perfect. You could either move 1 or rotate 5 to adjust this.

Example

- 03:10:248 (3) - Minor: Another blanket issue [03:09:787].
- I'll assume all of those timing points at the end of this diff means you're not finished yet.

Hard
- 00:15:325 (2) - Perhaps move this slightly to the left so there's a consistent spacing into 3, since the triple stack on 00:15:556 (3,4,5) causes it to nearly touch 2.
- 01:34:479 - There is a vocal note here. Up to you whether you want to map this.
- 01:57:325 (3) - Not sure if it's intentional or not, but I don't think the clap on this slider end sounds suitable.
- 01:57:786 (5) - And I'm also going to assume this is supposed to be a clap instead of a whistle.
- 03:16:479 (2,3,4,5) - This may be a bit awkward to play. You are asking the player to hit all of these in a flow which roughly goes in the same direction, but the change in spacing means the player has to change speeds to hit these accurately (which when going in the same direction is kinda tricky). I'd recommend perhaps changing the jumps so that they are at an acute angle so that the change in speeds are easier to handle (all of your other similar rhythms are like this and they play very nicely).

Example

- 03:42:556 (3) - Not too sure about this. Readability of this slider might be compromised due to how much of the slider is obstructed by 1 and 2, but it might be fine.

Synpoo's Insane
- 00:43:479 (4,5,6) - I feel that this arrangement for this rhythm is a bit confusing to read. When testplaying, I thought 5 was going to be on the red tick, but that might just be me.
- 01:06:094 (6,7,1) - Same thing here. It's guessing it's because your previous rhythms like 00:38:864 (1,2) have the blue tick note overlapped by the slider, and this goes against that.

Pretty clean mapset; not too much to say about this. Good luck

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lumael 2015-09-17T17:28:50+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
Hello, M4M from my queue.

Easy
- 00:31:479 (1,3) - Try to balance these sliders so that the point in the middle of the slider lands on the slider tick. Fairly easy to do; just move ther red tick ontop of the slider point. You may have to disable grid snapping. Well I really don't see the point of doing that, it's perfect to me
- 01:44:864 (4) - Minor: Perhaps move this up slightly (about 452:112) so that 3-4-1 follows a more curved pattern instead of a linear one. okay
- 03:21:325 (3) - Not sure about this double repeater at this part of the music. Usually these are pretty difficult to read at this SV since you don't get much time to see the reverse arrow. They worked in the other sections of the music where you used these since the build up to the kiai matched it perfectly, but here it seems to be used somewhat randomly. I think using a more standard rhythm woud suit this better (perhaps remove one repeat and use a circle?). bn said it's fine as long as the bpm is low like on this song

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- 00:05:633 (1) - Minor: This blanket could be improved. View the approach circle from [00:04:710]. kinda lazy to fix that
- 03:10:248 (3) - Minor: Another blanket issue [03:09:787]. fixed
- I'll assume all of those timing points at the end of this diff means you're not finished yet. yeah, now it's done xD

Hard
- 00:15:325 (2) - Perhaps move this slightly to the left so there's a consistent spacing into 3, since the triple stack on 00:15:556 (3,4,5) causes it to nearly touch 2. desable stack on your editor
- 01:34:479 - There is a vocal note here. Up to you whether you want to map this. not mapping vocals here
- 01:57:325 (3) - Not sure if it's intentional or not, but I don't think the clap on this slider end sounds suitable. Oh yeah missplaced xD
- 01:57:786 (5) - And I'm also going to assume this is supposed to be a clap instead of a whistle. yes XD
- 03:16:479 (2,3,4,5) - This may be a bit awkward to play. You are asking the player to hit all of these in a flow which roughly goes in the same direction, but the change in spacing means the player has to change speeds to hit these accurately (which when going in the same direction is kinda tricky). I'd recommend perhaps changing the jumps so that they are at an acute angle so that the change in speeds are easier to handle (all of your other similar rhythms are like this and they play very nicely). nah current is fine
- 03:42:556 (3) - Not too sure about this. Readability of this slider might be compromised due to how much of the slider is obstructed by 1 and 2, but it might be fine. ^ but I will check more opinions!

Pretty clean mapset; not too much to say about this. Good luck

Thank you for mod!!

Mekki

1,793 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2015-09-17T19:42:55+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
Hello, M4M from my queue.

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- 00:41:402 (4) - Minor: And this one [00:41:979]. Fixed.
- 00:44:402 (5,1) - Minor: The visual flow of these aren't quite perfect. You could either move 1 or rotate 5 to adjust this. No.
Example
- 03:10:248 (3) - Minor: Another blanket issue [03:09:787]. Blanket is perfectly fine in there.
- I'll assume all of those timing points at the end of this diff means you're not finished yet.

Pretty clean mapset; not too much to say about this. Good luck Thank you.

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KASUM1

336 posts

Joined December 2013

KASUM1 2015-09-17T19:51:07+00:00

little thing ♥

[Snypoo's Insane]
01:19:941 (2,4) - fix this blanket
01:42:556 (4,5,6) - these triplets perfect 01:43:248 (8,9,1) - this one unnecessary triplets , remove 01:43:364 (9) -
01:45:210 (9) - remove

[Hard]
00:15:671 (4) - remove
00:22:941 (2,1) - this overlap is intentional ?
00:43:479 (3) - change it to something like that http://puu.sh/keLfj/5b9cfc0bca.jpg and blanket 00:44:402 (1) -
01:13:941 (1,4) - this overlap is intentional ?
02:07:479 (1,2) - more neater blanket? http://puu.sh/keLvB/95085dd8c7.jpg look at the middle slider and approach circle
02:17:633 (3,1) - intentional overlap?

I like the way you mapped the drums and background instruments and the vocals ♥

remember these all suggestions

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2015-09-17T19:53:21+00:00

Lumael wrote:
desable stack on your editor

That's not the problem. Editor and in-game are different, and the spacing will look reduced when you play the map in-game.

But oh well, it's doesn't really matter. Do what you want.

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lumael 2015-09-17T20:06:18+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
Lumael wrote:
desable stack on your editor
That's not the problem. Editor and in-game are different, and the spacing will look reduced when you play the map in-game.

But oh well, it's doesn't really matter. Do what you want.

This isn't a problem neither .=.

UndeadCapulet

1,100 posts

Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2015-09-17T22:58:48+00:00

From my queue, only modding the Normal as requested but mostly because I hate Reol:

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This is literally the first time I've ever seen this before, I didn't even know it was a thing. No clue about the rankability of this, but you should fix it anyway lol (I imagine it has to do with how HP drain is calculated, the end of the spinner won't give back enough HP or something).

00:37:017 (4) - Rotating this by around 8 degrees will be better. 00:34:017 (5,6,1,2,3) - are all sharp flow reversals, but then the 00:36:094 (3,4) - angle is really open and curved, so this section feels disjointed.
01:59:633 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I recommend swapping NC at 01:59:633 (5,1) - and 02:03:325 (4,1) - . Your patterning is showing off the symmetry in these lines of the music, your NC's should do that, too. You don't always have to stick to the downbeats if a better option is available.
02:29:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rework these rhythms to be similar to 02:34:248 (3) - . Or, just change the 3/4 slider. It's one thing to be mixing up rhythms to keep things interesting, it's another thing to completely switch from following instrumental to following vocals even though the music is behaving the same way.
02:51:787 (1,2) - I'd recommend 4 1/1 circles here, it creates a better distinction from the 02:53:633 (1) - slider, so the switch to kiai is more powerful.
02:58:941 (4) - I don't think humming is important enough to be skipping over the 02:58:710 beat.

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Best of luck~

Mekki

1,793 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2015-09-18T01:12:14+00:00

UndeadCapulet wrote:
From my queue, only modding the Normal as requested but mostly because I hate Reol:

Collab Normal

This is literally the first time I've ever seen this before, I didn't even know it was a thing. No clue about the rankability of this, but you should fix it anyway lol (I imagine it has to do with how HP drain is calculated, the end of the spinner won't give back enough HP or something). Ok.

00:37:017 (4) - Rotating this by around 8 degrees will be better. 00:34:017 (5,6,1,2,3) - are all sharp flow reversals, but then the 00:36:094 (3,4) - angle is really open and curved, so this section feels disjointed. Ok.
02:29:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rework these rhythms to be similar to 02:34:248 (3) - . Or, just change the 3/4 slider. It's one thing to be mixing up rhythms to keep things interesting, it's another thing to completely switch from following instrumental to following vocals even though the music is behaving the same way. Fixed.
02:51:787 (1,2) - I'd recommend 4 1/1 circles here, it creates a better distinction from the 02:53:633 (1) - slider, so the switch to kiai is more powerful Done.
02:58:941 (4) - I don't think humming is important enough to be skipping over the 02:58:710 beat. I prefer keeping the way it is.

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Best of luck~ Thanks.

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396,136,195787,6,0,L|399:255,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,284,196710,2,0,L|280:164,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,197633,2,0,P|152:68|64:92,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,198325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,188,198556,2,0,L|36:316,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,348,199479,6,0,B|192:344|192:344|216:360|216:360|280:352,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,324,200171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,352,200402,2,0,P|436:364|500:348,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,236,201325,2,0,P|420:224|356:240,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,260,202017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,284,202248,2,0,P|201:296|142:286,1,120,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,264,202941,2,0,P|56:260|16:268,1,60,2|6,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203402,12,2,205017,0:0:0:0:
84,76,205941,6,0,L|88:208,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,244,206864,6,0,L|196:124,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,72,207556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,44,207787,2,0,P|340:32|408:48,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,84,208479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,136,208710,2,0,L|464:280,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,32,210094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,80,210556,6,0,P|288:120|216:164,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,252,211479,2,0,P|109:204|104:144,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,320,212864,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,320,213094,2,0,P|312:328|364:296,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,252,213787,2,0,P|432:224|500:228,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,344,214710,5,8,0:0:0:0:
497,227,215171,2,0,P|501:175|477:107,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,4,216094,2,0,P|380:40|360:100,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,152,216787,2,0,P|320:184|232:212,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,94,217941,5,2,0:0:0:0:
240,88,218402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,204,218864,2,0,L|200:324,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,364,219787,2,0,P|368:360|424:304,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,264,220479,2,0,L|464:128,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,320,221633,5,2,0:0:0:0:
348,220,222094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,128,222556,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,24,223017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,88,223479,2,0,P|216:104|136:68,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,100,224171,2,0,L|60:224,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Synpoo

616 posts

Joined August 2013

Synpoo 2015-09-18T06:15:56+00:00

read all the mods and no changes to any of them, thx tho

Lumael

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Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lumael 2015-09-18T09:52:43+00:00

UndeadCapulet

UndeadCapulet wrote:
From my queue, only modding the Normal as requested but mostly because I hate Reol:

Collab Normal

This is literally the first time I've ever seen this before, I didn't even know it was a thing. No clue about the rankability of this, but you should fix it anyway lol (I imagine it has to do with how HP drain is calculated, the end of the spinner won't give back enough HP or something). nah, its just literally a new combo missing XD
01:59:633 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I recommend swapping NC at 01:59:633 (5,1) - and 02:03:325 (4,1) - . Your patterning is showing off the symmetry in these lines of the music, your NC's should do that, too. You don't always have to stick to the downbeats if a better option is available. this doensn't make any sense .=.

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Best of luck~

KASUM1 ♥

KASUM1 wrote:
little thing ♥
[Hard]
00:15:671 (4) - remove but I can hear drums here ;w;
00:22:941 (2,1) - this overlap is intentional ? yeah but I might change this, I don't like it too much
00:43:479 (3) - change it to something like that http://puu.sh/keLfj/5b9cfc0bca.jpg and blanket 00:44:402 (1) - fixed
01:13:941 (1,4) - this overlap is intentional ? yes ;w;
02:07:479 (1,2) - more neater blanket? http://puu.sh/keLvB/95085dd8c7.jpg look at the middle slider and approach circle ill try xD
02:17:633 (3,1) - intentional overlap? yes

I like the way you mapped the drums and background instruments and the vocals ♥ ♥!

remember these all suggestions

Thank you!!

-Nya-

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Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-09-18T17:56:21+00:00

M4M~

General:

I have a feeling your current metadata is wrong. I searched on the Internet for metadata similar to yours and found none. Possible metadata could be:
Giga-P feat. Reol – drop pop candy
GigaP & Reol – Drop Pop Candy
Unfortunately, metadata isn’t really my strongpoint though, so I suggest you ask someone that’s a pro at this like IamKwaN or Alacat. If you have proof that your current metadata may be correct as well, then just send me the link to it.
I see an OSB file in your song’s folder but there’s no SB. Please remove it.
Change audio lead-in to 2000ms in all the diffs please. Not really such a big issue, but it’s better to be safe than sorry.
Just bringing to your attention that the Insane and Hard has the same slider velocity. I suggest you either lessen the SV of the Hard or make the SV of the Insane higher so you’ll have a more balanced-out spread. I think you and Synpoo might have to discuss it if you want to change it.

Easy:

Imo, the difficulty settings of this diff is too high for a beginner diff/the easiest diff in the set. I suggest you change:
HP: 2
AR: 3
OD: 2
00:20:864 (1,2) –Making a blanket here would work better imo. It’ll look neater.
00:22:248 (2) –This kind of slider works fine here since you can hear it’s following the vocals, but I don’t think this kind of slider really fits here: 00:25:941 (3) – though. It sounds to me like the repeat is not really landing on a specific beat, which may be a bit too confusing for the easiest diff. Same goes for this slider: 01:01:017 (1) - and 01:32:402 (3) – and 02:09:325 (3) – and 02:55:479 (3) - I suggest you do something like this instead:
Picture
00:29:633 (3) –I think it would be better if you stack the head of this slider on 00:27:787 (1) – The overlapping looks bad. Also, try to avoid the overlap with 00:28:248 (2) – then if you follow my suggestion.
01:34:248 (1) –Not the best flow to be honest. Maybe try something like this instead:
Picture
02:05:633 (1) –I don’t suggest you make use of double repeats in an Easy diff. Rather break that slider up into two short sliders instead. Same goes for this one: 02:51:787 (1) – and 03:21:325 (3) -
Picture
02:14:864 (1,2) –I think changing them into straight sliders instead would work better, flow-wise as well.
02:29:633 (1,2,3,4) –This pattern looks so crammed into one little space which is unnecessary. Spread the pattern out more and make use of the entire grid by mapping that pattern upwards and not downwards; to avoid the overlapping.
02:49:941 (1,2,3,4) –Not really a fan of these placements. It could be improved. Perhaps try placing the circles like this:
Picture
A half-circle shape.
03:03:787 (4,5,1,3) –I don’t really like this overlapping of objects. Not really such a big deal but imo it can be improved and look better organized.
03:44:864 (1) –This very short slider is probably okay and there’s probably no better way to map that part, but it’s still bothering me though since it’s placed in an Easy diff. I would just place a single note here: 03:44:864 – and avoid 03:45:094 –

Collab Normal:

I’m specifically going to name places where more objects can be added so that the difficulty of the diff can be boosted up a little bit. Just to fix the gap between Normal and Hard a bit more.
00:05:402 –I don’t think this beat should be ignored. The best suggestion would be to change 00:05:171 (5) – into a short slider. Same goes for here: 00:12:556 (5) – and here 00:16:248 (5) -
Picture
00:09:094 –Add a circle here if you followed my above suggestion.
00:18:556 (4,5,6) –I would rather follow the vocals here. It seems a bit weird if you don’t since 00:18:325 – feels so empty. So perhaps try a rhythm like this:
Picture
Take note that a change like this would mean that you would have to almost change the entire rhythm that you have been following, thus a lot of changes would have to be made. Remember that the vocal-following idea is just my own opinion and that it would improve your diff a lot in my own opinion. (I also think that this diff has to be a bit harder to fill the gap between Normal and Hard more.) I’m going to continue my modding further on as if you didn’t use my previous suggestion.
00:22:017 –I suggest either placing a circle here or changing that circle into a short slider.
00:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) –Same thing here about following the vocals instead. I’d so something like this:
Picture
00:53:633 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) –I see you followed the vocals in the kiai time though, so I suggest you thus do the same in the previous part of this diff.
01:31:248 (2,5) –Please avoid this overlap. It’s unnecessary and looks untidy.
01:33:325 (6,1) –Perhaps try a rhythm like this instead?
Picture
01:39:787 (3) –I would follow the vocals instead by placing that slider here: 01:39:556 –
02:13:710 (4,1) –Please avoid unnecessary overlapping like this. It looks untidy.
02:31:710 (3,4,5,6) –This rhythm is very complicated imo. Especially since you left 02:32:171 – empty. Perhaps try a rhythm like this instead:
Picture
02:55:479 (3,4,5,6) –I would rather follow the vocals here and not just place single circles. The difficulty of this diff has to be pushed up just a little bit more and also because you didn’t do that anywhere else in the diff.
03:36:094 (3) –Just make sure this slider is not placed too high.

Hard:

00:01:941 (1,2) –Be careful for big jumps like this in a Hard diff. That jump is quite big and the placement of 00:02:402 (2) – makes it harder. I suggest you shorten the jump, or avoid placing a jump there at all.
00:05:633 (1) –I think it would be better to place a jump here and not here: 00:06:094 (2) – since the music suggests it.
00:11:864 (2) –I think a straight slider would look better here.
Picture
00:44:171 (4,1) –This jump is quite big when you compare it to the previous ones with the same beat. I suggest you shorten the jump.
00:45:787 (3) –I would avoid this overlap by doing this:
Picture
If you follow my above suggestion, make sure that your jump between 00:45:787 (3,1) – isn’t too big then.
00:45:787 (3,1) –Make sure the jump between those two sliders and these two sliders: 00:47:633 (4,1) – and 00:49:479 (4,1) - are similar.
00:51:787 (1) –Quite a big jump considering there’s not such a big pause between 00:51:325 (3,1) – like there is between 00:51:787 (1,2) –
00:56:171 (2,3,4,5,6) –Perhaps try placing these circles into a sort of star-shape or something like that. Like this:
Picture
Just my own silly opinion though
01:34:248 (1) –Quite a big jump when there’s not much of a pause between 01:34:017 (4,1) –
02:10:941 (6) –Stack the (6) on 02:10:479 (4) - ? That’ll avoid the overlapping and look better structured.
02:13:479 (2,4) –This overlapping looks a bit weird to me. So unnecessary. Why not just stack there or avoid the overlapping completely?

I noticed that this diff has a lot of jumps and some of them are quite challenging. I think some of them are even bigger than the Insane’s. You should be careful not to go too overboard with jumps in Hard especially when the pauses between objects are very short. Jumps in Hard are definitely needed, but then they should be placed in places where the music really suggests jumps and where they make sense. I did point out a few that I thought were too much, but there are more. It’s also important to make sure that the jumps are consistent where the beats or music are the same.

Synpoo’s Insane:

I’m just going to point out a few things that bothered me:
00:05:633 (1) –Why not place a jump here? You did it everywhere else.
I guess the first thing is some of the random placement of the circles. I usually try placing them more in a certain pattern so they look organised. I guess an example of a place where your placement can improve is here: 01:14:864 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - But that’s just my own mapping style. I just thought I’ll put this suggestion out there.
01:06:441 (7) –It was really hard to see this circle while I played because of where it’s placed. I highly suggest you try to make it more visible.
For some reason the placement of these circles: 01:09:671 (6) - 01:18:902 (6) – confused me too. This one: 00:59:056 (7) – was okay though.
01:29:517 (1,2,3) –These confused me a lot. I think it’s because of the big jump and the short sliders that look like circles.
02:10:017 (4) –This circle is grazing the HP bar a bit. Lower it a bit.

Overall, the Easy looks fine; just a few little things that can be improved. I feel the Normal’s difficulty has to be raised a bit since the Hard has quite a lot of jumps and a few triples, thus the gap between those two diffs can be filled more. The jumps in Hard may have to be eased down a bit and just a few little things can be fixed in Insane.

Good Luck~!

Lumael

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Topic Starter

Lumael 2015-09-18T18:19:53+00:00

Wow that's a lot. I'll check everything when I get home, for now, the metadata was suggested by Kwan so idk what to do

-Nya-

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Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2015-09-18T18:26:43+00:00

Lumael wrote:
Wow that's a lot. I'll check everything when I get home, for now, the metadata was suggested by Kwan so idk what to do

Hmm, I suggest asking Alacat as well then, just to be sure, but if Kwan himself suggested the current metadata then it should be fine. He's a pro at it afterall.

Lumael

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Topic Starter

Lumael 2015-09-18T23:32:37+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
M4M~

General:
I have a feeling your current metadata is wrong. I searched on the Internet for metadata similar to yours and found none. Possible metadata could be:
Giga-P feat. Reol – drop pop candy
GigaP & Reol – Drop Pop Candy
Unfortunately, metadata isn’t really my strongpoint though, so I suggest you ask someone that’s a pro at this like IamKwaN or Alacat. If you have proof that your current metadata may be correct as well, then just send me the link to it. already contacted alact for this
I see an OSB file in your song’s folder but there’s no SB. Please remove it. As I've just added a storyboard with collab names it now has an usage ;w;
Change audio lead-in to 2000ms in all the diffs please. Not really such a big issue, but it’s better to be safe than sorry. Added 1000ms, I think 2000 is too much since the song doesn't start that sudden, a few people testeplayed the map and they didn't exeperience any issue with that
Just bringing to your attention that the Insane and Hard has the same slider velocity. I suggest you either lessen the SV of the Hard or make the SV of the Insane higher so you’ll have a more balanced-out spread. I think you and Synpoo might have to discuss it if you want to change it. Well, you got a point here, I may think of remapping this hard (sent u a pm) because as far as I'm concerned, the only way to resnap slider is manually one by one..Also I don't think it is too much of a problem because it is a GD. Anyway, if I have to change something, it will be on my diff because I don't want to bother Synpoo, it's my fault

Easy:
Imo, the difficulty settings of this diff is too high for a beginner diff/the easiest diff in the set. I suggest you change:
HP: 2 2.5, I think 2 is too low
AR: 3 kept, I think AR 4 is pretty easy to read even for beginners
OD: 2 kept, because it should be higher than the HP, but I'm not sure here yet, I may change to 2.5 as well
00:20:864 (1,2) –Making a blanket here would work better imo. It’ll look neater. alright, seens like nobody like this pretty overlap
00:22:248 (2) –This kind of slider works fine here since you can hear it’s following the vocals, but I don’t think this kind of slider really fits here: 00:25:941 (3) – though. It sounds to me like the repeat is not really landing on a specific beat, which may be a bit too confusing for the easiest diff. Same goes for this slider: 01:01:017 (1) - and 01:32:402 (3) – and 02:09:325 (3) – and 02:55:479 (3) - I suggest you do something like this instead:
Fixed all locations but in some of them I did a 2/1 with reverse because DS didn't let me make like this
00:29:633 (3) –I think it would be better if you stack the head of this slider on 00:27:787 (1) – The overlapping looks bad. Also, try to avoid the overlap with 00:28:248 (2) – then if you follow my suggestion. 00:28:248 (2,3) - this overlap is intentional, and as I changed this pattern because of the last suggestion, I'm not able to guess how it was b4..
01:34:248 (1) –Not the best flow to be honest. Maybe try something like this instead:
okay fixed here
02:05:633 (1) –I don’t suggest you make use of double repeats in an Easy diff. Rather break that slider up into two short sliders instead. Same goes for this one: 02:51:787 (1) – and 03:21:325 (3) - Baraatje told me they were fine because the bpm is low
Picture
02:14:864 (1,2) –I think changing them into straight sliders instead would work better, flow-wise as well. fixed here but I think it was better because the flow to (3) was better
02:29:633 (1,2,3,4) –This pattern looks so crammed into one little space which is unnecessary. Spread the pattern out more and make use of the entire grid by mapping that pattern upwards and not downwards; to avoid the overlapping. you can't notice any overlap while playing
02:49:941 (1,2,3,4) –Not really a fan of these placements. It could be improved. Perhaps try placing the circles like this:
okayokay
A half-circle shape.
03:03:787 (4,5,1,3) –I don’t really like this overlapping of objects. Not really such a big deal but imo it can be improved and look better organized. I played this part and this isn't noticeable while playing ;w;
03:44:864 (1) –This very short slider is probably okay and there’s probably no better way to map that part, but it’s still bothering me though since it’s placed in an Easy diff. I would just place a single note here: 03:44:864 – and avoid 03:45:094 – well, I understand you, and it does bother me, but I think one circle is too simple

Collab Normal:
I’m specifically going to name places where more objects can be added so that the difficulty of the diff can be boosted up a little bit. Just to fix the gap between Normal and Hard a bit more.
00:05:402 –I don’t think this beat should be ignored. The best suggestion would be to change 00:05:171 (5) – into a short slider. Same goes for here: 00:12:556 (5) – and here 00:16:248 (5) - fixed all links
00:09:094 –Add a circle here if you followed my above suggestion. I don't see a conection between this suggestion and the above one, also there's nothing here to add a circle .-. oxygen doesn't need that much of emphasis /me runs smdisjidsji
00:18:556 (4,5,6) –I would rather follow the vocals here. It seems a bit weird if you don’t since 00:18:325 – feels so empty. So perhaps try a rhythm like this:
changed to this instead http://puu.sh/kg3Nh/26cb98c8e4.jpg I didn't like so much your suggestion because it skips one of the most important drum beats from the song
Take note that a change like this would mean that you would have to almost change the entire rhythm that you have been following, thus a lot of changes would have to be made. Remember that the vocal-following idea is just my own opinion and that it would improve your diff a lot in my own opinion. (I also think that this diff has to be a bit harder to fill the gap between Normal and Hard more.) I’m going to continue my modding further on as if you didn’t use my previous suggestion. I will check for, but I don't think I will change much since I prefer drums, I just map vocals sometimes to avoid too much repetitive patterns
00:22:017 –I suggest either placing a circle here or changing that circle into a short slider. alright
00:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) –Same thing here about following the vocals instead. I’d so something like this:
I did it slightly simillar
00:53:633 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) –I see you followed the vocals in the kiai time though, so I suggest you thus do the same in the previous part of this diff.
01:31:248 (2,5) –Please avoid this overlap. It’s unnecessary and looks untidy. I will keep this for now, I like this overlap, but I may change if any other bn complain
01:33:325 (6,1) –Perhaps try a rhythm like this instead?
Picture
01:39:787 (3) –I would follow the vocals instead by placing that slider here: 01:39:556 –
02:13:710 (4,1) –Please avoid unnecessary overlapping like this. It looks untidy.
02:31:710 (3,4,5,6) –This rhythm is very complicated imo. Especially since you left 02:32:171 – empty. Perhaps try a rhythm like this instead:
Picture
02:55:479 (3,4,5,6) –I would rather follow the vocals here and not just place single circles. The difficulty of this diff has to be pushed up just a little bit more and also because you didn’t do that anywhere else in the diff.
03:36:094 (3) –Just make sure this slider is not placed too high.

Not mentioned is for MkGuh's part

Hard:
00:01:941 (1,2) –Be careful for big jumps like this in a Hard diff. That jump is quite big and the placement of 00:02:402 (2) – makes it harder. I suggest you shorten the jump, or avoid placing a jump there at all. shortened
00:05:633 (1) –I think it would be better to place a jump here and not here: 00:06:094 (2) – since the music suggests it. 00:06:094 (2) - this is a much stronger noise than 00:05:633 (1) -
00:11:864 (2) –I think a straight slider would look better here.
okay okay nice
00:44:171 (4,1) –This jump is quite big when you compare it to the previous ones with the same beat. I suggest you shorten the jump. you're right, changed to 1,5x jump instead
00:45:787 (3) –I would avoid this overlap by doing this:
If you follow my above suggestion, make sure that your jump between 00:45:787 (3,1) – isn’t too big then. fixed both overlap and jump
00:45:787 (3,1) –Make sure the jump between those two sliders and these two sliders: 00:47:633 (4,1) – and 00:49:479 (4,1) - are similar. oh did they similar
00:51:787 (1) –Quite a big jump considering there’s not such a big pause between 00:51:325 (3,1) – like there is between 00:51:787 (1,2) – fixed
00:56:171 (2,3,4,5,6) –Perhaps try placing these circles into a sort of star-shape or something like that. Like this:
I may think of that but I like the current placement, it's one of my favorite jump patterns
Just my own silly opinion though
01:34:248 (1) –Quite a big jump when there’s not much of a pause between 01:34:017 (4,1) – fixed here, omg how the hell I did these jumps...
02:10:941 (6) –Stack the (6) on 02:10:479 (4) - ? That’ll avoid the overlapping and look better structured. I tried to make the overlap look prettier, but it just doesn't make any sense to stack, this will give too much emphasis to this circle, and it doesn't need that much
02:13:479 (2,4) –This overlapping looks a bit weird to me. So unnecessary. Why not just stack there or avoid the overlapping completely? because this slider need more emphasis, and having the same ds by stacking isn't the point anyway I did something myself

I noticed that this diff has a lot of jumps and some of them are quite challenging. I think some of them are even bigger than the Insane’s. You should be careful not to go too overboard with jumps in Hard especially when the pauses between objects are very short. Jumps in Hard are definitely needed, but then they should be placed in places where the music really suggests jumps and where they make sense. I did point out a few that I thought were too much, but there are more. It’s also important to make sure that the jumps are consistent where the beats or music are the same. I try

Overall, the Easy looks fine; just a few little things that can be improved. I feel the Normal’s difficulty has to be raised a bit since the Hard has quite a lot of jumps and a few triples, thus the gap between those two diffs can be filled more. The jumps in Hard may have to be eased down a bit and just a few little things can be fixed in Insane. I think they're fine *-* but okay, I remapped the Normal because it was too hard, and now too easy, I want to die srsly

Good Luck~!

Thank you so much, you helped a lot, even though I'm very sad

Lumael

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Topic Starter

Lumael 2015-09-19T19:02:05+00:00

Nerfed some jumps on the non-kiai part, I think I'm getting there ;w;

Mekki

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Joined November 2014

Mekki 2015-09-20T01:47:20+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
M4M~

Collab Normal:
I’m specifically going to name places where more objects can be added so that the difficulty of the diff can be boosted up a little bit. Just to fix the gap between Normal and Hard a bit more.
00:53:633 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) –I see you followed the vocals in the kiai time though, so I suggest you thus do the same in the previous part of this diff. I didn't understand very well what you've said here.
01:31:248 (2,5) –Please avoid this overlap. It’s unnecessary and looks untidy. I prefer keeping the 'overlap'.
01:33:325 (6,1) –Perhaps try a rhythm like this instead? Ok.
Picture
01:39:787 (3) –I would follow the vocals instead by placing that slider here: 01:39:556 – Ok.
02:31:710 (3,4,5,6) –This rhythm is very complicated imo. Especially since you left 02:32:171 – empty. Perhaps try a rhythm like this instead: Ok.
Picture
02:55:479 (3,4,5,6) –I would rather follow the vocals here and not just place single circles. The difficulty of this diff has to be pushed up just a little bit more and also because you didn’t do that anywhere else in the diff. Ok.
03:36:094 (3) –Just make sure this slider is not placed too high. It isn't.

Good Luck~! Thanks.

Collab Normal

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Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lumael 2015-09-20T02:17:44+00:00

Updated!

bnbnbnbnbnbnbn need bn mod

Synpoo

616 posts

Joined August 2013

Synpoo 2015-09-20T22:41:41+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Synpoo’s Insane:
I’m just going to point out a few things that bothered me:
00:05:633 (1) –Why not place a jump here? You did it everywhere else. ok
I guess the first thing is some of the random placement of the circles. I usually try placing them more in a certain pattern so they look organised. I guess an example of a place where your placement can improve is here: 01:14:864 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - But that’s just my own mapping style. I just thought I’ll put this suggestion out there. 01:14:864 (5,6,7,8) - forms a star(ish) shape, and 01:15:787 (1,2,3,4) - is a zigzag pattern. there's nothing unorganized or "random" about my patterns, most of it is zigzags (either vertically or horizontally and some stars [intentionally unperfect because perfect stars look ugly and don't play well to me])
01:06:441 (7) –It was really hard to see this circle while I played because of where it’s placed. I highly suggest you try to make it more visible. this is perfectly readable, at the AR the map is at nothing is covering it by the time it appears
For some reason the placement of these circles: 01:09:671 (6) - 01:18:902 (6) – confused me too. This one: 00:59:056 (7) – was okay though. erm ok
01:29:517 (1,2,3) –These confused me a lot. I think it’s because of the big jump and the short sliders that look like circles. the sliders are necessary to represent the sound since it is definitely 1/8 so circles don't work here, it's fine to read too with the NC here
02:10:017 (4) –This circle is grazing the HP bar a bit. Lower it a bit. umm no its not

sry ive been busy with school lately

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Lumael

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Topic Starter

Lumael 2015-09-20T23:33:05+00:00

Updated!
~Added the old Normal diff renamed to Advanced to reduce the gap between Normal and Hard

EDIT: I will stop a bit this map and I'll focus on others since there are many things to fix here and I'm not the kind of guy who has a lot of patience.

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-10-11T00:56:19+00:00

Continue this map, this is a masterpiece *-*

Video

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Joined June 2014

Video 2015-10-25T01:59:44+00:00

Random modding

Easy
• Couldn't find anything wrong with it, very nice looking map!

Normal
• Again, couldn't find anything worth mentioning!

Advanced
• Move note at 00:54:094 to here

• Extend the slider at 01:09:325 to 1:09:627
• Extend the slider at 01:13:017 to 1:13:364
• Add note at 03:337:364 between the two sliders
• Add note at 03:42:902 between the note and slider

Hard
• Absolutely beautiful the way it is!

Synpoo's Insane
• Only thing I could maybe suggest is make the slider at 02:53:171 at a 1/12 scale and add a slider velocity multiplier of 1.60

That's all I could come up with, most of them are suggestions, all the maps look great otherwise! ^.^

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Hestia- wrote:

Leorda wrote:

General

Easy

Normal

AlejandroMedia wrote:

Normal

-Mo- wrote:

-Mo- wrote:

Lumael wrote:

-Mo- wrote:

Lumael wrote:

Collab Normal

UndeadCapulet wrote:

Collab Normal

UndeadCapulet wrote:

Collab Normal

KASUM1 wrote:

Lumael wrote:

-Nya- wrote:

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