Milan- wrote:

beginner
-00:31:280 (1,1) - this http://puu.sh/kfcXe/3d2bcb6196.jpg is better. Using different snapping is already hard at this level, so having a decent gap is easier to play.
-01:09:480 (3) - i think it plays better if you start it from 01:09:330 - instead. So there's no much 3/2 gaps and also it'll follow the melody
-01:31:980 (3) - sounds bit weird that you map this when there's a break afterwards for the same rhythm xd. maybe remove it and move the start of the break at 01:32:280 - ? i want to keep the note sound at 01:32:280, also i think it doesn't mess the map
-01:37:980 (2) - i'd remove this note, so you just map the strong instruments. Also cuz it technically should be here 01:37:830 - , which doesnt play either so ya
-01:46:080 (4,1) - make it the same as 01:07:680 (4,1,2,3) - , sounds bad as is tbh xd (with the same suggestion as before)k, i also arranged the next rythm too
-01:51:180 (3) - it's actually mapping nothing. I'd remove it and add a repeat to 01:50:430 (2) -
-01:55:080 (1) - could u make it more a bit more simply, something like http://puu.sh/kfcUf/8e364c366d.jpg is better cuz you can see the slider-slide more clearly.

Standard
-od 4 seems enough imo
-00:22:830 - maybe add a note here? feels kinda empty, using a 1/2 slider works too i tried but because the previous slider 00:22:080 (4) is quite long, it was quite hard to catch the right timing of 00:22:830
-01:36:480 (2) - 1/2 slider sounds way better than 1/1 tbh
-01:11:730 (2) - you may want to fix the ds here

Hyper
-00:09:330 (4) - i prefer if you use 2 circles just so both strong beats are clickable as they should be
-00:30:930 (3,1) - cuz (3) technically lands on nothing, i think you should do something like this instead http://puu.sh/khBTd/4b219eeea3.jpg Makes more sense musically
-01:01:080 (1,2,3,4) - i'd try to not use more than 3 circles at this bpm and level. but up to you i guess

Another
-00:30:930 (6) - u may want to copy the pattern in "wish". as you have more time between the notes no i like current pattern. it's not too hard and not too easy.
-00:50:280 (4) - i'd remove this note. The music stop here 00:50:130 (3) - for a sec, and also it'd give the player a little break. Same here 01:32:130 (6) - removed the first one. and about the second one, i removed 1/4 slider and single circle to make 1/2 repeat slider to cover piano sound at 01:32:130.
-00:50:955 (5) - sounds pretty much overmap to me. There's nothing really worth to map here. Also you didn't even map the stream in "Wish", which sounds better for some reason, you could do the same here and no map the stream at all. i didn't noticed it ty
-01:35:580 (3) - i'd make it a triple actually. The transition between the slow and this fast verse doesnt feel too nice as is, and using a triple would improve it i think

Wish
-hp+1?
-01:07:680 (1,2,3,4) - distance is kinda weird, cuz there's nothing in (3) [you could remove this note btw], but then (4) has a lot of emphasis, so using a triangle doesnt seem to be the right option here. actually, i didn't purpose to emphasize (4), my purpose was just separating combo between 01:06:930~01:07:980 and 01:08:130~ . i changed NC and reduce the distance so it doesn't seem like emphasizing-jump anymore.
-01:21:480 (1) - can you do the red nodes less sharp? so the shape doesnt make the mouse stop there. It used to be a common thing but uh it's discouraged now for some reason i think it's appropriate slider shape with this guitar sound. can you tell me more detail reason ;w;
-01:32:130 (6) - same as another i didn't remove the note because of piano sound

Uhm the amount of 1/4 in some section in Another is bugging me. Mostly these sections 00:13:380 - 00:46:530 - and 01:22:380 - 01:31:830 - . You used almost the same amount of 1/4 that you used in Wish. I think you should nerf some triples and streams, espcially streams. Try comparing what you have in Hyper and Wish and see what you can do. The rest is mostly suggestions lmao. fixed some 1/4 what i can remove, and other 1/4s you mentioned are changed into slider instead of stream.

Let me know what you think.no comments are fixed :3

appleeaterx wrote:

Hi Crier!
from in-game request :3

:idea: General

* Incorrect offset. The timing itself is fine, but the downbeat isn't aligned properly. You must change the offset of all difficulties to -120. You shouldn't have to resnap anything, but double-check. moved offset and check AI mods
* I'm wondering why you didn't have a spinner at 01:13:080 - in the lower difficulties. I don't really see a problem with adding them and I recommend having the drain time (somewhat similar, that extra break in BASIC is an exception) consistent throughout the mapset since it doesn't contain GDs.added spinner at NOVICE diff but i put extra break time at BASIC. i want to keep this diff very easy

NOVICE

* 00:31:280 (1) - Actually, this is the only difficulty where you used 1/2 instead of 1/3, you even used 1/3 in the BASIC difficulty. Since there's no real sound present at 1/2, I highly recommend using 1/3 instead. Use the BASIC difficulty as a reference.

ADVANCED

* 00:27:780 (2,3) - Not too fond of this overlap here with most of the slider covered... oh well, it might just be me. ww changed not to overlap

EXHAUST

* 00:46:230 (1,1) - It was quite confusing to me to have this as 1/2. The way it looks, especially with that single new combo made me think it was 3/4. You do 3/4 things like 01:03:180 (1,1) - 00:41:430 (4,1) - quite often, so I hope you can make it more clear that this one in particular is 1/2. If you want to keep this 1/2, try something like this 00:43:830 (2,1) - . If you want to make this 3/4, add SV change? sure. i did it at first upload, and fixed by previous mods. but, i think it's right

Milan- will rebubble first, so call him again.
Then you may call me for qualify :3

Really amazing work! thanks