wmfchris wrote:

Filesize: 23996kb
I'm not sure but too large?
^quite large not too large when considered nearly 5 mins play with video I think it reasonable and I've already mute the video sound...

[Insane]
0:25:077 (3) left 1 grid
0:35:155 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) different from (3,4)
1:24:491 (6,7) left 1 grid?
2:24:139 (4) left 4 grids?
2:27:889 (6,7,8,...) uneven spacing?
3:13:827 (6) left 1 grid
4:12:420 (6,7,8) uneven spacing, so as 4:13:358 (1,2,3)

[hard]
0:45:350 (10,11) left 1 grid
1:04:217 (5) down 1 grid
1:27:889 (4,5) right 1 grid
... there are two different spacing -> each of them has its own rule for spacing so no need to worry
1)1:36:561 (1,2,3,4) -- which is 1 grid larger than
2)1:42:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
maybe need to re-snap a bit...?

[Insane]
0:25:077 (3) left 1 grid ok
0:35:155 (2,3,4) spacing of (2,3) different from (3,4) new combo at (4) then
1:24:491 (6,7) left 1 grid? ok
2:24:139 (4) left 4 grids? no thanks :3
2:27:889 (6,7,8,...) uneven spacing? fix
3:13:827 (6) left 1 grid ok
4:12:420 (6,7,8) uneven spacing, so as 4:13:358 (1,2,3) use the (1,2,3) at 04:13:358 as the main core to fix other 2 (personal mistake :3)

Lissette wrote:

termerys' Insane
00:59:530 (3) - move to prev blue tick (if u do fix spacing)
00:59:530 (3) - new combo
02:32:108 (1) - remove new combo
02:49:803 - add note?
04:08:437 - useless timing section
04:09:843 - same

Hard
04:49:921 (1) - remove new combo
04:50:155 (2) - new combo

Bima-chan's Easy
03:45:937 (1,2,3) - i dont like this part, sound better like this......

04:30:468 (1) - remove new combo
04:31:405 (2) - new combo
the combos in this diff are a bit random, try to not put a new combo in the middle of a sentence ><

I dont mod taiko ><

Nice song and map vin~~ ^^b

Star!

James wrote:

just be friends~ all we got to do just be friends~

edit: add the video maker's name in the tags. forgot who it was... pretty sure that video is fanmade.

Alace wrote:

color=#BF0000]<termerys' Insane>[/color]
00:24:608 (?) - add a note ?
00:36:561 (?) - ^
00:43:124 (12) - new combo and delete next new combo
02:05:624 (1) - add finish on the start ?
02:16:874 (1) - make this part louder
02:27:890 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part sounds abit noisy, maybe delete some notes to make it sounding better
02:48:866 (2,3,4) - good job here, maybe use lower volumes for this (40~45%)
03:43:124 (8)~03:52:968 (1) - from this part, you really do a good job XD, usually we start a new combo from long white tick,like those pic
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27353 new combo will follow the BGM section
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27354 so you can really do good slider jumps here (i guess you planed to do this)
if you feel like to change this new combo thing, it may take you some time
03:53:671 (1,2,3) - super jumps looool ><

James wrote:

13m and 15m... looks like Clare's love & roll...
I wouldn't recommend having 2 hardest diffs with almost the same score..
and insane.. is using big circles also... tsk tsk tsk

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
AR+1 ?
00:23:905 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe fix the spacing, it`s abit confusing for noobs maybe

<Hard>
01:17:694 (1) - start from red tick XD
03:49:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - super stack wwwww

<termerys' Insane>
00:24:608 (?) - add a note ?
00:36:561 (?) - ^
00:43:124 (12) - new combo and delete next new combo
02:05:624 (1) - add finish on the start ?
02:16:874 (1) - make this part louder
02:27:890 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this part sounds abit noisy, maybe delete some notes to make it sounding better
02:48:866 (2,3,4) - good job here, maybe use lower volumes for this (40~45%)
03:43:124 (8)~03:52:968 (1) - from this part, you really do a good job XD, usually we start a new combo from long white tick,like those pic
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27353 new combo will follow the BGM section
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27354 so you can really do good slider jumps here (i guess you planed to do this)
if you feel like to change this new combo thing, it may take you some time
03:53:671 (1,2,3) - super jumps looool

<Hitsounds>
I think mormal/soft/custom claps all fit the song well
Kiai part:normal and custom fit (i like normalclap more,custom one doesn`t sound so sweet to my ears
03:36~03:48:soft clap really fits XD
i suggest termerys can do some works to hitsounds

<diff spread>
Hard=13.8M insane=15.7M
I think a middle diff which has 350~450 objects is good, Hard and insane is almost the same hard to me (well they are not really hard)

this mapset is really nicely playable and sounds good, i am just too picky here because i like this song so much
feel free to refuse change stuffs that i point out, i will go back to techeck

Alace wrote:

vincerio
maybe you should use the .osu termerys posting ??

Alace wrote:

<Hard>
04:11:249 (2) - clap is gone XD

<Normal>
04:22:967 (4) - clap XD

<Easy>
02:02:812 (2) - clap ?
02:59:530 (3,4) - clap

Almost there