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DeletedUser_7370134

DeletedUser_7370134 2017-03-24T07:47:55+00:00

good luck
take my star

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2017-03-24T08:16:29+00:00

Nanashima Asami wrote:
good luck
take my star

Thanks!

_kotachi_

567 posts

Joined July 2014

_kotachi_ 2017-03-24T13:52:15+00:00

hi from game chat
thzzさんの譜面すっごいイイです...modするのﾑｽﾞｶｼｲ...（）

thzz's utakata

00:27:505 (1,2,3,4) - ここどんどんSVを小さくしていくのはどうですか？
00:52:172 (5) - これくらい緩やかなスライダーでもいいと思います→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7642356
01:14:672 (3,4,1,2) - ここの距離の差が少し急だと思ったので01:14:672 (3,4) - を広げて01:15:005 (1,2) - を縮める形はどうでしょうか　こんな感じで→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7642370
01:15:505 (1) - ctrl+Gのほうがいいと思います
01:16:838 (1) - x205 y272辺りどうでしょうか

初見プレイでフルコンした...　すごくいい譜面でした！
good luck!

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2017-03-24T14:10:06+00:00

_kotachi_ wrote:
hi from game chat
thzzさんの譜面すっごいイイです...modするのﾑｽﾞｶｼｲ...（）おほほ

thzz's utakata
00:27:505 (1,2,3,4) - ここどんどんSVを小さくしていくのはどうですか？ okです
00:52:172 (5) - これくらい緩やかなスライダーでもいいと思います→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7642356 割とお気に入りのデザイン……一旦keep
01:14:672 (3,4,1,2) - ここの距離の差が少し急だと思ったので01:14:672 (3,4) - を広げて01:15:005 (1,2) - を縮める形はどうでしょうか　こんな感じで→https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7642370 一帯を調整
01:15:505 (1) - ctrl+Gのほうがいいと思いますここは1/4の延長線上をクリックさせたい
01:16:838 (1) - x205 y272辺りどうでしょうかないす
初見プレイでフルコンした...　すごくいい譜面でした！うまい、ありがとうございます！
good luck!

mod ありがと～

http://puu.sh/uWTsi/0b8560fdc7.osu

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2017-03-24T14:12:57+00:00

_kotachi_さん二度目のmod あっどうもです。

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-03-25T10:58:56+00:00

as req

[thzz]
00:26:005 (5) - even this sound got note, 00:25:172 (2) - i think it would be better if here also has note.
00:30:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:32:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - are this kind of jumps have logic?
00:35:338 (3) - 00:32:172 (2) - clickable vs unclickable. I think make it same would be better for consistency.
00:49:338 (4,5,6,7) - DS is low, considering vocal is higher than 00:48:005 (5,6,7,8,9) - this kind. especially 00:49:338 (4,5) - here
00:52:838 (1) - S slider can be improved i think?
01:06:505 (1,2) -
01:18:505 (3,1) - stack if u want?
01:22:172 (1,2) - quite bad for read, how about just 1/2 slider from 01:22:505 - like before?
01:38:005 - same

good luck!

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2017-03-25T11:23:39+00:00

Left wrote:
as req

[thzz]
00:26:005 (5) - even this sound got note, 00:25:172 (2) - i think it would be better if here also has note. ??? sry i can't understand what you'd like to say (maybe misscopied somethig)
00:30:172 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:32:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - are this kind of jumps have logic? logic that doesn't have logic
00:35:338 (3) - 00:32:172 (2) - clickable vs unclickable. I think make it same would be better for consistency. you mean like "AAAC" from 00:28:838 - . my thinking is "AABC"
00:49:338 (4,5,6,7) - DS is low, considering vocal is higher than 00:48:005 (5,6,7,8,9) - this kind. especially 00:49:338 (4,5) - here fix~
00:52:838 (1) - S slider can be improved i think? S for blancket
01:06:505 (1,2) - ?
01:18:505 (3,1) - stack if u want? yea
01:22:172 (1,2) - quite bad for read, how about just 1/2 slider from 01:22:505 - like before? okay
01:38:005 - same ???

good luck!

thanks for mod!

http://puu.sh/uXPPU/0b80676667.osu

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-03-28T07:51:12+00:00

[thzz]

00:41:505 (1,2) - well i'd set the soft custom to 2 instead of 3, since it's a soft sound, and not even that loud though

[insane]

00:02:256 (2) - i don't think using a slider fits really well on the song, since the red tick has a lower tone of the note than the white tick. would set 2 notes there with a triangle pattern, but up to u though xd
00:41:838 (2) - ok clap doesn't suit rly well too. it doesn't have any drum notes here
00:41:505 (1,2) - same reason about the custom hitsound like above
00:56:838 (1,3) - woah, the overlap there
01:28:838 (1,3) - fix the stack

[nanaka san XD]

00:03:006 (1,2) - blanket pls
00:05:506 (2,3) - fix the blanket
00:19:172 (5,1) - ^
00:42:172 (1,3) - ^
01:18:505 (2,3) - ^

gl

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2017-03-28T12:41:19+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[insane]
00:02:256 (2) - i don't think using a slider fits really well on the song, since the red tick has a lower tone of the note than the white tick. would set 2 notes there with a triangle pattern, but up to u though xd
00:41:838 (2) - ok clap doesn't suit rly well too. it doesn't have any drum notes here
00:41:505 (1,2) - same reason about the custom hitsound like above
00:56:838 (1,3) - woah, the overlap there
01:28:838 (1,3) - fix the stack

gl

I changed everything!

Thank you lit120

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2017-03-31T12:21:42+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[thzz]
00:41:505 (1,2) - well i'd set the soft custom to 2 instead of 3, since it's a soft sound, and not even that loud though i wanna make it louder gradually, sry~

thank you~~

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2017-04-07T20:35:18+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[nanaka san XD]
00:03:006 (1,2) - blanket pls
00:05:506 (2,3) - fix the blanket
00:19:172 (5,1) - ^
00:42:172 (1,3) - ^
01:18:505 (2,3) - ^
gl

だいたい直しました、Thx,llit!

@やさい、soundファイル構成変わってたみたいなんで無音のsliderSide1を追加しといてください

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Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2017-04-23T08:03:49+00:00

my angel rem o.o

Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap2.wav
normal-hitwhistle2.wav
00:15:506 - is this red line necessary? there's no bpm change

thzz
missing video
00:15:006 (4) - can you avoid the overlap on the slider head and tail
00:20:172 (4,5) - spacing isn't good for a 3/4 rhythm imo
00:34:838 (2,3) - 1 slider? like 00:32:172 (2) - , idk why it's different here

insane
00:07:506 (2,3,4) - use the same DS as 00:09:506 (1,2,3) -
00:16:672 - should be a circle here i think
00:22:838 (3,4) - 00:24:172 (5,6) - it would be better to use the same spacing for 3/4 sliders
00:41:505 (1,2) - the reverse arrows are totally covered, not a good pattern

00:59:171 (2) - clap?
01:02:172 - make it clickable? this beat is very strong
01:05:172 (2,5) - the overlap is pretty ugly

it's not a 1st ranked map so my standard is high

try to improve it and find someone else for ranking, good luck~

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2017-04-23T09:16:03+00:00

Karen wrote:
my angel rem o.o

Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap2.wav thanks
normal-hitwhistle2.wav ^
00:15:506 - is this red line necessary? there's no bpm change delete

insane
00:07:506 (2,3,4) - use the same DS as 00:09:506 (1,2,3) -
00:16:672 - should be a circle here i think
00:22:838 (3,4) - 00:24:172 (5,6) - it would be better to use the same spacing for 3/4 sliders
00:41:505 (1,2) - the reverse arrows are totally covered, not a good pattern
00:59:171 (2) - clap?
01:02:172 - make it clickable? this beat is very strong
01:05:172 (2,5) - the overlap is pretty ugly

All fixed

it's not a 1st ranked map so my standard is high
try to improve it and find someone else for ranking, good luck~

Thank you Karen!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2017-04-24T13:48:53+00:00

ok lets finish this (acutally i want to mod this map last month but cuz im lazy so im late to mod it xd)

easy
00:11:006 (2) - unnecessary circle here cause theres no instrument nor vocal to emphatized with this circle
00:27:505 (1) - i think this slider's shape could be nicer
00:35:172 (2) - same as first point
00:35:505 (2,3) - 1/1 reverse slider its enough here imo to emphatize the vocal here (same as you did at 00:32:838 (4) ) cause at 00:36:505 - theres no vocal to emphatized with the slidertail
00:45:838 (2) - move to x:124 y:31 for better flow between (1,2,3)
00:50:172 (3) - ^ x:169 y:377
00:55:505 (1,2,1,2) - hmm the rhythm here its not really good (i mean its not really fit with the music).you can improve the rhythm with 3/2 reverse slider at 00:55:505 - and at 00:56:838 - *note : 3/2 reverse slider its like at 01:00:838 (1) -
01:06:172 (3) - ctrl j and move to 399,281 for better pattern
01:16:838 (3,4) - hmm the straight slider ruined the pattern and flow.maybe use curve slider and blanket it with (4) ?
01:31:505 (1) - move down a bit for better flow (the linear flow here is not really good imo)
01:38:172 (1) - same as above,move down a bit for better flow

normal
00:27:505 - you emphatize the guitar here on easy diff but you dont emphatize it on normal? :thinking:
00:32:838 (2) - meh,the shape makes the pattern a bit ugly.just use straight slider here for better
00:34:172 (1) - hmm long slider here for vocal same as you did on previous pattern
00:35:505 (3) - same as easy
01:11:172 (3) - move down a bit for better flow between (2,3,4)

not bad

hard
00:38:838 (4,5) - considering to adds whistle on the sliderhead for emphatize the vocal
01:14:505 (3) - clap for drum
01:25:505 (2) - cut this slider into a 1/2 reverse slider for emphatize the vocal well
01:27:505 (1,2) - 4 circles for emphatize the vocal and drum more

insane
00:22:172 (1,2,3) - the overlap looks ugly for me
00:24:838 (1,1) - stacked for better pattern and emphatize the cymbal better
00:27:505 (1,2,1,2) - try to add jump here for represent the guitar well
00:28:838 until 00:39:505 - the ds make looks the pattern ugly for insane diff (dont follow the ds here.i mean increase the ds at least.this is insane diff not normal nor easy.
00:40:672 - circle here cause piano
00:51:505 (1,2,3) - can you try another pattern pls? cause the current on its kinda boring imo
01:00:838 (1,2) - this linear flow its not really good imo (try to move circle (1) somewhere to avoid the linear flow)
01:01:505 (1,2) - ^
01:16:838 (1,2,3,4) - bad flow imo xd
01:36:838 (1,1) - same as before
01:37:838 (4,4) - stack on the sliderhead not the slidertail for better flow

hmmm this map need some polishing imo ~
gl ~

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2017-04-25T14:24:22+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
ok lets finish this (acutally i want to mod this map last month but cuz im lazy so im late to mod it xd)

easy
00:11:006 (2) - unnecessary circle here cause theres no instrument nor vocal to emphatized with this circle fixed
00:27:505 (1) - i think this slider's shape could be nicer no problem
00:35:172 (2) - same as first point fixed
00:35:505 (2,3) - 1/1 reverse slider its enough here imo to emphatize the vocal here (same as you did at 00:32:838 (4) ) cause at 00:36:505 - theres no vocal to emphatized with the slidertail It is hard to change
00:45:838 (2) - move to x:124 y:31 for better flow between (1,2,3) changed a bit
00:50:172 (3) - ^ x:169 y:377 It will exceed the frame
00:55:505 (1,2,1,2) - hmm the rhythm here its not really good (i mean its not really fit with the music).you can improve the rhythm with 3/2 reverse slider at 00:55:505 - and at 00:56:838 - *note : 3/2 reverse slider its like at 01:00:838 (1) - no!
01:06:172 (3) - ctrl j and move to 399,281 for better pattern no change
01:16:838 (3,4) - hmm the straight slider ruined the pattern and flow.maybe use curve slider and blanket it with (4) ? fixed?
01:31:505 (1) - move down a bit for better flow (the linear flow here is not really good imo) 01:32:838 (3) - Can not be placed
01:38:172 (1) - same as above,move down a bit for better flow fixed

normal
00:27:505 - you emphatize the guitar here on easy diff but you dont emphatize it on normal? :thinking: ok
00:32:838 (2) - meh,the shape makes the pattern a bit ugly.just use straight slider here for better ok
00:34:172 (1) - hmm long slider here for vocal same as you did on previous pattern I am picking up the piano
00:35:505 (3) - same as easy no problem
01:11:172 (3) - move down a bit for better flow between (2,3,4) no

not bad

hard
00:38:838 (4,5) - considering to adds whistle on the sliderhead for emphatize the vocal
01:14:505 (3) - clap for drum
01:25:505 (2) - cut this slider into a 1/2 reverse slider for emphatize the vocal well
01:27:505 (1,2) - 4 circles for emphatize the vocal and drum more

insane
00:22:172 (1,2,3) - the overlap looks ugly for me fixed
00:24:838 (1,1) - stacked for better pattern and emphatize the cymbal better This is my style
00:27:505 (1,2,1,2) - try to add jump here for represent the guitar well no
00:28:838 until 00:39:505 - the ds make looks the pattern ugly for insane diff (dont follow the ds here.i mean increase the ds at least.this is insane diff not normal nor easy. There is no need to widen Distance in a quiet part
00:40:672 - circle here cause piano I challenged it but it is hard to play
00:51:505 (1,2,3) - can you try another pattern pls? cause the current on its kinda boring imo no
01:00:838 (1,2) - this linear flow its not really good imo (try to move circle (1) somewhere to avoid the linear flow) I do not think so
01:01:505 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:16:838 (1,2,3,4) - bad flow imo xd I do not think so
01:36:838 (1,1) - same as before same
01:37:838 (4,4) - stack on the sliderhead not the slidertail for better flow It's better now

hmmm this map need some polishing imo ~
gl ~

Thank you for the second mod

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2017-05-15T04:38:05+00:00

Karen wrote:
thzz
missing video oops (thx 714)
00:15:006 (4) - can you avoid the overlap on the slider head and tail　this shape is imagination of cherry blossom, so i think it's fine and the best. (but polished a bit)
00:20:172 (4,5) - spacing isn't good for a 3/4 rhythm imo not necessary to do that imo cuz of 01:32:172 (4,5) - and some same kind of distances of 3/4 rhythm,
00:34:838 (2,3) - 1 slider? like 00:32:172 (2) - , idk why it's different here i think placement should be becoming intenser gradually in this section considering the piano

thx karen~

http://puu.sh/vQpql/f4774bffc5.osu

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2017-05-25T04:15:01+00:00

~~aaa placeholder for 2kds~~

Sorry for late

Easy
00:26:172 (1) - unreasonable to use a red anchor,and you can improve the flow here 00:25:505 (2,1) - by putting the second slider down a bit. Also no need to NC this
00:36:172 (3,1) - doesn't look good
00:59:172 - 01:00:505 - why do you make these empty

01:38:172 (1) - also why NC

Normal
Next time change a sv and ds setting cuz it looks really bad with this kind of overlaps 00:01:506 (1,2,3) - 00:19:172 (5,1,2,3) - etc very small
00:26:172 (1) - remove NC
00:28:838 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - they are too simplified. Since you are following vocal onwards (00:35:505 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ),
i suggest you follow music for the previous part as well. for example 00:34:172 (1,2,3) - change to 3/2 slider etc
01:04:172 - maybe add sth here
01:26:005 (6,1) - stack?
01:28:672 (4,1) - ds thing
DS between objects are bad in this diff...the overlap is too small.

Hard
00:55:505 (1,2) - spacing is unreasonably big compared to 00:56:838 (1,2,3) -

Insane
01:02:005 (4,1) - increase spacing...emphasis the downbeat
01:16:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc this actually look bad cuz the weird overlap for 01:16:838 (1,5) -
01:26:005 (7,1) - increase spacing for emphasis
This diff can be polished a bit, doesn't look good in aesthetics

thzz
00:57:672 (5,6,7,8,9) - maybe same spacing as previous stream
01:20:838 (1,2) - shape looks weird to me :w

I think there's still a lot to improve, good luck on this

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2017-05-30T13:03:08+00:00

My Angel Azusa wrote:
~~aaa placeholder for 2kds~~

Sorry for late

Easy
00:26:172 (1) - unreasonable to use a red anchor,and you can improve the flow here 00:25:505 (2,1) - by putting the second slider down a bit. Also no need to NC this
00:36:172 (3,1) - doesn't look good
00:59:172 - 01:00:505 - why do you make these empty
01:38:172 (1) - also why NC

Normal
Next time change a sv and ds setting cuz it looks really bad with this kind of overlaps 00:01:506 (1,2,3) - 00:19:172 (5,1,2,3) - etc very small
00:26:172 (1) - remove NC
00:28:838 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - they are too simplified. Since you are following vocal onwards (00:35:505 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ),
i suggest you follow music for the previous part as well. for example 00:34:172 (1,2,3) - change to 3/2 slider etc
01:04:172 - maybe add sth here
01:26:005 (6,1) - stack?
01:28:672 (4,1) - ds thing
DS between objects are bad in this diff...the overlap is too small.

Insane
01:02:005 (4,1) - increase spacing...emphasis the downbeat
01:16:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc this actually look bad cuz the weird overlap for 01:16:838 (1,5) -
01:26:005 (7,1) - increase spacing for emphasis
This diff can be polished a bit, doesn't look good in aesthetics

I think there's still a lot to improve, good luck on this

All fix

Thank you My Angel Azusa!

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2017-09-06T14:19:32+00:00

one hundred kds www

irc mod

21:53 Underdogs: hello w
21:54 Yasaija 714: hi~
21:55 *Underdogs is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1244943 Ayumi. - Hanagoyomi short version [Easy]]
21:55 Underdogs: wanna irc mod?
21:55 Underdogs: i think forum mod might take too long
21:55 Yasaija 714: ok~
21:55 Underdogs: ok uh
21:56 Underdogs: 00:01:506 (1,2) - is it ok to leave the rhythm as is? Newbies listen to vocal, rather than music
21:56 Underdogs: maybe add a circle in between would be better I guess
21:57 Yasaija 714: ok
21:57 Yasaija 714: fix
21:57 Underdogs: 00:28:838 (1,2) - make these the same?
21:58 Underdogs: From structure, I do not think they are pleasing to watch
21:59 Yasaija 714: fix
21:59 Underdogs: if you fixed that as well
22:00 Underdogs: If possible, you might make  00:31:505 (3) -  a straight slider, so it would look intuitive?
22:00 Underdogs: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9027764
22:00 Yasaija 714: ok
22:01 Underdogs: hmm
22:01 Underdogs: I think that is it.
22:02 Underdogs: But if I might be honest, if you dont mind, I think this difficulty might need a better structure?
22:03 Underdogs: It can be ranked, although it would be a little difficult to see BN actually liking this diff.
22:03 Underdogs: but you once had a ranked set. So I think I will trust on this difficulty
22:03 Yasaija 714: hmm...
22:04 Yasaija 714: However, since this map is a map before being ranked, it can not be trusted
22:04 Yasaija 714: Do you think Remap is correct?
22:04 Underdogs: I am not sure 
22:05 Underdogs: i think your current diff can still be done
22:05 Yasaija 714: Is that so...
22:05 Underdogs: yes
22:05 Underdogs: let us move on to the next difficulty
22:05 *Underdogs is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1244945 Ayumi. - Hanagoyomi short version [Normal]]
22:05 Yasaija 714: ok
22:08 Underdogs: wow
22:08 Underdogs: so good
22:08 Underdogs: I can't actually mod it, as it would break the structure you already build
22:09 Yasaija 714: Thank you~ XD
22:09 Underdogs: let's check your Insane
22:09 Yasaija 714: ok
22:10 Underdogs: 00:02:506 (3,4) -  not sure why pause here. At least add a slider on 00:03:006 - 
22:11 Underdogs: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9027833
22:11 Underdogs: 00:05:006 (6) - also, I think 1/2 slider fits better here?
22:11 Underdogs: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9027836
22:13 Yasaija 714: I think I will try two circles instead of a slider
22:13 Underdogs: yes
22:13 Underdogs: although I do prefer slider, since that part is calm
22:15 Underdogs: 00:47:005 (5) - triplet then add a slider works better as a rhythm here
22:17 Yasaija 714: ok
22:17 Underdogs: hmm, I cannot find much. And I think that's it.
22:17 Underdogs: Great work, I like the set
22:18 Yasaija 714: thanks XD
22:18 Underdogs: keep up the great work :)

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2017-09-16T12:28:35+00:00

sahuang wrote:
thzz
00:57:672 (5,6,7,8,9) - maybe same spacing as previous stream previous is only the drums, here has the piano.
01:20:838 (1,2) - shape looks weird to me :w (2) is blanket for (1)'s tail tho...

thx for check!

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2017-09-17T05:59:22+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
ok lets finish this (acutally i want to mod this map last month but cuz im lazy so im late to mod it xd)

hard
00:38:838 (4,5) - considering to adds whistle on the sliderhead for emphatize the vocal
not need.
01:14:505 (3) - clap for drum
^
01:25:505 (2) - cut this slider into a 1/2 reverse slider for emphatize the vocal well
Since 01:24:838 (1,2,3,4) - are four circles, 1/1 is appropriate.
01:27:505 (1,2) - 4 circles for emphatize the vocal and drum more
It would be better to give a feeling of speed with a slider than the circle stacked.
gl ~

sahuang wrote:
~~aaa placeholder for 2kds~~

Hard
00:55:505 (1,2) - spacing is unreasonably big compared to 00:56:838 (1,2,3) -
slider+slider slider+circle,Because it is different pattern it will not be compared.(At least that's what I think.)
I think there's still a lot to improve, good luck on this

thank you for modding :3

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-09-29T04:51:56+00:00

sorry for delay ;(

Easy

00:55:505 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the long chain of 1/1 sliders is a bit boring and doesn't show the variety of music imo, I suggest https://puu.sh/xLvwJ/b599060eaf.png for 00:55:505 (1,2,1,2) - , 2/1 slider = a line of lyric so I think it fits the song well

Normal

00:28:838 - missing some whistles in the section
overall okay, but you should try to make rhythm denser to bridge the diff gap to hard, now it seems kinda questionable for me. for example, 00:26:172 (5) - is same rhythm as easy, while hard is using much harder rhythm and spacing

7ka's Hard

01:25:505 (1) - change to 1/2 rhythm for the vocal? different from 01:26:172 (1,2) -

Insane

00:10:506 - 00:11:506 - whistle too?
01:12:838 (1) - 3/4 slider instead? fits vocal
01:16:422 - you follow other vocal syllables on the blue tick so this should be mapped too i guess?
01:32:172 (3) - spacing's kinda low for an insane dif, i try to modify it a bit while keeping your slider shape design -> https://puu.sh/xLx3r/98787205c0.png

thzz's utakata

01:13:505 (1,2,1,2) - the vocal pitch is going down so it doesn't deserve so much spacing as 01:08:838 (1,2,1,2) - 01:14:838 (4,1,2) -
01:16:838 (1,2,1,2) - similar point as above, 01:19:505 (1,2,1,2) - is obviously much more intense
01:27:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's painful (at least for me) to play such spacing without any build up
well what a spacing mod

[]
mapset quality is generally okay I'd say, but since there are two ranked versions for the song already and I don't see many new ideas in this one, I don't feel like nominating in this case.. hope the mod helps some tho!

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2017-09-30T15:48:44+00:00

Garden wrote:
sorry for delay ;(

Easy
00:55:505 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - the long chain of 1/1 sliders is a bit boring and doesn't show the variety of music imo, I suggest https://puu.sh/xLvwJ/b599060eaf.png for 00:55:505 (1,2,1,2) - , 2/1 slider = a line of lyric so I think it fits the song well
Normal
00:28:838 - missing some whistles in the section
overall okay, but you should try to make rhythm denser to bridge the diff gap to hard, now it seems kinda questionable for me. for example, 00:26:172 (5) - is same rhythm as easy, while hard is using much harder rhythm and spacing
Insane
00:10:506 - 00:11:506 - whistle too?
01:12:838 (1) - 3/4 slider instead? fits vocal
01:16:422 - you follow other vocal syllables on the blue tick so this should be mapped too i guess?
01:32:172 (3) - spacing's kinda low for an insane dif, i try to modify it a bit while keeping your slider shape design -> https://puu.sh/xLx3r/98787205c0.png
ok All fixed

[]
mapset quality is generally okay I'd say, but since there are two ranked versions for the song already and I don't see many new ideas in this one, I don't feel like nominating in this case.. hope the mod helps some tho! I understand.

Thank you Garden!

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

kunka 2017-10-02T13:58:21+00:00

hey!

irc

22:16 kunka: easy
22:17 kunka: 01:38:172 (3) - これ1/1とcircleのほうが良い気がする。やっぱ最後のfinishは叩きたい
22:17 kunka: normal
22:18 kunka: 00:05:006 (5) - 1/2sliderでvocal followとか良さげ
22:19 kunka: 00:12:256 - 音とvocalあるのでadd circle
22:20 kunka: 00:16:506 (1) - 音あるけど個人的に必要ないかな
22:25 kunka: 00:56:838 (4) - vocal取るならkeepだけど try this https://puu.sh/xObAe.jpg シンバルとスネアが取れる
22:26 kunka: 01:25:505 (5,6,1) - これむじい。01:16:838 (4,5,6) - みたいのほうが良い
22:29 kunka: 01:28:672 (4) - これは微妙、、beatとフレーズが変わる節目なんで01:28:838 (1) - を強調したいから(4)は消すぽい
22:32 kunka: 01:35:838 (5) - これは好み。1/2sliderとcircleにする。代わりに01:35:338 (3) - を消すぽい？なぜなら01:36:172 - はdown beatなんでcircleのほうがリズム作りやすい
22:33 kunka: 01:38:172 (1) - これも01:16:838 (4,5,6) - こういうほうが良い
22:33 kunka: insane
22:34 kunka: 00:12:256 - normalと同じ
22:39 kunka: 00:24:838 (1,1,2) - time lineは1/1、1/2つう感じなのに間隔が同じで不自然。00:25:005 - 音あるのでnote追加。強い音は00:24:838 (1,3,4) - なので00:25:005 - は1/2sliderでguitar follow
22:39 kunka: https://puu.sh/xOc50.jpg こんな感じ
22:41 kunka: 00:55:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - 個人的に☆配置希望
22:45 kunka: 00:56:172 (5) - vocalなんでけど音は00:56:338 - から連打ってる。　https://puu.sh/xOcfY.jpg
22:46 kunka: 00:57:338 (3) - 1/2とcircle。スネア音を叩きたい
22:49 kunka: 01:25:172 (3,4) - streamが良さげ
22:50 kunka: 01:36:838 (1,1,2) - 上と同じ
22:51 kunka: 01:38:838 (6) - 自分なら01:37:505 (3) - の頭にstackぽい
22:53 kunka: 01:00:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 書き忘れ。微妙に形崩れてる。01:01:088 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - を直線上に出来ないかしら？
22:54 kunka: 以上
22:55 Yasaija 714: -全部直しました
22:55 kunka: はやｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ

粘ってこ～！！b(｀･ω･´)d

DeletedUser_423548

Topic Starter

DeletedUser_423548 2017-10-02T14:04:49+00:00

kunka wrote:
hey!
irc
22:16 kunka: easy
22:17 kunka: 01:38:172 (3) - これ1/1とcircleのほうが良い気がする。やっぱ最後のfinishは叩きたい
22:17 kunka: normal
22:18 kunka: 00:05:006 (5) - 1/2sliderでvocal followとか良さげ
22:19 kunka: 00:12:256 - 音とvocalあるのでadd circle
22:20 kunka: 00:16:506 (1) - 音あるけど個人的に必要ないかな
22:25 kunka: 00:56:838 (4) - vocal取るならkeepだけど try this https://puu.sh/xObAe.jpg シンバルとスネアが取れる
22:26 kunka: 01:25:505 (5,6,1) - これむじい。01:16:838 (4,5,6) - みたいのほうが良い
22:29 kunka: 01:28:672 (4) - これは微妙、、beatとフレーズが変わる節目なんで01:28:838 (1) - を強調したいから(4)は消すぽい
22:32 kunka: 01:35:838 (5) - これは好み。1/2sliderとcircleにする。代わりに01:35:338 (3) - を消すぽい？なぜなら01:36:172 - はdown beatなんでcircleのほうがリズム作りやすい
22:33 kunka: 01:38:172 (1) - これも01:16:838 (4,5,6) - こういうほうが良い
22:33 kunka: insane
22:34 kunka: 00:12:256 - normalと同じ
22:39 kunka: 00:24:838 (1,1,2) - time lineは1/1、1/2つう感じなのに間隔が同じで不自然。00:25:005 - 音あるのでnote追加。強い音は00:24:838 (1,3,4) - なので00:25:005 - は1/2sliderでguitar follow
22:39 kunka: https://puu.sh/xOc50.jpg こんな感じ
22:41 kunka: 00:55:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - 個人的に☆配置希望
22:45 kunka: 00:56:172 (5) - vocalなんでけど音は00:56:338 - から連打ってる。　https://puu.sh/xOcfY.jpg
22:46 kunka: 00:57:338 (3) - 1/2とcircle。スネア音を叩きたい
22:49 kunka: 01:25:172 (3,4) - streamが良さげ
22:50 kunka: 01:36:838 (1,1,2) - 上と同じ
22:51 kunka: 01:38:838 (6) - 自分なら01:37:505 (3) - の頭にstackぽい
22:53 kunka: 01:00:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 書き忘れ。微妙に形崩れてる。01:01:088 (2,3,4,2,3,4) - を直線上に出来ないかしら？
22:54 kunka: 以上
粘ってこ～！！b(｀･ω･´)d

All fix

"BN同士みんな似た様な思想を持ってるわけじゃないから聞いて見る価値はあるんじゃない"
2017-10-02 21:47 kunka: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/351841　諦めんの？
2017-10-02 21:48 Yasaija 714: Gardenの最後の文でかなり心揺らされました；；
2017-10-02 21:48 Yasaija 714: 一応
2017-10-02 21:48 kunka: 見た感じ、恐らく、もうちと弄った後で有力なＢＮでいけそうな希ガス

あきらめようと思ったら応援してくれるというあきらめきれない状況。
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Nanashima Asami wrote:

_kotachi_ wrote:

Left wrote:

lit120 wrote:

lit120 wrote:

lit120 wrote:

Karen wrote:

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Karen wrote:

My Angel Azusa wrote:

sahuang wrote:

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

sahuang wrote:

Garden wrote:

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