y u c a wrote:

hi DRS(・∀・)/

General

cant fix green line
resnap please

Easy

why some notes are 音量50% and not add hitsound?
maybe you should add SC1's clap

mjw will fix them

Normal

00:04:252 (5) - new combo
00:06:252 (1) - remove new combo
00:08:502 (4) - new combo
00:32:002 (T) - please use SC1 slider noisy here D:

All right fixed

add more SC1 clap its sound good for me~

you are right add sc1 clap hitsound in it~

Hard

00:31:252 (2,3) - add clap (音量20~25%?)
01:00:242 (6) - remove finish and add clap
01:01:742 (5) - add clap
01:04:242 (1) - add finish
01:19:242 (3) - how about this

SPOILER

01:46:482 (7,1,2) - remove finish
01:48:232 (8) - add finish
01:56:232 (4) - ^
02:44:232 (3) - ^
02:50:482 (9) - add clap
02:51:732 (4) - ^

all fixed
加~油~(・∀・)ﾉ

Turkey wrote:

大哥 给你改了下，鸟电脑老过热休眠 改个图真累

1. PreviewTime --> 46488
2. 00:22:252 (5) - 头whistle
3. 00:29:252 (3) - 最后whistle
4. 00:38:252 (3) - 尾whistle 或许..
5. 01:32:242 (1) - whistle
6. 01:34:242 (1) - 头whistle
7. 01:36:242 (4) - ^
8. 01:51:732 (1) - RNC , and NC for (2)
9. 02:12:482 (1) - 这个spinner没太多意义感觉, 另外2个难度都没=w=
10. 02:33:232 (1) - RNC , 02:35:232 (3) - NC , 02:36:232 (1) - RNC
11. 02:59:732 (4) - 这个slider很尴尬呀 人声放慢的 我觉得转盘应该提前到长白线 ,然后直接在02:59:732 add note

1. 00:11:002 (1,2) - 节奏略难
2. 00:23:752 (5) - 尾whistle
3. 00:31:752 (4) - 30%刚好 ._.
4. 00:48:742 (6) - NC , 00:49:742 (1) - RNC , 00:51:242 (5) - NC
5. 01:01:242 (5) - NC
6. 01:31:242 (6) - NC , 01:32:242 (1) - RNC , 01:34:242 (3) - NC
7. 01:36:242 (7) - NC
8. 02:31:482 (8) - 节奏略诡异..
9. 02:34:482 (1) - RNC

1. 关于NC... 我也苦手,估计是对称型的比较难处理一些吧...
2. 00:19:502 (3) - Overmapped ?
3. 00:27:752 (6) - 前几个都是流线型的这个突然直线了 而且距离近. 开ds放在00:28:752 (1) 的上方 然后搞弯它?
4. 00:52:992 (2,3,4,5) - 破坏感觉的1/4slider + note , DT的话就比较明显 同00:19:502 (3)
5. 01:47:482 (2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped ? 不过这个我觉得还行. 只是,唯一一处的stream显得有点突兀...
6. 01:54:732 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - vol. up 不明显不给力
7. 01:59:482 (5) - 尾去掉Finish, 01:59:982 (6) - 尾Finish
8. 02:02:232 (5) - 头Finish

S h i o n wrote:

:( 不好意思拖了好几天

Request from my modding queue :

Easy

1. PreviewTime --> 46488
2. 00:22:252 (5) - 头whistle
3. 00:29:252 (3) - 最后whistle
4. 00:38:252 (3) - 尾whistle 或许..
5. 01:32:242 (1) - whistle
6. 01:34:242 (1) - 头whistle
7. 01:36:242 (4) - ^
8. 01:51:732 (1) - RNC , and NC for (2)
9. 02:12:482 (1) - 这个spinner没太多意义感觉, 另外2个难度都没=w=
10. 02:33:232 (1) - RNC , 02:35:232 (3) - NC , 02:36:232 (1) - RNC
11. 02:59:732 (4) - 这个slider很尴尬呀 人声放慢的 我觉得转盘应该提前到长白线 ,然后直接在02:59:732 add note

等这货 富士康实习回来 再改 XXD

Normal

1. 00:11:002 (1,2) - 节奏略难 但是很慢 目押!
2. 00:23:752 (5) - 尾whistle orz
3. 00:31:752 (4) - 30%刚好 ._. 好
4. 00:48:742 (6) - NC , 00:49:742 (1) - RNC , 00:51:242 (5) - NC
5. 01:01:242 (5) - NC
6. 01:31:242 (6) - NC , 01:32:242 (1) - RNC , 01:34:242 (3) - NC
7. 01:36:242 (7) - NC
8. 02:31:482 (8) - 节奏略诡异.. orz 我觉得很好 normal 虽平淡 但也需要惊喜
9. 02:34:482 (1) - RNC

Fixed


Hard

1. 关于NC... 我也苦手,估计是对称型的比较难处理一些吧...
2. 00:19:502 (3) - Overmapped ? ok
3. 00:27:752 (6) - 前几个都是流线型的这个突然直线了 而且距离近. 开ds放在00:28:752 (1) 的上方 然后搞弯它? ok
4. 00:52:992 (2,3,4,5) - 破坏感觉的1/4slider + note , DT的话就比较明显 同00:19:502 (3) 好
5. 01:47:482 (2,3,4,5,6) - Overmapped ? 不过这个我觉得还行. 只是,唯一一处的stream显得有点突兀... 就这样吧 orz
6. 01:54:732 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - vol. up 不明显不给力 好
7. 01:59:482 (5) - 尾去掉Finish, 01:59:982 (6) - 尾Finish 好
8. 02:02:232 (5) - 头Finish 好

That's all .

L_P wrote:

wa你好，sorry for the late reply
A nice map, nothing to criticize, so only suggestion.
Hard:
我建議前面的時候就放小小聲的音效，大約10-20左右，然後在00:07:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 時才逐漸增大？ 好主意 我试试~
00:34:752 (2,3,4) - 這前後都沒有note,然後下一段一個空隙都沒有，有點不balance.建議加note 不好加 歌曲开头 还是慢点好
00:48:242 (1,2,3,4) - 懶惰啊？都沒跟vocal, 也不見得太鼓好打。。。我的风格
00:50:742 (1,2,3) - 連續finish會有點累，建議note2刪finish 好
01:15:742 (3,4) - 爲什麽不用slider? 要把调子拉上去 就不对应排版了
01:47:482 (2,3,4,5) - 做一點弧度吧？
歌曲後面有一段不短的結尾，刪去一點？中文歌timing难 剪了就要重新测offset 表示伤不起 orz

normal
真是不錯的normal.
01:06:742 (1,2,3) - 這裡跟前面的節奏不大一樣啊。。。。变化下好 XD
01:33:242 (2) - 不好看 改了
01:46:732 (1) - ^ 改了
01:52:232 (4) - 不想要repeat的感覺 改了
normal感覺notes都在中間，下次注意一下 好

華語歌，乾淨圖，star了吧

mjw5150 wrote:

ring酱~❤
都改完了(大概
另外 难度名就改成这个吧 你懂的↓

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. PreviewTime不一致: [Easy] : 47252 [Hard] : 46488 [Normal] : 46488, 这个要用一样的

I made them all at 46488

Easy

1. 01:39:742 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end), 这里中间改了红线的用折返slider看来是不行, 换成slider-note或者note-slider吧
2. 01:18:242 (2) - Oh, no, custom soft clap(应该是normal hitsound吧)和soft finish一起加听起来糟糕透了, 还是去掉clap吧
3. 03:01:232 (1) - 我看normal和hard都是03:04:232结束的spinner, 不统一下?

Fixed them all

Normal

1. 00:31:252 (3) - 音量感觉略小, 用50%左右如何?
2. 01:04:242 (3) - 只用finish感觉更好
3. 01:06:242 (6) - 去掉clap吧, 听着很杂
4. 01:16:242 (4) - ^
5. 01:18:242 (2) - 只用finish?
6. 01:19:742 (5) - 头上加clap
7. 01:36:742 (1) - 加clap
8. 01:37:492 (2) - ^
9. 01:38:492 (1) - 尾巴上加, ^
10. 01:40:232 (5) - 嗯...这个听起来还蛮不错, 前面几个clap混着听着就不太舒服, 虽然不知道为什么 :S 大概是高潮部分鼓声比较明显了所以听不太出来异样
11. 02:08:982 (1) - 红线折返听着有一点奇怪, 可以试试红线后面蓝线折返回来然后删掉note(2)
12. 02:31:482 (8) - ^
13. 02:35:482 (5) - 尾巴加clap
14. 02:59:732 (5,1) - 感觉没对, slider在03:00:732结束然后spinner在03:01:232开始感觉更好
15. 03:04:232 (x) - 这么温柔的结尾你还弄个喷泉干嘛:S

ALL fixed
总觉得 音频输出设备不同 感觉也就不一样 同样的音效 在家里 和学校 以及 耳机和扬声器 的效果也有不同
总之我以耳机为准 谢谢音效指导 ~

Hard

1. 01:19:242 (x) - 意料之外的1.5xBPM, 而且也不符合音乐的感觉
2. 02:57:982 (x) - ^ 这两个地方让我坚持一下 我觉得 情绪有所上扬 1.5x 不违和 orz
3. 00:31:252 (3) - 还是建议50%音量
4. 01:10:242 (4) - 这里clap听着不好听
5. 01:14:242 (8) - ^
6. 03:04:232 (x) - 这么温柔的结尾你还弄个喷泉干嘛:S
   
   Other else are fixed and made Kiai times on [Normal] [Hard] and [EASY] are same.

Hard is fun
有回复后找我recheck吧

1. You are using slider tick 0.5 in hard and normal. It's unrankable, use 1 instead.

1. Hitsounds are too loud in my opinion, it's annoying. Use 45~50% instead of 60% please, It would be more pleasant to the ear °A°

1. 00:45:252 - Add a whistle at the beginning ?

KuraiPettan wrote:

General :

1. You are using slider tick 0.5 in hard and normal. It's unrankable, use 1 instead.

Easy :

1. Hitsounds are too loud in my opinion, it's annoying. Use 45~50% instead of 60% please, It would be more pleasant to the ear °A°

Normal :

1. 00:45:252 - Add a whistle at the beginning ?

That's all, very good mapset, call me back and will be glad to bubble it :3

Breeze wrote:

嗷, 已经泡了啊...那我就不急着check了(slap
还有很多老泡等着看呢;w;

1. 01:22:569 (x) - What happened to this break? It seems you've dragged it to here but you didn't do so in other 2 diffs, so maybe you should redo this break once
2. 02:25:590 (x) - ^
3. 01:40:257 (2) - Slider tail, I guess you're missing a finish here

S h i o n wrote:

BG在哭 和主题不符 应该UNRANK

S h i o n wrote:

I'm so sad.

BG在哭 和主题不符 应该UNRANK

S h i o n wrote:

I'm so sad.

BG在哭 和主题不符 应该UNRANK

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:)
thank you guys

maybe BG I should change this one

SPOILER

S h i o n wrote:

I'm so sad.

BG在哭 和主题不符 应该UNRANK

CDFA wrote:

EVERYTHING I MOD IS SUDDENLY GETTING RANKED.

I'm kinda scared.