Hi aidil ! From my queue !
General:
SV !!! I testplayed the song and in the SV I had to stop because it feels reaally strange. I suggest to check the ranked 5k diff because Frim uses the same style of SV in this same song. Probably would be as cool as that mapset is with the SV !
Hitsounds: I suggest to add some "finishes" style HS for some triples uses to make this even cooler
Pattern: Avoid using so many 1/1 jacks imo, like this :00:26:088 (26088|2,26260|2,26431|2,26603|2) -
Overall, really impressive job !
Mod:
00:15:117 (15117|1) - Missing note here?
00:17:003 (17003|0,17003|1,17003|2) - Why quad? I think triple is enought
00:20:431 (20431|0,20946|2) - Both triples maybe?
00:22:488 (22488|1,22488|0,22488|2,22488|3) - Why quad? x.x. Double is enought, triple might be too much
00:23:860 (23860|1,23860|2) - Missing HS
00:26:088 (26088|2,26260|2,26431|2,26603|2) - 4 notes jack mmhh.. Try to movee some.
00:27:974 (27974|1) - This should be a double, change hitsound to soft-W
00:31:574 (31574|2,31746|2,31917|2) - I dont like this 3 notes jack, 00:31:746 (31746|2) - moving this to 1 should work
00:32:260 (32260|2,32431|2,32603|2) - ^
00:35:688 (35688|2,35860|2,36031|2) - ^
00:26:088 (26088|2,26260|2,26431|2,26603|2) -
00:35:860 (35860|1,35860|2) - Why only double? Triple instead imo (following same sound with triples so far)
00:37:060 (37060|2,37231|1) - Double and triple
00:42:546 (42546|2,42717|3) - Ctrl+G ? Works better for the pattern and avoid jack
00:50:088 (50088|1) - Wrong HS, change to hihat
00:51:974 (51974|2,52146|2,52317|2) - Again the triple jack, try to figure it out by yourself about this ones, I will try to point them out as many as I can but probably I will miss some.
00:53:517 (53517|2,53688|2,53860|2) - ^
00:53:860 (53860|1,54031|2,54203|3,54374|2) - I think this ones should be a 1-2-3-4 stair LN's and then 00:54:546 (54546|3) - in spot 3.
00:55:403 (55403|0) - I dont like this LN, delete maybe? and do the same stair with 00:54:888 (54888|1,55231|1) - as previously pointed?
00:58:146 (58146|3,58146|0) - Maybe triple? (finish sound)
01:04:146 (64146|0,64146|1,64146|2,64146|3) - Triple or 01:03:631 (63631|2,63631|0,63631|3) - Quad. Decide
01:09:460 (69460|2) - Delete, no need for quad
01:22:488 (82488|1,82660|1,82831|1,83003|1) - Quadjaaack
01:24:717 (84717|1,85060|3) - Add Hihat?
01:25:746 (85746|1) - Add HS, soft-W
01:26:774 (86774|1) - ^
01:26:946 (86946|3,87031|3) - I reaaaally hate this jack, its up to you because you used quads for finish sounds but I suggest to change them to triples or at least do something with this. The jack doesnt fit the song at all
01:37:403 (97403|2,97574|2,97746|2) - Triplejaack
01:40:660 (100660|2,100831|2,101003|2,101688|2,101860|2,102031|2) - ^
01:43:060 (103060|1,103060|0) - Why not triple?
01:33:288 (93288|0) - Why not double?
02:13:574 (133574|3) - Quad?
02:15:974 (135974|2,136146|2,136317|2,137003|2,137174|2,137346|2) - DIE TRIPLEJACKS!
02:21:117 (141117|2,141288|2,141460|2) - ^ DENIEEED (what its wrong with me)
02:26:946 (146946|1,146946|2) - Triple here
02:28:317 (148317|0) - Why no HS?
02:51:803 (171803|2,171974|2,172146|2) - pewpewpew
02:54:546 (174546|1,174717|1,174888|1) - x-x. But in this kind of sections it is less important
Anyway, I think you figured out how you should look for the map, try to follow the things that I pointed out for the rest of the map. Good luck ! I want to see this one ranked because of the song and your effort ! Leaving a Star here <3
