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Iceskulls
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 มกราคม 2559 at 15:05:11

Artist: Lia
Title: Bravely You
Source: Charlotte
Tags: シャーロット opening full version
BPM: 150
Filesize: 8343kb
Play Time: 05:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Desire (3.91 stars, 1044 notes)


Download: Lia - Bravely You
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Bearizm
Mod 4 Mod? From your userpage xd

might consider to lower HP to 6 because of the slow part in the middle

00:46:048 (2) - this plays terribly imo, and pretty hard to anticipate that it's spaced 1/4. just do something like this or something similar to this. http://puu.sh/k3OP4.png

01:00:748 (3) - there's nothing here

01:05:248 (2) - you can curve it like this so it plays smoother/flowy http://puu.sh/k3OUM.png

01:55:748 (8) - remove the drum clap on the tail.

01:57:248 (4) - should just change this to that double pattern to stay consistent. the circle and 1/4 slider slider ones.

02:03:648 (4) - ^

02:06:848 (6,7) - you did it here so why not :P

02:33:548 (3) - nothing here

02:36:048 (1) - this ALMOST hit the HP bar, i suggest you to lower it down a bit. ruins map aesthetics tbh

02:43:048 (2) - forgot whistle on tail?

03:11:648 (2) - just use clap here

03:38:048 (1) - whistle on tail and 03:38:248 (2) - whistle on both. sounds better imo

03:44:848 (1) - finish?

03:53:248 (3) - i don't think this plays well because kick sliders can be startling for new players, and the fact that this circle is placed right just below it can be even more unexpected. make it like this instead? http://puu.sh/k3PvP.png to emphasize the jump in 03:53:448 (4) - as well

04:02:248 (5) - celsius pls.. check the ai mod xd

04:40:848 (1) - finish

04:47:048 (1) - remove finish on head, and try to make this a 1/2 slider, because skipping downbeat isn't worth it.

04:53:648 (1) - finish

04:57:448 (3,4) - this is extremely random and out of place in the map, because you were following the vocals the entire time and now you're following the guitar.

05:13:548 (4) - this is also out of place because from 05:08:048 - to the end, there's no triples. keep the rhythm 1/2 for this part.

that's it :D Good luck! sorry if the mods bad, I'm still pretty new at modding.

Here's my map :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/353203
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yay full ver
also that bg is love <3
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

Bearizm wrote:

Mod 4 Mod? From your userpage xd

might consider to lower HP to 6 because of the slow part in the middle :arrow:ya

00:46:048 (2) - this plays terribly imo, and pretty hard to anticipate that it's spaced 1/4. just do something like this or something similar to this. http://puu.sh/k3OP4.png :arrow:k

01:00:748 (3) - there's nothing here :arrow:mmm I can hear a low cymbal sound there that sound like 01:00:648 -

01:05:248 (2) - you can curve it like this so it plays smoother/flowy http://puu.sh/k3OUM.png :arrow:straight kinda fit the tone of music here

01:55:748 (8) - remove the drum clap on the tail. :arrow:o

01:57:248 (4) - should just change this to that double pattern to stay consistent. the circle and 1/4 slider slider ones. :arrow:The way the beat here sound somthing like a sudden beat to beat here make it fit for 1/4 slider imo

02:03:648 (4) - ^ :arrow:same

02:06:848 (6,7) - you did it here so why not :P:arrow:but those 2 beat above don't have 1/2 beat sound ;_;

02:33:548 (3) - nothing here :arrow:similiar to 01:00:748 (3) -

02:36:048 (1) - this ALMOST hit the HP bar, i suggest you to lower it down a bit. ruins map aesthetics tbh :arrow:mfw aesthetics

02:43:048 (2) - forgot whistle on tail? :arrow:oop

03:11:648 (2) - just use clap here :arrow::arrow:k

03:38:048 (1) - whistle on tail and 03:38:248 (2) - whistle on both. sounds better imo :arrow:don't like to focus hitsound much on the tail of 1/4 slider lol I think hitsound only the head make 1/4 play really better than the one that also hitsound at tail

03:44:848 (1) - finish? :arrow:k

03:53:248 (3) - i don't think this plays well because kick sliders can be startling for new players, and the fact that this circle is placed right just below it can be even more unexpected. make it like this instead? http://puu.sh/k3PvP.png to emphasize the jump in 03:53:448 (4) - as well :arrow:nah , it not that hard imo the 1/4 slider is pretty short there tho you can still easily click the next circle imo the slider leneiency is also taking an effect here too imo

04:02:248 (5) - celsius pls.. check the ai mod xd :arrow:what's wrong with this , I don't see aimod mention this note

04:40:848 (1) - finish :arrow:k

04:47:048 (1) - remove finish on head, and try to make this a 1/2 slider, because skipping downbeat isn't worth it. :arrow:I don't think so , downbeat sound pretty low here imo so it can be skip here and focus on 1/2 beat before downbeat instead

04:53:648 (1) - finish :arrow:k

04:57:448 (3,4) - this is extremely random and out of place in the map, because you were following the vocals the entire time and now you're following the guitar. :arrow:I follow the instrument but the vocal happen to be there as well lol

05:13:548 (4) - this is also out of place because from 05:08:048 - to the end, there's no triples. keep the rhythm 1/2 for this part. :arrow:mmm will think about this

that's it :D Good luck! sorry if the mods bad, I'm still pretty new at modding.

Here's my map :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/353203
thanks for the mods :)
will get to your map like tomorrow xdddddXDXDX
Crimmi
Thank you for applying at the #modreqsea. Feel free to ignore or reject any parts of your map that you deem unfit and vice versa.


General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)


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  1. Clear~

Desire



  1. This gonna be me nitpicking at the map a bit but meh.
  1. 00:34:048 (4) - This looks better stacked, don't you think?
  2. 00:35:648 (5) - ^
  3. 00:43:048 (2) - Maybe move this to x:357|y:303?
  4. 00:47:648 (3) - Just like 00:34:048 (4).
  5. 01:03:248 (1) - Maybe stack this on (3)?
  6. 01:26:648 (5) - Stack this on (6)?
  7. 01:32:548 (5,6) - Move (5) to x:150|y:183 and then (6) to x:180|y:181.
  8. 01:35:848 (3) - Maybe move this to x:408|y:306?
  9. 01:55:648 (7) - Stack this on (8)?
  10. 02:06:848 (6) - ^
  11. 02:21:248 (7) - ^
  12. 02:23:448 (2) - Maybe move this to x:356|y:271, to have an equal spacing and still keep your wide jumps.
  13. 03:53:248 (3) - I really don't like how this note is placed there, which requires a jerky kind of movement.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

Crimmi wrote:

Thank you for applying at the #modreqsea. Feel free to ignore or reject any parts of your map that you deem unfit and vice versa.


General (Metadata, Timing, etc.)


_________________________________________________________



  1. Clear~

Desire



  1. This gonna be me nitpicking at the map a bit but meh.
  1. 00:34:048 (4) - This looks better stacked, don't you think? :arrow:no , I don't think so
  2. 00:35:648 (5) - ^ :arrow:same
  3. 00:43:048 (2) - Maybe move this to x:357|y:303? :arrow:current place mak flow a bit good imo
  4. 00:47:648 (3) - Just like 00:34:048 (4). :arrow:same , current looks a bit better imo
  5. 01:03:248 (1) - Maybe stack this on (3)? :arrow:not much different here lol
  6. 01:26:648 (5) - Stack this on (6)? :arrow:no
  7. 01:32:548 (5,6) - Move (5) to x:150|y:183 and then (6) to x:180|y:181. :arrow:k
  8. 01:35:848 (3) - Maybe move this to x:408|y:306? :arrow:I prefer current one more
  9. 01:55:648 (7) - Stack this on (8)? :arrow:no
  10. 02:06:848 (6) - ^ :arrow:same
  11. 02:21:248 (7) - ^ :arrow:same lol
  12. 02:23:448 (2) - Maybe move this to x:356|y:271, to have an equal spacing and still keep your wide jumps. :arrow:k
  13. 03:53:248 (3) - I really don't like how this note is placed there, which requires a jerky kind of movement. :arrow:it doesn't play that bad tbh I like how it like you play 1/4 slider then you suddenly move cursor back which really fit the music here

Good luck~
thanks for the mods :)
sodarose
Hallo! M4M ?
From your userpage
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/339400
My mod

[Desire]
00:13:348 Note?
00:19:748 ^
01:14:848 (2,4) - Bad Blanket
01:52:848 (1,2) - Blanket ?
02:15:048 (5) - Delete?
04:03:248 (4,5,6,7) - Bad blanket
04:20:848 (4,1) - Blanket?
04:57:448 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/k5rrg/af8bba345e.png
05:20:848 (1) - Whistle?

Good songs and good map
Satr :)
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

sodarose wrote:

Hallo! M4M ?
From your userpage
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/339400
My mod

[Desire]
00:13:348 Note? :arrow:no , sound not right
00:19:748 ^ :arrow:same
01:14:848 (2,4) - Bad Blanket :arrow:looks fine
01:52:848 (1,2) - Blanket ? :arrow:not intend to do blanket
02:15:048 (5) - Delete? :arrow:nolol
04:03:248 (4,5,6,7) - Bad blanket :arrow:fixed a bit
04:20:848 (4,1) - Blanket? :arrow:fixed a bit
04:57:448 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/k5rrg/af8bba345e.png :arrow:mm will consider this
05:20:848 (1) - Whistle? :arrow:doesn't sound right

Good songs and good map
Satr :)
thanks for the mods :)
Ntasuto
Hiiii :) M4M from userpage


General:
  1. Not necessary . Change bg name to "bg.jpg" ? :P



Desire
  1. 00:07:248 (1,2) - could center the 2 sliders together :P
  2. 00:13:648 (1) - Slider should be 1/4 longer . Ending @ 00:13:948 - just like 00:07:248 (1,2)
  3. 00:17:648 (3,4) - fix blanket
  4. 00:21:648 (1) - ^ Slider should be 1/4 longer like @ 00:13:648 (1)
  5. 00:26:448 (1,2,3) - i don't know if you tried to but you could align these 3 ,the (2)(3) slider head and the note (using a helping slider).
  6. 00:41:248 - i think this beat should be clickable coz its a strong beat + on downbeat. As i hear the part here 00:40:848 to 00:41:248 the three notes you have sound like they should be together(be similarly treated ) . I suggest you replace 00:41:048 (2) - with 2 notes instead. or you can do the same thing as you did here: 02:13:648 (1,2) but i suggest 3xnotes.
  7. 00:42:448 (1,2,3,4) - i don't know but this pattern feel rly weird to me :/ must be the flow. cant rly think any way to tweak it so it doesn't change completely.
  8. 00:43:648 (4,1) - in case you don't make changes to the suggestion above, fix this blanket :)
  9. 00:46:048 (2) - i recommend changing it with 2 notes for the sole purpose of having it fit with the vocals. sound a little awkward as it is now imo coz. @ 00:46:248 - you hear the vocals and feels like you stick em with 00:46:048 which doesn't actually fit. should be "paired" with 00:46:448 (3) .
  10. 00:57:448 (3) - 00:57:648 - the part here should be clickable. downbeat, strong beat.
  11. 01:01:248 (5) - remove clap. 3 claps in a row like that its too much and sound very harsh and annoying to hear :/ the last 2 sound good by themselves .
  12. 01:23:648 (4) - make the slider point down instead for better flow
  13. 01:30:048 (6) - add finish on head and remove from this slider's head 01:30:448 (1) so it matches this : 01:27:248 (1,2,3,4) -
  14. 01:52:848 (1,2) - can be blanketed better
  15. 02:30:248 (3) - same as 00:57:448 (3) strong beat at downbeat
  16. 02:34:048 (5) - same as 01:01:248 (5)
  17. 03:32:048 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - this looks like a NC mayhem ! I seriously suggest you change you combo colors to match the spacing and be clear and readable for the player as you did here: 03:20:048 (2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this looks nice.
  18. 04:12:648 (3) - same as 00:57:448 (3) and 02:30:248 (3) strong beat at downbeat.
  19. 04:57:448 (3,4) - o.O are these 2 sliders a mistake? sounds wrong to me or you mapped something that its non hearable at human level :/

that's from me :) gl with rank !

my map that needs your mod :)https://osu.ppy.sh/s/170167
Topic Starter
Iceskulls

Ntasuto wrote:

Hiiii :) M4M from userpage


General:
  1. Not necessary . Change bg name to "bg.jpg" ? :P:arrow:no lol



Desire
  1. 00:07:248 (1,2) - could center the 2 sliders together :P:arrow:current looks fine
  2. 00:13:648 (1) - Slider should be 1/4 longer . Ending @ 00:13:948 - just like 00:07:248 (1,2) :arrow:I know but somehow it sound weird to me
  3. 00:17:648 (3,4) - fix blanket :arrow:fixed a bit
  4. 00:21:648 (1) - ^ Slider should be 1/4 longer like @ 00:13:648 (1) :arrow:same reason as 00:13:648 (1) -
  5. 00:26:448 (1,2,3) - i don't know if you tried to but you could align these 3 ,the (2)(3) slider head and the note (using a helping slider). :arrow:but I want to maintain spacing too
  6. 00:41:248 - i think this beat should be clickable coz its a strong beat + on downbeat. As i hear the part here 00:40:848 to 00:41:248 the three notes you have sound like they should be together(be similarly treated ) . I suggest you replace 00:41:048 (2) - with 2 notes instead. or you can do the same thing as you did here: 02:13:648 (1,2) but i suggest 3xnotes. :arrow:I think the way I map snare for slidertail make the transition here 00:41:048 (2,3) - feel a bit pretty good
  7. 00:42:448 (1,2,3,4) - i don't know but this pattern feel rly weird to me :/ must be the flow. cant rly think any way to tweak it so it doesn't change completely. :arrow:it's just some a bit linear flow where you just follow the slider there to hit the note , anyways fixed (3) a bit
  8. 00:43:648 (4,1) - in case you don't make changes to the suggestion above, fix this blanket :):arrow:sadsad
  9. 00:46:048 (2) - i recommend changing it with 2 notes for the sole purpose of having it fit with the vocals. sound a little awkward as it is now imo coz. @ 00:46:248 - you hear the vocals and feels like you stick em with 00:46:048 which doesn't actually fit. should be "paired" with 00:46:448 (3) . :arrow:try to follow instrument
  10. 00:57:448 (3) - 00:57:648 - the part here should be clickable. downbeat, strong beat. :arrow:gonna get some variation by change to follow vocal a bit
  11. 01:01:248 (5) - remove clap. 3 claps in a row like that its too much and sound very harsh and annoying to hear :/ the last 2 sound good by themselves . :arrow:k
  12. 01:23:648 (4) - make the slider point down instead for better flow :arrow:I don't think so lol
  13. 01:30:048 (6) - add finish on head and remove from this slider's head 01:30:448 (1) so it matches this : 01:27:248 (1,2,3,4) - :arrow:wh finish sound pretty weird there imo
  14. 01:52:848 (1,2) - can be blanketed better :arrow:not intentional blanket
  15. 02:30:248 (3) - same as 00:57:448 (3) strong beat at downbeat :arrow:same reason
  16. 02:34:048 (5) - same as 01:01:248 (5) :arrow:same
  17. 03:32:048 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - this looks like a NC mayhem ! I seriously suggest you change you combo colors to match the spacing and be clear and readable for the player as you did here: 03:20:048 (2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this looks nice. :arrow:fixed nc here 03:32:448 - the nc here indicate the changing in spacing too
  18. 04:12:648 (3) - same as 00:57:448 (3) and 02:30:248 (3) strong beat at downbeat. :arrow:same
  19. 04:57:448 (3,4) - o.O are these 2 sliders a mistake? sounds wrong to me or you mapped something that its non hearable at human level :/ :arrow:guitar sound mfw

that's from me :) gl with rank !

my map that needs your mod :)https://osu.ppy.sh/s/170167
thanks for the mods :)
Rirakusu
Hi~ M4M from userpage.

Really nice map, mostly nitpicking. I'm not sure if I'm going against your style so tell me if I did :)

Mod comes first.

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00:11:648 (5,1) - This blanket needs some quick revising. The end of slider doesn't blanket well.
00:12:448 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow kinda broken by the slider, perhaps moving it a little bit lower to make a smooth curving flow? Or you can keep it to make the beat feels stronger.
00:34:048 (4,5) - This is strange when compared to 00:35:648 (5,6) , which flows better. I think you can copy the latter and rotate it till it fits your needs. In the picture I rotated 00:34:048 (4,5) till it looks similar to the latter and place them next to each other, this is the difference.
00:47:648 (3,4) - I don't know what to say but it looks strange for me. Just like the above one.
01:32:448 (3,4,5,6,7) - Flow problem like i mentioned above.
02:03:648 (4) - In my opinion two stacked circles will play better here, both the end and the start are so convincing to tap.
02:06:948 (7) - This tilted a little too much imo. It should be like a horizontal flip of 02:06:448 (5) , dunno just my idea.
02:21:348 (8) - Why not straight slider? It can play pretty well as a mirror-like flip of 02:20:848 (6)
**a little rant about the really inconsistent ds during bridge okay ignore me**
Alright I can't stand this one 03:32:448 (1,2,3) - it's confusing like it's having the same ds as 03:33:648 (1,2,3) but heck they are really different in speed.
**runs through the off-beat part I suck in modding off-beat stuff**
04:15:248 (1,2,3) - I think they deserve a significant slider velocity burst though. You might understand me.
04:29:248 (5,6) - Because you let them have a loud sound so I think separating them from the slider and forcing a cursor movement will work better.
05:01:648 (1) - This is real nitpicking. Because of the vocal's high pitch i think a movement going upwards will be better.
05:20:848 (1) - Perhaps making an anti-jump towards the center of screen, suits the spinner and the music too (ending, moving the cursor downwards seems fitting for me).

That's what I can find, sorry if I didn't helped much :3 Btw modding an experienced mapper's/BN's map is so hard


Okay my map below.

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My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311473
C O N N E R
ทำเสร็จไปตอนไหนเนี่ย ไวจริงๆ :)
VTC
Hello, M4M from your User page. I hope m4m accept.

Here my map.

Desire


00:05:448 (7) - Maybe this circle stack with 00:05:048 (5) - it flows better imo.

00:05:648 (1,2) - If you can more make be consistent in applying distance. like 00:06:048 (3,4) - ( on 1.75x )

00:09:248 (2,3) - Make blanket?

00:15:248 (1,2) - ^?

00:28:248 (2) - Stack tail with 00:27:648 (4) - ?

00:34:048 (4,5) - Make more perfect stack.

00:35:648 (5,6) - ^

00:39:248 (1,2) - Fix blanket. a little.

00:39:248 (1,3) - ^

00:43:048 (2) - Stack with 00:42:448 (1) - slider's head.

00:51:248 (5) -

01:22:248 (4,1) - Make blanket?

01:30:448 (1) - Finish sound is too loud imo, i recommend Volume 40% or delete this finish.

01:32:848 (7) - ^

01:33:648 (1) - ^

01:35:248 (1) - ^

01:36:848 (1) - ^

After similar finish sound is unnecessary( be harsh to the ear ) in fact, i don't reference more.

01:57:248 (4) - Add 1/4 beat repeat arrow. it's be euphonious.

02:03:648 (4) - ^

03:00:648 - Add circle?

03:08:048 (1) - Delete NC. no reset vocal here.

03:08:848 (1) - ^

03:11:248 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^

After all similar rhythm because, player feel little confuse.

03:31:648 (4) - Add 1/4 beat repeat arrow. it's be euphonious.

03:40:448 (2) - Use Ctrl + G? flows better.

03:59:648 (3,2,3) - Bad overlap?

04:16:848 (1) - Really unnecessary SV multiplier. shold be fix.

That's all!

Sorry for my poor english & mod.

Good luck with my star :)
Frostmourne
เยี่ยมมั่กๆ อยากให้มี full version เพลงนี้ :)
Topic Starter
Iceskulls
lool

thanks guys

jinhang_ang wrote:

Hi~ M4M from userpage.

Really nice map, mostly nitpicking. I'm not sure if I'm going against your style so tell me if I did :)

Mod comes first.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

00:11:648 (5,1) - This blanket needs some quick revising. The end of slider doesn't blanket well. :arrow:fixed a bit
00:12:448 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow kinda broken by the slider, perhaps moving it a little bit lower to make a smooth curving flow? Or you can keep it to make the beat feels stronger. :arrow:this one looks fine to me
00:34:048 (4,5) - This is strange when compared to 00:35:648 (5,6) , which flows better. I think you can copy the latter and rotate it till it fits your needs. In the picture I rotated 00:34:048 (4,5) till it looks similar to the latter and place them next to each other, this is the difference.
:arrow:s2g it got the same spacing , maybe it something to do with the stacking here idk but I don't think it much a problem here
00:47:648 (3,4) - I don't know what to say but it looks strange for me. Just like the above one. :arrow:fixed a bit
01:32:448 (3,4,5,6,7) - Flow problem like i mentioned above. :arrow:fixed
02:03:648 (4) - In my opinion two stacked circles will play better here, both the end and the start are so convincing to tap. :arrow:that make the rhythm a bit more awkward to play imo
02:06:948 (7) - This tilted a little too much imo. It should be like a horizontal flip of 02:06:448 (5) , dunno just my idea. :arrow:laziness here gg , still flow ok tho
02:21:348 (8) - Why not straight slider? It can play pretty well as a mirror-like flip of 02:20:848 (6) :arrow:emphasis the tone of music something like that
**a little rant about the really inconsistent ds during bridge okay ignore me**
Alright I can't stand this one 03:32:448 (1,2,3) - it's confusing like it's having the same ds as 03:33:648 (1,2,3) but heck they are really different in speed. :arrow:it got nc to tell you that spacing thing is changed tho
**runs through the off-beat part I suck in modding off-beat stuff**
04:15:248 (1,2,3) - I think they deserve a significant slider velocity burst though. You might understand me. :arrow:want them to consistent with the first 2 kiai
04:29:248 (5,6) - Because you let them have a loud sound so I think separating them from the slider and forcing a cursor movement will work better. :arrow:no , I don't think so lol
05:01:648 (1) - This is real nitpicking. Because of the vocal's high pitch i think a movement going upwards will be better. :arrow:it has nothing to do with high pitch or low pitch lollololo ( flashback to my old modding stuffs tho fffffffking lmao)
05:20:848 (1) - Perhaps making an anti-jump towards the center of screen, suits the spinner and the music too (ending, moving the cursor downwards seems fitting for me). :arrow:ahh changed flow a bit

That's what I can find, sorry if I didn't helped much :3 Btw modding an experienced mapper's/BN's map is so hard


Okay my map below.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/311473
thanks for the mods :)

VocaloidTACU wrote:

Hello, M4M from your User page. I hope m4m accept.

Here my map.

Desire


00:05:448 (7) - Maybe this circle stack with 00:05:048 (5) - it flows better imo. :arrow:no, it's not lol

00:05:648 (1,2) - If you can more make be consistent in applying distance. like 00:06:048 (3,4) - ( on 1.75x ) :arrow:mm I don't think this really make any different much

00:09:248 (2,3) - Make blanket? :arrow:no

00:15:248 (1,2) - ^? :arrow:no

00:28:248 (2) - Stack tail with 00:27:648 (4) - ? :arrow:manual stcak 4life

00:34:048 (4,5) - Make more perfect stack. :arrow:^

00:35:648 (5,6) - ^ :arrow:^

00:39:248 (1,2) - Fix blanket. a little. :arrow:not intend

00:39:248 (1,3) - ^ :arrow:want a stack tho

00:43:048 (2) - Stack with 00:42:448 (1) - slider's head. :arrow:no

00:51:248 (5) -
:arrow:fixed a bit

01:22:248 (4,1) - Make blanket? :arrow:no

01:30:448 (1) - Finish sound is too loud imo, i recommend Volume 40% or delete this finish.

01:32:848 (7) - ^

01:33:648 (1) - ^

01:35:248 (1) - ^

01:36:848 (1) - ^

After similar finish sound is unnecessary( be harsh to the ear ) in fact, i don't reference more. :arrow:wh I don't hear them loud at all

01:57:248 (4) - Add 1/4 beat repeat arrow. it's be euphonious. :arrow:I can't hear 1/2 beat

02:03:648 (4) - ^ :arrow:^

03:00:648 - Add circle? :arrow:no

03:08:048 (1) - Delete NC. no reset vocal here. :arrow:downbeat

03:08:848 (1) - ^ :arrow:^

03:11:248 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^ :arrow:downbeat and spacing change

After all similar rhythm because, player feel little confuse. :arrow:I s2g the nc help players read this spacing change thing

03:31:648 (4) - Add 1/4 beat repeat arrow. it's be euphonious. :arrow:can't hear 1/2

03:40:448 (2) - Use Ctrl + G? flows better. :arrow:I don't think so

03:59:648 (3,2,3) - Bad overlap? :arrow:wh there is no overlap in-game screen

04:16:848 (1) - Really unnecessary SV multiplier. shold be fix. :arrow:Uhh it really fit the music here to be honest , here 04:16:848 - the tone start to go lower so that's I think lower sv really fit thing here and then tone start to go normal again here 04:17:248 - so it time to get sv back to normal , kkkKKKKKkK

That's all!

Sorry for my poor english & mod.

Good luck with my star :)
thanks for the mods :)
Enon
hitori
-Nya-
M4M~

General:
  1. You can add “opening” and “full version” to the tags as well.
  2. Change audio lead-in to 2000ms, just to be safe.
Desire:
  1. 00:45:648 (1) –I don’t really like this particular slidershape here. Imo, a normal curved slidershape would work the best with the vocals.
  2. You didn’t place finishes here: 00:24:848 (1) – (head) 00:34:448 (1) – (head) 00:40:848 (1) – even though you placed them here: 00:28:048 (1) - 00:31:248 (1) – (head) 00:37:648 (1) – (head) 00:44:048 (1) – (head) 00:47:248 (1) – Shouldn’t they be consistent?
  3. 00:51:248 (5) –Perhaps try to place the tail of this slider on 00:50:648 (2) –
  4. 01:03:248 (1,3) –Perhaps stack the two heads on top of each other? Nazi, but yeah. :P
  5. 01:03:248 (1) –Missed finish on head?
  6. 01:14:048 (5,6,7) –Rather place this pattern like this:
    Better flow imo.
  7. 01:19:248 (1) –Didn’t you miss a finish here?
  8. 01:20:848 (1) –The tail of this slider looks pretty high up. I suggest lowering it a bit to make sure it’s not outside of the screen.
  9. 01:25:648 (1) –Missed finish?
  10. 01:32:448 (3,4,5,6,7) –The placement of these objects are a bit weird. Perhaps place them like this instead:
  11. 01:34:448 (3) –The tail of this slider is like almost grazing the HP bar. Perhaps just move it down a teeny bit to be safe.
  12. 01:49:648 (1,2) –Very nazi. This kind of blanket can be improved a bit.
  13. 01:51:248 (1) –Again, please make sure the tail of this slider is not too high.
  14. 02:00:848 (1) –Missed finish?
  15. 02:13:648 (1) -^ on head
  16. 02:20:048 (1) -^
  17. 02:21:348 (8) –I suggest rather straightening this slider. If you curve it too much, it tends to look ugly and crammed. It’s also harder to distinguish it as a slider then.
  18. 02:39:048 (1) –Place a finish on the tail of this slider?
  19. 02:55:248 (1) -^, on the head.
  20. 02:58:448 (1) –Finish?
  21. 03:02:048 (2) –When I testplayed, I thought I had to click this circle earlier than I actually had to. Perhaps reduce the distance a bit?
  22. 03:31:648 (4) –I think it would be better if you make this slider a bit longer to follow the vocals instead.
  23. 03:46:448 (1) –Missing finish?
  24. 04:17:648 (2) –The finish on the head of this slider doesn’t really fit imo. I suggest you remove it.
  25. 04:34:248 (1) –Finish on the tail of this slider.
  26. 04:40:448 (5) –The tail of this slider is slightly grazing the HP bar. Move it down a bit.
  27. 04:47:048 (1) –I don’t think the finish on the head of this slider has to be there.
  28. 04:59:848 (1) –Finish on tail?
  29. 05:06:448 (1) –Finish on head?

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Topic Starter
Iceskulls

-Nya- wrote:

M4M~

General:
  1. You can add “opening” and “full version” to the tags as well. :arrow:k
  2. Change audio lead-in to 2000ms, just to be safe. :arrow:pretty sure that it fine without audioleadin ( it's got automatic audioleadin here ) but w/e it's also fine if I add it lol
Desire:
  1. 00:45:648 (1) –I don’t really like this particular slidershape here. Imo, a normal curved slidershape would work the best with the vocals. :arrow:mm, I think this one fit better
  2. You didn’t place finishes here: 00:24:848 (1) – (head) 00:34:448 (1) – (head) 00:40:848 (1) – even though you placed them here: 00:28:048 (1) - 00:31:248 (1) – (head) 00:37:648 (1) – (head) 00:44:048 (1) – (head) 00:47:248 (1) – Shouldn’t they be consistent? :arrow:all of those places aren't really sound good with finish (those beat aren't just like don't have much impact feeling in them imo ) so that can be why I don't use finish and I think it kinda fine to leave it like that
  3. 00:51:248 (5) –Perhaps try to place the tail of this slider on 00:50:648 (2) – :arrow:not really looking good there imo , it's just my taste lol
  4. 01:03:248 (1,3) –Perhaps stack the two heads on top of each other? Nazi, but yeah. :P:arrow:same ^
  5. 01:03:248 (1) –Missed finish on head? same as the one you mention before , it just doesn't sound good
  6. 01:14:048 (5,6,7) –Rather place this pattern like this: :arrow:no, I don't think so
    Better flow imo.
  7. 01:19:248 (1) –Didn’t you miss a finish here? :arrow:doesn't sound right
  8. 01:20:848 (1) –The tail of this slider looks pretty high up. I suggest lowering it a bit to make sure it’s not outside of the screen. :arrow:it's fine in-game
  9. 01:25:648 (1) –Missed finish? :arrow:doesn't sound right
  10. 01:32:448 (3,4,5,6,7) –The placement of these objects are a bit weird. Perhaps place them like this instead: :arrow:o
  11. 01:34:448 (3) –The tail of this slider is like almost grazing the HP bar. Perhaps just move it down a teeny bit to be safe. :arrow:k
  12. 01:49:648 (1,2) –Very nazi. This kind of blanket can be improved a bit. :arrow:lol not really want to blanket
  13. 01:51:248 (1) –Again, please make sure the tail of this slider is not too high. :arrow:I checked in-game and it's fine like the previous one you mentioned
  14. 02:00:848 (1) –Missed finish?
  15. 02:13:648 (1) -^ on head
  16. 02:20:048 (1) -^ :arrow:all of them don't sound right with finish
  17. 02:21:348 (8) –I suggest rather straightening this slider. If you curve it too much, it tends to look ugly and crammed. It’s also harder to distinguish it as a slider then. :arrow:k
  18. 02:39:048 (1) –Place a finish on the tail of this slider?
  19. 02:55:248 (1) -^, on the head.
  20. 02:58:448 (1) –Finish? :arrow:all of them don't sound right with finish
  21. 03:02:048 (2) –When I testplayed, I thought I had to click this circle earlier than I actually had to. Perhaps reduce the distance a bit? :arrow:I think reduce it make the spacing here harder to read , the current you can know that it change to 1/1 spacing from (1)
  22. 03:31:648 (4) –I think it would be better if you make this slider a bit longer to follow the vocals instead. :arrow:no , I prefer following instrument
  23. 03:46:448 (1) –Missing finish?
  24. 04:17:648 (2) –The finish on the head of this slider doesn’t really fit imo. I suggest you remove it.
  25. 04:34:248 (1) –Finish on the tail of this slider. :arrow: current hitsound set-up is fine and sound better imo (reply for above ^ too
  26. 04:40:448 (5) –The tail of this slider is slightly grazing the HP bar. Move it down a bit. :arrow:k
  27. 04:47:048 (1) –I don’t think the finish on the head of this slider has to be there.
  28. 04:59:848 (1) –Finish on tail?
  29. 05:06:448 (1) –Finish on head?:arrow: current hitsound set-up is fine and sound better imo (reply for above ^ too

Call me back once you think it’s ready~ :arrow:ooooo k
thanks for the mods :)
-Nya-
You haven't changed the audio lead-in yet, even though you said you would. I guess you forgot.
Everything else looks fine. Call me back when the above issue is fixed.
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