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DJ TOTTO feat. *spiLa* - illumina

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Topic Starter
hehe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 6 December, 2015 at 10:00:40 AM

Artist: DJ TOTTO feat. *spiLa*
Title: illumina
Source: pop'n music ラピストリア
Tags: bemani hiumi 田川 義浩 yoshihiro tagawa 兎々 asphyxia byfar bearizm
BPM: 187
Filesize: 8576kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. asphyxia's extra (5.3 stars, 558 notes)
  2. bearizm's insane (4.98 stars, 439 notes)
  3. byfar's extra (5.55 stars, 535 notes)
  4. easy (1.46 stars, 102 notes)
  5. hard (3.51 stars, 280 notes)
  6. insane (4.54 stars, 405 notes)
  7. normal (2.24 stars, 197 notes)
  8. radiance (5.87 stars, 539 notes)
Download: DJ TOTTO feat. *spiLa* - illumina
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-kevincela-
while(me irl < 17)
Bearizm
cs5 fukr
byfar
soon tm xD
Bearizm
After several adjustments + a suggestion from A Mystery

http://puu.sh/k0IZ6.zip

pls no bully
Nerova Riuz GX
try offset 3711 or 3712. 3709
3706 is too early.
byfar
Bearizm
http://puu.sh/k1Fj5.zip

.osu hitsound fixes + more finish .wav(s)

v rudy
Topic Starter
hehe
You fucking retards just pm me on skype
byfar

handsome wrote:

You fucking retards just pm me on skype
vbuxwb`12
Asphyxia
buxw 1/3
Xilver15
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Asphyxia

Xilver wrote:

hi i modded asphyxia's diff a bit on skype xd may i have kd good sir
Thanks!

To clarify, we fixed the following things: 01:15:738 (2,3,4,5) - moved a bit more up so the transition to 01:16:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would be smoother to play, turned 01:19:107 - into notes instead, since the beat at 01:19:267 - should be emphasized instead (kept the break though, since it fits), 01:22:636 (6) - turned into 1/3 and finally 01:24:561 - removed the objects after this untill the slow part
-Atri-
Rank this plz
Mazzerin
01:08:438 (7,8) - these 2 could be more spaced and go somewhere top right for better flow, since now 01:08:518 (8,1,2) - is very linear and doesn't play as well as it could https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3757412
01:17:101 (4,1) - 01:17:421 (4,1) - looks better to me if spacing is reduced between those notes to like 0.2x or something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3757427
01:36:031 (10,1) - this 1/4 jump wasn't very obvious and way too big, also that slider is offscreen, i think you intended to place it at x256 y261
where are kiais
Topic Starter
hehe

Mazzerin wrote:

01:08:438 (7,8) - these 2 could be more spaced and go somewhere top right for better flow, since now 01:08:518 (8,1,2) - is very linear and doesn't play as well as it could https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3757412 disagree, its linear for a reason, to give more emphasis on the pattern afterwards
01:17:101 (4,1) - 01:17:421 (4,1) - looks better to me if spacing is reduced between those notes to like 0.2x or something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3757427 agree
01:36:031 (10,1) - this 1/4 jump wasn't very obvious and way too big, also that slider is offscreen, i think you intended to place it at x256 y261 xd misaktes xd
where are kiais ther u go fam
Bearizm
As requested.

radiance
  1. 00:25:443 (5,6) - space these out furthermore like how you did with the rest
  2. 00:26:486 (5) - slider end ends in a drum sound and vocal, it's better to change this to 2 circles for more emphasis.
  3. 00:48:465 (4) - make a triple from here? there's that echoing sound.
  4. 01:10:443 (1) - you could always change this to a 1/1 slider since there's literally nothing on the repeat lol
  5. 01:38:679 (1) - ctrl g, the short DS + the fast SV paired with small CS changes the cursor speed a lot if it's the way it currently is. also i think a bigger jump is necessary due to NC, strong vocal, drum, and crash sound.
  6. 01:13:171 - there's actually a piano sound here
  7. 00:54:561 (3,5,7) - hitsound these
  8. 00:59:374 (3) - remove drum sound

byfar
  1. 00:39:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you were following the vocals in the previous parts if i'm not mistaken. this might be a bit too sudden of an emphasis change, especially when the sound that you're mapping is just a background sound.
  2. 00:56:968 (5,6,7) - anti jump then a mASSive jump. This is really bad the way it plays tbh. nerf the jump from 6-7 and put 6 a bit further from 5.
  3. 01:25:524 (1,2,1) - the sv change is quite unreadable because these sliders look the same despite of having an NC. to solve this, just make the kick sliders a stream.
  4. 01:40:925 (3,1) - 01:41:085 -
  5. you got some really short NCs.
  6. your choice of rhythm is a bit odd imo, you change emphasis quite often which makes it quite difficult to follow the rhythm you choose for each part of the song.

Asphyxia
  1. 00:40:925 (1) - o so this is how u make this kind of slider. gotta have a red point in the middle xd
  2. 00:42:288 (2) - 01:43:893 (2) - these are unnecessary imo, the stream starts 00:42:369 -
  3. 01:06:914 (3) - this almost-overlapped with the stream. almost triggered.
  4. 00:54:080 (3,4) - ctrl g so that the upcoming stream will have a bit more momentum going towards it.
  5. 00:59:534 (6,7,1) - hope you don't mind me stealing this pattern in the future.
  6. can't really mod this. nice.

Bearizm
  1. wow really sick diff

insane
  1. 01:41:887 (3) - the consecutive jumps from this part is a massive difficulty spike. try making 01:42:529 (1,3) - sliders. if you nerf this part, you may get a much lower star diff which allows you to nerf the hard a bit. to probably around 3.4ish

hard
  1. 00:05:631 (4,1) - i don't think overlapping these is wise on hard lol, just stack them but since u do it in other parts then ok
  2. 01:36:112 (1) - this difficulty just became insane from this part xd. triples, high SV, high spacings (for this bpm), jumps, etc. nerf worthy imo.

easy
  1. 01:17:502 (3) - remove the repeat, 01:18:786 - this is already a new part of the song imo. as in, the start of a new rhythm
  2. 01:36:112 (1,2,3,4) - this starts off really fast paced with cool hitsounds, then followed by 2/1 gaps which totally removes that fast paced feel to it. 01:38:679 (1) - you could make 2 1/1 sliders with a circle in the end just like you did in the beginning. same goes to this 01:41:246 (1) -

Nothing on normal.

Hope I helped.
Topic Starter
hehe

Bearizm wrote:

As requested.

radiance
  1. 00:25:443 (5,6) - space these out furthermore like how you did with the rest nah part of da pattern
  2. 00:26:486 (5) - slider end ends in a drum sound and vocal, it's better to change this to 2 circles for more emphasis. part of rhythm pattern
  3. 00:48:465 (4) - make a triple from here? there's that echoing sound. not a good sound to map a triple to imo
  4. 01:10:443 (1) - you could always change this to a 1/1 slider since there's literally nothing on the repeat lol i literally did this only cuz i like the pattern for the stream after xd
  5. 01:38:679 (1) - ctrl g, the short DS + the fast SV paired with small CS changes the cursor speed a lot if it's the way it currently is. also i think a bigger jump is necessary due to NC, strong vocal, drum, and crash sound. tru
  6. 01:13:171 - there's actually a piano sound here 2 bad iz soft
  7. 00:54:561 (3,5,7) - hitsound these too soft
  8. 00:59:374 (3) - remove drum sound tru

insane
  1. 01:41:887 (3) - the consecutive jumps from this part is a massive difficulty spike. try making 01:42:529 (1,3) - sliders. if you nerf this part, you may get a much lower star diff which allows you to nerf the hard a bit. to probably around 3.4ish tru

hard
  1. 00:05:631 (4,1) - i don't think overlapping these is wise on hard lol, just stack them but since u do it in other parts then ok no xd
  2. 01:36:112 (1) - this difficulty just became insane from this part xd. triples, high SV, high spacings (for this bpm), jumps, etc. nerf worthy imo. tru

easy
  1. 01:17:502 (3) - remove the repeat, 01:18:786 - this is already a new part of the song imo. as in, the start of a new rhythmtru
  2. 01:36:112 (1,2,3,4) - this starts off really fast paced with cool hitsounds, then followed by 2/1 gaps which totally removes that fast paced feel to it. 01:38:679 (1) - you could make 2 1/1 sliders with a circle in the end just like you did in the beginning. same goes to this 01:41:246 (1) - tru

Nothing on normal.

Hope I helped.
Avishay
Just curious, why are the diff names are low cased completely?
Bearizm

Avishay wrote:

Just curious, why are the diff names are low cased completely?
because the title of this song is in lower case.
Frey
;;w;;

  • General
  1. add GDers' name in Tags please

    easy
  2. 00:24:962 - wrongly snapped
  3. 00:24:962 (2) - to keep consistency, move to x240 y180 to unify the ds
  4. 00:46:700 (2) - unify the ds?
  5. 01:29:775 (2) - wrongly snapped

    normal
  6. 00:40:764 - I suggest you silence the end
  7. 01:35:631 - seems you missed a strong beat

    insane
  8. 00:11:807 (3) - Wrongly snapped

Good luck :3
Topic Starter
hehe
fixed everything except sliderend on normal, not necessary for me. thank you frey!
Bearizm
mods wer u at so n xd
Asphyxia

Bearizm wrote:

As requested.

Asphyxia
  1. 00:40:925 (1) - o so this is how u make this kind of slider. gotta have a red point in the middle xd yea or then just look at a skystar / rlc map to make them look as good but different waves
  2. 00:42:288 (2) - 01:43:893 (2) - these are unnecessary imo, the stream starts 00:42:369 - mm, I'd like to keep these for now since the stream itself feels much more complete with the additional note, along with it plays smoother imo. if more people are against this, I will fix it.
  3. 01:06:914 (3) - this almost-overlapped with the stream. almost triggered. yea but almost heheeeeEeeee
  4. 00:54:080 (3,4) - ctrl g so that the upcoming stream will have a bit more momentum going towards it. I somehow prefer the current movement, feels smoother
  5. 00:59:534 (6,7,1) - hope you don't mind me stealing this pattern in the future. demanding a mention in the map description with capitals then tbh
  6. can't really mod this. nice.
Thanks Bear the rizm! :)
byfar
fixed polarity issues, polished overall map, changed diff to cs5 etc etc
osu file format v14

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Artist:DJ TOTTO feat. *spiLa*
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Creator:handsome
Version:byfar's extra
Source:pop'n music ラピストリア
Tags:bemani hiumi 田川 義浩 yoshihiro tagawa 兎々asphyxia byfar bearizm -wwwww kaitlin
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@bearizm, no change

00:39:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you were following the vocals in the previous parts if i'm not mistaken. this might be a bit too sudden of an emphasis change, especially when the sound that you're mapping is just a background sound. a bit of rhythm change
00:56:968 (5,6,7) - anti jump then a mASSive jump. This is really bad the way it plays tbh. nerf the jump from 6-7 and put 6 a bit further from 5. this should play fine
01:25:524 (1,2,1) - the sv change is quite unreadable because these sliders look the same despite of having an NC. to solve this, just make the kick sliders a stream. ^
01:40:925 (3,1) - 01:41:085 - xd
you got some really short NCs.
your choice of rhythm is a bit odd imo, you change emphasis quite often which makes it quite difficult to follow the rhythm you choose for each part of the song.

thanks for mods!
Dea ex machina
self-mod
osu file format v14

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264,280,74294,6,0,L|352:296,1,81.5,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,74534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,74615,1,8,0:3:0:0:
384,176,74695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,152,74775,2,0,L|272:152,2,40.75,0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,152,75096,1,0,3:0:0:0:
344,80,75256,1,8,3:0:0:0:
472,24,75417,1,8,0:3:0:0:
184,136,75577,6,0,L|96:128,1,81.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,112,75818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,294,75898,2,0,L|432:286,1,81.5,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,270,76139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,76219,1,0,3:0:0:0:
95,247,76299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,211,76379,1,0,3:0:0:0:
81,170,76459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,136,76540,6,0,L|200:112,2,81.5,8|0|0,0:3|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
81,170,76941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,211,77021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,247,77101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,77181,1,8,3:0:0:0:
256,288,77342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,352,77502,1,0,3:0:0:0:
296,136,77663,1,0,3:0:0:0:
152,352,77823,1,8,3:0:0:0:
128,312,77903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,272,77984,1,8,0:3:0:0:
80,232,78064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,78144,6,0,P|368:216|416:192,1,81.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,184,78385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,154,78465,1,8,0:3:0:0:
468,115,78545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,76,78625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,49,78705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,78786,5,0,3:0:0:0:
176,88,78946,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,72,79107,1,8,0:3:0:0:
312,208,79267,1,0,3:0:0:0:
192,232,79427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,202,79507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,163,79587,1,0,3:0:0:0:
163,123,79667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,93,79748,2,0,L|279:94,1,81.5,8|0,0:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
239,70,79989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,296,80069,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,80230,1,0,3:0:0:0:
32,296,80390,1,8,0:3:0:0:
48,248,80470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,80550,1,8,0:3:0:0:
80,152,80631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,288,80711,5,4,3:3:0:0:
176,240,80871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,80951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,81032,1,8,0:3:0:0:
216,120,81112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,81192,2,0,L|120:96,2,40.75,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,81513,2,0,L|352:96,1,40.75,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,320,81673,1,8,0:3:0:0:
104,296,81753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,248,81834,1,0,3:0:0:0:
104,200,81914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,176,81994,6,0,L|232:176,3,81.5,0|0|8|0,0:0|3:0|0:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,176,82556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,328,82636,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,288,82796,1,0,3:0:0:0:
328,192,82957,1,8,0:3:0:0:
336,144,83037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,104,83117,1,8,0:3:0:0:
400,80,83197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,80,83278,6,0,L|480:0,1,81.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,251,83599,2,0,L|142:171,1,81.5,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,144,83839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,336,83919,1,0,3:0:0:0:
440,312,84000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,264,84080,1,0,3:0:0:0:
440,224,84160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,200,84240,1,8,0:3:0:0:
376,160,84320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,84400,1,0,3:0:0:0:
440,88,84481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84561,12,0,85684,0:0:0:0:
152,328,85845,6,0,B|192:320|192:320|248:328,1,81.5,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,86165,2,0,B|296:256|296:256|200:240,1,163,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,152,86968,6,0,B|80:144|80:144|136:152,1,81.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,87288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,103,87368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,98,87448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,48,87609,2,0,B|80:40|80:40|136:48,2,81.5,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,45,88091,2,0,B|200:58|200:58|280:42,1,163,0|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
312,48,88492,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,56,88572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,128,88732,2,0,L|384:152,1,81.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,89053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,272,89534,6,2,L|360:256,2,40.75
288,304,89855,2,2,L|232:312,2,40.75
144,264,90176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,240,90337,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,184,90497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,128,90657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,96,90818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,90978,6,0,L|160:160,1,81.5,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,32,91299,2,0,L|160:16,1,81.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,91620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,32,92101,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,25,92181,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,19,92261,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,96,92422,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,89,92502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,83,92582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,224,92743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,200,92903,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,136,93064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,72,93224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,48,93385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,336,93545,6,0,P|80:296|136:200,1,163,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,94026,2,0,P|272:128|216:32,1,163,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,64,94668,1,4,0:0:0:0:
312,154,95149,6,0,L|216:170,1,81.5
216,136,95390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,95470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,72,95550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,95631,2,0,L|288:-24,1,40.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,96,95791,2,0,L|56:0,1,81.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,32,96032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,96112,6,0,L|392:200,1,81.5,4|0,3:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,96433,2,0,L|64:232,1,81.5,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,96674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,296,96754,1,0,3:0:0:0:
464,272,96914,1,0,3:0:0:0:
344,296,97074,1,8,0:3:0:0:
75,255,97235,6,0,L|267:215,1,163,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,97716,2,0,L|221:105,1,81.5,8|0,0:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
312,56,98037,2,0,L|203:33,2,81.5,0|0|8,0:0|3:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
64,64,98518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,280,98679,6,0,L|336:264,1,81.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,98919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,216,99000,1,8,0:3:0:0:
280,176,99160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,99320,1,0,3:0:0:0:
280,64,99481,1,0,3:0:0:0:
424,120,99641,1,8,0:3:0:0:
128,120,99802,6,2,L|72:120,2,40.75,0|2|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,176,100123,2,2,L|295:176,2,40.75,2|2|8,3:2|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
128,232,100443,2,0,L|32:232,2,81.5,0|0|0,0:3|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,100925,1,8,3:0:0:0:
408,200,101005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,168,101085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,136,101165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,120,101246,5,0,3:0:0:0:
288,96,101566,1,8,3:0:0:0:
168,120,101727,1,0,3:0:0:0:
400,232,102048,1,0,3:0:0:0:
280,256,102209,1,0,3:0:0:0:
512,200,102369,6,0,L|432:48,1,163,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,264,102850,2,0,L|172:112,1,163,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,103331,1,0,3:0:0:0:
400,232,103492,1,8,0:3:0:0:
440,200,103572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,152,103652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,104,103732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,103812,6,0,L|288:80,1,81.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,80,104053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,32,104133,1,8,0:3:0:0:
64,64,104213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,104293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,104373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,104454,2,0,L|160:192,2,40.75,0|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,104775,2,0,L|280:272,2,40.75,8|0|0,0:3|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
481,251,105096,6,0,P|498:167|145:195,1,652,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
koliron


Rain
  1. 00:05:951 (4) - okay, to start, 00:06:272 - there is a loooud song, but the distance with 00:05:951 - and 00:06:112 - is the same, and really is good time to add hdash, so i suggest you this (hdash)
  2. 00:06:272 - and ye, NC here
  3. 00:06:433 - Why you not use note here? fits good
  4. 00:06:593 (1) - okay, same as 00:05:951 (4) but 00:06:914 - is not... "strong" sound, buuut is more than the others, so i suggest you the same but without hdash
  5. 00:07:235 (2) - lol, i cant listen nothing here, not fits, remove
  6. 00:11:085 (7) - i think you can add reverse 00:11:246 - here, feels weird, other option (and instead I recommend this) 00:11:406 - is loud sound, so again you can use the pattern of 00:05:951 (4) , and more because 00:11:406 - there nc here
  7. 00:12:048 (4,1) - (1) is not loud sound, I really suggest you remove the HDash, not fits here, so far you used it well, but just in case I remind you, the HDash should only be used when the following sound is really strong (reducing the requirement platter to overdose)
  8. 00:12:929 (8,1) - (1) is a bit loud sound than others, and there is a new part of the voice, try to add a bit distance to cause easy dash, maybe with 00:13:010 (1) - in x 400
  9. 00:13:492 (2) - if you accept the above, not forget change the distance, aaand y see you us hdash to 00:13:652 - , but the loud sound is in 00:13:572 - , so, you need change this part, try to reaplce with 2 circles, add dash to 00:13:572 - and remove to 00:13:652 - (00:13:812 - ye, is the same sound but isnt posible add dash to here xD)
  10. 00:16:379 (7,1) - wohhh! (1) is a strong sounddd! is good time to add good hdash~
  11. 00:17:502 (4,5,1,2,3) - okay, in this case you use the same distances, but the sound reduce in each note, so you should reduce the distance between (1,2) and (3,4)
  12. 00:19:107 - again, is good time to make hdash, i suggest you 00:18:946 (1) - ctrl+g, remove reverse and x 160 and less horizontal, then add circle 00:19:107 - here, to the right of the above, obviously (lol, probably I mistook you with my explanation, but you understood what to do, I guess)
  13. 00:21:593 (9,1) - again, other loud sound! add hdash.. or just dash (ye i suggest only dash) here
  14. 00:23:599 (1,1,2) - okay, the legth between (1,1) fits here, buuut in playing you use hard dash and then move to the right, is a bit uncomfortable, i suggest you add less distance between 00:24:240 (1,2,3,4,5) - these notes
  15. 00:25:443 (7,1,2) - is exatcly the same case, reduce the distances between 00:25:524 (1,2,3,4) -
  16. 00:26:647 (6,1,2,3,4) - you add more distance between 00:27:048 (2,3) - than 00:26:647 (6,1) -, but the latter is more strong sound, change the distances
  17. 00:32:583 (3,4,5) - the sound increace each note, but you use the same distances, maybe with 00:32:903 (5) - x 112
  18. 00:32:903 (5,6,1) - huh, i think the hdash fits more well between (6,1)
  19. 00:34:428 (12,1) - again, the sound is loud in (1), i suggest you add easy dash here
  20. 00:35:631 (7,1) - high sound! other good time to add normal dash! and the same case in 00:35:791 (1,2) -
  21. 00:38:839 (4,5,6,1) - huh, okay, (5) and (6) are loud souds but not much, i suggest you add dash to these, (and i see you not add to (5) ), but not remove the hdash between (6,1), fits well
  22. 00:49:187 - huh, i think, circle here fits good, and maintain the consistency with 00:48:786 (2,3,4) - and 00:48:304 (7,8,1) -
  23. 00:49:427 (7,8,9,1) - in this case, okay you use hdash to 8, and fits well, but you use to 9, and the sound is nor really the best to add hdash, and ye, 1 is loud sound, so you need add hdash to this, and 3 hdash in row are not acceptable in rain, so really i suggest you follow my suggestions (wtf I just said)
  24. 00:52:315 (6,1) - other loud sound, but is the same distances than 00:52:155 (5,6) - , add hdash (:
  25. 00:54:962 (12,1,2) - the same case as 00:25:443 (7,1,2)
  26. 00:57:448 (8,1) - other good time to hdash
  27. 00:58:732 (1,2,3) - the distance are the same but the sound recude each note, reduce a bit to 00:59:374 (3) -
  28. 00:58:732 (1,2,3) -aaand are really short distances, add a bit more
  29. 01:01:620 (2,3,4) - the loud sound is in 01:01:780 (3) - , no in 01:01:941 (4) - , change the positions
  30. 01:03:625 (10,11) - again, other suggestion to add easy dash~
  31. 01:03:705 (11,12,1) - huh, 1 is the more strong sound, y suggest you remove the hdash between 01:03:705 (11,12) - and add to 1
  32. 01:10:123 (5,6) - again, 6 is not really the best to add hdash, looow sound
  33. 01:10:443 (1) - the slider need finish in 01:10:764 - , not fits in 01:10:845 -
  34. 01:11:647 - and ye, circle fits good
  35. hdash to 01:37:235 (1) not fit, is not strongg :o , remove, and you can add reverse 01:37:395 - here~
  36. 01:38:037 (3,4) - again, is not good sound to hdash ):

I love your diff, in game is very good, basically were hdash errors

+1 :) , good luck!
-Atri-
I suddenly want to map GD, again...
Bearizm
Now let's get this set back on track. BNs? xd
Pho


looking only at gameplay issues i noticed because ^.
mostly subjective things

bold: fix quickly/unrankable issues
purple: questionable
red: highly recommend

[General]
  1. @extra guys: 01:36:112 - kiai at the strongest segment of the track at least?
[bear]
  1. 00:31:780 (5,6) - stack would feel better here due to strong drums
  2. 01:22:636 (9) - similar to handsome's diff
[as]
  1. 00:19:107 (1,3) - better alignment would be great.
  2. 00:55:845 (4) - ctrl+g would be better so emphasis is also put on the 00:56:165 (5) - beat. current
  3. 01:05:310 (1,2) - similar to above, would push these down a bit so the upcoming 3-beat has more emphasis put on as well.
  4. 01:11:887 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - lol neat
  5. 01:18:304 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - personally feels pretty overspaced, background melodic beats don't feel that strong to me.
  6. 01:41:566 (2) - 507|162 ?
[byf]
  1. 00:18:625 - guess you did this for variation but really like to see this beat set here because it causes rhythmical instability.
    especially when it's as notable as this one.
  2. 00:23:117 (2) - feels overspaced for what weak beat this object actual represents. 2-3 switch would be nice but i guess it's style choice.
  3. 00:56:647 (4,5,6,7) - that 6-7 jump looks so unappealing because the visual distance to 00:57:288 (7,1) - is closer than to 00:57:128 (6,7) - .
    how about positioning the slider at 148|142?
  4. 01:03:385 (1,2) - speaking of jumps lol, why does this have such an enormous spacing? and dont tell me because NC and snares, 01:03:385 (1,2) - is remarkably weaker than 01:02:903 (2,3,4,5) -.
  5. 01:08:839 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - .
  6. 01:12:609 (11) - triple feels redundant as there is no piano beat to support here anymore. and more is not always better :/
  7. 01:22:315 (1) - no overlap with 01:22:957 (1) - and this will be cool
  8. 01:37:074 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - .
[i am 17 year old singaporean boy standing 185 centimeter and 78 kg]
  1. 00:13:331 (2) - feels more comfortable if you wouldn't miss out the white tick:
  2. 00:25:203 (4,5,1) - should be as spaced out as 00:25:845 (2,3,4) -, they both eqully strong (even with that 00:26:165 - strong melodic beat i'd space it out for aesthetical reasons)
  3. 01:22:636 (5) - wouldn't recommend to follow the piano here as a) you miss out strong beats and b) the actual piano starts at 01:22:529 - already.
    so particularly for this section, i'd follow another instrumental layer.
  4. nice, reminds me of ignorethis.
all nice, i might check other stuff thoroughly when y'know xd
Bearizm
ok changed. the thing about that similar with handsome diff, yea, intentional. tho, I DID THAT FIRST xd.

http://puu.sh/lHAiO.zip
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