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generäli'd add some offset cuz right now it seems to be a bit off. maybe add like + 8 or something
combo colors yo
disable that letterboxing and widescreen support on diffs that have it
what is this QQ diffname leli don't really like that hard kick hitnormal you have there at the start. Doesn't really fit with the piano
AR 9,7 for the love of god
OD 9 for the love of god
HP 6 for the love of god
00:01:394 (1) - i think you should just map these as circles cuz both of the sounds are pretty audible here
00:01:974 (2) - and now you can remove this overmapped circle here
00:02:168 (3) - this should be fine as a slider to introduce these "from white to blue tick" thing (i have absolutely no idea what they are called)
00:05:458 - pretty sure you skipped a sound here
00:14:845 (1) - don't nc like this cuz people are gonna think nc's are on white (or maybe red) ticks and that might fuck up their rythm. You could just make (3) a circle and then put nc on the red tick. That would make your map look more consistent too
00:15:910 (1) - shouldn't the spacing in the stream go lower here too since the piano goes down in pitch right?
00:19:199 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - how about kicksliders to emphasize the white and the red ticks. Or do that Hanzer thing and get yelled at
00:19:974 (1,2,3) - this is a 7 star extra and yet you decided not to map the 1/6 piano. Imo you should do this but remember to introduce it somehow so that it's not completely random
00:20:748 (3) - the sliderend does not emphasize the sound on the red tick very much
00:28:619 (3,4,5,6,7) - i can't play this diff at all but i think that this will be a problem for many
00:33:135 (1,1) - the nc thing i mentioned earlier. Imo the sound on the big white tick is strong enough to have a circle on it
00:39:329 (1) - circle on the big white tick here too
00:40:490 (2,1,2,3) - this might be a reading problem but normal people should have no problems with this lol
00:44:361 (8) - this might be a bit complicated but there is some 1/6 drums here too lol
00:46:297 (5) - this is not really emphasized well when it only has like half of the spacing that 00:45:523 (1,2,3,4) - these have. And imo it should be more emphasized than those 4
00:48:364 (3,1) - you won't stack these but you stacked the ones after this ok (not really important but i'm a consistency freak)
00:56:751 (1) - stop this blue tick nc thing you're triggering meh
00:56:819 (2) - you could give this song a little kick by raising the sv here since the song gets more hype if you know what i mean but that's your choice
01:07:728 (4) - oh i hate how you end this slider on that sound but asd
01:19:046 (1,2,1) - reading problems
01:27:228 (4) - i like how you decided to emphasize this more with spacing than 01:27:364 (1) - ... jk no i don't
01:31:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 1/3 aaaaaa
01:35:001 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - i think this is 1/3 too
01:36:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - not sure about these but 01:37:592 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - is 1/3 again
01:58:455 (2) - hey cool slider!
musty's äxOD 8.5 or something higher than 8 for the love of all good and kind
00:01:781 (2) - just like i said in the previous diff, i hate sliders that end on really audible piano sounds ya
00:07:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - this rythm should fit better imo and should be a bit better to play
http://puu.sh/mGoPy/03df6c3d21.jpg00:11:974 (5,1) - it's only gay if they touch and now it's a little bit gay
00:19:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this might throw some players off that you suddenly change to 1/6 so i'd try to figure out some other way to map that
00:28:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing i said in the previous diff. This might be a bit difficult to read idk i can't play this
00:33:135 (1) - silence the sliderend since there is nothing on it
00:35:458 (1) - add a circle to map that piano sound and then add the spinner on the blue tick
00:46:297 (5) - space this further from the other 4 to emphasize it properly
01:02:819 (1) - ctrl+g?
01:11:137 (1) -
http://puu.sh/mGp30/e1ac2e1982.jpg01:12:092 (1) - change this sliderend to circle
01:24:364 (3) - ctrl+g should play better
01:26:001 (5) - i like how you completely ignore the piano with this slider... no i don't
01:30:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i like how you mapped this in 1/3 when it's actually 1/4 aaaaaaand then from 01:31:728 (1) - in 1/4 when it's actually 1/3 lelll akdhj
01:38:273 (1) - this is 1/3 again
01:49:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - do a 9 star jump pattern lol adkjhlgg jk
Get a 5.5~ star extra here
ShäpYnsäneOD 8 for rustling jimmies
00:01:394 (1) - i have said this many times now but i hate when sliders end on cool piano sounds aakldjlh
00:33:135 (1) - silence sliderend cuz no sound there
00:46:103 (3,4) - wow this stack takes all the emphasis away
01:05:546 (1) - you know what i mean when i link this
01:06:364 (1) - ^
01:07:728 (4) - ^ and this especially
01:12:773 - you skipped a sound
01:13:046 - ^
01:23:001 (1) - hey bell sound awesome !!!
01:25:728 (3,4,1) - this flow felt a bit clunky i don't know how to explain it. It just didn't feel nice
01:33:978 (3) - let's make a deal and never place kicksliders on blue ticks ok cool
01:42:364 (5) - if you ctrl+g this, it will be more comfortable to play when coming from (4) but pretty annyoing to play when transitioning to 01:42:637 (1) - so imo you should figure something else out here
01:53:273 (4) - ctrl+g, plays better and gives more emphasis to 01:53:546 (5) -
01:58:455 (1) - circle pls and then the spinner on the blue tick
i'm gonna end my mod here but fix those 1/4 streams that are actually 1/3 streams in the upper diffs and emphasize the piano better and you will have a much better map at hand. Make your streams more beautiful by using that ctrl+f tool that transforms sliders into streams or use circles as blankets and yea, make stream shapes better looking. If you can fix those i think you could go for rank with this since the flow seems to be pretty cool and all and after that testplay my maps (jk don't)
Good luck!