[Colours]
Combo1 : 200,119,173
Combo2 : 230,230,230
Combo3 : 255,191,228
Combo4 : 189,34,38

Mystyk wrote:

1. 00:58:807 (5) - ehelyett igazán kitalálhatnál valami jobb formát, ez eléggé...nem esztétikus, de ha most nem hallgatsz rám később mások is úgyis mondani fogják szóval xD szerintem ha nagyon hosszú slidereket akarsz csinálni akkor legalább legyenek szimmetrikusak, vagy nem tudom de ez így ;_; Javitva
2. 01:13:140 (2) - ugyanez mint fent, bár nekem az se nagyon tetszik amit én csináltam xD - http://puu.sh/jSyzi/203a149181.jpg Javitva
   A blanketeken is van még mit javítani, az a baj te nem nagyon nézted hozzá az approach circle-t és most még ugyanúgy "nem szép", de egy-két helyen már tényle sokkal jobb lett! Mégtöbb blanket javitva
3. 00:47:807 (4,5) - az ilyen elrendezés pl. szerintem nem annyira szép mert mindkét slider úgy mond..."egy irányba mutat" szóval: http://puu.sh/jSyId/b1cc74ceff.jpg - így jobb a flow is hiszen --> http://puu.sh/jSyJP/8eb916540f.jpg ehelyett http://puu.sh/jSyKN/4388d5938f.jpg
   ezt igazából nehéz elmagyarázni, meg annyira talán nem is érződik de mégis jobb lenne így szerintem Javitva
4. 00:50:807 (3,4,5,1,2) - úgy láttam hogy ezen a részen van még mit javítani amúgy xD a mostani állapotában nagyon eltérnek: http://puu.sh/jSyNz/74628cbaa3.jpg ezen pedig http://puu.sh/jSySG/08fcba726e.jpg tisztán látszódik hogy jobban illeszkednek a görbék Javitva
5. 00:51:140 (4,5) - ennél is az a baj, hogy a te slidereid túl görbék így nem tudnak "egymáshoz simulni" xD de ha kicsit is változtatsz rajta már rögtön jó lesz:
   http://puu.sh/jSyVr/a23dc676c1.jpg
   ezen a képen látszódik jól. hogy nem illeszkedik szépen: http://puu.sh/jSyXl/e398194d15.jpg Javitva
6. 00:51:807 (1,2) - ezeket picit arréb kell rakni meg alakítani rajtuk és jó lesz - http://puu.sh/jSz1j/085910bdbf.jpg - persze még ez a kép sem tökéletes csak a TE slidereidhez képest közelebb áll, mert nem változtattam rajta sokat X_X Javitva
7. 01:05:807 (3,5) - itt csúnyán mutat ha ennyire közel rakod őket egymáshoz ráadásul ez is csúnya 01:05:140 (1,3) - hogy (3) nincs pontosan az (1)-es alatt
   szóval próbáld meg úgy, hogy az előzőek helyére rakod az új jumpnak megfelelő noteokat, így --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603523
   utána pedig a (5)-öst tedd távolabb és úgy próbálj meg blanket-et csinálni, mert tényleg nem néz ki jól, ha ennyire közel teszed őket: http://puu.sh/jSzbU/60d90c8264.jpg Javitva
8. 00:26:808 (1,2) - itt is ugyanez, túl közel rakod őket és így "össze-visszának" néz ki --> http://puu.sh/jSz6h/3b6918bdb0.jpg Javitva
9. 01:07:307 (3,6) - blanket, megint túl görbe a slidered - http://puu.sh/jSzfv/afd92340fb.jpg Javitva
10. 01:08:140 (1,4) - az (1)-es görbéjén van még mit szépíteni, és a 4-est próbáld még laposabbra, így jobban fog illeszkedni az (1)-eshez (és ahogy elnézem az is volt a célod) - http://puu.sh/jSzi4/47488dd9e7.jpg Javitva
11. 01:12:140 (5,2) - ezeket meg próbáld úgy rendezni/formázni, hogy ne érjenek egymásba, mert az sem mutat jól - http://puu.sh/jSzn3/61004a7e53.jpg
12. 01:17:473 (4) - fura sliderek Ezt nem érzem furának, játszani sem az
13. 01:36:139 (1,2,3,4) - ennél azért szebben is menne ez a pattern 01:36:806 (3) - ezt pedig egyenesre vagy görbére akartad? ha ilyen kis görbét akarsz neki akkor már inkább egyenes legyen >.< --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603556 és https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603557
    meg persze a távolságra ne felejts el figyelni! Javitva
14. 01:37:806 (7,8) - ezeket miért nem rakod pontosan ezek közé 01:37:473 (5,6) - középre? valahogy így: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603563 - és akkor mehetne a (8)-as slider vége arra a helyre, ahol a (4)-es slider vége van Javitva
15. 01:38:473 (1,3) - ez ilyen félig blanket félig nem, melyiket akartad? ha nem blanket akkor látványosan ne legyen az, ha az akkor meg szép legyen, tehát:
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603572 és https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603576 (a (4,1) blanketre is figyelj, mert úgy láttam azt annak szántad csak nem lett elég szép)
    VAGY
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3603582
    akármelyiket is választod, használd a distance snap-et, mert attól egységesebb lesz köztük a távolság (hiszen ezeket nem szántad jumpnak) és szebb lesz Javitva

UI.:
Combo színek: http://puu.sh/jSDRY/c91ab11521.png

[Colours]
Combo1 : 200,119,173
Combo2 : 230,230,230
Combo3 : 255,191,228
Combo4 : 189,34,38

Javitva

KASUM1 wrote:

Little thing : your bg should be 1366x768 Fixed

00:00:142 (1,5) - overlap I don't think overlaps are issues in extra difficulties if they are that far on the timeline.
00:51:807 (1,2,5,6) - stack the circles with sliders head I would have to break that line pattern, it plays well how it's placed now.
01:07:307 (3,1) - stack Done
01:10:973 (9,2) - ^ Done
01:52:806 (5,3) - stack with the slider trail Done
02:02:139 (9,1) - stack with the slider head Fixed that part in another way.
02:34:305 (2,6) - stack these if possible Done
02:57:804 (6,8) - overlap, try to blanket (8) Done
03:07:471 (3,5) - overlap try to stack them Done
03:19:804 (4,6) - overlap blanket (6) Done
03:20:804 (1,3) - stack (3) trail with (1) head Fixed that part in another way.
03:36:303 (2,5) - stack with (5) trail Done

[ Another ] wrote:

KASUM1 wrote:

Little thing : your bg should be 1366x768 Fixed

00:00:142 (1,5) - overlap I don't think overlaps are issues in extra difficulties if they are that far on the timeline.
00:51:807 (1,2,5,6) - stack the circles with sliders head I would have to break that line pattern, it plays well how it's placed now.
01:07:307 (3,1) - stack Done
01:10:973 (9,2) - ^ Done
01:52:806 (5,3) - stack with the slider trail Done
02:02:139 (9,1) - stack with the slider head Fixed that part in another way.
02:34:305 (2,6) - stack these if possible Done
02:57:804 (6,8) - overlap, try to blanket (8) Done
03:07:471 (3,5) - overlap try to stack them Done
03:19:804 (4,6) - overlap blanket (6) Done
03:20:804 (1,3) - stack (3) trail with (1) head Fixed that part in another way.
03:36:303 (2,5) - stack with (5) trail Done

Lumael wrote:

[General]

• 
  Folder:

1. LeadIn: Add some Time LeadIn on the diff file because the song starts on the beginning of the mp3 (Around 1500~2000 should be fine) Done
   
   Other Stuff:
2. Combo Color: Bad... They don't fit at all the background, here I have some suggestions:
   
   collapsed text

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 129,145,188
   Combo2 : 230,230,230
   Combo3 : 0,64,128
   Combo4 : 22,16,135

   Done
3. Storyboard: Some pictures have dimentions more than the allowed by ranking criteria
   Fixed

[Void Genome]

1. 00:03:308 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - It is a bit odd to play something so hard (kind of) whith lots of singletapping, when the pattern used right before on the same rhythm was very calm and easy to play 00:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You have to be consistent with the spread of difficulty through a same section of the song Fixed that part
2. 00:08:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jump feels unecessary and random to my eyes, the rhythm is the same from the beginning which you didn't use any 00:05:475 (1) - With this slider a new section starts in he music but the 1/1 slider fits more than a jump not like the part you mentioned, that jumos fits well on that part
3. 00:46:307 (5,6,7,8,9) - Any reason for jump here too? You didn't use it here 00:43:807 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - and it is the same rhythm 00:43:807 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Changed on that part a bit
4. 00:48:140 (5) - NC here sounds good imo Done
5. 00:51:807 (1,3) - Very minor but they overlap 00:51:807 (1,3) - it is possible to see Done
6. 01:06:640 (1,2) - Increase DS here to make a jump Done
7. This part feels a bit random 01:04:140 - to 01:24:223 - some parts you are following vocals and the other the drums from the remix, it is a bit hard to guess what you will follow next, I suggest you going for the drums all the time These are 2 triangle jumps embedded to each other, polished it to make it more clear
8. 01:46:139 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This long stacked stream may be too hard to read, don't you think? I don't think so and it fits better than a spaced stream
9. 01:57:972 (5,6) - Flow here is a bit awful , doing Control H on 01:58:139 (6) - will help a bit Done
10. 02:00:140 (2,4) - Minor: overlap here Fixed
11. 02:21:138 (7,1) - ^ Fixed
12. 02:22:138 (3,5) - ^ this one is a bit ugly imo Fixed
13. 02:42:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and on: This is such a very long streamy section lol, are you sure you want people to keep streaming all this long? the beginning of the stream is very calm on the song and it's even hard to hear, I think should spam more 1/4 sliders with reverse arrows It's very easy to play, low spacing and it's not even that long, should be okay
14. 02:56:138 (1,3,4) - Triple kill overlap :3 02:56:138 (1,4) - These 2 sliders are far enough on the timeline to not be a problem, 3-4 fixed
15. 02:57:138 (4,6) - ^ Fixed
16. 02:59:471 (3,5) - ^ Fixed that part
17. 03:00:138 (5,7) - Try a blanket here to make the pattern prettier? ^Fixed
18. 03:02:137 (4,6) - Tiny overlap here Fixed
19. 03:13:971 (3,5) - ^ Fixed
20. 03:39:470 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
21. 03:39:803 (4,2) - ^ (I am only linking overlaps that I found ugly, the good ones I didn't) Fixed
22. 03:49:803 (2,4) - ^ Fixed
23. 04:07:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - What about Distance Snap here ? :3 Fixed
24. 04:09:136 (8,1) - Overlap here Fixed
25. 04:10:136 (4,5,6) - Try a 1/1 slider at 04:10:136 - this will follow the rhythm much better The circles are good there imo
26. 04:27:136 (2,4) - Overlap here Fixed
27. 05:05:801 (7,1) - ^ Fixed
28. 05:37:467 (5,7) - ^ Stacking will solve this problem Fixed
29. 05:39:801 (4,6) - Overlap again here :3 Fixed
30. 05:56:967 (7,9) - NC here will work nicely Fixed

1. seems like you're using images from the sb of https://osu.ppy.sh/b/544993 in here, with pretty similar graphic stuff, did you ask Ashasaki for them or is that unintentional?
2. most of your normal whistles are a bit too loud for my tastes, p/4492818 charles explains the problem i currently have with them pretty well in that post
3. the volume for most of the beginning is a bit very loud, the normal sampleset nearly overpowers everything else
4. most of your streams and patterns look really messy, I assume you drew the streams by h hand while activating distance snap or something, at least that's the only way i can explin shapes like 02:08:139 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - where just placing sliders and then going to compose -> convert slider to stream would easily make fore a much neater streamshape (see the random space at around 02:09:805 (1,2,3) - )
5. generally a lot of your jumps feel out of place with a song as steady as this, to explain this a bit better I'll explain what happens when you place a jump
   -> when placing a jump betwen 2 notes, you obviously have to move faster in order to hit the note that is jumped to, thus it puts pressure on the player that has to play the pattern. Logically Jumps would make sense at places that are stressed in the song, and with a song as constant as this one you could try to be more consistent about their usage (e.g. you make one sound instance a jump while making another instance of the same sound an antijump it leads to your map being messy as hell pretty quickly because the song has a really strict system while your map does not)
   examples of this:
   00:08:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this so drastically different than the 2 previous patterns
   01:04:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i can't really see what you're focusing here, it's neither instruments nor vocals because for that 01:04:473 (3,1) - should have more spacing than the whole rest if it was instruments and if it was vocals 01:03:807 (4,1) - should have more space as well as 01:04:973 (6) - in relation to 01:04:640 (4,5,6) - so yes it seems like you're placing 2 trianglepatterns for the sake of placing triangle patterns
   01:09:473 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what exactly is building up here to make you use a buildup spacing pattern?
   01:13:140 (2) - if this is supposed to follow the vocal... uhh that vocal you may want to follow starts in 01:13:307 - ????
   01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - oh look a place where you could use buildup spacing circle patterns because that's what the bass in the song does and you placed sliders all over them :/
   01:54:806 (1) - judging by the way you spaced patterns for vocals i don't get why this doesn't get space but has vocals
   01:59:472 (7) - this plays more like a stop than an actual motion
   02:32:138 - why doies this part get much higher overall spacing than 00:42:807 - onwards while being the same kind of thing repeating?
   so ya, overall i don't have that much a clue of what's going on and what isn't, spacing could make more sense overall this aren't like the only thing, it's all over the place i just decided that this is enough to show you the idea
6. starting from 02:32:138 - inori's hand will be cut off in 4:3 resolution is that intended?
7. overlapping patterns like 02:56:138 (1,3,4) - look unappealing visually, especially when only sliderborders touch, there are a few other instances of these kinda pattern 03:22:804 (1,3) - 03:27:137 (1,3) - etc etc :/

Okoratu wrote:

1. seems like you're using images from the sb of https://osu.ppy.sh/b/544993 in here, with pretty similar graphic stuff, did you ask Ashasaki for them or is that unintentional? No, all of the SB elements were found by me or created by me, havent touched any other SB for it.
2. most of your normal whistles are a bit too loud for my tastes, p/4492818 charles explains the problem i currently have with them pretty well in that post Decreased the volumes by 5%, i dont know if it will fix the problem since on my setup it wasnt that loud
3. the volume for most of the beginning is a bit very loud, the normal sampleset nearly overpowers everything else Decreased the volume of the first 3 sections from 55% to 45%
4. most of your streams and patterns look really messy, I assume you drew the streams by h hand while activating distance snap or something, at least that's the only way i can explin shapes like 02:08:139 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - where just placing sliders and then going to compose -> convert slider to stream would easily make fore a much neater streamshape (see the random space at around 02:09:805 (1,2,3) - ) Fixed that stream and some other to be more consistent
5. generally a lot of your jumps feel out of place with a song as steady as this, to explain this a bit better I'll explain what happens when you place a jump
   -> when placing a jump betwen 2 notes, you obviously have to move faster in order to hit the note that is jumped to, thus it puts pressure on the player that has to play the pattern. Logically Jumps would make sense at places that are stressed in the song, and with a song as constant as this one you could try to be more consistent about their usage (e.g. you make one sound instance a jump while making another instance of the same sound an antijump it leads to your map being messy as hell pretty quickly because the song has a really strict system while your map does not)
   examples of this:
   00:08:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why is this so drastically different than the 2 previous patterns Remapped that part
   01:04:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i can't really see what you're focusing here, it's neither instruments nor vocals because for that 01:04:473 (3,1) - should have more spacing than the whole rest if it was instruments and if it was vocals 01:03:807 (4,1) - should have more space as well as 01:04:973 (6) - in relation to 01:04:640 (4,5,6) - so yes it seems like you're placing 2 trianglepatterns for the sake of placing triangle patterns I think that pattern fits that part of the song as it is, i tried different possibilites but none of them were better
   01:09:473 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what exactly is building up here to make you use a buildup spacing pattern? Remapped to be more consistent
   01:13:140 (2) - if this is supposed to follow the vocal... uhh that vocal you may want to follow starts in 01:13:307 - ???? Fixed
   01:54:806 (1) - judging by the way you spaced patterns for vocals i don't get why this doesn't get space but has vocals Fixed(? im not sure what you mean)
   01:59:472 (7) - this plays more like a stop than an actual motion Fixed
   02:32:138 - why doies this part get much higher overall spacing than 00:42:807 - onwards while being the same kind of thing repeating?
   so ya, overall i don't have that much a clue of what's going on and what isn't, spacing could make more sense overall this aren't like the only thing, it's all over the place i just decided that this is enough to show you the idea Remapped that part a bit
6. starting from 02:32:138 - inori's hand will be cut off in 4:3 resolution is that intended? Fixed
7. overlapping patterns like 02:56:138 (1,3,4) - look unappealing visually, especially when only sliderborders touch, there are a few other instances of these kinda pattern 03:22:804 (1,3) - 03:27:137 (1,3) - etc etc :/ Fixed most unintentional overlaps

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

[General]

• I found no gross violations! The only thing that can prevent rank this colors new combos: they should not merge with the background and to be almost identical. I suggest that instead of 4 colors add shade of pink or red... SB also present in other colors. Readded the colours from Mystyk's mod.

Kiai time

• 2nd kiai time You can ends here 03:57:470 - because the music here has calmed down sharply Fixed

[Void Genome]

• 00:18:474 (5,6) - Why are there different spacings? This confuses. can do the same spacing as in the rest of the stream Fixed
• 00:23:974 (7,8) - This is a very sudden jump - Mark it with a new combo ( as here 00:26:808 (1) ) Done
• 00:29:474 (8) - ^ Done
• 00:52:140 (2,6) - overlap. Try to remove the imposition of a curve Fixed
• 00:58:807 (5) - new combo I dont really think that this should be a NC
• 01:05:140 (1,2) - blanket (Make neater blanket) that's what you have now and this is something that will look better Fixed
• 01:19:640 (3) - move here x:364 y:145 -that to maintain a smooth flow of the game after the slider and will look neater Fixed
• 01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - I propose to increase a little distance between them. in order to avoid overlapping of. that's what you have now and and this is something that will look better Fixed
• 01:21:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this 01:21:473 (1,3,5) - must be a copy of the 01:21:640 (2,4,6) - . But here 01:21:640 (2,4,6) - direct flow. Make the same side 01:21:473 (1,3,5). and 01:22:140 (5,1) - remove overlap Fixed
• 01:37:473 (5) - new combo: here it is necessary to allocate the change spacings. Fixed
• 01:49:472 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
• 02:34:138 (1,2,3,4) - Do it in a rhombus or square. it looks bad . it will be better this way Fixed
• 02:53:471 (1,2,3) - do the same spacings Fixed
• 03:26:804 (6,1,2) - sliders do the same. and make it so that the circle was exactly between them Fixed
• 03:28:137 (6) - new combo Fixed
• 03:29:137 (10) - move here 03:29:470. Otherwise lost rhythm with the large white teak Remapped that part a bit.
• 03:57:553 (1) - move end here 03:59:803 . suitable for vocals and music. because the spinner to finish on a blue tick strange Fixed
• 04:54:135 (1,2) - blanket Fixed
• 04:58:635 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
• 05:14:385 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -It looks very crooked :< Better to do something like this Fixed
• 05:57:466 (3) - new combo. because after a sharp jump is hard to understand Fixed
• 05:57:550 (1) - ends here 06:00:300 Fixed

Maakkeli wrote:

[Void Genome]

I didnt agree with the kickslider suggestions because i think they are more boring to play than a normal stream and i didnt agree woth most of the ctrl+g suggestions so i wont commentate them one by one.

Tried to add more diversity to the jump patterns but the ones that i used fit the music the most imo so i wont commentate them one by one.

00:02:141 (7) - http://puu.sh/kki4w/78492275a7.jpg ? Thats one of the rare places where a reverse slider fits the music imo, so i dont agree
00:04:475 (7) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:05:308 (10) - Hmm... maybe just make 00:05:141 (9) - a 1/2 slider it just feels better imo since there's really nothing playing at 00:05:308 (10) - except some random super silent kick Done
00:05:975 (2,3,4,5,6) - This does not sound right to my ear. Remapped that part a bit
00:23:974 (7,1) - Idk about this. This spacing feels too big (5,53 distance) 00:26:641 (7,1) - and then this jump which is inconsistent with the spacing of the latter. I feel like the more you do these the bigger the spacing should get. Maybe start from something like 3,00 and the last jump could maybe be at 5,00 or more distance but you should experiment this yourself and see what feels the best. Also this 00:40:141 (1) - slider is too round. Yea I got infected with Azer's buttslider thing. Okay now I'm done with this part Decreased few spacings and fixed that slider
00:50:140 (2) - Should the red controlpoint be on the center or something? Anyways I feel like when you do these kind of sliders you make them too sharp but that is just my preference. Fixed
00:58:807 (5) - This just feels too fast. Idk maybe take the sv a bit down It would cause some readability/playability problems i think
01:14:807 (1,2,3) - You can give these more space Done
01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - These too Done
01:38:973 (2) - I feel like this would be better when stacked to 01:39:139 (3) - Done
01:40:473 (4,5) - This feels very awkward when you transition from a huge jump to this kind of super small jump Fixed
02:12:139 (4) - This whistle sounds random Fixed, probably it was a misclick
02:48:804 (1,2,3,4) - You can give kicksliders more space I dont want them to be to hard but i gave them a bit more spacing
02:50:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
03:13:471 (7,8,9) - This triple just sounds awkward Fixed
03:25:470 (1,2,3) - Space more Done
03:52:136 (1,2,3,4) - Spaced inconsistently and you can again give these more space Fixed
04:00:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You could still put more slower sv Yeah this is the slowest part of the music but the vocal is strong enough to keep this SV i think
04:16:136 (4) - This is ugly. Too wiggly that might be the case. Fixed
05:15:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Now this is just lazy repeating the same pattern over and over but just increasing the spacing Remapped that part a bit
05:25:801 (3,4,5) - Space more. Now these overlap a bit and look dumb Done
05:30:801 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
05:32:134 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Done
05:38:133 (7) - http://puu.sh/klxEU/f5989531cf.jpg ? Like the first one
05:43:801 (3) - This maps nothing I think you mean 05:43:634 (2) - but without that circle its sounds weird to me

Asserin wrote:

Void Genome

1. 00:46:807 (9) - It look nice but i think it will be better if CTRL+G :3 It will have nice flow Done
2. 00:00:142 (1,2,3) - Correct blanket cus its uneven a little if u will see this AR on circle u will see that one overlaps the slider and the second not http://puu.sh/krpft/a57208cb9a.jpg Fixed
3. 00:06:641 (4) - CTRL+G ? Its just sugestion Done
4. 00:51:140 (5) - CTRL+G work nice with song :3 But i know what u wanted to make but i think its not bad thats all That would break the pattern and it plays well as it is
5. 02:04:972 (6,7,8) - I think it will be better to play if u will stack this on slider 02:05:305 (1) I dont really like when there is a triplet on a slider start but there is an unmapped blue tick between them, i dont know i just dont like it at all, if you refering to the slider end it wouldnt look so good
6. 02:21:472 (1,2) - Uneven blanet a little Fixed
7. 02:22:138 (3,4,5) - Correct blanket cus its uneven a little if u will see this AR on circle u will see that one overlaps the slider and the second not Fixed
8. 02:24:805 (3) - CTRL+G make nice flow :3 Done
9. 02:40:805 (7) - ^ Done
10. 03:02:471 (5) - CTRL+G pls :3 Same with the same patten above
11. 03:03:471 (8) - ^ ^

riktoi wrote:

[Void Genome]

00:01:475 (5,3) - these could be converted to hitcircles Done with 00:01:475 (5) -

00:09:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think the spacing could be lower for these as they act like bursts Imo they fit the music and the style of the map so they should be okay with that spacing

I will on list the ones that i agree withˇ
01:07:723 -
01:12:057 -
03:19:720 -
03:23:720 -
03:42:720 -
05:03:385 -

02:48:804 (1,2,3,4) - you could make these a bit prettier (02:48:804 (1,1) - follow the same angle and 02:48:971 (2,2) - follow the same angle) Done
02:50:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (maybe increase sv?) Adjusted a bit on the notes, increased SV from .70 to .80

02:52:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - following the vocals might be better here

03:13:471 (7,8,1,2,3) - I think you should make this pattern follow the drum better The music strong here and the vocal too, i will stick with the stream

05:33:467 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make the spacing really small in the start and then make it gradually increase (to maybe to the ds where it's currently) It wouldnt fit the music that well i think
also you should totally lower the hitsounds on these Done

1. 00:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this spacing is weird, you use random, 1.00, 1.40. etc..., I don't feel this song have "high" or "quiet", fix all spacing 1.20x ? because this number, I can see other parts is 1.40x. So you must fix your consistency
2. 00:02:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ same
3. 00:14:975 (7) - should be NC because you style, you put NC in 00:10:975, but other parts not, if you don't wanna NC in 00:14:975 (7), I would said remove nc 00:09:475 (1) and 00:12:141 (1), you really be carefully by you style consistency
4. 00:22:474 (1) - I don't feel need NC, the song is like "continue" prefer remove nc IMO
5. 00:25:141 (1) - ^ same
6. 00:30:474 (1) - ^ same
7. 00:33:141 (1) - ^ same
8. 00:35:807 (1) - ^ same
9. 00:36:807 (1) - you shouldn't NC this, because is inconsistency with you style, example in part 00:34:141 that is not NC, so in 00:36:807 (1) remove nc
10. 00:38:474 (1) - ^ same
11. 00:39:474 (1) - ^ same
12. 00:25:474 (3) - I don't like this curve, try improve curve like you did in 00:22:474 (1)
13. 00:30:807 (3) - ^ same curve
14. 00:32:474 (2) - ^ same
15. 00:38:807 (3) - ^ same
16. 00:46:640 (8,9) - inconsistency spacing, the spacing should 1.40x
17. 00:48:140 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ same
18. 00:42:807 at 01:04:140 - you spacing is kindy random, lot spacing doesn't make sense, lt me give example 00:50:807 (4,5,6) - this spacing you make 1.20x but in part similiar like this in 00:51:807 (1,2) is 1.40x. I suggest recheck your spacing and fix spacing all objects ith DS 1.40x (expect jump and anti-spacing)
19. 01:16:473 (1,2,3) - the shape are different, try use same shape curve ?
20. 01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - is unsysmentric, if fix symentric is better like this http://puu.sh/kHLkM/c897aee759.jpg
21. 01:22:473 (1) - this should keep same place like 01:21:473 (1,3,5), I mean move place to x:304 y:104 and fix spacing stream, http://puu.sh/kHLuI/d3b5ed074a.jpg
22. 01:56:139 (5,6,7) - this flow is weird the 01:56:472 (6) - should be CTRL+G then in 01:56:806 (7) - make jump or normal spacing like this http://puu.sh/kHLSQ/98dcae6a25.jpg better flow IMO
23. 02:15:472 (1) - shouldn't NC
24. 03:20:470 (8,9) - CTRL + G better flow

Pereira006 wrote:

[Void Genome]

Gameplay:

1. 00:00:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this spacing is weird, you use random, 1.00, 1.40. etc..., I don't feel this song have "high" or "quiet", fix all spacing 1.20x ? because this number, I can see other parts is 1.40x. So you must fix your consistency Fixed most of the spacing problems on the entire map
2. 00:14:975 (7) - should be NC because you style, you put NC in 00:10:975, but other parts not, if you don't wanna NC in 00:14:975 (7), I would said remove nc 00:09:475 (1) and 00:12:141 (1), you really be carefully by you style consistency Fixed
3. 00:22:474 (1) - I don't feel need NC, the song is like "continue" prefer remove nc IMO Fixed
4. 00:25:141 (1) - ^ same Fixed
5. 00:30:474 (1) - ^ same Fixed
6. 00:33:141 (1) - ^ same Fixed
7. 00:35:807 (1) - ^ same Fixed
8. 00:36:807 (1) - you shouldn't NC this, because is inconsistency with you style, example in part 00:34:141 that is not NC, so in 00:36:807 (1) remove nc Fixed
9. 00:38:474 (1) - ^ same Fixed
10. 00:39:474 (1) - ^ same Fixed
11. 00:25:474 (3) - I don't like this curve, try improve curve like you did in 00:22:474 (1) Fixed
12. 00:30:807 (3) - ^ same curve Fixed
13. 00:32:474 (2) - ^ same Fixed
14. 00:38:807 (3) - ^ same Fixed
15. 01:16:473 (1,2,3) - the shape are different, try use same shape curve ? Fixed
16. 01:20:140 (1,2,3,4) - is unsysmentric, if fix symentric is better like this http://puu.sh/kHLkM/c897aee759.jpg Fixed
17. 01:22:473 (1) - this should keep same place like 01:21:473 (1,3,5), I mean move place to x:304 y:104 and fix spacing stream, http://puu.sh/kHLuI/d3b5ed074a.jpg Fixed
18. 01:56:139 (5,6,7) - this flow is weird the 01:56:472 (6) - should be CTRL+G then in 01:56:806 (7) - make jump or normal spacing like this http://puu.sh/kHLSQ/98dcae6a25.jpg better flow IMO Fixed
19. 02:15:472 (1) - shouldn't NC Fixed
20. 03:20:470 (8,9) - CTRL + G better flow Fixed

Midana wrote:

00:04:975 (8) - Delete note, also you can use use 2 short sliders starting 00:04:475 (7) - and ending 00:04:975 (8) - Done (a bit differently)
00:09:975 (6,7,8) - Move to 1 tick left and add here slider 00:10:141 (8) - in the ending of this stream Done (a bit differently)
I got your idea but i mapped that whole part differently and it fits the music too so i dont really think that i should change it
00:10:975 (1) - Trriple here as well
00:11:475 (5) - Trriple which have slider in the end
00:11:975 (8) - Trriple
00:12:308 (3) - note
00:12:475 (4) - ^
00:12:641 (5) - ^
00:12:808 (6,7,8) - Trriple with long slider at the end or slider with reverse arrow
00:20:808 (5) - Slider should end here 00:21:141 also ucan put here a sible note
00:24:641 (2) - Slider for vocal Done
00:25:141 (3,4) - Rechange for slider Done
00:26:808 (1) - 1/2 slider 00:27:141 (1) - 1/2 slider with reverse arrow Done (a bit differently)
00:27:808 (1) - ^Same Done
00:28:808 (1) - Add note Done
00:29:474 (1) - 1/2 + add note 00:29:808 (2) - Done
00:30:474 (4) - 1/2 slider Done
00:32:141 (1) - Remade for 1/2 slider Done
00:32:474 (2) - Delete slider and put here 2 notes Done
Same things for following rhythm in this part
01:25:473 (1) - Do this break please SV 0.5-0.75 audio 20-40% The map is 6 mins long so its really exhausting so i think where a break is appropriate its should be there
01:37:806 (3,4) - remade for 2 1/2 sliders I dont agree with it
01:48:222 (1) - 1/3 for this moment Why? there is a 1/4 stream in the music
03:13:471 (7) - Stream should starting from there It sounds better as it is
04:30:802 (1) - After this timing you need to use sliders with reverse arrows for following rhythm I got the point but i prefer the stream
05:11:801 (7) - 1/3 As above
05:41:300 (2) - delete There is a pretty loud beat in the music so i dont agree with this

Cheesecake wrote:

[Void Genome]

00:11:474 (6) - This flows better if you make it a straight slider and rotate by -40 degrees selection centre I dont fully agree but changed a little bit
00:20:808 (5) - The angle of this slider is pretty sharp compared to the stream before, try moving the end anchor point to X:412 Y:312 Fixed
00:46:640 (8,9) - I've noticed that this blanket is slightly different to 00:45:307 (4,5,6,7) - , you can see this clearly at 00:46:390, (7) is completely overlapped whereas (9) is slightly off. Fixed
00:53:140 (5) - This would be more interesting if you moved it either up or down, rather than having 00:52:974 (4,5,6) - as a straight line The line pattern plays pretty well and i dont really want to break it
01:02:473 (3,4) - Blanket?Fixed
01:10:973 (6,1) - Make a blanket? Might make the distance from (5) to (6) too short though Changed it a bit
01:18:806 (2,3) - Improper blanket Fixed
01:35:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^ They are not supposed to be blankets
01:40:639 (5) - Move the final anchor point a tiny bit down so that the blanket on (4) is even it was already even
01:44:139 (1,2,3,4) - Blankets They are not supposed to be blankets
02:13:305 (4) - Have this be similiar to (2)? Done
02:42:138 (3) - End point to X:434 Y:294 ? Done
02:42:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This could look and play better if you use 3.5x ds (omg that's a thing now ) It would break the build up feeling that is in the song
03:01:304 (1,2) - Make it so that the new combo starts on the new measure Fixed
03:11:804 (3,4) - This blanket is a bit off Fixed
03:12:971 - It feels like there's a hit object missing here Fixed
03:55:636 (3,4,5) - You should try and keep this kind of change in direction on a new combo
03:56:386 (4,5,6) - ^
04:00:136 (1,2,3) - Uneven spacing, set DS to 1.0x and reselect (2) and it should fix itself Fixed
04:00:803 (4,5) - Improper blanket, using slider follow circle as a guide Fixed
04:00:803 (4,5) - NC since long hold starting on a new measure I wnet with another way of placing NCs and it would break the consistency of them
04:02:636 (2,1) - Similarly, have the NC start on the new measure The new rhythm starts on 04:02:636 (1) -, this is why i have the NC on the red tick
04:04:136 (1) - NC Done
04:04:636 - Feels like there's a hit object missing again That sound is intentionally not mapped
04:07:469 (1,2,3,4) - Either have it as a perfectly straight line or a zig zag pattern, looks untidy as it is now Fixed
04:31:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Increasing the distance spacing here would be appropriate, 1.0x seemed good but it's your choice I will leave it as it is
04:50:302 (1) - You could delete the second spinner and extend this to 04:53:802 , the hitsound on a blue tick doesn't sound nice The spinner is almost silent so its not a problem
04:55:385 (7,1) - Move this as a selection to X:466 Y:307 ? The curve of the triplet doesn't feel right with that jump Its fine as it is imo
05:12:135 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This should be reduced to the DS of the previous streams imo It fits that part of the song, i will leave it as it is
05:15:468 (4,1) - Blanket Fixed
05:29:634 (6,1) - Bad flow Fixed

1. 00:13:475 (3) - Add new combo here instead of 00:13:308 (1) ? It feels better that way, because it indicates the downbeat
2. ^ 00:14:975 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:15:474 (4). Same as above.
3. 01:01:140 (1,2) - The body of the second slider is really close to the first and it feels ugly IMO. Try to curve it in a way that they don't nearly overlap.
4. 03:22:637 (6,1) - Same ^

xDarxen wrote:

[Void Genome]

1. 00:13:475 (3) - Add new combo here instead of 00:13:308 (1) ? It feels better that way, because it indicates the downbeat Done
2. ^ 00:14:975 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to 00:15:474 (4). Same as above. Done
3. 01:01:140 (1,2) - The body of the second slider is really close to the first and it feels ugly IMO. Try to curve it in a way that they don't nearly overlap. Fixed
4. 03:22:637 (6,1) - Same ^I dont agree, that pattern plays fine and its not ugly imo

MrSergio wrote:

[General]

• I find that your HP is a bit too low, while the OD is a bit too high... HP7, OD8 would be the best imo HP increased to 6.5, OD should be fine on 9

[Void Genome]

• 00:02:141 (8) - I usually try to avoid wasting strong beats with slider ends, unless I'm making a particular pattern or something like that. So here's an option on how to remove that repeat: Image Fixed
  
  00:05:141 (9) - Since you use the same shape as for 00:04:475 (7,8) - means that you followed an exact same sound for all, right? Imo 9 shouldn't be a slider tho, because you have a double strong beat (your whistles are saying the same thing too). Convert 9 into 2 circles maybe. Coordinates... well, let's stack them on 284,112 maybe Fixed
  
  00:06:641 (4,7) - These are called passive sliders, since you start them on a red tick. It's not right/wrong, but in this case they feel a bit off because you used only sliders starting on white ticks till now... Above all 00:07:641 (7) - the last beat is completely wasted :/
  
  00:09:975 (6,7,8) - Just a little/personal suggestion here: since this part is a bit different from the rest you should emphasize it with a different pattern imo. So what about stacking those 3 objects on 6's coordinates? This way you also give more impact to 8's tail Fixed
  
  00:13:225 - Imo you should add a note here, because there's still a stream in the song I can hear. Either convert 6 into 2 circles or put another circle after the current slider... Fixed
  
  00:15:808 - Tbh, that deathstream is placed where there isn't any actual deathstream imo, but well, it's a matter a matter of style I guess... There is a stream in the music
  
  00:41:224 (1) - Isn't this spinner finishing 1/2 earlier? I can clearly hear that the sounds end at 00:42:474 - (or maybe something like 1/8 earlier of that, but who cares) Fixed
  
  00:44:807 (1,2,3) - These objects stand out among the combo, for the sole reason that they have higher spacing. Should I assume they have a particular meaning or were they just random? I mapped most of the piano-ish sounds as jumps, so i did it here too
  
  00:46:807 (9,1) - This spacing is a bit short now, compared to the other similar 1/1 breaks you used before. Options are to either increase spacing (obviously) or to stack the circle under the slider... Fixed
  
  01:20:140 - 01:24:140 - Oh God my ears @.@ Too many finishes. Halve their number please: on white ticks is already more than enough imo Removed finnishes.
  
  01:35:806 (1,2,3) - Ok... I have a couple of concerns here: 01:35:806 (1) - should be converted into 2 circles if you hear the vocals, and the overlap between 01:35:806 (1,3) - stands out too much seeing you don't have such cramped parts anywhere else in your combo. So, here's the solution: Convert 1 into 2 circles and stack them both at around 296,272 Fixed
  
  01:38:473 (1) - Am I the only one hearing a beat in the middle of this slider? xD And I do not hear at all the slider's start...
  Ok, so, if you want to keep the slider's start beat, consider using something like this (I could explain all the pattern I did there, but it takes quite a few time xD) Fixed
  
  01:48:806 (8,9) - Imo, 8 should be with 1/8 snap and 9 should either be a single circle or with a SV change, because you waste the particular sound which this object follows in the music. Image 1/8 slider fixed, no SV change needed there imo
  
  02:00:472 (3,5) - The second object is not visible, try to move it. This is a serious matter actually and you must move it, even by just few pixels, but you have to Fixed
  
  02:03:139 (4,6) - Same ^. There isn't enough time to make the first object disappear completely, therefore the second one is totally obscured Fixed
  
  02:04:972 (6,7,8,1) - This is completely counter-rhythm-wise. The slider start has to be placed on the white tick no matter what here.
  What happens here is that the previous triplet puts a lot of emphasis on each of the 3 notes forming it, but the real emphasis goes to your next slider's start because of the jump. But there is no strong beat there!
  Little suggestion to clear up the mess x) Fixed
  
  02:06:139 (5,7) - Visually speaking, the distance between these notes isn't the same as between 02:06:472 (7,9,11) - Fixed
  
  02:07:139 (11,1) - NC goes always on white ticks, unless you have some sliders ruining the pattern :3 Fixed
  
  02:10:805 (9,1) - NC on 9, since that's where the change in spacing happens Fixed
  
  02:12:472 (5) - No whistle here? Fixed
  
  02:18:638 (2) - The spacing here feels way too short after having all those giant triangle patterns :/ Maybe move it to around... 64,184 or 348,168 (depending in which direction you want that last triangle) Fixed
  
  02:18:805 (3) - Missing NC? Fixed
  
  02:20:472 (2) - This slider doesn't look that great, it's too cramped :/ What about using the same shape of 1 maybe? Like this Fixed
  
  02:28:138 (5) - This is the only slider not copypasted in this combo x) Maybe something like this? Fixed
  
  02:28:805 (7) - Since this slider has a different meaning, what about making it straight? Just to make it stand out more among the others... Fixed
  
  02:30:805 (3) - Seeing the spacing before this object and the spacing after it, I'd suggest using a NC here
  
  02:34:471 (3,4,5) - This passage feels a bit awkward seeing your other patterns :/ Try doing a Ctrl + G on 02:34:471 (3,4) - and another Ctrl + G on 02:34:805 (5) - (but you could even leave it like this if you don't mind the big jump)
  
  02:37:471 (5) - Another Ctrl +G ? (just for a better flow and consistency with your spacing) Fixed
  
  Consider that passages like 02:36:138 (9,1) - or 02:38:805 (9,1) - are a bit too short (spacing) compared to the rest of your jumps Fixed
  
  02:42:638 (5,1) - This is almost a 1/4 seeing your streams at the start of the map, so can you increase the spacing a little? Fixed
  
  The only complain about the nest deathstream is that 02:42:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is a bit too cramped, or rather, they aren't really tidy: While you keep curving constantly with 02:44:138 (1,2,3,4) - , I can't really understand the meaning behind 02:42:805 (1,2,3,4) - (apart from seeing that 1 and 4 have the same angle, as well as 2 and 3) Fixed? idk, should be fine now
  
  02:51:471 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Whether convert 5 and 6 into circles or convert 1,2,3,4 into 1/4 sliders for consistency I dont really see a reason for that
  
  03:03:804 (8,9) - Instead of claps here, I'd rather put a finish on 03:04:137 (1) - I dont agree
  
  03:13:721 - I would have mapped this beat tho... it feels strange to interrupt the stream like that I dont agree
  
  03:22:804 (1) - Can you make more room for the circle you have there? It feels a bit too cramped >.< (A blanket could be 1000 times better *runs*) Fixed
  
  03:28:804 (3,4,5) - 4 shouldn't have that big jump to it, because it is on a red tick and the beat on it isn't strong as much as for 3 and 5
  What about stacking 4 on top of 5? Fixed
  
  03:33:304 (3,1) - Awfully short compared to your previous patterns :/ And also, your stream's curve goes counter-clock-wise, while your triangles were clock-wise... Fixed the distance
  
  03:34:803 (5) - NC? Fixed
  
  03:34:887 (1,1) - Having the spinner like that is... I dunno what it is lol. I'd prefer using the spinner's end more wisely, either as a beat (moving the end at 03:36:137 - ) or either like an introduction to the next pattern (moving the end at 03:35:803 - ) Fixed
  
  03:39:137 (2) - Ctrl + G? You did it for 03:39:803 (4) - x) Fixed
  
  03:44:970 (6) - Seeing that the jump 6 --> 1 is a bit anti-climatic with the rest of the spacing, what about moving it at around 460,108 Fixed
  
  04:00:136 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bit too many whistles here @.@ I would remove whistles from all the slider heads of 04:00:470 (3,4,5) - ... but imo the pattern is way more problematic in this case: it doesn't follow the rhythm. I'm not gonna tell you exactly in detail how and what here, but you basically skipped all the strong beats and put emphasis on the weaker ones.
  Something like this follows the same rhythm you follow later on from 04:02:636 (1) - on ward Thats my favourite part of the song and i mapped it as i think it should be mapped, no change will happen
  
  04:04:136 (1,2) - Spacing too short compared to the rest :/ Fixed
  
  04:07:469 (1,2,3,4) - --> this ? No
  
  04:10:136 (4,5) - Imo stacking too many of them is really boring and doesn't fit that well too. So what about moving these 2 away? Maybe converting them into a slider too... I already mentioned it in a previous mod
  
  04:25:969 (6,7,8,9) - --> [url=http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3997247][this/url] ? No
  
  04:28:802 (3) - Ctrl + G? Fixed
  
  04:29:469 (5) - Missing NC? Fixed
  
  04:30:802 - I'd rather follow vocals from here on tbh... (missing NC on 04:32:135 (5) - btw) Fixed NC
  
  04:50:302 (1,1) - The first one should end at 04:52:135 - imo tho... Fixed
  
  04:56:135 (3,5) - Kinda uncool overlap :/ Fixed
  
  05:06:801 (2) - Ctrl + G? Fixed
  
  05:08:468 (5,6) - This is clock-wise, while 05:07:801 (1,2,3,4,5) - are counter-clock-wise :/ That's why that passage feels a bit too "forced" on the player Fixed
  
  05:20:134 (3,4) - Better stacking them than having that strange decrease in spacing (which isn't even balanced: 3->4 =/= 4->5) Fixed
  
  05:25:301 (7,1) - You put way more emphasis on 7 which is on a red tick than 1. Maybe move 7 to around 108,156? Or something like that, I dunno... Fixed
  
  05:33:467 - The first half of the stream looks a bit random tho... The shape is like hand-drawn compared to the second half Fixed
  
  05:49:217 - As for the beginning of the map, I'd rather use this beat Fixed
  
  05:57:550 (1) - This spinner should end at 06:00:425 - (using 1/8 snaps) (Use 25% playback rate and you'll notice it) Fixed

Pereira006 wrote:

HELLLLLLOOOO!!!!! HIIIIII

[Void Genome]

Gameplay:

1. 00:04:141 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - would be nice if you keep spacing 1.30x DS if you fix this don't forget stuff blanket, etc.. what you did Fixed
2. 00:08:475 (3) - you sure wanna keep this overlap with 00:07:641 (8) - ? my view is ugly overlap IMO I feel this can improve overlap or change placements Fixed
3. 00:14:975 (5) - put NC here and remove in 00:15:474 (1) Fixed
4. 00:27:808 (1,2) - NC in 1 and remove 2 Talk in irc Fixed
5. 00:51:807 (1,2) - should be keep 1.40x Fixed
6. 00:58:807 (5) - as you style you put NC every 2/1 with this part, so this should be NC Fixed
7. 01:02:473 (3,4) - missing fix spacing 1.40x Fixed
8. 01:57:972 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wrong place NC, remove NC in 01:58:139 (1) - and 01:59:972 (1) - and put NC in 01:59:472 (8), this should be fix by you style like you did in 01:49:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) and vocals is same before Fixed
9. 02:32:805 (3,4,5) - weird spacing should be 1.40x Fixed
10. 02:35:471 (7,8,9) - ^ same Fixed
11. 02:59:971 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same Fixed
12. 03:04:637 (2,3) - WHY 1.20x ? I don't getting, isn't should 1.40x ? you have to be carefully spacing because you style is inconsistency :(:(:(:(:(:(:(: Fixed
13. 03:05:304 (4,5) - I know you do this but 1.40x with blanket still nice Fixed
14. 03:12:137 (4) - Missing NC Fixed
15. 03:15:137 (3,4) - inconsistency spacing Fixed
16. 03:22:637 (6,1) - well just saying the vocal is high, make jump or 1.40x is make sense fit with this vocal IMO Fixed

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[General]

1. The source should be: ギルティクラウン according to this website Fixed
2. Add "OP2" since it was the second OP of this song. Fixed
3. AR -0.2 for a better flow. I don't think it would make a big difference by setting the AR on 9. Done
4. HP -0.5 to lead players don't die too soon. the streams at the beginning might possibly make kill the players. Fixed
5. Reduce the OD a bit. You have very short spinners like this 00:41:224 (1) that players might get 100 if they don't spin faster. Considering reducing to 8.2 ~ 8.7 I will staay with OD9, im pretty slow on spinners but i managed to not get 100 on the spinners everytime i played the map, it shouldnt be a problem for the average

[Void Genome]

1. 00:15:891 (5,6,7,1,2) - This pattern makes an awkward flow because the movement is forced and creates a very stuck pattern. It would make more sense if you have consistency the DS in this part as well as you did in the long next stream. Fixed
2. 00:47:807 (3,4) The spacing of these two objects isn't the same as the previous 00:47:474 (1,2) - So it would be better if it managed 1.40x as well as you did before. Fixed the distance, not 1.40 because its supposed to be a short jump
3. 00:47:640 (2,4) Remove the whistles of these objects. They're really noisy imo and I think it would fit better if you leave with the auto hitsound. Consider doing the same here 00:44:974 (2,4) - It would sound really bad and i did the same with most of the piano sounds so it would break the consistency
4. 00:48:140 (5) Add NC here to keep consistency with the NC combing you managed in the previous pattern 00:44:807 (1,2,3,4,1) - Fixed
5. 00:52:974 (4,6) Change the sample-set of these two objects from Normal to Soft to leave the song instruments be audible here. Done
6. 00:56:474 (1,2,3,4) This 1/1 rhythm doesn't play bad, but it's ignoring a lot of important beats that would've made a more enjoyable pattern. Like this I want to have some easier parts and there are very few parts in the music where it fits so i will stay with the 1/1
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7. 01:07:473 (4) I'd rather don't do a hidden stack since you placed a jump here to (4) to (5). It would be better if you placed it here 228|104 I agee but on that coordinate it looks a bit strange, placed somewhere else
8. 01:10:640 (4,6) These two circles make a very monotonous jump since they're a bit closer to each other, It would be better if you move these objects a bit to the left to make a readable flow. Like this Fixed
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9. 01:40:473 (4) Stack this object over this 01:40:639 (5) slider's head - as well as you did before with this 01:37:806 (3,4) - Fixed
10. 02:31:305 (4,1) Remove the stack of the (4) to the (1). It really kills the momentum of what the stream gives. Fixed
11. 03:20:470 (8,9) This is bit exaggerated compared to the density of the previous jumps. Consider reducing the DS of this section. Fixed
12. 03:37:970 (4) Remove the stack of the (4) to the (5). It plays really awkward since you built up jumps before. Consider doing the same here 03:45:970 (5,6) and here 03:48:636 (8,9) I dont agree, for me theose stacks are pretty enjoyable
13. From 04:30:802 (1) to 04:32:052 (4) is clearly overmapped. It would have flowed better a big slider that had followed the vocals as you did it in the whole set. I agree on 04:30:802 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but on 04:31:469 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - there is definitely a a stream, changed the pattern a bit
14. 04:54:802 (3,6) Ctrl + G these to make a proper shape star pattern. (Just in the jumpy part) Also recommend you to use the same DS here. I dont really understand this, the pattern is already a proper star pattern
15. 04:56:468 (4) The flow of this slider is a big stuck because it's not really intuitive. I highly suggest to do Ctrl + G here to improve the readability. Consider doing the same here 04:56:802 (5) - Fixed
16. 05:05:801 (7) Turn this slider into a 1/2 with a reverse and remove this object 05:06:301 (8) - Agree with the 1/2 reverse but the 05:06:301 (8) - should be there
17. 05:41:300 (2) Overmapped. There's no audible beat here to emphasize with a circle. It would be better if you remove it. There is definitely

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GranDSenpai wrote:

IMO AR 9.6 suits this song A LOT better. I dont think that a 180BPM map with only 5.74 stars should be anything above 9.5 (even 9.5 sounds too high). AR9 should be fine

00:15:474 (4) - Plays better if you don't make the slider repeat. I dont agree
00:58:807 (1) - i like it. but IMO you could map the bass notes. This is one of the few spots where mapping the vocal is better imo
02:04:805 (5,6,7,1) - sightreading this is very confusing. at least for me. you could try to move 5 and it makes it more readable. I never had an issue with it neither testplayers and it also would break the pattern
02:06:639 (8,9,10,1) - dunno if it's just me but this part seems very repetitive. even though it's only a couple of notes I want to stay consistent with the mapping of the similar parts and imo it plays well
02:18:805 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tidy this stream up. it looks kinda un-even (the way i do it is change CS to 7 then spacing on streams become really obvious . i think it's only 02:19:555 (2) - this note thats a bit to the left that makes it look wonky Cleaned up a little, now it should be fine
02:45:471 (1) - this whole stream. the same thing as above :* 02:47:721 (4,5,6) - this is wonky <3 Cleaned up a little, now it should be fine
03:18:470 (7) - slider seems to start earlier than it should. try making this slider start at 03:18:637 - and place a note 03:18:470 - here ~~~ Fixed
03:54:803 (1) - same as last stream~ I dont really see much problem with it but cleaned this one up too a bit