REDALiCE feat. Ayumi Nomiya - Crime Wave

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Topic Starter
12Jan21

Mollon wrote:

hi~ here is my mod

hard
same rhythm brings same things to be fixed and i'll only point once,so please check your map~
00:38:143 (4,5) - it's not the same as 00:39:682 (3,4) - so dont use the same distance to avoid reading problems.
00:44:297 (4,5,6,1) - sounds weird,the rhythm is...
00:41:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - single notes placed like this seems not comfortable to play in Hard diff.
00:46:413 (7,1) - distance
00:48:336 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - hmm.. a little too hard for hard diff.use some reverse sliders instead.
01:30:260 (4,5) - make it blanket and it would look better~
02:06:126 (2) - fix the slider shape
02:11:222 (5,6,7) - in another its ok,but in hard..
02:26:222 (8,1) - make the distance bigger or just put 1 on 8's body.
03:10:839 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - dont hide like this....
HP5.5 is okay.

another
all diff should start at the same time...
00:41:027 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - rhythm problem.should move 1/4 later.
01:08:144 (5,6,7) - move the head of the slider remoted from others to look neatly
01:19:010 (7) - hmm
01:35:068 (6,7,8,9) - sounds a little noisy.so decrease the volume~
02:13:914 (8) - rhythm problem.
02:52:570 (15,16,17) - fix the distance.
03:31:994 (14,15) - 15 is too much.use more nc

>w<
Thanks alot for your mod! ^-^
LigerZero
[Metadata]
Title:Crime Wave OK
TitleUnicode:Crime Wave OK
Artist:REDALiCE feat Ayumi Nomiya Added "." in "feat"
ArtistUnicode:REDALiCE feat Ayumi Nomiya Added "." in "feat" and change "Ayumi Nomiya" to "野宮あゆみ"
Creator:12Jan21 OK
Source:Touhou Change to "東方Project"
Tags:satellite dagger-gazel alice's emotion 東方緋想天 ibuki suika saigetsu broken moon scarlet weather rhapsody rhapsody c78 comiket Remove "satellite dagger-gazel alice's emotion rhapsody c78 comiket" because you copy in Beatmap By DELiS and Added "ALiCE'S EMOTiON yoshikazu nagai Tailwinds Reitaisai7 RED Disc A Comiket78 Broken Moon Pre-Battle Touhou Suimusou Immaterial and Missing Power Eastern Heaven of scarlet perception staff roll theme"

but i'm have song in 2 albums
Topic Starter
12Jan21

LigerZero wrote:

[Metadata]
Title:Crime Wave OK
TitleUnicode:Crime Wave OK
Artist:REDALiCE feat Ayumi Nomiya Added "." in "feat"
ArtistUnicode:REDALiCE feat Ayumi Nomiya Added "." in "feat" and change "Ayumi Nomiya" to "野宮あゆみ"
Creator:12Jan21 OK
Source:Touhou Change to "東方Project"
Tags:satellite dagger-gazel alice's emotion 東方緋想天 ibuki suika saigetsu broken moon scarlet weather rhapsody rhapsody c78 comiket Remove "satellite dagger-gazel alice's emotion rhapsody c78 comiket" because you copy in Beatmap By DELiS and Added "ALiCE'S EMOTiON yoshikazu nagai Tailwinds Reitaisai7 RED Disc A Comiket78 Broken Moon Pre-Battle Touhou Suimusou Immaterial and Missing Power Eastern Heaven of scarlet perception staff roll theme"

but i'm have song in 2 albums
Thanks for your mod!
Vitis13
8-)
lcfc
I could make the Normal level if you're still looking for someone to do so. :P
Topic Starter
12Jan21

haroderm13 wrote:

I could make the Normal level if you're still looking for someone to do so. :P
Sure, more difficulties = more fun with ranking this map :D
lcfc

12Jan21 wrote:

haroderm13 wrote:

I could make the Normal level if you're still looking for someone to do so. :P
Sure, more difficulties = more fun with ranking this map :D
Alright, I'm done. c:
The only problem is that I can't find a way to share the osu! file... any ideas?
Topic Starter
12Jan21

haroderm13 wrote:

The only problem is that I can't find a way to share the osu! file... any ideas?
Find your osu! file, then find "songs" file and then find file with my beatmap (349542 REDALiCE feat Ayumi Nomiya - Crime Wave). After that, copy your difficulty to somewhere else and open it with any text program. You'l see text. That's your beatmap, so send me all of that in message. ;)
Byza
Hey there, from #modreq

Another

  1. 00:39:681 (10,11,12) - Not fitting the beat
  2. 00:40:162 (1) - Out of the beat
  3. 00:40:354 (2) - :(
  4. 00:50:932 (6,7,8) - Out of the beat
  5. 00:51:702 (9) - same
  6. 00:57:086 (3,4,5) - Out of time. The problem is on (3)
  7. 01:10:741 (1,2,3,4,2) - Thats overmapped (and out of time)
  8. 01:22:375 (8,9,10,11) - This sounds nice, but its a strange overlap. I would recommend you to try something like this:
  9. 01:26:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps (and the following) have a really unnatural pattern. I trully suggest you to try and change it... maybe for a symmetrical pattern? It just feels so strange while playing. Spacing is incredibly unstable.
  10. 02:09:011 (4,5,6) - Same than in 01:22:375 (8,9,10,11)
  11. 02:40:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same problem than in 01:26:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
  12. 03:12:371 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These 6 circles are strange while playing, difficult to time and tap. I recommend you to use 3 sliders in fancy shapes, If you want to try that.
  13. 03:15:453 (3,4,5,6,7) - What about 2 sliders and a circle, in a symm pattern?
  14. 03:23:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I think you overuse circles there (and in the following sections) a bit, and makes the section a bit boring
  15. 03:34:302 (1,2,1,2) - The spacing between those sliders is really big, in order of the time you have. What about overlapping the (2), or making a perfect circular pattern with the sliders.
  16. 03:47:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same weird jumps

Give a shot at Aimod(Ctrl+Shift+A) for minor problems. I also think you need to rethink the spacing, as it is really inconsistent, but I am not the best modder for that.

Sorry if I didn't explain myself really well, but my english today is shitty.
send me a message for anything/remod or whatever.
If my suggestions doesn't fit your mapping style, feel free to ignore them!

Gl on rank.
Topic Starter
12Jan21

Byza wrote:

Hey there, from #modreq

Another

  1. 00:39:681 (10,11,12) - Not fitting the beat
  2. 00:40:162 (1) - Out of the beat
  3. 00:40:354 (2) - :(
  4. 00:50:932 (6,7,8) - Out of the beat
  5. 00:51:702 (9) - same
  6. 00:57:086 (3,4,5) - Out of time. The problem is on (3)
  7. 01:10:741 (1,2,3,4,2) - Thats overmapped (and out of time)
  8. 01:22:375 (8,9,10,11) - This sounds nice, but its a strange overlap. I would recommend you to try something like this:
  9. 01:26:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps (and the following) have a really unnatural pattern. I trully suggest you to try and change it... maybe for a symmetrical pattern? It just feels so strange while playing. Spacing is incredibly unstable.
  10. 02:09:011 (4,5,6) - Same than in 01:22:375 (8,9,10,11)
  11. 02:40:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same problem than in 01:26:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
  12. 03:12:371 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These 6 circles are strange while playing, difficult to time and tap. I recommend you to use 3 sliders in fancy shapes, If you want to try that.
  13. 03:15:453 (3,4,5,6,7) - What about 2 sliders and a circle, in a symm pattern?
  14. 03:23:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I think you overuse circles there (and in the following sections) a bit, and makes the section a bit boring
  15. 03:34:302 (1,2,1,2) - The spacing between those sliders is really big, in order of the time you have. What about overlapping the (2), or making a perfect circular pattern with the sliders.
  16. 03:47:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same weird jumps

Give a shot at Aimod(Ctrl+Shift+A) for minor problems. I also think you need to rethink the spacing, as it is really inconsistent, but I am not the best modder for that.

Sorry if I didn't explain myself really well, but my english today is shitty.
send me a message for anything/remod or whatever.
If my suggestions doesn't fit your mapping style, feel free to ignore them!

Gl on rank.
Thanks alot for your mod~ ^-^ I'l apply only some things for now... If there will be more sugestions to do it, I'l do it. (:
jawns
Let's give this a mod then! (from modreq)
Note: I explain the reason behind most of my points in the beginning of the "insane" part, so you might wanna start with that one
00:38:143 (4,5) - Add a note in between these two
00:39:970 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter
00:46:605 (1) - Make 1/4 shorter
00:55:836 (1) - ^
00:56:893 (4) - ^
00:57:374 (5) - ^
00:58:143 (1) - ^
00:58:528 (2) - Move 1/4 back, make 1/4 shorter
01:34:298 (4) - End not snapped
01:52:375 (5) - Move 1/4 back
01:53:529 (3) - End not snapped
01:53:818 (4) - Make 1/4 shorter
02:10:453 (3) - ^
02:10:837 (4) - Move 1/4 back
02:11:222 (5) - Make 1/4 shorter
03:55:840 (7) - End not snapped
00:44:778 (1) - Delete this slider, and make a note 1/4 further forward
01:52:376 (5) - Move 1/4 back
01:58:242 (5,6) - Move first note 1/4 forward, second note 1/4 back
01:58:722 (1) - Add note here, make slider 2/4 shorter, move slider 2/4 forward
00:40:162 (1,2,3) - These doesn't follow the rhythm of the song. You should move them all 1/4 back and add a note at 00:40:835. (a good rule of thumb is to map on the white and red lines when doing normal/slow parts, and us the blue lines for triples/streams. There are exceptions, like 00:46:028 (2,3) - which is mapped correctly, so be careful!)
00:44:298 (4,5,6) - When having triples like these (played very fast one after another) you either want them to be in a stack, or with short distance in between, like a mini stream. You usually don't want small jumps, and you definitely don't want it to jump between the two first notes, and stack the two last notes.
00:46:316 (4) - Move this 1/4 forward. Again, white and red lines. You should also make the distance a bit larger, since the note hits quite long after the one before
00:50:932 (6,7,8,9,10) - Delete the last one of these, and move the rest 1/4 forward (white and red)
00:57:086 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Move 1/4 forward
01:15:068 (7) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
01:32:953 (2,3) - Move 1/4 forward (an exception to the "white red rule, ugh). The weird thing is, you did it right in the three next notes :P
01:34:395 (5) - Move 1/4 forward, make it 1/4 shorter
Second verse makes a lot more sense than the first one. However i would still make a few changes (so it fits the song better, and is more similar to the first verse)
01:52:375 (5) - Move 1/4 back, so it comes at the same time as the vocals.
01:53:915 (6) - ^
01:58:242 (5,6,7) - Delete the first note, move the slider 1/4 back, and make it 1/4 longer (so it fits with the vocals)
02:00:069 (4) - Move 1/4 back, make 1/4 longer
02:04:300 (4,5,6) - Delete second note, make first slider 1/4 longer, move last slider 1/4 back, and make it 1/4 longer
02:10:838 (7) - Move 1/4 back
02:15:261 (1) - Move 1/4 forward, make 1/4 shorter
02:28:916 (7) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
02:46:801 (2,3) - Move 1/4 forward
02:48:338 (5) - Move 1/4 forward, make it 1/4 shorter
03:34:686 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter (so it matches the beat)
03:36:610 (4) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
03:58:629 (5) - Move 1/4 back
00:38:143 (4,5) - Make first slider 1/4 shorter, move second slider 1/4 back
01:00:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Add note to the end of the stream, move slider 1/4 forward, delete last note
01:37:087 (2) - Move 1/4 forward
01:52:375 (4) - Move 1/4 back, make 1/4 longer
02:10:837 (5) - Move 1/4 back
02:15:164 (9) - Move 1/4 forward, make 1/4 shorter
03:34:686 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter
03:55:840 (3) - Make 1/4 longer
Obviously you have to do a bit of remapping when moving the notes, to make the distance fit
And also, these are some suggestions, however they are not the only solutions, so if you find something you like better, go for it!

Hope this was helpful!
Topic Starter
12Jan21

jawns wrote:

Let's give this a mod then! (from modreq)
Note: I explain the reason behind most of my points in the beginning of the "insane" part, so you might wanna start with that one
00:38:143 (4,5) - Add a note in between these two
00:39:970 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter
00:46:605 (1) - Make 1/4 shorter
00:55:836 (1) - ^
00:56:893 (4) - ^
00:57:374 (5) - ^
00:58:143 (1) - ^
00:58:528 (2) - Move 1/4 back, make 1/4 shorter
01:34:298 (4) - End not snapped
01:52:375 (5) - Move 1/4 back
01:53:529 (3) - End not snapped
01:53:818 (4) - Make 1/4 shorter
02:10:453 (3) - ^
02:10:837 (4) - Move 1/4 back
02:11:222 (5) - Make 1/4 shorter
03:55:840 (7) - End not snapped
00:44:778 (1) - Delete this slider, and make a note 1/4 further forward
01:52:376 (5) - Move 1/4 back
01:58:242 (5,6) - Move first note 1/4 forward, second note 1/4 back
01:58:722 (1) - Add note here, make slider 2/4 shorter, move slider 2/4 forward
00:40:162 (1,2,3) - These doesn't follow the rhythm of the song. You should move them all 1/4 back and add a note at 00:40:835. (a good rule of thumb is to map on the white and red lines when doing normal/slow parts, and us the blue lines for triples/streams. There are exceptions, like 00:46:028 (2,3) - which is mapped correctly, so be careful!)
00:44:298 (4,5,6) - When having triples like these (played very fast one after another) you either want them to be in a stack, or with short distance in between, like a mini stream. You usually don't want small jumps, and you definitely don't want it to jump between the two first notes, and stack the two last notes.
00:46:316 (4) - Move this 1/4 forward. Again, white and red lines. You should also make the distance a bit larger, since the note hits quite long after the one before
00:50:932 (6,7,8,9,10) - Delete the last one of these, and move the rest 1/4 forward (white and red)
00:57:086 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Move 1/4 forward
01:15:068 (7) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
01:32:953 (2,3) - Move 1/4 forward (an exception to the "white red rule, ugh). The weird thing is, you did it right in the three next notes :P
01:34:395 (5) - Move 1/4 forward, make it 1/4 shorter
Second verse makes a lot more sense than the first one. However i would still make a few changes (so it fits the song better, and is more similar to the first verse)
01:52:375 (5) - Move 1/4 back, so it comes at the same time as the vocals.
01:53:915 (6) - ^
01:58:242 (5,6,7) - Delete the first note, move the slider 1/4 back, and make it 1/4 longer (so it fits with the vocals)
02:00:069 (4) - Move 1/4 back, make 1/4 longer
02:04:300 (4,5,6) - Delete second note, make first slider 1/4 longer, move last slider 1/4 back, and make it 1/4 longer
02:10:838 (7) - Move 1/4 back
02:15:261 (1) - Move 1/4 forward, make 1/4 shorter
02:28:916 (7) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
02:46:801 (2,3) - Move 1/4 forward
02:48:338 (5) - Move 1/4 forward, make it 1/4 shorter
03:34:686 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter (so it matches the beat)
03:36:610 (4) - Consider making this 1/4 longer (just a thought, not necessarily needed)
03:58:629 (5) - Move 1/4 back
00:38:143 (4,5) - Make first slider 1/4 shorter, move second slider 1/4 back
01:00:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Add note to the end of the stream, move slider 1/4 forward, delete last note
01:37:087 (2) - Move 1/4 forward
01:52:375 (4) - Move 1/4 back, make 1/4 longer
02:10:837 (5) - Move 1/4 back
02:15:164 (9) - Move 1/4 forward, make 1/4 shorter
03:34:686 (2) - Make 1/4 shorter
03:55:840 (3) - Make 1/4 longer
Obviously you have to do a bit of remapping when moving the notes, to make the distance fit
And also, these are some suggestions, however they are not the only solutions, so if you find something you like better, go for it!

Hope this was helpful!
Thanks alot for your mod! (: I Think I need more mods correcting my beatsnaping D: So yeah, thanks alot.
Faustas156
Haro's Normal:
01:13:528 - better add a circle there
01:33:529 - add circle
01:35:067 - add circle and test out i don't thing is a good place :P
02:22:761 - add circle
02:43:146 - circle again
03:40:840 (4,5) - objects too close + bad timing for that
That's all i can mod for now it's 8:09 pm for me ;-;
lcfc

Faustas156 wrote:

Haro's Normal:
01:13:528 - better add a circle there
01:33:529 - add circle
01:35:067 - add circle and test out i don't thing is a good place :P
02:22:761 - add circle
02:43:146 - circle again
03:40:840 (4,5) - objects too close + bad timing for that
That's all i can mod for now it's 8:09 pm for me ;-;
Thanks for the mod c:
Topic Starter
12Jan21

Faustas156 wrote:

Haro's Normal:
01:13:528 - better add a circle there
01:33:529 - add circle
01:35:067 - add circle and test out i don't thing is a good place :P
02:22:761 - add circle
02:43:146 - circle again
03:40:840 (4,5) - objects too close + bad timing for that
That's all i can mod for now it's 8:09 pm for me ;-;
Thanks for your mod. (:
MokouSmoke
Saw this on #modreqs
Just a short mod from me
It's the same bg as DELiS map lol. Why not use something different?

[Hard+]
There are a lot of overlaps that are unnecessary overlap imo
  1. Why not just call this insane?
  2. 00:48:913 (1,2,3,4) - feels congested, i would rotate 00:49:298 (4) - 90 degrees CCW
  3. 00:55:066 (1,2,3,4) - space these normally instead of squishing them together, plays better imo (same with other places)
  4. 00:57:374 (5,1,2) - even for a hard, this pattern is quite difficult to read. i would just avoid overlaps altogether here
  5. 01:20:836 (2,3,4) - make the flow smoother here and use smaller DS. the song isn't very intense here
  6. 01:21:990 (1,2) - spacing issue
  7. 02:33:145 (2,3) - use 1.0x spacing
  8. 02:35:069 (3) - move to [~283, ~217] for better flow and nice blanket
  9. 02:41:607 (1,2,1) - could be confused as 1/4 triplet, recommend bigger spacing
  10. 03:11:224 (3) - looks really scrunched, I think you can make a better slider shape
  11. 03:12:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the pattern more interesting, kinda boring to play
  12. 03:19:974 (1,2,3,4) - starting on blue tick is bad, move this to 03:20:070 -
  13. 03:22:762 (1,2) - better blanket please


[Another]
I think flows and spacing in some parts could be polished and make map feel more smooth. Also adding more blankets.
  1. Could rename diff to "Lunatic" since its a touhou remix
  2. 00:37:374 (1) - blanket 00:37:951 (3) - for better flow and aesthetics
  3. 00:39:682 (10,11) - stack perfectly or don't stack at all
  4. 00:40:162 (1,2,3) - I think you meant to start this at 00:40:258 -
  5. 00:41:989 (1,2) - make these symmetric
  6. 00:42:759 (1,2,3,4) - make these triplets, music (and your hitsounds) suggest it
  7. 00:44:874 (7,8) - spacing issue
  8. 00:46:990 (6) - flow of slider (5) suggests that (6) should be placed somewhere around [294,334]
  9. 00:47:759 (11,1,2,3,4) - sorry if all my comments are about flow and spacing, but same thing here. maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/lVF7p/25f230b4a0.jpg
  10. 00:50:739 (5,6) - spacing issue
  11. 00:58:625 (2) - incorrect rhythm, should be placed at 00:58:720 - instead to follow vocal
  12. 01:10:548 (8) - move to 01:10:451 -
  13. 01:11:029 (1,1) - prefer triplet instead, more fun to play
  14. 01:12:760 (1,2) - should not be stacked, especially since 01:13:337 (3) - isnt stacked
  15. 01:15:933 (9,10) - move to 01:15:836 -
  16. 01:23:336 - and 01:23:721 - would prefer notes here to fill up space, pauses are kinda awkward
  17. 01:27:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think perfect hexagon from ctrl+shift+d would play better
  18. 01:29:683 (3,4,5) - flow should be sharp, not linear since these are all jumps
  19. 01:31:222 (3) and 01:31:991 (3) - maybe make these sliders instead so spacing is more intuitive
  20. 01:32:376 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - avoid overlap
  21. 01:36:607 (3,4) - unstack, doesn't match song
  22. 01:37:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - too much drum here imo
  23. 01:51:607 (2,3) - ctrl+g for better flow
  24. 01:58:146 (4,5) - needs bigger spacing
  25. 02:01:030 (1) - move to [152, 164] for better flow
  26. 02:09:107 (5,6) - bigger spacing to match intensity of song
  27. 02:10:741 - needs note here since youve been mapping vocals
  28. 02:15:069 (9,1) - spacing issue
  29. it would be cool if 02:18:915 (1) - 02:19:685 (1) - 02:20:454 (1) - all blanketed 02:19:300 (2) -
  30. 02:21:223 (4,5,1,2) - flow issue http://puu.sh/lVGom/5042abf746.jpg I would straighten 02:21:608 (1,2,3,4) - to fix


Ok, I only had time for a short mod so I'll just end it here lol :)
Hope this helps and good luck!
Topic Starter
12Jan21

MokouSmoke wrote:

Saw this on #modreqs
Just a short mod from me
It's the same bg as DELiS map lol. Why not use something different?

[Hard+]
There are a lot of overlaps that are unnecessary overlap imo
  1. Why not just call this insane?
  2. 00:48:913 (1,2,3,4) - feels congested, i would rotate 00:49:298 (4) - 90 degrees CCW
  3. 00:55:066 (1,2,3,4) - space these normally instead of squishing them together, plays better imo (same with other places)
  4. 00:57:374 (5,1,2) - even for a hard, this pattern is quite difficult to read. i would just avoid overlaps altogether here
  5. 01:20:836 (2,3,4) - make the flow smoother here and use smaller DS. the song isn't very intense here
  6. 01:21:990 (1,2) - spacing issue
  7. 02:33:145 (2,3) - use 1.0x spacing
  8. 02:35:069 (3) - move to [~283, ~217] for better flow and nice blanket
  9. 02:41:607 (1,2,1) - could be confused as 1/4 triplet, recommend bigger spacing
  10. 03:11:224 (3) - looks really scrunched, I think you can make a better slider shape
  11. 03:12:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make the pattern more interesting, kinda boring to play
  12. 03:19:974 (1,2,3,4) - starting on blue tick is bad, move this to 03:20:070 -
  13. 03:22:762 (1,2) - better blanket please


[Another]
I think flows and spacing in some parts could be polished and make map feel more smooth. Also adding more blankets.
  1. Could rename diff to "Lunatic" since its a touhou remix
  2. 00:37:374 (1) - blanket 00:37:951 (3) - for better flow and aesthetics
  3. 00:39:682 (10,11) - stack perfectly or don't stack at all
  4. 00:40:162 (1,2,3) - I think you meant to start this at 00:40:258 -
  5. 00:41:989 (1,2) - make these symmetric
  6. 00:42:759 (1,2,3,4) - make these triplets, music (and your hitsounds) suggest it
  7. 00:44:874 (7,8) - spacing issue
  8. 00:46:990 (6) - flow of slider (5) suggests that (6) should be placed somewhere around [294,334]
  9. 00:47:759 (11,1,2,3,4) - sorry if all my comments are about flow and spacing, but same thing here. maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/lVF7p/25f230b4a0.jpg
  10. 00:50:739 (5,6) - spacing issue
  11. 00:58:625 (2) - incorrect rhythm, should be placed at 00:58:720 - instead to follow vocal
  12. 01:10:548 (8) - move to 01:10:451 -
  13. 01:11:029 (1,1) - prefer triplet instead, more fun to play
  14. 01:12:760 (1,2) - should not be stacked, especially since 01:13:337 (3) - isnt stacked
  15. 01:15:933 (9,10) - move to 01:15:836 -
  16. 01:23:336 - and 01:23:721 - would prefer notes here to fill up space, pauses are kinda awkward
  17. 01:27:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think perfect hexagon from ctrl+shift+d would play better
  18. 01:29:683 (3,4,5) - flow should be sharp, not linear since these are all jumps
  19. 01:31:222 (3) and 01:31:991 (3) - maybe make these sliders instead so spacing is more intuitive
  20. 01:32:376 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - avoid overlap
  21. 01:36:607 (3,4) - unstack, doesn't match song
  22. 01:37:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - too much drum here imo
  23. 01:51:607 (2,3) - ctrl+g for better flow
  24. 01:58:146 (4,5) - needs bigger spacing
  25. 02:01:030 (1) - move to [152, 164] for better flow
  26. 02:09:107 (5,6) - bigger spacing to match intensity of song
  27. 02:10:741 - needs note here since youve been mapping vocals
  28. 02:15:069 (9,1) - spacing issue
  29. it would be cool if 02:18:915 (1) - 02:19:685 (1) - 02:20:454 (1) - all blanketed 02:19:300 (2) -
  30. 02:21:223 (4,5,1,2) - flow issue http://puu.sh/lVGom/5042abf746.jpg I would straighten 02:21:608 (1,2,3,4) - to fix


Ok, I only had time for a short mod so I'll just end it here lol :)
Hope this helps and good luck!
Thanks alot for your mod! ^-^ Going to fix it all right now (:
themizerable
Hi Bro, Nice map ;)

HARD DIFF

you look better with AR 7.5

01:32:183 - you should take note is good only till 3 as the pace is cut and then continues

01:33:529 - a slider might be better from that point till 01:33:913 ???

03:23:532 - This break is optional or you?? :?:? need rrellenar that could add 0.5 notes remain good
8-)8-)GOOD JOB! very good pace 8-)8-)
Topic Starter
12Jan21

AxelBrown wrote:

Hi Bro, Nice map ;)

HARD DIFF

you look better with AR 7.5

01:32:183 - you should take note is good only till 3 as the pace is cut and then continues

01:33:529 - a slider might be better from that point till 01:33:913 ???

03:23:532 - This break is optional or you?? :?:? need rrellenar that could add 0.5 notes remain good
8-)8-)GOOD JOB! very good pace 8-)8-)
Thanks for your mod (:
agedon
Hello. #modreq

00:46:605 - Have you tried this? better imo http://up.ppy.sh/files/line-4.jpg

01:35:837 (1) - 01:59:683 (1) - 02:21:607 (1) - 02:41:992 (3) - 03:01:223 - 03:29:301 (1) - 03:40:840 (4) - Fix slider shape and blanket

03:08:916 (1,2) - Not a NC

03:30:840 (3) fix blanket 03:31:993 (4) move a lil up

02:11:991 (3) - Fix this slider and blanket it with the previous one, also 02:13:145 - add a circle
01:10:451 (8,9) - it 'doesn't mix with the rythm (maybe it's me)

02:37:377 (1) - fix slider shape

03:26:224 (6) - NC should start here

03:41:609 (6) - ^

03:57:379 (2,3) - fix shape and blanket

03:19:301 (3,4) - rythm sounds off (same pattern would do the job 03:18:435 (1,2) )

02:36:319 (4) - ?
General: I don't like the 1/8 ones it sounds off to me. Wiill change it to 1/4

00:41:797 (5,1) - unconfortable and flow-less, try to make it more curvy like this - http://up.ppy.sh/files/curvy.jpg

00:48:335 (2,3,1,2) - this is a good idea but it's out of rythm. Use only 3 sliders the last one should repeat more

00:50:066 (2) - 1/8

00:55:451 (2) - ^

01:18:144 (1,2) - ^

03:17:378 (1,1,1) - ^

00:56:412 (2) - i don't think this fits the rythm

01:34:106 (5,6) - Try this http://up.ppy.sh/files/tuturu.jpg And adjust the hitsounds

02:47:954 (3,4) - ^

03:55:648 (6,7) - ^

02:06:607 (3) - Change this to a slider on direction to 02:07:184 (1)
General: What about ar 8 ? looks much better

00:45:451 (2) - delete this, extend 00:45:066 (1) instead

00:48:335 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - This sounds good but it's not. One tick off rythm. Delete 00:49:105 (2) - extend 00:48:912 (4) (remap this part so it fits better)

00:58:143 (2) - this slider needs a better shape (flow)

01:12:374 (8) - fix slider shape / blanket ?

01:21:221 (3) - move this to x: 284 Y: 220

01:21:990 (1) - move this to x: 337 y: 175

01:38:337 (2,3,4,5) - this is too straight, try moving each note just a bit to the right, diagonally (reach the curve)

02:27:184 (3) - turn in to a slider and extend to 02:27:376 (1) - (shape the slider in direction to 02:27:568 (4) - . Move this a lil bit) The flow is great

02:51:223 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Not a good shape for this stream overlap (much better at ar 8)

03:11:224 (3) - Weird slider shape. Maybe a better one?

03:12:377 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like this pattern

03:34:301 (1,1,2,3) - This is weird Don't know what to say (i think it's not a good idea use the last tick of the spinner as part of the rythm)
02:24:972 (5) - Delete this it's not in rythm and affects the next patern rythm

02:32:569 (6) - Move this to x: 157 y : 179 better flow

02:48:147 (4,5) - Spacing fix 02:48:243 (5) should be here 02:48:243 and 02:48:147 (4) here 02:48:435 for proper rythm (If you wanna keep the slider lenght) otherwise you can change it like 01:34:299 (4,5)

02:51:032 (5) - Moving this a lil up makes better flow for the stream maybe x: 125 y: 227 ?

02:40:838 (5,6,7) - I really don't like this pattern, feels uncomfortable
02:51:896 (4,1) - This 02:51:896 (4) is too low and straight respect to 02:51:992 (1) - Just move a lil closer on curve

02:52:281 (4,1) - ^


Oh well that's it. Hope this helps and Good Luck!!

P.S The song it's melted in my brain :o
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