Harbyter wrote:

guys stop with the nonsense ,if you have to post do something helpfull




[GRAVITY]

some suggestion

00:08:084 - instead of those consecutive [12] [34] chords why not alterning with pattern like those - Yeah I've considered about this before it got qualify, seems it was more better

01:33:103 (93103|1,93191|1,93279|1) - i think you can avoid this spacing, it's literally a heavy jack with this bpm , maybe something like this - Maybe it's fine already but seems it's better


01:40:544 (100544|2,100544|0,100603|3,100603|1) - prefer if you make those a [34] [12] - Nice


01:42:419 - ?_? i think you can make this section a little more better - Is there any good suggestion for it?

01:48:396 - from here i think making pattern like the first suggestion could be more interesting - Sorry but I'd like to keep this pattern, it is really nice to fit with this part I tihnk



also as tidek mentioned already, putting HP at least 8.8 would be perfect to avoid spammersz , also increasing OD too to 8.5 - 8.8 is too hard but It can be increase, yeah I think so

This map is a big disappointment to me now. Gravity was something that I expected to be pretty poorly structured because it's done for the sole purpose of star rating, but I'm especially upset about Shirou's INFINITE, which was a REALLY good map at the start of this map's life cycle. Now, it's also super PP inflated and legitimately feels like a giveaway. Shirou's INFINITE used to legitimately be one of my favorite unranked maps to play, because it was actually rewarding to play through it and nail it all together...

... now, it's just another map to be forgotten.

Daikyi wrote:

notes for gravity, by itself

00:06:501 (6501|0) - ghost note?
00:06:853 - note missing
00:07:615 (7615|2,7644|1,7673|0,7703|3,7732|2,7761|1,7791|0,7820|3) - this roll is only a 1/4 roll, not a 1/8
00:18:396 (18396|1,18396|3,18396|0) - i can't hear anything that justifies this as a triple
00:20:271 (20271|0,20271|3,20271|1) - literally all of these triples
00:21:736 (21736|2) - almost not even audible
00:23:962 - there's another tom here that you completely miss. revise your layering because missing this is bad given the difficulty of this chart, and don't use a triple for toms, because there's not much of an extra accent, and forcing the triple handjack into quad here is dumb
00:24:021 (24021|3,24021|1,24021|0,24021|2) - unnecessary quad
00:26:892 (26892|0,27009|3,27244|0) - part is more accurate w/o these 3 notes 00:27:361 (27361|0) - and this one as an afterthought. there's a "sound" here but it's the vocals being a tiny bit slow. adjust as you see fit
00:27:654 (27654|3) - another ghost note. sounds like you were mapping on 25% and you heard something change, so you put this note here. It's not, it's the synth's constant growing in tone which you have covered through your LN
00:28:005 (28005|3) - seems better if it's a jack with extra notes on 00:28:123 - and 00:28:123 - since that's what the vocal is doing
00:28:943 (28943|1) - LN makes no sense because the vocal starts on 00:28:826 -
00:30:701 - how did you miss this note
00:30:876 - or this note
00:31:052 - ????????????????
00:31:228 - ????????????????????????????
00:32:751 - note. change up patterning probably to reflect
00:33:337 - should be a jump here, because it's the stronger snare kick, however you're very inconsistently layering as triples like half a second earlier 00:32:693 (32693|1,32693|2,32693|0) - so what's up w/ that lol
00:34:275 (34275|1) - delete
00:34:802 (34802|2,34802|3) - pretty sure this whole jump doesn't even exist lol
00:36:033 (36033|1,36033|0) - is on 00:36:091 -
00:36:677 - note again
00:38:611 - jump? why is this so inconsistent (this whole section)
00:39:373 (39373|3,39373|0,39373|2) - like literally the same /exact/ sounds as the jumptrills, and you're layering as hands which imo is something that's objectively wrong lol especially for the hardest difficulty of a mapset. Map is 100% able to be hard, but shouldn't be forced to be hard by being wrong
for this entire section, the above comment is magnified like 20x
also if you didn't realize, split trills are pretty bad at 250
00:47:224 (47224|0) - maybe start on like 00:47:166 - (same for 00:49:099 (49099|3) - and further iterations of this LN)
01:02:576 (62576|3,62693|2,62810|1,62927|0,63044|1,63279|2,63513|3,63748|1) - http://puu.sh/osc3Z/2d5083a110.jpg for PR (second 2 notes are flipped to give the 3rd to 4th transition a better feel, since the melody has a jump)
01:05:623 (65623|0) - 3
01:05:974 (65974|2) - 1
01:06:365 (66365|3,66521|2,66677|1) - 123
01:07:029 (67029|2,67146|0) - 24
01:07:498 (67498|3,67849|1) - 31
why do i need to go through to fix PR, cmon it's not hard to do for an easy section
01:23:084 (83084|1,83084|0,83084|2) - this section more inconsistencies in layering
01:28:357 - actually there's a note here you missed.
01:28:533 - and here
01:31:638 (91638|1,91638|3,91697|0,91697|2,91755|3,91755|1) - things like this are seriously like ???? using same layering for all 3 when there's a clear emphasis on the last note ok
01:32:576 (92576|2,92634|1) - like, now take a look at this. the 2 notes highlighted are in the same type of pattern as the above comment, but are more emphasized in the song by a bass kick, and yet is layered with only single notes.
01:32:517 (92517|1) - ghost note
01:36:267 (96267|1) - again
01:41:951 - note
01:42:126 - note
01:43:767 - note
01:43:943 - note (or a hold for the synth decending)
literally not going to say anything about this because it's actually dumb lol
02:01:814 - note

by the way this says absolutely nothing about the jumptrill sections of the song. This is mostly about actual technical mistakes, and horrid inconsistencies in layering lol

ARKlQueenVegaz wrote:

on Gravity is hard for me..
so it's look good for me

jakads wrote:

I can't even imagine what Fresh Chicken is feeling
Disappointed
Mad
even Sad maybe

Think there have been TOO much drama on this

jakads wrote:

I can't even imagine what Fresh Chicken is feeling
Disappointed
Mad
even Sad maybe

Think there have been TOO much drama on this

Arkener wrote:

Personally i don't think that gravity should change at all, the real problem is the song. Why? because the whole song is really repetitive, it's impossible make a thing better than gravity without deleting some "sounds" in the map. If you only listen the song, the patterns (to map it) are very reduced if you really wanna make a "expert" diff.

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Have to emphasize that, huge respect to F_C for this decision, hope to see the map improved soon and requalified as well!

Tidek wrote:

I hope you considered to make HP 9-9,5 in all extra diffs.

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Tidek wrote:

I hope you considered to make HP 9-9,5 in all extra diffs.

Overrated map in terms of starrating should be harder to pass in my opinion.

HP10

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Tidek wrote:

I hope you considered to make HP 9-9,5 in all extra diffs.

HP10

-Kamikaze- wrote:

I would appreciate it if you would not disturb the thread with your sarcastic posts, thank you

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

-Kamikaze- wrote:

I would appreciate it if you would not disturb the thread with your sarcastic posts, thank you

I do not see the sarcasm here, all serious.

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Thanks to all who encourage me and will help me!!

And please chill guys...

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Tidek wrote:

I hope you considered to make HP 9-9,5 in all extra diffs.

HP10

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

-Kamikaze- wrote:

I would appreciate it if you would not disturb the thread with your sarcastic posts, thank you

I do not see the sarcasm here, all serious.

Can you guys believe it this song is 200% my taste?

Tidek wrote:

You already praised that map and called retina a nonsense map when both maps are jumptrill oriented, so you can go back to Spy with that ridiculus logic : /