For all Difficulty
00:25:896 - remove hitsound. no has big sound for F and C
00:40:896 (40896|2) - add C
[BASIC]
00:14:646 (14646|3) - move to 1 for more easier pattern, it will be hard to easy players
00:18:396 - ~ 00:20:037 - Change to something other pattern. It is really not fit with here
00:22:615 (22615|0) - move to 3, 00:22:263 (22263|1,22615|0) - it looks heavy only left hand
00:31:111 (31111|3) - missing whistle hitsound
00:44:646 (44646|2,44880|1,45115|2,45349|1) - try to change this pattern, too hard unnecessarily
00:45:584 -
http://puu.sh/nCH55/93fbb5c596.png is more comfortable to playing
00:58:826 (58826|2,59177|1) - move to 4.1 seems much better
01:24:959 (84959|2) - move to 4, no need jack with 01:24:373 (84373|2) - this
01:38:084 (98084|1,98259|2,98435|1,98611|2) -
http://puu.sh/nuzap/1cd35b6845.png is more better i think
[NOVICE]
00:02:576 (2576|2) - move to 4 for more comfortable pattern
00:11:541 (11541|1,11716|1) - move to 1, 1 is too empty and 00:11:365 (11365|1,11541|1,11716|1) - it doesn't need jack. even it is not same sound
00:14:646 (14646|0) - move to 3 ^
00:24:138 (24138|1) - remove, ADV don't have note here also i don't think normal diff needs note in here
00:27:537 (27537|2) - remove for pitch balancy, check same part
00:49:334 (49334|0) - move to 2, it will hard for normal players
00:51:677 (51677|2) - switch the column to 4, too heavy only 2.3 but seems don't have to make pattern like this
01:27:771 -
http://puu.sh/nv5ED/5bbe5025e6.png01:41:365 (101365|3,101482|2,101599|1) - does it follow the vocal only? i can hear the 1/2 vocal and 1/3 beat.
01:43:474 (103474|1) - move to 1, ^
[ADVANCED]
00:04:334 (4334|3,4451|2,4568|3,4685|2) - Try to change it, too heavy at right
00:08:962 -
http://puu.sh/nuzDQ/924de509a1.png00:22:498 - add the note. feels too empty
00:25:544 (25544|2) - move to 1, no need jack in here
00:26:834 (26834|3,26834|2,26951|0,26951|1,27185|1,27185|0,27302|2,27302|3) - suggest to use only one note each others or follow the 1/4, much fit with this sound and can reduce useless notes.
01:00:466 - change it to something other patterns, it is too unnecessarily hard pattern
01:27:771 - ^
01:20:505 (80505|1) - move to 4, looks better
01:36:736 (96736|2) - remove, it is unnecessarily i think. even other difficulties don't have note in here.
01:40:427 (100427|0) - remove for consistency your pattern
01:43:826 -
http://puu.sh/nCHqW/0a408fed43.png[EXHAUST]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - does it really have 1/4
00:10:837 -
http://puu.sh/nuA2A/950a4f3c33.png00:17:986 (17986|1) - should be 00:17:869 - here i guess
00:20:388 (20388|0,20447|1,20505|2,20564|1,20623|0) - ctrl + h, 00:20:095 (20095|0,20271|0,20388|0) - it is too heavy
00:24:959 (24959|1) - move to 3 00:24:841 (24841|1,24959|1,25076|1,25193|1) - ^
00:33:513 (33513|0) - move to 2, just my personal suggestion.
01:15:935 (75935|2) - move to 1, seems more comfortable
01:24:841 - add one, same sound with 01:24:373 (84373|0,84373|1,84548|1,84548|2,84724|3,84724|2) -
02:01:052 - ~ 02:01:990 - i don't think it has 1/4 sound
[Jinjin's EXTRA]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - same with EXH, does it have 1/4?
00:09:021 (9021|3) - move to 1, seems more comfortable.
00:28:767 - add one to 4? seems better
00:33:630 - 00:34:099 - add a one note each others, here has big sound also hitsound too. 00:37:380 - this part is kinda similar part and you used two notes without 00:38:318 - here
01:15:349 (75349|2) - normal note is more better, no has ln sound i think
[Shirou's INFINITE]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - same with EXH
00:22:380 (22380|3,22439|2) - suggest to remove this, unnecessary note i think
00:26:013 (26013|3) - move to 3, seems more better
00:27:009 (27009|1,27361|2) - these two notes are should be nm note.
00:37:439 - missing note
01:32:634 (92634|2) - remove this or 01:32:400 - add a one note here for consistency your pattern
01:38:201 (98201|2) - remove W, W hitsound should be 01:38:318 (98318|2) - here
[GRAVITY]
00:06:209 - ~ 00:06:443 - same with EXH
00:19:099 (19099|3) - move to 3, 00:18:865 (18865|3,18982|3,19099|3,19216|3) - it's too long
00:19:216 (19216|0) - move to 2, 00:19:099 (19099|0,19216|0,19334|0,19451|0) - same reason
00:20:037 (20037|3,20037|2,20095|1,20095|0,20154|3,20154|2,20212|0,20212|1) - ctrl + h and 00:20:271 (20271|3,20271|2,20271|1) - make it 124 notes. for making consistency on your pattern
00:25:310 (25310|3,25310|1,25369|0,25369|2,25427|3,25427|1) - 23-14-23 is be better i think, nicely fit with 00:25:076 (25076|0,25076|3,25134|2,25134|1,25193|0,25193|3) - this
00:25:896 (25896|0,25896|1) - remove one note, don't have big sound for using two notes here
00:45:701 (45701|1,45701|2,45759|3,45759|0,45818|1,45818|2,45876|0,45876|3,46052|2,46052|3,46111|0,46111|1,46169|2,46169|3,46228|1,46228|0) - it is too overmapped imo, it is just scratch sound so no need two notes
01:13:865 (73865|1,74021|2,74177|3) - ctrl + h, seems more better i think, just my personal suggestion
01:35:974 (95974|2) - move to 2, 01:35:623 (95623|2,95740|2,95857|2,95974|2,96091|2,96209|2,96326|2,96443|2) - toooo long
01:38:787 (98787|0,98845|1,98904|0,98962|1) - stairs pattern is more better, really fit with this part and looks nice
01:44:294 (104294|1,104294|2,104412|3,104412|1) - seems you are just following vocal but two notes are too overed i think. reduce a one note each others
02:01:052 - ~ 02:01:990 - i don't think it has 1/4 sound