Gonzvlo wrote:

General:

1. Delete "Sunday", "Bloody" and "U2" from tags. (Isn't "rock" too generic? Oh well w/e) Done
2. Preview time is not the same for all the diffs.(Easy)

Done

Easy:

1. 00:32:027 (1) - Remove New Combo to keep consistency.Done
2. 02:08:779 (5) - ^ Done
3. 02:43:012 (4,5) - Wtf? Fix spacing. Done
4. 03:33:184 (2) - "Finish" doesn't fit here imo, change it for "Whistle".Done
5. 03:38:344 - Why did you use 2x for the end of a spinner, delete this timing section. Done
6. 03:41:292 - Delete this timing section (read above)^

Done

Normal:

1. 00:11:979 (3,4) - Fix Spacing (This is [Normal], Random jumps should not be used here) Done
2. 03:28:781 (4,5) - Umm What?, Fix spacing please. Done
3. 04:26:154 (1) - Start this here: 04:26:301.

Nope, the sunday began on blue tick (if you listen carefully)

Hard:

1. Oh well What?
2. 04:29:987 - Add a circle here.

Nope. I want this stack be something different than the other stack. Yes, there is a drum snare on this tick, no i won't map it. It doesn't fit well with the end of song.

I think this map can be improved a lot with some more modding

1. 03:14:560 (7) - unsnaped end, consider to change it to circles, spinner is not a good idea though but yup, still worth a try
2. 03:28:485 (5) - ^

1. 01:15:990 (3,4,5) - spacing
2. 01:45:176 (6,7,8) - ^
3. 02:11:134 (3,4,5) - ^
4. 03:16:356 (3,4,5) - ^
5. 03:21:085 (3,4,5) - ^

1. slider tick rate 2
2. 01:13:926 (1,2,3) - spacing

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]:

1. 03:14:560 (7) - unsnaped end, consider to change it to circles, spinner is not a good idea though but yup, still worth a try
2. 03:28:485 (5) - ^

[Normal]:

1. 01:15:990 (3,4,5) - spacing
2. 01:45:176 (6,7,8) - ^
3. 02:11:134 (3,4,5) - ^
4. 03:16:356 (3,4,5) - ^
5. 03:21:085 (3,4,5) - ^

[Easy]:

1. slider tick rate 2
2. 01:13:926 (1,2,3) - spacing

star~

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hello~

Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore~

~General~
- I'm not sure at all at the timing, you'll probably need to get someone to re-check it to bubble it >.<Well, I can't do anything by myself for timing, Doomsday and Inozuma have timed it cause i was unable to do it, so... will try to find someone to check that
- Preview time should be the same in all diffs, it's different in Normal (it should be 70388). Done !

~Easy~
00:49:124 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe arrange these a bit better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62139 Yup
01:19:824 (1) - End this spinner at 01:23:962? It sounds weird where it is right now. Well, it was on voice, but I guess it's better if it finish on drum
01:48:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really think you should finish the pattern at 01:51:692 Yeah, sound less "empty"
02:16:433 (1) - I'd move this somewhere else. Being in an Easy, newbies will have problems to reach the note with a short time of recovery =x Okay
03:29:057 (1,2) - Extend these sliders to the next white tick. Done, I was probably drunk :p
04:26:891 (1) - Please, don't use jumps in the easier diffs! >.< ^

~Normal~
00:48:233 (3,4,5) - I don't really think a Normal is a good place to start using 1/4 streams, maybe replace this with a repeating slider? Hm, yeah, considering that's a normal, yeah
01:14:516 (x) - Add a note here? The end of the slider falls in a weird place >: Sounds less weird :p
01:19:233 (1) - Extend the spinner to 01:23:962? Yup
01:32:483 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing here! Done
02:06:129 (8,9,10) - Same as I said before, maybe replace by a repeating slider? ^
03:01:882 (1,2,3) - Maybe you should move this away from the other formation so it's perfectly visible. I don't see any reason to leave it like that anyways >: ugly patterns is ugly !:p fix'd
03:47:337 (2,3,4) - Same as I said before, maybe replace by a repeating slider? Yup
03:48:221 (5) - Fix spacing here! Done
04:01:194 (1,2,3) - Hmm maybe you should merge those 2 notes and just make a slider for that whole part =x I've made a 1/4 slider, cause he music really fits this kind of timeline

~Hard~
01:28:660 (2) - Fix spacing here? It's pretty newr the previous slider and it may be confusing >: Done
02:35:052 (7,8) - I'm not too keen on these two. I guess you can make the jump a bit lighter... I've removed the jump since there not really something in the music justifying a jump
03:38:491 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is the perfect place to make people rage at you for putting sudden jumps only at the end of the map Yeah, maybe :p but well, jump here are obvious since there not a lot of music :p

Not bad! It has this oldstyle look that brings memories, although maybe it's too linear. I don't think I can rebubble this because of the timing, it may be right but I'm not sure x_x I suck at timing.Will try to find someone good for a timing check

Good luck >3</ *star*

James2250 wrote:

-If you want to get all those timing sections checked you are going to have to ask a better timer I've asked to Lybydose, and i'm waiting for now
-You don't really need Rock in tags as it will be set as the genre when its ranked Done
-You might want to add 'War" to the tags as its the album this comes from Done

Easy:
-Would be nicer if some more patterns were aligned to look organized Done, for me
-Go through and try to keep your hitsound patterns consistent Done
00:24:951 (1,3) - separate these so they don't overlap Done
00:24:951 (1,2,3) - continue clap pattern here too?Done
00:56:226 (1) - add a clap to the startDone
01:03:312 (9) - add a clap to the end of this?Done
01:07:440 (5) - ^Done
01:12:747 (5) - add a clap to the start? (and continue clap pattern after this) Done
03:24:337 (1,2) - could be stacked nicerDone
03:33:774 (1) - end at 03:38:491?Done
04:26:891 (1) - kind of an odd shape~i've tried, but not sure if it's still looks odd or not

Normal:
00:17:875 (2) - I would add the finish to the start of this, not on 1Done
01:10:978 (3) - add a note here to continue the flow Done
01:15:695 (3) - ^ - same for ones later Done
01:28:660 (1,3) - clean some stuff like this up more? Done
01:48:722 (2,4) - try and avoid some overlaps like thisDone
02:31:808 (1,2) - ^Done

Hard:
00:27:015 (1) - remove new combo?Done
01:42:817 (4,5) - spacing Done
02:41:538 (1,2,3) - redo some of these patterns so the repeats don't get hidden No,I'll let this like that, since the music is the same and i've ask to someone who never play it, to test it, and this timeline is obvious
04:04:732 (8,1) - avoid overlap?Done

There isn't much technically wrong with the maps but alot of the patterns could more organized much more to make it look better while playingI've reworked a lot the pattern on the map, so it should be less linear, (Beuchi mod) and better organized/look better

1. Timing itself seems okay mostly, even though the very end is a bit off. Here's the sections I got for it. Only use if you think it works better, which I think it does . Add these in:
   BPM: 101.00, Offset: 258,618
   BPM: 102.50, Offset: 263,370
   I managed to SS this before though, even though this part was definately off

Doomsday wrote:

It's about time I took a look at this:

1. Timing itself seems okay mostly, even though the very end is a bit off. Here's the sections I got for it. Only use if you think it works better, which I think it does . Add these in:
   BPM: 101.00, Offset: 258,618
   BPM: 102.50, Offset: 263,370
   I managed to SS this before though, even though this part was definately off

Fix'd!

Nice hitsounding going on there ~ Thx !

[EASY]

Seemed to work alright to me. Sticks to 1/1 white ticks a lot of the way through though which gets pretty repetitive. Even though it is an easy, you can still experiment with fancy patterns here to make things more interesting, different slider shapes and note patterns. As it stands, it looks alright.

[NORMAL]

Maybe turn Approach Rate down by one notch? looks a little fast to me.-1 AR

Map itself looks okay, even though I'd say some of those 1/2 streams feel out of place, in the song and for a normal difficulty (things like 00:55:619 (1,2,3,4,5,etc)). That said, I'd say this difficulty follows the rhythm the best out of the other difficulties, even though it could still have used some patterns in the vocals and such rather than constant 1/2 or 1/1 beats.

[HARD]

02:12:905 (1) - Move this back to 02:13:513? Coming in on that vocal just there would sound pretty nice Okay
That's as far as specifics go

As for the map itself, It's got some nice patterns going (the streams at 02:36:808 were pretty nice), even though it does stick to lines of notes 1/2 from each other a lot, like the other difficulties. (things like 03:15:482 (1,2,3,4,5,etc), 00:55:619 (1,2,3,4,5,etc) etc), which even though they are short, really do build up and get repetitive.

Overall, the map is pretty solid (and a monster timing job. Oh man), even though it does get quite repetitive, especially in easier difficulties. Not much to suggest in specifics, since it's technically alright, and has some nice bits. It's just a little dull. Could be down to the song not being easy to map though, especially at 4:30 length. It's alright for what's there, but it's not the most exciting map out there

For that, you get my star