ANiMAte
- 00:16:348 (4) - Would look better if you made symmetrical with (3).
- 00:20:599 (2,3,4,5,1) - This triggers me because the curvature doesn't look even.
- 01:06:049 (5) - NC [sounds like it begins a new measure of the build up like how it is with 01:06:702 (1)]
- 01:07:356 (5) - ^
- 01:11:280 (2,3,5,6,7,8,9) - The curves should be more smooth. There's no excuse for this as it looks ugly.
- 01:11:444 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 01:12:670 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 01:13:896 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
- 01:14:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 01:15:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 01:18:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
- 01:15:858 (1,2) - Why don't these have the same DS as (3,4,5,6)?
- 01:16:512 (3) - Should be NC'd to emphasize the louder sound.
- 01:17:820 (3) - ^
- 01:26:321 (1) - Should really have the exact same curve as (2). Just copy/paste it.
- 01:29:918 (6,7) - I don't understand why the spacing gets smaller from (1,2,3,4) when the music doesn't get quieter.
- 01:34:495 (3,4,1,2) - I don't like how these are barely touching. These don't improve the aesthetics of the pattern.
- 01:35:149 (3,4,1,2) - ^
- 01:36:784 (1,2) - Shouldn't these be spaced further apart to match the 1/1 gap with 01:36:294 (2,1)?
- 01:37:438 (3,4) - For the sake of aesthetics, move this slightly further away from (2).
- 01:40:054 (1,2) - This flows horribly. (2)'s slider body goes in a left-upward direction while 01:39:727 (2,3,4,5,1) goes in an opposite direction; this goes against the momentum you're coming in after doing the burst. Make 01:39:727 (2,3,4,5,1) a circular burst so that it has that circular flow.
- 01:45:286 (4) - You should really just make this symmetrical with (3) for better flow into 01:45:613 (5,6,7,8,1).