Yui Horie - Hikari (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
roflninja

Vikon wrote:

[General]
seems the default soft-clap doesn't fit the song, consider to use other sound instead? (e.g. the attachment) Ill think about this for a bit

[Easy]
00:14:743 (4) - add clap? done
00:17:243 (1) - add finish? ^

[Normal]
00:36:826 (4) - add whistle? ok
00:45:785 (1) - this spinner is too short for normal I though auto bonus was 4000 for normal?
01:13:910 (1) - ^
01:26:410 (2) - end this slider at 01:26:826 ? and start the spinner at 01:27:035 ? done

[Hard]
01:26:201 (1,2,3) - spacing? fixed

[Insane]
01:13:285 (3) - make it symmetric done

star~
Thanks for modding
Teras

Vikon wrote:

[Teras']
00:00:785 (4,6) - these sliders are too near the edge? I don't see any problem
00:09:743 (11) - add clap? Nah
00:13:076 (12) - ^ ^
00:16:930 move this timing point to 00:16:826 (kiai end with hitobject) I don't see a problem with it being placed where it is now :?
00:30:055 move this timing point to 00:30:003 (at least place it before 00:30:055 (8) )Done ~
00:44:535 (3,4,5) - spacing No problems with the spacing there according to me...


star~
Thank you for your mod~

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DeadAlready
nice map <3
star~ >w</
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+12, or maybe more.
remove the sliderwhisltes....... i mean if you want to add whistle to slider's beats, don't add them on the slider, it will change the sounds of sliderslide (more noisy), check your diff and find them and remove (unless you use them on purpose! 00:05:160 (3) - this one..? just guessing. but, in [Normal], 00:52:451 (6) - can't feel this one is on purpose too.)
a little thing for the spinner.... usually find it sounds strange when a short spinner come between notes.... mute spinnerspin and spinnerbonus, maybe?

hating default soft-hitclap, but can't think of sth better (must be a lot) atm... k.

[Easy]
00:09:743 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing... 3: 1 grid right.
00:45:576 (3) - ...needn't to be such quiet... use a 70 or about volume for the finish at the end is enough.
fair enough.

[Normal]
00:03:910 (1,2) - add whistle to the end.
00:57:868 (1,2) - strange... what i think is you should follow the vocal here so both slider should repeat for 3 times. but not 1 for 4 times and 2 for only twice.
01:06:410 - add a note?

[Hard]
00:00:160 (1...) - for the first part... don't know your hitsounds is following....what...
a suggestion, o=normal, x=whistle.
oooxooxooxooxoox ooxooxoxoxo ....blablabla
have try with this. add sliderwhistle to the last xoxo if you want.

00:14:118 (4) - 1 grid down + 1 grid left? don't know if you set it here on purpose.
00:32:451 (1) - hating short spinners since it sounds..= =...won't list other short spinners. your choice.
00:53:493 (8) - try to make it better...
00:58:701 (5) - a new combo on this. and... if i were you i'll still use the same shape as 1234, but spacing increase a bit, to show an ECHO effect. strongly suggest you to do so XD

[Teras']
overall 9? why?!!!!!! this song is only BPM 144 so don't be that hell. also lol at the 4.8x star rating.
00:21:722 (9) - new combo? this combo is too long imo.
01:19:639 - add a note?
nice job

[Insane]
star rating wins.
first part's hitsounds... same as hard.
00:16:826 (1,2) - spacing. people will easily think it's 1/2.
00:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't have a "jump" feeling here.
00:58:701 (1,2,3,4) - same as what i said in Hard= =

starred. not bad.
Topic Starter
roflninja

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+12, or maybe more. ok
remove the sliderwhisltes....... i mean if you want to add whistle to slider's beats, don't add them on the slider, it will change the sounds of sliderslide (more noisy), check your diff and find them and remove (unless you use them on purpose! 00:05:160 (3) - this one..? just guessing. but, in [Normal], 00:52:451 (6) - can't feel this one is on purpose too.) will look into it
a little thing for the spinner.... usually find it sounds strange when a short spinner come between notes.... mute spinnerspin and spinnerbonus, maybe? silenced most in hard/insane

hating default soft-hitclap, but can't think of sth better (must be a lot) atm... k. ill try to find a better one

[Easy]
00:09:743 (1,2,3) - nazi spacing... 3: 1 grid right. done
00:45:576 (3) - ...needn't to be such quiet... use a 70 or about volume for the finish at the end is enough. ^
fair enough.

[Normal]
00:03:910 (1,2) - add whistle to the end. done
00:57:868 (1,2) - strange... what i think is you should follow the vocal here so both slider should repeat for 3 times. but not 1 for 4 times and 2 for only twice. thats how i had it originally, but fixed
01:06:410 - add a note? done

[Hard]
00:00:160 (1...) - for the first part... don't know your hitsounds is following....what...
a suggestion, o=normal, x=whistle.
oooxooxooxooxoox ooxooxoxoxo ....blablabla
have try with this. add sliderwhistle to the last xoxo if you want.
done
00:14:118 (4) - 1 grid down + 1 grid left? don't know if you set it here on purpose. fixed
00:32:451 (1) - hating short spinners since it sounds..= =...won't list other short spinners. your choice.
00:53:493 (8) - try to make it better... i tried
00:58:701 (5) - a new combo on this. and... if i were you i'll still use the same shape as 1234, but spacing increase a bit, to show an ECHO effect. strongly suggest you to do so XD if i understood that right, done

[Teras']
overall 9? why?!!!!!! this song is only BPM 144 so don't be that hell. also lol at the 4.8x star rating. thought i fixed that? oh well, I guess Teras will have to fix it along with changes
00:21:722 (9) - new combo? this combo is too long imo.
01:19:639 - add a note?
nice job

[Insane]
star rating wins.
first part's hitsounds... same as hard. ok
00:16:826 (1,2) - spacing. people will easily think it's 1/2. fixed i think
00:54:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't have a "jump" feeling here. ill think about changing it
00:58:701 (1,2,3,4) - same as what i said in Hard= =

starred. not bad.
Thanks Rin
Teras

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.


[Teras']
overall 9? why?!!!!!! this song is only BPM 144 so don't be that hell. also lol at the 4.8x star rating. Fixed the overall and yah. My diff is a trap <.<
00:21:722 (9) - new combo? this combo is too long imo. Done.
01:19:639 - add a note? Done.
nice job

starred. not bad.
Teras

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.


[Teras']
overall 9? why?!!!!!! this song is only BPM 144 so don't be that hell. also lol at the 4.8x star rating. Fixed the overall and yah. My diff is a trap <.<
00:21:722 (9) - new combo? this combo is too long imo. Done.
01:19:639 - add a note? Done.
nice job

starred. not bad.
Ty for your mod

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La Cataline
hey~
[overall]
  1. unsnapped inheriting timing sections :!:

[normal]

  • 00:16:213(1,2) feels like you should add a repetition to 1 and move 2 to 00:16:838(white tick)


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Kurai
:3

Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Easy]
00:01:838 (3) - Remove whistle at end
00:03:922 (1) - Add whistle

01:04:963 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning and add whistle

[Normal]
00:58:713 (2) - Jump in a normal diff D: change it.
00:59:755 (x) - Add note ?

[Hard]

01:14:338 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and end it at the same spot it was

[Insane]
00:52:463 (6) - 00:52:463 (6) - Remove reverse

[Teras']
00:09:755 (11) - Add clap ?

;D
Topic Starter
roflninja

KuraiPettan wrote:

:3

Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[Easy]
00:01:838 (3) - Remove whistle at end
00:03:922 (1) - Add whistle[/color] ^
01:04:963 (4) - Remove clap at the beginning and add whistle ^

[Normal]
00:58:713 (2) - Jump in a normal diff D: change it. fixed
00:59:755 (x) - Add note ? ok

[Hard]

01:14:338 (1) - Move 3/4 earlier and end it at the same spot it was done

[Insane]
00:52:463 (6) - 00:52:463 (6) - Remove reverse Ill think about this one

;D
Thanks for modding Kurai
Teras

KuraiPettan wrote:

:3
[Teras']
00:09:755 (11) - Add clap ? Nah. :P
;D
[DBF]
[Overall]
Well.. nothing special. All fine with spacing.

[Normal]
00:47:880 (2) - need bit.
00:59:547 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:26:422 (2,3,4) - little hard to reading. Same colors like shirt.
00:32:463 (1) - will be better if you put end in 00:33:505. I understand you try make it for voice, but better if you
gonna keep it to BPM. Also add finish in hitsound and remove whistle.

[Insane]
00:32:463 (1) - same like normal mod.
Topic Starter
roflninja

[DBF] wrote:

[Overall]
Well.. nothing special. All fine with spacing.

[Normal]
00:47:880 (2) - need bit.
00:59:547 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:26:422 (2,3,4) - little hard to reading. Same colors like shirt.
00:32:463 (1) - will be better if you put end in 00:33:505. I understand you try make it for voice, but better if you
gonna keep it to BPM. Also add finish in hitsound and remove whistle.

[Insane]
00:32:463 (1) - same like normal mod.
all done! thanks [DBF]
taka1235
I like this song <3
noneed
Hi roflninja :3

There we go:

Easy:
Don't you want to add a little break in easy?maybe from 00:18:922 to 00:30:172.beginner would appreciate it..
00:16:422 (2) - just suggestion:delete the slider and start the spinner here.
00:48:922 (4) - 1 grid left or (3) one grid right
01:08:088 (4) - don't you want to make this slider like 01:04:963 (4)?
fine map.

Normal:
00:17:255 (2) - spacing
00:38:505 (3) - hmm the second 'repeat' is a bit hidden by (2).move the slider a bit up?
nice

Hard:
00:16:005 (1) - delete it?
00:23:297 (8) - 1 grid right
that was fun to play ^^'

Insane:
awesome!

Teras:
also


Star 'nd Kudo Star!
Topic Starter
roflninja

noneed wrote:

Hi roflninja :3 hi

Easy:
Don't you want to add a little break in easy?maybe from 00:18:922 to 00:30:172.beginner would appreciate it.. Ill think about it
00:16:422 (2) - just suggestion:delete the slider and start the spinner here. done
00:48:922 (4) - 1 grid left or (3) one grid right ^
01:08:088 (4) - don't you want to make this slider like 01:04:963 (4)? did that to change the pattern
fine map.

Normal:
00:17:255 (2) - spacing its a 0.5x slider, so spacing should be fine
00:38:505 (3) - hmm the second 'repeat' is a bit hidden by (2).move the slider a bit up? done
nice

Hard:
00:16:005 (1) - delete it? i like the way that flows, but maybe
00:23:297 (8) - 1 grid right done
that was fun to play ^^'

Insane:
awesome!

Teras:
also
Thanks noneed!
IceBeam
[Easy]
00:08:713 - This repeat is not at the right place.
00:58:505 - Add a finish?

[Normal]
01:20:588 (3) - It's out of grid snap.Make it more simmetrical.

[Hard]
Wow,it became that hard so harshly :o
I could say that it's an Insane...but well.
01:10:380 (2) - This circle is completely hidden,don't think it's rankable.

[Insane]
00:59:338 (4) - Stack with 00:58:505 (4).
01:20:380 (2) - Again,tis' hidden.

[Teras']
00:20:588 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream isn't right.Notes are:[00:20:588,00:20:797,00:20:901,00:21:005,00:21:213,00:21:317]
Some other streams sound a bit out of rhytm to me,but I think it's acceptable.

Good luck,star~
Topic Starter
roflninja

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:713 - This repeat is not at the right place.
00:58:505 - Add a finish?

[Normal]
01:20:588 (3) - It's out of grid snap.Make it more simmetrical.

[Hard]
Wow,it became that hard so harshly :o
I could say that it's an Insane...but well.
01:10:380 (2) - This circle is completely hidden,don't think it's rankable.

[Insane]
00:59:338 (4) - Stack with 00:58:505 (4).
01:20:380 (2) - Again,tis' hidden.

Good luck,star~
All done, thanks SK
johnsage92
You're just gonna shoot down my suggestions anyways but its still a good map. Have a 5 pointed thingy!
Teras
Mr. rofl
Here I am with mah ninja mod.

Just some random suggestions for the hitsounding mainly. Duh.

[Hard]

00:53:505 Put the finish here. Not on the end of the slider.
00:56:838 Add finish.
1:01:838 Add whistle.

[Insane]

00:13:505 Add finish.
00:29:338 New combo? That stream is kinda long.
00:55:797 Remove new combo
00:56:838 I would put the finish on this slider here instead of the end of it. Also. I would recommend that you increase it's length by 1/2 tick.
1:27:255 I would move this spinner 1/2 tick forward and then put a note here. Note that you will have to shorten the spinner if you do this.
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