Feerum wrote:

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Hello Avalon! Hello ;D
Like i said, i handle the Qualify! <3 <3 <3

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right // I take your Soundcloud Link as proof.
Source: I'm really unsure about this. I checked the Game Wiki and couldn't find that the song is including there. Can you please give me a proof? would be explained in end of my reply
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Some of your hitsounds where imbalanced. (As example in the right side louder than on the left side). It's not tragic and not even unrankable but it simply sounds better with this fix: click okay kay
Other: -

Triumph

Okay there is not much to say but something did really t r i g g e r me.
01:05:958 - I totally dislike your note placement here. While you did good in PR, you did wrong in the.. uhm.. placement!!!
What i want to say is that your actually "Main beat" sound doesn't start right in balance! Like 01:06:644 - , 01:07:330 - 01:08:015 - and so on and this goes until 01:27:901 - ! So the whole Part!

01:06:644 (66644|2,66815|1,66987|0,67158|3) - , 01:07:330 (67330|2,67501|1,67672|0,67844|3) - 01:08:015 (68015|2,68187|1,68358|0,68530|3) - these belong together and the first note should always start on 4. It plays REALLY weird here according to Pitch..

So my suggestion would be following:

Start like this:

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The sense is, when you start like this you have no uncomfortable pattern in here and with the next down beat, means 01:06:644 - you start correctly at column 4! Then you can continue here. Until 01:08:701 - you keep your simple 4-3-2-1 stair pattern.
From here 01:08:701 - when i see right you can use 4-2-3-1 until 01:10:072 -
And from there something like 3-2-4-1..

You know what i mean, important for me is here that your first note on Main/Down beats start correctly so that it feels much better to play!
Please arrange all pattern until here 01:27:215 - .
I think i explained it enough how i mean it! you did wrote this little thing too much D: and also i don't really understand, also you know i don't really like too forced with a pitch things . . . and i think this is not a problem, you can hear that this same sound part 01:06:301 (66301|0) - 01:06:987 (66987|0) - 01:07:672 (67672|0) - and so on, that is plays perfectly with the song, i believe anyway then, i make some changes start on here 01:11:444 - for keep the consistency of sound

00:20:187 (20187|3) - According to your "style" how you mapped here it think these note should be placed on 3.
You used a Jack note for each 2nd Chord here like 00:19:330 (19330|0,19501|0) - and 00:19:672 (19672|3,19844|3) - so i think the best way would be to keep in and jack 00:20:015 (20015|2,20187|3) - c: nuuuu i didn't mean like that D: actually hard to explain that, i will keep it then

00:56:701 (56701|1,56872|1,57044|1) - The only 3-jack pattern you have here in the whole part. When it's not intentionally i suggest to arrange here some notes to remove it! alright, re-arranged this part :3

01:55:330 - Why you suddenly stop to jack the same pitched sounds from here? You know how cool this play?
01:55:330 (115330|2,115587|3) - and 01:56:701 (116701|3,116958|2) - and so on .. should be at same column :c ^lool okay okay, i change it then xD

02:33:901 (153901|3,154072|3,154072|2,154244|2) - Hm.. how about to arrange here pattern? Jack on 4 and at the same time on 3 play often pretty uncomfortable especially when it's not intentionally. i feel nothing wrong here aaa

02:36:644 (156644|3,156815|2,156815|3,156987|2) - same here. ^same but i do some changes in next part

02:51:387 (171387|2,171558|1) - CTRL + G here to keep the jack with every 2nd chord! okay

02:53:701 - How about something like this:

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These Pattern are basically for 02:54:215 (174215|3) - this note. The sound is totally different from the next notes which you have 3-2-3-2 and you should emphasize this by moving to to one, don't let it be next to 02:54:301 (174301|2) - i feel it doesn't have a problem, and hmmm, you can take a look this 02:52:930 (172930|0,173187|0,173444|0,173701|0,173958|3,174130|1) - i put 2 notes for every synth (or whatever that name) also 02:53:701 - you can clearly hear on that part ? yyyea that's i mean xD

Oki that's all for this difficult. Most of them are not tragic just for better balance/playability or consistency

Regret

Free PP!
Nah seriously, this Map is REALLY good mapped and you can nothing for the fact that the starrating is WAY to high for these Pattern.
I will not say to change it because it plays good like it is. Just one:
Peppy please fix starrating in osu!mania

Okay let's get over to the serious part, to the Mod!

01:05:958 - Why do you trigger me so hard again qwq. You know what to do, but fortunately only the first 1/3 should be arranged, from 01:11:444 - you did it right! \:D/ okay changed like triumph diff 'w')
But.. seriously, please consider to arrange at the same way i already said it in Triumph, it's really for the playabillity. While playing is simply feels totally wrong.

00:29:615 (29615|1,29787|1,29958|1) - Triple jack intentionally? oh come on, the flows is just fine and this not really hard for this diff plz xD
00:51:044 (51044|2,51215|2,51387|2) - same like above this part is have special fx sound, so i want to make a different feels here
00:52:072 (52072|2,52244|2,52415|2) - Aaaand here. same reason as ^

01:55:330 (115330|2,115587|3) - same like in Triumph, why you suddenly stop to jack the same sound. why so many people previously said that this part is have different picth??? . . . alright then, changed D:

02:28:501 (148501|3,148501|1,148758|1,148758|3) - different Pitch, try to make them different chords. Not same. kay kay, changed :3

02:57:901 - I don't really get how you followed with your chords here.. in the whole part i mean.. but i think this one should be a chord too, right? :/ added a note
03:08:872 - Here too? And remove a note from 03:08:787 (188787|3,188787|0) - same as ^

05:18:215 (318215|1,318301|1) - Do you really really really want to keep this Mini jack, with the absolute last note in the whole song? D:
I really recommend to remove 05:18:301 (318301|1) - to not frustrate player at the end as you wish ;D

Ok that's all!
I hope my last suggestion help you to improve the Map. Please call me back when you have it applied/replied!

Feerum wrote:

You misunderstood half of my suggestions. Nice.

However, map seems fine for me.

Approved

Here comes da big pp!

Ankanogradiel wrote:

Love the song. Congrats btw.

typeMARS wrote:

congratz

Harbyter wrote:

gratz