JUDYDANNY wrote:

『いつでも。tenga-0216から。はじまる。』

toara_fict wrote:

JUDYDANNY wrote:

『いつでも。tenga-0216から。はじまる。』

BlackHairEND wrote:

『いつでも。tenga-0216から。はじまる。』

1. Timing Points Conflict with Kantan
2. Nothink lel

1. 00:11:623 - _ 00:12:413 - just think this over.. i not want give a suggest.. try selfmod, find Emphasize ~_~
2. 00:24:728 - http://puu.sh/kfsx4/a279465c9b.jpg Imo, this emphasize is fit
3. 00:42:728 (75,76,77) - i hear.. 75, 76 is fit if don. 77 is high then thats 2 note * 00:41:465 - 00:43:992 - bcus on here is Consistent too *
4. 00:47:149 - don? looks fine with music..
5. wuw on Kiai, is PF mapped :3 and i find ur fav. Patterns 00:59:781 - *I like it, but just in here? lel XD*

1. 00:10:518 - change to don, is for emphasize.. to over with k k k
2. 00:13:044 (51,52) - ctrl g? and 00:13:676 - change this kat? for follow 00:13:202 (52,55) - this instrument
3. 00:25:044 - change ddkd to kkdd? i feel this fit.. just suggestion
4. 00:25:834 (109) - change this to k? for emphasize?
5. 00:31:518 - i think.. this must k.. are you think this too?
6. well same issue stuff before, lol mapped well on Kiai XD

1. 00:15:255 (43) - this not k? for emphasize too
2. 00:25:202 (76,77) - ctrl g?
3. 00:31:518 - same above in Oni
4. 00:40:202 - I hear that Drum.. want change this to kat?
5. 00:42:886 (137,138) - more fit if ctrl g this..
6. and well mapped on Kiai XD

1. rest looks fine.. idk XD and try with my Mod before *about Hitsounding*
2. 00:45:885 - adding slider in Kantan? XD lol nope

bank78952 wrote:

Hi
PM Request
I'll mod only Oni =w=
[Oni]
00:09:413 (34) k ok~
00:13:518 (54) k ok change~
00:17:307 add k No change.
00:19:518 add k No change.
00:19:676 - move to 00:19:834 No change.
00:31:518 k ok :3
[JuDa's Oni]
look fine.

Thanks mod

Surono wrote:

weh, dem sir son `L_` wuw Chaica's Collab ava with Lords.. wuw font of Lords ava is lol *Loads*

>General

1. Timing Points Conflict with Kantan ok
2. Nothink lel

>Oni

1. 00:10:518 - change to don, is for emphasize.. to over with k k k ok
2. 00:13:044 (51,52) - ctrl g? and 00:13:676 - change this kat? for follow 00:13:202 (52,55) - this instrument ok~
3. 00:25:044 - change ddkd to kkdd? i feel this fit.. just suggestion ok
4. 00:25:834 (109) - change this to k? for emphasize? ok~ change
5. 00:31:518 - i think.. this must k.. are you think this too?
6. well same issue stuff before, lol mapped well on Kiai XD fmm.. ok changed

>Muzukashii

1. 00:15:255 (43) - this not k? for emphasize too ok~
2. 00:25:202 (76,77) - ctrl g? ok~
3. 00:31:518 - same above in Oni okok :3
4. 00:40:202 - I hear that Drum.. want change this to kat? ok,change~
5. 00:42:886 (137,138) - more fit if ctrl g this.. ok~~
6. and well mapped on Kiai XD

>Futsuu & Kantan

1. rest looks fine.. idk XD and try with my Mod before *about Hitsounding*
2. 00:45:885 - adding slider in Kantan? XD lol nope fmm, No change,

GLuck~ `w`

Thanks mod~

1. Change Offset 570 to 571 then snap green line kiai time
2. reduce SV to 1.20 ? i think it's kinda fast for beginners, also bpm isn't slow
3. 01:27:728 - kiai time stopped here ? i think it's seems nicer

1. reduce SV to 1.20 or 1.30 ? same as kantan
2. 00:44:623 (17,18,19,20) - add finish here ? i think there are same like 00:34:518 - to 00:35:623 -
3. 01:27:728 - same as kantan

1. 00:34:360 (107) - remove finish ? there is no emphasis, unlike (108,109,110,111) -
2. 00:44:623 (145,146,147,148) - same as futsuu
3. 00:57:413 - add D here ?
4. 01:27:728 - same as kantan

1. 00:01:834 - why don't you put k here ? i think it would be pitied if you let it blank
2. 00:04:360 - same as above
3. 00:34:360 (148) - remove finish ? same as muzu
4. 00:44:623 (198,199,200,201) - add finish here ? same as futsuu
5. 01:22:834 - delete this to give a bit break since the note of this part is kinda long for oni. imo
6. 01:27:728 - same as kantan

1. 00:15:807 - there is seems a bit overlap, maybe you can increase it to x0.80 ?
2. 00:30:886 - move green line a bit earlier ? same you did like 00:25:755 - and 00:24:571 -
3. 00:47:071 (103,104) - delete this ? i think there is no anything to follow the note, also for accentuate drum sound at 00:46:992
4. why spinner end at 01:32:939 - ? why not 01:32:781 - ?

JUDYDANNY wrote:

『いつでも。tenga-0216から。はじまる。』

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi there o/ M4M request with BlackHairEND via PM

[Kantan]

1. Change Offset 570 to 571 then snap green line kiai time　　ah, ok thx :3
2. reduce SV to 1.20 ? i think it's kinda fast for beginners, also bpm isn't slow Done~
3. 01:27:728 - kiai time stopped here ? i think it's seems nicer thanks! changed~

[Futsuu]

1. reduce SV to 1.20 or 1.30 ? same as kantan ok, SV1.3 change.
2. 00:44:623 (17,18,19,20) - add finish here ? i think there are same like 00:34:518 - to 00:35:623 -fm, ok add finisher
3. 01:27:728 - same as kantan ok :3

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:34:360 (107) - remove finish ? there is no emphasis, unlike (108,109,110,111) - oh, thanks delete.
2. 00:44:623 (145,146,147,148) - same as futsuu ok
3. 00:57:413 - add D here ? ok~
4. 01:27:728 - same as kantan ok,change

[Oni]

1. 00:01:834 - why don't you put k here ? i think it would be pitied if you let it blank fmm, Blank because I did not feel the sound.
2. 00:04:360 - same as above same as above
3. 00:34:360 (148) - remove finish ? same as muzu ok~
4. 00:44:623 (198,199,200,201) - add finish here ? same as futsuu
5. 01:22:834 - delete this to give a bit break since the note of this part is kinda long for oni. imo ok, delete
6. 01:27:728 - same as kantan ok~

that's all, hope it would help you two. good luck for ranked

Thanks mod Nishizumi~

Nofool wrote:

JUDYDANNY wrote:

『いつでも。tenga-0216から。はじまる。』

Hi' as requested


Maybe kiai time should end at – 01:27:727 - or – 01:27:807 - ? The song kinda stops there, almost only the vocal is left. Also JUDY did it in his difficulty.
I see~ ok, kiai time end changed.
[Kantan]
- move - 00:21:885 (7) - to – 00:22:043 - ? like at – 00:29:622 -. No need to focus on the vocal for this. fm, ok moved notes
- move – 00:40:043 (26) – to – 00:40:359 - ? sounds a bit weird atm, better get similar rhythm for kk dD. ok~
- 00:56:622 – add K and change – 00:57:412 (3) – to D ? logic with others similar structures like at – 00:34:517 -.
- 01:16:833 - ^. ok, add & changed~
- 01:26:464 (9) – why no finisher ?_?　oh, I forgot wwww thx

[Futsuu]
- 00:00:571 - ; - 00:03:097 – tou have note there in the Kantan but not in the Futsuu ?　oh, sorry. It will unify the first Kantan and Futsuu.
- move – 00:11:939 (12) – to – 00:11:623 - ? logic with – 00:06:571 -, no need to follow that beat. ok, change~
- 00:16:676 – 00:20:781 – why not something like that :

since you chosed to follow the vocal at – 00:21:728 -.　I understand~ thanks, and 00:19:202 - deleted k. fixed :3
rest looks alright.

[Muzukashii]
- 00:06:255 - ; - 00:08:781 – and – 00:11:307 – add d ? and maybe remove – 00:12:255 (31) -. To make a change with the very first part without drums.
- 00:17:939 (52) – 00:20:465 (61) - ? Again why not following only the vocal here:c ? pretty calm part. fm, ok cjamge~
- maybe move – 00:51:571 (175) – to – 00:51:728 – as k ? fits more the vocal idk. ok, and 00:51:886 (178) - finisher delete.
- 00:57:413 – sounds empty:c. oh, finisher ww ok, deleted.
- 01:02:149 (220) – i would rather delete this one, better focus on the vocal and emphasis on the following finisher. ok, deleted.

[Oni]
- well weird choice on that first part imo, you followed more the vocal in lower difficulties but here you chose that weak melody:c.
- Also basically it sounds good overall but some patterns felt kinda random in the kiai, structures used could be a bit more similar etc. Random example : - 01:09:413 – nothing here but d at – 00:49:202 – x_x ?

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Good luck'

1. 01:10:202 (16) - を 01:10:044 - に移動　ノーツがズレてます

1. 00:47:307 (24) - big Dに変更　サビの入りですし盛り上げるためにもbigのほうが良いかもです
2. 01:06:728 (73) - add d 01:11:149 (86,87,88) - は3つ置いてるけどこっちは2つしか置いてなかったので

1. 00:45:886 (151) - add d　ドラムの音がここから始まってるので入れたほうが良いかなと思いました
   
2. 00:47:307 (159) - big Dに変更　普通と同じく
   
3. 01:07:518 (243) - change big K futsuuではbigだったので合わせた方が良いと思います

1. 00:47:307 (97) - 　big Kに変更　^

• 青線多くて面白いです

[Ni-Sokkususu] wrote:

Kantan

00:33:412 (19) - k ok~
00:40:043 (26) - move to 00:40:359 No change
01:04:991 (9,10) - Ctrl+GNo change

Futsuu

00:33:413 (56) - k ok~
01:04:992 (70,71) - Ctrl+G ok! and kantan,muzukashii,oni same as changed.
01:26:307 (21,22,23,24) - k k d d ok~

Muzukashii

00:42:413 (134,135,136,137) - d d k k ok~
01:04:992 (231,232) - Ctrl+G ok,change!
01:25:834 (314) ~ 01:27:255 (322)
ok :3

OniのBGの女の子が最も可愛いですねw :3
遅れてすみませんxd

Thanks mod!

sobatsuyu wrote:

hi(:3[m4m]

[Kantan]

1. 01:10:202 (16) - を 01:10:044 - に移動　ノーツがズレてます lol ありがとう！　かえました！

[Futsuu]

1. 00:47:307 (24) - big Dに変更　サビの入りですし盛り上げるためにもbigのほうが良いかもです　ok~
2. 01:06:728 (73) - add d 01:11:149 (86,87,88) - は3つ置いてるけどこっちは2つしか置いてなかったので ok　追加しました～

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:45:886 (151) - add d　ドラムの音がここから始まってるので入れたほうが良いかなと思いました　入れると微妙になるのでここは全無視という形で下からあった3つのノーツをdeleteしました！
   
2. 00:47:307 (159) - big Dに変更　普通と同じく　ok~
   
3. 01:07:518 (243) - change big K futsuuではbigだったので合わせた方が良いと思いますoK!

good luck╭( ･ㅂ･)و

-Eternal Love- wrote:

Hi~ Mod request. Sorry for the long delay...

Muzukashii

00:46:992 (6,7) - d K fmm... sorry, No change.

Oni

Hum...

JuDa's Oni

lolllll

good

Okoratu wrote:

i have not thaaaat much experience with taiko modding but ok i'll try i guess (this is like my 4th taiko mod or so)
some numbers could be off due to me messing around with the map and being too lazy to take timestamps only

[blackhairend's diffs]
i see no reason to end kiai on 01:27:807 - , 01:27:728 - makes way more sense tbh
is mapping the beginning of kantan and futsuu that hard that you didn't do it or ?_? 　　I prefer to ended up in this part thought a good
i see no reason to at least try it on futsuu like http://puu.sh/luSUE/8459011041.jpg
and on kantan like http://puu.sh/luSWy/04363c9365.jpg I think here (00: 05: 623 -) than the previous sound because it was felt may not be picked up,

[Oni]
00:11:307 (36) - 00:08:781 (25) - k? right now 00:06:255 (17) - is inconsistent with how these work, i'd be for d d k all the way　ah~, ok, 00:06:255 - I changed this part
00:16:518 - you don't skip this sound for the entire rest of the section iirc so i'd suggest adding a d there would work　fmm, No change. I do not have any place in order to give the part of the break. If you put this part (00:16:518 - ), do not you have to put in the same way here (00:20:465 - ).
00:23:939 (91) - i think k for the vocal would work better in this case than d d k No change. I think 00:23: 781 (89, 90) - can be heard in the same sound
00:25:360 - maybe adding a d would fit the sudden piano burst better idk if you're pimarily mapping it though ok, change.
01:07:439 - delete in order to balance the difficulty of this pattern a bit better?　No change. This remains so feel and sound of vocal is growing.
01:22:676 (306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321) - this is kind of monotonous are you sure you don't want to add some variety to this kind of pattern ? e_e　No change.　I think you may be left this. In particular.
01:27:255 (334) - would make a k because 01:26:307 (328,331,333) - are also represented with k　No change. The pitch of the vocal has dropped.

[Muzukashii]
00:06:886 - maybe another note here, to have 2/1 breaks like 00:09:413 (25,26) - 00:11:939 (33,34) - ? ok, change.
00:23:939 (70) - same as oni actually Same as Oni.
00:29:465 - adding a d for consistency with 00:28:044 (84,85,86) - 00:26:781 (80,81,82) - ?　　I will feel not so good to place here in kddk.
00:41:465 - you're mapping vocals mostly so you should be against skipping vocals, right? If so, consider adding a note here (maybe a k to fit 00:43:834 (139,140,141,142) - )　No change. It takes the vocal sound as it says you. However, I did not feel the need to Notes.
00:57:413 (48) - shouldn't this be a finisher?? (otherwise remove the finisher from 01:17:623 (131) - , too) ok, change.
01:25:834 (165) - maybe a finisher too, because this is a similar sound to 01:25:202 (163) - ok, change~.

[futsuu]
00:24:728 (8,9) - these feel pretty sudden and kinda out of place, i'd try if http://puu.sh/luM70/381e272a0b.jpg is better ok~,change.
00:30:571 (10) - move this to 00:29:939 - for consistency with 00:27:097 (3,4,5) - ? ok,change.
00:42:413 - maybe add a note for the vocal? fmm, No change. I want to take strongly the sound of the back.
the kiai is pretty smartass on how it maps vocals　:3

[kantan]
00:14:465 (1) - this one is pretty short and sudden, i'd personally avoid a spinner there 　I want to place the spinner because the sound of the back I heard a lot.

lol how to mod

if you think this is worth a m4m mod https://osu.ppy.sh/s/338942 xd

Okoratu wrote:

[juda]
nice bookmarks
That's my style eternity! ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"
is there a version of this bg with like... less pixels overall?
I hope BHE notice that.(136"6":768)
00:01:360 (4) - 00:03:886 (11) - i'd delete these, they seem forced for this calm beginning
Fixed. Sounds good for expressed the calm, also put only single is nice for reverb-delay sounded then.
00:12:413 - that you left this out confused me a bit, i think you did that in order to not have the pattern become too long, right?
i think the way the pattern is structured pretty balanced would allow for you to move 00:11:781 - to 00:12:413 - as a workaround
no changed, it works better pattern for followed to guitar also.
00:23:939 - i think deleting this plays better with the sv change that follows
nope, avoid to confusing the rhythm.
00:29:465 (18) - d for consistency with 00:28:202 (12,13) - 00:26:939 (6,7) - ?
fixed and re-arranged around the 1/2 patterns.
00:46:518 (7,8,9,10,11) - this whole pattern plays way better for me if this was a ddkdd, dunno i think that works as a better bridge between the kkd and kkk pattern
no change, not sounded up on back sounds.
your kiai was awesome ~
ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"

1. Remove bookmarks like Raiden says to do =w=
2. Maybe OD6? So easy to get SS ;;
   
3. 00:16:518 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - kkd d k kd? I think it fits the song much more.

1. 00:03:886 - add note? Since it's the same as 00:01:360 (4) -
2. 00:08:149 (22,23,24,25,26) - k dkd d? To folow the small guitar sound (I see you do it in Muzu!).
3. 00:10:992 (34,35,36) - dkd ^
4. 00:11:939 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - kkk kkk? Fits how the drum sounds more, I think.
5. 00:13:202 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - ^ Can be k k k k k k d d k d to fit nicer!
6. 00:46:676 (96) - d? Since drums go lower than 00:45:886 (89,90,91) - .

1. HP 6 to change from Oni?
   
2. 00:15:413 (47,48) - Delete? Seems far from Futsuu. Don't worth about Oni having 1/4 here. It helps spread to make this a break.
3. 00:16:676 to 00:25:834 is very similar to Oni. Futsuu is tooooo easy. Remove notes?
4. 00:28:202 (86) - Delete? This part is dense like Oni...
5. 00:31:360 (96) - ^
6. 00:42:413 (132,134) - Delete these? Density is also too much ;;
7. 00:50:702 - Add d? Since Oni has some hard 1/4.
8. 01:10:202 - Add d? ^
9. 00:55:044 - Add d? I think it's close to Futsuu, so maybe another note.
10. 00:58:281 (52) - Delete note? Oni only has ddd, and Futsuu is too simple.
11. 01:00:886 (64) - Maybe delete this, since it's close to Oni density. Change 01:00:728 (63) - to k when done?
12. 01:04:992 (82,83) - D d d K? This part is too close to Futsuu, and Oni has 1/4.
13. 01:15:255 - same as 00:55:044 . Add d?
14. 01:24:097 (158) - delete? Makes spread with Oni better. Futsuu can have some notes too.

1. HP 7 since Muzu may change to 6.
2. I think it needs to be a lot more dense, since Muzu is hard.
   
3. You need to map the intro here too. (00:00:571)00:07:834 - Add a k? Needs some more density here. You can also choose to make Muzu easier. Maybe Muzu can remove 00:05:939 (14) - 00:08:465 (22) - 00:10:992 (30) - .
4. 00:14:149 - Add d? Because this is a hard part in all diffs.
5. 00:26:781 - Add d? 00:29:307 - add k? This part is also too easy. Maybe easier Muzu is better. Your choice.
6. 00:42:886 - add k? Some more density here.
7. 00:58:360 - add k? Since this part is very easy...
8. 01:23:623 - add d? Close to Kantan here.
9. 01:24:886 - ^

1. HP8, if changes were made.
2. 01:01:044 (8) - Move to 01:01:202 ? I don't think it's a good idea to follow this vocal.
3. 01:21:255 (5) - ^ 01:21:413
4. 01:06:728 (16) - Delete? Because of rhythm change, maybe new players will be confused by this.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

osoko tatsujin

[Oni]

1. 00:03:886 - add note? Since it's the same as 00:01:360 (4) - ok
2. 00:08:149 (22,23,24,25,26) - k dkd d? To folow the small guitar sound (I see you do it in Muzu!). ok. change
3. 00:10:992 (34,35,36) - dkd ^ ok
4. 00:11:939 (38,39,40,41,42,43) - kkk kkk? Fits how the drum sounds more, I think. ok
5. 00:13:202 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - ^ Can be k k k k k k d d k d to fit nicer! ok
6. 00:46:676 (96) - d? Since drums go lower than 00:45:886 (89,90,91) - . ok

[Muzukashii]

1. HP 6 to change from Oni?
   
2. 00:15:413 (47,48) - Delete? Seems far from Futsuu. Don't worth about Oni having 1/4 here. It helps spread to make this a break. ok, delete
3. 00:16:676 to 00:25:834 is very similar to Oni. Futsuu is tooooo easy. Remove notes? ok, remove.
4. 00:28:202 (86) - Delete? This part is dense like Oni...
5. 00:31:360 (96) - ^
6. 00:42:413 (132,134) - Delete these? Density is also too much ;;
7. 00:50:702 - Add d? Since Oni has some hard 1/4.
8. 01:10:202 - Add d? ^
9. 00:55:044 - Add d? I think it's close to Futsuu, so maybe another note.
10. 00:58:281 (52) - Delete note? Oni only has ddd, and Futsuu is too simple.
11. 01:00:886 (64) - Maybe delete this, since it's close to Oni density. Change 01:00:728 (63) - to k when done?
12. 01:04:992 (82,83) - D d d K? This part is too close to Futsuu, and Oni has 1/4.
13. 01:15:255 - same as 00:55:044 . Add d?
14. 01:24:097 (158) - delete? Makes spread with Oni better. Futsuu can have some notes too.
    all ok. change.

[Futsuu]

1. HP 7 since Muzu may change to 6. ok, change.
2. I think it needs to be a lot more dense, since Muzu is hard.
   
3. You need to map the intro here too. (00:00:571)00:07:834 - Add a k? Needs some more density here. You can also choose to make Muzu easier. Maybe Muzu can remove 00:05:939 (14) - 00:08:465 (22) - 00:10:992 (30) - . fmm, ok
4. 00:14:149 - Add d? Because this is a hard part in all diffs. ok
5. 00:26:781 - Add d? 00:29:307 - add k? This part is also too easy. Maybe easier Muzu is better. Your choice. ok./color]
6. 00:42:886 - add k? Some more density here.
7. 00:58:360 - add k? Since this part is very easy... ok
8. 01:23:623 - add d? Close to Kantan here. ok=.
9. 01:24:886 - ^ ok

[Kantan]

1. HP8, if changes were made. ok
2. 01:01:044 (8) - Move to 01:01:202 ? I don't think it's a good idea to follow this vocal. ok,change.
3. 01:21:255 (5) - ^ 01:21:413
4. 01:06:728 (16) - Delete? Because of rhythm change, maybe new players will be confused by this. ok, delete~

So, I think Futsuu needs to be harder because Muzukashii is many times similar to Oni. Hopefully this mod can help a bit, but I think more changes will have to be made.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[JuDa's Oni]

1. Remove bookmarks like Raiden says to do =w=
   keep until last BN checking, to convey my intentions, Later I will remove them.
2. Maybe OD6? So easy to get SS ;;
   5.5 instead, 6.0 is harder imo for people such a diff level.
3. 00:16:518 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - kkd d k kd? I think it fits the song much more.
   No thinking the completed to follow backsounds... ;_; keep for kind to play with vocals.

So, I think Futsuu needs to be harder because Muzukashii is many times similar to Oni. Hopefully this mod can help a bit, but I think more changes will have to be made.

1. Tagsの"miagetegoran yozorano hoshiwo"を単語ごとにスペースで区切ってください。(miagete goran yozora no hoshi o)
2. 00:15:571 - 00:25:676 -, 非常に静かなパートなので音量を50%程度まで下げて良いと思います。イントロも同様？
3. Kiaiパートは他のパートとの音量差がほとんどないので80%で十分だと思います。
4. 譜面の長さや難度を考慮するとHigher Diffs (Muzukashii-Oni)のHPは6.0が適当だと思います。

1. 他のdifffsと同様にイントロにもノートを置いてください。eg. 00:00:571 -, 00:03:097 -, kat.
2. 00:14:465 (1) - Spinnerが非常に短いです。開始地点を00:13:202 - に移動するか、Normal noteに変更を推奨します。
3. 00:25:202 (10) - パターンごとの区切りを作るためにDeleteを検討してください。
4. 01:10:044 (1,2,3,4,5) - kiai序盤のd-k-ddkとよりパターンの結び付きを強くするために、k-d-kkdを使ってみてはどうでしょうか。

1. BGのX座標を削除してください。
2. 00:17:307 (4,5) - 十分な休憩が既にあるので、このパートの他のパターンと同様にボーカルをそのままフォローして良いと思います。
   
3. 00:24:728 (8) - このノートでフォローしている音が突然ピアノに寄ってしまっているので、パターンの区切りも兼ねてdeleteしても良いかもしれません。
4. 01:06:255 (9) - Finishが抜けています。KantanではしっかりFinish置いてますし音も前の2個の場所に負けず劣らず強いです。

1. 00:15:728 - add note. この小節のみ1拍目にノートが無いのは浮いているように感じました。Breakなら3/1でも十分機能しますし、ボーカルのフォローで1拍目に加えて4拍目にもノートを置いて良いと思います。
2. 00:23:781 (63,64,65) - ボーカルからピアノへの移り変わりがかなり唐突に思います。00:24:097 (65,66) - を削除、00:25:044 - にkを追加する等をして間を作ってみてください。
3. 00:25:834 - Add k. Breakは2/1で十分機能します。
4. 00:49:518 (17) - Remove Finish. 00:54:571 (39) - との一貫性。流れにもあまり合ってないように思います。
5. 01:09:729 (103) - ^
6. 01:05:623 (84) - Lower Diffsと同様にFinishのKを置いた方がより盛り上がります。

1. 00:04:044 (11) -, (5)との一貫性を考えるとdが適当だと思います。
2. 00:08:781 (25) - k. 00:05:939 (15,16,17) - との一貫性に加えて、ボーカルの高い音の表現にも繋がります。
3. 00:14:307 (51) - 個人的にですがkの方がよりメロディーにフィットしていると思いました。
4. 00:20:307 (76) - ボーカルのピッチは上がっているので素直にkで拾っていいと思います。
5. 00:22:992 (87) - 実際にピアノの音は下がっていますが、このパートの譜面はピアノよりもボーカルにフォーカスを当てているように見えるので、ここはボーカルの伸びた音の表現としてkatを置くというのもアリなんじゃないかな～と思います。
6. 00:29:623 - スネア割と強いのでadd k?
7. 00:30:571 (23,24,25) - kkd,. ボーカルの音程が下がっているのでその表現として。
8. 00:42:097 (71) - FInishが良くフィットすると思います。
9. 00:43:518 (80) - Finish, 00:40:992 (66) - との一貫性。
10. KiaiパートのFinishに関してはMuzukashiiと同様です。

1. 00:15:255 (17) - 若干煩いように感じました。大音符無しでも十分盛り上がると思います。
2. 00:24:571 - この場所から加速を始める必要はないと思います。緑線delete. また、00:25:834 (1,2) - のノートが浮いて見えることを回避するために00:25:755 - の緑線を0.9に変更することを推奨します。
3. 00:30:886 (26) - この場所で一気に盛り上がるので前のパターンとくっつけずに1.0xにして良いと思います。プレイ面からみても問題ありません。
4. 00:49:518 (15,16,17,18,1) - kdddkの配色に少し疑問を感じました。特に目立った音が鳴っているわけでも無いので真ん中のdddを消してシンプルに纏めても良いと思います。あとは00:54:413 (14,15) - との一貫性?
5. 01:09:807 (16,17,18) - ^

tasuke912 wrote:

Hello there. 555posts
[ General]

1. Tagsの"miagetegoran yozorano hoshiwo"を単語ごとにスペースで区切ってください。(miagete goran yozora no hoshi o)　ok, 区切っておきました。
2. 00:15:571 - 00:25:676 -, 非常に静かなパートなので音量を50%程度まで下げて良いと思います。イントロも同様？下げました。
3. Kiaiパートは他のパートとの音量差がほとんどないので80%で十分だと思います。 適用しました。
4. 譜面の長さや難度を考慮するとHigher Diffs (Muzukashii-Oni)のHPは6.0が適当だと思います。変更しました。

[ Kantan]

1. 他のdifffsと同様にイントロにもノートを置いてください。eg. 00:00:571 -, 00:03:097 -, kat.　追加しました～
2. 00:14:465 (1) - Spinnerが非常に短いです。開始地点を00:13:202 - に移動するか、Normal noteに変更を推奨します。　開始地点を変更しました。
3. 00:25:202 (10) - パターンごとの区切りを作るためにDeleteを検討してください。　ok, Delete.
4. 01:10:044 (1,2,3,4,5) - kiai序盤のd-k-ddkとよりパターンの結び付きを強くするために、k-d-kkdを使ってみてはどうでしょうか。 配色を変えておきました。

[ Futsuu]

1. BGのX座標を削除してください。　0に戻しておきました～。
2. 00:17:307 (4,5) - 十分な休憩が既にあるので、このパートの他のパターンと同様にボーカルをそのままフォローして良いと思います。　画像のように配置を変えました。
   
3. 00:24:728 (8) - このノートでフォローしている音が突然ピアノに寄ってしまっているので、パターンの区切りも兼ねてdeleteしても良いかもしれません。　消したほうがいいように感じたので消しました。
4. 01:06:255 (9) - Finishが抜けています。KantanではしっかりFinish置いてますし音も前の2個の場所に負けず劣らず強いです。気がつきませんでした、追加しておきました。

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:15:728 - add note. この小節のみ1拍目にノートが無いのは浮いているように感じました。Breakなら3/1でも十分機能しますし、ボーカルのフォローで1拍目に加えて4拍目にもノートを置いて良いと思います。　１拍目と4拍目にdを追加しました。
2. 00:23:781 (63,64,65) - ボーカルからピアノへの移り変わりがかなり唐突に思います。00:24:097 (65,66) - を削除、00:25:044 - にkを追加する等をして間を作ってみてください。　なるほど、ノーツを二つ削除、kを追加しました。
3. 00:25:834 - Add k. Breakは2/1で十分機能します。　ok, 追加しました。
4. 00:49:518 (17) - Remove Finish. 00:54:571 (39) - との一貫性。流れにもあまり合ってないように思います。　これはDeleteの削除し忘れでした、消しておきます。
5. 01:09:729 (103) - ^　上に同じ理由です。
6. 01:05:623 (84) - Lower Diffsと同様にFinishのKを置いた方がより盛り上がります。　なるほど、追加しました。

[ Oni]

1. 00:04:044 (11) -, (5)との一貫性を考えるとdが適当だと思います。　ok, changed.
2. 00:08:781 (25) - k. 00:05:939 (15,16,17) - との一貫性に加えて、ボーカルの高い音の表現にも繋がります。 kのほうが良く聞こえたので変更しておきます。
3. 00:14:307 (51) - 個人的にですがkの方がよりメロディーにフィットしていると思いました。　ここは 00:14:149 - 同じように聞こえるため変更はしません。
4. 00:20:307 (76) - ボーカルのピッチは上がっているので素直にkで拾っていいと思います。　たしかに、ピアノも高い音なのでkに変えました。
5. 00:22:992 (87) - 実際にピアノの音は下がっていますが、このパートの譜面はピアノよりもボーカルにフォーカスを当てているように見えるので、ここはボーカルの伸びた音の表現としてkatを置くというのもアリなんじゃないかな～と思います。　うーん、ヴォーカルもピアノも下がっている音なのでここはどうしてもdで取りたいです。変更はなしで。
6. 00:29:623 - スネア割と強いのでadd k?　ok, added.
7. 00:30:571 (23,24,25) - kkd,. ボーカルの音程が下がっているのでその表現として。　素直にヴォーカルとったほうがいいとおもったので変更します。
8. 00:42:097 (71) - FInishが良くフィットすると思います。　ok, added.
9. 00:43:518 (80) - Finish, 00:40:992 (66) - との一貫性。 ok, 追加しておきました。
10. KiaiパートのFinishに関してはMuzukashiiと同様です。　同様に消しておきました。

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Thanks mod 　急ぎで頼んでしまったことですが的確にmodしてくださりありがとうございました :3

tasuke912 wrote:

[ JuDa's Oni]

1. 00:15:255 (17) - 若干煩いように感じました。大音符無しでも十分盛り上がると思います。
2. 00:24:571 - この場所から加速を始める必要はないと思います。緑線delete. また、00:25:834 (1,2) - のノートが浮いて見えることを回避するために00:25:755 - の緑線を0.9に変更することを推奨します。
3. 00:30:886 (26) - この場所で一気に盛り上がるので前のパターンとくっつけずに1.0xにして良いと思います。プレイ面からみても問題ありません。
4. 00:49:518 (15,16,17,18,1) - kdddkの配色に少し疑問を感じました。特に目立った音が鳴っているわけでも無いので真ん中のdddを消してシンプルに纏めても良いと思います。あとは00:54:413 (14,15) - との一貫性?
5. 01:09:807 (16,17,18) - ^
   
   All fixed as your suggestion~

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