m4
m
----
00:23:210 (3,4,5) - i understand the point why did u do this, but rn flow looks really awkward exspecially here 00:23:810 (5,6) -
00:36:610 (3,4) - ctrl+g will work better imo
00:56:210 (1) - this note needs more emphasize becuz there is a strong downbeat
01:09:410 (2,3) - imo it looks more like 1/2 gap after playing this 00:16:210 (1,2,3) -
01:21:810 (1) - end this spinner here 01:23:410 - so it would match with the strong sound in da song. and u can start the second one here 01:23:510 -
01:26:985 (1) - im not really an expert in timing but i swear that this slider should stand on a big white tick. so i think that another timing point here 01:26:985 - is needed
01:47:610 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - without any strong hs these jumps looks unsupported and overmapped, so prolly ull need some stronger claps? (u can also put clap+whistle one the (1) notes and clap othe (2))
01:49:110 (1) - missing clap
also i dont understand why did u lowered the spacing here 01:49:110 (1,2,3,4) - because there were no huge changes in the music
02:04:110 (1,2,3) - spacing here looks very minor compare to another spacings in this part. so id suggest u to make it bigger
02:19:485 (2,3,4,5,6) - here le spacing looks pretty weird and huge, how is it even supported by the music?
02:27:922 (1,2,3) - spacing here looks pretty strange becuz 02:28:485 (2) - this note needs much more emphasize than this one 02:28:672 (3) - because there beat there is stronger
02:31:110 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same thing about such jumps without strong hitsounds
02:34:110 (1) - move it like to x=237 y=315 for a better flow
02:41:610 (1,2) - this spacing is unreadable because its the only one in the whole section.. but i liked this idea
02:43:110 (1,2) - 02:43:672 (5,6) - 02:44:235 (9,10) - this linear parallel horisontal flow kills me
02:46:110 (1,2,3) - id make this -10% volume becuz its quiter than the chorus before
03:07:110 (1) - if ctrl+g this it would be much better 2 play
03:08:610 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ya, the same thing
03:10:860 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - what about ctrl+g this too and doing smth like this
http://cs604528.vk.me/v604528809/1d709/2ccPmwgaAv0.jpg03:16:390 - here bpm is 135 cuz here 03:18:310 - here 03:20:230 - etc are downbeats
03:59:056 - and here it is 150
04:40:450 (1) - and again
04:49:450 (1,2) - a bit unreadable spacing just because its unique in the whole part
05:33:700 (1,2,3,4) - make these notes a bit louder (+7-10%) due to the musik
pretty decent
ask someone to check your timing and try to add some hitsound to those jumpy parts
best of luck