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Nathan
06:38:746 -
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also don't forget to move 04:28:134 (2) to x443 y233
Secretpipe


So many pros on this lmao

Lemme try to mod that lo

[Collab]

  1. 00:15:073 (1) - In my opinion , that slider could be replaced with a 1/2 repeat slider since I thought you'd cover the sound at 00:15:277 - and
  2. 00:24:052 (1) - Maybe that a SV change would better suit for that "WOOOSH" sound?
  3. 00:59:563 (3) - This is really nazi but I'd suggest ya to move the red anchor a lil bit to the right to give a cleaner aspect of that slider! Also , the symmetrical idea you tried to make with 00:58:950 (1) - isn't changed at all! :
  4. 01:26:807 (2) - In my opinion , the lil overlap here isn't that disturbin' but I felt like you could space it from the triple at 01:26:501 (3,4,1) - in order to emphasis the speed up made with 01:26:705 (1,2,1) - ! (I may be wrong haha)
  5. 01:39:052 - In my opinion, addin' a note between those two sliders (01:38:746 (5,6) - ) wouldn't hurt since it'd not be overmapped at all :D
  6. 01:58:746 (1) - Why is the spacin' different from the consistent spacin' you have been using with the whole stream here? That apply for the followin' patterns which are exactly like that (I can smell a reply like "made on purpose cuz XXX)
  7. 04:58:236 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - That NC spam isn't really useful but okay..
  8. 05:04:767 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Same here aswell
  9. 05:39:971 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - and 05:44:460 (1,1,1,1) - aswell
  10. 05:56:909 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - I didn't find a reason in the music to explain the change of the DS from 05:57:011 (5) - to 05:57:114 (1) - . Is it on purpose?

Amazing.
Gamu

Secretpipe wrote:

[Collab]

  1. 01:39:052 - In my opinion, addin' a note between those two sliders (01:38:746 (5,6) - ) wouldn't hurt since it'd not be overmapped at all :D :arrow: nice! added a note.
  2. 05:56:909 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - I didn't find a reason in the music to explain the change of the DS from 05:57:011 (5) - to 05:57:114 (1) - . Is it on purpose? :arrow: yea I changed the DS on purpose. I don't know whether it is really good or bad, but I want to keep this ;)
Thank you for modding :)

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Topic Starter
Leader
EvilElvis and RLC told me to fix for them and this is what I did (it also includes what I didn't fix in my parts), thanks to everyone

Rohit6

Rohit6 wrote:

  1. 04:58:542 (1) - should probably be a slider if you wanna follow the synth-y part , 05:05:073 (1) - here too A whole stream fits better, in my opinion, there's no strong sound to make these two notes a slider

ProBox

ProfessionalBox wrote:



  • RLC

    05:25:583 (2,3,4) - I feel like if you reversed the rhythms here it would be much better, feels unnecessarily hard since it it isn't following anything in the music (unlike the 2 measures before this). I would do something like this to keep the challenge but make it better rhythmwise I believe that keeping slider's heads on white/red tick would make the pattern easier and understandable to play


    EvilElvis

    04:11:399 (8) - I think making this a 1/4 slider is really cool compared to just a circle Why? I can't feel a proper sound to justify this, a circle-only pattern works fine
    04:13:032 (10) - Same here ^
    04:56:297 (1) - After all of the speedups building up to this part, this kills the mood imo. Even though the whole part is based on heavy sv changes, I think this one should be atleast a bit faster sv Just rose until 0.75..

Osuology

Osuology wrote:

01:07:522 (2) - I recommend changing to straight slider and make it snappy flow because the next note is on a beat. I don't really think it is needed

01:09:665 (3,1) - Not a big fan of this jump. You never really mapped the bass drum so strongly before, why do you now? But they are fine, I don't think it can be considered inconsistent, keeping it for now

01:16:195 (3,1) - Again with the jump. The next one works because a cymbal crash is also used. ^

01:18:338 (1) - Why use this and then straight? I can't see the problem with this, it's part of the structure

04:10:787 (5,6,7,8) - Basically unreadable compared to 1,2,3,4 Man, that's easy to play if we have to be honest

Fort

Fort wrote:

  1. 01:18:644 (1) - well this is looks like a slider velocity mistake, i highly suggest you to put slower SV for that slider because it can be misreaded by some player due it exactly following vocal and has lower pitch sound on the music, or maybe you can put circle on 01:18:644 - and move 01:18:644 (1) - to 01:18:644 - and the pattern will be neutralized It is weird on purpose, and actually works nice
  2. 02:38:746 - i think these part is too repetitive to receive the pattern like that, looks boring and feels of a bit, well 2 guy amde the same part like that and it's same, looks like not a collab map lol I'll blame myself for this, but as long as it is mapped properly I don't really want to fix or remap
  3. 04:55:889 - well for these part the SV looks unnecessary like when people map an intense and fast paced musical beat you're mapping these one with a slow slider (especially the 1/4 sliders there, makes the emphasize seems really lack, well just only jumps can't make the emphasize of song looks good for me, but at lease make the 1/4 slider has faster slider to make some consistency for next part with a fast sliders too (well if you say it's your style probably it's weird when people mapping the part with fast SV) It may play and look inconsistent but it is mapped properly, just a different style
  4. if you want to put emphasize on 05:22:726 (1) -, please change 05:22:522 (3) - to a circles, and it is more better and it can be make sense I don't see the need of a huge emphasize as you say, a slider works fine too
  5. 05:22:011 - well for me this part is weird since it was following synth with a new combo landed on that but suddenly follow to drum or voccal or somthing else but the combo still landed on synth sound (on some part) and that's kinda inconsistant a bit)
  6. 05:38:746 (1,2,1,2,1) - and 05:40:175 (1,1,1,1,1) - well i can say these NCs is pointless, no SV changes, no unique patterning, it just follow the kick snare sound and do some Copy pasta rotating trick but it has NC spam, i guess remove ncs better It would be too messy without NC, I disagree
  7. 06:00:243 (2) - that laser and the 1/6 beat kinda rare to map but you map on that, looks odd. you better put that slider on 06:00:481 - to make the combo consistant with 06:00:481 (3) - since it's mapped on 1/4 beat, and it's okay with that laser since you can still hit that sound on 1/4 tho Fixed in another way
ProfessionalBox
denied hooly
[Bau]
Best map ever
Nice :D
Luel Roseline

Leader wrote:

I fixed most of the suggestions for my parts, really thanks

(I need a cool storyboard though, please come in help)
http://puu.sh/qMz12/821b62fd62.zip
Only collab name...

Don't forget

Turn on the Widescreen Support
Akali
add hitech to tags, this is really important
Furryy
Bring this back, need rank
Topic Starter
Leader
It will get back, someday
Furryy
I don't even think my mod didn't even had the slightest help a all, so I'd probably leave this one out. Can try to give kuds though.
Seijiro
mo sembra che e' colpa mia che e' morta xd
Seijiro
I guess I don't really have much to do here
#1
Mazziv
LETS GO BOYS
Akali

MrSergio wrote:

I guess I don't really have much to do here
#1
what about fixing genre tags :( hitech + psytrance, drumstep and dubstep are a stretch, could update without popping
ProfessionalBox

Akali wrote:

what about fixing genre tags hitech + psytrance, drumstep and dubstep are a stretch, could update without popping
felys
Nozhomi
Soon~ Now!

  1. Maybe add a silent sliderslide for some sliders on calm parts like the start or the end ? See what you prefer.
  2. 00:03:644 (1,2) - Why not silent sliders end like you did on two previous one ? It would be coherent. I understand for 00:05:277 (1,2) - since bg sound cames but not these two.
  3. 01:48:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this works really much here for 2 reasons. First, the song is a sort of continued sound distorded, so for me a kind of vibrating slider would fit more this sound, and second this is the start of a calmer section so I don't think it should be here to make more this section like a little more relaxing for the players. And Normal hitsound don't fit this at all, sounds terrible. Simple soft is way enough, and maybe a little less loud at the end.
  4. 02:25:175 (1) - Eventually, this circle could be out from the stream since it maps vocal and not the drums.
  5. 02:50:583 (2,4) - Unstack on purpose ?
  6. 04:49:358 - I would maybe nerf a little this section, the different gaps between reverse is quite hard to catch at this speed and lead easiely to slider breaks.

Not much more to say here.
Mukyu~
Avena
Asahina Momoko
Topic Starter
Leader
Updated + fixed tags and the long slider on Alu's slow part, thank you!
Nozhomi
#2

Don't forget to wait 24h before qualification~
Topic Starter
Leader
Thank you!

And now, the hardest part... finding the last bn
Musty
LIT
Rizia
checked some mistake via irc
everything did great
qualified
domSaur
o wow finally gratz(not rlc)
Nozhomi
Finally wow took way too much time :D
Andrea
Congrats Leader 8-)
ProfessionalBox
Nice
Topic Starter
Leader
felys

Leader wrote:

SIGNORI

BUONASERA
UndeadCapulet
04:49:358 (1) - this nerf is depressing
Caput Mortuum
nice
Haruto
Congrats!
Aurele
OH SHIT.

Congrats!! <3
Arusamour
great way to start 2017 lmaoxd
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