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Camellia - PLANET//SHAPER
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take my kudosu
and yes an awesome map needs an awesome sb
and yes an awesome map needs an awesome sb
From my queue L0L?
osz is a little big might want to reduce it somehow.
00:05:277 (1,2) - This doesn't really match flow of previous sliders. Previous sliders were dropoff flow now we have circular flow. Also, these are straight and other sliders are curved so please be more consistent.
00:06:909 (1,2) - Again with the flow it's not consistent.
00:09:766 (4,1) - This jump is a lot. You've got to realize, the slider ball ends on the opposite direction from the hit circle and so it makes more of a jump, but in this case it doesn't really seem like the 1 really deserves that at all.
00:12:828 (4,1) - ^
00:13:950 (5,1,2,3) - Dropoff, to dropoff, to dropoff, to circular???? what?? why?!?
00:15:787 (3,4) - Again?
00:30:583 (1,2,3) - This is not the same flow as 00:28:950 (1,2,3,4) , but they are the same notes?
00:33:746 (8,1) - If you wanted a jump, at least make it so it doesn't touch the stream, it clearly deserves more than a bump of 0.5x DS. Plus, it doesn't even feel that way to the player, since he won't follow to the middle of the 8, so it really has no effect on the player.
00:37:114 (1,2,3) - Snappy flow? Are you kidding me right now? Previously you used very circular flow so please. Remain consistent.
00:37:522 (3) - I'd be suprised if people didn't break on this, considering how the ball ends in the opposite direction of the next note, and how it's 1/8.
00:44:052 (1,1) - Again, some snappy flow here. Maybe you could argue it's barely circular but honestly it's more like snappy. (I see you probably intended this one, but I still don't see how it fits so an explanation would be right.
00:47:216 (1) - ew inconsistent slider shape ew ewewwewwwwwwwwwwwww
00:47:726 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I like how you're kinda building up from straight sliders to curvy, but then you just kinda squander it and don't use circular sliders at all in this section starting here: 00:52:624 (1) . Not to mention you used a straight slider at the end anyways: 00:51:909 (2) .
00:51:093 (2) - Wowzers that's a little fast
00:58:338 (4) - Why NC? It doesn't deserve it for any reason. SV doesn't change, rhythm doesn't change, there's no distance arrows between them.
00:58:746 (1) - Slider is curved vs others in this section
00:59:563 (3) - Using another type of slider for no reason again. Previously you did this, but there was good reason because they were different notes and rhythms like here: 00:56:093 (2) - where you hear the "woo". In this case, there's nothing arguing a different slider type.
01:07:522 (2) - I recommend changing to straight slider and make it snappy flow because the next note is on a beat.
01:09:665 (3,1) - Not a big fan of this jump. You never really mapped the bass drum so strongly before, why do you now?
01:12:828 (3,4) - Through these two and 01:14:767 (1,3) - these two, you appear to be shifting slider shapes for the next section, but once again you didn't change anything once the actual section starts.
01:16:195 (3,1) - Again with the jump. The next one works because a cymbal crash is also used.
01:18:338 (1) - Why use this and then straight?
01:23:236 (1) - Doesn't deserve to be red pointed.
01:25:685 (1) - Unsnapped green line around here
I think you get the point by now hopefully, because I'm not going to look for these type of issues anymore.
01:43:440 (2,3,4,5) - I read this as one uniform stream due to how DS is laid out throughout the map. Something needs to change.
02:41:603 (5) - This kinda deserves a jump imo.
I think a lot of people are going to say "none of you are hanzer" mainly because you aren't extremely consistent with the stream jumps. For example here 03:07:318 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you don't have any stream jumps.
04:10:787 (5,6,7,8) - Basically unreadable compared to 1,2,3,4
04:15:073 (1) - looks much better imo if you just have 4 as a wave (just delete the 2nd and 5th points)
Last slider is on the long side might want to watch out for that.
EDIT: Woops, I meant last spinner is long.
osz is a little big might want to reduce it somehow.
00:05:277 (1,2) - This doesn't really match flow of previous sliders. Previous sliders were dropoff flow now we have circular flow. Also, these are straight and other sliders are curved so please be more consistent.
00:06:909 (1,2) - Again with the flow it's not consistent.
00:09:766 (4,1) - This jump is a lot. You've got to realize, the slider ball ends on the opposite direction from the hit circle and so it makes more of a jump, but in this case it doesn't really seem like the 1 really deserves that at all.
00:12:828 (4,1) - ^
00:13:950 (5,1,2,3) - Dropoff, to dropoff, to dropoff, to circular???? what?? why?!?
00:15:787 (3,4) - Again?
00:30:583 (1,2,3) - This is not the same flow as 00:28:950 (1,2,3,4) , but they are the same notes?
00:33:746 (8,1) - If you wanted a jump, at least make it so it doesn't touch the stream, it clearly deserves more than a bump of 0.5x DS. Plus, it doesn't even feel that way to the player, since he won't follow to the middle of the 8, so it really has no effect on the player.
00:37:114 (1,2,3) - Snappy flow? Are you kidding me right now? Previously you used very circular flow so please. Remain consistent.
00:37:522 (3) - I'd be suprised if people didn't break on this, considering how the ball ends in the opposite direction of the next note, and how it's 1/8.
00:44:052 (1,1) - Again, some snappy flow here. Maybe you could argue it's barely circular but honestly it's more like snappy. (I see you probably intended this one, but I still don't see how it fits so an explanation would be right.
00:47:216 (1) - ew inconsistent slider shape ew ewewwewwwwwwwwwwwww
00:47:726 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I like how you're kinda building up from straight sliders to curvy, but then you just kinda squander it and don't use circular sliders at all in this section starting here: 00:52:624 (1) . Not to mention you used a straight slider at the end anyways: 00:51:909 (2) .
00:51:093 (2) - Wowzers that's a little fast
00:58:338 (4) - Why NC? It doesn't deserve it for any reason. SV doesn't change, rhythm doesn't change, there's no distance arrows between them.
00:58:746 (1) - Slider is curved vs others in this section
00:59:563 (3) - Using another type of slider for no reason again. Previously you did this, but there was good reason because they were different notes and rhythms like here: 00:56:093 (2) - where you hear the "woo". In this case, there's nothing arguing a different slider type.
01:07:522 (2) - I recommend changing to straight slider and make it snappy flow because the next note is on a beat.
01:09:665 (3,1) - Not a big fan of this jump. You never really mapped the bass drum so strongly before, why do you now?
01:12:828 (3,4) - Through these two and 01:14:767 (1,3) - these two, you appear to be shifting slider shapes for the next section, but once again you didn't change anything once the actual section starts.
01:16:195 (3,1) - Again with the jump. The next one works because a cymbal crash is also used.
01:18:338 (1) - Why use this and then straight?
01:23:236 (1) - Doesn't deserve to be red pointed.
01:25:685 (1) - Unsnapped green line around here
I think you get the point by now hopefully, because I'm not going to look for these type of issues anymore.
01:43:440 (2,3,4,5) - I read this as one uniform stream due to how DS is laid out throughout the map. Something needs to change.
02:41:603 (5) - This kinda deserves a jump imo.
I think a lot of people are going to say "none of you are hanzer" mainly because you aren't extremely consistent with the stream jumps. For example here 03:07:318 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you don't have any stream jumps.
04:10:787 (5,6,7,8) - Basically unreadable compared to 1,2,3,4
04:15:073 (1) - looks much better imo if you just have 4 as a wave (just delete the 2nd and 5th points)
Last slider is on the long side might want to watch out for that.
EDIT: Woops, I meant last spinner is long.
Fixed some of the mods, thanks!
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Planet//shaper
looks like a doritos chips for me
weird patterning map, looks like boogie but this has lower bpm
i don't know who mapped the parts. once again i said, i don't know who mapped the whole parts
well they're something that i want to know from this map in here
want to ask about something there?, pm in game
looks like a doritos chips for me
weird patterning map, looks like boogie but this has lower bpm
i don't know who mapped the parts. once again i said, i don't know who mapped the whole parts
well they're something that i want to know from this map in here
- 01:12:011 (1) - well i guess you need to put circle in here 01:12:318 - since it has quite strong beat for a clickable object, the slider tail only looks kinda weird and has lack of emphasize, and when you add the circle it will be nice i think
- 01:18:644 (1) - well this is looks like a slider velocity mistake, i highly suggest you to put slower SV for that slider because it can be misreaded by some player due it exactly following vocal and has lower pitch sound on the music, or maybe you can put circle on 01:18:644 - and move 01:18:644 (1) - to 01:18:644 - and the pattern will be neutralized
- objects 1887? M1887 is a shotgun, this map can shot and blow your head with a shotgun, so this map confirmed a shotgun
- 02:38:746 - i think these part is too repetitive to receive the pattern like that, looks boring and feels of a bit, well 2 guy amde the same part like that and it's same, looks like not a collab map lol
- 03:44:052 (1) - try another shape? this BIG CIRCLE sliders looks boring
- 04:55:889 - well for these part the SV looks unnecessary like when people map an intense and fast paced musical beat you're mapping these one with a slow slider (especially the 1/4 sliders there, makes the emphasize seems really lack, well just only jumps can't make the emphasize of song looks good for me, but at lease make the 1/4 slider has faster slider to make some consistency for next part with a fast sliders too (well if you say it's your style probably it's weird when people mapping the part with fast SV)
- 05:31:297 (2) - i think your offbeat sliders kinda hurting 05:31:399 - vocals, looks like that part needs circle 1/4 stream instead of slider there
- 05:20:685 (4) - this is more awkward since you looks like mapping a vocal with 05:20:379 (1,2,3) - circles before, probably just put pentuple in there and it will be nice like you put triples on 05:15:481
- if you want to put emphasize on 05:22:726 (1) -, please change 05:22:522 (3) - to a circles, and it is more better and it can be make sense
- and yeah when you put NC on 05:22:726 (1) - please don't go back to drum mapping on 05:23:032 (2,3,4) - it is kinda confusing in term of patterning, and yeah this is probably should be a slider to follow the first combo (like this can be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5719728)
- 05:22:011 - well for me this part is weird since it was following synth with a new combo landed on that but suddenly follow to drum or voccal or somthing else but the combo still landed on synth sound (on some part) and that's kinda inconsistant a bit)
- 05:38:746 (1,2,1,2,1) - and 05:40:175 (1,1,1,1,1) - well i can say these NCs is pointless, no SV changes, no unique patterning, it just follow the kick snare sound and do some Copy pasta rotating trick but it has NC spam, i guess remove ncs better
- 06:00:243 (2) - that laser and the 1/6 beat kinda rare to map but you map on that, looks odd. you better put that slider on 06:00:481 - to make the combo consistant with 06:00:481 (3) - since it's mapped on 1/4 beat, and it's okay with that laser since you can still hit that sound on 1/4 tho
- 06:03:032 (2) - i think this offbeat slider kinda skipping strong beat so much such as 06:03:236 -, yeah that's not bad but i suggest you put something like 06:02:420 (6,1,1) - for better emphasize beat or just like this to iumprove your structur of the part 06:06:297 (2,3) - i think repetitive patterns in here can be okay since this part is not really intense like the part before
- 06:32:828 (2,3,1) - weird stack ever
- yeah
- okay
want to ask about something there?, pm in game
Kloyd wrote:
hi
- 01:39:971 (1) - ctrlg
nope. keep it.
gl
Battle wrote:
,
[Collab]
03:11:399 - I think adding a few more inherited points to slightly increase sv to go along with the increasing intensity of the music would work well in this case
bbj0920 wrote:
03:10:787 (2) - aww this is ambiguous... but NC here too? Gap between 03:10:379 (6,1) - can be really easily misread, so you could do that to imply here's something different
Rohit6 wrote:
- 05:46:501 - would be cool if this part had 1/8 like this earlier parts but okay
lazyboy007 wrote:
03:10:991 (3) - replace this with a very slow slider imo (like 0.5x SV) but not repeat slider, the bass is a continuous note ^^
Osuology wrote:
01:43:440 (2,3,4,5) - I read this as one uniform stream due to how DS is laid out throughout the map. Something needs to change.
03:07:318 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you don't have any stream jumps.
Thank you for modding! Sorry I kept you waiting.Fort wrote:
- 06:00:243 (2) - that laser and the 1/6 beat kinda rare to map but you map on that, looks odd. you better put that slider on 06:00:481 - to make the combo consistant with 06:00:481 (3) - since it's mapped on 1/4 beat, and it's okay with that laser since you can still hit that sound on 1/4 tho
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Well Gamu, I meant that not having stream jumps is kindof inconsistent with the other mapping styles. I understand it is a collab, but you should try at least to have close styles.
I don't want to make the "stream jumps", and I feel it doesn't fit the music...Osuology wrote:
Well Gamu, I meant that not having stream jumps is kindof inconsistent with the other mapping styles. I understand it is a collab, but you should try at least to have close styles.
applied probox's suggestion and fixed 01:48:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - as to more player kind pattern
@osuology all of them are fine enough for me so changed nothing, thanks for check
@osuology all of them are fine enough for me so changed nothing, thanks for check
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double lol
Fort wrote:
- 06:03:032 (2) - i think this offbeat slider kinda skipping strong beat so much such as 06:03:236 -, yeah that's not bad but i suggest you put something like 06:02:420 (6,1,1) - for better emphasize beat or just like this to iumprove your structur of the part 06:06:297 (2,3) - i think repetitive patterns in here can be okay since this part is not really intense like the part before I wanted to give room to both rhythms for the sake of variety. There's a pattern in which these appear: 06:03:032 (2) - emphasis on tail, 06:06:501 (3) - emphasis on head, 06:09:563 (2) - tail, 06:13:032 (3) - head. So yeah, Im keeping it.
06:38:746 -
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also don't forget to move 04:28:134 (2) to x443 y233
So many pros on this lmao
Lemme try to mod that lo
[Collab]
- 00:15:073 (1) - In my opinion , that slider could be replaced with a 1/2 repeat slider since I thought you'd cover the sound at 00:15:277 - and
- 00:24:052 (1) - Maybe that a SV change would better suit for that "WOOOSH" sound?
- 00:59:563 (3) - This is really nazi but I'd suggest ya to move the red anchor a lil bit to the right to give a cleaner aspect of that slider! Also , the symmetrical idea you tried to make with 00:58:950 (1) - isn't changed at all! :
- 01:26:807 (2) - In my opinion , the lil overlap here isn't that disturbin' but I felt like you could space it from the triple at 01:26:501 (3,4,1) - in order to emphasis the speed up made with 01:26:705 (1,2,1) - ! (I may be wrong haha)
- 01:39:052 - In my opinion, addin' a note between those two sliders (01:38:746 (5,6) - ) wouldn't hurt since it'd not be overmapped at all
- 01:58:746 (1) - Why is the spacin' different from the consistent spacin' you have been using with the whole stream here? That apply for the followin' patterns which are exactly like that (I can smell a reply like "made on purpose cuz XXX)
- 04:58:236 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - That NC spam isn't really useful but okay..
- 05:04:767 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Same here aswell
- 05:39:971 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - and 05:44:460 (1,1,1,1) - aswell
- 05:56:909 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - I didn't find a reason in the music to explain the change of the DS from 05:57:011 (5) - to 05:57:114 (1) - . Is it on purpose?
Amazing.
Thank you for moddingSecretpipe wrote:
[Collab]
- 01:39:052 - In my opinion, addin' a note between those two sliders (01:38:746 (5,6) - ) wouldn't hurt since it'd not be overmapped at all
- 05:56:909 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - I didn't find a reason in the music to explain the change of the DS from 05:57:011 (5) - to 05:57:114 (1) - . Is it on purpose?
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Topic Starter
EvilElvis and RLC told me to fix for them and this is what I did (it also includes what I didn't fix in my parts), thanks to everyone
Rohit6
Rohit6 wrote:
- 04:58:542 (1) - should probably be a slider if you wanna follow the synth-y part , 05:05:073 (1) - here too A whole stream fits better, in my opinion, there's no strong sound to make these two notes a slider
ProBox
ProfessionalBox wrote:
RLC
05:25:583 (2,3,4) - I feel like if you reversed the rhythms here it would be much better, feels unnecessarily hard since it it isn't following anything in the music (unlike the 2 measures before this). I would do something like this to keep the challenge but make it better rhythmwise I believe that keeping slider's heads on white/red tick would make the pattern easier and understandable to play
EvilElvis
04:11:399 (8) - I think making this a 1/4 slider is really cool compared to just a circle Why? I can't feel a proper sound to justify this, a circle-only pattern works fine
04:13:032 (10) - Same here ^
04:56:297 (1) - After all of the speedups building up to this part, this kills the mood imo. Even though the whole part is based on heavy sv changes, I think this one should be atleast a bit faster sv Just rose until 0.75..
Osuology
Osuology wrote:
01:07:522 (2) - I recommend changing to straight slider and make it snappy flow because the next note is on a beat. I don't really think it is needed
01:09:665 (3,1) - Not a big fan of this jump. You never really mapped the bass drum so strongly before, why do you now? But they are fine, I don't think it can be considered inconsistent, keeping it for now
01:16:195 (3,1) - Again with the jump. The next one works because a cymbal crash is also used. ^
01:18:338 (1) - Why use this and then straight? I can't see the problem with this, it's part of the structure
04:10:787 (5,6,7,8) - Basically unreadable compared to 1,2,3,4 Man, that's easy to play if we have to be honest
Fort
Fort wrote:
- 01:18:644 (1) - well this is looks like a slider velocity mistake, i highly suggest you to put slower SV for that slider because it can be misreaded by some player due it exactly following vocal and has lower pitch sound on the music, or maybe you can put circle on 01:18:644 - and move 01:18:644 (1) - to 01:18:644 - and the pattern will be neutralized It is weird on purpose, and actually works nice
- 02:38:746 - i think these part is too repetitive to receive the pattern like that, looks boring and feels of a bit, well 2 guy amde the same part like that and it's same, looks like not a collab map lol I'll blame myself for this, but as long as it is mapped properly I don't really want to fix or remap
- 04:55:889 - well for these part the SV looks unnecessary like when people map an intense and fast paced musical beat you're mapping these one with a slow slider (especially the 1/4 sliders there, makes the emphasize seems really lack, well just only jumps can't make the emphasize of song looks good for me, but at lease make the 1/4 slider has faster slider to make some consistency for next part with a fast sliders too (well if you say it's your style probably it's weird when people mapping the part with fast SV) It may play and look inconsistent but it is mapped properly, just a different style
- if you want to put emphasize on 05:22:726 (1) -, please change 05:22:522 (3) - to a circles, and it is more better and it can be make sense I don't see the need of a huge emphasize as you say, a slider works fine too
- 05:22:011 - well for me this part is weird since it was following synth with a new combo landed on that but suddenly follow to drum or voccal or somthing else but the combo still landed on synth sound (on some part) and that's kinda inconsistant a bit)
- 05:38:746 (1,2,1,2,1) - and 05:40:175 (1,1,1,1,1) - well i can say these NCs is pointless, no SV changes, no unique patterning, it just follow the kick snare sound and do some Copy pasta rotating trick but it has NC spam, i guess remove ncs better It would be too messy without NC, I disagree
- 06:00:243 (2) - that laser and the 1/6 beat kinda rare to map but you map on that, looks odd. you better put that slider on 06:00:481 - to make the combo consistant with 06:00:481 (3) - since it's mapped on 1/4 beat, and it's okay with that laser since you can still hit that sound on 1/4 tho Fixed in another way
denied hooly
http://puu.sh/qMz12/821b62fd62.zipLeader wrote:
I fixed most of the suggestions for my parts, really thanks
(I need a cool storyboard though, please come in help)
Only collab name...
Don't forget
Turn on the Widescreen Support
Turn on the Widescreen Support
Topic Starter
It will get back, someday
I don't even think my mod didn't even had the slightest help a all, so I'd probably leave this one out. Can try to give kuds though.
mo sembra che e' colpa mia che e' morta xd
I guess I don't really have much to do here
#1
#1
what about fixing genre tagsMrSergio wrote:
I guess I don't really have much to do here
#1
hitech + psytrance, drumstep and dubstep are a stretch, could update without poppingAkali wrote:
what about fixing genre tags hitech + psytrance, drumstep and dubstep are a stretch, could update without popping
- Maybe add a silent sliderslide for some sliders on calm parts like the start or the end ? See what you prefer.
- 00:03:644 (1,2) - Why not silent sliders end like you did on two previous one ? It would be coherent. I understand for 00:05:277 (1,2) - since bg sound cames but not these two.
- 01:48:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this works really much here for 2 reasons. First, the song is a sort of continued sound distorded, so for me a kind of vibrating slider would fit more this sound, and second this is the start of a calmer section so I don't think it should be here to make more this section like a little more relaxing for the players. And Normal hitsound don't fit this at all, sounds terrible. Simple soft is way enough, and maybe a little less loud at the end.
- 02:25:175 (1) - Eventually, this circle could be out from the stream since it maps vocal and not the drums.
- 02:50:583 (2,4) - Unstack on purpose ?
- 04:49:358 - I would maybe nerf a little this section, the different gaps between reverse is quite hard to catch at this speed and lead easiely to slider breaks.
Not much more to say here.
Mukyu~
Topic Starter
Updated + fixed tags and the long slider on Alu's slow part, thank you!
#2
Don't forget to wait 24h before qualification~
Don't forget to wait 24h before qualification~
Topic Starter
Thank you!
And now, the hardest part... finding the last bn
And now, the hardest part... finding the last bn
LIT
checked some mistake via irc
everything did great
qualified
everything did great
qualified
o wow finally gratz(not rlc)
Finally wow took way too much time
Congrats Leader 
Nice