Requested from Modding Queue, so here I am:
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[General]
I think OD and HP 9 is too much. My reccomendations would be to make it OD8 and HP8/8.5
[Hawks]
- At the very start, make it something like THIS INSTEAD. Do the same with the rest of that part, since some sounds are way stronger than others, but all of these were represented with only one note, so it felt weird to play.
00:10:082 (10082|2,10159|4,10236|6,10314|5,10391|2,10468|4,10546|6,10623|5,10700|2,10778|4,10855|6,10932|5,11010|2,11087|4,11164|6,11242|5,11319|2,11396|4,11474|6,11551|5,11628|2,11706|4,11783|6,11860|5,11938|2,12015|4,12092|6,12170|5,12247|2,12324|4,12402|6,12479|5) - This section feels way to uncomfortable to play, since it's pretty much unbalanced. Instead of making a 3-5-7-6 pattern, make it a 1-3-7-6 pattern. It's more comfortable to play. (If you don't understand, I'm reccomending you something like THIS)
00:34:828 - Missing note here, there is sound here
Imo, these type of notes 00:30:497 (30497|0,30497|4,30652|3,30652|1) - should be only one note instead of 2 notes per sound. Instrument is faint, and should be mapped with 1 note instead of 2.
00:32:353 - Missing note here, there is sound here
00:37:303 - ^^^
00:39:777 - ^^^
00:42:252 - ^^^
00:44:726 - ^^^
00:48:284 (48284|4) - Add note here to emphasis the sound a bit more
00:49:212 (49212|5,49366|3,49521|1) - Add notes here to emphasize sounds
00:59:364 (59364|1,59520|1) - Add notes here
Move 01:07:801 (67801|5,67801|2) - one column to the right, for more comfortability and more relevance to music
01:09:052 (69052|4) - Delete, not as strong as the previous sounds
From 01:19:677 - up to 01:36:993 -, that whole section feels uncomfortable to play, especially the very end of it. Take a look at it and do some self-modding is my reccomendation
There should be a LN going from 01:43:642 - up to 01:43:797 -, there's a continuation of the guitar there that you ignored
01:47:973 (107973|5) - Add note, to accomodate for
01:51:685 (111685|5) - ^^^
01:54:159 (114159|2) - ^^^
01:54:469 (114469|0,114469|3) - ^^^
01:56:634 (116634|4) - ^^^
01:57:871 (117871|2) - ^^^
02:08:482 (128482|0,128794|0) - ^^^
02:08:638 (128638|0) - Delete
02:17:388 (137388|0,137388|4) - Move 1 column to the right
02:14:888 (134888|6,134888|2) - Move 1 column to the left
Move 02:27:389 (147389|5) - to column 7 and 02:27:389 (147389|0) - to colum 1
02:31:920 (151920|6,151920|4,152077|4,152077|2,152233|2,152233|0,152389|5,152389|3,152545|1,152545|3,152702|5,152702|1,152858|3,152858|5,153014|2,153014|0,153170|0,153170|2,153327|4,153327|6,153483|2,153483|4) - This section feels very uncomfortable because of all those hammers you have there. There is no reason to have all those random hammers either.
02:38:327 - Missing note here
02:41:608 (161608|2) - Add note here, there's certainly a sound there that you ignored
This LN 02:47:234 (167234|6) - should start here instead 02:47:077 - and end at the same place
03:16:766 - Starting here, column 2 is too empty, while the other columns are a lot denser. Move some notes to column 2 to balance things a bit more
That's all for me. I only modded up to 3:30, since I can't pass the last section, I won't mod it (don't like to mod things I can't pass, to avoid fucking things up). It's a good map, but needs a bit of work imo. It's also rare to find these type of songs on mania, so that's a plius lol.
Good Luck with your beatmap!
