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Jensen
So goddamn beautiful, Can't get enough of playing this map. May try to mod soon, but keep up the good work! Hope to see it quad/ranked some day :)
-NeBu-
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGQqi1iHPYg

Ogółem spoczko gdyby nie streamy, więc takie 2/10 :[
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nhlx

NeBuSC2 wrote:

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Streamów

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGQqi1iHPYg

Ogółem spoczko gdyby nie streamy, więc takie 2/10 :[
właściwie to dzięki za przypomnienie, bo muszę jeszcze to naprawić XD
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a bit of modding
18:57 *Exote is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/764082 DystopiaGround - AugoEidEs]
18:57 Exote: duuude
18:57 Exote: this map
18:57 Exote: really impressed me
18:57 Exote: lol
18:58 Exote: and when I saw it I felt the need to give some suggestions awa
18:58 Exote: away*
18:58 Raikozen: o
18:58 Raikozen: thats nice to hear
18:58 Exote: so I can give them now or in the forum
18:58 Raikozen: i'd love to rank it but
18:59 Exote: hm?
18:59 Raikozen: you can give them now
18:59 Raikozen: i think
18:59 Raikozen: ranking stuff is hard ;;
18:59 Exote: sure but what;s the problem with ranking it
18:59 Exote: well
18:59 Exote: it is yea
18:59 Exote: most of the things imma point out are hitsound relating or blanket stuff a.k.a polishing the map
18:59 Exote: but feel free to not apply them
19:00 Raikozen: hitsounding is what i need the most
19:00 Raikozen: to be fixed
19:00 Raikozen: i think
19:00 Exote: but good hitsounds
19:00 Raikozen: since i suck at it lol
19:00 Exote: I liked em
19:00 Exote: soo
19:00 Exote: some of the first points
19:01 Exote: are with 100% volume
19:01 Exote: I wouldnt go with 100, 90 or sth would be better
19:01 Raikozen: 00:33:596 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ?
19:01 Raikozen: use timestamps if you can, it will make it a lot easier for me
19:01 Exote: this
19:01 Exote: you can leave
19:01 Exote: sure
19:01 Exote: so
19:02 Exote: from00:35:769 - to 00:53:016 -
19:02 Exote: its just really loud
19:02 Raikozen: yeah
19:02 Raikozen: i'll lower it to 85%
19:02 Exote: 90 is enough
19:02 Exote: dw
19:02 Exote: I mean the song itself is pretty epic there
19:03 Raikozen: yeah 90 works just fine
19:03 Raikozen: i think
19:03 Exote: so next think in this area again
19:03 Raikozen: just so hitsounds don't overcome the music
19:03 Exote: 00:49:682 (1) - this hitsounds with the water drop or whatever
19:03 Exote: is just enough
19:03 Exote: cuz
19:03 Exote: I mean so
19:03 Exote: 00:50:842 (1) - 00:52:001 (1) -
19:03 Exote: those u can remove
19:03 Raikozen: yeah
19:03 Exote: they feel overdone
19:03 Raikozen: i have the syndrome of overusing them
19:03 Raikozen: just like my friend mazzerin
19:03 Raikozen: xD
19:04 Exote: ik that feel
19:04 Raikozen: i think in his newest map
19:04 Raikozen: he literally did a stream
19:04 Raikozen: with 1/2 of sounds
19:04 Raikozen: having this hitsound
19:04 Raikozen: lol
19:04 Exote: lmfao
19:04 Exote: for real
19:04 Raikozen: it actually sounds well for whatever reason lol
19:04 Exote: oh I wanna point out sth
19:05 Raikozen: maybe it fits the song idk
19:05 Exote: the first kiai
19:05 Raikozen: yeah
19:05 Exote: feels a biiiit not like the rest
19:05 Exote: what I mean is
19:05 Exote: for example
19:05 Exote: 00:58:958 (1) - from here
19:05 Exote: to the first kiai
19:05 Exote: is
19:05 Exote: pretty good in quality
19:05 Exote: aand the kiai seems like you had to hurry mapping it
19:05 Exote: idk if its the big sliders or
19:06 Exote: but not the entire kiai
19:06 Exote: anyway back to hitsounds
19:06 Raikozen: big sliders make that kind of feel
19:06 Raikozen: because it's really fucking hard to make a good map with high SV
19:06 Raikozen: trust me on that ;;
19:06 Exote: 01:22:146 (1) -
19:06 Raikozen: but when you do
19:06 Raikozen: it plays awesome
19:06 Exote: the water drop
19:06 Exote: unnecessary
19:06 Exote: here
19:07 Raikozen: removed
19:07 Exote: w8 w8
19:07 Exote: might have mistaken sth
19:07 Exote: ill hear that part again
19:07 Exote: aand yea bout the big sv thing
19:07 Raikozen: it actually sounds better without it
19:07 Raikozen: imo
19:07 Exote: good
19:07 Exote: one of my maps was with pretty big sliders in the final kiai
19:07 Exote: aand
19:07 Exote: woh
19:08 Exote: but its fun
19:08 Raikozen: yeah
19:08 Raikozen: i think i kinda exaggerated it
19:08 Raikozen: i was tired of mapping and i went full HW back then lol
19:08 Raikozen: still didnt fix
19:08 Exote: 01:39:972 (2,3,4) -
19:08 Exote: this
19:08 Exote: if u can make it like that http://puu.sh/krjCT/de55268c81.jpg
19:08 Exote: would be awesome looking
19:08 Exote: oh yea
19:08 Exote: when I saw the ending
19:09 Exote: I instantly thought of HW
19:09 Exote: lol
19:09 Raikozen: dude
19:09 Raikozen: nice
19:09 Exote: another thing that caught my eye was
19:09 Raikozen: this looks good
19:09 Exote: 01:45:335 (4) - this little thing
19:09 Exote: XD
19:10 Exote: looks squishy
19:10 Exote: but
19:10 Exote: not that appealing
19:10 Exote: u can just
19:10 Exote: ctrl c/v the slider 3
19:10 Exote: and invert it
19:10 Exote: I mean rotate lol
19:10 Exote: oh yea and sometimes im quite picky when it comes to such little things
19:10 Raikozen: same as me
19:11 Exote: sooo
19:11 Raikozen: <3
19:11 Exote: the another
19:11 Exote: thing is
19:11 Exote: 01:45:624 (2,2) -
19:11 Exote: if u can
19:11 Exote: oh wait let me just check strh
19:11 Exote: yea same so
19:11 Exote: if u can
19:11 Raikozen: ait
19:11 Exote: move them a bit to the left so they could not touch slider4
19:12 Raikozen: yeah i just noticed that myself too
19:12 Raikozen: i hate when things touch sliders
19:12 Raikozen: ;;
19:12 Exote: yea me2 lol
19:12 Exote: so
19:12 Exote: 01:45:480 (1) -
19:12 Exote: the hitsounds here
19:12 Exote: which sounds like WOWOHWOHW or sth
19:12 Exote: is enough
19:12 Exote: the rest in this section
19:12 Exote: like
19:12 Exote: 01:47:219 (4) -
19:13 Exote: 01:47:798 (1) -
19:13 Exote: those above
19:13 Exote: u can remove the HS
19:13 Exote: still feels overdone
19:13 Raikozen: i removed it on the first one
19:13 Exote: waa
19:13 Exote: on 4>
19:13 Exote: >
19:13 Exote: ?
19:13 Raikozen: i dont know about the second one
19:13 Raikozen: ye
19:13 Exote: cool
19:13 Exote: 4 was the main problem
19:13 Exote: the 2nd is cool
19:13 Exote: 01:51:856 (3) -
19:13 Exote: the clap here
19:14 Exote: I dont get what were u trying to emphasis
19:14 Exote: feel free to remove it
19:14 Raikozen: you mean
19:14 Raikozen: the whistle?
19:14 Raikozen: there's no clap on this slider xd
19:14 Exote: oh w8
19:15 Exote: but
19:15 Exote: there is a clap here ._.
19:15 Exote: 01:51:856 (3) -
19:15 Exote: on the head
19:15 Raikozen: i actually added a clap right now
19:15 Raikozen: and it sounds good
19:15 Raikozen: LOL
19:15 Exote: double click it
19:15 Raikozen: ok whether it was there
19:15 Raikozen: or not
19:15 Raikozen: it's not there anymore
19:15 Exote: cool
19:15 Exote: 01:57:509 (2) -
19:15 Exote: this
19:16 Exote: must lower the position
19:16 Exote: u cant make
19:16 Exote: any elements touch the hp bar
19:16 Exote: or else
19:16 Exote: unrankable
19:16 Raikozen: oh
19:16 Exote: idk if u knew that if u didnt, now u do
19:16 Raikozen: alright
19:16 Raikozen: well...
19:16 Raikozen: TIL
19:17 Exote: http://puu.sh/krk5O/10ba1a25b2.jpg
19:17 Exote: 01:58:233 (1) -
19:17 Exote: this here
19:17 Exote: curve dat slider
19:17 Raikozen: i lowered the SV
19:17 Exote: and make it hug slider3 lol xD
19:17 Raikozen: and made it smaller
19:17 Exote: the SV of slider 2 only?
19:17 Raikozen: ye
19:17 Raikozen: just so it's smaller
19:17 Exote: well u could've just moved it to the left actually
19:18 Raikozen: oh well...
19:18 Raikozen: whatever
19:18 Raikozen: alright curved the (1)
19:18 Exote: cool
19:19 Exote: 02:20:697 (4) - 02:20:987 (5) - 02:21:277 (6) -
19:19 Exote: the claps dont really go well imo
19:19 Raikozen: wanted to do buildup for 02:21:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) -
19:20 Exote: yea I got that but
19:20 Exote: idk
19:20 Exote: if u like em there leave em np
19:20 Raikozen: yeah i'd rather leave them
19:21 Raikozen: unless i find some other way to make buildup with different hitsounding
19:21 Exote: ill think of another way but
19:21 Exote: 03:09:393 (1,2) -
19:21 Exote: this sampleset is different from the rest in this area
19:21 Exote: is that on purpose
19:22 Exote: cuz sounds dull
19:22 Raikozen: oh god
19:22 Raikozen: ys
19:22 Raikozen: i wanted to fix that long time ago
19:22 Exote: it should be sc1 if it wasnt on purpose
19:22 Raikozen: thanks
19:22 Exote: oh damn
19:23 Raikozen: 03:23:306 (1) -
19:23 Raikozen: i think i missed the clap
19:23 Exote: 03:59:682 (6) - the whistle here is meh
19:23 Exote: oh u did?
19:24 Exote: thought it was on purpose
19:24 Exote: cuz doesnt sound bad
19:24 Exote: 04:03:595 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2) -
19:24 Exote: daaaaamn
19:24 Exote: the water drop HS spam is real
19:24 Exote: it pierces through my heart
19:24 Exote: xD
19:25 Exote: 04:03:306 (1) - this one is just enough imo
19:25 Exote: 04:05:624 (1) - and this
19:25 Raikozen: this whistle was accidental
19:25 Raikozen: on (6)
19:25 Raikozen: xd
19:25 Raikozen: also ye
19:25 Exote: happens
19:25 Raikozen: it kinda pierces the ears
19:25 Raikozen: one hitsound all over
19:26 Exote: 04:35:335 (3) -
19:26 Exote: adjust this a bit
19:26 Exote: so it forms a blanket with slider1
19:26 Exote: like it hugs it
19:26 Exote: lolll
19:27 Exote: the whole stream part is 100%
19:27 Exote: ok thats acceptable
19:27 Raikozen: dun
19:27 Exote: but
19:27 Exote: 04:36:059 - from here to the kiai end
19:27 Raikozen: ye
19:27 Exote: is way too loud just cuz of the hitsounds
19:28 Exote: 90 again ?
19:28 Raikozen: yeah
19:28 Raikozen: its good now
19:28 Exote: 04:40:407 (1) -
19:28 Exote: ahhhhh
19:28 Exote: a picky one too
19:28 Exote: adjust that a bit
19:28 Exote: so it huuuuuggggggg the clircles inside
19:29 Exote: or the mini sliders w/e
19:29 Exote: their heads
19:29 Exote: xD
19:29 Raikozen: yeah
19:29 Raikozen: i tried my best
19:29 Raikozen: but it's really hard to blanket stacked circles
19:29 Raikozen: with such a small space
19:29 Exote: oh
19:29 Exote: wait
19:29 Raikozen: at least for me ;;
19:29 Exote: let me see with the stacking
19:30 Exote: oh well
19:30 Exote: its still gonna be meh
19:30 Exote: cuz
19:30 Exote: yea stacking
19:30 Exote: well do whatever u want there it's k anyway
19:30 Raikozen: i wonder if stack leniency 0 would be rankable Kappa
19:30 Exote: well
19:30 Exote: even tho we allll know it isnt
19:30 Exote: it actually is
19:30 Exote: a lot of maps got ranked with 0
19:30 Exote: recently*
19:30 Exote: but
19:30 Exote: leave it like that
19:30 Raikozen: chloe maps with stack leniency 0
19:31 Exote: I mean the stack leniency
19:31 Raikozen: atm xd
19:31 Raikozen: yeye
19:31 Raikozen: gotchu
19:31 Exote: 04:41:567 -
19:31 Exote: this here
19:31 Exote: http://puu.sh/krkVx/f4e5e26cf9.jpg
19:31 Exote: idk if thats the guitar u tried following
19:31 Exote: but like the image in puush
19:31 Exote: sounds better imo
19:32 Exote: plus u are missing one clap but that exactly aint anything bad
19:33 Exote: 04:54:175 (5) - I'd add a clap here
19:33 Exote: goes pretty good with 04:53:885 (1,3) -
19:33 Raikozen: fixed that
19:33 Exote: like a mini build up
19:33 Raikozen: nice found
19:33 Raikozen: fixed
19:34 Exote: 04:57:798 (1) -
19:34 Exote: there
19:34 Exote: is a whistle
19:34 Exote: but
19:34 Exote: it sounds like it has some delay
19:34 Exote: try putting it
19:34 Exote: 04:57:653 (1) -
19:34 Exote: here
19:34 Exote: imo it sounds better, I mean in time
19:35 Exote: 04:58:958 - 05:03:595
19:35 Exote: the
19:35 Exote: whistles on the mini sliders' heads
19:35 Exote: sound unnecessary
19:36 Exote: would be cleaner without them imo
19:36 Raikozen: sounds cleaner
19:36 Raikozen: i think
19:36 Exote: and u can put ur regular claps there
19:36 Exote: then there is the break 05:13:016 -
19:37 Exote: u sure u aint gonna map it?
19:37 Exote: xD
19:37 Exote: would be cool imo
19:37 Exote: just steal them skystar HSs
19:37 Raikozen: yeah
19:37 Raikozen: it's supposed to be a break
19:37 Raikozen: after deathstream part
19:37 Raikozen: which is pretty stamina killing
19:37 Exote: its black n white
19:37 Exote: u either pass it or not
19:37 Exote: so anyway however u want
19:37 Exote: its fine either way
19:38 Exote: ok
19:38 Exote: another thing
19:38 Raikozen: even if i'd like to
19:38 Exote: that really hurt my ears
19:38 Raikozen: i'll probably be too lazy to do so
19:38 Raikozen: xdddd
19:38 Raikozen: ait go on
19:38 Exote: 05:30:262 (1,2,3,1,2) -
19:38 Exote: really loud
19:38 Exote: I;d suggest
19:38 Exote: oh but its 100%
19:38 Exote: lmao
19:38 Exote: so
19:38 Exote: the 05:30:262 (1,2,3) - this exactly
19:38 Exote: or these*
19:38 Exote: make them like 70 or 80
19:38 Raikozen: dude i have an idea
19:39 Raikozen: 05:30:262 (1,2,3) - 85%
19:39 Exote: yea?
19:39 Raikozen: 05:30:987 (1) - 70
19:39 Raikozen: 05:31:277 (2) - 50
19:39 Exote: exactly what I was going to say
19:39 Exote: lol
19:39 Exote: nice u came with that
19:39 Exote: but the 2 circles
19:39 Raikozen: :D
19:39 Exote: might go for 60/40 or sth
19:39 Exote: cuz 70 is too loud again
19:40 Exote: oh
19:40 Exote: weeeell
19:40 Raikozen: went for it
19:40 Exote: 80/60/50 should be cool
19:40 Exote: or 40 IDK
19:40 Raikozen: 50 is a bit too loud
19:40 Raikozen: imo
19:40 Exote: yea
19:40 Exote: exactly
19:40 Raikozen: lowered it to
19:40 Raikozen: 45
19:40 Exote: and I dont hear any transition between whem then 60/50
19:40 Exote: lol
19:40 Exote: when*
19:41 Raikozen: exatcly lol
19:41 Raikozen: also dont forget to /savelog
19:41 Raikozen: and post it on forum
19:41 Exote: sure
19:41 Exote: wait theres a bit more
19:41 Exote: xD
19:41 Raikozen: yy i know
19:41 Raikozen: just a friendly reminder
19:41 Exote: when im not really for the kudosu
19:41 Exote: cuz I find it useless
19:41 Exote: LOL
19:41 Exote: getting mods get u the SP needed
19:41 Exote: gets*
19:42 Raikozen: y
19:42 Raikozen: but still
19:42 Exote: and i dont usually mod, stopped it cuz too lazy but sometimes I do to maps I'd like to see ranked
19:42 Exote: anyway back to the map
19:42 Raikozen: i feel honored then
19:42 Raikozen: <3
19:42 Exote: xD
19:42 Exote: im not really experienced lol
19:42 Exote: but good that u feel so
19:42 Exote: i feel too
19:42 Exote: ~
19:42 Raikozen: ~
19:43 Exote: 05:49:393 (1,2,3) -
19:43 Exote: the 1/4 gaps
19:43 Exote: u could fill em with 2 more circles and
19:43 Raikozen: no need
19:43 Exote: reduced each one of them with 3% lets say
19:43 Exote: well would be a cool build up imo but u decide
19:44 Raikozen: there is nothing really to be bulit up imo
19:44 Raikozen: in the music
19:44 Exote: well yea
19:44 Exote: but I love to create my own hitsounds to the original song
19:44 Exote: sooo yea xd
19:45 Exote: the final section
19:45 Exote: again way too loud, even tho the music Is REALLY LOUD
19:45 Exote: 90% should work fine her etoo
19:45 Exote: here*
19:45 Exote: 06:17:798 -
19:45 Exote: u can only leave the hitsounds on slider 1
19:45 Exote: head
19:46 Exote: 06:20:552 (2,5) - the whistles here sound meeeh
19:47 Exote: the very ending with the huge sliders might be pain but shouldnt cause in problems
19:47 Exote: now the clock hitsounds
19:47 Exote: 06:36:494 (1) - they sound good here
19:48 Exote: but in the rest of the sliders like that 06:39:393 (1) - and the following ones
19:48 Exote: sound overdone
19:48 Exote: the spinner should end here 06:50:407 (1) -
19:49 Raikozen: you mean start
19:49 Raikozen: xdd
19:49 Raikozen: or
19:49 Exote: where it starts from is fine
19:49 Exote: but with its current state
19:49 Exote: u can just lower the spinners length back to the white tick
19:49 Exote: it ends a bit late
19:50 Raikozen: y
19:50 Raikozen: i actually sounds good
19:50 Raikozen: on blue tick
19:50 Raikozen: right before it
19:50 Exote: oh
19:50 Exote: now that u mention it
19:50 Exote: YEA
19:50 Exote: lmfao
19:50 Exote: blue tick, blue tick!
19:50 Raikozen: just so it's not perfectly to rhythm
19:50 Raikozen: but it fith
19:50 Raikozen: s
19:50 Raikozen: y
19:50 Raikozen: it's perfect
19:51 Raikozen: i think
19:51 Exote: yup
19:51 Exote: so that was it
19:51 Raikozen: dude i can't tell
19:51 Raikozen: how much you've helped me
19:51 Exote: if I find something else cuz I tend to mod a single map multiple times will tell u
19:51 Exote: oh nice to hear
19:51 Raikozen: alright
moya
pretty damn fun, took a lot of tries to pass it though D:
Yoges
Yo! Here's your M4M. Holy shit what a good map. Great job on the hitsounds.
I can't even play stuff above 6 stars let alone mod. I'll do my best.

[General]
ehh 7.1 stars.. you might aswell crank that up to AR 10. Otherwise stuffs a bit weird to read. Like there will be too much stuff on the screen at once and you get thrown off even tho the flow and spacing is perfect (in most places).
Maybe add the taggs "rock" and "marathon" aswell.
The stack latency is probably going to be an issue.

[oyasumi]
01:00:117 (1,3) - I don't like nazis but the stack is a bit off.
01:04:755 (1,3) - Move the 3 over a bit to the left so the 1's not overlapping onto it. It doesn't look nice.
01:13:595 (3,4,1) - Maybe increase the spacing between these?
01:15:624 (2,3,4,5) - If you're going to keep it like that then fix the follow lines from the 2 to the 3 and the 3 to the 4 so that it makes a single straight line like this (move the 2 down and to the right a little). I personally wouldn't tho. I'd make it so that there's a change in direction after the 3. Something like this because it fits the music better for me.
02:21:277 (6,1) - Jeez the spacing between these.
02:33:306 (2,6) - Stack
03:02:581 (3,5) - ^
03:35:335 (4,1) - Not good flow.
03:39:827 (5,1) - ^
04:10:262 (1,2) - Overlap
05:06:832 (4) - That's a 1/6 note See?
05:11:567 (5,1,2) - Yeah that spacing doesn't feel right at all

Good luck with ranking. This one will be tricky to qualify.
I literally had to fucking mod that with 50% playback speed the whole way through
cyprianz5
DAM GWIAZDKE KURDE MIEJ SE CHOPAKU RZYCZE RANKEDA SERIO
Myko
Random posting time ~

The map being 7* after the revamp I thought it would be like most 6.5*+ maps....tryhard
Hell how wrong was I....this map is hard and challenging in its own way, but stays hella fun and incredibly well mapped

Hope this thing gets ranked as SOON as possible. This just deserves it.
cyprianz5
KOLEJNA GWIAZDKA DLA CIEBIE XD
Falenphist
I love this Map <3
interprais
like map
Kalibe
A o to jestem

general:

napraw to w AiModzie : http://puu.sh/lgsLv/f04ad69776.png

00:33:596 - zmień w zielonej sekcji na normal sample lub czerwony na drum, nie mogą być 2 naraz !

twoje BG ma wymiary 1365x768. Brakuje jednego piksela lol (1366x768 powinno być)

[oyasumi]

00:54:320 (4,1) - Ten overlap jest specjalny? Dla mnie jest trochę dziwny
00:56:204 (1) - usuń NC?
01:23:088 - tripla tu zrób
01:23:306 (1) - slider na czerwonej linii akurat dziwnie brzmi imo
01:31:711 (1,2,3) - nie słyszę aby był tu triplet
01:35:769 (4,5) - a te kółka powinny mieć większy spacing. Nie czujesz tego rytmu? ja zrobiłem coś takiego : http://puu.sh/lgtl6/b527b9f7d8.jpg
01:45:045 (2,4) - te 1/4 slidery wyglądają trochę ciasne. Mógłbyś lekko spacing zwiększyć?
02:03:451 (1,2) - IMO nie ma dźwięków na czerwonych snapach
02:08:378 (5,1) - ten łuk jest trochę dla mnie krzywy. Spróbuj przesunąć 02:08:668 (1) - do x: 156 y: 301
02:09:755 (5) - overmapped jak myślę :o
02:14:320 (1) - jak wcześniej, x: 108 y: 355
02:17:798 (4) - nie przesadziłeś trochę ze spacingiem? Czerwone snapy zazwyczaj mają mniejszy od białych :o
02:17:943 (1) - Szczerze, ten slider kończący się na czerwonej linii brzmi okropnie, poprostu skróć go do białej
02:20:480 (2) - overmapped
02:23:595 (1) - leciutko przesuń w prawo
02:58:595 (2,3) - overmapped, ten strim zaczyna się od 02:58:813 (4) - lol
03:16:349 (2,3) - powinnieneś je na NC zrobić, ponieważ zmienia się ich SV
03:23:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - coś chyba brakuje tu hitsoundów czy to specjalnie?
03:41:422 (1) - tak samo jak wcześniej, serio on dziwnie brzmi na czerwonej
03:45:480 - ma ten sam rytm jak to 02:22:001 - tylko że tam masz 1/4 a tu dwie 1/2. O co chodzi?
03:50:117 (2,3) - również na nich powinno być NC
03:52:871 (4) - bosze ten spacing na czerwonych :o i przy okazji usuń clapa z niego, bo jest dziwny i nie pasuje
04:09:248 (3) - wydaje mi się że taki powinnien być snap : http://puu.sh/lgucr/484ca64607.jpg ale mogę się mylić
04:21:856 (4) - ehh wiem że podkreślasz tą gitarę ale omijasz te hard bębny, a je by się przydało zmappować. Przemyśl to
04:30:117 (1,2,3) - mam pomysł : na (1 i 2) ctrl + g, a na (3) zrób coś takiego : http://puu.sh/lgunr/6acd040205.jpg według mnie flow powinnien być lepszy i bardziej zrozumiały
04:41:422 (4,5,1) - a to przez przypadek nie jest 1/3 snap?

I to tyle ode mnie, tak trzymaj ! :3
Topic Starter
nhlx

Kalibe wrote:

A o to jestem

general:

napraw to w AiModzie : http://puu.sh/lgsLv/f04ad69776.png

00:33:596 - zmień w zielonej sekcji na normal sample lub czerwony na drum, nie mogą być 2 naraz !

twoje BG ma wymiary 1365x768. Brakuje jednego piksela lol (1366x768 powinno być)

[oyasumi]

00:54:320 (4,1) - Ten overlap jest specjalny? Dla mnie jest trochę dziwny
00:56:204 (1) - usuń NC?
01:23:088 - tripla tu zrób
01:23:306 (1) - slider na czerwonej linii akurat dziwnie brzmi imo
01:31:711 (1,2,3) - nie słyszę aby był tu triplet
01:35:769 (4,5) - a te kółka powinny mieć większy spacing. Nie czujesz tego rytmu? ja zrobiłem coś takiego : http://puu.sh/lgtl6/b527b9f7d8.jpg
01:45:045 (2,4) - te 1/4 slidery wyglądają trochę ciasne. Mógłbyś lekko spacing zwiększyć?
02:03:451 (1,2) - IMO nie ma dźwięków na czerwonych snapach
02:08:378 (5,1) - ten łuk jest trochę dla mnie krzywy. Spróbuj przesunąć 02:08:668 (1) - do x: 156 y: 301
02:09:755 (5) - overmapped jak myślę :o
02:14:320 (1) - jak wcześniej, x: 108 y: 355
02:17:798 (4) - nie przesadziłeś trochę ze spacingiem? Czerwone snapy zazwyczaj mają mniejszy od białych :o
02:17:943 (1) - Szczerze, ten slider kończący się na czerwonej linii brzmi okropnie, poprostu skróć go do białej
02:20:480 (2) - overmapped
02:23:595 (1) - leciutko przesuń w prawo
02:58:595 (2,3) - overmapped, ten strim zaczyna się od 02:58:813 (4) - lol
03:16:349 (2,3) - powinnieneś je na NC zrobić, ponieważ zmienia się ich SV
03:23:885 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - coś chyba brakuje tu hitsoundów czy to specjalnie?
03:41:422 (1) - tak samo jak wcześniej, serio on dziwnie brzmi na czerwonej
03:45:480 - ma ten sam rytm jak to 02:22:001 - tylko że tam masz 1/4 a tu dwie 1/2. O co chodzi?
03:50:117 (2,3) - również na nich powinno być NC
03:52:871 (4) - bosze ten spacing na czerwonych :o i przy okazji usuń clapa z niego, bo jest dziwny i nie pasuje
04:09:248 (3) - wydaje mi się że taki powinnien być snap : http://puu.sh/lgucr/484ca64607.jpg ale mogę się mylić
04:21:856 (4) - ehh wiem że podkreślasz tą gitarę ale omijasz te hard bębny, a je by się przydało zmappować. Przemyśl to
04:30:117 (1,2,3) - mam pomysł : na (1 i 2) ctrl + g, a na (3) zrób coś takiego : http://puu.sh/lgunr/6acd040205.jpg według mnie flow powinnien być lepszy i bardziej zrozumiały
04:41:422 (4,5,1) - a to przez przypadek nie jest 1/3 snap?

I to tyle ode mnie, tak trzymaj ! :3
dzięki!
Haganenno
oyasumi:

04:31:132 (1) - Slider is completely off the playing area
04:32:291 (4) - So is this one
04:34:610 (1) - aaaand this one
A lot of sliders, actually, are off the playing area.
Topic Starter
nhlx

Haganenno wrote:

oyasumi:

04:31:132 (1) - Slider is completely off the playing area
04:32:291 (4) - So is this one
04:34:610 (1) - aaaand this one
A lot of sliders, actually, are off the playing area.
thankslol
Vassilinoff
It makes me feel like I'm having an orgasm while I'm having full-screen star-jumps at the climax. Truely the best map I've ever played.

There are some hard parts, but certainly not overmapped, and those hard parts just makes me want to beat this beatmap.
Anxient
IRC
07:51 Anxient: if im allowed to go full nazi
07:51 Raikozen: ye go on
07:51 Raikozen: xddd
07:51 Anxient: 01:08:668 (2) - stack this with 6 properly will ya?
07:52 Raikozen: o
07:52 Anxient: yeah. ._.
07:52 Raikozen: this map is a presentation of
07:53 Raikozen: "how to get 170 favourites because cookiezi likes your map"
07:53 Raikozen: lol
07:53 Anxient: oh shit youre right
07:53 Anxient: but this IS a good map
07:53 Raikozen: o
07:53 Anxient: 01:27:509 (3,4) - i dont think you should do a perfect stack
07:53 Raikozen: i gotta improve stuff
07:53 Anxient: yeah no kidding
07:53 Raikozen: yea i'll fix that later
07:53 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lEPmH/fc08dca295.jpg this maybe?
07:54 Raikozen: nah
07:54 Raikozen: looks even wors
07:54 Anxient: kden
07:54 Anxient: anyway are you busy atm or
07:54 Anxient: coz if you dont mind ill do a quickie
07:54 Raikozen: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4052173 ive done this]
07:54 Raikozen: no im not
07:54 Raikozen: but im kinda sleepy
07:54 Raikozen: and i wanna go to bed
07:54 Anxient: aah ok
07:54 Raikozen: so keep it quick or post it on forum
07:54 Anxient: so ill just to forum post then
07:55 Raikozen: alright hit me up
07:55 Anxient: coz i dont think ill be able to mod a 7 minute map quickly
07:55 Raikozen: when you're done
07:55 Anxient: kk
07:55 Anxient: eh youll be checking
07:55 Anxient: the map everyday anyway
07:55 Raikozen: yea i do
07:55 Anxient: im prety sure i dont need to hit you up lol

Forum

01:31:132 (4) - turn to 1/2 slider. the way you emphasized the slider end with the piano makes it really really clickable.
01:48:813 (3) - stack properly pls
01:57:509 (2) - this thing is curving waaay too much (read as:widen it so sliderend doesnt touch sliderstart)
02:10:987 (1,2) - if not asking for the impossible, maybe a long range sliderblanket?
02:31:856 (1) - ctrl g coz emphasis and flow
02:31:856 - 02:40:987 - is the kiai supposed to be finished already?
03:03:885 (5) - can totally stack PLEASSE
03:08:958 (1) - stack better
03:59:972 (1) - mmm i dont think you need the third red tick? looks weird that way
04:35:335 (3,1) - yep you know what to do (ifyoudont, slider blanket)
04:40:117 (8,1) - can totally blanket 8 better
05:49:103 (1,1,2) - you sir are evil
05:53:885 (1,2,3) - can you at least make 3 like this
06:06:349 - i dont recommend going instantly slow. try going gradually slower? seems to sudden
06:27:074 - WOOOOO SCREENJUMPS
06:35:335 - is that sound (tmp) supposed to be there?
06:36:494 - 07:11:277 - you seem to have some unused green lines. if youre not using them, delete them
awesome map!
Topic Starter
nhlx

Anxient wrote:

IRC
07:51 Anxient: if im allowed to go full nazi
07:51 Raikozen: ye go on
07:51 Raikozen: xddd
07:51 Anxient: 01:08:668 (2) - stack this with 6 properly will ya?
07:52 Raikozen: o
07:52 Anxient: yeah. ._.
07:52 Raikozen: this map is a presentation of
07:53 Raikozen: "how to get 170 favourites because cookiezi likes your map"
07:53 Raikozen: lol
07:53 Anxient: oh shit youre right
07:53 Anxient: but this IS a good map
07:53 Raikozen: o
07:53 Anxient: 01:27:509 (3,4) - i dont think you should do a perfect stack
07:53 Raikozen: i gotta improve stuff
07:53 Anxient: yeah no kidding
07:53 Raikozen: yea i'll fix that later
07:53 Anxient: http://puu.sh/lEPmH/fc08dca295.jpg this maybe?
07:54 Raikozen: nah
07:54 Raikozen: looks even wors
07:54 Anxient: kden
07:54 Anxient: anyway are you busy atm or
07:54 Anxient: coz if you dont mind ill do a quickie
07:54 Raikozen: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4052173 ive done this]
07:54 Raikozen: no im not
07:54 Raikozen: but im kinda sleepy
07:54 Raikozen: and i wanna go to bed
07:54 Anxient: aah ok
07:54 Raikozen: so keep it quick or post it on forum
07:54 Anxient: so ill just to forum post then
07:55 Raikozen: alright hit me up
07:55 Anxient: coz i dont think ill be able to mod a 7 minute map quickly
07:55 Raikozen: when you're done
07:55 Anxient: kk
07:55 Anxient: eh youll be checking
07:55 Anxient: the map everyday anyway
07:55 Raikozen: yea i do
07:55 Anxient: im prety sure i dont need to hit you up lol

Forum

01:31:132 (4) - turn to 1/2 slider. the way you emphasized the slider end with the piano makes it really really clickable.
01:48:813 (3) - stack properly pls
01:57:509 (2) - this thing is curving waaay too much (read as:widen it so sliderend doesnt touch sliderstart)
02:10:987 (1,2) - if not asking for the impossible, maybe a long range sliderblanket?
02:31:856 (1) - ctrl g coz emphasis and flow
02:31:856 - 02:40:987 - is the kiai supposed to be finished already?
03:03:885 (5) - can totally stack PLEASSE
03:08:958 (1) - stack better
03:59:972 (1) - mmm i dont think you need the third red tick? looks weird that way
04:35:335 (3,1) - yep you know what to do (ifyoudont, slider blanket)
04:40:117 (8,1) - can totally blanket 8 better
05:49:103 (1,1,2) - you sir are evil
05:53:885 (1,2,3) - can you at least make 3 like this
06:06:349 - i dont recommend going instantly slow. try going gradually slower? seems to sudden
06:27:074 - WOOOOO SCREENJUMPS
06:35:335 - is that sound (tmp) supposed to be there?
06:36:494 - 07:11:277 - you seem to have some unused green lines. if youre not using them, delete them
awesome map!

thanku
Korey
wow how did the difficulty just jump half a star
Topic Starter
nhlx

ikorza wrote:

wow how did the difficulty just jump half a star
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4060434

im a sadist ok
Khora
OMFG everytime that i play this map i have an orgasm, so fucking good, so smooth!Its funny how i can get an A on a 7.5 map just because its so fucking well made.
Another star because why not
Deathripi
Hi.

I'm a scrubby 11k player.

I like this map.

o/
KaelGen
I shot a kudosu star because of the orgasmic nature of this map :) kreygasm
Anxient
06:03:451 (4) - that thing is hitting past the bottom of the screen my friend http://puu.sh/lYODU/8b6efca25a.jpg



lol?
Kaine
00:57:943 (1,2) - im always confused as to whether i hit this slider or not because the feedback is so less, make it juust a little louder pls :'(

04:58:235 (4) - object isn't snapped!

05:45:480 (1,2) - blanket is slightly off

00:40:117 (5,1) - ^

WHAT HAPPENED TO THE SLOW SLOW SLIDERS ATT HE END THAT WAS MY FAVORITE PART OF THE MAP

flawless map, i could play this all day

no kd pls
Topic Starter
nhlx

Kaine wrote:

WHAT HAPPENED TO THE SLOW SLOW SLIDERS ATT HE END THAT WAS MY FAVORITE PART OF THE MAP
wasn't passable with HR
Nezzar
oh 0.4 star added? Challenge accepted!

stupid misses at middle but nearly perfected the end ;(
Topic Starter
nhlx

clp012345 wrote:

oh 0.4 star added? Challenge accepted!

stupid misses at middle but nearly perfected the end ;(
dam nice!
cyprianz5
yooo man what do you think about my today's testplay :(? i could fc this but stress, you know
cyprianz5
WOW MAN I TRIED THIS WITH DT AND I DID NEW UR RECORD
Topic Starter
nhlx

CypCypCyprian wrote:

WOW MAN I TRIED THIS WITH DT AND I DID NEW UR RECORD
wp fam
KaelGen

Nofail I manage 75%, I just wasn't warmed up right now to do that x) so here my scrubby relax play :D
Doormat
Hey, from my queue- sorry this is like a month late ;w;
I'm not used to modding 7 star maps, so I'll probably focus on aesthetics and a few other things I find out of the ordinary- sorry if it seems a little nitpicky ;w;
lol sounds a bit like listening to dragonforce @ 04:26:494 (1) - to 05:12:001 (2) -
[]
[General]
  1. just curious, but why name the difficulty oyasumi? it's not related to what an augoeides is, and i also took a look-see at the lyrics and don't really see a relation- this is probably not a big deal; some maps have gotten ranked with some ridiculously unrelated difficulty names, but yeah just curious. and before you ask, yes i am familiar with what oyasumi means
[oyasumi]
  1. 00:36:929 (6,2) - blanket here could be nicer
  2. 00:58:523 - it sounds like you missed a beat here; this is where the guitar riff ends. maybe add a circle here or make 00:58:233 (2) - into a repeat slider. right now it just feels like this part is a bit cut off in my opinion
  3. 01:03:306 (4) - maybe divide this slider up? you skipped the clap on 01:03:451 and it just sounds a little awkward in my opinion since this is the only 4th beat that you skipped over in this entire section. maybe have a 1/2 slider at 01:03:306 - and have a circle at 01:03:595 -
  4. 01:31:132 (4) - same suggestion as the above
  5. 01:40:262 (3,4) - maybe you can reverse the order of these two (e.g. circle at 01:40:262 - and 1/2 slider at 01:40:407 - ). unlike the similar pattern at 01:05:480 (3,4) - , i feel there's more emphasis on the vocal note at 01:40:407 - than at 01:40:552 - , so it'd make more sense if the note at 01:40:407 - was clickable in my opinion
  6. 01:57:943 (3,1) - pretty sloppy blanket here you can fix by curving the (1) a little bit more
  7. 02:17:653 (3,3) - why aren't these stacked? it creates this really weird effect where 02:17:943 (1) - looks like it's blanketing neither. so yeah maybe stack these (place in the same position)
  8. speaking of 02:17:943 (1) -, this isn't properly blanketing 02:17:653 (3) - or 02:18:523 (3) - ; it's not curved enough
  9. 02:32:291 (2,3) - why not just use the same slider shape here? i recommend using the shape you used for (3)
  10. 02:57:219 (1,2) - another blanket you can easily fix
  11. 03:00:407 (4) - i feel like reversing the direction of this (Ctrl + G) would make it a little easier to flow into the next combo
  12. 04:17:219 (1) - another blanket you can fix; you can either curve the slider head more inwards, or curve the slider end more outwards
  13. 04:21:856 (4) - i don't know if it's just me, but this slider feels out of place with what you're doing here; i know you're trying to follow the sustained guitar note here, but it feels too long in my opinion. maybe shorten it to a 1/1 slider and have a burst afterwards or something?
    SPOILER
    my suggestion is highlighted by the orange notes
  14. 04:34:610 (1) - not centred around 04:34:175 (1) - properly; move 04:34:175 (1) - to approximately x44, y 120 to fix this
  15. 04:40:407 (1) - not centred around 04:40:117 (8) - properly; the slider end for 04:40:407 (1) - isn't curved enough
  16. 04:41:567 (1) - not centred around 04:42:436 (3) - properly; move 04:41:567 (1) - to approximately x136, y191. remember to move 04:41:422 (4,5) - as well
  17. 04:49:248 (1,2) - why the new combo here? it's a part of the same phrase as 04:48:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , and it's not really emphasizing anything, so the new combo here feels unnecessary in my opinion
  18. 04:51:856 (1) - this one also feels unnecessary in my opinion; what's it emphasizing?
  19. 04:53:306 (7) - however, placing a new combo here makes sense
  20. 04:54:248 (6) - i'm not hearing a beat at this spot; i'd delete this
  21. 05:01:277 (1) - not centred around 05:00:987 (4) - properly; move 05:01:277 (1) - to x381, y267 to fix this (i know, really nitpicky because it's only like one pixel, but still-)
  22. 05:09:393 (1) - not centred around 05:09:103 (5,6,7) - properly; move 05:09:103 (5,6,7) - to approximately x249, y193
[]
hope this helps ;)
Topic Starter
nhlx

Doormat wrote:

  1. just curious, but why name the difficulty oyasumi? it's not related to what an augoeides is, and i also took a look-see at the lyrics and don't really see a relation- this is probably not a big deal; some maps have gotten ranked with some ridiculously unrelated difficulty names, but yeah just curious. and before you ask, yes i am familiar with what oyasumi means
the reason is, this is a word which has a sentimental meaning and a history before it, which wasn't really good and in fact it was one of the worst periods of my life, yet without it I wouldn't map this map, so there comes the diff name.
Topic Starter
nhlx

Doormat wrote:

  1. just curious, but why name the difficulty oyasumi? it's not related to what an augoeides is, and i also took a look-see at the lyrics and don't really see a relation- this is probably not a big deal; some maps have gotten ranked with some ridiculously unrelated difficulty names, but yeah just curious. and before you ask, yes i am familiar with what oyasumi means

the reason is, this is a word which has a sentimental meaning and a history before it, which wasn't really good and in fact it was one of the worst periods of my life, yet without it I wouldn't map this map, so there comes the diff name.

thanks a bunch dude

oops i double posted xd
Doormat

Raikozen wrote:

Doormat wrote:

  1. just curious, but why name the difficulty oyasumi? it's not related to what an augoeides is, and i also took a look-see at the lyrics and don't really see a relation- this is probably not a big deal; some maps have gotten ranked with some ridiculously unrelated difficulty names, but yeah just curious. and before you ask, yes i am familiar with what oyasumi means

the reason is, this is a word which has a sentimental meaning and a history before it, which wasn't really good and in fact it was one of the worst periods of my life, yet without it I wouldn't map this map, so there comes the diff name.

thanks a bunch dude

oops i double posted xd
yeah okay, fair enough. best of luck getting it ranked c:
Anxient

1000 circles

Kreygasm
Topic Starter
nhlx

Anxient wrote:


1000 circles

Kreygasm
wooooo xd
snz
Ayy imao i love this song♥♥♥
Take my random mod ;)
[General]
Try Enable Countdown I Think If Map It's Better

Try Charge Stack Laniency
-->
[oyasumi]
00:35:769 - Try This
00:44:755 (1) - Delete NC
01:08:233 (1) - Try This
01:17:509 (1) - Try This
01:48:958 (4) - Delete NC & 01:49:538 (1) - Add NC
02:09:682 (4) - Delete NC
02:13:306 (1) - ^
02:22:001 - Delete Kiai Here
02:54:465 (1) - Delete NC
03:36:784 (1) - Try This
04:45:190 Add Kiai (04:45:190 ~ 04:54:4650)
05:49:103 Delete Kiai Here
05:57:074 (1) - Try This
06:17:798 Add Kiai Here

Sorry For Short Mod :(
Sebu
Just something quick i think you need to fix, this pattern 04:58:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks ugly as shit.(for a lack of better words)
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