1st, 2nd: changed. I had different opinions thought there seems to be no sense to keep them anymore.
Chromoxx wrote:recheck, no kds
01:36:932 (49) - delete this note, the length and start of this stream comes completely unexpected and doesn't fit the song.
00:53:143 (80) - again, delete this note. You said the pitch change to d is enough emphasis, but it definitely isn't. By that logic that note is the same strength as 00:53:406 (85) - 00:53:564 (88) - 00:53:721 (91) - 00:53:879 (94) - . also starting the stream at 00:53:090 - is a bit too over the top in general and doesn't really follow the music imo.
02:03:195 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - this stream is longer than the last finale stream at 02:06:774 - even though it really shouldn't be. I would highly suggest deleting a note at 02:03:985 (31) - to emphasize the sound at 02:03:932 (30) - like you did with all the other patterns here to keep consistency. You may argue that the part here is a bit more intense and you put the longer stream here because of that, but it is by no way intense enough to warrant a stream of this length here, which is even longer than the final stream.
I'm not willing to discuss about the things pointed out in the taiko holic diff, since they are pretty serious imo. It's only deleting 3 notes, which when looking at a diff like this isn't actually asking too much and probably also lenient compared to what other BNs would suggest.
Call me back when Taiko Holic stuff is fixed and the Inner Oni is reworked to play smoother.
3rd: The stream is actually longer than last stream, but the difference of only four notes doesn't matter because both streams are enough long. Between 32 and 28. so small difference. Then I tried your suggestion and I felt beatmap became too boring by five streams of same length. I won't apply it.