Hey, simple mod
02:00:143 - How about adding a kat there? no change.
02:06:879 (25) - Not sure, but you could change to don there, I hear drums more than the melody. no change.
00:16:143 (19,20,21) - d d k? Fits more. nope
01:20:564 (20,21) - Swap, pitch is higher in the first note than the next one keep
02:04:774 (103) - k? why
OD=8 maybe? 8.8≒DT+6.0 fine.
rip pp system