uhmuhm weff (some points may be repetitions of what newyams said because at first I just suggested things to him that he edited in before I decided to make extra post)
[General]
Hitsounds - especially in kiai - are way too quiet. At least increase them in the kiai to 90-100%, outside is optional
[Inner Oni]
00:29:090 (188,189,190,191) - Try changing these four notes to k d d k to add a little bit of variety in this don-heavy part. Fits the higher sounds here.
01:00:143 (5,6) - Maybe change these to dons? Would make a nice pattern (don then kat)
01:27:353 (152) - I find these pretty unfitting tbh, there is no other 1/4 in this part so these stand out a little bit, making it weird.
01:33:616 (194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203) - why less notes than 00:59:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ?
01:54:669 - I don't think you should have the 1.1 SV increase on the Inner Oni, I really don't. If you consider that this is supposed to be quite a bit easier than Taiko-Holic (even in the I-range), it should also feel like that and having the SV of... 313 BPM just doesn't work imo. An alternative would be to lower the whole map's SV to 1.3! That would make it more appropriate for weaker players and you could keep the SV increase.
02:07:721 (529,530,531) - newyams mentions 1/4 here (idk what exactly) so uhm yeah 1/4 please
[TAIKO-HOLiC]
why is the OD 8.8?? Like, I have several questions about this. First, why is it even this high? Second, why is it of all high numbers 8.8 and not 8, 8.5 or 9?
01:37:827 - Maybe try to get this down to 1.1, I don't think this deserves to be faster than the 2nd kiai half.
01:38:300 (73,79) - I personally think that these should be removed so the 1/4 bass drum starting 01:38:669 - here is more noticeable. It should fit to the melody as well.
01:54:616 (96) - why don't you move this 01:54:511 - here and make 01:54:669 (1) - a big note to be consistent with 00:40:564 (1) - 01:41:195 (1) -
I don't even want to comment on how overmapped the 2nd half of this kiai is, especially the long streams ;w;
[General]
Hitsounds - especially in kiai - are way too quiet. At least increase them in the kiai to 90-100%, outside is optional
[Inner Oni]
00:29:090 (188,189,190,191) - Try changing these four notes to k d d k to add a little bit of variety in this don-heavy part. Fits the higher sounds here.
01:00:143 (5,6) - Maybe change these to dons? Would make a nice pattern (don then kat)
01:27:353 (152) - I find these pretty unfitting tbh, there is no other 1/4 in this part so these stand out a little bit, making it weird.
01:33:616 (194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203) - why less notes than 00:59:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ?
01:54:669 - I don't think you should have the 1.1 SV increase on the Inner Oni, I really don't. If you consider that this is supposed to be quite a bit easier than Taiko-Holic (even in the I-range), it should also feel like that and having the SV of... 313 BPM just doesn't work imo. An alternative would be to lower the whole map's SV to 1.3! That would make it more appropriate for weaker players and you could keep the SV increase.
02:07:721 (529,530,531) - newyams mentions 1/4 here (idk what exactly) so uhm yeah 1/4 please
[TAIKO-HOLiC]
why is the OD 8.8?? Like, I have several questions about this. First, why is it even this high? Second, why is it of all high numbers 8.8 and not 8, 8.5 or 9?
01:37:827 - Maybe try to get this down to 1.1, I don't think this deserves to be faster than the 2nd kiai half.
01:38:300 (73,79) - I personally think that these should be removed so the 1/4 bass drum starting 01:38:669 - here is more noticeable. It should fit to the melody as well.
01:54:616 (96) - why don't you move this 01:54:511 - here and make 01:54:669 (1) - a big note to be consistent with 00:40:564 (1) - 01:41:195 (1) -
I don't even want to comment on how overmapped the 2nd half of this kiai is, especially the long streams ;w;