1. Seven Springs of Apink (4.04 stars, 2561 notes)

Gaia wrote:

dude

Gaia wrote:

dude

Gaia wrote:

dude

1. Any special reason for the preview point? Personally setting the most famous song of Apink will be nice for players to get familiar.
2. Don't forget your sliderborder.

1. 02:25:539 (1) - I think the violin starts at 02:25:575.
2. 04:22:015 (9) - Clap.
3. 08:17:925 - Missing rhythm felt awkward since you've used a triplet at 08:17:218 (7,8,1) which is the same instrument. Anyways since adding a note will ruin your intention, starting the combo from 08:17:784 will emphasize the lyric 'moaning' better.
4. 09:04:123 (9) - Removing this note will emphasize the instrument of 09:03:931 - 09:04:219 better.
5. 09:30:186 (8,1) - Making the curve rate same will look better.
6. 09:41:148 (1,3) - Consider ctrl+H to give the same effect as 09:35:379 (1,2,1,2,3).
7. 10:18:468 (1,2,3,4) - I couldn't honestly get the intention why you used the gradual space decrease since (5) isn't interacting well with that pattern.
8. 12:52:421 (1) - This combo seems mistaken considering the counterpart 13:02:526 (3).
9. 13:35:463 (10) - According to the music, drum-whistle will fit well.
10. 13:59:979 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Would've been if the distance of (4,5) is same as (9,10).
11. 14:46:859 (3,5) - Your symmetry could be few pixel better.

1. The stacking used in this map is inconsistent at times. Sometimes triplets are stacked, sometimes they are not. This is particularly aggravating for HD play, as notes under sliders are sometimes ambiguous (is there one, two, three?). One example of this I will give is 08:31:369 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - in terms of odd after-slider stacking, but similar inconsistency occurs throughout.
2. Petal and Crystal actually feel *slower* than the songs immediately after them due to 1/3 -> 1/4 shift.
3. Some of the notes in the upper corners might clip into HUD for non-widescreen players.
4. 00:17:549 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The first part of this feels like a phantom stream
5. 00:19:893 (2) - stay still, then this giant sequence of jumps?
6. 02:14:736 (3) - odd overlap
7. 02:16:487 (4,5,6) - IMHO this would be better as 2 kick sliders
8. 02:25:539 (1,2) - As sonnyc mentions, this rhythm is a bit ambiguous.
9. 02:36:910 (5) - 02:44:182 (5) - I don't understand the sudden otivation to switch these to sliders instead of two taps
10. 05:15:226 (1) - Watch this slider!!!! It's like almost completely external to the note grid
11. 05:23:976 (2,3,4) - 05:24:976 (1) - 05:25:976 (3,4,5) - were you going for a blanket here?
12. The whole of LUV, in the ministreams the sliders in such I don't understand
13. 10:07:968 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - messy arc shape here.

Sonnyc wrote:

[General]

1. Any special reason for the preview point? Personally setting the most famous song of Apink will be nice for players to get familiar. I just love this song >_> will change later if I found the music that the most famous.
2. Don't forget your sliderborder. do you mean the color of sliderborder? if yes, I will.

[Pink]

1. 02:25:539 (1) - I think the violin starts at 02:25:575. yes but I begin with vocal.
2. 08:17:925 - Missing rhythm felt awkward since you've used a triplet at 08:17:218 (7,8,1) which is the same instrument. Anyways since adding a note will ruin your intention, starting the combo from 08:17:784 will emphasize the lyric 'moaning' better. interesting, tried.
3. 09:30:186 (8,1) - Making the curve rate same will look better. your eyes sure nice.
4. 10:18:468 (1,2,3,4) - I couldn't honestly get the intention why you used the gradual space decrease since (5) isn't interacting well with that pattern. good point.
5. 14:46:859 (3,5) - Your symmetry could be few pixel better. mhmm hard to notice that few.

Neat map. Several uses of symmetry were spotted, while not feeling forced or unnatural.

LinearFaze wrote:

RIP my original longer message.

There were phantom notes in a few places with triplets IIRC

M4M.

It's a pretty clean map.

1. The stacking used in this map is inconsistent at times. Sometimes triplets are stacked, sometimes they are not. This is particularly aggravating for HD play, as notes under sliders are sometimes ambiguous (is there one, two, three?). One example of this I will give is 08:31:369 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - in terms of odd after-slider stacking, but similar inconsistency occurs throughout. it's ok imo since you can clearly see the stack note.
2. Petal and Crystal actually feel *slower* than the songs immediately after them due to 1/3 -> 1/4 shift. I should say yes, but it's harder tho.
3. Some of the notes in the upper corners might clip into HUD for non-widescreen players. I never heard of this, maybe wait for other opinion.
4. 00:17:549 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - The first part of this feels like a phantom stream
5. 00:19:893 (2) - stay still, then this giant sequence of jumps? yes, emphasis the beat very well.
6. 02:14:736 (3) - odd overlap hmmm no >_>
7. 02:16:487 (4,5,6) - IMHO this would be better as 2 kick sliders ehh two kick slider, you mean 1/6? but I prefer this.
8. 02:25:539 (1,2) - As sonnyc mentions, this rhythm is a bit ambiguous. will look for more opinion and a way to make it better.
9. 02:36:910 (5) - 02:44:182 (5) - I don't understand the sudden otivation to switch these to sliders instead of two taps I followed "tud tud" sound in the background but all of them still keep triple.
10. 05:15:226 (1) - Watch this slider!!!! It's like almost completely external to the note grid still this is not a big problem but I kinda agree with you that this slider is too over off the grid so moved.
11. 05:23:976 (2,3,4) - 05:24:976 (1) - 05:25:976 (3,4,5) - were you going for a blanket here? try enable stacking and I think it's not a problem in playmode
12. The whole of LUV, in the ministreams the sliders in such I don't understand lol I understand you
13. 10:07:968 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - messy arc shape here. hmm I think no.

VocaloidTACU wrote:

wooowowwowowwoww i like it

STAR STAR

thanks and thanks for star!!

Natsu wrote:

Did some things in IRC

things

2015-08-17 04:13 P A N: what how
2015-08-17 04:13 Natsu: 01:55:031 - unsnapped lol
2015-08-17 04:13 Natsu: 09:14:892 - same with tail LOL
2015-08-17 04:14 Natsu: 00:31:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - volume too high also LOL
2015-08-17 04:14 Natsu: 00:34:705 (1,2,3,4) - same LOL
2015-08-17 04:14 Natsu: 00:37:755 (1,2,3,4,5) - again lol u want to kill my ears LOL
2015-08-17 04:15 Natsu: 01:49:459 (1) - add some hitsound wew pani
2015-08-17 04:15 P A N: wow
2015-08-17 04:15 Natsu: 05:00:394 (3) - whistle lol sounds weird without nothing lol
2015-08-17 04:16 Natsu: 08:33:067 (8) - probably nice if u extend this to next downbeat, since hold sound end there
2015-08-17 04:16 Natsu: 12:35:684 (4,5,6) - pan killing ears again lol
2015-08-17 04:16 P A N: u should be stalk for a long time
2015-08-17 04:16 P A N: mod like a machine holy shit
2015-08-17 04:16 Natsu: 10:25:068 - drum finish or something omfg
2015-08-17 04:17 Natsu: 14:53:601 - killing ears
2015-08-17 04:17 Natsu: KD pls!
2015-08-17 04:17 P A N: sure