puxtu wrote:

wheeee m4m

[General Stuff]
- EZ diff is not hitsounded oops didn't turn on the N:C1 for it
- I'm a lil bit worried about the gap between hard and insane
- Unbalanced difficulty curves, the hardest diff is not using any sv but ENHI diffs used some 1.5 and 0.5 sv in 00:23:016 - or maybe you forgot to add the sv there? lol (references: t/204738/start=90 | t/233477/start=120). oh about that sv too, it's kinda unexpected. suggesting to add ease effect on that I think I'm just gonna remove the SV altogether.
- 00:08:016 - I know this timing point is for controling the sample volume, but make it from 30% to 40% isn't make a significant effect to sample sound. suggesting to remove this point or change the value from 20% to 50% Also removed the 10% difference altogether too.
- That bg is creepy as fuck lol wat the doll in the doll play is that jester on the BG. It's creepy but meh it's part of the song soooooo
[Cavort]
00:04:500 - for the hardest diff, you can layer the hi-hat sounds here, it will make a good flow for your pattern too. Esp on this underwhelming part 00:08:016 - there are a lot of hi-hat sounds that you missed, idk if this was intended but I think it'll better to layer that sound I hope I covered everything, I'll check with some other people later for this.
00:09:891 (9891|0) - ctrl+right, really not recommended to double hammer such sounds Fixed!
00:21:961 (21961|1,21961|2) - out off beat I don't get this part. If I am following the vocals, this would fall on 1/3 beats, but in this case I was following the drum tsss sound on the 1/4 beat.
00:23:016 (23016|3) - err remove this ln and hammer chords these? 00:23:367 (23367|1,23484|2) - Fixed!
00:28:641 - do you really have to use those double lns? they're some drum sounds on that part too. suggesting to use single lns stream and add some chords like this http://puu.sh/kowTO/7c15d4ffbd.png Fixed! Thank you so much for the suggestion~
00:45:516 (45516|3) - overused lns. there is no long sound that really stronk so you don't have to use double lns Fixed!
01:03:562 (63562|0) - 01:05:437 (65437|3) - can you explain why don't you replace this note with ln? I didn't notice this little mistake until you pointed it out. Fixed!
01:21:961 (81961|1,81961|0,81961|2,81961|3) - oh my god my ears... Rip pux ears 2k15 Fixed!
the rest is ok for me. nice js Thanks :3

[Insane]
00:08:836 (8836|3) - extend this ln by 1/1 beat Fixed!
00:04:031 (4031|3) - use double here to emphasize the drum roll Fixed!
00:23:016 (23016|1) - lol wow why did you let this empty lmao I scared note density + SV but since I removed the SV and the LN in this case I'll add in the drum beat. Fixed!
00:45:516 (45516|3) - why is this part so similar with cavort's pattern lol. better to buff up the pattern on cavort then I'll see what I can do later~ Softened down this part a little.
00:57:469 (57469|3) - http://puu.sh/koyBE/1aeec1f99d.jpg ??????? ?????????????
00:58:406 (58406|0) - http://puu.sh/koyE0/ad6263c999.jpg ???????? ?????????????
00:59:578 (59578|0) - http://puu.sh/koyGD/2ee19a2fe7.jpg ????????? lol ok i'll stop I saw some stuff and I changed some of it.
01:14:812 (74812|1,74812|0,74812|2) - why the hell there is a triplet here? lmao Why not? Fixed!

[Hard]
dude, the gap. uguuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
00:07:312 (7312|0,7351|1,7391|2,7430|3) - isn't this too short for that burst Well it was just 1 note short, soo. Fixed!
00:23:016 (23016|3) - it felt really wrong when you don't have something to press here Fixed!
00:36:199 (36199|3) - oh look another snapping conflict http://puu.sh/kozbT/5b46691f08.jpg Snapping conflicts are my thing, ya know? Fixed!
00:51:961 (51961|1) - shorten 1/2 Fixed!
00:57:469 (57469|0,57527|1,57586|2,57644|3) - snap to 1/3, won't pointing this anymore. check out the other diffs too Fixed! Checked other diffs too.
01:00:516 (60516|1) - a missing chord and move this to somewhere else please Fixed!
01:30:516 (90516|0) - pls add chorddddddddddddddddd and you can buff up this kiai part for the sake of star rating too Fixed!
01:49:266 - inconsistent pattern bcs the previous pattern has some chords in it I managed to get it up to 3.65 stars with a difference of 0.91. I think that's OK, but I'm not too sure about it.

[Normal]
00:21:961 (21961|1) - offbeat Same thing as above, I was following the drum beat rather than the vocals.
01:43:523 (103523|3) - I heard something loud here IT WAS MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE jk Fixed!
01:59:461 (119461|2,119461|1) - you don't have to chord this part Fixed!

[Easy]
00:10:711 (10711|3) - should be ended at 1/1 because all diffs does that Fixed!
00:14:461 (14461|3) - I feel like holding something here Fixed! Placed LN
01:30:516 (90516|1) - add double for the crash Fixed!
01:44:578 (104578|2,105047|3) - uh, these should be 2/1 lns here Fixed!
ye nothing much on easier diffs
gl on rank! Thanks for the mod pux~

Abraxos wrote:

puxtu wrote:

00:57:469 (57469|3) - http://puu.sh/koyBE/1aeec1f99d.jpg ??????? ?????????????
00:58:406 (58406|0) - http://puu.sh/koyE0/ad6263c999.jpg ???????? ?????????????

FreeezeForward wrote:

F4W's Modding Notice

*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue

Your request was accepted prior to my queue. These following mods are just suggestions but mostly are recommended. If you reject some (all) of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.

1|2|3|4

Metadata

1. Artist: Change "t+pazolite" to "t+pazolite 「maimai」より", I think maimai is the leading artist here; kindly refer to this website. Mai mai is an arcade game, which is where this song was featured on (The hard level 11 for this is so hard to get a 90% on). I think the original composer is t+Pazolite. Niconicojp (dic.nicovideo.jp/a/garakuta doll play) can't be wrong I hope.
2. Tags: Add "jubeat saucer fulfill" since it's the first music game apperance. Also add "Tenkaichi otogesai Zenkoku issei nintei taikai" since the song is a part of this event, also include it's kanji "天下一音ゲ祭 全国一斉認定大会" It originally came from maimai GreeN, and it was crossed over with that event to Groove Coaster EX and jubeat, all of which I did add into the tags.
3. Design: Uncheck Widescreen Support on diffs "Normal" "Hard" and "Insane" unless the will be a video provided. Fixed!
4. HP Drain (HP): Insane must be 8 not 7, Insane maps and the like always have and HP Drain of 8. Fixed! Thanks for the heads up.
5. Overall Difficulty (OD): Insane must be 8 not 7, same reason as above. Fixed!

Hard

1. 00:15:516 Add to 2 here, the note density of this must be triple-noted. Fixed!
2. 00:28:055 (28055|3,28055|0,28172|1,28172|2) - Reverse Selection (Ctrl+G) notice the other patterns 00:20:320 and 00:25:945 the mini staircase part has two notes on one hand and the other has only one so you consider avoiding to put double notes on the hand that is complete. Fixed!
3. 00:30:164 (30164|1) - Move to 3, the pitch here is alternating in one hand like 00:29:578 (29578|0,29695|1,29812|0,29930|1) and it' can be done to another. One more reason is that the note density will be balanced. That makes so much sense I can't even. Fixed!
4. 00:36:492 (36492|1) - Move to 4, it is much easier to hit in this column. Fixed!
5. 00:55:828 Add to 1, same as the other triple-note chords have the same beat dynamics. I had a feeling that the LN end couldn't cover up the three chords above. Fixed!
6. 00:58:875 (58875|3) - Delete, unlike the other notes, this beat has a different dynamic (softer than other notes). Fixed!
7. 01:14:344 (74344|0,74402|1,74461|2,74519|3) - Repattern these to LN's, this pattern is irregular to the synth-voice and it is only compatible to double note LN. Refer to this example. Overhauled the whole thing at this part alongside all the diffs. Fixed!
8. 01:25:594 (85594|1,85711|0) - Move to 1 and 4 respectively, columns 2 and 3 are too dense than the pitch tune. Fixed!
9. 01:25:828 (85828|1) - This LN end should be 01:26:062 and the pitch is very clear to this. It's things like this that convince me that I'm drunk all the time. Fixed!
10. 01:53:367 (113367|3,113484|0) - Switch Columns, since the pattern is a continous minijack not double note alternations. Fixed!
11. 01:58:172 - 01:58:445 Change it to Double note LN's. Refer to this example. Fixed! Luckily it didn't affect the star rating too much.

Insane

1. 00:03:797 (3797|0) - Move to 2, the preceding pattern has the same beat and minijack is the best option. The minijack wasn't intentional but since the music did follow why not. Fixed!
2. 00:04:266 (4266|2) - Delete, triple-note chord is too dense in this beat. I'd like to take my point about me being drunk and use this point to reiterate that I am freaking drunk at this shit I even went through everything to check for this chords at the start and I missed this. Fixed!
3. 00:13:933 (13933|1,14051|1,14168|1,14285|1) - Four notes in same column with 1/2 timing in a staircase are too hard to hit for Insane players. Maybe change into this pattern, atleast only three notes in the same column. Overhauled the whole thing here. Thanks for the heads up, fixed!
4. 00:15:516 Add to 2, for note density. Fixed!
5. 00:32:391 (32391|2) - Move to 2, for hand balance. Fixed!
6. 01:14:344 Same as the last diff. Same as above^^^
7. 01:25:594 (85594|1,85711|2) - Move to 1 and 2 respectively, too dense in columns 2 and 3; same reason as the last diff. Fixed!
8. 01:45:633 (105633|3,105750|0) - Switch columns, since the pattern is continous jacks.
   To be Continoued

Cavort

To be Continoued[list:1337]

Kindly reply as soon as possible prior to my mod post above. If there are any questions related to this post, just ask. Happy Modding =w=)b Thank you so much for the mod Freeeze~ :3

NlHIL wrote:

[Easy]00:14:461 (14461|3) - end at 00:14:930 - ?
00:28:406 (28406|0) - change to a note, 00:28:641 (28641|3) - remove and 00:28:523 - to 00:29:109 - add a LN?
00:35:906 (35906|3) - remove?
00:38:016 - add
00:43:172 (43172|3) - end at 00:43:641 - ?
01:10:242 - add
01:10:594 (70594|3) - end at 01:10:945 -
01:24:422 (84422|1) - change to a LN?
01:54:656 (114656|1) - remove?
[NM]
00:19:969 - add?
00:45:516 - add?
01:29:578 (89578|3,89812|2,90047|1,90516|0) - hmm 01:44:519 (104519|0,104812|2,105047|3,105516|1) - ...hmm?

On your style, the ends of LNs are ... hmm... I can't understand it.
How did you decide whether put notes with the ends of LNs or not?

Sorry,bye

genkicho wrote:

Hello >.< Need Kudosu :3

Here you go~

Cavort
00:39:891 i think u should delete 1 note Fixed!
00:42:234 add note (column 3) Fixed!
00:51:844 and 00:51:961 use double notes Fixed!
01:02:391 make it longer until 01:02:801
01:02:625 delete the long note (column 3)
01:02:859 start the long note (column 1) from 01:02:801
[url]osu.ppy.sh/ss/3770841[/url] <for 01:02:-- Top down till here: All fixed, looked through this part again just to make sure.
01:13:172 , 01:13:406 use triple notes
01:13:461 and 01:13:758 use double notes Scratch that I remade this part, I get what you are talkin about.
01:27:937 and 01:28:055 use double notes Well this one I changed.
01:31:687 delete 1 note
01:33:211 add 1 note Above^^^; The sound here is captured by the 3,2,3 formation such as 01:31:687 (91687|2,91687|0,91687|1,91805|3,91805|2,91922|3,91922|1,91922|0) - and 01:33:094 (93094|2,93094|3,93094|1,93211|0,93211|1,93328|0,93328|2,93328|3). The ones below are 2 notes are cuz they're repeated sounds, and it only seemed OK that repeated sounds are insinuated by repeated chords.
01:33:680 add 1 note Fixed!
01:34:266 add 1 note I'll avoid minijacks by changing this part.
01:39:422 add 1 note
01:40:711 add 1 noteAll fixed!

Hopefully helpful Thanks for the mod~

genkicho wrote:

Need Kudosu >.< Holy shit dude pls I can't give any more kudos after this. Any case I really appreciate the mods you give~
Insane
00:47:859 maybe delete this (?) Shifted one note upwards
00:51:726 add 1 (?) Fixed!
01:13:758 column 3 & 4 move to 1 & 2 Fixed!
01:23:016 4 notes, then 01:24：891 should 4 notes I get it, but the LN takes 2 columns. I fixed it accordingly though.
01:26:648 add 1 (?) Also fixed by placing LN
01:27:703 add 1 (?) Fixed!
01:46:922 delete 1
01:50:672 delete 1 Above and here fixed by placing note at 01:48:797 (108797|2) -
Hard
00:36:141 start from 00:36:023 Following vocals, so start at 00:36:141 (36141|1) -
00:36:844 maybe delete 1 (?) Fixed but with a little variation
00:51:726 add 1 (?) Fixed!
00:52:430 and 00:52:644 what's this (?) maybe move up 2 rows (?) Vocals in the background that stutter is what these notes are following
00:53:016 add 1 (?) Fixed!
00:53:953 delete 1 (?) because u use 2 notes style for this sound The drums in the music also fall here, so it's 2 notes. The last drum beat was made 2 notes aft. I removed one of the LNs
00:56:766 maybe delete 1 (?) Drumbeat as above ^^^
01:13:758 move to column 1 Fixed! Didn't want to have a note before the stairs so I changed it a little. But I get what you mean.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3775003 <-- maybe use this (?) for 01:14:578 I fixed it, but with a little change. I didn't want to have such a short LN as it looks disparate.
01:24:891 add 1, because 01:23:016 is triple note Fixed the whole part here.
01:28:641 add 1 or delete, or move the column. it;s hard to explain why
01:29:578 add 1 And above: I changed the whole part here, so I hope it's fixed.
01:47:156 add long notes until 01:47:391 ugu I don't really like long notes. Don't forget that this is a hard difficulty, and these handstreams + LN hold does not fit well with me.
01:47:273 delete the note
01:45:516 the diff is to far compared to 01:53:016 (my opinion) And above: I reviewed this part keeping in mind the diff increase. Hopefully fixed!
01:54:891 add 1 because double note style Above fixes should change this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3775015 <-- for 01:56:590 Fixed! Thanks for the suggestion, I get the point you are trying to put forth.
Normal
00:12:703 add 1 (?) other diff too I have to keep the diff under 2.2, and it's really close to it. I think that it's OK to have one note, as the LNs for the past few drumbeats follow the this sound 00:10:711 (10711|3,11297|2,11531|1,11766|0) - and that the drumbeat is there as a note.
00:29:461 add 1 Fixed!
00:34:266 add 1 because 00:32:391 double note Fixed!
00:36:141 long note start from 00:36:023 (other diff too) Understood what you meant, the LNs follow the vocals though.
00:36:492 add 1 Fixed!
01:36:023 add 1 because 01:33:797 is double, and there's an extra sound Fixed!

for all diffs
from 01:56:766 until 01:57:703 make it bit harder, because i hear extra sound every white line Thanks for the suggestion, but remember that the BPM is 256, and to have the notes appear every 1/4 is really taxing.
hopefully help Definitely did. I didn't bother to redo patterns esp. in Hard, but after your mod I did change a few things. Thanks for that :3

Lenfried- wrote:

Been stalking this thread
Here's 2 stars

Also only give 1 kds per modder. A second kds only makes sense if a major remap happened. Call a BN to deny if you feel like it should be done. Same goes for my double kds

genkicho wrote:

Hello >.< Need Kudosu
Easy
00:12:703 add 1 (?) This part here is basically ignoring the drum beats. It's an easy after all
00:30:516 add 1, because 00:32:391 use double note Fixed this part
00:47:742 move up 2 row
00:48:094 move up 2 row and above^^^ If you listen closely there's a twang sound in the music that these notes are following
00:48:445 delete note Same reason as above^
01:38:016 and 01:38:250 use double (?) because 01:30:516 use double I see it, but I did fix this part up a little differently. For one, the reason why the first drum beat has double it's cuz its the strongest/leads into the rest of the drums. The 1/2 notes just follow the basic flow of the music after this point.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3775116 <-- for 01:41:414 until 01:41:776 maybe this is better It is. Fixed!
01:54:656 why long notes (?) then 01:56:297 should be the same Yeah I noticed so. Fixed!
hopefully helpful THANKS FOR THE MOD

Shoegazer wrote:

SPOILER

[Cavort]
00:03:797 - You could create an anchor (basically a hidden long jack, like [23][24][23][24]) here, I think it would be underwhelming otherwise. You can make 00:03:914 - a [24], while keeping sounds like 00:03:797 - the same. Fixed! I was thinking of buffing the start up more too.
00:04:148 - Should be the same as 00:03:914 - , since they're the same sound. Fixed!
00:05:789 - Maybe change this to [14]. This is more for consistency, since the jumpjack section in 00:01:922 - has 2 minijacks (1st/2nd and 3rd/4th doubles respectively). Fixed!
00:09:422 - Same applies to this. You could do something like [14][24][13][12], though the notes before it would require some rearrangement. Fixed!
00:10:711 - to 00:13:641 - Kinda curious as to why you decided to chart the cymbals instead of the snare, I think the snare is a lot more prominent and you could definitely vary up the chart with some 1/4 bursts here. Would personally recommend charting the snares (00:10:828 - ) instead of the cymbal crashes (00:10:945 - and the like). It would make the chart more direct, you could also put 1/4s in places like 00:11:414 - as well. Ohhhh I didn't realise this, thanks for the heads up. Fixed!
00:13:172 - to 00:13:523 - These notes should be doubles. Fixed!
00:15:516 - You can probably place some 1/2s here to create minijacks, alternating minijacks at this speed is generally pretty nice to play through. Alternating minijacks being something like this - the minijack would be on a hand and will be on the other hand every 2 notes (in this pic, left-right-left). You can do this for recurring melodies like those, they're present up to 00:41:766 - .
00:33:680 - Can be a double. Fixed!
00:36:023 - Missing note, I think a single is preferred here. A note on either 3 or 4 would be better, since it's reminiscent of the sound before it. Fixed!
00:39:656 - Should be triples, think it would be better if this triple and the consequent one to be the same, since they're the same kick+other percussion combo. Fixed!
00:41:180 - Can be a double. Fixed!
00:49:383 - You can probably create some two-handed minitrills for these (they're a lot more noticeable than one hand minitrills, since you're using your wrist instead of your fingers), rolls are generally a little bit too smooth considering the sound that you're mapping (which is a little rough). Patterns like these are patterns with some two hand trills. This applies for all 1/4s you've mapped to record scratches. Fixed! I never knew there were difference in roughness and smoothness in sound for such things.
00:50:086 - Should be a double.Fixed!
00:50:437 - ^ Fixed!
00:51:141 - Should be a triple. Fixed!
00:51:844 - Think you should create a minijack with the chord after and not the chord before, since the note after it is quite similar to this note but the note before it isn't. Fixed! I didn't notice this @.@
00:51:961 - should be the same chord as 00:52:195 - since they have the same notes. You can probably do something like this, first chord is at 00:51:609 - . Fixed! Thanks for the suggestion~
00:58:406 - You can be a little mean and create a 1/3 jumpjack here (something like [24][34][12][24]) Fixed!
01:09:305 - The entire section is almost completely alternating minijacks, so I don't see why this shouldn't be a minijack with 01:09:187 - . You'd have to rearrange the next few notes, but something like this should be okay. Of course you can break from alternating if you're a bit too lazy when it comes to rearranging, but it's moreso for fluency. Fixed! I kept the alternating jacks, didn't want to break the flow here.
01:10:945 - These 1/4s should be doubles, along with 01:11:180 - . [12][34][12] / [12] seems ideal. Fixed!
01:12:820 - ^, but [34][12][34] / [34]. Fixed!
01:16:922 - Should be doubles, generally the same arrangement as sections like 00:05:672 - and other things. This point goes for the rest of the section, until these sounds are layered as LNs. Fixed!
01:29:226 - Preferably something like [34][24][12]? It would be odd to not have minijacks at all considering that the 3-4 chords before it created minijacks. That's true. Fixed!
01:30:984 - Same suggestion as the very first one, you can create an anchor here. Something like [34][13][34][13][234] would be cute, though you would have to shift the note after to 2 to prevent too much bias (and maybe some other rearrangements..). You can do this for the entire section. Think this would be ideal, since this is the one of the last few parts of the track anyway. That's a really cool idea. Fixed!
01:45:516 - Think you can emphasise some chords here by making them the same, consecutive sounds like 01:45:516 - , 01:46:219 - , 01:45:867 - , you get the idea. You already did this with the section with triples, so it wouldn't hurt to do the same here. All fixed!
01:55:125 - Move to [34] to avoid too much left hand bias. Fixed!
01:57:469 - Should be triples. Fixed!

You can place more 1/2s, but it would make the chart way too cluttered because of the LNs going on, so I think this should be fine.

Chart's generally fine, quite jack-oriented as a whole. Just some inconsistencies that should be fixed. Thank you so much for the mod Shoegazer

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Abra-san

Mod Via ★☭ Верный Mania Queue ★☭

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. You only use Normal-hit.wav hitsounds file, how about other hitsounds file?
   
   make sure you delete this file from your folder :
   drum-hitclap, drum-hitfinish, drum-hitwhistle
   soft-hitclap, soft-hitfinish, soft-hitwhistle
2. Delete maimai green from tags, because overlap in source

All fixed~

Easy

OD : 7
HP : 7

1. 00:11:766 (11766|0) - change C to F, consistency following rytim like 00:09:891 (9891|2) -
2. 00:13:641 (13641|0) - remove C, same reason like above + HS will be overlap
3. 00:14:461 (14461|3) - this LN, conflict with Normal diff, make sure you check it
4. 00:15:516 - 00:16:219 - i can't uderstand what HS you followed, you mixed C & F like 00:16:453 - 00:16:922 - .make sure you focus 1 pitch, since that part has same pitch. IMO F more better than C. Also check here (problem for all diff) :
   00:18:562 - 00:19:266 -
   00:21:492 - 00:22:078 -
5. 00:31:922 - add note here for consistency beat sound. Also here :
   00:39:422 -
   00:43:406 -
6. 00:36:141 (36141|2) - missing Whistle here, like other diff
7. 00:52:195 (52195|0) - remove this LN, i can't hear another long sound here,
8. 01:04:266 (64266|0) - move to 2, then 01:04:617 (64617|1) - move to 4 for pattern balance
9. 01:07:781 - remove 1 note, consistency 1 sound like 01:07:547 - same reason like 01:17:391 -
10. 01:52:547 (112547|1,112781|0) - move to right, 01:53:250 (113250|1,113484|3) - move to left, 01:53:719 (113719|0) - move to 2, 01:54:187 (114187|2,114422|3) - move to left 2x, for pattern balance
11. 01:54:656 - no need 2 LN, it more like overmapped and Normal diff only have 1 note here. same reason like :
    01:56:531 -
    01:57:703 -

Thank you so much for the mod Verniy :3 I just found out something went horribly wrong with the hitsounds, and now I'm planning to redo the entire thing. I'll take your mod into account, and all other non hitsound stuff are fixed btw

Normal

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5

1. 00:00:516 (516|0) - shorten this LN until 00:00:984 - more fit on rytim, also you can here 00:04:734 - :3
2. 00:07:312 (7312|2) - move to 2, for pitch
3. 00:13:641 (13641|0,14461|0) - avoid same collum, diffirent rytim
4. 00:21:961 - remove if you followed beat from 00:21:492 - until 00:21:844 -
5. 00:24:656 (24656|3,24656|0) - extend this LN until 00:24:891 - like Hard diff
6. 00:25:828 - remove 1 note here, no need 2 note like 00:27:703 -
7. 00:26:531 (26531|3) - move to 3, pattern balance
8. 00:35:437 (35437|3) - move to 3, pattern balance
9. 00:35:906 (35906|3,36141|2) - what sounds you followed? if long synth, 00:35:906 (35906|3) - shorten LN until 00:36:023 - and 00:36:141 (36141|2) - extend from 00:36:023 - I followed the vocals in this case
10. 00:37:078 (37078|1) - remove LN, consistency pattern like 00:37:781 (37781|3) -
11. 00:44:812 (44812|3,44812|1) - move to left for pattern balance
12. 01:54:422 (114422|2,114539|3) - move to left for pattern balance

All no reply means fixed~

Hard

OD : 7,5
HP : 8

1. 00:00:516 (516|3) - shorten LN until 00:00:984 - like Insane diff
2. 00:07:312 - for variety pattern + hand play, try like this more fit on Hard diff. since insane diff have same pattern
   
3. 00:09:891 - remove 1 note, check consistency here 00:08:016 - and also here
   00:11:766 -
4. 00:19:266 (19266|2,19500|2,19734|2,19969|2) - avoid same collum, try arranged pattern for balance
5. 00:28:406 - 00:29:578 - sama pattern like Insane diff. but for this diff it maybe too hard
6. 00:30:750 (30750|2) - if you put note here, you must put too here 00:30:984 - & here 00:31:219 - because same pitch. same reason like :
   00:32:859 -
   00:33:094 -
   00:34:734 -
   00:34:969 -
7. 00:47:742 (47742|3) - wrong place, must here 00:47:859 - for snare sound
8. 01:44:871 (104871|2) - extend LN from 01:44:812 - since synth start here & check insane diff

All no reply means fixed~

Verniy_Chan wrote:

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please ignore it, just for fun only

Хорошо~Good Luck..

Thanks for the mod Verniy_Chan :3