riririririririririrriririirirriririirirriririirirriririirirriririirirriririirirriririirirriririirirriririirirriririirirririri00:13:233 (3,4,5,6) - increase spacing here, too much stuff there compared to everything before
00:41:690 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - don't make spacing smaller here, the intensity of the song is the same so there is no reason to make a smaller triangle
00:47:176 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - keep a consistent pattern here since the beats and vocals are just repeating. 00:47:519 (2,3) - having this a stack and 00:47:862 (1,2,3) - cascading across doesn't feel right when listening to the song since they should be identical. also don't think 00:48:376 (1) - should be a 1/2 slider. strong beat on big white tick and new vocal starting there as well.
00:48:719 (2) - this overrides a pretty significant beat, there's a lot of these sliders that ignore strong white tick beats throughout the map.
00:50:433 (2,3) - maybe something should be in between there, the pause feels awkward.
00:59:690 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - these are triples but there's no audible sound that signifies a triple placement there. you have 01:00:376 (8) - as a stand alone note but it's literally the same sound as the triples. just make them singles
01:06:376 (1,2) - no strong beat on red and vocal held throughout so you can make this a 1/1 tbh TBH TBHTTBTH
01:28:233 (4) - since this stream unusually lands on a blue tick, many players will play this to the white, and since there is a slider right under it a few bars after, it causes them to sliderbreak easily.
01:32:605 (1,2,3,4) - this triangle has a momentum block ->01:32:605 (1) - which doesn't allow for smooth transition from one corner to another. and since this SV is pretty high, it creates bad playability.
01:34:490 (3,4,5,6) - doubles are not needed. they play okay.. but doesn't really match with the entire 1/2 nature of this section. plus by doing this, you are ignoring the red tick beat which is more significant than the blues.
01:39:290 (1,2) - you went from mapping vocals to ignoring them just for these two sliders @_@..
01:43:576 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - this pattern is a lot better than the one triangle mentioned above since they lead to complete stops on opposite ends
03:18:033 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing !! so big
04:03:290 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - holy fuk spacing big dick
04:16:148 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - HELLO TASTYSTEW IS THIS YOU HANDSOME I AM 17 YEAR OLD SINGAPOREAN BOY STANDING 185CM AND WHEN YOU HEAR SOUND MARCUS WONG PREPARE TO SINGLETAPPING
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didnt bother repeating the same issues if they were present more than once throughout the map. there's quite a bit of conventional issues but creativity matters as well. so in the end it's your call if you wanna fix most of these. anyways nice map cilvery !! it's fun and looks really nice.
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