t+pazolite - Oshama Scramble!

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RikiH_
I'm glad this is for ranking, finally, take a star :3
Topic Starter
Hathz
ey there's a mod for you on the first page go check it out
Lazer
m 4 moddles

[REMASTER]
00:18:170 (1) - should have more spacing than the rest considering the big beats, however 00:17:854 (3,4) - have more spacing which should probably be changed!
00:21:170 - there is a clear beat here, i suggest making the slider 1/2
00:26:222 - circle here, 00:26:380 - slider there
01:06:170 (1,2,3) - i believe the slider should be the other way around (with the circles underneath)


[wa's extra]
holy hell what a difficulty, nothing found

[MASTER]
00:00:801 (2) - for some reason they aren't completely stacked 00:03:328 (2) - 00:25:591 (9) - 00:36:801 (4) - 00:41:854 (3) - 01:09:801 (8) -
00:44:064 (3) - stack on 00:43:117 (4) -
01:11:538 (2) - hits my hp bar

[Riki's Expert]
great difficulty aswell, nothing found and slider art of century

[Advanced]
;w; cant into find either good map

[basic]
00:25:749 (1) - !! finally; move towards x220 y322
00:32:064 (3) - pretty sure thats too high up
01:38:854 (4,5) - oh god too high hits my lifebar ;3;

i also made sure for an even better background as slayer's one still shows a slightly distorted picture >w<
http://cute.lazer.moe/eee.png

not sure if m4m worthy considering my map has not been modded at all yet but oh well

02:00:170 (1) - also this one in riki's expert is different than the other difficulties, ending time should be the same, right?
Smokeman
M4M from your Q

Easy

  1. 00:44:696 (3,4,1) - i m not that good with mapping Easy diffs myself but this overlap might be too much for a new player


Baisic

  1. 01:38:854 (4,5) - these are dangerously close to the healthbar


Advanced

  1. 01:47:222 (2) - mb move this a bit away from 01:46:433 (4) - they are almost touching :(


Riki's Expert

why "Expert"?

  1. 00:20:380 (4,1,2,3) - very akward spacing. I thought it would be a 1/3 the first time i played it. Make it consistent like the rest.
  2. 01:25:117 (1) - ay lmao.
    you could increase the size of the last tail so the end point doens "almost touch" of the slider touches itslef
  3. 02:00:170 (1) - i can feel the sliderbreaks


Master

  1. 00:10:433 (6) - overmapped?
  2. 00:10:907 (2) - I personally dont like stacking 3/4 + note rught on eachother. You keep it consistent in the map but is till dont like it :(
  3. 00:22:433 (7) - overmapped?
  4. 00:23:854 (3,4) - my inexistent OCD will kill me
  5. 00:34:275 (5,6) - ctrl+g. It plays way better. The akward angle feel out of place considering how 00:33:328 (1,2,3) - was played because its the same musical pattern. In addition ctrl+g those two notes would improve the flow into 00:34:591 (1) - aswell.
  6. 00:36:801 (4) - now its behind the slider end...
  7. 00:40:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - plays wierd but mb its just me...
  8. 01:44:222 (1,2,3) - you could slowly build up the sv with each slider


wa's Extra

i would recomend you increase the ar by a bit (9,2 seems fine) Ar9 on a dense map like this feels like 2013.

  1. 00:15:643 (1,2,3,4) - you made double out of the 5stream so you can get a star? And thats because oyu love stars. I don't see why anyone would prefere double over a 5-note-ministream.
  2. 00:15:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - thise whole part changes around with the rythm so fast and is spaced so much (add the AR9 ontop of it)... very akward to play...
  3. 00:35:854 (1,2) - i dont feel like those low spaced slider couoples make the music justice. I feel like there should be more power here.


rest looks ok

Remstered

  1. 01:12:012 (6,7,8) - felt too spaced.
  2. 00:23:380 (2,6) - Removing those two would improve thise part imo. (increase the spacing of 00:23:538 (3,4,7,8) - respectivly if you change it) 00:24:012 (6) - (just ignore the piano sound here, its more about the rythm)
  3. 00:24:880 (3) - 00:26:775 (4) - all this overmapping...
  4. 01:41:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - can you space this more?
  5. 01:41:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Overmapped?. Its rly unfitting. If you keep it then please spaced it out more (00:35:380 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - ).
  6. 01:47:538 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped?

Those two rly stood out when i played this map.

The higher difs rly need some more work/mods

gl
Zectro
i guess ill wait till you apply mods from Smokeman and Lazer.
Topic Starter
Hathz
Fair enough
Topic Starter
Hathz
Thanks for modding. I have excluded the Remaster difficulty for now, more on that sometime later; sorry.

[MASTER]
00:00:801 (2) - for some reason they aren't completely stacked 00:03:328 (2) - 00:25:591 (9) - 00:36:801 (4) - 00:41:854 (3) - 01:09:801 (8) - ok
00:44:064 (3) - stack on 00:43:117 (4) - ok
01:11:538 (2) - hits my hp bar ok

[basic]
00:25:749 (1) - !! finally; move towards x220 y322 nice :D
00:32:064 (3) - pretty sure thats too high up ay
01:38:854 (4,5) - oh god too high hits my lifebar ;3; ah sh*t

i also made sure for an even better background as slayer's one still shows a slightly distorted picture >w<
http://cute.lazer.moe/eee.png Thanks so much for this!!
M4M from your Q

Easy

  1. 00:44:696 (3,4,1) - i m not that good with mapping Easy diffs myself but this overlap might be too much for a new player that still looks okay to me, it just about fades out


Baisic

  1. 01:38:854 (4,5) - these are dangerously close to the healthbar ayfixed


Advanced

  1. 01:47:222 (2) - mb move this a bit away from 01:46:433 (4) - they are almost touching :(yeah we don't want any of that here unless the subject being touched is a loli


Riki's Expert

why "Expert"? cause that's how maimai difficulty naming goes D:

Master

  1. 00:10:433 (6) - overmapped? :p
  2. 00:10:907 (2) - I personally dont like stacking 3/4 + note rught on eachother. You keep it consistent in the map but is till dont like it :(it's a habit i've got out of recently, but i feel like it fits this song
  3. 00:22:433 (7) - overmapped? :p
  4. 00:23:854 (3,4) - my inexistent OCD will kill me oh god now that you mention it
  5. 00:34:275 (5,6) - ctrl+g. It plays way better. The akward angle feel out of place considering how 00:33:328 (1,2,3) - was played because its the same musical pattern. In addition ctrl+g those two notes would improve the flow into 00:34:591 (1) - aswell. fixed
  6. 00:36:801 (4) - now its behind the slider end... changed this a bit
  7. 00:40:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - plays wierd but mb its just me...
  8. 01:44:222 (1,2,3) - you could slowly build up the sv with each slider changed pattern to something I feel plays more interesting


gl ty
RikiH_
Sorry guys, I replied to the mods but lost the whole reply and raged a lot :cry:

I fixed almost everything. Didn't touch that last slider because sliderbreak is love, sliderbreak is life

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354,210,57012,2,0,P|385:224|420:226,1,70
477,164,57328,6,0,L|481:88,1,70
402,62,57643,2,0,L|406:138,1,70
327,164,57959,2,0,L|331:88,1,70
252,62,58275,2,0,L|256:138,1,70
190,186,58591,6,0,P|154:199|108:195,1,70
75,128,58907,2,0,P|111:115|157:119,1,70
190,184,59222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,254,59380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,278,59538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,261,59696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,185,59854,5,0,0:0:0:0:
411,104,60012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,183,60170,5,0,0:0:0:0:
399,102,60328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,181,60486,5,0,0:0:0:0:
391,100,60643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
401,179,60801,5,0,0:0:0:0:
379,98,60959,2,0,L|378:80,4,17.5
321,159,61275,5,0,0:0:0:0:
236,159,61433,6,0,B|204:141|204:141|203:135|203:135|197:137|197:137|188:145|188:145|190:133|190:133|180:127|180:127|183:114|183:114|164:131|164:131|162:125|162:125|145:115|145:115|145:107|145:107|128:97|128:97|129:88|129:88|117:99|117:99|122:84|122:84|110:95|110:95|111:87|111:87|76:67,1,280
34,230,62380,5,0,0:0:0:0:
97,338,62696,2,0,P|134:347|161:344,1,52.5000020027161
208,326,63012,2,0,L|329:322,1,105.000004005432
437,343,63643,6,0,L|332:346,1,105.000004005432
286,302,64117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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294,37,64907,5,0,0:0:0:0:
173,73,65222,2,0,L|116:76,1,52.5000020027161
61,99,65538,2,0,P|51:129|65:212,1,105.000004005432
40,325,66170,5,0,0:0:0:0:
161,359,66486,2,0,L|194:357,3,26.2500010013581
218,355,66801,2,0,P|241:326|249:248,1,105.000004005432
209,140,67433,5,0,0:0:0:0:
295,47,67749,2,0,P|324:43|361:48,1,52.5000020027161
398,80,68064,2,0,L|407:195,1,105.000004005432
351,298,68696,6,0,P|319:305|237:278,2,105.000004005432
460,235,69643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,162,69959,5,0,0:0:0:0:
296,183,70117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,163,70275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,183,70433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,144,70591,2,0,P|123:134|121:113,3,26.2500010013581
128,87,70907,2,0,L|132:56,3,26.2500010013581
133,18,71222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71301,12,0,72170,0:0:0:0:
363,47,72486,6,0,B|337:74|310:130|329:223|441:221|441:221|400:281|352:287|311:280|276:248|257:192,1,490
199,134,73749,2,0,P|162:120|125:125,1,70
92,138,73986,2,0,L|73:251,1,105
107,319,74380,2,0,P|142:333|179:334,1,70
245,290,74696,2,0,P|279:292|311:305,1,70
386,345,75012,6,0,B|470:330|485:260|485:260|454:266|398:256|378:229|378:229|399:196|431:183|479:186|479:186|488:147|486:121|423:75,1,490
358,51,76275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,77,76433,2,0,L|242:80,1,35
202,68,76591,2,0,L|159:65,3,35
128,83,76907,2,0,P|88:88|48:74,2,70
179,149,77380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,149,77459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,149,77538,6,0,B|153:184|143:225|158:275|202:300|202:300|192:349|192:349|142:371|86:370|51:348|31:322|26:294|30:262,1,420
33,208,78643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,208,78722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
33,208,78801,6,0,B|55:171|55:171|53:139|53:139|64:109|64:109|60:74|60:74|96:41|96:41|117:57|156:76|209:69|255:44|255:44|223:56|190:45,1,420
169,151,79907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,216,80064,6,0,B|337:241|337:241|388:226,1,140
446,195,80538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,195,80617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,195,80696,2,0,B|468:139|462:80|462:80|452:96|448:115,1,140
372,129,81170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,134,81249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,137,81328,6,0,P|302:143|263:134,1,70
203,96,81643,2,0,L|127:101,1,70
68,154,81959,2,0,P|55:191|53:232,1,70
74,303,82275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,351,82433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,337,82591,6,0,B|263:321|303:317|353:330|382:352|382:352|431:322|443:272|436:243|416:210|380:189|342:192|311:221|311:221|289:211|289:211|262:218|262:218|238:208|238:208|215:217|215:217|185:208,1,560
105,180,84012,2,0,B|69:152|69:98|91:61|138:45|182:63|182:63|194:66|194:66|219:58|219:58|242:68|242:68|265:59|265:59|288:70|288:70|309:62|309:62|337:79|391:61,1,420
449,117,85117,6,0,B|481:167|477:240|451:321|393:356|393:356|349:318|335:245|357:206|357:206|371:248|347:301|296:339|223:335|223:335|263:287|265:236|241:199|241:199|220:264|178:283|136:277|107:248|107:188|131:169|164:162|195:166,1,1050
245,119,87643,6,0,P|283:106|311:78,1,70
236,36,87959,2,0,P|198:49|170:77,1,70
170,152,88275,2,0,P|187:188|187:226,1,70
126,275,88591,2,0,P|109:239|109:201,1,70
188,217,88907,6,0,P|226:228|273:228,1,70
332,194,89222,2,0,L|412:192,1,70
425,111,89538,2,0,P|387:100|340:100,1,70
281,134,89854,2,0,L|201:136,1,70
151,74,90170,5,0,0:0:0:0:
76,113,90328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,193,90486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,269,90643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,309,90801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,297,90959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,235,91117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,151,91275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
358,89,91433,6,0,P|378:82|394:82,3,35
430,146,91749,2,0,P|447:145|463:138,3,35
389,208,92064,2,0,P|372:209|356:216,3,35
428,273,92380,2,0,P|445:272|461:265,3,35
390,335,92696,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,92775,12,0,94907,0:0:0:0:
473,43,95222,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,92,95380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,60,95538,2,0,L|244:56,1,70
170,50,95854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,70,96012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,81,96091,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,93,96170,2,0,L|38:160,1,70
67,235,96486,6,0,P|105:246|148:243,1,70
200,191,96801,2,0,B|308:201|308:201|274:212,1,140
230,280,97275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,293,97354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,306,97433,2,0,P|265:326|307:329,1,70
372,302,97749,6,0,L|452:294,1,70
469,262,97986,2,0,P|486:221|475:151,1,105
441,87,98380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,46,98538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,41,98617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,38,98696,2,0,P|300:46|257:46,1,70
187,29,99012,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,67,99170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,80,99249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,93,99328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,158,99486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,231,99643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,99801,5,0,0:0:0:0:
303,100,99959,2,0,P|322:79|350:106,1,70
407,163,100275,5,0,0:0:0:0:
478,207,100433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,289,100591,2,0,P|451:326|424:354,1,70
350,375,100907,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,352,101064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,346,101143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,345,101222,2,0,P|199:352|162:350,1,70
104,301,101538,6,0,L|99:224,1,70
60,156,101854,2,0,P|52:118|58:82,1,70
116,27,102170,2,0,B|220:43|220:43|258:28,1,140
336,23,102643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
415,50,102801,6,0,P|456:70|473:96,1,70
485,172,103117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,254,103275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,263,103354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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305,239,103749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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202,166,104222,2,0,P|168:146|128:146,1,70
144,229,104538,2,0,P|106:235|75:261,1,70
139,315,104854,2,0,P|114:344|107:384,1,70
37,325,105170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,253,105328,6,0,L|75:177,1,70
93,101,105643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,50,105801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,90,105959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,104,106117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,102,106196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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430,284,106907,2,0,P|397:300|296:263,1,140
255,202,107380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,152,107538,2,0,P|148:145|110:155,1,70
58,210,107854,6,0,P|45:249|67:320,1,105
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193,163,108801,2,0,L|117:156,1,70
75,87,109117,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,29,109275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,37,109354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,39,109433,2,0,L|239:32,1,70
306,68,109749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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346,224,110380,6,0,L|369:296,1,70
310,353,110696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,369,110854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,332,111012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,252,111170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,238,111249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,226,111328,2,0,P|156:197|190:182,1,70
266,164,111643,5,0,0:0:0:0:
347,182,111801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,145,111959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,61,112117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,90,112275,2,0,P|316:70|210:68,1,140
142,32,112749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,72,112907,6,0,L|62:151,1,70
51,225,113222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,303,113380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,311,113459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,314,113538,2,0,L|183:311,1,70
257,301,113854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,291,114012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,282,114170,6,0,L|443:279,4,17.5
439,198,114486,2,0,L|459:195,4,17.5
389,129,114801,2,0,P|354:110|281:117,1,105
254,136,115117,2,0,B|226:158|184:154|184:154|139:146|99:171,1,140
256,192,115512,12,0,119854,0:0:0:0:
256,192,120170,6,0,L|256:216,6,17.5
Topic Starter
Hathz
Updated.
Zectro
Hello guys! How are you doing today?

[General]
  1. Hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
    normal-hitfinish.wav
    normal-hitnormal2.wav


[Easy]
  1. 00:09:328 (4) - Try x36y304 and for 00:10:591 (1) - x132y84
  2. This is very nazi but 00:15:643 (1) - is not the same as 00:18:170 (3) - if you copy and paste it and put it on top of 00:18:170 (2) - ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4358738 )
  3. 00:37:117 (2) - Anchor point perfectly in the middle would look better imo
  4. 00:44:696 (3,1) - Uhh these overlapping would not be preferable.. but w/e I guess
  5. Very good job.


[Basic]
  1. 00:01:117 (2) - Should be moved 1 pixel to the right lol
  2. 01:21:328 (1,2) - Are not aligned perfectly (if you move them closer together you will see it, http://puu.sh/mA4bb/ededd65df4.jpg )
  3. High quality diff aswell.


[Advanced]
  1. There is like a small difficulty gap between Easy and Basic, but a pretty big one between Basic and Advanced, I guess it's fine though. I would have expected CS3,5-3,8, but not 4.
    00:45:012 (2) - Should be quite a few pixels to the left
    00:45:644 (4) - ^
    00:47:538 (2) - Should be a few pixels to the right
    00:48:170 (4) - Should be a few to the left
    00:48:802 (6) - Should be one or two or three to the left
    You get what I mean by now haha
  2. 01:00:170 (2,3) - These feel too close together for sure
  3. 01:46:433 (4,1) - Have a few pixels more distance between these
  4. Blankets can be improved for places like 01:51:486 (1,2) -
  5. 01:55:433 (1) - Try another place, like, x189y180 (current one looks bad imo)


[Riki's Expert]
  1. 00:01:591 (5,6) - Perfect stack pls ;)
  2. 00:14:380 (1) - If you want this to point in exactly the same direction as 00:14:696 (2) - , which I recommend, move 00:14:380 (1) - 's sliderend to x28y243
  3. 00:17:222 (2,3) - It would be cool if for example 2 curved up and 3 curved down(how it is already)
  4. 00:18:170 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Too confusing of a repeating pattern for this diff. It's very hard to read due to the small spacing and the nc's. I suggest changing the pattern to something else at 00:18:801 -
  5. 00:20:380 (4) - This is 1 tick too long hehe
  6. 00:27:643 (4,5,1) - Idk about this spacing.. seems a bit misleading
  7. 00:58:591 (1,3) - Perfect stack
  8. 00:59:854 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Meh... maybe you can increase the spacing more and more since the pitch in the song goes up. Then it would kinda work I think


[Master]
  1. 00:02:696 (3,4) - It would be better imo if you moved this to x275y274 so 00:02:380 (1,3) - don't overlap and don't look messy.
  2. 00:08:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks rather ugly, I suggest you just use the same DS for it.
  3. 00:17:775 (3,4) - x0,45 00:12:722 (6,7) - x0,40. Fix this kinda stuff
  4. 00:15:012 (1,2,3,1) - These movements you have to make are kinda meh, but whatever I guess. Also 00:15:012 (1,2) - is not blanketed perfectly heh
  5. 00:27:959 (7) - I recommend doing something like http://puu.sh/mA5qU/f0f2d80529.jpg as the sound goes on for longer.
  6. 00:29:222 (4,5,6,7) - I don't really like this pattern, it feels messy the way they are overlapping
  7. 00:46:591 (4,7) - Try to avoid this overlap, looks bad/messy.
  8. If you want this overlap 00:49:117 (3,6) - to be the same as 00:48:486 (1,5) - this one, then move 00:49:591 (6) - to x184y274
  9. 01:21:643 (2,5) - These overlapping makes this whole pattern look messy
  10. 01:48:959 (6) - A few pixels to the right


[wa's Extra]
  1. Not hitsounded yet? ;_;
  2. 00:12:328 (6) - Wouldn't http://puu.sh/mA5IB/1475bb6614.jpg look better?
  3. 00:12:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - For some reason this stream feels kinda messy, more messy than the other ones I mean..
  4. 00:15:643 (1,2,3,4) - Only place in the map where you use doubles I think. Are you sure about them?
  5. 00:30:328 - Are you sure that you want to skip this? You were previously following the melody and now you just skip it purely because you followed one other sound before(00:29:854 (2,3,4,5,6) - )?
  6. 00:33:801 (1,3) - Try to avoid this overlap
  7. 00:34:749 (3) - I feel like if you decide to do this you might aswell do it too at 00:35:064 - and 00:35:380 - , since now it just feels weird that you ignore those other two.
  8. 01:09:959 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing feels too big while playing. It's because it doesn't fit this section of the song
  9. 01:26:854 (1) - NC here seems kinda unnecessary, same for 01:27:328 (1) -
  10. 01:38:696 (2) - ctrl+g?
  11. 01:41:696 (2,3,4) - This 1/6 tripple is a bit TOO unexpected for this diff. Try a kickslider
  12. 01:48:328 (1,1,1) - I don't think you need to nc these
  13. 01:50:222 - Please don't leave this empty, it's very confusing in a bad way haha


Lovely mapset, good luck guys!
Topic Starter
Hathz
Thank you :p

Hello guys! How are you doing today? Good :3

[General]
  1. Hitsounds with possible delay >5ms: Trimmed the sound files slightly, thanks
    normal-hitfinish.wav
    normal-hitnormal2.wav


[Easy]
  1. 00:09:328 (4) - Try x36y304 and for 00:10:591 (1) - x132y84 Sure, moved to around there-ish
  2. This is very nazi but 00:15:643 (1) - is not the same as 00:18:170 (3) - if you copy and paste it and put it on top of 00:18:170 (2) - ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4358738 ) How did you even see that >.>
  3. 00:37:117 (2) - Anchor point perfectly in the middle would look better imo Looks in the middle to me? But (attempted) fix I guess
  4. 00:44:696 (3,1) - Uhh these overlapping would not be preferable.. but w/e I guess It just about fades out so I think it's fine
  5. Very good job.


[Basic]
  1. 00:01:117 (2) - Should be moved 1 pixel to the right lol lol
  2. 01:21:328 (1,2) - Are not aligned perfectly (if you move them closer together you will see it, http://puu.sh/mA4bb/ededd65df4.jpg ) Changed a bit.
  3. High quality diff aswell.


[Advanced]
  1. There is like a small difficulty gap between Easy and Basic, but a pretty big one between Basic and Advanced, I guess it's fine though. I would have expected CS3,5-3,8, but not 4. CS changed to 3.7 ~ had to do some spacing and pattern changes due to this
    00:45:012 (2) - Should be quite a few pixels to the left
    00:45:644 (4) - ^
    00:47:538 (2) - Should be a few pixels to the right
    00:48:170 (4) - Should be a few to the left
    00:48:802 (6) - Should be one or two or three to the left
    You get what I mean by now haha ha ... haha ha .. ha :p
  2. 01:00:170 (2,3) - These feel too close together for sure :p
  3. 01:46:433 (4,1) - Have a few pixels more distance between these
  4. Blankets can be improved for places like 01:51:486 (1,2) - I fixed a few, hopefully I didn't miss any
  5. 01:55:433 (1) - Try another place, like, x189y180 (current one looks bad imo) Sure


[Master]
  1. 00:02:696 (3,4) - It would be better imo if you moved this to x275y274 so 00:02:380 (1,3) - don't overlap and don't look messy. nnyes
  2. 00:08:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This looks rather ugly, I suggest you just use the same DS for it. I'm not quite sure what you mean? The DS is at 0.60x throughout the entire stream.
  3. 00:17:775 (3,4) - x0,45 00:12:722 (6,7) - x0,40. Fix this kinda stuff Fixed though small variations like that are hardly noticed IMO (but one can still argue it should be consistent)
  4. 00:15:012 (1,2,3,1) - These movements you have to make are kinda meh, but whatever I guess. Also 00:15:012 (1,2) - is not blanketed perfectly heh heh
  5. 00:27:959 (7) - I recommend doing something like http://puu.sh/mA5qU/f0f2d80529.jpg as the sound goes on for longer. Fair enough good point
  6. 00:29:222 (4,5,6,7) - I don't really like this pattern, it feels messy the way they are overlapping I think it's cute ^^
  7. 00:46:591 (4,7) - Try to avoid this overlap, looks bad/messy. Removed some overlaps throughout the diff
  8. If you want this overlap 00:49:117 (3,6) - to be the same as 00:48:486 (1,5) - this one, then move 00:49:591 (6) - to x184y274
  9. 01:21:643 (2,5) - These overlapping makes this whole pattern look messy
  10. 01:48:959 (6) - A few pixels to the right +1


Lovely mapset, good luck guys! Thanks :3
jukkaduei
It's already nice
It's already nice
00:40:907 - I think it should be a normal circle
01:18:801 -
Do it like this
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