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[General]
1) Your mp3 bit rate is unrankable, maximum is 256kbps, you should ask blissfulyoshi for help or go here if you want to try to fix it
2) Flag at hitcircleoverlay is hard to see, maybe don't let the flag is transparent?
3) You need an approachcircle.png and hitcircle.png
4) No tags?
[Light]
00:17:726 (x) - Add note here? Like 00:24:347 (5)?
00:21:037 (x) - ^
00:27:657 (x) - ^
00:46:278 (5,6) - Not stack together at end
01:08:209 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff
01:20:623 (7) - Get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's really not good for normal diff
01:28:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Change it like this? http://puu.sh/diW
01:50:830 (1) - Overlapped with 01:49:175 (3) it's really ugly, try see at 01:49:588
02:00:347 (4) - Get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's really not good for normal diff
02:40:071 (7) - Get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's really not good for normal diff
[Hard]
Rename to "Dark"?
00:41:726 (1) - I think end slider at blue tick are not fit, IMO. Try end at red tick
00:47:933 (8) - ^
00:54:243 (1,1,1) - Combo spammer, yay
01:20:726 (1,1,1) - ^
01:29:726 (6,7) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27035
01:31:588 (3,4) - Don't make cutted slider pattern, it's ugly
02:08:002 (2,3,4,5) - This short slider are make NO sense for me
02:13:692 (1,1,1) - Combo spammer, yay
02:21:864 (3) - This is hidden, make it like this please http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27036
02:40:175 (1,1,1) - Combo spammer, yay
Nice song
STAR
[General]
1) Your mp3 bit rate is unrankable, maximum is 256kbps, you should ask blissfulyoshi for help or go here if you want to try to fix it
2) Flag at hitcircleoverlay is hard to see, maybe don't let the flag is transparent?
3) You need an approachcircle.png and hitcircle.png
4) No tags?
[Light]
00:17:726 (x) - Add note here? Like 00:24:347 (5)?
00:21:037 (x) - ^
00:27:657 (x) - ^
00:46:278 (5,6) - Not stack together at end
01:08:209 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, since this is a normal diff
01:20:623 (7) - Get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's really not good for normal diff
01:28:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Change it like this? http://puu.sh/diW
01:50:830 (1) - Overlapped with 01:49:175 (3) it's really ugly, try see at 01:49:588
02:00:347 (4) - Get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's really not good for normal diff
02:40:071 (7) - Get rid of 1/4 repeating slider, because it's really not good for normal diff
[Hard]
Rename to "Dark"?
00:41:726 (1) - I think end slider at blue tick are not fit, IMO. Try end at red tick
00:47:933 (8) - ^
00:54:243 (1,1,1) - Combo spammer, yay
01:20:726 (1,1,1) - ^
01:29:726 (6,7) - Make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27035
01:31:588 (3,4) - Don't make cutted slider pattern, it's ugly
02:08:002 (2,3,4,5) - This short slider are make NO sense for me
02:13:692 (1,1,1) - Combo spammer, yay
02:21:864 (3) - This is hidden, make it like this please http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27036
02:40:175 (1,1,1) - Combo spammer, yay
Nice song
STAR
As per your request:
[Skin]
The spinner-circle may be frowned upon because you can't tell it's spinning (I got flak for it on my own map. :< )
[Light]
00:42:968 (4) - Raise the middle point up one grid. This'll line up the end points. There were a few other sliders like this, but they looked okay since you had copy/pastes that at least offset the slight-angle.
00:52:899 (1) - Eeh, I'd remove the soft whistle from the slider slide. I hate the sound of 'em.
01:47:933 (2) - ^ Well, there's quite a few of 'em, so I'll leave it to you to remove them or not.
Really nice~
[Hard]
00:54:140 (7,1,1) - Uh, all these new combos intentional? Looks weird in a stack like that.
How about this:
01:20:623 (5,1,1,1) - Eeh, I guess it was on purpose. Still looks weird to me though. It's not like the player really needs more health due to break HP drain or something.
Great pair of maps you have here!
[Skin]
The spinner-circle may be frowned upon because you can't tell it's spinning (I got flak for it on my own map. :< )
[Light]
00:42:968 (4) - Raise the middle point up one grid. This'll line up the end points. There were a few other sliders like this, but they looked okay since you had copy/pastes that at least offset the slight-angle.
00:52:899 (1) - Eeh, I'd remove the soft whistle from the slider slide. I hate the sound of 'em.
01:47:933 (2) - ^ Well, there's quite a few of 'em, so I'll leave it to you to remove them or not.
Really nice~
[Hard]
00:54:140 (7,1,1) - Uh, all these new combos intentional? Looks weird in a stack like that.
How about this:
104,208,68209,6,0,B|128:341|384:340|416:208,1,400,0|10for this:
176,192,69450,2,8,B|192:248|328:248|344:192,3,200,2|2|2|8
01:20:623 (5,1,1,1) - Eeh, I guess it was on purpose. Still looks weird to me though. It's not like the player really needs more health due to break HP drain or something.
Great pair of maps you have here!
[hard] rename [dark]? xD
1:26:830 (4,5,6) make the ending of (4) and (5,6) on the same horizontal level?
2:14:830 (2) stack ending position of (2) onto (3,4)
2:23:726 (2) stack ending position onto (1)?
2:35:726 (5,6) down 2 grids?
2:53:519 (1) maybe change to single notes?
no big problems fouind, star
1:26:830 (4,5,6) make the ending of (4) and (5,6) on the same horizontal level?
2:14:830 (2) stack ending position of (2) onto (3,4)
2:23:726 (2) stack ending position onto (1)?
2:35:726 (5,6) down 2 grids?
2:53:519 (1) maybe change to single notes?
no big problems fouind, star
Topic Starter
thank you guys for your feedback~
fixed some issues
fixed some issues
[Light]
Извини,не успел прочитать комментарии,но почти уверен,что к тебе придирались за название сложности.
00:47:106 (6) - Да,вижу,что используешь 1/1 биты,но здесь слайдеры,прям так и хочется начать его с 00:46:899,ну и оставить на 00:47:519 просто сиркл.
01:02:002 (1) - Попробуй его сдвинуть на 01:01:795.Мне так больше нравится.
01:03:243 (4,5) - Кстати,это тоже можешь заменить на один 01:03:450,ну,это если использовала предыдущее предложение.
02:47:106 - Можешь сюда добавить 3 ноты:(02:47:106,02:47:312,02:47:726).
[Hard]
00:47:312 (5) - Не обязательно,но я бы подравнял под 00:46:485 (3).
Ещё иногда баты,да и не только они,ругают за использование чисто белого цвета,хотя,как я понимаю,альтернативы тут нет,так что удачи с этим.
Крутой скин,карта хороша,звезда~
Извини,не успел прочитать комментарии,но почти уверен,что к тебе придирались за название сложности.
00:47:106 (6) - Да,вижу,что используешь 1/1 биты,но здесь слайдеры,прям так и хочется начать его с 00:46:899,ну и оставить на 00:47:519 просто сиркл.
01:02:002 (1) - Попробуй его сдвинуть на 01:01:795.Мне так больше нравится.
01:03:243 (4,5) - Кстати,это тоже можешь заменить на один 01:03:450,ну,это если использовала предыдущее предложение.
02:47:106 - Можешь сюда добавить 3 ноты:(02:47:106,02:47:312,02:47:726).
[Hard]
00:47:312 (5) - Не обязательно,но я бы подравнял под 00:46:485 (3).
Ещё иногда баты,да и не только они,ругают за использование чисто белого цвета,хотя,как я понимаю,альтернативы тут нет,так что удачи с этим.
Крутой скин,карта хороша,звезда~
Heya o/
Let's start...
[General]
Not done or on purpose? 30 seconds of map are missing
[Light]
00:41:763 (1) - maybe delete this note? Bit hard to see imo( but not necessary )
00:47:143 (6) - stack slider's end with (5)'s end?
[Hard]
00:27:074 (6) - new combo?
00:46:522 (3) - stack slider end with (4)s end?
00:47:349 (5) - stack with (3) ?
00:56:246 (5) - new combo
01:12:798 (7) - ^
02:15:280 (3) - stack sliders end with (2)s end?
02:32:246 (7) - new combo
02:37:005 (7,8) - remove new combo
02:38:452 (3) - new combo (if you new comboed 02:37:005 7,8, otherwise not)
02:45:074 (5) - I think you made it extra that 2 slides don't stack since there are so many of that kind ? = = But I think it's ok like that
Couldn't find very much since I'm still bad in modding and editing , sry orz
star~
Let's start...
[General]
Not done or on purpose? 30 seconds of map are missing
[Light]
00:41:763 (1) - maybe delete this note? Bit hard to see imo( but not necessary )
00:47:143 (6) - stack slider's end with (5)'s end?
[Hard]
00:27:074 (6) - new combo?
00:46:522 (3) - stack slider end with (4)s end?
00:47:349 (5) - stack with (3) ?
00:56:246 (5) - new combo
01:12:798 (7) - ^
02:15:280 (3) - stack sliders end with (2)s end?
02:32:246 (7) - new combo
02:37:005 (7,8) - remove new combo
02:38:452 (3) - new combo (if you new comboed 02:37:005 7,8, otherwise not)
02:45:074 (5) - I think you made it extra that 2 slides don't stack since there are so many of that kind ? = = But I think it's ok like that
Couldn't find very much since I'm still bad in modding and editing , sry orz
star~
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[General]
No tags? I would like some tags
Please remove pure white combo color or change it for something else (Except gray)
You are missing approach circle and hit circle on your skin, you can use the default ones.
Crop the rest of the mp3 since you probably wont map any longer than that?
The middle circle on your spinner circle is off center, it keeps bouncing around Intentional? http://puu.sh/hrz
[Hard]
Lower HP Drain, it's like impossible to go back up after it goes down, specially with the note density in this map.
01:20:763 (1,1,1,1) - Please avoid NC spam it messes up HP calculations (Same for other similar spots).
01:32:660 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I think it would look and play better if all theese patterns were arranged in a square but each square has a different center that's slightly off the last one try this?
01:52:729 (4,5) - Try to not make it overlap? you could drag (5)'s middle control point farther as it looks kinda bad when sliders are not-so-curvy on bézier to begin with.
02:13:729 (1,1,1,1,2) - Delete all those new combos, but make (2) a new combo.
02:23:349 (1,2) - Make them end at the same spot?
[Normal]
Didn't find anything major here, i guess this diff is ok.
No tags? I would like some tags
Please remove pure white combo color or change it for something else (Except gray)
You are missing approach circle and hit circle on your skin, you can use the default ones.
Crop the rest of the mp3 since you probably wont map any longer than that?
The middle circle on your spinner circle is off center, it keeps bouncing around Intentional? http://puu.sh/hrz
[Hard]
Lower HP Drain, it's like impossible to go back up after it goes down, specially with the note density in this map.
01:20:763 (1,1,1,1) - Please avoid NC spam it messes up HP calculations (Same for other similar spots).
01:32:660 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I think it would look and play better if all theese patterns were arranged in a square but each square has a different center that's slightly off the last one try this?
01:52:729 (4,5) - Try to not make it overlap? you could drag (5)'s middle control point farther as it looks kinda bad when sliders are not-so-curvy on bézier to begin with.
02:13:729 (1,1,1,1,2) - Delete all those new combos, but make (2) a new combo.
02:23:349 (1,2) - Make them end at the same spot?
[Normal]
Didn't find anything major here, i guess this diff is ok.
Topic Starter
thanks everyone *__*
General
You should consider adding at least another diff.
Light
Rename it to "Normal" ? I don't see why this one has a custom diff name and not the other.
00:46:315 (5,6) - Stack their end ? I think it'll look better this way.
00:59:970 (3,1,2) - This overlaps looks bad ingame.
01:04:522 (1) - I think speed changes might be confusing for new players - since this is the easiest diff of the mapset it should be beginner-friendly.
01:08:246 (1) - This note is a bit too far from the center of the screen so soon after the spinner and might be hard to catch.
01:18:384 (2,3) - This stack might be confusing because stacks are hard to read for new players, and a 1/2 stack would just have them tap as fast as they can. I suggest you space them to give at least once the idea of the rhythm to follow.
01:20:660 (7) - This slider is too confusing for new players: being a hold slider, they wouldn't know how many times it repeats nor even be expecting it to repeat several times.
01:49:212 (3,1) - This overlap looks bad ingame.
02:00:384 (4) - Same as 01:20:660 -
02:40:108 (7) - ^
Hard
This diff is full of jumps and overlaps that don't feel right at all... The jumps are too sudden and don't really fit the song, since they appear in the middle of phrases and interrupt them.
01:04:315 (4) - I don't think this slow down makes sense.
02:08:039 (2,3,4,5) - You shouldn't silence notes for the sake of adding notes (here, sliders). Either don't silence the end of these sliders, either delete the slider and place circles instead.
02:19:005 - Map something ?
02:53:143 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:08:039 -
You should consider adding at least another diff.
Light
Rename it to "Normal" ? I don't see why this one has a custom diff name and not the other.
00:46:315 (5,6) - Stack their end ? I think it'll look better this way.
00:59:970 (3,1,2) - This overlaps looks bad ingame.
01:04:522 (1) - I think speed changes might be confusing for new players - since this is the easiest diff of the mapset it should be beginner-friendly.
01:08:246 (1) - This note is a bit too far from the center of the screen so soon after the spinner and might be hard to catch.
01:18:384 (2,3) - This stack might be confusing because stacks are hard to read for new players, and a 1/2 stack would just have them tap as fast as they can. I suggest you space them to give at least once the idea of the rhythm to follow.
01:20:660 (7) - This slider is too confusing for new players: being a hold slider, they wouldn't know how many times it repeats nor even be expecting it to repeat several times.
01:49:212 (3,1) - This overlap looks bad ingame.
02:00:384 (4) - Same as 01:20:660 -
02:40:108 (7) - ^
Hard
This diff is full of jumps and overlaps that don't feel right at all... The jumps are too sudden and don't really fit the song, since they appear in the middle of phrases and interrupt them.
01:04:315 (4) - I don't think this slow down makes sense.
02:08:039 (2,3,4,5) - You shouldn't silence notes for the sake of adding notes (here, sliders). Either don't silence the end of these sliders, either delete the slider and place circles instead.
02:19:005 - Map something ?
02:53:143 (1,2,3) - Same as 02:08:039 -
Topic Starter
Light
changed the following things:
thanks for modding.
changed the following things:
I wont argue about [Hard]. God no.Odaril wrote:
00:46:315 (5,6) - Stack their end ? I think it'll look better this way. k
00:59:970 (3,1,2) - This overlaps looks bad ingame. fixed
01:04:522 (1) - I think speed changes might be confusing for new players - since this is the easiest diff of the mapset it should be beginner-friendly. removed that 1/2 section
01:49:212 (3,1) - This overlap looks bad ingame. fixed
thanks for modding.
I actually giggled.
Topic Starter
<3
The only thing missing here is the rank status.
Awesome job... AGAIN!
Awesome job... AGAIN!
Here you go pretty lady<3
Topic Starter
<3yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
Here you go pretty lady<3
Good enough.
Ranked~
Ranked~
Awesome, congratulations!
Topic Starter
thank you guys <3