Laura Brehm & Evoke - Future Holds · forum

Yoges

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Yoges 2015-08-11T17:03:19+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 September 2015 at 17:03:48

Artist: Laura Brehm & Evoke
Title: Future Holds
Tags: Alden electronic female vocalist deep emotional hoen andrei7 DahplA single
BPM: 85
Filesize: 7535kb
Play Time: 04:17
Difficulties Available:

Alpha's Normal (1.51 stars, 207 notes)
andrei7's Hard (2.86 stars, 391 notes)
Easy (1.18 stars, 147 notes)
Hoen's Advanced (2.04 stars, 228 notes)
Insane (3.97 stars, 545 notes)

Download: Laura Brehm & Evoke - Future Holds
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Ranked

Easy = Ore Da
Normal = Alpha
Advanced = Hoen
Hard = andrei7
Insane = Ore Da

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Evoke

Laura Brehm

Last edited by Yoges 2015-10-01T16:45:44+00:00, edited 63 times in total.

Lyric

293 posts

Joined September 2013

Lyric 2015-09-09T09:25:53+00:00

[Hoen's Normal]
00:26:768 (3) - shorten this slider to the red line and add a note at the end.
03:37:533 (3,2) - stack.
03:47:415 (1) - Lengthen this slider to start at 03:47:239 , and add a circle at 03:47:062 .
03:48:827 (3) - This slider should end at 03:49:886 . Make 03:50:239 a circle.

[Insane]
00:55:886 (3,4) - Bad flow I think.
02:29:415 (4,1) - Stack this.

4399guangguang

75 posts

Joined April 2013

4399guangguang 2015-09-09T10:39:40+00:00

00:38:415 (5) - Change into x-472 y-224 to x-444 y-152.
01:06:827 (3) - x-200 y-160.
01:16:357 (1) - Move it to x-188 y-344.

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2015-09-09T12:09:44+00:00

hi.m4m from your queue.
glad to see you again^^

[General]
drain time/total time: 196/257=0.7626 ,which is smaller than 0.8.it's unrankable.
i recommend you cut the tail of the song.

ranking rule:You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it.
(https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria)

[Normal]
too many spinners.it's boring and not friendly to a beginner.delete some of them,or replace them with long slider.

00:28:357 (1,2) - bad overlap in a Normal diff.move them away.
00:58:710 (4,1) - ^
01:01:533 (4,1) - ^
01:18:474 (3,4) - ^
quite a lot of overlap issue,i will not point all of them out.
that's because you set SV 1.2,and DS is 1.4,which are too high for a Normal with this BPM.
due to high SV and DS,your mapping space becomes very small,so you have to overlap them.
i recommend you trun down SV and DS.
SV * DS = about 1 seems much better ,for this BPM's song.
for example, set SV=1.0,DS=1.0.
you'll have a lot of work to do...

01:10:710 (1) - avoid using this kind of red node in a slider ,in a normal diff.it makes the slider's flow not clearly.if you really want to use a red node,please use it in half of a slider.
01:16:357 (1) - ^
01:46:004 (3) - ^
01:56:592 (3) -^
02:01:533 (1) - ^
02:34:709 (1) - ^
03:17:062 (2) - ^
03:19:180 (5) - ^
03:00:827 (1) - just like this,this is ok.

03:32:239 (2,3) - they are out of rhythm.
03:39:827 - add a break time here.

good luck!

Yoges

896 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Yoges 2015-09-09T14:24:18+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
hi.m4m from your queue.
glad to see you again^^

[General]
drain time/total time: 196/257=0.7626 ,which is smaller than 0.8.it's unrankable.
i recommend you cut the tail of the song.

ranking rule:You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it.
(https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria) Fixed

good luck!

scooderic wrote:
[Insane]
00:55:886 (3,4) - Bad flow I think. Fixed
02:29:415 (4,1) - Stack this. Fixed

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2015-09-09T15:24:29+00:00

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Evoke & Laura Brehm - Future Holds.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67946
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.599999

[Metadata]
Title:Future Holds
TitleUnicode:Future Holds
Artist:Evoke & Laura Brehm
ArtistUnicode:Evoke & Laura Brehm
Creator:Yoges
Version:Hoen's Normal
Source:
Tags:electronic english female vocalist deep emotional hoen
BeatmapID:778984
BeatmapSetID:344391

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
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SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Yoges

896 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Yoges 2015-09-09T16:21:19+00:00

Hoen can you please reply to mods? Saying what you changed and didn't change?

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2015-09-10T20:02:19+00:00

Yoges wrote:
Hoen can you please reply to mods? Saying what you changed and didn't change?

I'll answer the other mods

Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-09-12T01:36:22+00:00

Mod soon.

Come[Back]Home

1,785 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2015-09-12T07:44:04+00:00

Hello there~ :3

Normal

00:27:711 (1) Okay, dont do SV changes in Normal. There are no BNs out there who would rank this since its too risky. Pleas keep that in mind, no sv changes in Normal ever. (I wont point them out anymore)
00:39:711 (1,2) Improve the blank here, otherwise this pattern looks weird.
01:09:711 (3,1) Dont do this in Normals please. Normal Players will click (1) instant after (3) since they are focusing more on the distance and not on the approach circle
01:12:887 (3,1) They are nearly touching
01:19:240 (4) NC is missing
01:24:887 (4) ^
01:46:064 (3) This was bothering me quite some time. You shouldnt use sliders like this in Normals, sometimes there are unranks because of them (In Easys and Normals)
01:55:593 (1) Delelete NC and add NC 01:55:946
01:56:652 (3) This one really is unrankable if used in a Normal
I wont point out your wrong NC placements anymore. I would do a NC on every Second Downbeat so it will fit with the song, otherwise its just wrong
03:06:534 (1,3) They are nearly touching which looks weird
03:08:652 (4,2) ^
03:15:005 This beat should be clickable

Nice Normal, except those unrankable slidershapes, SV changes and wrong NC placements. Just fix that and it should be fine :3

Insane

I just took a quick look at this diff, and i really really really like it! :3
Only thing that bothers me is that you sometimes dont use NC's on strong sv changes like here 00:27:711 (8)
Otherwise i really enjoyed it :3
Good Luck!

DahplA

1,099 posts

Joined March 2014

DahplA 2015-09-12T11:55:07+00:00

Done and fully hitsounded.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Artist:Evoke & Laura Brehm
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Yoges

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Yoges 2015-09-12T12:36:40+00:00

DahplA wrote:

Done and fully hitsounded.

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Thanks! ^^

Yoges

896 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Yoges 2015-09-12T12:37:40+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Hello there~ :3

Insane

I just took a quick look at this diff, and i really really really like it! :3
Only thing that bothers me is that you sometimes dont use NC's on strong sv changes like here 00:27:711 (8)
Otherwise i really enjoyed it :3

Good to hear OuO
Good Luck!

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2015-09-12T17:45:51+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Hello there~ :3

Normal

00:27:711 (1) Okay, dont do SV changes in Normal. There are no BNs out there who would rank this since its too risky. Pleas keep that in mind, no sv changes in Normal ever. (I wont point them out anymore)
00:39:711 (1,2) Improve the blank here, otherwise this pattern looks weird.
01:09:711 (3,1) Dont do this in Normals please. Normal Players will click (1) instant after (3) since they are focusing more on the distance and not on the approach circle
01:12:887 (3,1) They are nearly touching
01:19:240 (4) NC is missing
01:24:887 (4) ^
01:46:064 (3) This was bothering me quite some time. You shouldnt use sliders like this in Normals, sometimes there are unranks because of them (In Easys and Normals)
01:55:593 (1) Delelete NC and add NC 01:55:946
01:56:652 (3) This one really is unrankable if used in a Normal
I wont point out your wrong NC placements anymore. I would do a NC on every Second Downbeat so it will fit with the song, otherwise its just wrong
03:06:534 (1,3) They are nearly touching which looks weird
03:08:652 (4,2) ^
03:15:005 This beat should be clickable

Nice Normal, except those unrankable slidershapes, SV changes and wrong NC placements. Just fix that and it should be fine :3

I will continue with the SV Changes but modified some things

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Future Holds
Artist:Evoke & Laura Brehm
ArtistUnicode:Evoke & Laura Brehm
Creator:Yoges
Version:Hoen's Normal
Source:
Tags:electronic english female vocalist deep emotional hoen
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HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-09-13T16:43:48+00:00

Hi! \(ºuº I'm here for the m4m I requested on game to Yoges. The map I want you to mod is url'ed in the image above. <3

General

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General]

I don't know where you took the name of the song. Because according to this website, the original artist should be Laura Brehm & Evoke. Also, itunes supports that artist's order too. So in that order of ideas, the correct artist name is Laura Brehm & Evoke.
Add single into tags because it is the album's name.
Add Alden Evoke because this is the real name of the person which made the song wtih Laura.
I don't know why you put alpha into tags knowing his real username is DahplA. Besides, if you look for "alpha" you might find maps which he didn't map or even support. So please, consider putting his real username into tags.
As long as you don't have storyboard. consider removing Widescreen Support option of each diff.

Alpha's Easy

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Alpha's Easy]Hi! I'd like to know the purpose why you set the second kiai time ending here 03:19:240 knowing that the other diffs the kiai ends here 03:20:652. I think it would play better if you keep the kiai consistency as well as the other diffs do.
And I would like to know too why AR3.2 plays or fits better in this Easy diff. I think that setting AR3 with rounded numbers would make readable patterns. Because I don't see any difference between these two ARs

00:25:593 (1) The red point in this slider doesn't play good because it's not emphasizing the change of the vocals/drums of the song. I think it would flow better in you try something like this.
It applies on these ones too: 00:34:064 (1) - 00:55:240 (3) - 00:49:593 (3) - 01:00:887 (3) - 01:54:534 (3) - 02:32:652 (1) - 03:39:711 (3) -
00:35:122 (2) This part is missing a great beat here 00:35:475 just by putting a downbeat with that slider. It would make more sense if you add a circle here 00:35:122 (2) and add a slider here 00:35:475. Besides, the current flow is a bit forced, because you make beginner players to move the cursor into a non-intuitive flow which makes a untidy movement here.
00:42:534 (1) This short spinner's sound doesn't meet the song. Because when the spinner ends, players might be waiting for something because the sounds lead to that. I think it would be more catchy if you add an inherited timing point at this spinner's end with a 5% of vol to make more emphasis of the empty sound of this section.
00:53:828 (1,2) This is not a big issue, but you can make the slider more less curvy that orients to player that the next object will be next to it. For example, an intuitive flow like this.
01:06:534 (3) Just a nazi suggestion, but you could move the slider's end point a grid down to improve the blanket. :ñ
01:23:828 (3,4) The current flow is a bit stuck because the players have to move the cursor to down, even knowing that the slider (2) suggests is that the note will be next to it. To fix that, I suggest you to do Ctrl + G and re-setting the hitsounds as well as you did here 01:14:652 (2,3,4).
01:20:652 (3) The way you place this slider doesn't fit properly. Because what the slider suggest is that the note will be above to it, and you set it (4) at the left. I think it would flow better if you try out something more intuitive. What about this?
01:27:711 (1) what about a whistle here to making more emphasis to the spinner?
02:41:122 (1) Same.
01:45:358 (2) Personally, the way you seat a downbeat here by that slider doesn't play good. Because the big tick suggests there would be a clickeable note to emphasize the clap you set here 01:46:064. What do you think about this rthymn that does not miss the beat?
01:55:946 (1,2) Same applies here. Thus, the flow is a bit forced. I know you wanted to make a perfect blanket between them, but it doesn't play good for a beginner who needs to move the cursor to follow this stuck flow. Try something more smoother than orients players to a perceptive flow.
02:36:181 (2) In this part, it would play better if you make that slider less curvy to make a symmetric diagonal line with the next slider. Like this.
02:38:299 (1,2,3) This flow doesn't play bad. The triangle movement seems to be readable, but you should take into a count the way the cursor has to move implies that the player be aware of what he's clicking. I think it would play better if you make a relaxing flow here that meets with the song. For example.
02:40:769 I highly suggest to add a note here because it matches with the vocals and plays better. The current empty space seems to be a bit odd.
02:58:064 (1,2) This is just a personal comment. The current flow doesn't play bad imo. This is an interesting pattern of this diff because the of the well made blanket. Good job!
03:03:711 (1) The way you give the rhythm here doesn't play good. Because by placing a 2/1 slider here it is missing this beat 03:04:064 which is very audible and is made by the drums. It would make more sense if you set up a 1/1 slider with a reverse that makes a better emphasis in this section.
03:51:005 (3) Just a minor suggestion, but can reduce the off-screened of that slider.

Hoen's Normal

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Hoen's Normal] Hi Hoen! \(ºuº Well... this diff is pretty well made but I'd like you to explain two things before digging into the map. First, I'd like to know why you set up different SV changes despite knowing you were mapping a Normal diff which, according to Ranking Criteria, it doesn't allow to make these abrupt changes in the SV. The main reason is that if the song doesn't suggest to reduce the SV, the lower diffs shouldn't do it. So, please, it would make more sense if you keep the SV during the whole song to not mislead players into confusing flows.

Increase the OD diff by +1 to have consistency between the Easy and the Hard diffs.
The hitsounds of the beginning are a bit noisy. Mostly because of the claps and finish of the objects. So It would be better if you reduce a bit the general vol to 50%. You could keep the 60% of vol on the kiai time.
Remove these unnecessary green lines. (I'm not touching the ones you change the SV): 03:59:299 - 03:59:828 - 03:20:652 - 02:49:593
00:26:299 (2,3) Fix the DS between these objects, it should go on 1.68x as well as you did here 00:25:593 (1,2) to keep consistency.
00:26:828 (3) The way you give the rhythm in this section plays good. But you're missing some important beats that can't be avoided. For example, here 00:27:181 there's a very noticeable drum beat and it's avoided by the slider. It would flow better if you try out to don't skip that beat. What about this?
00:39:711 (1,2) The current flow plays good but you could fix that blanket to improve the visual pattern.
00:46:946 (3) the way you place the slider's end point is not the proper one. Because the cursor would have to into a non-intuitive flow to follow the rhythm. I think it would flow better if you place the slider followig the following points. For example.
00:49:593 (3) Place this slider here x=252|y=248 to improve the readability of the pattern. The current one is a bit odd.
00:59:475 (1) The red point of this slider doesn't make sense if it's placed at the slider's end. Visually this look ugly and this is not following the drums/vocals as it should. It would be more logic if it would've followed the vocals change, like this.
01:00:534 (3) The rhythm doesn't play good here because you're avoiding such as important drum/vocals beats as these ones 01:00:711 - 01:00:887 with that 1/1 slider . This would play better if you try out to don't miss those beats by placing a 1/2 slider here 01:00:534 and 1/1 slider 01:00:887. For example.
01:01:593 (5,1) Just a minor suggestion, but the blanket is off. You could make something cleaner like this to develop the flow.
01:05:828 (2,3) The way you give rhythm in this part doesn't flow good. As it seems you're following the vocals, the song has more emphasis in the drum beats which are really important to emphasize. Examples of them are these two 01:06:358 - 01:06:711 . It would sound better if you add a circle here 01:06:358 and a 1/2 slider here 01:06:711 as well as you did in this previous part 00:57:711 (2,3) . iIt would look like this
01:16:417 (1,2) Move the slider's end point 4 grids to the right to fix the flow. The current one is a bit compelled and it's not following the flow.
01:19:240 (1,1) The way you split the NC combing here doesn't make sense if song doesn't claim for it. I think it would look better if you remove the NC in this slider 01:20:299 (1) to not confuse players about random combings.
01:24:887 (1,1) Same occurs here. Please, remove the NC here 01:25:946 (1) to improve the pattern.
01:47:475 (1) This 2/1 slider doesn't assert the main rhythm here. I know you were following the vocals, but it would make more sense if you follow the drums as you did with the previous patterns. So that means it would play better if you convert that slider into a 1/1 and add a reverse to improve the rhytmn in this section. Like this
01:50:299 (1) This isn't not a big issue but It would flow better if try a circular flow with this slider to keep the flow with the previous slider. For example.
01:51:711 (1) The way you split the NC would make more sense if the next pattern wouldn't have had 6 objects. I think it would look better if you remove the NC here and add NC in the next circle 01:53:475 (2) .
02:01:593 (1) This slider would look better if you folow the following line of the default skin. In that order of ideas, it should look like this.
02:07:946 Just a minor suggestion, but the "break" should be snapped here 02:07:946 . As it is shown in this pic.
02:29:122 (1) Remove NC here to keep consistency with the NC combing. I see no sense by setting the NC here despite knowing the NC combing you manage during the whole song.
02:29:122 (1) The slider's flow of thispart doesn't fir properly. It would make more sense if you keep the rounded flow of the previous slider that it might end with an intuitive flow like this.
02:34:769 (1,2) The red point of this slider would look better if you have followed the flow here. A pattern like this would make stuffs smoother.
02:34:769 (1) Remove NC here to keep consistency.
02:35:475 (2) Add NC here.
02:39:887 (3) The flow doesn't circulate well here. It would make mroe sense if the slider's end leads to the players that the next note will be up to it. Try doing Ctrl + J in this slider to fix it.
03:04:240 I highly suggest to add a note to don't miss an important drum beat of this section.
03:32:299 (2) This could look better if you follow the vocals. Try to make this 1/1 slider and make the spinner starts on 03:32:828 and end on 03:34:769.

andrei7's Hard

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andrei7's Hard] Hi! I like this diff because I could pass it with DT <3. Very well done! I didn't fin any unnecessary green line! D: WOW! me gives you a medal*

As you work on 60% of the vol. during the whole song, what about increasing the vol on the kiai time about 10%?
I see no sense by setting the AR on 7.8. Despite this diff plays good, I think AR7.8 doesn't fit among the pattern. It would play better if you reduce it to 7 or 7.5.
This is just a personal suggestion but I'd say it would make more sense if the HP would have been 6 to keep consistency with the normal diff.
00:26:828 (5,6) You can improve this visual pattern by moving the third grey point two grids to the left. /u\
00:30:534 (6) This slider isn't perfectly "S" curved. You could improve it to develop the visual pattern.
00:42:534 This part is a bit empty. I know there's no notes to place but I'd say adding a break time here would make more sense in the rhythm.
00:49:240 (3,4) Thw way you give flow to this part would be better if you do Ctrl + G in this slider 00:49:240 (3). Because the current one force the players to move the cursor fastly to follow the next slider and it doesn't play good for a hard diff.
01:06:887 (6,7,8) This flow is very stuck and odd. Since players have to move the cursor weirdly here to follow these objects, the flow stays on puzzled. It would make more sense if you try out something more readable that do not force players into confusing flows. What about this?
02:03:005 (5,6,7) This pattern would sound better if it followed the vocals. I think this flow fits perfectly here.
02:36:181 (2,3) Just a minor suggestion but you could make this pattern more flowy and blnaket over the next slider. For example.
02:58:593 (2) The current flow seems to be a bit forced. it would look better if it followed the flow of this slider 02:58:064 (1). I think if you place it here x=228|y=60 to fix it.
03:15:005 (1,2) This is just a visual suggestion, but it would make more sense if it hadn't been overlapped over this slider 03:15:005 (1).
04:17:122 (4) You can set this object as NC to make an epic pattern here. :^)

Insane

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Insane] Hi! Yoges! Finally I finished in this insane. Holy crap! 4 minutes song to mod it's so tiring. /u\ As I said you on chat I didn't find such as bad issues in this insane. You really have done a great job in this diff. /me claps*

I'd like to know the reason why you set the HP drain on 9. You should know if the insane players, that most of them play insane diffs with HRHD, play with HR, they won't pass this diff never. o.o So, please, consider reducing it until HP 8 or HP7.
01:15:711 (1) Remove NC here to have consistency with the previous NC combing you manage.
01:16:417 (3) Add NC for the same reason.
01:26:652 (1) Remove NC.
01:54:181 (1) The way you split NC here doesn't make sense because this isn't following the drum changes. I think it would flow better if you remove NC 01:54:181 (1) here and add NC here 01:54:711 (3) .
02:33:358 (3) This overlap looks weird according to the pattern you manage. Try to don't overlap these objects.

Yoges

896 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Yoges 2015-09-13T17:06:00+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
General
[ General]
I don't know where you took the name of the song. Because according to this website, the original artist should be Laura Brehm & Evoke. Also, itunes supports that artist's order too. So in that order of ideas, the correct artist name is Laura Brehm & Evoke.
Add single into tags because it is the album's name.
Add Alden Evoke because this is the real name of the person which made the song wtih Laura.
I don't know why you put alpha into tags knowing his real username is DahplA. Besides, if you look for "alpha" you might find maps which he didn't map or even support. So please, consider putting his real username into tags.
As long as you don't have storyboard. consider removing Widescreen Support option of each diff.
Applied everything in here
Insane
[ Insane] Hi! Yoges! Finally I finished in this insane. Holy crap! 4 minutes song to mod it's so tiring. /u\ As I said you on chat I didn't find such as bad issues in this insane. You really have done a great job in this diff. /me claps*
I'd like to know the reason why you set the HP drain on 9. You should know if the insane players, that most of them play insane diffs with HRHD, play with HR, they won't pass this diff never. o.o So, please, consider reducing it until HP 8 or HP7.
01:15:711 (1) Remove NC here to have consistency with the previous NC combing you manage.
01:16:417 (3) Add NC for the same reason.
01:26:652 (1) Remove NC.
01:54:181 (1) The way you split NC here doesn't make sense because this isn't following the drum changes. I think it would flow better if you remove NC 01:54:181 (1) here and add NC here 01:54:711 (3) .
Applied a different NC pattern
02:33:358 (3) This overlap looks weird according to the pattern you manage. Try to don't overlap these objects. Didn't apply this

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2015-09-13T21:53:16+00:00

Remove "Evoke" and "English" from tags, please!

Yoges

896 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Yoges 2015-09-14T06:04:21+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
Remove "Evoke" and "English" from tags, please!

Not at my pc right now I'll do it later

DahplA

1,099 posts

Joined March 2014

DahplA 2015-09-14T09:00:25+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Hi! \(ºuº I'm here for the m4m I requested on game to Yoges. The map I want you to mod is url'ed in the image above. <3
Alpha's Easy
Hi! I'd like to know the purpose why you set the second kiai time ending here 03:19:240 knowing that the other diffs the kiai ends here 03:20:652. I think it would play better if you keep the kiai consistency as well as the other diffs do.
And I would like to know too why AR3.2 plays or fits better in this Easy diff. I think that setting AR3 with rounded numbers would make readable patterns. Because I don't see any difference between these two ARs Fix both
00:25:593 (1) The red point in this slider doesn't play good because it's not emphasizing the change of the vocals/drums of the song. I think it would flow better in you try something like this.
It applies on these ones too: 00:34:064 (1) - 00:55:240 (3) - 00:49:593 (3) - 01:00:887 (3) - 01:54:534 (3) - 02:32:652 (1) - 03:39:711 (3) - Only changed it to the suggested when there is a strong beat on the white. Only a few do (I think just the first two)
00:35:122 (2) This part is missing a great beat here 00:35:475 just by putting a downbeat with that slider. It would make more sense if you add a circle here 00:35:122 (2) and add a slider here 00:35:475. Besides, the current flow is a bit forced, because you make beginner players to move the cursor into a non-intuitive flow which makes a untidy movement here. Sure
00:42:534 (1) This short spinner's sound doesn't meet the song. Because when the spinner ends, players might be waiting for something because the sounds lead to that. I think it would be more catchy if you add an inherited timing point at this spinner's end with a 5% of vol to make more emphasis of the empty sound of this section. I added it in, but I used 10%
00:53:828 (1,2) This is not a big issue, but you can make the slider more less curvy that orients to player that the next object will be next to it. For example, an intuitive flow like this. I did something different, since the slider is a blanket
01:06:534 (3) Just a nazi suggestion, but you could move the slider's end point a grid down to improve the blanket. :ñ Lol
01:23:828 (3,4) The current flow is a bit stuck because the players have to move the cursor to down, even knowing that the slider (2) suggests is that the note will be next to it. To fix that, I suggest you to do Ctrl + G and re-setting the hitsounds as well as you did here 01:14:652 (2,3,4). Only changed the first one. The second one flows better onto the next combo
01:20:652 (3) The way you place this slider doesn't fit properly. Because what the slider suggest is that the note will be above to it, and you set it (4) at the left. I think it would flow better if you try out something more intuitive. What about this? Changed differently
01:27:711 (1) what about a whistle here to making more emphasis to the spinner? Nice
02:41:122 (1) Same. Yeah
01:45:358 (2) Personally, the way you seat a downbeat here by that slider doesn't play good. Because the big tick suggests there would be a clickeable note to emphasize the clap you set here 01:46:064. What do you think about this rthymn that does not miss the beat? Nah. I think it's fine now, and there's little room to work with to change the rhythm.
01:55:946 (1,2) Same applies here. Thus, the flow is a bit forced. I know you wanted to make a perfect blanket between them, but it doesn't play good for a beginner who needs to move the cursor to follow this stuck flow. Try something more smoother than orients players to a perceptive flow. Fix
02:36:181 (2) In this part, it would play better if you make that slider less curvy to make a symmetric diagonal line with the next slider. Like this. Damn
02:38:299 (1,2,3) This flow doesn't play bad. The triangle movement seems to be readable, but you should take into a count the way the cursor has to move implies that the player be aware of what he's clicking. I think it would play better if you make a relaxing flow here that meets with the song. For example. I'll keep this one. The notes are placed in a really good way, and I like the flow. Having to go sort of back and forth gives a nice feel to it
02:40:769 I highly suggest to add a note here because it matches with the vocals and plays better. The current empty space seems to be a bit odd. Ok
02:58:064 (1,2) This is just a personal comment. The current flow doesn't play bad imo. This is an interesting pattern of this diff because the of the well made blanket. Good job! Thank you
03:03:711 (1) The way you give the rhythm here doesn't play good. Because by placing a 2/1 slider here it is missing this beat 03:04:064 which is very audible and is made by the drums. It would make more sense if you set up a 1/1 slider with a reverse that makes a better emphasis in this section. I can't do the reverse, but I can make it 1/1
03:51:005 (3) Just a minor suggestion, but can reduce the off-screened of that slider. Yup

Thank you so much.

@Yoges. Can you fix the metadata for my difficulty? I figured you wanted to do it to keep it consistent. Just the Artist and Tags, and anything else.

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kirinokirino

354 posts

Joined June 2011

kirinokirino 2015-09-14T17:28:42+00:00

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andrei7's Hard] Hi! I like this diff because I could pass it with DT <3. Very well done! I didn't fin any unnecessary green line! D: WOW! me gives you a medal*

As you work on 60% of the vol. during the whole song, what about increasing the vol on the kiai time about 10%? Well, maybe I'll manage to do smth like that when I actually will make hs. Imo, hs is part of a song, so it should be consistent with other diffs. or I will pass hitsounding to someone else
I see no sense by setting the AR on 7.8. Despite this diff plays good, I think AR7.8 doesn't fit among the pattern. It would play better if you reduce it to 7 or 7.5. ok, 7.5
This is just a personal suggestion but I'd say it would make more sense if the HP would have been 6 to keep consistency with the normal diff. k
00:26:828 (5,6) You can improve this visual pattern by moving the third grey point two grids to the left. /u\ not exactly 2 grids
00:30:534 (6) This slider isn't perfectly "S" curved. You could improve it to develop the visual pattern. all of them, probably fixed
00:42:534 This part is a bit empty. I know there's no notes to place but I'd say adding a break time here would make more sense in the rhythm.ok
00:49:240 (3,4) Thw way you give flow to this part would be better if you do Ctrl + G in this slider 00:49:240 (3). Because the current one force the players to move the cursor fastly to follow the next slider and it doesn't play good for a hard diff. you dont need to follow the whole slider and do the 1.84x jump. you follow half of it and then ist normal spacing
01:06:887 (6,7,8) This flow is very stuck and odd. Since players have to move the cursor weirdly here to follow these objects, the flow stays on puzzled. It would make more sense if you try out something more readable that do not force players into confusing flows. What about this? these are drop-off sliders, flow is fine. its a bit hard to read in "Hard", but there are a lot hard-to-read stuff.
02:03:005 (5,6,7) This pattern would sound better if it followed the vocals. I think this flow fits perfectly here. its following the vocals >_<
02:36:181 (2,3) Just a minor suggestion but you could make this pattern more flowy and blnaket over the next slider. For example. ok
02:58:593 (2) The current flow seems to be a bit forced. it would look better if it followed the flow of this slider 02:58:064 (1). I think if you place it here x=228|y=60 to fix it. tastes differ. I broke the flow on purpose
03:15:005 (1,2) This is just a visual suggestion, but it would make more sense if it hadn't been overlapped over this slider 03:15:005 (1). I know, I tried. I cant keep both flow and nice look here.
04:17:122 (4) You can set this object as NC to make an epic pattern here. :^) ok

Thanks!

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Lumael

1,520 posts

Joined December 2014

Lumael 2015-09-17T03:15:31+00:00

Hello! As your request:

[General]

Yeah, for some seconds you don't need to cut your mp3 XD around 18% unmapped
Everything is fine, checked folder, AiMod, SongSetup and stuff like that

[Alpha's Easy]

In this diff you used the sampleset custom 2 but there isn't any file with that sampleset number, are you planning to add some or it was supposed to be custom 1 or even default?
Where are the finishes?! You could add every new combo on this diff and it would be fine. Finishes are essencial to mark song transitions!
00:26:652 (2,3) - This is a bit hard to play for low rank players as 00:27:005 (3) - this slider starts in a very soft beat, looks like a downbeat even being on the tall white tick, which makes it a little hard to get 300 points, I found it really weird to play. You could easily fix that by Control Ging 00:26:652 (2,3) - which will play much better which the current rhythm. This isse happens quite oftenly, and imo it would play much better if you control G all the simillar sections
01:47:475 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not yet concerned about the usage of the polarity here, it follows pretty well the vocals but tbh it's losing all the drums which makes it awful to play imo (This issue happens again on the next kiai)
01:59:652 (2,3) - This gap is really confusing for an Easy and I was recommended by a QAT to avoid the most them on Easy diff. People who play easy diffs usually don't have the ability to read the approach circle well, and this is the only way to make them realize that this gap isn't 1/1 as usual (This issue happens again on the next kiai)
02:00:887 (4) - I know that perfecting blankets is something foolish most of the times but it never costs too much to fix when it's easy right? By moving this slider to 388|56 you could easily fix this tiny issue. Don't forget to adjust the spacing for the next notes accordinly

[Hoen's Normal]

In my opinion, the SV changes are OK, they aren't a problem if you consider that this Normal is very hard. However, I'm almost sure that Yoges will need another diff between the Normal and the Easy as this one looks much more like an Advanced with so many 1/2 beats.
00:40:417 (2) - This slider is not following the rhythm very well, if you did it finishing at 00:41:475 with a 1/1 slider after it would follow the rhythm much better, like this: http://puu.sh/kdZRi/1c92acd280.jpg .
Well, to sum up, I LOVED your normal, but tbh I don't have an opinion formed about all these 1/2s and the SV changes on the beginning of the song, because the one at the end ins't a problem as it's a different section of the song and it doesn't mix slider speeds like you did on the beginning. At one hand it follows the rhythm very well, but at the other you shouldn't make speed reductions on the song in a Normal diff. After this all, I see that this Normal looks more like an Advanced diff, and these reductions would be fine for an Advanced?! The point is that this isn't that Hard to be considered an Advanced :/ At the same way I'd recommend you to remove the SV changes through the song...

[andrei7's Hard]

00:37:417 (2) - Well this slider is out of place, it isn't following anything on the song, it is just skipping a beat at 00:37:593 - which is very important. This is not following the singer as well because if you listen to 25%playback, her voice hits on the 1/4 snap 00:37:505 - making this slider start at
00:37:417 - very awkward and tricky to play. You could Control G these 00:37:417 (2,3) - to fix this issue
00:48:181 (1) - It'd be cool if you had the same distance to the prev. note as the one from 00:47:828 (6) - to make a triangle pattern as I don't see why 00:47:828 (6) - has been given more emphasis than 00:48:181 (1) -
00:53:122 (6,7,1) - Same issue here 00:53:475 (7) - this note is being emphasized more than 00:53:828 (1) - which is really weird, the (7) circle doesn't represent anything strong in the song, it's a very soft beat compared to the strong vocal/drums at 00:53:828 (1) -
01:15:887 (6,7) - Control G here would improve a lot the gameplay, the current upbeat slider is hard to get 300 points as I could notice while playing it, it starts in a downbeat which is very soft here making the strong beat unclickable which is a shame
01:28:064 (2) - Finishing this slider at 01:28:417 - sounds more logical for me because you will be able to cover a beat there
02:31:240 (6) - Same thing here, even if you're following the vocals, it's a bit unfair to leave 02:31:593 - unmapped
03:14:299 (6,7) - Well, this is not fitting correctly the song, actually 03:14:475 - the slider starting here sounds a bit overmapped because not even the vocals hit here. If you make a 1/1 slider starting at 03:14:299 - it would fit much better, just like you did before
03:15:534 (2) - Simillar with this one, try this rhythm instead, it works much better: http://puu.sh/ke27L/3d432e5943.jpg This one will follow the vocals and the drums properly and it won't skip any of them

Well, that's it for me, good set. Good Luck!

Yoges

896 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Yoges 2015-09-17T06:22:50+00:00

Hmm... I could make another Easy/normal myself. That way I could try rank hoens diff without having to remap all the sv changes.
no love for my diff? OnO

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