Oh my...I never thought this map would come up in my modding queue!
Actually one of my favorites for a map!
[Tempest]
00:16:620 (7,8) - Instead of a jump, it sounds like there should be a triple here before the stream
00:18:420 (2) - This should be a triple.
00:20:820 (2) - ^
00:35:520 (9,10,1) - The slider should start on the white tick (where the 9 is), its very hard to find how this slider emphasizes anything, generally (as far as I've been told) you wont see a slider start on a red tick, I've only had very few exceptions. So the pattern should be more like (Slider, Circle, Circle)
00:53:970 (1,2) - Pattern breaks the flow a bit. Try CTRL+G on the slider
01:01:920 (11,12) - The repeat slider could pose a problem to the flow, maybe try instead of the repeat slider, try two sliders.
01:20:220 (6,7) - Two things here, either the same problem as above, but if its decided to keep this pattern, add a new combo at the 7.
02:14:520 (1) - Even if it follows the vocals, this slider feels very unnecessary.
04:10:922 (1) - I find a consistence issue here, I can tell which guitar your following, but earlier when there was this pattern 04:04:064 (4,5,6) - you added the triple, but you didnt here 04:10:922 (1) -
04:47:993 (1,2,3,4) - From here the way its played it feels like you completely switched what you're following. It might just be me, but this is what it feels like.
06:02:007 (8) - I feel the slider speed makes the curves a bit too sudden from the kick sliders.
06:38:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try playing with this stream a bit, some of it seems a bit to jerky to play.
07:57:657 (3,4,5,6,7) - This isnt following anything.
08:03:207 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Have each new stream increase in spacing, give the ending a bit more of a kick to it.
Hope this helps!!! Good luck getting ranked! Its one hell of a fun map!