Yo! From my que. Gonna do my best at modding this but 6>stars might be too much for me.
Okay on to the mod
I don't really feel comfortable saying anything else since there is just no way I could even play this map now even though I probably could've point out/say more things. I just hope I was helpful at least in some way. I feel like this map needs some more polishing to do so I think you should ask mods from some mappers/modders who have been doing these kinds of maps like DoKito or Jenny (Jenny will probably just bury you with your map so be careful with that). Other than that good luck with this map!
Okay on to the mod
[Storm]
First check AiMod I think I saw one unsnapper sliderend.
And second these: 00:32:220 (5,6) - like why can't you just stack them like every other mapper in here lol. JK they just look weird to my eye
Also I don't really like that you use like super linear flow everywhere. When in editor (I follow every note with my cursor even in editor) I could just see my cursor doing circles over the screen. You could like come up with some cool jump patterns to bring out the song more and not just the same old linear stuff.
I also suggest you to add your own hitsounds. Makes this map more original.
Also disable widescreen support and letterbox during breaks since you don't have a storyboard
I feel like this should deserve atleast OD9
Your streams look great :3
00:09:120 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - This overlapping looks ugly to my eye. Even when it's just this little. You probably can give a bit more space for those sliders.
00:11:370 (6,7,8) - Here again. These little overlaps just trigger me lol
00:13:320 (1,2,1,2) - Not gonna point these out anymore
00:16:320 (6,7) - I feel like this would look better this way:
If you do that then don't forget to adjust the coming stream.
Also these kind of slider patterns could be implemented in some other places too
00:33:120 (2) - I would ctrl+g this. Flows better imo.
00:33:420 (3) - If you did that then I would ctrl+g this too
00:33:720 (4) - ^ If you did these you might need to rework the coming notes. Maybe. There are a lot of other places too where you could do stuff like this
00:39:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jump patterns just feel really weird to me
00:53:070 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You can definitely add some space with the kickstreams and sliders here. Adding more space should bring out the drums more imo and generally just looks better
02:07:320 (1) - Wtf is this? I'm sorry but this looks bad.
03:12:420 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - So linear that it's boring. Jump patterns plox.
05:46:857 (3) - ctrl+g this?
First check AiMod I think I saw one unsnapper sliderend.
And second these: 00:32:220 (5,6) - like why can't you just stack them like every other mapper in here lol. JK they just look weird to my eye
Also I don't really like that you use like super linear flow everywhere. When in editor (I follow every note with my cursor even in editor) I could just see my cursor doing circles over the screen. You could like come up with some cool jump patterns to bring out the song more and not just the same old linear stuff.
I also suggest you to add your own hitsounds. Makes this map more original.
Also disable widescreen support and letterbox during breaks since you don't have a storyboard
I feel like this should deserve atleast OD9
Your streams look great :3
00:09:120 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - This overlapping looks ugly to my eye. Even when it's just this little. You probably can give a bit more space for those sliders.
00:11:370 (6,7,8) - Here again. These little overlaps just trigger me lol
00:13:320 (1,2,1,2) - Not gonna point these out anymore
00:16:320 (6,7) - I feel like this would look better this way:
If you do that then don't forget to adjust the coming stream.
Also these kind of slider patterns could be implemented in some other places too
00:33:120 (2) - I would ctrl+g this. Flows better imo.
00:33:420 (3) - If you did that then I would ctrl+g this too
00:33:720 (4) - ^ If you did these you might need to rework the coming notes. Maybe. There are a lot of other places too where you could do stuff like this
00:39:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jump patterns just feel really weird to me
00:53:070 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You can definitely add some space with the kickstreams and sliders here. Adding more space should bring out the drums more imo and generally just looks better
02:07:320 (1) - Wtf is this? I'm sorry but this looks bad.
03:12:420 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - So linear that it's boring. Jump patterns plox.
05:46:857 (3) - ctrl+g this?
I don't really feel comfortable saying anything else since there is just no way I could even play this map now even though I probably could've point out/say more things. I just hope I was helpful at least in some way. I feel like this map needs some more polishing to do so I think you should ask mods from some mappers/modders who have been doing these kinds of maps like DoKito or Jenny (Jenny will probably just bury you with your map so be careful with that). Other than that good luck with this map!