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Ayane - never GIVE up [Taiko]

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Renka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年11月11日 at 1:35:50

Artist: Ayane
Title: never GIVE up
Source: 超次次元ゲイム ネプテューヌ Re;Birth2 SISTERS GENERATION
Tags: short ver ed ending hyperdimension neptunia 5pb playstation vita Headway! Buccaneers toiza71
BPM: 127.98
Filesize: 2835kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.76 stars, 220 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.13 stars, 117 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2.33 stars, 320 notes)
  4. Oni (3.11 stars, 468 notes)
Download: Ayane - never GIVE up
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kantan - 100%
Futsuu - 100%
Muzukashii - 100%
Oni - 100%

25/10/2015 change to mp3
06/03/2016 remap

Surono
Ruuku-san
The track is a little quiet. You should put a louder song track in if possible.
Nishizumi
Hi chaica o/ M4M from your queue
lol another ayane map

[General]

  1. add toiza71 into tags ? for composer name of the song
[Oni]

  1. 00:04:707 (7,8) - swap these ? i think (8) emphasize to low pitch like 00:06:583
  2. 00:08:458 (21,22) - same as above
  3. 00:09:396 (26,27) - swap these ? (27) sounds like from vocals and music side
  4. 00:11:623 - move to 00:11:154 ? to matching the music, also for a bit of variation
  5. 00:22:523 - maybe add k ?
  6. 00:51:824 - change to k ? the vocals sounds escalated
  7. 01:01:201 - maybe you forget to put finisher here ?
[Muzukashii]

why hp 5 ???? increase it to 6 ???????

  1. 01:01:201 - add finish ? like Oni
  2. 01:07:295 - add k ? to fitting with the vocals
[Futsuu]

  1. 00:31:899 - move this to 00:32:368 - ? consistency pattern with 00:23:695 - (o o ooo o)
  2. 01:01:201 - add finish ? like oni
  3. 01:06:358 - move to 01:07:295 - to match the vocals
  4. 01:44:332 - maybe you forget to add finish here too ?
[Kantan]

  1. 00:18:069 - add finisher here ? consistency with 00:25:570
  2. 01:01:201 - same as other diffs
  3. 01:31:205 - make slider longer to 01:32:612 - ?
sorry for bad mod, hopefully it would help you, good luck :)
Surono
Ooo Nishit wt ef 2kds, ples me :C uh late..

M4M *Open this, arigato~
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427504

>Oni
* 01:02:490 (65,67) - delete, 01:02:373 - change to kat and 01:02:607 - fill finisher? since 01:02:490 - here just fade pitch and 01:02:841 - this a vocal flow, I think if you applied that it more to work with emphasis and rest for entered kiai imo
ye.. well nice diff, sir

>Muzukashii
* 00:14:904 - add don for flow? 00:14:904 (2,3) - it sounds nice
* 00:15:959 - same above, for conect with this 00:16:194 - beat ( actually this and above suggestion it for avoid too close with spread Futsuu )
* 00:20:179 - wanna add note on here or next red tick?
* 00:27:914 - I think its not good emphasize empty.. it should filling with note
* 00:44:089 - fill this vocal with don? too akward ignore beat or vocal on here and this close with futsuu
* 00:49:011 - as 1/2 pattern, I think you should change this to don. kat to overemphasize with some flow, both of vocal and instrument
* 00:56:512 - its high pitch, so you can keep this lol
* 00:59:560 - move to 00:59:091 - here? I just feels weird if here empty and after finisher meet note 00:59:560 - on here
* 01:00:263 - not stronk to be finisher, remove? ( if you accept this, applied this on other diffs too )
Friendly muzu with basic pattern :3

>Futsuu
* 00:24:867 - remove this? also for balance with spread with betwen Kantan & Muzu
* and dont know more.. its also looks enough good :U

>Kantan
* 00:26:976 - add kat, for balance with pattern Futsuu?
* since rest on front is enough, maybe add 00:47:605 - here don? cuz its fit on 1/1 wwww
* really akward rest, sir XD 00:56:512 - 00:56:981 - add note please, kat?
* 01:26:517 - www same above, dont worry.. its BPM friendly, sir
* 01:27:924 - add note?
* 01:46:676 - add note for NEVER GIVE UP?!?!? Johnhnn cenaaa XD ( www cuz futsuu 1/2, about sprid )

GLUK!!!11!!! 8-)
Topic Starter
Renka

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi chaica o/ M4M from your queue
lol another ayane map

[General]

  1. add toiza71 into tags ? for composer name of the song - ok,
[Oni]

  1. 00:04:707 (7,8) - swap these ? i think (8) emphasize to low pitch like 00:06:583 - umm,no change,i like now pattern
  2. 00:08:458 (21,22) - same as above - ok
  3. 00:09:396 (26,27) - swap these ? (27) sounds like from vocals and music side - ok
  4. 00:11:623 - move to 00:11:154 ? to matching the music, also for a bit of variation - okay
  5. 00:22:523 - maybe add k ? - add k
  6. 00:51:824 - change to k ? the vocals sounds escalated - ok
  7. 01:01:201 - maybe you forget to put finisher here ? - no change,Because it is not a strong sound than 00:59:325
[Muzukashii]

why hp 5 ???? increase it to 6 ??????? - change HP6

  1. 01:01:201 - add finish ? like Oni
  2. 01:07:295 - add k ? to fitting with the vocals - ok
[Futsuu]

  1. 00:31:899 - move this to 00:32:368 - ? consistency pattern with 00:23:695 - (o o ooo o) - ok
  2. 01:01:201 - add finish ? like oni -
  3. 01:06:358 - move to 01:07:295 - to match the vocals - move to 01:07:530
  4. 01:44:332 - maybe you forget to add finish here too? - oh...add finisher
[Kantan]

  1. 00:18:069 - add finisher here ? consistency with 00:25:570 - ok
  2. 01:01:201 - same as other diffs - .
  3. 01:31:205 - make slider longer to 01:32:612 - ? - no change,Simplified for Kantan.
sorry for bad mod, hopefully it would help you, good luck :)
thank you for modding!
Topic Starter
Renka

Surono wrote:

Ooo Nishit wt ef 2kds, ples me :C uh late..

M4M *Open this, arigato~
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427504

>Oni
* 01:02:490 (65,67) - delete, 01:02:373 - change to kat and 01:02:607 - fill finisher? since 01:02:490 - here just fade pitch and 01:02:841 - this a vocal flow, I think if you applied that it more to work with emphasis and rest for entered kiai imo - no change,i like now pattern...
ye.. well nice diff, sir

>Muzukashii
* 00:14:904 - add don for flow? 00:14:904 (2,3) - it sounds nice - Think again a little..
* 00:15:959 - same above, for conect with this 00:16:194 - beat ( actually this and above suggestion it for avoid too close with spread Futsuu )
* 00:20:179 - wanna add note on here or next red tick? - add k.because same as Oni.
* 00:27:914 - I think its not good emphasize empty.. it should filling with note - add d
* 00:44:089 - fill this vocal with don? too akward ignore beat or vocal on here and this close with futsuu - ok
* 00:49:011 - as 1/2 pattern, I think you should change this to don. kat to overemphasize with some flow, both of vocal and instrument - unn,,no change
* 00:56:512 - its high pitch, so you can keep this lol - ^
* 00:59:560 - move to 00:59:091 - here? I just feels weird if here empty and after finisher meet note 00:59:560 - on here - ok
* 01:00:263 - not stronk to be finisher, remove? ( if you accept this, applied this on other diffs too ) -
Friendly muzu with basic pattern :3

>Futsuu
* 00:24:867 - remove this? also for balance with spread with betwen Kantan & Muzu
* and dont know more.. its also looks enough good :U - move to 00:23:929 - .

>Kantan
* 00:26:976 - add kat, for balance with pattern Futsuu? - ok
* since rest on front is enough, maybe add 00:47:605 - here don? cuz its fit on 1/1 wwww - ok
* really akward rest, sir XD 00:56:512 - 00:56:981 - add note please, kat? - umm,no change.
* 01:26:517 - www same above, dont worry.. its BPM friendly, sir - ^
* 01:27:924 - add note? - ^
* 01:46:676 - add note for NEVER GIVE UP?!?!? Johnhnn cenaaa XD ( www cuz futsuu 1/2, about sprid ) - add d.

GLUK!!!11!!! 8-)
thank you for modding! update
nyanmi-1828
こんにちは^^ Queueから~ :)

General
BPMは128でいいと思います。

Oni
00:32:827 - Delete ここは完全に音がないので

Muzukashii
00:54:403 - k ここからボーカル高くなってると思います。

Futsuu
00:46:198 - d 低い音なってるので

Good luck~ :)
HimemiyaChikane
Hi for M4M.

[Kantan]
Fine.

[Futsuu]
Fine.

[Muzukashii]
01:04:717 (42) - delete?
01:12:218 (67) - ^
01:27:220 (14) - ^

[Oni]
01:16:320 (133) - move to 01:16:437 - ?
01:23:470 (168,169) - Ctrl+G?
01:43:277 (14) - change to d?
01:47:262 - add kk here.

your map is so excellent,I feel sorry if I can't help you.Good luck for ranking! :)
Topic Starter
Renka

nyanmi-1828 wrote:

こんにちは^^ Queueから~ :)

General
BPMは128でいいと思います。 - あとで確かめてみます

Oni
00:32:827 - Delete ここは完全に音がないので - ok

Muzukashii
00:54:403 - k ここからボーカル高くなってると思います。 - ok

Futsuu
00:46:198 - d 低い音なってるので - no change.

Good luck~ :)
thank you for modding!!
Topic Starter
Renka

HimemiyaChikane wrote:

Hi for M4M.

[Kantan]
Fine.

[Futsuu]
Fine.

[Muzukashii]
01:04:717 (42) - delete? - umm..no change
01:12:218 (67) - ^
01:27:220 (14) - ^

[Oni]
01:16:320 (133) - move to 01:16:437 - ? - no change
01:23:470 (168,169) - Ctrl+G? - ok
01:43:277 (14) - change to d? - ^
01:47:262 - add kk here. - nope.Unification of the song end time

your map is so excellent,I feel sorry if I can't help you.Good luck for ranking! :)
thank you for modding! update.
JessiChan
Hello! M4M req~

d
k
D (big don)
K (big kat)

Kantan
00:55:575 (32) - Quit Finisher In this part I hear nothing strong 00:54:637 (31,32) - Buuut I like this finisher is here 00:54:637 (31) -
The rest of the diff is fine.

Futsuu
00:13:849 (3) - Maybe d
Only if you want, you can move this note 00:38:697 (19) - To here: 00:38:463 -
00:45:964 - Add note, if you want.
00:59:325 (59,60) - ctrl + g here. I think it sounds better.
01:00:732 (62) - K Finisher! :D Not think there is another problem in place finisher here, the song is slow and are loose notes so it's fine.

Muzukashii
00:04:473 (5,6) - ctrl + g 00:05:411 (7) - Change to k and 00:06:348 (10,11) - ctrl + g here.
00:10:568 (20,21) - ctrl + g here too.
00:35:884 (21) - Move to here: 00:35:650 - If you want.
00:54:637 (11) - Quit the finisher.
00:55:575 (13) - ^
01:00:263 (26) - Add finisher :D

Oni
00:04:708 (7,8) - ctrl + g Consistency with: 00:06:583 (14,15) - 00:08:458 (21,22) - 00:09:630 (27,28) - 00:11:505 (35,36) - All this part.
00:13:146 (42) - Change to d
00:25:101 (94) - k
Add notes here: 01:47:262 - and here: 01:47:380 - preferably it is: kk

Good Luck! :)
Jonarwhal
NM from taiko q
Only apply things that seem good to you~!!
[Kantan]
it's fine
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:15:256 (5) - Switch to k because it's different in pitch than the surrounding notes.
  2. 00:25:101 (13) - Switch to k because it's very similar in pitch to the kat before it.
  3. 00:42:448 (24,25,26) - Invert this to dkd. This will emphasize the vocal 00:42:916 - here with a strong k sound, and differentiate between 00:41:510 (23,24) - these different kats and 00:43:385 (26,27) - these different kats.
  4. 01:07:295 - I recommend you add a don here. It makes the pause between 01:06:826 (77,78) - these less strange, especially in the kiai, which imo, should be fluent and active. Also, it gives emphasis to the pitch drop there and the transition to the vocal noise 01:07:530 - here.
  5. 01:14:796 - ^
  6. 01:15:734 (98,99) - differentiate these, they are very different in pitch.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:538 (2,3) - differentiate, the pitch is too different
  2. 00:22:288 (13,14) - ^
  3. 00:49:246 (56,57) - make these the same, the lyrics, "all day," are spoken the same pitch (also fix it 00:52:996 (6,7) - here and 00:56:747 (17,18) - here)
  4. 00:50:652 (60) - switch to d, the pitch is more similar to the following don than the proceeding kat
  5. 01:07:295 (49,50) - differentiate these, the difference in pitch here is really clear
[Oni]
  1. 00:34:009 (130,131) - make them different
  2. 00:36:353 (137,138) - ^
  3. 00:49:246 (185,186) - make these the same
  4. 00:50:652 (190,191) - ^
  5. 00:52:996 (201,202) - ^
  6. 00:56:747 (218,219) - ^
I hope I helped.
Good Luck~!!
Topic Starter
Renka

JessiChan wrote:

Hello! M4M req~

d
k
D (big don)
K (big kat)

Kantan
00:55:575 (32) - Quit Finisher In this part I hear nothing strong 00:54:637 (31,32) - Buuut I like this finisher is here 00:54:637 (31) -
The rest of the diff is fine. - keep

Futsuu
00:13:849 (3) - Maybe d - nope,accordance with vocal.
Only if you want, you can move this note 00:38:697 (19) - To here: 00:38:463 - nope
00:45:964 - Add note, if you want - no
00:59:325 (59,60) - ctrl + g here. I think it sounds better. - ^
01:00:732 (62) - K Finisher! :D Not think there is another problem in place finisher here, the song is slow and are loose notes so it's fine. - ^

Muzukashii
00:04:473 (5,6) - ctrl + g 00:05:411 (7) - Change to k and 00:06:348 (10,11) - ctrl + g here.
00:10:568 (20,21) - ctrl + g here too.
00:35:884 (21) - Move to here: 00:35:650 - If you want.
00:54:637 (11) - Quit the finisher.
00:55:575 (13) - ^
01:00:263 (26) - Add finisher :D - yes.

Oni
00:04:708 (7,8) - ctrl + g Consistency with: 00:06:583 (14,15) - 00:08:458 (21,22) - 00:09:630 (27,28) - 00:11:505 (35,36) - All this part.
00:13:146 (42) - Change to d
00:25:101 (94) - k - ok
Add notes here: 01:47:262 - and here: 01:47:380 - preferably it is: kk

Good Luck! :)
thank you for modding!
Topic Starter
Renka

Jonawaga wrote:

NM from taiko q
Only apply things that seem good to you~!!
[Kantan]
it's fine
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:15:256 (5) - Switch to k because it's different in pitch than the surrounding notes. - ok.
  2. 00:25:101 (13) - Switch to k because it's very similar in pitch to the kat before it. - no change.
  3. 00:42:448 (24,25,26) - Invert this to dkd. This will emphasize the vocal 00:42:916 - here with a strong k sound, and differentiate between 00:41:510 (23,24) - these different kats and 00:43:385 (26,27) - these different kats. - change dkk.
  4. 01:07:295 - I recommend you add a don here. It makes the pause between 01:06:826 (77,78) - these less strange, especially in the kiai, which imo, should be fluent and active. Also, it gives emphasis to the pitch drop there and the transition to the vocal noise 01:07:530 - here.
  5. 01:14:796 - ^
  6. 01:15:734 (98,99) - differentiate these, they are very different in pitch. - 01:16:203 (150) - change k,and 01:15:969 - delete.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:538 (2,3) - differentiate, the pitch is too different
  2. 00:22:288 (13,14) - ^
  3. 00:49:246 (56,57) - make these the same, the lyrics, "all day," are spoken the same pitch (also fix it 00:52:996 (6,7) - here and 00:56:747 (17,18) - here)
  4. 00:50:652 (60) - switch to d, the pitch is more similar to the following don than the proceeding kat
  5. 01:07:295 (49,50) - differentiate these, the difference in pitch here is really clear
[Oni]
  1. 00:34:009 (130,131) - make them different
  2. 00:36:353 (137,138) - ^
  3. 00:49:246 (185,186) - make these the same
  4. 00:50:652 (190,191) - ^
  5. 00:52:996 (201,202) - ^
  6. 00:56:747 (218,219) - ^ - revised.
I hope I helped.
Good Luck~!!
thank you for modding!update.
ikin5050
From modding queue

Kantan is fine

Futsuu

00:32:134 - change to d in my opinion
00:48:308 - add d
01:02:373 - dont hear a loud enough sound, remove?
kiai time, you're changing from following vocals to following percussion, choose one of them? 01:03:076 - 01:05:889 you follow vocal but 01:06:826 - 01:10:108 you follow percussion

muzukashii

00:03:770 - move to 00:03:301
00:24:046 - dont feel this is nessecary
00:31:196 - k?
01:02:138 - d?
01:47:380 - add k
01:47:614 - add d

Oni
00:38:463 - delete
00:51:238 - why is this here?...
01:08:702 - could just as well be a 5 note pattern instead of 2 doubles


hope i was helpful, map is pretty good already
Kazaze
Hey there! Here for my M4M request on your modding queue :

Kantan
• 00:10:568 (6) - This one really should be a D in my opinion, it creates some diversity in this part
• 00:30:258 (2) - Change this one to a k to correspond with 00:22:757 (5)
• 00:34:009 - Here you could add a k just like you did with 00:41:510 (14)
• 01:04:014 - These gaps in the Kiai time really sound off to me, I think you should add notes in there :
○ 01:04:014 - Add a d
○ 01:11:515 - ^
○ 01:19:016 - Add a k
○ 01:26:517 - Add a d
• 01:36:832 (5,6,7) - I think these 3 would sound better as dkd because 01:36:832 (5) is mapped on the same sound as 01:33:081 (1) so I think they should sound similar
Futsuu
• 00:10:568 (13) - Same suggestion as in Kantan, change to a D
• 00:41:041 (70,71) - Hit "Ctrl + g" to correspond with 00:33:540 (56,57)
• 01:05:186 (123) - I don't think that this note is necessary here, you should remove it
○ 01:12:687 (141) - Same thing here, remove this note
○ 01:27:689 (178) - ^
Muzukashii
• 00:06:348 (10) - This one could be removed, there's no distinct sound to map on here
• 00:10:568 (19) - Here again, change to D
• Move 00:29:086 (71) to 00:28:617 and change it to a d to follow the vocals like you did with 00:26:508 (64,65,66) for exemple
• 00:36:353 - Here there is a loud drum sound, it's good to add some breaks but I think this sound should be mapped since there already is a break after on 00:43:854 I suggest adding a d on 00:36:353
• 00:51:238 - Add a d & 00:51:355 - Add a k
• 01:08:116 - Add a d and change 01:08:233 (185) to a k
• 01:15:617 - You could add a d here as well
• Move 01:45:036 (313) to 01:44:567
• 01:45:504 - Add a d here to follow the vocals
Oni
• 00:10:568 (30) - If you decide to change this one to a D, then change 00:10:802 (31) to a k to highlight the finisher
• 00:26:039 (98) - Change to a d to correspond with 00:18:538 (65)
• 00:44:089 - Add a d here and change 00:44:323 (164) to a k
• 00:51:355 (195) - Change this to a k if you followed my suggestion in the Muzukashii / correspond with 00:55:106 (212)
• 01:24:993 (358) - Change to a k, I don't think there is need for a different pattern than 01:17:375 (321,322,323)
• 01:32:495 (399) - Change to a k to follow the clapping sounds
• 01:45:504 - You could add a d here
Great map! I hope my mod helped!
Best of luck for the future!
frukoyurdakul
Hello, from my modding queue.

No kudos for this post, please. Because i found nothing to mod about, the hit sounds and the song is pretty good. I listened all the diffs but find nothing to mod about :) If i had one, i'll shoot you a star but i didn't. Sorry ^^ And, good luck as well.
Gemu-
Hi!

Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry for late mod ;w; really sorry :cc


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

  • [ Kantan]

    OD: 2
  1. 00:30:258 (2,4) - Change to k to keep consistency with 00:21:819 (4,5,6) - Also to not repetitive the same pattern here 00:34:946 (7,8,9,10,11,12) -
  2. 00:31:196 (3,4) - If you want can you change those to k and this to d 00:32:134 (5) - for the sound similar to "Clap" ( 00:31:665 (4) - ) and to emphasize the finish D ( 00:32:134 (5,6) - )
  3. 00:50:886 (26) - Here not have sound, only can hear the voice so is better remove to put a break or change to k and move the note to 00:51:355 - I understand if you not want remove or move the note for the voice, is just a suggestion.
  4. If you apply the previous suggestion, remove this 00:51:824 (27) -
  5. 01:40:113 (10) - Change to d to emphasize the finish D 01:40:582 (11) -
  • [ Futsuu]

    OD: 3
  1. 00:25:101 (40) - If you want can you remove it to emphasize de finish D 00:25:570 (41) - and to reduce the pattern a bit 00:21:819 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) -
  2. 00:33:540 (56,57) - Ctrl G and then remove the note 56 to reduce the pattern a bit. Also to flow this finish 00:33:071 (55) -
  3. 01:20:188 (160) - Change to k, sounds very good with the voice.
  4. 01:37:769 (9,10,11,,14,15,16) - You need variation in those parts, suggest you change to d 01:39:644 (14) -
  5. 01:41:519 (18,19,20,23,24,25) - The same previous case, Change to d 01:41:519 (18) - , Ctrl G 01:42:926 (22,23) - and change to k 01:43:629 (24) -

  • [ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:288 (52,53) - Ctrl G, sounds much better.
  2. 00:55:106 (142) - Remove to emphasize these finish 00:54:637 (141,143) -
  3. 01:19:719 (223,226) - Change to k those notes, sounds very nice with the voice.
  4. 01:31:205 (265,266,267) - This sound a bit weird, it would be better if you remove 01:31:322 (266) -

  • [ Oni]

    HP: 5
  1. 00:09:161 (24,25,26) - It would be better if you chnage to kkd .
  2. 00:35:181 (138) - To follow the tone of voice change to k the note 138 or the note 136. For example 00:41:979 (157,158,159,160,161) - (If you apply the note 138 can you keep consistency with 00:41:979 (157,158,159,160,161) - )
  3. 00:56:747 (220,221) - Ctrl G to keep a similar consistency with 00:48:074 (180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190) - , 00:51:824 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207) -
  4. 01:15:500 (311,312,313) - Sounds much better kkd.
  5. 01:21:360 (340) - Change to k to keep consistency and balance with 01:19:367 (330,331) - , 01:24:056 (353,354) - , 01:28:744 (377,378) -
  6. 01:30:502 (386,387,388) - It would be better if you change to dkd
  7. 01:42:691 (444,445,446,447,448,449,450) - I can give you a idea for the stream -->

I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!
BanchoBot
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