hello, from chat in game. here's the mod as requested~
[Metadata]
add these to tag:
- Jun Sasaki (Composer)
- Kimiko (Lyrics and Composer)
- Masayuki Fukutomi (Arranger)
source[Timing]
delete green line at 01:28:118 - 01:28:618 - and 01:28:868 - well, what's the purpose in changing volume when the song already finished? (because of last mod from xtrem3x i think)
[Kantan]
00:02:618 (2) - change this to k because different chord than 00:00:618 (1) - and for reverse consistency with 00:08:618 (6,7) -
00:04:618 (3) - may as well change this to d
00:17:618 (12) - change to k. sounds similar with 00:19:618 (15) -
00:21:618 (17) - ^
00:25:618 (22) - but in this note keep it d because different drumming play
00:24:618 (21) - and do you think put finisher in this note is loud? because i think it need to emphasize the change in drum play
00:39:618 (37) - change to d for lower pitch?
00:47:618 (46) - delete for break and let the drum be a shadow notes
01:01:618 - in contrast, add something here because feel really weird if empty
01:10:618 (72,73,74) - ddk would be better variation because at 01:11:618 (74) - is higher pitch than 01:07:618 (69) -
01:20:618 (84) - remove the finisher. because the loud part is at 01:21:118 - and it is a shadow note there
01:21:618 - and add something here. k would be better
01:19:618 (83) - change to k considering higher pitch than 01:20:618 (84) - (if you apply the mod before (i suggest to apply tho because the finisher is annoying))
[Futsuu]
01:20:618 (164) - remove finisher,
01:25:118 (171) - remove finisher, the loudness is annoying ><
01:22:118 - can add K
01:26:368 () - move to 01:26:118 -
00:12:368 (25) - delete this so it consistent with 00:04:368 - i know there's a little different in vocal lyric but, for futsuu, 4 notes at 1/2 rhytm here doesn't sounds nice to me. especially because it's still the beginning, the music still calm, and to give difference with muzu.
00:24:618 (49) - add finisher, same reason as kantan
00:27:868 (58,59) - kk instead of dd?
00:43:868 (88) - change to k considering the pitch is still relatively high
00:51:118 (102,103) - can be swapped to follow drum after 00:50:118 (99,100,101) - and i think it's better rather than following background ukulele sound
00:55:118 (109,110) - can be swapped
00:53:868 (106) - delete so consistent with 00:49:868 -
00:54:118 () - change to k
00:59:118 (115,116) - dd instead of kk since the pitch is dropping
[Muzukashii]
01:20:618 (247) - should i say it again? oh okay. remove finisher.
01:21:993 (250) - move to 01:22:118 - and change to K
01:25:118 (258) - remove finisher :3
01:26:618 - starting muzu, this can be a finisher note and the spinner start at 01:26:868 -
00:24:618 (70) - finisher same reason as kantan
00:51:868 (153) - change to d. 4 kat in a row is many..
the rest seems fine to me. what's bugging me is only the ending.
[Oni]
00:24:618 (94) - finish
00:24:368 - i think it's fine to add note here. who needs long break in oni yeah
00:27:618 (110) - k fits better with the vocal which is going up
00:41:368 (169) - change this to k considering the pitch is still as high as 00:41:118 (168) -
00:43:368 (180) - ^
do something at the ending again. consider again where you should put emphasis with big notes and where is not
that's all from me. Good luck!