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-[ AmiShici ]-
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-BANGKE-

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Topic Starter
201mLover
please sthap
-BANGKE-
insert song: "we cant stop~"
Rido
anjir 3 halaman isinya junk post semua >_>
Topic Starter
201mLover

Rido wrote:

anjir 3 halaman isinya junk post semua >_>
>_>
Topic Starter
201mLover
okay college time is over and lets work on this shit
-BANGKE-
make this shit rank
-[ AmiShici ]-
Go rank pls!

Onegai >w<
Topic Starter
201mLover
just wait for evening check ;w;
-BANGKE-
evening, we need you...
Gravey-
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa when will this map gonna rank!? ;w; I really like the song and the mapping style aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa TwT

*Bump!*


Rivals_7
Y u no try find another BN instead waiting 4ever lmao
sherrysina
go look for BN to qualify. just one more steeep >.>
-BANGKE-
evening, i know you checked this map, but.. the creator is missing ;w;
Evening

-BANGKE- wrote:

evening, i know you checked this map, but.. the creator is missing ;w;
oh ok that's a bit too late

uhhhh snaps

Snap prev. point

BANGKE's EXHAUST

00:21:809 - this is a 1/3 swing section
00:22:046 (22046|0) - should be 1/3, 00:22:677 (22677|2,22677|0,22993|3,22993|1,23309|2) - similarly
00:23:625 (23625|3,23941|2) - these too
00:25:783 (25783|2) - 1/3
00:26:151 (26151|2) - 1/3
00:28:046 (28046|0,28362|3,28677|2) - 1/3
00:30:256 (30256|1) - 1/3
00:30:888 (30888|2) - 1/3
00:34:125 (34125|3,34204|2,34283|1,34362|0) - this stream doesn't snap well, the last too notes are kinda early, consider:


00:37:283 (37283|0,37362|1,37441|2,37520|3) - not sure if you can layer 1/4 over a 1/6, might have to check with a qat
00:40:914 (40914|2,40993|3,41072|2,41151|3,41230|2,41309|3) - similarly, idk if you can layer a 1/4 over a 1/3

why was this note omitted 00:26:598 -

00:28:835 (28835|0,28914|1,28993|2) - what is this mapped to
01:31:835 (91835|1,91875|0,91914|1) - suggesting to not roll into a hand, it's rather uncomfortable at high speeds and im not sure if players at this level can handle this pattern well
01:47:072 (107072|1) - is this LN 1/2 early

ADVANCED

00:21:493 - this is a 1/3 section
00:22:046 (22046|1,22677|0,22993|1,22993|3,23309|2,23625|1) - 1/3s
00:24:809 (24809|3,25204|1,25520|2) - 1/3
00:25:835 (25835|1) - 1/3
00:27:098 (27098|3,27730|1,28046|2,28046|0,28362|3) - 1/3
00:28:677 (28677|0,28914|3,28993|2) - 1/3
00:29:941 (29941|0,30256|2,30572|1,30888|2) - 1/3

NOVICE

00:21:493 - same thing

hmm should be all
Gravey-
Ughhhh snaps lol. . Go go go! >w<)b
-BANGKE-
uhh, the creator tell me about a techincal problem, he can't login in forum or in game, and for my diff, will apply asap
-[ AmiShici ]-
R.I.P
bilqiscutee
-_-
Feerum
Hello 201mLover

I gonna Pop this bubble because there some things that needs to get fixed.

[General]

The mp3 Audio Quality is really poor. I noticed that it sounds in some parts, especially in the Kiai really bad.
I tried to get a better with FX what was not easy because i tried to avoid to get it from YT like you did. And i think i found something.
Please try this out: Click
The Offset for the new mp3 is: 2507
Please apply 1st the Mod because i checked it with the old one!

Also i noticed one of your Hitsounds had some delay, also some had really a lot of silence at the end, i fixed it for you.
Get them here

Your Kiai in the Novice is 1:1 Same like the Kiai in the Advanced?? I mean what? Did you just copy it and added some tripples?
See here:
Left we see Advanded and right we see Novice. I mean?? Thats the same Pattern?
How about change the pattern in the Novice? Don't use only Chords.

A good solution would be to let some downbeats with only one Note. Like this:
It's not the sense of lower charts just to copy the Pattern. It shows that you are just lazy.
Also please arrange them a bit in the Novice. It really should not look like it's just copy&paste q_q

Also for ALL Difficultys!!!!
The part from 00:21:493 - to 00:31:598 - use completely 1/3 Rhythm! All Pattern should be here 1/3!!



[NOVICE]

01:18:335 (78335|1,78335|2) - i recommend to move these to [34], 01:18:020 (78020|3) - you move to 2 and make a LN of this note to 01:18:335 -
I think this flows way better to the Music, also you have a much smoother transition to the next Part.

Please consider to do the same here. 01:37:914 (97914|3,98230|1,98546|2,98546|1) - The Singlenote feels so wrong placed here while playing.

01:51:967 (111967|0,112125|1) - Swap the Columns here and move then 01:53:388 (113388|2) - to 2. It just feels way better to hit


[ADVANCED]


00:28:914 (28914|3,28993|2) - If you tried to follow the Background Drum, which is not even really audible, these notes are Wrong Snapped. The Drum is 1/3 and starts here. 00:28:862 - .
It should look like this:

00:37:283 - Why you keep this empty in a Part where you used few LN's? That makes no sense, breaks the consistency and the flow. I highly recommend to add here another LN from 00:37:283 - to 00:37:598 -

That's all for the Advanced. Overall the Diff is not bad but it's pretty boring that you used almost the same pattern like in the Novice. Like i already mention your Kiai is 1:1 same with 1-2 Changes. Please try to avoid this. Try to get more Rhythm into it. Don't use just 1/1 Chords. That's boring. Also your Kiai is the easiest part to play in the whole map? I don't think that's the sense of the Kiai.

[BANGKE's EXHAUST]

I already noticed by a Quick look into this Difficult that a lot of notes and LN's are wrong snapped here. I try to list them all.


00:14:862 (14862|0) - This LN begins wrong. There where it begins there is absolut no sound for a LN. If you try to catch the wobble sound you need to move the LN to 00:15:020 - . The LN end should be still 00:15:651 - .

The whole part from 00:21:493 - to 00:31:598 - is Wrong Snapped. Like i already mention in "General" It should be completely 1/3 Mapped. Please change your Pattern.

00:26:598 - Why you let this 1/6 empty? Whats the sense of this? D:

00:30:335 (30335|3,30651|0) - Are these Hitsounds wrong?

00:34:756 (34756|0,34796|1,34835|2,34875|3,34914|0,34954|1,34993|2,35033|3) - -> 00:37:283 (37283|0,37362|1,37441|2,37520|3) - you know.. its absolute the same sound just in different pitch. Why do you map the 1st one in 1/8 and the 2nd one in 1/4? That's nonsense.

00:40:914 (40914|2,40993|3,41072|2,41151|3,41230|2,41309|3) - this wobble should be 1/3.

01:15:059 (75059|2,75138|2) - No. Please remove this minijack here.

01:31:835 (91835|1,91914|1) - Please Consider to fix this one too.

Ok thats all.


To the end i would like to say. This map was long time not touched and you doesn't fix what evening did said here. Thats why i gonna pop this bubble until everything is fixed.

I'm also aware of the fact that the creator is not longer active. When he comes back and fix everything we can consider to rebubble this.
-BANGKE-

Feerum wrote:

Hello 201mLover

I gonna Pop this bubble because there some things that needs to get fixed.

[General]

The mp3 Audio Quality is really poor. I noticed that it sounds in some parts, especially in the Kiai really bad.
I tried to get a better with FX what was not easy because i tried to avoid to get it from YT like you did. And i think i found something.
Please try this out: Click
The Offset for the new mp3 is: 2507
Please apply 1st the Mod because i checked it with the old one!

Also i noticed one of your Hitsounds had some delay, also some had really a lot of silence at the end, i fixed it for you.
Get them here

Your Kiai in the Novice is 1:1 Same like the Kiai in the Advanced?? I mean what? Did you just copy it and added some tripples?
See here:
Left we see Advanded and right we see Novice. I mean?? Thats the same Pattern?
How about change the pattern in the Novice? Don't use only Chords.

A good solution would be to let some downbeats with only one Note. Like this:
It's not the sense of lower charts just to copy the Pattern. It shows that you are just lazy.
Also please arrange them a bit in the Novice. It really should not look like it's just copy&paste q_q

Also for ALL Difficultys!!!!
The part from 00:21:493 - to 00:31:598 - use completely 1/3 Rhythm! All Pattern should be here 1/3!!



[NOVICE]

01:18:335 (78335|1,78335|2) - i recommend to move these to [34], 01:18:020 (78020|3) - you move to 2 and make a LN of this note to 01:18:335 -
I think this flows way better to the Music, also you have a much smoother transition to the next Part.

Please consider to do the same here. 01:37:914 (97914|3,98230|1,98546|2,98546|1) - The Singlenote feels so wrong placed here while playing.

01:51:967 (111967|0,112125|1) - Swap the Columns here and move then 01:53:388 (113388|2) - to 2. It just feels way better to hit


[ADVANCED]


00:28:914 (28914|3,28993|2) - If you tried to follow the Background Drum, which is not even really audible, these notes are Wrong Snapped. The Drum is 1/3 and starts here. 00:28:862 - .
It should look like this:

00:37:283 - Why you keep this empty in a Part where you used few LN's? That makes no sense, breaks the consistency and the flow. I highly recommend to add here another LN from 00:37:283 - to 00:37:598 -

That's all for the Advanced. Overall the Diff is not bad but it's pretty boring that you used almost the same pattern like in the Novice. Like i already mention your Kiai is 1:1 same with 1-2 Changes. Please try to avoid this. Try to get more Rhythm into it. Don't use just 1/1 Chords. That's boring. Also your Kiai is the easiest part to play in the whole map? I don't think that's the sense of the Kiai.

[BANGKE's EXHAUST]

I already noticed by a Quick look into this Difficult that a lot of notes and LN's are wrong snapped here. I try to list them all.


00:14:862 (14862|0) - This LN begins wrong. There where it begins there is absolut no sound for a LN. If you try to catch the wobble sound you need to move the LN to 00:15:020 - . The LN end should be still 00:15:651 - .

The whole part from 00:21:493 - to 00:31:598 - is Wrong Snapped. Like i already mention in "General" It should be completely 1/3 Mapped. Please change your Pattern.

00:26:598 - Why you let this 1/6 empty? Whats the sense of this? D:

00:30:335 (30335|3,30651|0) - Are these Hitsounds wrong?

00:34:756 (34756|0,34796|1,34835|2,34875|3,34914|0,34954|1,34993|2,35033|3) - -> 00:37:283 (37283|0,37362|1,37441|2,37520|3) - you know.. its absolute the same sound just in different pitch. Why do you map the 1st one in 1/8 and the 2nd one in 1/4? That's nonsense.

00:40:914 (40914|2,40993|3,41072|2,41151|3,41230|2,41309|3) - this wobble should be 1/3.

01:15:059 (75059|2,75138|2) - No. Please remove this minijack here.

01:31:835 (91835|1,91914|1) - Please Consider to fix this one too.

Ok thats all.


To the end i would like to say. This map was long time not touched and you doesn't fix what evening did said here. Thats why i gonna pop this bubble until everything is fixed.

I'm also aware of the fact that the creator is not longer active. When he comes back and fix everything we can consider to rebubble this.
eee i didnt know if you noticed this map, yap 201mlover is quit now
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