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hi Pux 8-)
Sorry, too lazy to mod :P
So, here you go! Some star 8-)
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lol makasi nan
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Yo puxtu, pretty good map you have (as usual tbh :P). Anyways, here's my oven-sized mod (will only mod 4k, as I can't even pass the start of the 7K diff, and I don't like to mod maps I can't pass):

[4K Maniac]
01:39:360 (99360|2,99360|1,99360|3,99360|0) - Remove one note, sound is the same as 01:50:394 (110394|3,110394|2,110394|0) - and many others you map as hand chords (I know they are not quad chords because it would be more uncomfortable, but it would be better to keep consistency, as this quad felt weird while playing it, because I didn't saw the motive of it being a quad in the first place)
02:53:843 (173843|3,173843|0,173843|2,173843|1) - ^^^
04:57:981 (297981|0,297981|2,297981|1,297981|3) - ^^^
01:33:153 (93153|2) - Add LN here (until 01:33:756 -)
Idk why tbh, but this 02:27:291 (147291|0,147377|3,147463|0,147550|3,147636|2) - and this 02:32:808 (152808|3,152894|0,152981|3,153067|0,153153|2) - makes me slightly uncomfortable

One more things: The stream part that starts at 04:52:463 - +HP8.5=RIP, rest of the map is literally easy to pass except for this (Even the Handstream parts, and I suck as fuck when it comes to Handstreams/Jumpstreams lmao).

That's all, map is just 2 gud, hope this at least helped you in something. Btw, here is my star :3

PS: I tried 7K diff, and I honestly found the initial SVs uncomfortable as fuck, so maybe check that out (?)
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Kaito-kun wrote:

Yo puxtu, pretty good map you have (as usual tbh :P). Anyways, here's my oven-sized mod (will only mod 4k, as I can't even pass the start of the 7K diff, and I don't like to mod maps I can't pass):

[4K Maniac]
01:39:360 (99360|2,99360|1,99360|3,99360|0) - Remove one note, sound is the same as 01:50:394 (110394|3,110394|2,110394|0) - and many others you map as hand chords (I know they are not quad chords because it would be more uncomfortable, but it would be better to keep consistency, as this quad felt weird while playing it, because I didn't saw the motive of it being a quad in the first place)
02:53:843 (173843|3,173843|0,173843|2,173843|1) - ^^^
04:57:981 (297981|0,297981|2,297981|1,297981|3) - ^^^
Sorry cant remove the quad. yoshiap suggested me to add quads there and I think it's a good idea because these quads are represent for "boom" sounds effect on every the beginning of kiai and it's really different from regular cymbals sounds (triplets if there's a 1/4 before or after the "boom" and double for 1/8 like in this part 03:49:015 - )

01:33:153 (93153|2) - Add LN here (until 01:33:756 -) 1 ln for 1 flat vocal sound, double lns will looks awkward imo

Idk why tbh, but this 02:27:291 (147291|0,147377|3,147463|0,147550|3,147636|2) - and this 02:32:808 (152808|3,152894|0,152981|3,153067|0,153153|2) - makes me slightly uncomfortable re-arranged

One more things: The stream part that starts at 04:52:463 - +HP8.5=RIP, rest of the map is literally easy to pass except for this (Even the Handstream parts, and I suck as fuck when it comes to Handstreams/Jumpstreams lmao). lol sorry, fixed to 8

That's all, map is just 2 gud, hope this at least helped you in something. Btw, here is my star :3

PS: I tried 7K diff, and I honestly found the initial SVs uncomfortable as fuck, so maybe check that out (?)
thanks for mods and stars!
get in the van, ill give you some candies :3
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puxtu wrote:

get in the van, ill give you some candies :3
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ok ummmmmm round two o/ no kudosu please

I'll just try to nitpick more I guess

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[7K Evening Pandemic]
00:57:118 - pretty uncomfortable for left thumb (or left pinkie (does anyone use left pinkie))
01:37:808 - I think it's weird this is the same lane as 01:37:981 -
01:58:670 - this SV effect is hard to see on high scroll speeds... maybe use lower speeds than .5 and 2.3?
02:50:481 - delete note? not much of a sound
03:15:222 - maybe delete. you were just charting voice, so it seems weird to include this guitar thing
03:15:912 - *LN intensifies*
03:27:636 - this feels oddly squished to the left because of how empty lane 7 is
03:37:981 - *zenx suddenly forgets whether he's mapping 7k or 6k*
03:49:015 - this asymmetry feels yucky but you'd have to redo the burst if you want to fix it
04:49:705 - *star rating suddenly shoots up to the moon*
05:41:343 - not a big fan of this weird asymmetry, especially at this density. I don't suppose you'd consider adding a note on lane 1 here?

okay that's everything lol
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[4k]
pretty solid, but it lacks variety. make it move, groove.
01:07:636 (67636|0,67636|2,67808|1,67808|2,67981|0,67981|1,67981|3,68153|2,68153|0,68239|1,68325|3,68325|2,68498|0,68498|1) -
proposition http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3624218
01:39:015 - deaccel. SV proposal.
99015,-50,4,1,0,15,0,0
99101.25,-57.142857142857146,4,1,0,15,0,0
99187.5,-66.66666666666667,4,1,0,15,0,0
99273.75,-80,4,1,0,15,0,0
99360,-100,4,1,0,15,0,0
(paste into timing section)
02:12:377 (132377|1) - remove for inconsistency with near section
03:13:153 - please map the guitars, you never gave much importance to vocals to do it now, and it keeps the pace better.
03:53:221 - give pitch relevancy a shot.

[7k]
overall: you did a poor job of giving the guitar the emphasis puxtu gave it on the 4k. i am disappoint. the overall thing is pretty okay, but i'm here to make it insane good. brace yourself.
00:45:567 - come on baby make me dance not mash (proposal: alternating 2 note pattern)
00:46:601 (46601|3) - elongate for tension of course
00:48:843 (48843|5,48843|3,48929|4,48929|2,49015|1,49015|3) - two layers is too much for percussion so subtle. i'm not pointing these out again.
00:54:360 (54360|5,54446|4,54532|5) - hey you were all flowy before now you alterny, give me a break zenx
01:30:222 (90222|1,90222|4,90308|5,90308|2,90394|4,90394|1) - yo man ya alternate between alternating and linear patterns at random
01:48:472 - dude yo you were lning voices now ya lning background synths (if not the synths are too background. poorer headphones won't listen man and they'll bitch like hell
01:49:101 - proposal http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3624252
01:57:722 - eyo i'd forgiven that you ln'd those bg synths if you'd done it here too but hey
02:21:105 - you can make this harder by adding the percussion layer. that'd be cool, those ln patterns are too easy 8)
02:22:926 - man these are thematically important as transitions. you keep consistent too.
02:27:752 - you can sv the shit out of this subsection by following the pauses of the drums as you do later ;)
03:03:412 - yea bro this is more like it
03:13:171 - goddamnit zenx don't forget the fucking percussion
03:29:274 - this pattern is awkward as shit and didn't you forget the kick mate
03:37:981 (217981|3) - release this at times and repress to follow background synths and later on please please percussions
04:01:256 (241256|1,241256|5) - ln man ln (also please pitch relevancy. please please)
04:24:015 - too much air for so much noise. denseR. DENSER, GROWING MUCH MORE IN INTENSITY ZENX GROWING IN INTENSITY MAKE IT SLOWLy EXPLODE NOT MARCH (hint: vocals)
04:52:255 - no NO MAN NO STREAMS NOT MASHES STREAMS STREAMS MAKE ME CONCENTRATE FOR THE GRAND THING MAKE ME FOCUS MAKE ME FEEL LIKE SHIT IS GOING DOWN
04:55:222 - make those fucking sv changes more intense with red lines. RED LINES. mark those beats zenx, the batterist is marking the 4/4ths for the GRAND ENTRANCE SO MAKE IT FUCKING AMAZING

05:45:297 - it's a slow march zenx, loose those jackhammers. they're unnecessary.
05:51:084 (351084|5,351084|6,351084|1,351084|0) - the pitch motherfucker do you hear it change?
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Agka wrote:

[4k]
pretty solid, but it lacks variety. make it move, groove.
01:07:636 (67636|0,67636|2,67808|1,67808|2,67981|0,67981|1,67981|3,68153|2,68153|0,68239|1,68325|3,68325|2,68498|0,68498|1) -
proposition http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3624218 did a modification a bit
01:39:015 - deaccel. SV proposal. appliied
99015,-50,4,1,0,15,0,0
99101.25,-57.142857142857146,4,1,0,15,0,0
99187.5,-66.66666666666667,4,1,0,15,0,0
99273.75,-80,4,1,0,15,0,0
99360,-100,4,1,0,15,0,0
(paste into timing section)
02:12:377 (132377|1) - remove for inconsistency with near section removed
03:13:153 - please map the guitars, you never gave much importance to vocals to do it now, and it keeps the pace better. already mapped the guitar o_O
03:53:221 - give pitch relevancy a shot. re-arranged
lol that mod on 7k
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I love you, Agka.
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agka pls have my babies
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AND HIS NAME IS
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the vsrg hipster arises from ashes
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Fk my life
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gratz agka, you killed his motivation
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Excuse me, pux should i only mod the 4k one only ?
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err why dont you mod the 7k too? lol
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[4K]
from 01:39:015 to 01:39:360 - SV too fast, no time to react , 1.5 is enough.

didn't see other problems.
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Soo, a certain someone that shall not be named requested a mod a while back. ;)

The 4k will follow at some point.

Apologies in advance for the wall of text, I prefer explaining my reasoning behind things.

Edit: Formatting ahoy!

To start, I would have liked to have seen the intro mapped to some degree. Various bleeps and bloops like notes too. :<

I'm not a big fan of the three note chord pattern throughout the song either, they feel far too easy to play and varying them up a bit would lead to more interesting (harder) patterns.

Lastly I feel some of the SV is a bit silly. Some parts are really good as they match the song but I feel there is slightly too much of it.



(01) 00:44:791 (44791|2) --- Sounds like there is another note just before this one like this.

(02) 00:45:567 --- This next part is far too easy imo. Maybe reduce the notes to two per hand and vary up the spacing instead of a simple thrill?

(03) 00:46:946 to 01:08:498 --- I quite like this section, plays really well.

(04) 01:08:670 (68670|6,68670|5,68670|4) --- Same as (02).

(05) 01:09:015 --- This next part has the added synth in the background, maybe make it slightly more difficult by mapping it (possibly as LN)?

(06a) 01:30:739 to 01:39:360 --- Starting at 01:30:739, this upcoming LN section feels odd. I don't think vocals should ever be mapped to LN, that aside what are these LN mapped to? If these are the rising synth in the background why are there two here. Same goes if they are meant as vocals, why two?

(06b) 01:32:463 (92463|6) --- If this LN is meant to be mapped to vocals it should end at 01:33:153. If it is the background synth if pitch changes at 01:33:153 and should end / roll into a new one.

(06c) 01:33:153 (93153|5,93153|4) --- Similar issue, if these are vocals why are there 2 LN? Even if one of these is meant to represent the pitch change from (06b), it should end at 01:33:756.

(06d) I realize it is a bit of a dead area in the song in terms of activity, but I think this section could do without vocal mapping.

(07a) 01:39:360 to 01:58:670 --- I think this entire section needs changes. This section has the synths in the background that you have mapped at 02:01:429 and beyond. My suggestion would be to have one LN flowing throughout mapped to the synth combined with similar patterns from earlier in the song. Specifically the hi-hat mapping which you seem to ignore completely while it was mapped so well earlier on :(. A mix of the two styles would flow well into the upcoming LN-heavy section imo.

(07b) 01:50:050 --- Same as (02).

(08) 02:01:429 to 02:11:084 --- This first LN section plays really well, but might be a little on the easy side. Maybe add the drum and finishes as single notes in some places like this?

(09) 02:11:084 (131084|3) --- It feels like this LN is not mapped to anything. This little break in the LN section feels really out of place since the synth never stops. The only change is in the percussion so my suggestion would be to continue the LN pattern from before and add the percussion as a one hand thrill plus some single notes. This change is also why I suggest (08).

(10) 02:12:463 to 02:21:946 --- Same as (08).

(11) 02:22:118 to 02:23:498 --- This sudden change to normal notes feels out of place since the synth continues up to 02:23:498. My suggestion would be to continue the LN plus (08).

(12) 02:24:187 to 02:52:463 --- Excessive SV usage aside, the notes in this section feel a little too stacked on certain keys. From the start up to 02:40:050 I think there is too much bias on the 3rd and 5th key specifically. Highly recommend sharing the love with the other keys in this entire section.

(13) 02:45:567 (165567|3,166256|2,166946|5,167636|0) --- Not a fan of these vocal LN, I think not having these would be better.

(14) 02:48:325 --- The key bias continues here again. Although most of the pressure is on the 6th key this time the 3rd and 5th are used again. Maybe change it up with a double hand thrill or something. Share the love! :p

(15a) 02:52:463 --- Same as (02), but leads into (15b).

(15b) 02:53:498 (173498|5,173498|6,173498|3,173498|0,173498|1) --- I feel these LN are mapped incorrectly, the sound they represent starts at 02:52:463. Maybe reduce the amount of LN to 3 and weave in the percussion as sets of doubles in between? Example here. That way you could also end at 02:53:843 like this because the 1/8 gap should not be there since the sound doesn't stop.

(16a) 02:53:843 to 03:13:153 --- Minor suggestion for the same as (07a), only suggesting due to the background synth being there. Plays well either way.

(16b) 03:04:532 --- Same as (02).

(17) 03:13:153 to 03:15:394 --- Assuming these single notes are vocals, I recommend changing them to the guitar ticks and hi-hat instead.

(18) 03:15:567 --- Same as (02).

(19a) 03:15:912 to 03:26:946 --- Same as (08).

(19b) 03:25:567 --- Same weird transition as before so suggest (09).

(20a) 03:26:946 to 04:00:050 --- The main section, this is where my biggest complaints start. This section starts out really well imo up until the transition at 03:29:360. I think the symmetry completely kills it, it's like a weird 6+1K after that. This part of the song is like the perfect place for some awesome dual-stair streams. Would highly recommend that all the way up to 04:00:050.

(20b) 03:37:981 --- It's almost as if you forgot this is a 7K map, plus that center LN feels like it is not mapped to anything. I feel that LN limits the already 6k-like pattern far too much.

(20c) 03:46:256 to 03:49:015 --- This section baffles me, feels far too easy and out of place. Highly recommend (20a) with possibly some added percussion notes for a little burst to break things up.

(20d) 03:49:015 to 04:00:050 --- 6k patterns part two, now with symmetry (still feels out of place). Same as (20b). Please turn it back into 7k. :(

(21) 04:00:394 to 04:33:153 --- The guitar mapping in this entire area feels weird, it feels like "temporary" mapping. It's like you forgot to map the guitar changing pitch. A bit too repetitive imo.

(22) 04:44:187 to 04:49:705 --- 6k part three, even though this is a really basic part of the song I feel there is some room for patterns here instead of the repetition.

(23) 04:49:705 to 04:53:843 --- This section is a welcome change from the previous one. Shame it is still the same easy to hit 3 chord pattern, though shifted 1 note occasionally. Same suggestion as before however, maybe reduce the chords by 1 and vary the spacing to allow more varied patterns.

(24) 04:53:843 to 04:55:222 --- This LN feels like it should not be there, and would highly recommend changing into a 7k pattern.

(25) 04:55:222 --- Have to give props for the SV in this little section, feels spot on.

(26) 04:56:601 to 04:57:981 --- Exact same as (15b), so the same suggestion applies.

(27) 04:57:981 to 05:07:636 --- Same as (08).

(28) 05:13:670 --- I think some notes for hi-hats are missing here.

(29) 05:19:015 (319015|3) --- I suggest removing this vocal LN.

(30) 05:20:050 to 05:31:084 --- Same suggestions as before at (08) plus the easy chords. Trying not to sound like a broken record at this point. :P

(31) 05:31:084 to 05:39:015 --- Please make the 6k stop, it hurts. I miss 7k streams. :(

(32) 05:39:360 to 05:42:118 --- Same as (20c), but inconsistent with the previous one. The lack of the LN being a good thing.

(33) 05:42:118 to end --- The mapping in most of this feels really repetitive again, there are more bleeps and bloops to add throughout I feel (it comes full circle :P). Also suggest painful and unspeakably bad things be done to the vocal LN.
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Mod because the mapper forces me rip no reason :o

No kudos if this isn't help anything

too many zenx(s) in tags, it's hentai you know

[da 4k maniaq]
  1. 00:00:050 - 00:43:843 - when you bored and skipping intro is the only option
  2. 01:08:756 & 01:08:929 - this one needs another note since it's kinda bugged me, also this 01:50:050 (110050|3,110050|2,110136|1,110136|0,110222|2,110222|3,110308|0,110308|1,110394|0,110394|3,110394|2) - looks preferable than this.
  3. 01:37:722 - 01:37:894 - i know the reason why you did not put anything on this hehe
  4. 01:39:015 - this one looks doesn't fit with the wwheeewww sound but it's 4K so i think it's not the really problem
  5. 03:13:498 (193498|0,193670|3,193843|1) - kinda bugged me too, it doesn't sound right with the pitch, i prefer ctrl+H
  6. 03:49:015 - 03:59:705 - actually, it's kinda anti-climax + the music and it's element even bigger than 03:15:912 (i expect this part to be the hardest one in this diff). but.. can't be helped, the 4K room was too small for this x_x
  7. 05:52:463 - this should be 3 notes, it's kick ass right, also 05:53:153 - this should be 4 notes instead of 3
  8. 06:00:050 - since 06:00:279 (360279|1,360624|0) - based on pitch, it doesn't feel right for me so then let me to suggest you to : http://puu.sh/k6BhJ/7f7d244e2c.jpg
    or just put 06:00:624 (360624|0) - to 3rd (the pitch in 06:00:279 (360279|1) - makes me confused as hell)
  9. 06:03:498 - why 2 when you can 3 since it's ki-- oh it's seems ruined the whole pattern so nevermind

[7K Evening Pandemic]

  • Classic zen style since 2013 (also, i miss the maniera with the goddammit cookie bg one)
    In this case i'm going to ignore the pitch especially the ln stream part, burst part, and so on

  1. 03:14:360 (194360|3) - this note is kinda off for me. did you really focus the pattern for vocal or not ?
  2. 03:37:981 (217981|3) - i don't get this. first, what is this for ? second, it isn't really like it ends at 03:48:584 - (also, consider with the all slider who like this in this diff)
  3. 05:00:912 - forgot to put another note at this ? (since you put 2 notes as a normal)
  4. 06:13:498 (373498|2) - if you follows the vocal, then it ends at 06:14:187 -
  5. 06:24:705 (384705|4) - this is good, but leaving 06:24:877 - empty isn't right.


Is this trance ? i thought it was kinda dnb
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ecafree2 wrote:

[4K]
from 01:39:015 to 01:39:360 - SV too fast, no time to react , 1.5 is enough. lol ya. that is agka's sv

didn't see other problems.

Remillion Cross wrote:

[da 4k maniaq]
  1. 00:00:050 - 00:43:843 - when you bored and skipping intro is the only option skipping is love
  2. 01:08:756 & 01:08:929 - this one needs another note since it's kinda bugged me, also this 01:50:050 (110050|3,110050|2,110136|1,110136|0,110222|2,110222|3,110308|0,110308|1,110394|0,110394|3,110394|2) - looks preferable than this.
  3. 01:37:722 - 01:37:894 - i know the reason why you did not put anything on this hehe hehe
  4. 01:39:015 - this one looks doesn't fit with the wwheeewww sound but it's 4K so i think it's not the really problem alright
  5. 03:13:498 (193498|0,193670|3,193843|1) - kinda bugged me too, it doesn't sound right with the pitch, i prefer ctrl+H
  6. 03:49:015 - 03:59:705 - actually, it's kinda anti-climax + the music and it's element even bigger than 03:15:912 (i expect this part to be the hardest one in this diff). but.. can't be helped, the 4K room was too small for this x_x I'm so dumb, how could I never thinking about buffing up this part lol
  7. 05:52:463 - this should be 3 notes, it's kick ass right, also 05:53:153 - this should be 4 notes instead of 3
  8. 06:00:050 - since 06:00:279 (360279|1,360624|0) - based on pitch, it doesn't feel right for me so then let me to suggest you to : http://puu.sh/k6BhJ/7f7d244e2c.jpg
    or just put 06:00:624 (360624|0) - to 3rd (the pitch in 06:00:279 (360279|1) - makes me confused as hell)
  9. 06:03:498 - why 2 when you can 3 since it's ki-- oh it's seems ruined the whole pattern so nevermind
not replied = ok
thx
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