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Triumvirate - Triple Journey -S-C-U EDITION- [OsuMania]

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-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, February 6, 2016 at 7:58:26 PM

Artist: Triumvirate
Title: Triple Journey -S-C-U EDITION-
Source: jubeat saucer
Tags: jukebeat plus konami GITADORA GuitarFreaks & DrumMania DDR DanceDanceRevolution Kr-ARIA Takane6
BPM: 200
Filesize: 3399kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. ADVANCED - 7Key (3.16 stars, 854 notes)
  2. BASIC - 7Key (1.94 stars, 470 notes)
  3. Ene's JOURNEY - 7Key (4.73 stars, 1237 notes)
  4. EXTREME - 7Key (4.15 stars, 1268 notes)
Download: Triumvirate - Triple Journey -S-C-U EDITION-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#7K PP Mapset
Mapset list

BASIC by me : 9 mods
ADVANCED by me : 8 mods
EXTREME by me : 6 mods
EXPERT by me : Download here
Ene's Journey by Takane6 : 3 mods
by Bruce
by me
by ...
by ...
Modder List
1. NlHIL (BASIC, ADVANCED, Journey) + 4 stars
2. Kiviman (BASIC, ADVANCED, EXTREME, EXPERT) + star
3. deadbill (ADVANCED)
4. ArcherLove (BASIC, ADVANCED, EXTREME, EXPERT)
5. sherrysina (BASIC, ADVANCED)
6. Shinzo- (EXTREME, Journey, EXPERT)
7. JamesHappy15 (BASIC, EXTREME, EXPERT)
8. G3m4sSt4ffLP (BASIC, ADVANCED, EXTREME)
9. nowsmart (BASIC, EXTRA)
10. Hestia- (BASIC, ADVANCED, EXTREME, EXPERT)
11. DarkSider2442 (BASIC, ADVANCED, EXTREME, EXPERT) + star
12. _Xenophilius_ (EXTRA)
13. Lenfried- (EXTRA)
14. Eternalie (Journey)
Enjoy it~
Last edited by -[ AmiShici ]- , edited 52 times in total.
NlHIL
856 posts
Joined December 2013
NlHIL
BASIC
00:17:249 - remove a note
00:19:649 - remove a note or move a note to 00:19:799
01:02:024 - remove the note (This is basic and you didn't put a note at 00:30:074
01:11:624 - ^
01:29:249 - remove a note
01:31:649 - remove a note or move a note to 01:31:799
ADVANCED
00:09:299 - remove the note
00:39:674 - add a note
00:55:049 - ^
00:56:399 - ^
01:11:849 - ^
01:14:849 - add the note
01:28:199 - add a note as 00:16:199
01:29:249 - remove the note

EXs are really nice.
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

NlHIL wrote:

BASIC
00:17:249 - remove a note // nope for chord
00:19:649 - remove a note or move a note to 00:19:799 // nope but added note
01:02:024 - remove the note (This is basic and you didn't put a note at 00:30:074 // i think NM use less 1/4s is no prob
01:11:624 - ^ // ^
01:29:249 - remove a note // nope
01:31:649 - remove a note or move a note to 01:31:799 // added note
ADVANCED
00:09:299 - remove the note // okais
00:39:674 - add a note
00:55:049 - ^
00:56:399 - ^
01:11:849 - ^
01:14:849 - add the note // ^ keep
01:28:199 - add a note as 00:16:199 okais
01:29:249 - remove the note // nope

EXs are really nice.
Thanks NlHIL <3
Kurisu Makise
348 posts
Joined June 2013
Kurisu Makise
Hi! From cute queue.

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
BASIC
00:12:449 (12449|2,12599|1,12749|0) - Reversed pitch seems weird, maybe you should try to follow it straight.
00:27:749 (27749|3,28049|1) - Try 3-4. More consistent imo.
00:33:899 (33899|2,35099|1) - 5-3, then 00:36:299 (36299|5,36599|2,37199|3) - 4-2-3, 00:37:499 (37499|1,37799|4,38099|6) - 7-3-6. Sorry for repatterning, you can use any other way, but make it consistent.
00:47:399 - Missed note. Add to 5.
00:52:799 (52799|2,52949|0) - Ctrl+j for pitch, then 00:53:249 (53249|0) - move to 5, 00:53:849 (53849|6,53999|4,54149|2,54449|2,54599|4,54899|6) - move 1 column left and, finally, 00:55:199 (55199|5) - move to 7.
00:58:649 (58649|2,58649|4,58799|4,58799|2) - Why not 1 and 7?
01:25:574 (85574|6) - 1/2 like other notes here. Maybe it would be better to use LN from 01:25:049 - till 01:25:799 -?

ADVANCED
00:32:699 (32699|2) - Move to 4 for consistency.
00:36:599 (36599|3) - Move to 2, 00:36:899 (36899|1) - to 4, 00:37:049 (37049|3,37199|4) - 1 column right, 00:36:449 (36449|2,36599|0) - ctrl+j.
00:37:499 (37499|3) - Move to 5, 00:38:099 (38099|1) - 1, 00:38:399 (38399|4) - 3, for some consistency again.

EXTREME
00:38:999 (38999|3,39149|4) - 5-7, more comfortable imo.
00:54:749 (54749|6,54899|0) - Ctrl+j and 00:55:049 (55049|5) - move to 7, for consistency.
00:47:099 - Try this for consistency: http://puu.sh/jqFXU/a46729d3ce.png.
01:06:074 - Missed note (like 01:05:849 (65849|3) - ).
01:14:024 (74024|5) - Move to 4 for some hand balance or/and unload right hand in other way. 01:13:724 (73724|3,73799|5,73799|4) - 5-14, for example.

EXPERT
00:03:599 - Try for some consistency and maybe comfort: http://puu.sh/jqGCz/fbbbc2b89c.png.
00:38:999 (38999|3,39149|4) - 5-7? I've seen it somewhere... Other suggestions from EXTREME diff are also topical, if here are the same patterns.
01:06:074 - Missed note.
01:22:349 - ^
I think, you should delete at least 01:21:449 (81449|1,81749|1,82049|1) - and 01:23:099 (83099|5) - . Also, i'm not sure that all your 5-noted chords are rankable... If i understood it right, you use them mostly for cymbal+kick+something else (different instruments during the track). I think, there's only one instrument that deserve 2 notes, it's cymbal. It's not really serious issue for me, but you should ask BN about that.

I like this map! But that inconsistent sections killed me :o Try to avoid random notes or very fast change of patterns, don't be afraid of longer sequences (3-noted pattern is very short pattern). I'm sure, you can make the whole map consistent, cause most of your patterns are. Good luck and take my star :3
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Kiviman wrote:

Hi! From cute queue.

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
BASIC
00:12:449 (12449|2,12599|1,12749|0) - Reversed pitch seems weird, maybe you should try to follow it straight. // okay
00:27:749 (27749|3,28049|1) - Try 3-4. More consistent imo. // fixed
00:33:899 (33899|2,35099|1) - 5-3, then 00:36:299 (36299|5,36599|2,37199|3) - 4-2-3, 00:37:499 (37499|1,37799|4,38099|6) - 7-3-6. Sorry for repatterning, you can use any other way, but make it consistent. // no prob. nice
00:47:399 - Missed note. Add to 5. // nice
00:52:799 (52799|2,52949|0) - Ctrl+j for pitch, then 00:53:249 (53249|0) - move to 5, 00:53:849 (53849|6,53999|4,54149|2,54449|2,54599|4,54899|6) - move 1 column left and, finally, 00:55:199 (55199|5) - move to 7. // cool
00:58:649 (58649|2,58649|4,58799|4,58799|2) - Why not 1 and 7? // ok
01:25:574 (85574|6) - 1/2 like other notes here. Maybe it would be better to use LN from 01:25:049 - till 01:25:799 -? // consider

ADVANCED
00:32:699 (32699|2) - Move to 4 for consistency.
00:36:599 (36599|3) - Move to 2, 00:36:899 (36899|1) - to 4, 00:37:049 (37049|3,37199|4) - 1 column right, 00:36:449 (36449|2,36599|0) - ctrl+j.
00:37:499 (37499|3) - Move to 5, 00:38:099 (38099|1) - 1, 00:38:399 (38399|4) - 3, for some consistency again.
all applied

EXTREME
00:38:999 (38999|3,39149|4) - 5-7, more comfortable imo.
00:54:749 (54749|6,54899|0) - Ctrl+j and 00:55:049 (55049|5) - move to 7, for consistency.
00:47:099 - Try this for consistency: http://puu.sh/jqFXU/a46729d3ce.png.
01:06:074 - Missed note (like 01:05:849 (65849|3) - ).
01:14:024 (74024|5) - Move to 4 for some hand balance or/and unload right hand in other way. 01:13:724 (73724|3,73799|5,73799|4) - 5-14, for example.all applied

EXPERT
00:03:599 - Try for some consistency and maybe comfort: http://puu.sh/jqGCz/fbbbc2b89c.png.
00:38:999 (38999|3,39149|4) - 5-7? I've seen it somewhere... Other suggestions from EXTREME diff are also topical, if here are the same patterns.
01:06:074 - Missed note.
01:22:349 - ^ // ^all applied
I think, you should delete at least 01:21:449 (81449|1,81749|1,82049|1) - and 01:23:099 (83099|5) - . Also, i'm not sure that all your 5-noted chords are rankable... If i understood it right, you use them mostly for cymbal+kick+something else (different instruments during the track). I think, there's only one instrument that deserve 2 notes, it's cymbal. It's not really serious issue for me, but you should ask BN about that. // well i'll ask to BNs

I like this map! But that inconsistent sections killed me :o Try to avoid random notes or very fast change of patterns, don't be afraid of longer sequences (3-noted pattern is very short pattern). I'm sure, you can make the whole map consistent, cause most of your patterns are. *ahaha, This is quick mapset so still need more mod* Good luck and take my star :3
Well Thanks Kivi for mod and star ^^)b
deadbill
311 posts
Joined July 2013
deadbill
hello o/
ini mod hasil stalking heuhuehue

sebelumnya,

ada beberapa cara nge map, contohnya:
>pitch based, bener2 teknis dan sangat mengacu pada pergantian nada, kadang ngga peduli sama note density
>pattern based, cenderung lebih fokus ke note density dan kadang ngga peduli sama pitch

dua2nya ngga apa2 dipakai asalkan bisa ngasih feel si player, "wih ane lagi main ini lagu seru!"
masalahnya, kadang ada player (termasuk ane) yang agak rewel sama pattern based map, terutama BMS players
tp asalkan ditempatkan di bagian yang tepat nggak masalah ^^

Oke mulai honest mod nya, ane agak blak2an yach

ADVANCED
Pattern udah bagus, stylenya solid ...
tapi kalau bisa kurangin dikit simetrisnya ^^

misal dibagian sini 00:50:099 - melodinya sangat kedengeran

part sini juga 00:57:299 -
^kalaupun mau dijadikan simetris, bagian sini 00:58:349 - coba di pertimbangkan kembali
karena 00:58:349 (58349|3,58349|0,58349|6,58649|3,58649|1,58649|5,58799|5,58799|1,58799|3) - nadanya sama (melodi utama)

00:59:099 - ini ngikut synth? kenapa cuma part sini aja yang LN, tapi part yang lainnya SN?
padahal sama2 synth dengan ketukan yang sama^^

01:16:499 - melodi kuat, kalo bisa jangan simetris, roll snarenya bisaloh ngikutin chord, ayo coba :)

00:55:199 - jackhammer ngga sync, mulai coba taruh di 00:55:349 -

EXTREME
no komen dulu, sebelum yg ADVANCE di edit, karena poin2 yang ane tekankan kurang lebih sama dengan ADVANCE

EXPERT
diff curve masih belum bagus, >jangan cuma sulit dibagian akhir!<
ayo repattern, keliatannya masih 90% pakai pattern EXTREME yang dipindahin dikit2 :)

sebagai saran, kalau mau bisa tambahin instrumen yang dijadikan acuan taruh not nya,
misalkan nih, kalau di diff sebelumnya cuma pakai synth maka di diff selanjutnya pakai synth dan perkusi
atau bisa juga kalau di diff sebelumnya cuma pakai melodi utama, rhythm nya dipakai di diff selanjutnya

maaf sebelumnya, mod ane biasanya emang rewel akhir2 ini... kebanyakan malah re-pattern map ^^
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
ArcherLove
hi~

collumn 1~7

mod
[BASIC]
00:12:449 (12449|2,12599|1,12749|0) - Ctrl+J
00:41:849 (41849|1,41999|1) - pindah ke 6
00:50:849 (50849|0) - pindah ke 7
01:25:574 (85574|6) - ???

ini lebih baik ngikutin PR deh :3

[ADVANCED]

00:55:349 (55349|0) - pindah ke 4
00:55:649 (55649|2) - ^
00:56:249 (56249|4) - ^
00:56:549 (56549|6) - ^

[EXTREME]

00:02:849 (2849|0,2849|6,2849|5,2849|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3518650
00:05:249 (5249|6,5249|1,5249|0,5249|5) - ^
00:07:649 (7649|0,7649|6,7649|5,7649|1) - ^
00:12:449 (12449|3,12599|4,12749|5) - pindah ke 7-6-5
00:58:349 (58349|5,58349|6,58349|0,58349|1) - ini suaranya sama seperti 00:58:649 (58649|2,58649|4,58649|0,58649|6,58799|4,58799|6,58799|0,58799|2) -
01:09:299 - add to 4
01:25:799 (85799|1) - pindah ke 3

[EXPERT]

dari sudut pandang pemain oke sih, tapi bagian 01:18:899 - sampai 01:23:699 - itu agak susah / awkward..

good luck!~
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

deadbill wrote:

hello o/
ini mod hasil stalking heuhuehue

sebelumnya,

ada beberapa cara nge map, contohnya:
>pitch based, bener2 teknis dan sangat mengacu pada pergantian nada, kadang ngga peduli sama note density
>pattern based, cenderung lebih fokus ke note density dan kadang ngga peduli sama pitch

dua2nya ngga apa2 dipakai asalkan bisa ngasih feel si player, "wih ane lagi main ini lagu seru!"
masalahnya, kadang ada player (termasuk ane) yang agak rewel sama pattern based map, terutama BMS players
tp asalkan ditempatkan di bagian yang tepat nggak masalah ^^

Oke mulai honest mod nya, ane agak blak2an yach

ADVANCED
Pattern udah bagus, stylenya solid ...
tapi kalau bisa kurangin dikit simetrisnya ^^

misal dibagian sini 00:50:099 - melodinya sangat kedengeran

part sini juga 00:57:299 -
^kalaupun mau dijadikan simetris, bagian sini 00:58:349 - coba di pertimbangkan kembali
karena 00:58:349 (58349|3,58349|0,58349|6,58649|3,58649|1,58649|5,58799|5,58799|1,58799|3) - nadanya sama (melodi utama) // ok

00:59:099 - ini ngikut synth? kenapa cuma part sini aja yang LN, tapi part yang lainnya SN? // hmmm
padahal sama2 synth dengan ketukan yang sama^^

01:16:499 - melodi kuat, kalo bisa jangan simetris, roll snarenya bisaloh ngikutin chord, ayo coba :) // diff spread

00:55:199 - jackhammer ngga sync, mulai coba taruh di 00:55:349 - // nice

EXTREME
no komen dulu, sebelum yg ADVANCE di edit, karena poin2 yang ane tekankan kurang lebih sama dengan ADVANCE

EXPERT
diff curve masih belum bagus, >jangan cuma sulit dibagian akhir!<
ayo repattern, keliatannya masih 90% pakai pattern EXTREME yang dipindahin dikit2 :)

sebagai saran, kalau mau bisa tambahin instrumen yang dijadikan acuan taruh not nya,
misalkan nih, kalau di diff sebelumnya cuma pakai synth maka di diff selanjutnya pakai synth dan perkusi
atau bisa juga kalau di diff sebelumnya cuma pakai melodi utama, rhythm nya dipakai di diff selanjutnya

maaf sebelumnya, mod ane biasanya emang rewel akhir2 ini... kebanyakan malah re-pattern map ^^
okeh thanks for mod

ArcherLove wrote:

hi~

collumn 1~7

mod
[BASIC]
00:12:449 (12449|2,12599|1,12749|0) - Ctrl+J
00:41:849 (41849|1,41999|1) - pindah ke 6
00:50:849 (50849|0) - pindah ke 7
01:25:574 (85574|6) - ???

ini lebih baik ngikutin PR deh :3

[ADVANCED]

00:55:349 (55349|0) - pindah ke 4
00:55:649 (55649|2) - ^
00:56:249 (56249|4) - ^
00:56:549 (56549|6) - ^
// already to move

[EXTREME]

00:02:849 (2849|0,2849|6,2849|5,2849|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3518650
00:05:249 (5249|6,5249|1,5249|0,5249|5) - ^
00:07:649 (7649|0,7649|6,7649|5,7649|1) - ^
00:12:449 (12449|3,12599|4,12749|5) - pindah ke 7-6-5
00:58:349 (58349|5,58349|6,58349|0,58349|1) - ini suaranya sama seperti 00:58:649 (58649|2,58649|4,58649|0,58649|6,58799|4,58799|6,58799|0,58799|2) -
01:09:299 - add to 4 // nope
01:25:799 (85799|1) - pindah ke 3

[EXPERT]

dari sudut pandang pemain oke sih, tapi bagian 01:18:899 - sampai 01:23:699 - itu agak susah / awkward.. // i see. keep dulu

good luck!~
No reply mean ok

Thanks for mod
sherrysina
540 posts
Joined December 2014
sherrysina
hi amishici, you're an experienced mapper, maybe my mod doesnt affect much. so here's a little pattern mod for you.
mod request in my queue

7K Collumn | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


BASIC
00:08:699 (8699|3) - move to 3
00:14:849 (14849|2) - move to 2
00:37:799 (37799|2) - move to 5

ADVANCED
00:14:849 (14849|4) - move to 6
01:22:499 (82499|2) - move to 5

thats all from me. i didnt get many problems c: good luck!

Shinzo-
1,172 posts
Joined July 2014
Shinzo-
balalala~
17:42 -[ AmiShici ]-: humbed
17:42 Shinzo-: wut ?
17:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: map gw kapan di mod ;w;
17:43 Shinzo-: rencana skrg
17:43 Shinzo-: mau irc ?
17:44 -[ AmiShici ]-: ok
17:55 Shinzo-: woy
17:55 Shinzo-: mau irc kaga ?
17:55 -[ AmiShici ]-: udah dijawab ok
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: -_-
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: dem -_-
17:56 Shinzo-: yaudah buka mapnya coeg
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: tidurlah
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: xD
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: diff apa nak ?
17:57 Shinzo-: hardest :V
17:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: WWew
17:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: map apa yah?
17:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: lmao
17:58 *-[ AmiShici ]- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/755997 Triumvirate - Triple Journey -S-C-U EDITION- [EXPERT]]
17:58 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/755997 Triumvirate - Triple Journey -S-C-U EDITION- [EXPERT]]
17:59 Shinzo-: 00:06:524 (6524|3,6599|1) -  switch column ?
17:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: ok fix cepet dibubble
17:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
17:59 Shinzo-: :V
17:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: serah sih enaknya gmn?
17:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
18:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: yaudah tuker :3
18:00 Shinzo-: enaknya ya gitu yg gw bilang hadeeeh
18:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: :v
18:00 Shinzo-: 00:11:699 - 00:11:999 - 00:12:299 - 00:12:449 - 00:12:599 - 00:12:749 -  add note ? ikutin bass nya ? soalny hardest diff
18:00 Shinzo-: masak sama kek basic
18:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: okeh
18:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: taroh dmn?
18:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
18:01 Shinzo-: terserah lu yg penting bagus
18:01 Shinzo-: 00:14:099 -  part ini juga "V"
18:01 Shinzo-: :V
18:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: vusing :v
18:02 Shinzo-: 00:26:099 (26099|2,26099|3,26099|6,26099|4,26099|0) -  ini knapa 5 note ?
18:03 Shinzo-: 00:26:999 -  kan sama kek ini
18:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: but impact :/
18:04 Shinzo-: ahhhh ok then :V
18:04 Shinzo-: sok english lu -_-
18:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: *buat
18:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkakkaak
18:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: kurang huruf a coeg xD
18:05 Shinzo-: 00:40:499 -  part ini rada inconsisten but... bagusan gini.. sooo .... gpp :3
18:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: lu mah gaje
18:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
18:05 Shinzo-: 00:59:286 -  1/16 please wkwkwkwk
18:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: mosok?
18:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkakakak 1/16 mau diapain itu
18:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: OwO
18:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: eh tp bener -_-
18:07 Shinzo-: 01:06:374 (66374|1) -  move to 3 & 01:06:449 (66449|2) -  move to 5 & 01:06:599 (66599|4) -  move to 3 buat consistency pattern
18:07 Shinzo-: serah lu :V
18:07 Shinzo-: 01:08:099 - YEEEEEEHAAAAAA PP !!!
18:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: ngga
18:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: fix
18:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: itu di delete star msih x icon
18:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:06:599 (66599|2) - ini yg pp rain :v
18:08 Shinzo-: 01:11:924 -  add note 5 & 01:11:999 (71999|4,72149|5) -  switch column
18:09 Shinzo-: sama aja goblok
18:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga ane add :v
18:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: njer
18:10 Shinzo-: lel itu harusny 2 note -_-
18:10 Shinzo-: 01:12:374 (72374|5,72374|3) -  trus ini knp 2 note dong ?
18:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
18:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: kan bukan suara violin
18:11 Shinzo-: 01:23:699 - 01:26:099 -  part ini jgn lupa lagi
18:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: itu suara lain
18:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: ini satu 01:12:524 (72524|0) -  :3
18:12 Shinzo-: yaudah serah
18:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: sip
18:12 Shinzo-: 01:25:199 - 01:25:499 - 01:25:799 -  add note 3 5 4
18:13 Shinzo-: 01:31:049 - add note ?
18:13 Shinzo-: udah ah itu aja :V
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

sherrysina wrote:

hi amishici, you're an experienced mapper, maybe my mod doesnt affect much. so here's a little pattern mod for you.
mod request in my queue

7K Collumn | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


BASIC
00:08:699 (8699|3) - move to 3
00:14:849 (14849|2) - move to 2
00:37:799 (37799|2) - move to 5

ADVANCED
00:14:849 (14849|4) - move to 6
01:22:499 (82499|2) - move to 5 // ok

thats all from me. i didnt get many problems c: good luck!

No replied mean reject

Thanks for mod ^^

Shinzo- wrote:

balalala~
17:42 -[ AmiShici ]-: humbed
17:42 Shinzo-: wut ?
17:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: map gw kapan di mod ;w;
17:43 Shinzo-: rencana skrg
17:43 Shinzo-: mau irc ?
17:44 -[ AmiShici ]-: ok
17:55 Shinzo-: woy
17:55 Shinzo-: mau irc kaga ?
17:55 -[ AmiShici ]-: udah dijawab ok
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: -_-
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: dem -_-
17:56 Shinzo-: yaudah buka mapnya coeg
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: tidurlah
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: xD
17:56 -[ AmiShici ]-: diff apa nak ?
17:57 Shinzo-: hardest :V
17:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: WWew
17:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: map apa yah?
17:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: lmao
17:58 *-[ AmiShici ]- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/755997 Triumvirate - Triple Journey -S-C-U EDITION- [EXPERT]]
17:58 *Shinzo- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/755997 Triumvirate - Triple Journey -S-C-U EDITION- [EXPERT]]
17:59 Shinzo-: 00:06:524 (6524|3,6599|1) -  switch column ?
17:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: ok fix cepet dibubble
17:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
17:59 Shinzo-: :V
17:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: serah sih enaknya gmn?
17:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
18:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: yaudah tuker :3
18:00 Shinzo-: enaknya ya gitu yg gw bilang hadeeeh
18:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: :v
18:00 Shinzo-: 00:11:699 - 00:11:999 - 00:12:299 - 00:12:449 - 00:12:599 - 00:12:749 -  add note ? ikutin bass nya ? soalny hardest diff
18:00 Shinzo-: masak sama kek basic
18:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: okeh
18:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: taroh dmn?
18:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
18:01 Shinzo-: terserah lu yg penting bagus
18:01 Shinzo-: 00:14:099 -  part ini juga "V"
18:01 Shinzo-: :V
18:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: vusing :v
18:02 Shinzo-: 00:26:099 (26099|2,26099|3,26099|6,26099|4,26099|0) -  ini knapa 5 note ?
18:03 Shinzo-: 00:26:999 -  kan sama kek ini
18:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: but impact :/
18:04 Shinzo-: ahhhh ok then :V
18:04 Shinzo-: sok english lu -_-
18:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: *buat
18:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkakkaak
18:04 -[ AmiShici ]-: kurang huruf a coeg xD
18:05 Shinzo-: 00:40:499 -  part ini rada inconsisten but... bagusan gini.. sooo .... gpp :3
18:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: lu mah gaje
18:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: lel
18:05 Shinzo-: 00:59:286 -  1/16 please wkwkwkwk
18:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: mosok?
18:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkakakak 1/16 mau diapain itu
18:06 -[ AmiShici ]-: OwO
18:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: eh tp bener -_-
18:07 Shinzo-: 01:06:374 (66374|1) -  move to 3 & 01:06:449 (66449|2) -  move to 5 & 01:06:599 (66599|4) -  move to 3 buat consistency pattern
18:07 Shinzo-: serah lu :V
18:07 Shinzo-: 01:08:099 - YEEEEEEHAAAAAA PP !!!
18:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: ngga
18:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: fix
18:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: itu di delete star msih x icon
18:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:06:599 (66599|2) - ini yg pp rain :v
18:08 Shinzo-: 01:11:924 -  add note 5 & 01:11:999 (71999|4,72149|5) -  switch column
18:09 Shinzo-: sama aja goblok
18:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga ane add :v
18:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: njer
18:10 Shinzo-: lel itu harusny 2 note -_-
18:10 Shinzo-: 01:12:374 (72374|5,72374|3) -  trus ini knp 2 note dong ?
18:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
18:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: kan bukan suara violin
18:11 Shinzo-: 01:23:699 - 01:26:099 -  part ini jgn lupa lagi
18:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: itu suara lain
18:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: ini satu 01:12:524 (72524|0) -  :3
18:12 Shinzo-: yaudah serah
18:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: sip
18:12 Shinzo-: 01:25:199 - 01:25:499 - 01:25:799 -  add note 3 5 4
18:13 Shinzo-: 01:31:049 - add note ?
18:13 Shinzo-: udah ah itu aja :V
Thanks for mod yurei :D
JamesHappy
678 posts
Joined January 2014
JamesHappy
sorry got delay
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[BASIC]

00:03:449 - try this

00:12:449 (12449|0,12599|1,12749|2) - move to 2, 4, and 6 (balance)
00:14:849 (14849|2,14999|0,15149|6) - ^
00:22:949 - this


00:25:349 -

00:29:699 (29699|1,29849|3) - remove this

00:48:149 (48149|2) - move to 2 (to avoid unnecessary jack)
00:49:349 (49349|4) - move to 6 (same)
00:50:999 (50999|2,51149|2) - move to 2 (balance)
00:51:449 (51449|4,51599|4) - move to 6 (same reason)
00:54:449 (54449|1,54599|3) - ctrl+h, then move to 5 and 3
00:55:349 (55349|4,56549|2) - move to 6 and 2 (to avoid unnecessary jack)
00:56:999 (56999|1) - move to 4 (balance)

[EXTREME]

00:12:449 (12449|6,12599|5,12749|4) - move to 6, 4, and 2 (balance)
00:39:899 (39899|0,40199|1) - remove (not too loud for 2 noter)
00:54:899 just a suggestion

01:24:449 (84449|0,84599|1,84749|2) - move to 2, 5, and 1
01:25:199 (85199|4) - add one
01:25:499 (85499|2) - ^
01:25:799 (85799|2) - ^
01:26:099 (86099|6) - ^
01:27:599 - missing one?
01:31:049 - ^
01:31:199 - ^

[EXPERT]

00:20:024 (20024|1,20099|5,20174|2,20249|4,20324|1,20399|5,20474|2,20549|4,20624|1,20699|5,20774|2,20849|4,20924|1,20999|5,21074|2,21149|4,21224|1) - it is just me or there's really no beats here? refer from here 01:31:949 (91949|2,91949|4,91949|6,91949|0,91949|3) -

00:39:899 (39899|0,40199|1) - same as EXTREME
01:05:474 (65474|4,65474|2,65549|5,65549|1) - ctrl+g
01:09:299 (69299|0,71699|1) - what are these LN's for?
01:18:749 (78749|1,78749|5,78824|6,78824|0) - ctrl+g
01:18:899 (78899|1,78899|5) - ^ if done that, move these to 1 and 7

im done

GL~
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

JamesHappy15 wrote:

sorry got delay
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[BASIC]

00:03:449 - try this // where?

00:12:449 (12449|0,12599|1,12749|2) - move to 2, 4, and 6 (balance)
00:14:849 (14849|2,14999|0,15149|6) - ^
00:22:949 - this


00:25:349 -

00:29:699 (29699|1,29849|3) - remove this // ^ oki

00:48:149 (48149|2) - move to 2 (to avoid unnecessary jack)
00:49:349 (49349|4) - move to 6 (same)
00:50:999 (50999|2,51149|2) - move to 2 (balance)
00:51:449 (51449|4,51599|4) - move to 6 (same reason)
00:54:449 (54449|1,54599|3) - ctrl+h, then move to 5 and 3
00:55:349 (55349|4,56549|2) - move to 6 and 2 (to avoid unnecessary jack) // https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3575827
00:56:999 (56999|1) - move to 4 (balance) // oki

[EXTREME]

00:12:449 (12449|6,12599|5,12749|4) - move to 6, 4, and 2 (balance)
00:39:899 (39899|0,40199|1) - remove (not too loud for 2 noter)
00:54:899 just a suggestion

01:24:449 (84449|0,84599|1,84749|2) - move to 2, 5, and 1 //^oki
01:25:199 (85199|4) - add one
01:25:499 (85499|2) - ^
01:25:799 (85799|2) - ^
01:26:099 (86099|6) - ^
01:27:599 - missing one?
01:31:049 - ^
01:31:199 - ^ // ^reject since i dont follow kick there

[EXPERT]

00:20:024 (20024|1,20099|5,20174|2,20249|4,20324|1,20399|5,20474|2,20549|4,20624|1,20699|5,20774|2,20849|4,20924|1,20999|5,21074|2,21149|4,21224|1) - it is just me or there's really no beats here? refer from here 01:31:949 (91949|2,91949|4,91949|6,91949|0,91949|3) - // naise

00:39:899 (39899|0,40199|1) - same as EXTREME // ok
01:05:474 (65474|4,65474|2,65549|5,65549|1) - ctrl+g // ok
01:09:299 (69299|0,71699|1) - what are these LN's for? // for synth on back sound
01:18:749 (78749|1,78749|5,78824|6,78824|0) - ctrl+g // nope
01:18:899 (78899|1,78899|5) - ^ if done that, move these to 1 and 7

im done

GL~
Thans for mod ^^
DeletedUser_3886246
DeletedUser_3886246


NM from my queue~
First mania mod ever, please explain why you decline something, I need to get better x3


Columns
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

Basic

01:12:749 (72749|3) - Move to 3 for reversed stair with - 01:12:149 (72149|4,72374|1,72599|5) -
01:13:124 (73124|3) - Move to 4 ^
01:27:149 (87149|6) - This one is lower pitched than this one - 01:26:999 (86999|0) - You should move 01:27:149 (87149|6) - to 1 or 2 and - 01:26:999 (86999|0) - somewhere more to the right than the lower pitched one.

Advanced

00:35:324 - Maybe add a note in 3, 'cuz the music allows it?
00:53:249 (53249|1,53249|4,53399|2,53399|5,53549|6,53549|3) - I'd find something like this more fitting (pic below), since the tone in this part gets higher and the next pattern lower again.



01:33:299 (93299|1,93299|5,93299|3,93749|4,93749|0,93749|2,94199|5,94199|3,94199|1,94649|6,94649|4,94649|2,95099|3,95099|5,95099|1) - I'd prefer, if every cord had a note in column 4, since it's always the same sound~

Extreme

00:14:849 (14849|4) - Move to 6 and move - 00:14:999 (14999|3) - to 4, would look and sound better imo~
01:26:849 (86849|1,86999|3) - Same for these ^

Good luck with ranking! c:
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:



NM from my queue~
First mania mod ever, please explain why you decline something, I need to get better x3


Columns
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

Basic

01:12:749 (72749|3) - Move to 3 for reversed stair with - 01:12:149 (72149|4,72374|1,72599|5) -
01:13:124 (73124|3) - Move to 4 ^
01:27:149 (87149|6) - This one is lower pitched than this one - 01:26:999 (86999|0) - You should move 01:27:149 (87149|6) - to 1 or 2 and - 01:26:999 (86999|0) - somewhere more to the right than the lower pitched one.

Advanced

00:35:324 - Maybe add a note in 3, 'cuz the music allows it?
00:53:249 (53249|1,53249|4,53399|2,53399|5,53549|6,53549|3) - I'd find something like this more fitting (pic below), since the tone in this part gets higher and the next pattern lower again.



01:33:299 (93299|1,93299|5,93299|3,93749|4,93749|0,93749|2,94199|5,94199|3,94199|1,94649|6,94649|4,94649|2,95099|3,95099|5,95099|1) - I'd prefer, if every cord had a note in column 4, since it's always the same sound~

Extreme

00:14:849 (14849|4) - Move to 6 and move - 00:14:999 (14999|3) - to 4, would look and sound better imo~
01:26:849 (86849|1,86999|3) - Same for these ^

Good luck with ranking! c:
All accepted expect on adv diff. since for picth on my version

Thanks for mod. sorry for late reply
PANDAAAAAAAA
745 posts
Joined September 2012
PANDAAAAAAAA
Marked, will mod soon.
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,772 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
Don't want to ninja nowsmart. Will mod this when his mod is finished.
Julie
1,416 posts
Joined March 2013
Julie


Mod
7K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜5｜6｜7｜



  • [General]

    - Tags : Add "plus", for "jubeat plus" game.



  • [BASIC]

    - 00:19:949 (19949|0,19949|6) - stop it at 00:20:999 - , like in ADVANCED.

    - 00:45:599 (45599|5,45749|1,46049|1,46199|5,46349|1,46649|1,46799|5) - This rhyhtm could be pretty hard for Beginner/Novice player, try changing it for a nice spread with ADVANCED as well.

    - 00:50:999 (50999|2,51149|2) - move these to the 2nd column, it shouldn't be in the same column as 00:50:549 (50549|2) - and 00:52:124 (52124|2) - .

    - 00:51:449 (51449|4,51599|4) - move these to the 6th column, it shouldn't be in the same column as 00:50:249 (50249|4) - and 00:52:349 (52349|4) - . Also too keep symetry with the part mention above.

    - 00:53:549 (53549|6,53849|5) - Why aren't you jacking it like you did here 00:54:149 (54149|1,54449|1) - , is the same sound and you also did it for your other level xD.

    - 01:14:099 (74099|5,74249|5,74399|4) - This might be a bit hard for Beginner/Novice player, Is really one handed, 01:14:249 (74249|5) - move this above this 01:14:099 (74099|1) - for more alternate.

    - 01:18:899 - to 01:23:699 - This is a really hard pattern for Beginner/Novice player, because they have to keep the same fast rhythm, you should reallly consider making a nice spread with ADVANCED.



  • [ADVANCED]

    - 00:02:099 - to 00:09:299 - Your rhythm is the same as EXTREME except that there is just less chord jack on the cymbal for the short cymbal sound. While EXTREME to EXTRA there is a nice spread on playing. These jack chord like you see in my map are really easy to play, so it will feel nearly the same as EXTREME.

    - 00:34:799 - Add BassS hitsound, you probably did it on purpose, because this part is different from the rest, but hitsound won't change the difference, since the bass sound is still consistent. If you want player to have a different feeling here, is the pattern, not the hitsound.

    - 00:38:999 - ^ Keep the BassS consistent like in the music, should add one here.

    - 00:39:449 (39449|4,39599|2) - Try some different pattern, these shouldn't be the same as 00:39:899 (39899|4,40049|2,40199|4,40349|2) - if you listen closely.

    - 01:30:449 (90449|6,90524|5,90599|4) - to 01:31:949 - The rhythm is the same as EXTREME, just some cymbal having 1 note more, You could totally nerf

Good luck :)
Kawawa
Kawawa

Mod

  • [EXTREME]

    this LN Pattern. 00:09:299 - ~ 00:10:349 -
    △ i think need more smooth pattern than this.
    you can consider. like this▽


    00:11:249 (11249|5,11249|1) - move to 1,7
    △if you can keep same column with 00:10:349 (10349|6,10349|0) -
    looks good.

    00:16:649 (16649|3) - move to 2 and 00:16:799 (16799|4) - move to 4? for synth sound pitch pattern shape

    00:35:249 (35249|6,35286|5,35324|4,35361|3,35399|2) - over snap? seems 6snap for synth piano sound.
    you can self-check from this way ▽
    volume 100% with Sound whistle(W) or clap(C) apply. and hear on each snap

    00:39:449 (39449|1) - remove, i think no need for pattern progress. surrounding pattern focuses on the music rhythm background.
    00:39:599 - ~ 00:40:499 - what do you think about? ▽


    01:09:449 (69449|0) - u can remove for smooth next pattern progress
    △if you apply it, 01:09:299 - add one note at here ▽


    01:25:274 - 01:25:649 - add one at here. what do u think about?
    i could feel beep sound at here

    01:31:349 - ~ 01:31:949 - I recommend add more notes at here.
    I saw that same note amount with "ADVANCED" diff,
    And so many differences with EXTRA
    u can consider ▽

  • [EXTRA]

    00:03:299 (3299|5) - remove. same with 00:05:699 -
    same relevancy for pattern progress. It is not necessary to use.

    00:19:049 (19049|5,19124|1,19199|6,19274|0,19349|5,19424|1,19499|6,19574|0,19724|6,19799|1,19874|5) -
    feel somewhat awkward.
    we can feel a tiny 4 snap drum. it is starting from here 00:18:749 -
    therefore, you should be add at here 00:18:824 - 00:18:899 - 00:18:974 -

    or remove them. only focused on background string sound in this pattern part. like your "Extream" diff

    personally, i recommend remove for more authentic representation

    00:35:249 (35249|6,35286|5,35324|4,35361|3) - is 6snap.

    00:39:449 (39449|1) - remove. same mod with extream

    00:59:699 (59699|5,59699|6) - remove.
    it is not always necessary to consider the amount of notes. seems better to remove.
    Because of the key conflicts, 00:59:549 (59549|6,59586|5,59624|4,59661|3,59699|6,59699|5) -
    player can not get a good feeling and smooth playable

    for example.
    01:11:699 - There are symbol sound.
    It usually requires a lot of notes(when i consider amount of your pattern)
    But you due to the use of LN, You could be adjust that amount of notes.
    is almost same logic.

    01:25:274 - 01:25:649 - add one at here. same mod with extream

Good luck :)2
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Julie wrote:



Mod
7K ｜1｜2｜3｜4｜5｜6｜7｜



  • [General]

    - Tags : Add "plus", for "jubeat plus" game.



  • [BASIC]

    - 00:19:949 (19949|0,19949|6) - stop it at 00:20:999 - , like in ADVANCED. // oki

    - 00:45:599 (45599|5,45749|1,46049|1,46199|5,46349|1,46649|1,46799|5) - This rhyhtm could be pretty hard for Beginner/Novice player, try changing it for a nice spread with ADVANCED as well. // re-arrange

    - 00:50:999 (50999|2,51149|2) - move these to the 2nd column, it shouldn't be in the same column as 00:50:549 (50549|2) - and 00:52:124 (52124|2) - . // moved

    - 00:51:449 (51449|4,51599|4) - move these to the 6th column, it shouldn't be in the same column as 00:50:249 (50249|4) - and 00:52:349 (52349|4) - . Also too keep symetry with the part mention above. // moved

    - 00:53:549 (53549|6,53849|5) - Why aren't you jacking it like you did here 00:54:149 (54149|1,54449|1) - , is the same sound and you also did it for your other level xD. // nice, my bad

    - 01:14:099 (74099|5,74249|5,74399|4) - This might be a bit hard for Beginner/Novice player, Is really one handed, 01:14:249 (74249|5) - move this above this 01:14:099 (74099|1) - for more alternate. // oki

    - 01:18:899 - to 01:23:699 - This is a really hard pattern for Beginner/Novice player, because they have to keep the same fast rhythm, you should reallly consider making a nice spread with ADVANCED.



  • [ADVANCED]

    - 00:02:099 - to 00:09:299 - Your rhythm is the same as EXTREME except that there is just less chord jack on the cymbal for the short cymbal sound. While EXTREME to EXTRA there is a nice spread on playing. These jack chord like you see in my map are really easy to play, so it will feel nearly the same as EXTREME. // :?

    - 00:34:799 - Add BassS hitsound, you probably did it on purpose, because this part is different from the rest, but hitsound won't change the difference, since the bass sound is still consistent. If you want player to have a different feeling here, is the pattern, not the hitsound. // fixed

    - 00:38:999 - ^ Keep the BassS consistent like in the music, should add one here. // fixed

    - 00:39:449 (39449|4,39599|2) - Try some different pattern, these shouldn't be the same as 00:39:899 (39899|4,40049|2,40199|4,40349|2) - if you listen closely. fixed

    - 01:30:449 (90449|6,90524|5,90599|4) - to 01:31:949 - The rhythm is the same as EXTREME, just some cymbal having 1 note more, You could totally nerf // :?

Good luck :)
Thanks for mod julie

KawaEE wrote:


Mod

  • [EXTREME]

    this LN Pattern. 00:09:299 - ~ 00:10:349 -
    △ i think need more smooth pattern than this.
    you can consider. like this▽
    // oki

    00:11:249 (11249|5,11249|1) - move to 1,7
    △if you can keep same column with 00:10:349 (10349|6,10349|0) -
    looks good. // fixed

    00:16:649 (16649|3) - move to 2 and 00:16:799 (16799|4) - move to 4? for synth sound pitch pattern shape // fixed

    00:35:249 (35249|6,35286|5,35324|4,35361|3,35399|2) - over snap? seems 6snap for synth piano sound. // consider. will ask to other mapper
    you can self-check from this way ▽
    volume 100% with Sound whistle(W) or clap(C) apply. and hear on each snap

    00:39:449 (39449|1) - remove, i think no need for pattern progress. surrounding pattern focuses on the music rhythm background. // oki
    00:39:599 - ~ 00:40:499 - what do you think about? ▽ // oki


    01:09:449 (69449|0) - u can remove for smooth next pattern progress
    △if you apply it, 01:09:299 - add one note at here ▽
    // oki

    01:25:274 - 01:25:649 - add one at here. what do u think about?
    i could feel beep sound at here // oki

    01:31:349 - ~ 01:31:949 - I recommend add more notes at here.
    I saw that same note amount with "ADVANCED" diff,
    And so many differences with EXTRA // oki
    u can consider ▽

  • [EXTRA]

    00:03:299 (3299|5) - remove. same with 00:05:699 -
    same relevancy for pattern progress. It is not necessary to use. //oki

    00:19:049 (19049|5,19124|1,19199|6,19274|0,19349|5,19424|1,19499|6,19574|0,19724|6,19799|1,19874|5) -
    feel somewhat awkward.
    we can feel a tiny 4 snap drum. it is starting from here 00:18:749 -
    therefore, you should be add at here 00:18:824 - 00:18:899 - 00:18:974 -

    or remove them. only focused on background string sound in this pattern part. like your "Extream" diff

    personally, i recommend remove for more authentic representation //removed

    00:35:249 (35249|6,35286|5,35324|4,35361|3) - is 6snap. // oki

    00:39:449 (39449|1) - remove. same mod with extream //oki

    00:59:699 (59699|5,59699|6) - remove. // oki
    it is not always necessary to consider the amount of notes. seems better to remove.
    Because of the key conflicts, 00:59:549 (59549|6,59586|5,59624|4,59661|3,59699|6,59699|5) -
    player can not get a good feeling and smooth playable

    for example.
    01:11:699 - There are symbol sound.
    It usually requires a lot of notes(when i consider amount of your pattern)
    But you due to the use of LN, You could be adjust that amount of notes.
    is almost same logic.

    01:25:274 - 01:25:649 - add one at here. same mod with extream // oki

Good luck :)2
Thanks for mod KawaEE >w<)/
PANDAAAAAAAA
745 posts
Joined September 2012
PANDAAAAAAAA
hi :D
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[BASIC]
00:42:749 (42749|2) - move to 4, not same sound with 00:42:524 (42524|2) -
00:46:199 (46199|5) - move to 5
01:08:099 - 01:09:299 - you can follow drum sound by put single note with 1/2 beat snap.
01:25:049 (85049|6,85199|4,85349|0,85499|2,85574|6,85724|4) - delete them?
01:26:699 (86699|4) - move to 4
01:26:849 (86849|2) - move to 5
01:26:999 (86999|1) - move to 7

[EXTRA]
00:08:249 (8249|6) - move to 2
00:08:399 (8399|4) - move to 7
00:08:699 (8699|0,8774|1,8849|2) - move right 1 column
00:08:849 (8849|4) - move to 6
00:08:924 (8924|3) - move to 5
00:08:999 (8999|4) - move to 1
00:09:074 (9074|1) - move to 6
00:09:149 (9149|0) - move to 5
big
00:09:224 (9224|6,9299|5,9299|3,9299|4,9299|1,9299|2,9374|0,9449|6,9524|1,9599|5,9674|2,9749|4,9824|1,9899|5,9974|0,10049|6,10124|1,10199|5,10274|2,10349|3,10349|1,10349|4,10349|0,10349|6) - CTRL + H
00:14:699 (14699|6,14849|5,14999|4) - CTRL + J
00:15:149 (15149|6) - move to 1 or 5
00:15:899 (15899|6,15974|5,16049|4) - CTRL + J
00:30:149 (30149|0,30149|1) - you can change them to LN release at 00:30:749
00:35:249 (35249|6,35286|5,35324|4,35361|3) - use beat snap 1/6
00:52:349 (52349|5,52349|3) - move to 5 and 7
00:52:499 (52499|6,52499|4) - move to 3 and 6
00:52:649 (52649|3,52799|4) - CTRL + J
01:00:449 (60449|2) - move to 6
01:01:199 (61199|4) - move to 7
01:01:649 (61649|4) - move to 2
01:02:924 (62924|4) - move to 2
01:04:649 (64649|3,64724|4,64724|2,64799|1,64799|5,64949|0,64949|6,65099|5,65099|1,65174|2,65174|4,65249|3) - re-pattern?
01:08:099 - 4 notes is enough
01:18:299 (78299|5,78299|1) - delete
01:18:180 - add to 4
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

nowsmart wrote:

hi :D
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[BASIC]
00:42:749 (42749|2) - move to 4, not same sound with 00:42:524 (42524|2) -
00:46:199 (46199|5) - move to 5
01:08:099 - 01:09:299 - you can follow drum sound by put single note with 1/2 beat snap.
01:25:049 (85049|6,85199|4,85349|0,85499|2,85574|6,85724|4) - delete them?
01:26:699 (86699|4) - move to 4
01:26:849 (86849|2) - move to 5
01:26:999 (86999|1) - move to 7

[EXTRA]
00:08:249 (8249|6) - move to 2
00:08:399 (8399|4) - move to 7
00:08:699 (8699|0,8774|1,8849|2) - move right 1 column
00:08:849 (8849|4) - move to 6
00:08:924 (8924|3) - move to 5
00:08:999 (8999|4) - move to 1
00:09:074 (9074|1) - move to 6
00:09:149 (9149|0) - move to 5
big
00:09:224 (9224|6,9299|5,9299|3,9299|4,9299|1,9299|2,9374|0,9449|6,9524|1,9599|5,9674|2,9749|4,9824|1,9899|5,9974|0,10049|6,10124|1,10199|5,10274|2,10349|3,10349|1,10349|4,10349|0,10349|6) - CTRL + H
00:14:699 (14699|6,14849|5,14999|4) - CTRL + J
00:15:149 (15149|6) - move to 1 or 5
00:15:899 (15899|6,15974|5,16049|4) - CTRL + J
00:30:149 (30149|0,30149|1) - you can change them to LN release at 00:30:749
00:35:249 (35249|6,35286|5,35324|4,35361|3) - use beat snap 1/6
00:52:349 (52349|5,52349|3) - move to 5 and 7
00:52:499 (52499|6,52499|4) - move to 3 and 6
00:52:649 (52649|3,52799|4) - CTRL + J
01:00:449 (60449|2) - move to 6
01:01:199 (61199|4) - move to 7
01:01:649 (61649|4) - move to 2
01:02:924 (62924|4) - move to 2
01:04:649 (64649|3,64724|4,64724|2,64799|1,64799|5,64949|0,64949|6,65099|5,65099|1,65174|2,65174|4,65249|3) - re-pattern?
01:08:099 - 4 notes is enough
01:18:299 (78299|5,78299|1) - delete
01:18:180 - add to 4
thanks for mod. apply almost of it :)
Hestia-
271 posts
Joined June 2010
Hestia-
Hi AmiShici
[BASIC]
00:34:349 - Add 13
00:34:649 - Add 13

01:02:324 - Add 1
01:02:699 - Add 7
01:02:924 - Add 4
01:03:449 - Add 1
01:03:899 - Add 4
01:11:924 - Add 1
01:11:999 (71999|2) - Move to 2; note balancing @_@
01:12:299 - Add 6
01:12:524 - Add 4
01:12:599 (72599|5) - Move to 5
01:12:749 (72749|2) - Move to 2
01:13:049 - Add 5
01:13:124 (73124|4) - Move to 4
01:13:499 - Add 6
01:13:724 - Add 2
Either do all of that or remove these notes 01:01:949 (61949|4,62024|5) and 01:11:549 (71549|6,71624|5)

[ADVANCED]
00:04:499 is higher pitched than 00:02:099 so maybe it shouldn't be the same notes and 00:06:899 is even higher pitched
00:04:499 (4499|3,4499|5,4499|1,4649|3,4649|5,4649|1,4799|1,4799|3,4799|5,5249|3,5249|1,5249|5) - Move to 1 3 5
00:06:899 (6899|3,6899|1,6899|5,7049|3,7049|1,7049|5,7199|3,7199|1,7199|5,7649|3,7649|5,7649|1) - Move to 3 5 7
00:34:499 (34499|2,34499|0) - Move to 00:34:349
00:34:349 (34349|1) - Move to 00:34:499
00:34:799 (34799|6,34799|4) - Move to 00:34:649
00:34:649 (34649|5) - Move to 00:34:799
00:58:349 - Add 35
00:58:649 - Add 35
00:58:799 - Add 35

[EXTREME]
00:02:099 - 00:04:499 - 00:06:899 - are different pitches
00:34:349 - Add 4
00:34:499 (34499|2,34499|3) - Remove
00:34:649 - Add 4
00:34:799 (34799|2,34799|4) - Remove

[EXTRA]
00:34:499 (34499|2) - Move to 00:34:349
00:34:799 (34799|4) - Move to 00:34:649

Nice map :3
Harasho
DarkSider2442
220 posts
Joined October 2011
DarkSider2442
Hi! From cute queue.

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

BASIC
00:10:349 (10349|0,10349|6) - end this LN at 00:11:099 -
00:42:524 (42524|2) - move to 5
ADVANCED
01:24:449 (84449|2,84599|1,84749|0) - ctrl+j
01:29:249 - suggestion http://puu.sh/kktw1/c34c26af48.png
01:30:599 (90599|0,90674|1,90749|2) - ctrl+j
EXTREME
00:19:049 - add note to 2
00:19:199 - ^ 6
00:19:349 - ^ 1
00:19:499 - ^7
00:35:224 (35224|0) - move to 00:35:249 -
EXTRA
00:19:049 - same way as in EXTREME

Good map, take my star :3
Good luck! :)
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Hestia- wrote:

Hi AmiShici
[BASIC]
00:34:349 - Add 13
00:34:649 - Add 13

01:02:324 - Add 1
01:02:699 - Add 7
01:02:924 - Add 4
01:03:449 - Add 1
01:03:899 - Add 4
01:11:924 - Add 1
01:11:999 (71999|2) - Move to 2; note balancing @_@
01:12:299 - Add 6
01:12:524 - Add 4
01:12:599 (72599|5) - Move to 5
01:12:749 (72749|2) - Move to 2
01:13:049 - Add 5
01:13:124 (73124|4) - Move to 4
01:13:499 - Add 6
01:13:724 - Add 2
Either do all of that or remove these notes 01:01:949 (61949|4,62024|5) and 01:11:549 (71549|6,71624|5)

[ADVANCED]
00:04:499 is higher pitched than 00:02:099 so maybe it shouldn't be the same notes and 00:06:899 is even higher pitched
00:04:499 (4499|3,4499|5,4499|1,4649|3,4649|5,4649|1,4799|1,4799|3,4799|5,5249|3,5249|1,5249|5) - Move to 1 3 5
00:06:899 (6899|3,6899|1,6899|5,7049|3,7049|1,7049|5,7199|3,7199|1,7199|5,7649|3,7649|5,7649|1) - Move to 3 5 7
00:34:499 (34499|2,34499|0) - Move to 00:34:349
00:34:349 (34349|1) - Move to 00:34:499
00:34:799 (34799|6,34799|4) - Move to 00:34:649
00:34:649 (34649|5) - Move to 00:34:799
00:58:349 - Add 35
00:58:649 - Add 35
00:58:799 - Add 35

[EXTREME]
00:02:099 - 00:04:499 - 00:06:899 - are different pitches
00:34:349 - Add 4
00:34:499 (34499|2,34499|3) - Remove
00:34:649 - Add 4
00:34:799 (34799|2,34799|4) - Remove

[EXTRA]
00:34:499 (34499|2) - Move to 00:34:349
00:34:799 (34799|4) - Move to 00:34:649

Nice map :3
Harasho
No reply mean no apply

Thanks for mod ^^

DarkSider2442 wrote:

Hi! From cute queue.

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

BASIC
00:10:349 (10349|0,10349|6) - end this LN at 00:11:099 - // keep, to make easy
00:42:524 (42524|2) - move to 5
/ ok
ADVANCED
01:24:449 (84449|2,84599|1,84749|0) - ctrl+j // keep
01:29:249 - suggestion http://puu.sh/kktw1/c34c26af48.png // nice
01:30:599 (90599|0,90674|1,90749|2) - ctrl+j
EXTREME
00:19:049 - add note to 2
00:19:199 - ^ 6
00:19:349 - ^ 1
00:19:499 - ^7
00:35:224 (35224|0) - move to 00:35:249 -
EXTRA
00:19:049 - same way as in EXTREME

Good map, take my star :3
Good luck! :)
Thanks for mod and star >w<)/
Xenophilius
456 posts
Joined August 2014
Xenophilius
Hi! From Kama x Findus Modding Queue.

Layout:

7k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

EXTRA
  1. 00:10:349 (10349|3,10349|2,10349|5) - I suggest something like this:
    00:10:199 (10199|1) - to 2
    00:10:124 (10124|5) - to 4
    00:10:349 (10349|2) - to 1
    It's for having 00:10:349 (10349|2,10349|5,10349|3) - Equal as 00:11:249 (11249|5,11249|3,11249|1) -
  2. 00:12:149 (12149|2) - I suggest to move this to 3 and make a simmetryc pattern with 00:11:699 (11699|6,11699|0,11849|3,11999|5,11999|1) - or adding a note here 00:12:149 - in 3 to have this 00:11:999 (11999|5,11999|1,12149|2,12299|4,12299|1,12449|0,12449|3,12599|5,12599|2,12749|4,12749|1) - as full doublestream
  3. 00:14:549 (14549|2) - Same as above
  4. 00:29:999 - Why not something like this? You used LNs for this sound 00:30:149 (30149|0,30149|1) - , So I think also those sounds 00:29:999 (29999|6,30074|5) - should be LNs.
  5. 00:39:599 (39599|4,39674|5) - Same as above, you can make this LNs until 00:39:749 - or 1/4 LNs, this is up to you. Also if you choose to use LNS until 00:39:749 - move 00:39:749 (39749|4) - to 2 and 00:39:899 (39899|2) - to 4
  6. 01:23:849 - Add in 2 for simmetry? 01:23:849 (83849|4,83999|6,83999|0,84149|3,84299|1,84299|5) -
  7. 01:26:549 (86549|2) - Move to 3 for simmetry? 01:26:099 (86099|6,86099|0,86249|3,86399|5,86399|1,86549|2) -

EXTREME
  1. 00:09:299 - Mhm are you sure about that? Try this.
  2. 00:44:399 (44399|4,44399|2,44549|5,44549|1) - Ctrl + J for pitch: you will create stairs with those notes 00:44:249 (44249|0,44249|6,44399|2,44399|4,44549|5,44549|1) - that fit better the song. (If you apply this remember to move the hitsound.)
  3. 00:49:049 (49049|5,49049|3,49199|5,49349|3,49349|5) - What about swapping 00:49:049 (49049|3,49349|3) - with 00:49:049 - to make a tri-jack stair00:47:699 (47699|0,47849|0,47999|0,48149|1,48299|1,48449|1,48599|2,48749|2,48899|2,49049|3,49349|3) - as in your harder diff?
  4. 00:59:099 (59099|6,59249|0,59399|4,59549|2) - Ok, it's cool, but for pitch reasons:
    00:59:249 (59249|0) - to 4
    00:59:399 (59399|4) - to 2
    00:59:549 (59549|2) - to 0
  5. 01:23:699 (83699|5,83849|3,83999|6,84149|2,84299|5,84449|1,84599|4,84749|0) - I suggest
    01:23:849 (83849|3) - to 4
    01:24:149 (84149|2) - to 3
    01:24:449 (84449|1) - to 2
    01:24:749 (84749|0) - to 1

    and

    01:26:099 (86099|6,86249|3,86399|5,86549|2,86699|4,86849|1,86999|3,87149|6) - :
    01:27:149 (87149|6) - to 0

    This is similar to the same melody at the beginning of the song. It's better in my opinion to put similar patterns here.

Ok! That's my mod! Good luck with your PP mapset.
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

_Xenophilius_ wrote:

Hi! From Kama x Findus Modding Queue.

Layout:

7k: |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

EXTRA
  1. 00:10:349 (10349|3,10349|2,10349|5) - I suggest something like this:
    00:10:199 (10199|1) - to 2
    00:10:124 (10124|5) - to 4
    00:10:349 (10349|2) - to 1
    It's for having 00:10:349 (10349|2,10349|5,10349|3) - Equal as 00:11:249 (11249|5,11249|3,11249|1) -
  2. 00:12:149 (12149|2) - I suggest to move this to 3 and make a simmetryc pattern with 00:11:699 (11699|6,11699|0,11849|3,11999|5,11999|1) - or adding a note here 00:12:149 - in 3 to have this 00:11:999 (11999|5,11999|1,12149|2,12299|4,12299|1,12449|0,12449|3,12599|5,12599|2,12749|4,12749|1) - as full doublestream
  3. 00:14:549 (14549|2) - Same as above
  4. 00:29:999 - Why not something like this? You used LNs for this sound 00:30:149 (30149|0,30149|1) - , So I think also those sounds 00:29:999 (29999|6,30074|5) - should be LNs.
  5. 00:39:599 (39599|4,39674|5) - Same as above, you can make this LNs until 00:39:749 - or 1/4 LNs, this is up to you. Also if you choose to use LNS until 00:39:749 - move 00:39:749 (39749|4) - to 2 and 00:39:899 (39899|2) - to 4
  6. 01:23:849 - Add in 2 for simmetry? 01:23:849 (83849|4,83999|6,83999|0,84149|3,84299|1,84299|5) -
  7. 01:26:549 (86549|2) - Move to 3 for simmetry? 01:26:099 (86099|6,86099|0,86249|3,86399|5,86399|1,86549|2) -

EXTREME
  1. 00:09:299 - Mhm are you sure about that? Try this.
  2. 00:44:399 (44399|4,44399|2,44549|5,44549|1) - Ctrl + J for pitch: you will create stairs with those notes 00:44:249 (44249|0,44249|6,44399|2,44399|4,44549|5,44549|1) - that fit better the song. (If you apply this remember to move the hitsound.)
  3. 00:49:049 (49049|5,49049|3,49199|5,49349|3,49349|5) - What about swapping 00:49:049 (49049|3,49349|3) - with 00:49:049 - to make a tri-jack stair00:47:699 (47699|0,47849|0,47999|0,48149|1,48299|1,48449|1,48599|2,48749|2,48899|2,49049|3,49349|3) - as in your harder diff?
  4. 00:59:099 (59099|6,59249|0,59399|4,59549|2) - Ok, it's cool, but for pitch reasons:
    00:59:249 (59249|0) - to 4
    00:59:399 (59399|4) - to 2
    00:59:549 (59549|2) - to 0
  5. 01:23:699 (83699|5,83849|3,83999|6,84149|2,84299|5,84449|1,84599|4,84749|0) - I suggest
    01:23:849 (83849|3) - to 4
    01:24:149 (84149|2) - to 3
    01:24:449 (84449|1) - to 2
    01:24:749 (84749|0) - to 1

    and

    01:26:099 (86099|6,86249|3,86399|5,86549|2,86699|4,86849|1,86999|3,87149|6) - :
    01:27:149 (87149|6) - to 0

    This is similar to the same melody at the beginning of the song. It's better in my opinion to put similar patterns here.

Ok! That's my mod! Good luck with your PP mapset.
All fixed lol. it's helpfull >w<)b
Thanks for mod >w<)b
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,772 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
related

Heavily balanced (and at times mirrored) mapping style. Not sure if i can check much stuff here.

Free testplay:
Tons of mirror patterns. Might not be able to move much here. Intro looks good already. Chorus is very hectic to play.
Result

columns 1-7

EXTRA
00:04:349 prefer this note to be at 5 and the next at 3. Follows the flow of the previous notes.
00:08:399 the current one is good but you can check this one out http://puu.sh/kox0P/67f4e8e88e.png
00:30:149 switch 2 and 5 for sound laning. will kinda look like 00:39:599
01:03:449 the current pattern is hard to play. Check this out http://puu.sh/koxGx/90962a8731.png
01:09:299 This section is so cramped. Nerf your layers. Maybe -1 LN or drop some density
The next sections are O_O
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Lenfried- wrote:

related

Heavily balanced (and at times mirrored) mapping style. Not sure if i can check much stuff here.

Free testplay:
Tons of mirror patterns. Might not be able to move much here. Intro looks good already. Chorus is very hectic to play.
Result

columns 1-7

EXTRA
00:04:349 prefer this note to be at 5 and the next at 3. Follows the flow of the previous notes. // ok
00:08:399 the current one is good but you can check this one out http://puu.sh/kox0P/67f4e8e88e.png // keep
00:30:149 switch 2 and 5 for sound laning. will kinda look like 00:39:599 // keep?
01:03:449 the current pattern is hard to play. Check this out http://puu.sh/koxGx/90962a8731.png // oki
01:09:299 This section is so cramped. Nerf your layers. Maybe -1 LN or drop some density // okay
The next sections are O_O // ayyy
Thanks for mod :D
Bruce
1,076 posts
Joined January 2013
Bruce
Hello seems have 1 GD no finished so here is mod only.
[BASIC]
00:12:599 (12599|3,12749|5) - Ctrl+J,here the pitch is different from 00:14:999 - and it is gradually become low.

00:21:299 (21299|4) - a bit hard when i testplay,suggest you move to 6

00:22:349 (22349|3) - ^Move to 5 or 4

00:29:549 (29549|0,30149|2) - Suggest you change them to holds.Since you here stop catch the pitch and next pattern to use drum.

00:48:599 (48599|3,48899|3) - Suggest you move to 5 and 3.Here a bit strange imo.

00:55:799 (55799|3,56099|3) - ^

01:05:699 - ~ 01:06:899 - My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3829979 yours pattern is good but it is too hard in basic.

[ADVANCED]
00:17:099 - ~ 00:17:549 - My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3829990

00:23:699 (23699|3) - It is unpleasant to use many 345 placement,i suggest you move to left hand

00:34:349 (34349|1,34499|0,34499|2,34649|5,34799|4,34799|6) - Reverse,here the pitch is on red line,if you want to double you need double on red line

00:39:899 (39899|4,40049|2,40199|4,40349|2) - I don't know what is this _(:з」∠)_ Here the sound is unsuitable to placement, i suggest you delete it.Or you can change hold 00:39:749 (39749|3,39749|1,39749|5) -

01:05:699 - A bit boring,suggest you 01:05:699 (65699|6,66149|4) - Ctrl+J

01:08:099 (68099|3,68249|3,68399|3,68549|3) - Please move to 1 or 7 _(:з」∠)_

01:11:699 (71699|3) - Move to right hand.

01:25:049 - ~ 01:25:799 - Suggest you delete likes before.It is clearly.

01:31:349 - Seems you like use 3 stairs so here i suggest you another pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3830052

[Extreme]
00:08:849 (8849|5) - Move to 7

00:09:074 (9074|5,9149|4) - Both left 1 column 00:09:224 (9224|0) - And this move to 3

00:09:299 (9299|2,9299|3) - Then delete both or 3.The pattern seems better imo.

00:14:849 (14849|5,14999|3,15149|0) - Move to 6 2 5

00:29:999 (29999|6,30074|5) - Oh no,here i recommend you change to note _(:з」∠)_ Please.

00:39:599 (39599|4,39674|5) - ^

01:26:999 (86999|3,87149|0) - All right 2 columns.


Good Luck
-[ AmiShici ]-
Topic Starter
-[ AmiShici ]-

Bruce wrote:

Hello seems have 1 GD no finished so here is mod only.
[BASIC]
00:12:599 (12599|3,12749|5) - Ctrl+J,here the pitch is different from 00:14:999 - and it is gradually become low.

00:21:299 (21299|4) - a bit hard when i testplay,suggest you move to 6

00:22:349 (22349|3) - ^Move to 5 or 4

00:29:549 (29549|0,30149|2) - Suggest you change them to holds.Since you here stop catch the pitch and next pattern to use drum.

00:48:599 (48599|3,48899|3) - Suggest you move to 5 and 3.Here a bit strange imo.

00:55:799 (55799|3,56099|3) - ^

01:05:699 - ~ 01:06:899 - My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3829979 yours pattern is good but it is too hard in basic.

[ADVANCED]
00:17:099 - ~ 00:17:549 - My suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3829990

00:23:699 (23699|3) - It is unpleasant to use many 345 placement,i suggest you move to left hand

00:34:349 (34349|1,34499|0,34499|2,34649|5,34799|4,34799|6) - Reverse,here the pitch is on red line,if you want to double you need double on red line

00:39:899 (39899|4,40049|2,40199|4,40349|2) - I don't know what is this _(:з」∠)_ Here the sound is unsuitable to placement, i suggest you delete it.Or you can change hold 00:39:749 (39749|3,39749|1,39749|5) -

01:05:699 - A bit boring,suggest you 01:05:699 (65699|6,66149|4) - Ctrl+J

01:08:099 (68099|3,68249|3,68399|3,68549|3) - Please move to 1 or 7 _(:з」∠)_

01:11:699 (71699|3) - Move to right hand.

01:25:049 - ~ 01:25:799 - Suggest you delete likes before.It is clearly.

01:31:349 - Seems you like use 3 stairs so here i suggest you another pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3830052

[Extreme]
00:08:849 (8849|5) - Move to 7

00:09:074 (9074|5,9149|4) - Both left 1 column 00:09:224 (9224|0) - And this move to 3

00:09:299 (9299|2,9299|3) - Then delete both or 3.The pattern seems better imo. // delete 3

00:14:849 (14849|5,14999|3,15149|0) - Move to 6 2 5

00:29:999 (29999|6,30074|5) - Oh no,here i recommend you change to note _(:з」∠)_ Please.

00:39:599 (39599|4,39674|5) - ^

01:26:999 (86999|3,87149|0) - All right 2 columns.


Good Luck
All fixed.
Thanks for mod
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