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MY FIRST STORY - Fukagyaku Replace
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just my two cents
[Remorse]
01:09:208 (1) - unnoticable circle because of 01:08:158 (1,2,3,4,1) - . Maybe move the circle around (340,160)
01:13:858 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - overused triples. 01:13:408 (4,5,6) - is fine. Suggestion: 01:23:458 (5,6) -
01:31:258 (5,6) - could've been triples
01:32:908 (7,8) - unnoticable doubles. Increase the spacing
01:34:558 (1) - is this slider intended to end at a blue tick?
03:08:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I have a hard time hitting these objects. I've come up with something like this: 03:21:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could be more powerful (to balance the sudden increase of distance spacing in kiai)
03:28:558 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I bet someone is going to complain about excessive triples
03:34:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - nice
03:38:608 (5,6,7,8,9) - but why? couldn't it be a triple?
nice map and nice song!
[Remorse]
01:09:208 (1) - unnoticable circle because of 01:08:158 (1,2,3,4,1) - . Maybe move the circle around (340,160)
01:13:858 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - overused triples. 01:13:408 (4,5,6) - is fine. Suggestion: 01:23:458 (5,6) -
01:31:258 (5,6) - could've been triples
01:32:908 (7,8) - unnoticable doubles. Increase the spacing
01:34:558 (1) - is this slider intended to end at a blue tick?
03:08:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I have a hard time hitting these objects. I've come up with something like this: 03:21:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could be more powerful (to balance the sudden increase of distance spacing in kiai)
03:28:558 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I bet someone is going to complain about excessive triples
03:34:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - nice
03:38:608 (5,6,7,8,9) - but why? couldn't it be a triple?
nice map and nice song!