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Snowy Dream

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

好像没有用到kiai mode 拒绝瞎眼orz

Hard

01:30:565 (6,7,8) - spacing
01:31:750 (11,12) - 这个最好也远一点
02:30:565 - 从这里开始我觉得你已经可以加音量或者换NORMAL了
02:55:828 (5,6,7,8,9) - clap的stream很难听除非你有什么特殊用意……
03:00:039 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
03:45:302 这里开始我感觉音乐的鼓点还是比较明显的,试试用点重音(比如soft和normal结合)


Relaxing

01:15:828 这里开始用重音。而且我发现好像前边高潮部分也是soft- - 真是relaxing么……
03:07:407 (1,2,1,2) - 建议分开
03:45:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个间距怎么突然变短了……而且你跟03:51:618 (1,2,3,4,5) 对比一下
03:53:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
04:02:144 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里开DT就鬼畜了……而且这么排列总感觉是蛋疼到不知道怎么弄了搞出来的……建议局部remap……
04:06:355 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里最好也remap下……还有这部分clap感觉太多了


已经star过了 8-)
All fixed!!
Nice mod.
最近比较懒>_>
valuable_old
:D
efzmeltyblood
really loved this song D:

8-)
lovhin456
Hi!! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- I looooooooooove this song ~~~ >w<
- Use these colors ??
Combo1 : 254,112,165
Combo2 : 88,209,198
Combo3 : 22,45,122

Relaxing;
- Weird, the slider speed is really slow which makes it easy, but some of the patterns are for a normal, kind of boring too >w>
- 00:08:460 >> Finish at start
- 00:24:513 >> New combo ??
- 01:22:144 >> You can totally curve this better ~
- 01:24:249 >> Remove whistle from start and add finish
- 01:41:092 (4,5) >> Delete (5) and extend (4) to the next white tick
- 01:42:144 >> Remove whistle from start and add finish
- I just noticed some of your notes have 2 hitsounds, that isn't good, is too loud
- I personally don't like whistles for this song, but then again that's just me

Hard;
- 01:41:618 >> Remove new combo then add new combo to the next note

* Star & Good Luck ~ (ノ>w<)ノ
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi!! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- I looooooooooove this song ~~~ >w<
- Use these colors ?? fixed
Combo1 : 254,112,165
Combo2 : 88,209,198
Combo3 : 22,45,122

Relaxing;
- Weird, the slider speed is really slow which makes it easy, but some of the patterns are for a normal, kind of boring too >w>
- 00:08:460 >> Finish at start fixed
- 00:24:513 >> New combo ?? fixed
- 01:22:144 >> You can totally curve this better ~ fixed
- 01:24:249 >> Remove whistle from start and add finish fixed
- 01:41:092 (4,5) >> Delete (5) and extend (4) to the next white tick fixed
- 01:42:144 >> Remove whistle from start and add finish fixed
- I just noticed some of your notes have 2 hitsounds, that isn't good, is too loud
- I personally don't like whistles for this song, but then again that's just me

Hard;
- 01:41:618 >> Remove new combo then add new combo to the next note fixed

* Star & Good Luck ~ (ノ>w<)ノ
Thanks ~ :)
Kotone
我又來騙kd

Video那兒我看看能不能幫乃轉一下>_>

Relaxing
那些小break time就刪掉吧 沒用
00:18:986(3,4) - 這兩slider真的好么?不太美,干脆換成兩直slider 或是一點彎更好
00:20:039(4) - Delete clap,add finish
00:23:197(3) - ^
00:24:513(1,2,3) - 分開
00:27:407 - 沒必要加finish,delete
00:43:197(2) - delete clap
00:56:355(7) - ^
你不如remap這diff吧<_<...要不我幫乃做?

Hard
那些小break time就刪掉x2
00:20:039(4) - finish
很好
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

karenying wrote:

我又來騙kd

Video那兒我看看能不能幫乃轉一下>_>

Relaxing
那些小break time就刪掉吧 沒用 我总感觉留着好看>.>
00:18:986(3,4) - 這兩slider真的好么?不太美,干脆換成兩直slider 或是一點彎更好 fixed
00:20:039(4) - Delete clap,add finish fixed
00:23:197(3) - ^ fixed
00:24:513(1,2,3) - 分開 fixed
00:27:407 - 沒必要加finish,delete fixed
00:43:197(2) - delete clap fixed
00:56:355(7) - ^ fixed
你不如remap這diff吧<_<...要不我幫乃做?唔?欢迎喔。



Hard
那些小break time就刪掉x2 我总觉得留着好看×2
00:20:039(4) - finish fixed
很好
欢迎随时骗取Kd来mod
rust45
Happy New Year!

[Relaxing]
04:09:250 (4,5) - This is kinda confusing in the way that it kinda looks like 5 is the slider and 4 is just over it. It got me the first time.


[Hard]
Max Score is way over 10,000,000. That needs to be fixed.

That's it, but yeah, max score on hard is way too high, not sure how you should fix it.
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

rust45 wrote:

Happy New Year! The same to you!

[Relaxing]
04:09:250 (4,5) - This is kinda confusing in the way that it kinda looks like 5 is the slider and 4 is just over it. It got me the first time.
fixed

[Hard]
Max Score is way over 10,000,000. That needs to be fixed. 10,000,000 is too low for me...

That's it, but yeah, max score on hard is way too high, not sure how you should fix it.It's over four mins,so the score is reasonable..And for those who like to get scores of people will like it very much :D
Thanks~
qinche
有个normal会不容易被挑刺,不过也不碍啦:D
scarlethana
star da☆ze
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
谢谢star~=v=
Muya
Hi :)

General
● 1st kiai start at 01:33:723 , end at 01:33:855 , 2nd kiai start at 02:50:565 , end at 02:50:697 , 3rd kiai start at 02:58:986 , end at 02:59:118 4th kiai start at 04:02:144 end at 04:276

Relaxing
● rename to the " Normal"
● 01:58:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
● 02:07:934 (1,2,3) - ^
● 02:10:828 (6,7) - far
● 02:54:249 (1) - delete this note , 02:54:249 - add circle & 02:54:776 ~ 02:55:302 add slider
● 03:06:881 (5) - 1grid left
● 03:08:986 (1) - remove new combo
● 03:51:618 (1,2) - far

Hard
● 00:40:828 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1grid right
● 01:47:407 (5) - 1grid left
● 02:45:302 (1) - 1grid right
● 03:03:723 (2,3,4,5) - 1grid right
● 03:52:407 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1grid up
● 04:16:881 (4) - 1grid up


+star~
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Muya wrote:

Hi :)

General
● 1st kiai start at 01:33:723 , end at 01:33:855 , 2nd kiai start at 02:50:565 , end at 02:50:697 , 3rd kiai start at 02:58:986 , end at 02:59:118 4th kiai start at 04:02:144 end at 04:276

Relaxing
● rename to the " Normal"
● 01:58:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
● 02:07:934 (1,2,3) - ^
● 02:10:828 (6,7) - far
● 02:54:249 (1) - delete this note , 02:54:249 - add circle & 02:54:776 ~ 02:55:302 add slider
● 03:06:881 (5) - 1grid left
● 03:08:986 (1) - remove new combo
● 03:51:618 (1,2) - far

Hard
● 00:40:828 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1grid right
● 01:47:407 (5) - 1grid left
● 02:45:302 (1) - 1grid right
● 03:03:723 (2,3,4,5) - 1grid right
● 03:52:407 (2,3,4,5,6) - 1grid up
● 04:16:881 (4) - 1grid up


+star~
Done~ :D
Yumeko Yuki
mod in IRC :)
star
_Kiva
I cant mod but i will Shooooooot a star~
AngelHoney
Normal

02:12:407 (10) - 間距
03:11:749 (1) - 結束在 03:13:723
03:53:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 23和56 去掉 , 3個slider多一次折返?
04:06:881 (3) - 間距
04:18:986 (1,2,3) - 間距?

Hard

蠻多地方節奏不是很好...而且太跟歌詞了..感覺怪怪的...Orz

加油>~</
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

AngelHoney wrote:

Normal

02:12:407 (10) - 間距 fixed
03:11:749 (1) - 結束在 03:13:723 fixed
03:53:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 23和56 去掉 , 3個slider多一次折返? fixed
04:06:881 (3) - 間距 fixed
04:18:986 (1,2,3) - 間距? fixed

Hard

蠻多地方節奏不是很好...而且太跟歌詞了..感覺怪怪的...Orz
Q.Q人家对hard自信满满的说,如果说排列问题还能理解口牙

加油>~</
:)谢谢AHO酱
xinhe
STAR 8-)
hard to freeze
STAR+1
hez
hi~
good songs > <
yaya
第一次作图已经很棒了。
[Hard]的slider速度有点慢,打起来会比较无聊~可以改下
然后可以用一下这个音效,在SOFT的里面,音乐里也有,来试一下。Download: normal-hitclap.rar
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

yaya wrote:

第一次作图已经很棒了。
[Hard]的slider速度有点慢,打起来会比较无聊~可以改下
然后可以用一下这个音效,在SOFT的里面,音乐里也有,来试一下。[attachment=0:24fac]normal-hitclap.rar[/attachment:24fac]
Done!
Thanks yaya! :)
artpiggo
Hard
03:52:407 (2) - whistle

star
Sumisola
回star
ziin
Map's fine. The only errors I found were that a number of sliders aren't snapped right. Everything else is a suggestion, and the question marks are very iffy suggestions.

[general]
your video has audio and sucks. http://puu.sh/13w2 This will put you at 19 MB download, but it's a 4 minute song, so I don't think that's much of a problem.
A 4:23 length song will only get ranked on april 20th. Otherwise I think it's too long, and will probably only be approved. I think you should just start mapping here: 00:25:302 and let people skip the intro.

[hard]
01:13:855 - there's a cymbal crash here, and the drums are moving a lot. Could you map them? http://puu.sh/13ri Regardless of whether you follow that, you can put a clap on the end of 2. Also 1 and 2 aren't snapped right.
01:25:171 (3,1) - make 3 slide into 1.
01:26:092 (3,4) - this is a personal preference of mine, I don't like to have a slider end or slide over the long white tick. If you could split up 3 into circles it would be better. Put a new combo on the white tick, since you'll have removed the new one from before.
01:27:671 (8,1) - hmm, these aren't snapped right either. Recalculate slider lengths on the maps, but make sure you check afterwards, since you'll probably have to go through and fix a bunch because your sliders weren't made very well when you made them.
01:32:671 - this is a 2/4 measure. I think you need to reset the metronome at 01:33:723 -
01:33:986 (2,4) - I don't think repeating sliders are necessary.
01:47:407 (5) - ^ there's no note on the second beat either.
01:52:671 (6) - I don't think repeating slider is necessary
02:49:513 - this is another 2/4 measure. If you reset metronome before, you'll have to do it again.
02:53:986 (5,1) - circle slider circle
02:55:960 (6) - delete, I don't hear a note.
02:56:881 (1) - middle beat unnecessary, just make it a slider
02:58:197 (4) - slider into 5 maybe? The drumroll doesn't actually start until 6.
03:00:171 (4) - delete, I don't hear a note.
03:49:250 (5) - slider slides onto long white tick
03:51:618 (8) - probably needs new combo, and could be a slider.
03:53:723 (6) - new combo
03:55:302 (5) - new combo
04:03:197 (4) - I don't think repeating slider is necessary.
04:07:539 (5) - delete, I don't hear a note.
04:08:460 (2) - I don't think repeating slider is necessary.
04:09:776 (5) - slider into 6?
04:18:065 (3,5) - I don't hear anything here. Move to 04:17:802 - and 04:18:855 - where there's a snare drum hit.
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

ziin wrote:

Map's fine. The only errors I found were that a number of sliders aren't snapped right. Everything else is a suggestion, and the question marks are very iffy suggestions.

[general]
your video has audio and sucks. http://puu.sh/13w2 This will put you at 19 MB download, but it's a 4 minute song, so I don't think that's much of a problem.
A 4:23 length song will only get ranked on april 20th. Otherwise I think it's too long, and will probably only be approved. I think you should just start mapping here: 00:25:302 and let people skip the intro.

SPOILER
[hard]
01:13:855 - there's a cymbal crash here, and the drums are moving a lot. Could you map them? http://puu.sh/13ri Regardless of whether you follow that, you can put a clap on the end of 2. Also 1 and 2 aren't snapped right.
01:25:171 (3,1) - make 3 slide into 1.
01:26:092 (3,4) - this is a personal preference of mine, I don't like to have a slider end or slide over the long white tick. If you could split up 3 into circles it would be better. Put a new combo on the white tick, since you'll have removed the new one from before.
01:27:671 (8,1) - hmm, these aren't snapped right either. Recalculate slider lengths on the maps, but make sure you check afterwards, since you'll probably have to go through and fix a bunch because your sliders weren't made very well when you made them.
01:32:671 - this is a 2/4 measure. I think you need to reset the metronome at 01:33:723 -
01:33:986 (2,4) - I don't think repeating sliders are necessary.
01:47:407 (5) - ^ there's no note on the second beat either.
01:52:671 (6) - I don't think repeating slider is necessary
02:49:513 - this is another 2/4 measure. If you reset metronome before, you'll have to do it again.
02:53:986 (5,1) - circle slider circle
02:55:960 (6) - delete, I don't hear a note.
02:56:881 (1) - middle beat unnecessary, just make it a slider
02:58:197 (4) - slider into 5 maybe? The drumroll doesn't actually start until 6.
03:00:171 (4) - delete, I don't hear a note.
03:49:250 (5) - slider slides onto long white tick
03:51:618 (8) - probably needs new combo, and could be a slider.
03:53:723 (6) - new combo
03:55:302 (5) - new combo
04:03:197 (4) - I don't think repeating slider is necessary.
04:07:539 (5) - delete, I don't hear a note.
04:08:460 (2) - I don't think repeating slider is necessary.
04:09:776 (5) - slider into 6?
04:18:065 (3,5) - I don't hear anything here. Move to 04:17:802 - and 04:18:855 - where there's a snare drum hit
Thanks very much :)
CCHV-16
D触好我是弱B

hard
02:16:355 (1) - 左一格上一格
03:51:618 (1) - 这个NEW COMBO去了吧...
03:58:723 (2) - 这个滑条建议多拉一个reverse

normal
00:44:776 (4,5) - 前后距离调整到一样比较好?
01:01:092 (3,4) - 既然后面距离是1.0那么前面也调成1.0吧...
01:30:039 (2) - 下两格右一格
01:53:460 (1) - 距离1.0
02:07:407 (5) - 上移一格
02:08:460 (2) - normal这种跳是不是过了点...
02:18:460 (1) - 右移一格
02:46:881 (4,5) - 不明白为什么这两个NOTE的间距要和前面3个不一样
03:05:302 (5) - 下一格
03:11:355 (4) - 建议把当中的折返去掉
03:47:407 (4) - 右一格
04:00:565 (1,2) - 距离...
04:15:828 (3,1) - 为什么这里一团全是1.6间距这两个之间却要1.38
04:21:881 (5) - 虽说没什么问题但是总觉得这个NOTE的位置会很坑人...

最后总的问题,NORMAL不开DS,那么多2.0+甚至3.0+的跳给新手打起来真的没问题吗...

另外可以的话再把视频压一下,19MB似乎还是大了
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

CCHV-16 wrote:

D触好我是弱B
另外可以的话再把视频压一下,19MB似乎还是大了
:( 不压可以不 人家好不容易给我的video。。
还高清的。如果不想下视频直接下nv就可以了>.>
4分钟的歌还有video 挺清晰的,video还能控制在15MB左右就很好了。。
EDIT:修复了大部分的>.>
Xgor
[General]
  1. Remove the , in Tags. "Vocaloid Vocaloid2" is everything you need.

[Normal]
  1. Slider velocity felt very low considering the difficulty and it kinda makes the difficulty more boring.
  2. 01:46:355 (6) - New combo please.
  3. 02:08:460 (2,3) - Spacing like this is pretty confusing at the easiest difficulity and I think just using distance snap would be better here.
  4. 02:45:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - These patterns like this is also kinda bad on the easiest difficulty.
  5. 03:34:776 (2) - I know you just have to hold still to beat this but it's very cruel to make the slider looks the same as a another one but it's faster due to slider speed changes, Please just keep the same speed here.
  6. Why having a break in the middle of a guitar solo when you had a decently long break just before that, please just map it.


[Hard]
  1. This might sound like nothing but please lower the HP drain or the OD (I suggest the HP drain as it felt a bit high already) so the score lowers down to a more acceptable amount epically as this map isn't that hard to FC due to it's just a Hardish Hard that's very long.
  2. Kinda feels like the slider velocity should be higher or like there should be speed up's at the more intensive parts imo. I doubt you want to remap the whole map just for that though.
  3. 01:03:460 (7) - (Suggestion) Move 4 grids to the right and one grid up so it looks better (Level 4) (Also move 01:03:723 (8) 2 grids to the right if you do that)
  4. 03:28:460 - The slowdown here feels very unfitting as there is a somewhat intensive guitarsolo here and the background beats are as intensive as in the most of the other parts in the song. (The part after this (03:45:302) would make more sense to do a slowdown if anything.)

Ok Hard was pretty good, Normal kinda felt like it would need faster sliders and that it could decide if it's gonna be a Easy or a Normal rhythm wise.
*star*
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Xgor wrote:

[General]
  1. Remove the , in Tags. "Vocaloid Vocaloid2" is everything you need.
fixed~


[Normal]
  1. Slider velocity felt very low considering the difficulty and it kinda makes the difficulty more boring. All fixed~
  2. 01:46:355 (6) - New combo please. fixed~
  3. 02:08:460 (2,3) - Spacing like this is pretty confusing at the easiest difficulity and I think just using distance snap would be better here.slightly fixed
  4. 02:45:302 (1,2,3,4,5) - These patterns like this is also kinda bad on the easiest difficulty. :?
  5. 03:34:776 (2) - I know you just have to hold still to beat this but it's very cruel to make the slider looks the same as a another one but it's faster due to slider speed changes, Please just keep the same speed here. fixed~
  6. Why having a break in the middle of a guitar solo when you had a decently long break just before that, please just map it. fixed~

[Hard]
  1. This might sound like nothing but please lower the HP drain or the OD (I suggest the HP drain as it felt a bit high already) so the score lowers down to a more acceptable amount epically as this map isn't that hard to FC due to it's just a Hardish Hard that's very long. fixed~
  2. Kinda feels like the slider velocity should be higher or like there should be speed up's at the more intensive parts imo. I doubt you want to remap the whole map just for that though. :o remap...
  3. 01:03:460 (7) - (Suggestion) Move 4 grids to the right and one grid up so it looks better (Level 4) (Also move 01:03:723 (8) 2 grids to the right if you do that) fixed~
  4. 03:28:460 - The slowdown here feels very unfitting as there is a somewhat intensive guitarsolo here and the background beats are as intensive as in the most of the other parts in the song. (The part after this (03:45:302) would make more sense to do a slowdown if anything.)
fixed~


Ok Hard was pretty good, Normal kinda felt like it would need faster sliders and that it could decide if it's gonna be a Easy or a Normal rhythm wise.
*star*
thanks a lot~!
hsk4500
☆kira~
loveFantasy
你好

[Normal]
- 倒是個沒什麼問題的diff, 但總覺得SV和spacing都有點小氣, 去掉AR和OD不講還比較像Easy..
<00:08:460> (1) 起始的節點往下一格 (Grid level 3), 或 (6) 往上一格 (Grid level 4)
<00:14:250> (2) 不在 Grid 上, 開 Grid level 3 並把他的Y座標移到264吧
<00:16:355> (4) ^, 不確定你是想怎麼擺
<00:42:539> (T) 這邊開始, 感覺你的hitsound下的好隨機, 又有點小聲
<00:43:723> (3) 加clap
<00:47:934> (5) 加clap
<00:52:144> (2) whistle, (4) 改clap, (5) 改whistle
<01:00:039> (2,3) 這兩個真的好安靜阿
<01:22:144> (5,6,7,8) 突然改了spacing?
<01:34:776> (5) 好安靜..(3) 改 whistle, (5) 起點加clap, 終點加whistle
<02:01:881> (6,7,8) 也好安靜..最少在 (6) 的終點加clap
<02:32:671> (1~) 統一三連打的hitsound吧..看要用CNC還是NNC (N=Normal, C=Clap), 由於你02:41:092, 以及02:50:565後面的三連打都是用NNC, 我覺得用NNC就好
<02:35:039> (2) 刪除clap
<02:45:302> (1~) 整張圖只有這一個奇怪的spacing排列..有點突兀
<03:46:618> (3) 往下或往左一格 (Grid level 4)
<04:06:355> (1~5) 在這麼小的spacing的情況下, 不太喜歡這種stack呢
<04:18:460> (4) 往右一格 (Grid level 3)

[Hard]
<00:07:671> (4,5,6) 往右一格 (Grid level 3)
<00:08:197> (7) 位置有點怪, 要麼就在靠(6)的0.88x spacing, 要麼就靠(1)的0.92x spacing, 要麼擺中間..
<00:21:618> (1) 的結尾結點, whistle擺這裡, (2) 的hitsound去掉
<00:23:460> (7) hitsound去掉, (1) 加whistle, (2) 也去掉
<00:40:302> (1) 建議結尾結點的 whistle 去掉
<00:47:407> (1) 下一格 (Grid level 4), (6,7,8) 上一格 (Grid level 4)
<01:15:565> 至此為止, 這個段落的hitsound就很規律, 應該各段落的hitsound都要有這種規律感啊, 後面開始又有些看起來很隨機擺放的whistle了, 而且whistle的音效超明顯的, 有時一串combo出現幾個whistle, 下兩串又完全沒有, 打起來突兀
<01:16:881> 建議加note在此
<01:22:144> 建議把這串的 (4) (9) 加whistle, 拿掉clap
<01:37:407> (10) 改放whistle
<01:37:934> 這串的 (4) 和 (6) 的結尾點放whistle試試, (6) 往下一格 (Grid level 4)
<01:45:039> (4) 關掉grid snap並把他的X座標移到342
<01:59:513> 這裡開始的段落hitsound又好聽了..看來都是whistle的部分比較有問題XD
<02:07:407> (7) spacing一致?
<02:42:407> (5) 奇怪的spacing?
<02:46:618> (3) 關掉grid snap並把他的X座標移到138
<02:54:776> (1~6) 不確定你是不是想擺正六邊形, 不過它座標有偏
<03:01:618> (3) 往下一格 (Grid level 4)
<03:20:828> (2) (5) Y座標一致?
<04:04:513> (2) whistle移除, 改放到(3)的起始結點, (6) 加whistle
<04:06:881> (2) 加whistle, (3) 拿掉, (7) 加whistle
<04:08:197> (1) 拿掉, (7) 加whistle, 如果你打算採用我的建議, 後面基本遵照這個規則, 兩拍(白線)出現一個whistle, 一些想強調的點可以加, 像是<04:14:249>的(7)整條都是whistle, 但也不會不和諧. 還是列一下我認為應該有whistle的點:
<04:11:092> 拍點上
<04:12:144> ^
<04:13:197> ^
<04:16:355> ^
<04:17:407> ^
<04:17:934> ^
<04:18:460> ^
<04:18:986> all slider
<04:20:039> all slider
<04:21:618> 拍點上
<04:21:881> all slider
如果你要採用, 所有我沒列的點上出現的whistle都得刪除.

給star, 因為作為第一張圖感覺很不錯
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

loveFantasy wrote:

SPOILER
你好

[Normal]
- 倒是個沒什麼問題的diff, 但總覺得SV和spacing都有點小氣, 去掉AR和OD不講還比較像Easy..
<00:08:460> (1) 起始的節點往下一格 (Grid level 3), 或 (6) 往上一格 (Grid level 4)fixed
<00:14:250> (2) 不在 Grid 上, 開 Grid level 3 並把他的Y座標移到264吧 fixed
<00:16:355> (4) ^, 不確定你是想怎麼擺 fixed
<00:42:539> (T) 這邊開始, 感覺你的hitsound下的好隨機, 又有點小聲
<00:43:723> (3) 加clap fixed
<00:47:934> (5) 加clap fixed
<00:52:144> (2) whistle, (4) 改clap, (5) 改whistle fixed
<01:00:039> (2,3) 這兩個真的好安靜阿 fixed
<01:22:144> (5,6,7,8) 突然改了spacing? fixed
<01:34:776> (5) 好安靜..(3) 改 whistle, (5) 起點加clap, 終點加whistle fixed
<02:01:881> (6,7,8) 也好安靜..最少在 (6) 的終點加clap fixed
<02:32:671> (1~) 統一三連打的hitsound吧..看要用CNC還是NNC (N=Normal, C=Clap), 由於你02:41:092, 以及02:50:565後面的三連打都是用NNC, 我覺得用NNC就好 fixed
<02:35:039> (2) 刪除clap fixed
<02:45:302> (1~) 整張圖只有這一個奇怪的spacing排列..有點突兀 >.>
<03:46:618> (3) 往下或往左一格 (Grid level 4) fixed
<04:06:355> (1~5) 在這麼小的spacing的情況下, 不太喜歡這種stack呢 fixed
<04:18:460> (4) 往右一格 (Grid level 3) fixed

[Hard]
<00:07:671> (4,5,6) 往右一格 (Grid level 3) fixed
<00:08:197> (7) 位置有點怪, 要麼就在靠(6)的0.88x spacing, 要麼就靠(1)的0.92x spacing, 要麼擺中間.. fixed
<00:21:618> (1) 的結尾結點, whistle擺這裡, (2) 的hitsound去掉 fixed
<00:23:460> (7) hitsound去掉, (1) 加whistle, (2) 也去掉 fixed
<00:40:302> (1) 建議結尾結點的 whistle 去掉 fixed
<00:47:407> (1) 下一格 (Grid level 4), (6,7,8) 上一格 (Grid level 4) fixed
<01:15:565> 至此為止, 這個段落的hitsound就很規律, 應該各段落的hitsound都要有這種規律感啊, 後面開始又有些看起來很隨機擺放的whistle了, 而且whistle的音效超明顯的, 有時一串combo出現幾個whistle, 下兩串又完全沒有, 打起來突兀
<01:16:881> 建議加note在此 不了,真的不好听
<01:22:144> 建議把這串的 (4) (9) 加whistle, 拿掉clap fixed
<01:37:407> (10) 改放whistle fixed
<01:37:934> 這串的 (4) 和 (6) 的結尾點放whistle試試, (6) 往下一格 (Grid level 4) fixed
<01:45:039> (4) 關掉grid snap並把他的X座標移到342 fixed
<01:59:513> 這裡開始的段落hitsound又好聽了..看來都是whistle的部分比較有問題XD
<02:07:407> (7) spacing一致? fixed
<02:42:407> (5) 奇怪的spacing?
<02:46:618> (3) 關掉grid snap並把他的X座標移到138
<02:54:776> (1~6) 不確定你是不是想擺正六邊形, 不過它座標有偏 fixed<03:01:618> (3) 往下一格 (Grid level 4)
<03:20:828> (2) (5) Y座標一致? fixed
<04:04:513> (2) whistle移除, 改放到(3)的起始結點, (6) 加whistle fixed
<04:06:881> (2) 加whistle, (3) 拿掉, (7) 加whistle fixed
<04:08:197> (1) 拿掉, (7) 加whistle, 如果你打算採用我的建議, 後面基本遵照這個規則, 兩拍(白線)出現一個whistle, 一些想強調的點可以加, 像是<04:14:249>的(7)整條都是whistle, 但也不會不和諧. 還是列一下我認為應該有whistle的點:
<04:11:092> 拍點上
<04:12:144> ^
<04:13:197> ^
<04:16:355> ^
<04:17:407> ^
<04:17:934> ^
<04:18:460> ^
<04:18:986> all slider
<04:20:039> all slider
<04:21:618> 拍點上
<04:21:881> all slider
如果你要採用, 所有我沒列的點上出現的whistle都得刪除. All fixed

給star, 因為作為第一張圖感覺很不錯
Done~ Thanks a lot! :)
Kite
[General]
IMO the preview point is too late; move it a bit earlier?
Normal has letterboxes during break enable while the Hard diff doesn't; decide which one you want to change

[Normal]
02:47:605 (1) - Why is this spinner snapped to 1/8?
03:11:815 (1) - ^

[Overall]
Could use an Easy diff, as the spread would be better with it.
Other than that the mapset is great; good job!
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Kite wrote:

[General]
IMO the preview point is too late; move it a bit earlier?
Normal has letterboxes during break enable while the Hard diff doesn't; decide which one you want to change Fixed~

[Normal]
02:47:605 (1) - Why is this spinner snapped to 1/8? Ai mod tells me to do that>.>
03:11:815 (1) - ^ ^

[Overall]
Could use an Easy diff, as the spread would be better with it.
Other than that the mapset is great; good job!
touhou_64
star~
Axey
recheck

现在的标准貌似是3星最低 (?
原来是3.5 现在规定又变了貌似 不确定啊 你找外国bat问问吧=)

just suggestion

[Normal]
00:40:039(4)-add whistle
00:40:565(5)-add clap
00:41:618(6)-^
03:11:749(1)-?这个spinner没放在线上
EDIT:AImod太机械了..还是把spinner放在线上吧

[Hard]
no problem

nice map :3
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

BakaHuang wrote:

SPOILER
recheck

现在的标准貌似是3星最低 (?
原来是3.5 现在规定又变了貌似 不确定啊 你找外国bat问问吧=) 应该没事>.>

just suggestion

[Normal]
00:40:039(4)-add whistle Fixed
00:40:565(5)-add clap Fixed
00:41:618(6)-^ Fixed
03:11:749(1)-?这个spinner没放在线上 Fixed
EDIT:AImod太机械了..还是把spinner放在线上吧

[Hard]
no problem <3

nice map :3
Thx~ :3
_Kiva
神马这个居然没有3I不给力啊
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