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wmfchris
順帶提一點, distance spacing只是參考用, 沒說過1/4不能疊左一起啊 :3

[hard]
0:15:039 (4,5,6...) right 1 grid
0:35:828 (1) down 1 grid
0:42:144 (1,2) (1) left+down 1 grid, (2) down 1 grid
0:43:723 (4) up 1 grid
0:45:565 (2,3) spacing
1:26:618 (4,5,6...) left 1 grid
1:31:355 (9,10,11,12) left 1 grid
1:48:460 (2,3,5,6) spacing differs
1:50:039 (10,1,2) uneven spacing
....
spacing仍然有問題, 就算開了distance spacing, 每個1/2 spacing還是要一致, 不行的話看AI mod
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

karenying wrote:

check spacing again plz
spacing很亂
...不如重排下
開着distance snapping重排...需要JUMP時按Alt排
BPM 不高也不低 , distance spacing 調1.0x剛剛好
排好了 PM我 , 我再mod
fixed
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

wmfchris wrote:

順帶提一點, distance spacing只是參考用, 沒說過1/4不能疊左一起啊 :3

[hard]
0:15:039 (4,5,6...) right 1 grid
0:35:828 (1) down 1 grid
0:42:144 (1,2) (1) left+down 1 grid, (2) down 1 grid
0:43:723 (4) up 1 grid
0:45:565 (2,3) spacing
1:26:618 (4,5,6...) left 1 grid
1:31:355 (9,10,11,12) left 1 grid
1:48:460 (2,3,5,6) spacing differs
1:50:039 (10,1,2) uneven spacing fixed
....
spacing仍然有問題, 就算開了distance spacing, 每個1/2 spacing還是要一致, 不行的話看AI mod
:3 thx~
Kotone
Relax
這diff spacing还是不行啊...
00:24:513(4) - spacing
00:53:986(4) - ^
01:34:644(1,2,3,4) - ^ (這4個notes spacing應該一樣
02:33:723(4) - ^
02:37:934(4) - ^
02:46:355(2) - ^
03:10:302(1) - ^
03:57:407(4) - ^
04:07:407(5) - ^
04:09:249(5) - ^
04:18:986(1) - ^

Hard
音效不給力
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

karenying wrote:

Relax
這diff spacing还是不行啊... 我把relax diff忘了。。
00:24:513(4) - spacing
00:53:986(4) - ^
01:34:644(1,2,3,4) - ^ (這4個notes spacing應該一樣
02:33:723(4) - ^
02:37:934(4) - ^
02:46:355(2) - ^
03:10:302(1) - ^
03:57:407(4) - ^
04:07:407(5) - ^
04:09:249(5) - ^
04:18:986(1) - ^

Hard
音效不給力 求教如何给力
All fixed
Kotone

ddddd519 wrote:

求教如何给力
hitclap不好聽...

OK mod hitsound when I finish my work :3
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

karenying wrote:

ddddd519 wrote:

求教如何给力
hitclap不好聽...

OK mod hitsound when I finish my work :3
thx~
Kotone
Hard
HP/AR/OD+2

1.一串串hitclap實在不好聽

Vikon wrote:

最簡單而好聽的hitclap落法 : 每2條白線落一clap,然後不斷重覆這pattern就可以了。
ps. 01:26:618 (4) - 不過這里2個clap很好聽

2.whistle很好聽,基本不用改

試着把hitsound改至01:32:407
你可以看看,參考着改
IceBeam
[Relax]
00:04:249 (1,2,3) - It's so close,and suddenly jumping to 00:08:460 (1).You have to fix distance.
00:40:828 (3) - Too close.
02:53:723 (4) - Stack or make something like with next ones.
03:10:828 (2,3,4) - You must have some distance between (1) and this pattern.

[Hard]
00:37:934 (1) - Fix distance,place further.
03:45:302 (x) - Isn't it better for 0.5x Timing Section?

Relax is kinda boring,maybe because of way too slow sliders,but Hard is fine.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

karenying wrote:

Hard
HP/AR/OD+2 fixed

1.一串串hitclap實在不好聽

Vikon wrote:

最簡單而好聽的hitclap落法 : 每2條白線落一clap,然後不斷重覆這pattern就可以了。
我按照這個改改看好了
ps. 01:26:618 (4) - 不過這里2個clap很好聽

2.whistle很好聽,基本不用改

試着把hitsound改至01:32:407
你可以看看,參考着改
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

SadKangaroo wrote:

[Relax]
00:04:249 (1,2,3) - It's so close,and suddenly jumping to 00:08:460 (1).You have to fix distance. fixed
00:40:828 (3) - Too close. fixed
02:53:723 (4) - Stack or make something like with next ones. fixed
03:10:828 (2,3,4) - You must have some distance between (1) and this pattern. fixed

[Hard]
00:37:934 (1) - Fix distance,place further. fixed
03:45:302 (x) - Isn't it better for 0.5x Timing Section? not better..it will be too slow

Relax is kinda boring,maybe because of way too slow sliders,but Hard is fine.
Good luck.
:) thx~
Sandpig
个人看法,仅供参考

HARD

00:23:723 感觉需要一个circle
00:37:934 距离有点迷惑,或许可以在00:37:671加一个circle,然后00:37:934到00:38:197用一个slider
00:53:197 尝试互换一下1、2的位置
01:18:723 距离问题
01:31:092 这个circle前移1/4拍感觉好点,再调整一下距离

后面总体来说没什么问题

RELAX

00:35:828 这里有点紧密了
00:46:881 5、6离slider太近了
01:03:723 同上,有遮挡关系会让人误认为是连打
02:19:249 同一类问题,这里显得有点远了
02:20:565 其实这里也可以近一点的
02:46:355 做成三角形吧,距离大一点>_<
02:50:565 这里开始稍微考虑一下Stack Lenienc的影响吧,有点不好看,呵呵
03:59:776 这里的三个1往前移半拍,你要考虑打图的人可能没听过这个歌,所以不要太多的按照歌词来做……

后面有些小距离问题最好调整一下

star 加油
kuyukiP
Recheck time. :) Thanks for calling me out!

General
Is it just me or is there still a black background when playing? Maybe I just haven't re-downloaded in a while.


Relax
-00:08:460 (1) : Perhaps try to make this slider shaped like the one before? (At 00:05:302)
-01:33:723 (1) : Kiai Time?

Hard
-02:38:197 (4) : One grid space down.
-04:10:565 (10) : Kiai Time?
- Consider mapping after the last spinner?

Amazing improvement since the last time. Hard definitely better, Relax could use better shaped sliders. Otherwise, really good.
Already starred this ;D
Garven
As per your request:

[General]
Remove miku, kaito, and luka from the tags. They're all in the artist anyway. :P
If you can, try to remove the audio from the video to save a little bit of space.
Before you start asking for BATs, make sure that you remove the .osb file in your song's folder and do a full resubmission.
If you'd like, please check my user page for some general mapping tips (mostly concerned with distance snap here)

[Relax]
00:16:881 (1) - Maybe position this so the end of it isn't colliding with the 00:14:776 (2) - ?
00:18:986 (2,3) - These are too close together.
00:20:039 (3) - Move the middle slider point left and up one grid. This will line up the end points and look nicer.
00:36:355 (2) - Too close. >< Move up please
Hrm, there seem to be a lot of spacing inconsistencies here. Perhaps start using distance snap as a guide so that your note spacing has a lot more uniformity to it. I'm not saying to use it at all times - just where it makes sense to keep your map's flow good.
01:00:039 (2) - Short curved sliders like this kind of look ugly. If you're going to use a short slider, just make it straight or make the curve much less sharp.
01:20:039 (1) - Hrm, considering what you did just before this, maybe do a single hit here, then a slider from 01:20:565 - to 01:20:960 - ?
01:48:460 (1,1,1,1) - With such a low HP drain, I don't think all these new combos are needed.
01:59:513 (1) - This is a bit too soon after a spinner for such a difficulty. Maybe end the spinner at 01:57:144 - and map a beat at 01:58:986 - ?
02:01:881 (4,5) - Hrm, these don't look so good to me
02:38:986 (1,1,1,1) - New combo thing again, hehe
02:52:934 (1,2,3,4) - Try repositioning these down and to the left. The way osu! stacks these makes it really far away from where they would normally appear.
02:55:039 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:57:144 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:59:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:30:565 (2,1) - Kind of a far jump for this type of difficulty.
03:59:776 (1,1,1) - New combos. -_-
04:16:881 (1,1,1,1) - ^
04:22:407 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
00:07:802 - Expected a note here
00:53:197 (1,2) - This jump felt unjustified/a bit too extreme for my liking.
01:32:144 (12) - Might sound better if you silenced the end of the slider.

Yeah, give a lot more attention to your Relax difficulty. And in general, both maps feel artificially slow compared to the song. I'd like to suggest that you increase the slider velocity a little on both, but that's a lot of remapping to do, hehe.
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Remove miku, kaito, and luka from the tags. They're all in the artist anyway. :P
If you can, try to remove the audio from the video to save a little bit of space.
Before you start asking for BATs, make sure that you remove the .osb file in your song's folder and do a full resubmission.
If you'd like, please check my user page for some general mapping tips (mostly concerned with distance snap here)

[Relax]
00:16:881 (1) - Maybe position this so the end of it isn't colliding with the 00:14:776 (2) - ?
00:18:986 (2,3) - These are too close together.
00:20:039 (3) - Move the middle slider point left and up one grid. This will line up the end points and look nicer.
00:36:355 (2) - Too close. >< Move up please
Hrm, there seem to be a lot of spacing inconsistencies here. Perhaps start using distance snap as a guide so that your note spacing has a lot more uniformity to it. I'm not saying to use it at all times - just where it makes sense to keep your map's flow good.
01:00:039 (2) - Short curved sliders like this kind of look ugly. If you're going to use a short slider, just make it straight or make the curve much less sharp.
01:20:039 (1) - Hrm, considering what you did just before this, maybe do a single hit here, then a slider from 01:20:565 - to 01:20:960 - ?
01:48:460 (1,1,1,1) - With such a low HP drain, I don't think all these new combos are needed.
01:59:513 (1) - This is a bit too soon after a spinner for such a difficulty. Maybe end the spinner at 01:57:144 - and map a beat at 01:58:986 - ?
02:01:881 (4,5) - Hrm, these don't look so good to me
02:38:986 (1,1,1,1) - New combo thing again, hehe
02:52:934 (1,2,3,4) - Try repositioning these down and to the left. The way osu! stacks these makes it really far away from where they would normally appear.
02:55:039 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:57:144 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:59:250 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
03:30:565 (2,1) - Kind of a far jump for this type of difficulty.
03:59:776 (1,1,1) - New combos. -_-
04:16:881 (1,1,1,1) - ^
04:22:407 (1) - Remove new combo

[Hard]
00:07:802 - Expected a note here
00:53:197 (1,2) - This jump felt unjustified/a bit too extreme for my liking.
01:32:144 (12) - Might sound better if you silenced the end of the slider.

Yeah, give a lot more attention to your Relax difficulty. And in general, both maps feel artificially slow compared to the song. I'd like to suggest that you increase the slider velocity a little on both, but that's a lot of remapping to do, hehe.

All fixed thx ~ :)
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

- Add some tags
- Add Kiai Time?

[Relax]
Check AIMOD (spacing)
Use Large Size Circles
01:11:355 (5) - extend this slider to end at 01:13:855 (although i dont like it ending on a blue tick...it sounds alot better)
01:15:828 (1) - extend this slider to end at 01:17:144
01:57:407 - remove this break

[Hard]
There are some notes that would look alot better if properly stacked (00:13:737 (3,4) <--- notes like these)
03:33:460 (3) - add a few more repeats to end this slider at 03:33:986
03:34:249 (x) - add a note here (with clap)


~STAR (lol i like the vid) GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey.

- Add some tags em....
- Add Kiai Time? no kiai time,it hurts my eyes :(

[Relax]
Check AIMOD (spacing)
Use Large Size Circles fixed
01:11:355 (5) - extend this slider to end at 01:13:855 (although i dont like it ending on a blue tick...it sounds alot better) fixed
01:15:828 (1) - extend this slider to end at 01:17:144 fixed
01:57:407 - remove this break fixed

[Hard]
There are some notes that would look alot better if properly stacked (00:13:737 (3,4) <--- notes like these)
03:33:460 (3) - add a few more repeats to end this slider at 03:33:986 not sound better
03:34:249 (x) - add a note here (with clap) fixed


~STAR (lol i like the vid) GOOD LUCK!
thx~ :)
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

shabao_pig wrote:

个人看法,仅供参考

HARD

00:23:723 感觉需要一个circle fixed
00:37:934 距离有点迷惑,或许可以在00:37:671加一个circle,然后00:37:934到00:38:197用一个slider fixed
00:53:197 尝试互换一下1、2的位置 fixed
01:18:723 距离问题 fixed
01:31:092 这个circle前移1/4拍感觉好点,再调整一下距离 不要>_>

后面总体来说没什么问题

RELAX

00:35:828 这里有点紧密了fixed
00:46:881 5、6离slider太近了 fixed
01:03:723 同上,有遮挡关系会让人误认为是连打 fixed 连打什么的。Easy难度怎么会有>.<
02:19:249 同一类问题,这里显得有点远了 ^
02:20:565 其实这里也可以近一点的 视觉差错嘛>_>
02:46:355 做成三角形吧,距离大一点>_< fixed
02:50:565 这里开始稍微考虑一下Stack Lenienc的影响吧,有点不好看,呵呵fixed
03:59:776 这里的三个1往前移半拍,你要考虑打图的人可能没听过这个歌,所以不要太多的按照歌词来做……fixed

后面有些小距离问题最好调整一下 fixed
star 加油

kuyukiP wrote:

Recheck time. :) Thanks for calling me out!

General
Is it just me or is there still a black background when playing? Maybe I just haven't re-downloaded in a while.


Relax
-00:08:460 (1) : Perhaps try to make this slider shaped like the one before? (At 00:05:302) fixed
-01:33:723 (1) : Kiai Time? fixed

Hard
-02:38:197 (4) : One grid space down. fixed
-04:10:565 (10) : Kiai Time? fixed
- Consider mapping after the last spinner? not better,I think

Amazing improvement since the last time. Hard definitely better, Relax could use better shaped sliders. Otherwise, really good.
Already starred this ;D
:) thx
ZLOdeuka-
[ General ]

in some places very much want to see Kiai time...

[ Relax ]

(✹) Slider Tick Rate = 1 . beautiful sounds

(✹) 01:11:355 - slider finish here ~ 01:11:881. spiner start here 01:12:144 and finish 01:15:302

(✹) 01:17:934(3) can do the same as the slider and 2 combo 01:15:828?

(✹) 01:24:249 (1) Make slide smoother. does not looks nice

(✹) 02:28:460(4) - take away the slider and put the Circle. and start the spinner here 02:28:986 and finish 02:32:144
(✹) 04:05:828 Add Circle

[ Hard ]

fine..~

I like this map...~STAR
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[ General ]

in some places very much want to see Kiai time...

[ Relax ]

(✹) Slider Tick Rate = 1 . beautiful sounds

(✹) 01:11:355 - slider finish here ~ 01:11:881. spiner start here 01:12:144 and finish 01:15:302

(✹) 01:17:934(3) can do the same as the slider and 2 combo 01:15:828?

(✹) 01:24:249 (1) Make slide smoother. does not looks nice

(✹) 02:28:460(4) - take away the slider and put the Circle. and start the spinner here 02:28:986 and finish 02:32:144
(✹) 04:05:828 Add Circle

[ Hard ]

fine..~

I like this map...~STAR

All fixed. Thx very much :)
Kensei Akio
⑨ 最強!
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
需要加slider上拍子的whistle音的时候,不要点slider加,这样会把滑动音也改掉,记得一个一个点音去加,这样的情况比较多,建议彻底查一遍。例00:51:092 (1) @ [Normal]
作曲KurousaP,写进source,然后vocaloid和vocaloid2进tags.

[Relax]
按照惯例也好语法也好,应该叫Relaxing,或者Normal就好
OD+1.
这个难度的spacing,显得有些混乱,我不确定自己点全了,建议彻查。
00:20:039 (3,1) - 比如这里。
00:39:513 (4,1) - 更远。
00:42:144 (3,1,2) - 没有违和感吗。。
00:51:092 (1,2) - 再比如。
01:33:723 (1,2,3) - 这一串小到几乎可以看成1/2了。
01:51:355 (2,4,5) - 实际玩起来时这里很难看,建议到song setup - advanced 里把stack leniency拉低一点再看。
02:17:671 (4,1) - 。。
02:24:776 (1,2,3) - 完全混乱。请看右上角的spacing.
中段的效果不错不过我怀疑有人会大力反对。
03:28:460 (1,2,1,2) - spacing
整体评价是:和Hard比我觉得实在是没用心。

[Hard]
00:53:197 (1,2) - 间距超出理解,音阶变化不大,也没有什么前兆,我觉得在1.5x以内还好说,2x+有点大了。
01:12:144 (8,1) - spacing.
01:48:723 (3,4,5) - 把它们右一格,虽然其实是你两边间距不等。。但重叠效果后这么摆不错。
02:01:618 (1,2) - 同样是不太能理解的跳。
04:05:565 (4,1) - 建议放远,现在容易理解为1/2
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
需要加slider上拍子的whistle音的时候,不要点slider加,这样会把滑动音也改掉,记得一个一个点音去加,这样的情况比较多,建议彻底查一遍。例00:51:092 (1) @ [Normal] fixed
作曲KurousaP,写进source,然后vocaloid和vocaloid2进tags. fixed

[Relax]
按照惯例也好语法也好,应该叫Relaxing,或者Normal就好 fixed
OD+1. fixed
这个难度的spacing,显得有些混乱,我不确定自己点全了,建议彻查。
00:20:039 (3,1) - 比如这里。 感觉没问题的说。。
00:39:513 (4,1) - 更远。 fixed
00:42:144 (3,1,2) - 没有违和感吗。。 fixed
00:51:092 (1,2) - 再比如。 fixed
01:33:723 (1,2,3) - 这一串小到几乎可以看成1/2了。 fixed
01:51:355 (2,4,5) - 实际玩起来时这里很难看,建议到song setup - advanced 里把stack leniency拉低一点再看。 fixed
02:17:671 (4,1) - 。。 fixed
02:24:776 (1,2,3) - 完全混乱。请看右上角的spacing. fixed
中段的效果不错不过我怀疑有人会大力反对。
03:28:460 (1,2,1,2) - spacing fixed
整体评价是:和Hard比我觉得实在是没用心。 :o

[Hard]
00:53:197 (1,2) - 间距超出理解,音阶变化不大,也没有什么前兆,我觉得在1.5x以内还好说,2x+有点大了。 fixed
01:12:144 (8,1) - spacing. :? 有距离问题嘛?
01:48:723 (3,4,5) - 把它们右一格,虽然其实是你两边间距不等。。但重叠效果后这么摆不错。 fixed
02:01:618 (1,2) - 同样是不太能理解的跳。 fixed
04:05:565 (4,1) - 建议放远,现在容易理解为1/2 fixed
谢谢Rin酱~
James2250
-Pretty nazi mod but take from it what you want~
-Make the preview point is the same on both difficulties
-Do you need both of these (Vocaloid,Vocaloid2) in tags?
-There are too many short breaks, get rid of most of them and put 2-3 longer breaks in the map (it is annoying to have a break every 20 seconds etc)

Relaxing:
For the parts where it is basically just the singer and no background music, whistles would sound nicer than claps (example 02:16:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)) --- try and go through and fix that on all the places
Try and follow 1 distance snap on the easiest difficulty, or else it is confusing for example 00:53:986 (4,5) and 00:59:513 (1,2) should be the same distance apart
For the easiest difficulty you should fix most of the errors that AIMod points out
00:04:249 (1) - add finish
00:05:302 (2) - add finish to the end (doesn't sound good with whistle on slider either) also both sliders would look better being symmetrical
00:08:460 (4) - ^ (add finish to the start, clap to the end) -- not going to list all the places but there are alot of places in the map that finishes work
00:12:671 (1) - add finish to start
00:12:671 (1,2,1,2,3) - add claps to this part
00:21:092 (1,2,3) - whistles on sliders don't fit
00:33:723 (1) - add finish to the start (and any others like this) ---not going to point them all out
00:33:723 (1,2,3,4) - make sure spacing stays equal
00:36:881 (3) - add clap to the end to match other one?
01:07:934 (1) - sliders like this could be more symmetrical
Spacing between 01:22:144 (4,1) and 01:24:250 (1,2,3,4) should be the same
01:30:565 (1) - would sound better with a silenced ending
01:58:986 (1,3) - don't have stuff like this overlap
02:53:723 (4,1,2,3,4) - don't have any of this overlap
Dont have 2 breaks around 1 note 03:20:039 (1)
03:45:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - same things that was mentioned before with changing claps to whistles on the quieter parts of the song (and continues from here)
04:14:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - whistle spam doesn't sound good
Best thing to do for this difficulty is go through the entire thing with 1 distance snap and makes sure everything its snapped (unless the jumps really fit), and adjust some hitsounds so they fit the song more

Hard:
AR + 1
Not going to point them all out but all of the whistles get annoying after a while, try and keep a steady rhythm with claps and remove alot of the whistles
00:13:723 (3,4) - stack stuff like this? (unless you want it like this go through and check them in the rest of the map)
00:42:144 (1,2) - align?
01:01:618 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:144 (8,1) - don't have anti jumps
03:19:513 (1,2) - again don't do this

Prefer Hard alot more, but after some polishing the maps won't look too bad~
PM me after fixes and I will star
nonoh_old
:)
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

James2250 wrote:

-Pretty nazi mod but take from it what you want~
-Make the preview point is the same on both difficulties
-Do you need both of these (Vocaloid,Vocaloid2) in tags?
-There are too many short breaks, get rid of most of them and put 2-3 longer breaks in the map (it is annoying to have a break every 20 seconds etc)

Relaxing:
For the parts where it is basically just the singer and no background music, whistles would sound nicer than claps (example 02:16:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7)) --- try and go through and fix that on all the places
Try and follow 1 distance snap on the easiest difficulty, or else it is confusing for example 00:53:986 (4,5) and 00:59:513 (1,2) should be the same distance apart
For the easiest difficulty you should fix most of the errors that AIMod points out
00:04:249 (1) - add finish
00:05:302 (2) - add finish to the end (doesn't sound good with whistle on slider either) also both sliders would look better being symmetrical
00:08:460 (4) - ^ (add finish to the start, clap to the end) -- not going to list all the places but there are alot of places in the map that finishes work
00:12:671 (1) - add finish to start
00:12:671 (1,2,1,2,3) - add claps to this part
00:21:092 (1,2,3) - whistles on sliders don't fit
00:33:723 (1) - add finish to the start (and any others like this) ---not going to point them all out
00:33:723 (1,2,3,4) - make sure spacing stays equal
00:36:881 (3) - add clap to the end to match other one?
01:07:934 (1) - sliders like this could be more symmetrical
Spacing between 01:22:144 (4,1) and 01:24:250 (1,2,3,4) should be the same
01:30:565 (1) - would sound better with a silenced ending
01:58:986 (1,3) - don't have stuff like this overlap
02:53:723 (4,1,2,3,4) - don't have any of this overlap
Dont have 2 breaks around 1 note 03:20:039 (1) The breaks add automatically..
03:45:302 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - same things that was mentioned before with changing claps to whistles on the quieter parts of the song (and continues from here)
04:14:776 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - whistle spam doesn't sound good
Best thing to do for this difficulty is go through the entire thing with 1 distance snap and makes sure everything its snapped (unless the jumps really fit), and adjust some hitsounds so they fit the song more

Hard:
AR + 1
Not going to point them all out but all of the whistles get annoying after a while, try and keep a steady rhythm with claps and remove alot of the whistles
00:13:723 (3,4) - stack stuff like this? (unless you want it like this go through and check them in the rest of the map)
00:42:144 (1,2) - align?
01:01:618 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:144 (8,1) - don't have anti jumps
03:19:513 (1,2) - again don't do this

Prefer Hard alot more, but after some polishing the maps won't look too bad~
PM me after fixes and I will star
All fixed.
thx for mod :)
thekillerhjkhjk
[hard]
03:32:667 (1,2,3) - snap these notes to 1/3 beat spacing to fit the guitar

[relaxing]
03:45:302-03:59:776 the hitsounds are too loud here, take them down 2-3 ticks?

thats all, starring
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

[hard]
03:32:667 (1,2,3) - snap these notes to 1/3 beat spacing to fit the guitar

[relaxing]
03:45:302-03:59:776 the hitsounds are too loud here, take them down 2-3 ticks?

thats all, starring
thx for modding :) All fixed
eveless
[general]
acute2.jpg的2去掉...别2啊1都没有
MP3剪过?中间感觉好奇怪
绿线提前尽量要对线...而且绿线提前是为了防止打快..提前那么点没什么用吧...

[Hard]
00:05:697 (x) - 加note
00:47:407 - 给我个这边break的理由
01:04:249 - ^ 之后的各种break...可以自己打节奏
01:17:934 (7) - new combo
01:18:460 - 加note
02:11:092 - ^
02:24:249 - ^
03:20:039 (2) - 前移到红线

[Relaxing]
自己开AIMOD看spacing 高难度就算了。低难度要保证spacing不出问题
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

eveless wrote:

[general]
acute2.jpg的2去掉...别2啊1都没有 >_>不要在意细节。。
MP3剪过?中间感觉好奇怪 没有剪过0.0
绿线提前尽量要对线...而且绿线提前是为了防止打快..提前那么点没什么用吧... fixed
[Hard]
00:05:697 (x) - 加note fixed
00:47:407 - 给我个这边break的理由fixed
01:04:249 - ^ 之后的各种break...可以自己打节奏fixed
01:17:934 (7) - new combofixed
01:18:460 - 加notefixed
02:11:092 - ^fixed
02:24:249 - ^fixed
03:20:039 (2) - 前移到红线fixed

[Relaxing]
自己开AIMOD看spacing 高难度就算了。低难度要保证spacing不出问题
thx eve :)
kanpakyin
=v=來mod
---------------------------------
紅色=我覺得你應該要修改
藍色=意見而已
(之前都是用英語來mod...希望用中文不要有甚麼以外把-v-)

[Relaxing]
00:05:275(2)雖然說是easy..但我覺得spacing問題也要重視
00:08:438(4)^
00:40:059(1)向左移1格(grid)
01:24:259(1)向下移1格
01:30:074(2)把whistle除掉

Hard也沒什麼大問題
就這樣...
star~
Disoy
首先,你有些綠線加在note上綠線除了KIAI以外是要加在note前的
[Relaxing]
00:47:144 (6) - 改成長點的slider?
00:54:513 (5) - 同上or把在00:55:302改成長的slider? 後續一樣的省略...
01:43:723 (2) - 加個hitclap?
01:45:828 (4) - ^
02:50:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這是低難度的出現這個有點不好..
03:28:460 (1) - 這裡用hitwhistle有點不適合,不然你可以分別再slider的頭跟尾加上hitwhsitle而不要一整條加
03:32:671 (1) - ^
03:36:881 (1) - hitwhistle換成hitfinish?
03:53:197 (5) - 加個hitclap?

[Hard]
這難度除了hitwhistle多了點造成有點吵以外..本身是沒問題的^ ^
02:08:986 (4) - 下移一格
03:19:513 (1,2,3) - 這裡的3個circle要不要把它變成3角形的這樣比較好看
04:17:671 (5) - 這裡new combo
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

kanpakyin wrote:

=v=來mod
---------------------------------
紅色=我覺得你應該要修改
藍色=意見而已
(之前都是用英語來mod...希望用中文不要有甚麼以外把-v-)

[Relaxing]
00:05:275(2)雖然說是easy..但我覺得spacing問題也要重視 fixed
00:08:438(4)^fixed
00:40:059(1)向左移1格(grid)fixed
01:24:259(1)向下移1格fixed
01:30:074(2)把whistle除掉fixed

Hard也沒什麼大問題
就這樣...
star~

Disoy wrote:

首先,你有些綠線加在note上綠線除了KIAI以外是要加在note前的 0.0 懂了,等会改掉

[Relaxing]
00:47:144 (6) - 改成長點的slider? fixed
00:54:513 (5) - 同上or把在00:55:302改成長的slider? 後續一樣的省略...fixed
01:43:723 (2) - 加個hitclap?fixed
01:45:828 (4) - ^fixed
02:50:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這是低難度的出現這個有點不好..等会试着加点距离>_>
03:28:460 (1) - 這裡用hitwhistle有點不適合,不然你可以分別再slider的頭跟尾加上hitwhsitle而不要一整條加fixed
03:32:671 (1) - ^fixed
03:36:881 (1) - hitwhistle換成hitfinish?fixed
03:53:197 (5) - 加個hitclap?fixed

[Hard]
這難度除了hitwhistle多了點造成有點吵以外..本身是沒問題的^ ^
02:08:986 (4) - 下移一格fixed
03:19:513 (1,2,3) - 這裡的3個circle要不要把它變成3角形的這樣比較好看
fixed
04:17:671 (5) - 這裡new combofixed
:) thanks a lot!
Fapfrit
Modding:

General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9) of all diffs

Timing:
Good

Relaxing:
00:08:460 (4) - new combo
00:56:486 - add break time
01:19:513 - add short slider
01:37:407 - add a circle
02:28:986 (spinner) - start this on 02:28:723. finished - 02:32:144
02:47:539-02:49:513 - add spinner
03:34:644 (Timing Setup Panel): add new timing (1,3x). then 03:34:776 (2) - add 1 repeat. shortened this slider a bit. should get 4 repeats. don't understand - PM
04:21:881 (1) - delete new combo
<sound>
W - Whistle. E - Finish. R - Clap
00:07:407 - R
00:11:092 - R
00:14:249 - R
00:14:776 - delete R
00:46:355 - R
00:51:092 - R
00:55:302 - R
00:56:355 - R
01:00:039 - R
01:07:934 - R
01:15:828 - R
01:17:407 - W
01:17:671 - W
01:17:934 - R
01:28:460 - R
01:36:881 - R
01:37:407 - E
01:37:934 - delete R
01:39:515 - R
01:40:039 - delete R
01:46:618 - R
01:47:671 - R
01:51:355 - W
01:52:671 - E
01:53:460 - R
02:02:934 - R
02:03:197 - delete R
02:04:249 - E
02:12:144 - delete R
02:16:881 - R
02:17:671 - R
02:18:460 - R
02:19:776 - R
02:20:828 - W+E
02:24:776 - R
02:25:828 - W+R
02:27:144 - R
02:28:460 - E
02:33:723 - delete R
02:33:986 - R
02:34:250 - delete R
02:34:776 - delete R
02:36:881 - delete R
02:37:144 - R
02:37:407 - delete R
02:42:144 - R
02:43:197 - delete R
02:43:986 - delete R
02:49:644 - R
02:50:828 - delete R
02:51:092 - delete R
02:51:618 - delete R
02:53:460 - R
02:53:723 - R
02:55:565 - delete R
02:57:407 - R
02:57:934 - R
oh shi, I'm tired of writing. seriously. if you want soundmod - write to queue

Hard:
- HP Drain -1
00:09:249 (3,4) - spaicing
00:58:986 (9) - add a circle
01:30:960 (8) - add a circle
01:31:092 (9) - delete circle
01:31:355 (10) - move on 01:31:223
01:31:618 (11,12) - move on 01:31:486
01:37:407 (10) - add a sircle
01:43:723 (8) - add a sircle
01:50:565 (2,4) - lol, this sliders asymmetrical. Ctrl+C on #2 and ctrl+V on #4
02:00:302 (2,3) - spaicing
02:28:986 (6) - spaicing. move out from slider
02:45:302 (1,2) - spaicing
02:47:671 (spinner) - start at 02:47:539, finish - 02:49:513
02:56:355 (9) - add a sircle (deathstream - yes)
03:00:565 (7) - add a sircle
03:19:513 (1,2,3) - asymmetrical. and made three color combos for the characters: #1 - dark blue. #2 - red. #3 - blue. Kawaii~
03:32:671 (5) - new combo
03:36:881 (3) - new combo
03:37:407 (1) - delete new combo
03:47:144 (1) - delete new combo
03:47:407 (3) - new combo

Awesome map O_O Big Star
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Famfrit wrote:

Modding:

General:
- I would have reduced the stack (4/9) of all diffs

Timing:
Good

Relaxing:
00:08:460 (4) - new combo
00:56:486 - add break time
01:19:513 - add short slider
01:37:407 - add a circle
02:28:986 (spinner) - start this on 02:28:723. finished - 02:32:144
02:47:539-02:49:513 - add spinner
03:34:644 (Timing Setup Panel): add new timing (1,3x). then 03:34:776 (2) - add 1 repeat. shortened this slider a bit. should get 4 repeats. don't understand - PM
04:21:881 (1) - delete new combo
<sound>
W - Whistle. E - Finish. R - Clap

Hard:
- HP Drain -1 I want to give score.
00:09:249 (3,4) - spaicing
00:58:986 (9) - add a circle
01:30:960 (8) - add a circle
01:31:092 (9) - delete circle
01:31:355 (10) - move on 01:31:223
01:31:618 (11,12) - move on 01:31:486
01:37:407 (10) - add a sircle
01:43:723 (8) - add a sircle
01:50:565 (2,4) - lol, this sliders asymmetrical. Ctrl+C on #2 and ctrl+V on #4
02:00:302 (2,3) - spaicing
02:28:986 (6) - spaicing. move out from slider
02:45:302 (1,2) - spaicing
02:47:671 (spinner) - start at 02:47:539, finish - 02:49:513
02:56:355 (9) - add a sircle (deathstream - yes)
03:00:565 (7) - add a sircle
03:19:513 (1,2,3) - asymmetrical. and made three color combos for the characters: #1 - dark blue. #2 - red. #3 - blue. Kawaii~
03:32:671 (5) - new combo
03:36:881 (3) - new combo
03:37:407 (1) - delete new combo
03:47:144 (1) - delete new combo
03:47:407 (3) - new combo

Awesome map O_O Big Star
thx for modding. :) All fixed
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. 视频么有消音啊...这个需要消掉音乐的
[Hard]:
  1. 00:37:934 (1) - 末尾clap
  2. 01:41:618 (1,2,3,4) - spacing 以1结束的地方为基准
  3. 01:43:328 (5) - 删去
  4. 02:07:934 (1) - 末尾clap移除
  5. 02:08:986 (4) - 起始clap
  6. 02:10:039 (1) - 末尾clap移除
  7. 02:11:092 (3) - clap
  8. 02:13:197 (1) - 起始clap
  9. 02:16:355 (1) - 末尾clap移除
  10. 02:17:407 (3) - clap
  11. 02:17:934 (6) - 移除clap
  12. 02:18:460 (1) - 起始clap
  13. 02:24:776 (1) - ^
  14. 02:25:828 (3) - ^
  15. 02:26:355 (5) - clap移除
  16. 02:26:881 (1) - clap移除
  17. 02:52:671 (2) - 这个为什么要这样放...
  18. 03:09:513 (5) - ^
  19. 03:41:618 (6,7,8) - spacing
  20. 04:08:197 (9) - ^ 如果是特意的跳 建议newcombo
  21. 04:22:934 (3) - new combo
[Normal]:
  1. 主要还是soft的clap问题 听鼓点隔白线下clap足矣
Hard的间距太小了 bpm又很低 所以基本鼠标都没怎么动 OTL

star~
DJPop
Don't place timing sections exactly on the notes, place them in front of the notes a little bit (about 1/4 or 1/2 earlier)

- Relaxing -
02:47:539 (1) - silence the hitsound
02:50:565 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not relax for me = =" (eyes hurt)
03:11:618 (1) - silence the hitsound
03:20:039 (1) - not necessary imo, should be removed
04:23:197 (1) - add hitfinish

- Hard -
00:10:565 (1) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:18:986 (2,4) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
00:52:144 (3,4,5,6) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:51:618 (4,5,6) - ^
01:54:513 (3) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
01:54:776 (1) - silence the hitsound
02:30:828 (6) - move 1/4 right
02:47:539 (1) - silence the hitsound
03:19:513 (1,1,1) - not necessary imo, should be removed
04:12:934 (2,3,4) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
04:13:986 (5,6,7) - move down 2 grids (Lv3)


+Star
DJPop
Ignore this reply.

Bad connection caused a double-posted lol
Colin Hou
婆婆说的time section的问题已经不用考虑了 因为已经在婆婆AFK期间修正掉了 ;)
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
:) thx DJ婆婆 and colin
fixed

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. 视频么有消音啊...这个需要消掉音乐的
那个。。怎么消。0.0
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