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Jay Chou - Dao Xiang

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Karen
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Karen
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by Karen , edited 7 times in total.
gameuse_old
39 posts
Joined November 2013
gameuse_old
Hello
你做的 beatmap 不错
我就觉得如果你加跟多的节奏的话可能会跟好听 (easy, hard, insane) 你的节奏我则么样也听不到
还有我觉得你可以在 kiai time 把音乐变得跟活力一点点。
继续加油

还需要我来 MOD 这首歌请给我回个消息

  • *00:07:829-00:31:227 could use some more whistling [easy]
  • *00:54:645-01:18:059 could use some more work on adding more beats since its in kiai mode[easy]
  • *02:28:303-02:51:718 same thing
  • *03:26:840 to the end of the song could use whistling
Stefan
Global Moderator
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Stefan
how relaxing (´ w `)
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
占位
EncoreW
833 posts
Joined June 2013
EncoreW
水

[liangv587's Insane]

AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.R8.5

CS5AR8，看上去感觉跟7.5没啥区别

这难度我记得我很久很久以前是摸过的也不知道我有没有记错

00:31:410 (1) - 这一段的几个finish有点难听，事实上我觉得drum-clap就不错，因为根本就没有什么比较明显的乐器的声音

我很奇怪为啥第一段kiai的音量是越来越小的，这是要干啥？

02:03:974 (6) - 这地方听上去有点刺，可能是音量有点大

[Insane]

01:06:260 - 01:06:443 - 这两根绿线干啥的？

01:11:291 (7) - 这地方听着好刺啊突然给你来个finish

01:23:364 (6) - 感觉这滑条头尾的音效音量不应该全一样啊，滑条头随便加个clap都要好很多啊

01:51:901 - 02:51:809 - 03:38:730 - 这绿线完全没用啊，又偷懒

01:57:023 (5,6) - 不拆成circle吗，难得周董吐字这么清楚

02:03:974 - 不加个东西吗这样好难受啊

02:36:169 (6) - 我日

02:54:096 (6) - 这音效突然好明显啊但是这段又这么平滑

[ZZHard]

。。 乱码都出来了别的难度一点事都没

00:54:553 - 00:54:736 - 01:06:260 - 01:06:443 - 01:17:968 - 01:18:151 - 02:28:212 - 02:28:395 - 02:39:919 - 02:40:102 - 02:51:626 - 02:51:809 - 03:03:334 - 03:03:517 - 03:15:041 - 03:15:224 - 03:38:730 - 这堆绿线有奶子用

[Kencho's Normal]

slider tick rate ->2

00:54:553 - 00:54:736 - 01:06:260 - 01:06:443 - 01:17:968 - 01:18:151 - 02:28:212 - 02:28:395 - 02:39:919 - 02:40:102 - 02:51:626 - 02:51:809 - 03:03:334 - 03:03:517 - 03:15:041 - 03:15:224 - 03:38:730 - 和hard一样

01:18:242 - 这绿线不如放到01:29:949 - 这里来、

水完赶紧滚
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
那一瞬間 發現童年的回憶有多麼的快樂，珍貴

((((((((感動

renchon i love you
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
樓上暴露年齡了！

tag 少了gder id …… aimod有很多奇怪的東西

normal-hitwhistle不是傳說中的炒雞無敵高速低音鼓左邊那個麼……這種來著 → https://osu.ppy.sh/b/804826 …… 要不要換個和藹一點的

[Normal]

tickrate4 太嚇人了

[Insnae]

01:18:242 - 這裡開始24線和whistle都美麗了，希望和其他部分有區別的話直接用默認的soft-clap和whistle我覺得也不錯

大概是因為你音效是直接複製587 ??

03:26:291 (9) - 折返一下

尾殺拉星送pp不是禮儀嗎
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
怎么几个diff的预览时间不一样的..统一一下吧

[Insane]
02:16:779 (1) - 这种梗好容易断..

摸不动..
听着就回想起了初中的时候..
诶..老啦...
Lasse
Beatmap Nominator
3,596 posts
Joined June 2011
Lasse
m4m thing


general
fix preview point and tags to be consistent for all diffs
add gd mappers to tags
liangv
consider increasing the AR a bit, maybe ~8.3-8.6 as you are using the same as the much easier second insane and some parts like 02:00:498 (4,5,6,7,8) - would be much better to read

00:23:360 (3) - this shape looks a bit unfitting for how calm the song is, how about making it a wave or sth instead?
00:24:092 - sliderend here should be clickable for the really strong guitar. It feels so wrong not clicking this
00:25:556 (1) - ^same you map those guitar sound to a tap or sliderstart most of the time so it feels really missing to not have a click on the white tick/guitar
same happesn often during the map, no need to mention it again. I mean it plays fine the way it is but it feels a bit "undermapped" to me, you can easily map those without ruining spread or anything

00:29:398 (3) - is there any sound there to justify a click? imo there isnt, it's just a continuation of the guitar from 00:29:215 (2) -
=> compare with 00:30:313 (5) - which is an actual guitar strum

00:32:691 (4) - slider starts on barely audible sound but ends on a way stronger one, feels a bit awkward to play
=> this rhythm? http://i.imgur.com/rt1Fb6J.jpg
00:55:376 (3,4,5) - - ^same sliderstart weaker than end thing, just sth I really dislike personally.
00:58:303 (3,4) - ^same and this happens all the time during this part
It feels so weird when playing since you click a very weak/quiet sound and then you dont click a really strong one :/

01:03:608 (1,2,3) - this for example plays much better

01:08:730 (9) - rounded slider would fit better imo. but you seem to like that slider it seems after seeing the whole map and it should be fine to keep, lol
01:37:998 (11) - could look much nicer here
01:40:193 (7) - ^
01:42:388 (4,5) - same shape and fix angle pls. it's even noticeable a bit during gameplay

01:43:852 (10) - so here you start using rounded sliders instead? they seem much better fitting for the song, so maybe use them for the parts before too?

01:51:718 (1) - curve a bit more/change shape a bit to make it harder to break on since that +80% sv change is really unexpected and can be really frustrating
02:01:413 (9) - maybe reduce spacing a bit? it seems so high compared to the others. I know 02:00:132 (3,4) - is the same spacing, but for that one you can abuse slider leniency so it plays easier

02:07:998 (1) - /// +a bit before /// +after => you ignore that "bell" sound with hitsounding, maybe hitsound it? it's very audible so that might be nice
02:22:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so many strong beats on sliderends, could play better if you changed that imo

02:28:120 (2,1) - overlap this more similar to 00:54:462 (2,1) - , looks better
03:05:803 (9) - doesnt look nice here, round or at least symmetrical anchors?

03:18:974 (3) - maybe try slider more like this? http://i.imgur.com/kgfnYwN.jpg

insane
00:09:473 (5) - etc. same thing about sliderends on really strong sound, but since this difficulty is supposed to be easier and it's personal preference I won't mention it anymore :v
00:12:395 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - do you really want to keep the movement limited to the same 3 spots for 9 note? I get that it fits the sounds, but it feels a bit boring :/
very close to offsceen in 4:3, just mentioning it as it is no problem right now http://i.imgur.com/kXEdzBH.jpg

00:37:996 (2,3,4) - kinda visible at the same time with ar8, might be a bit misleading to have them in a straight line, maybe more like: http://i.imgur.com/C1MSfnW.jpg
or like you did here: 00:46:778 (2,3,4,5) -

00:49:705 (3) - this looks so out of place

01:51:901 - clearly a sound here, maybe make 01:51:718 (4) - a 1/4 slider or ad a 1/4 note stacked under it here?
03:16:413 (2) - moving this down a bit could flow better imo


zzh
not a big fan of using <1x ds for the whole map since tha makes you move slower than the sliders :/
00:30:130 (4,5) - move a bit right and maybe rotate slightlym should look/flow better
00:54:096 (5,1) - ctrl-h one of those two, looks better
03:37:267 (4) - I know you probably dont want to put sv changes on this diff, but ~0.75x would fit so much better on this slider


kencho
01:51:169 (2) - maybe extend to white tick?
01:59:767 (2) - those really short sliders might be an issue. I remeber this dq: p/4577511 that was an easy diff, but since this normals is more like an easy it might be problematic...
02:05:803 (2) - beat on red tick and white tick around the repeat is much stronger than blue, but you put the repeat on blue?
02:08:730 (2) - ^
02:20:437 (2) - ^
it is fine on spots like 03:24:828 (2) - since there is actually a strong sound on blue/repeat

good luck!
here's my map for the m4m: p/4710873
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
@gameuse, thanks for your advice but no change here ;w;

T-Mac

T-Mac wrote:

[Insane]

01:06:260 - 01:06:443 - 这两根绿线干啥的？

01:11:291 (7) - 这地方听着好刺啊突然给你来个finish 感觉没事

01:23:364 (6) - 感觉这滑条头尾的音效音量不应该全一样啊，滑条头随便加个clap都要好很多啊 问587

01:51:901 - 02:51:809 - 03:38:730 - 这绿线完全没用啊，又偷懒

01:57:023 (5,6) - 不拆成circle吗，难得周董吐字这么清楚 前面已经4个circle，不能再多

02:03:974 - 不加个东西吗这样好难受啊 跟主vocal多好

02:36:169 (6) - 我日

02:54:096 (6) - 这音效突然好明显啊但是这段又这么平滑 587的锅

[ZZHard]

。。 乱码都出来了别的难度一点事都没

00:54:553 - 00:54:736 - 01:06:260 - 01:06:443 - 01:17:968 - 01:18:151 - 02:28:212 - 02:28:395 - 02:39:919 - 02:40:102 - 02:51:626 - 02:51:809 - 03:03:334 - 03:03:517 - 03:15:041 - 03:15:224 - 03:38:730 - 这堆绿线有奶子用

Narcissu

Narcissu wrote:

樓上暴露年齡了！

tag 少了gder id …… aimod有很多奇怪的東西

normal-hitwhistle不是傳說中的炒雞無敵高速低音鼓左邊那個麼……這種來著 → https://osu.ppy.sh/b/804826 …… 要不要換個和藹一點的 都是587的锅

[Normal]

tickrate4 太嚇人了

[Insnae]

01:18:242 - 這裡開始24線和whistle都美麗了，希望和其他部分有區別的話直接用默認的soft-clap和whistle我覺得也不錯

大概是因為你音效是直接複製587 ??

03:26:291 (9) - 折返一下

尾殺拉星送pp不是禮儀嗎

Lily Bread

Lily Bread wrote:

怎么几个diff的预览时间不一样的..统一一下吧

[Insane]
02:16:779 (1) - 这种梗好容易断.. 不想改，难得想坑一下

摸不动..
听着就回想起了初中的时候..
诶..老啦...

Lasse

Lasse wrote:

m4m thing


general
fix preview point and tags to be consistent for all diffs
add gd mappers to tags


insane
00:09:473 (5) - etc. same thing about sliderends on really strong sound, but since this difficulty is supposed to be easier and it's personal preference I won't mention it anymore :v i guess the current hitsound is ok, i'll leave it to liangv.
00:12:395 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - do you really want to keep the movement limited to the same 3 spots for 9 note? I get that it fits the sounds, but it feels a bit boring :/ there is a long time between those patterns ;w;. not boring
very close to offsceen in 4:3, just mentioning it as it is no problem right now http://i.imgur.com/kXEdzBH.jpg yeah as long it's not off-screen

00:37:996 (2,3,4) - kinda visible at the same time with ar8, might be a bit misleading to have them in a straight line, maybe more like: http://i.imgur.com/C1MSfnW.jpg
or like you did here: 00:46:778 (2,3,4,5) -

00:49:705 (3) - this looks so out of place

01:51:901 - clearly a sound here, maybe make 01:51:718 (4) - a 1/4 slider or ad a 1/4 note stacked under it here?
03:16:413 (2) - moving this down a bit could flow better imo no need imo


zzh
not a big fan of using <1x ds for the whole map since tha makes you move slower than the sliders :/
00:30:130 (4,5) - move a bit right and maybe rotate slightlym should look/flow better
00:54:096 (5,1) - ctrl-h one of those two, looks better
03:37:267 (4) - I know you probably dont want to put sv changes on this diff, but ~0.75x would fit so much better on this slider

no reply = fixed

thanks for mods!
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
咦怎么这都有KD..我不太想要耶
你能自己deny自己吗？
不行就算啦...
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
好，denied
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
诶..给你射了个星，这下够12SP啦
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
T-Mac

T-Mac wrote:

[Kencho's Normal]

slider tick rate ->2 ok

00:54:553 - 00:54:736 - 01:06:260 - 01:06:443 - 01:17:968 - 01:18:151 - 02:28:212 - 02:28:395 - 02:39:919 - 02:40:102 - 02:51:626 - 02:51:809 - 03:03:334 - 03:03:517 - 03:15:041 - 03:15:224 - 03:38:730 - 和hard一样 fixed

01:18:242 - 这绿线不如放到01:29:949 - 这里来、 這是取消kiai用的啦

Lasse

Lasse wrote:

kencho
01:51:169 (2) - maybe extend to white tick? no need
01:59:767 (2) - those really short sliders might be an issue. I remeber this dq: p/4577511 that was an easy diff, but since this normals is more like an easy it might be problematic... yea in easy diff can't use short sliders, but actually it is normal diff, stars 1.82
02:05:803 (2) - beat on red tick and white tick around the repeat is much stronger than blue, but you put the repeat on blue? here i follow vocal on blue, white has slidertick
02:08:730 (2) - ^
02:20:437 (2) - ^
it is fine on spots like 03:24:828 (2) - since there is actually a strong sound on blue/repeat

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alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hello ;)

[General]
  1. Please set combo color to N/H/I difficulties. I feel it would be better.
[Kencho's Normal]
  1. 00:48:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, seems a bit hard for beginners at this part. Please try to reduce objects/sounds
  2. 01:18:242 - How about adding a note to here same as here 02:51:901 (1) - ? also the sound is followed at other difficulties
  3. 01:52:815 (3) - I think it's hard a little to read/play for beginners. So i recommend you to use a new combo to here.
  4. 01:59:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above.
  5. 02:22:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  6. 03:13:852 (3,1) - You must move that slider for reading slider's reverse arrow.
    SPOILER
[Hard]
  1. fine
[Insane]
  1. 01:05:803 (8) - design suggestion : I prefer to use curve slider same as (7) slider like this
    SPOILER
    really great, i like it :3
[liangv587's Insane]
  1. 00:54:096 (1,2) - Please put more spacing or add a new combo to here 00:54:462 (2) - . It will be potentially confusing.
  2. 01:02:693 (8,9,10) - again, add a new combo to here 01:02:876 (9) - or use more distance on 01:03:242 (10) -
    SPOILER
Good luck with qualify :)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen
Fixed that general thing and the slider in my diff, thanks moecat :D
Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
M4M
[General]
All clear (just some unneccessary green lines which can be removed (so auto mod gives not errors :P))

[Kencho]
00:52:998 (2) - The offbeat slider feels a bit out of place. Why not remove (3) and add a reverse to 2?
01:07:998 (3,1) - Tiny small little yet visible overlap, please fix
01:39:462 (2,1) - Consider stacking them
01:52:815 (3) - This really interrupts the calm part of the song, consider removing it
02:17:510 (2,2) - I don't hear anything as 3/4
Diff is fine, but I agree with all of Alacat's points (I had 3/6 as well, but removed them as he already said it)

[ZZHArd]
00:13:857 (1,2,3,4) - This plays really weird imo, the offbeat sliders
03:37:267 (4) - Wow, those whistles are cool!
Nice diff

[Insane]
00:58:486 (4) - Consider making it 1/4, to follow the vocals better
01:53:364 (1) - imo it gives more emphasis when this is placed under the tail of 01:51:718 (4) - as oppoosed to the head
02:39:828 (10,1) - This low spacing feels a bit out of place, especially as (10) has a high spcing with (9)
Great diff!

[Insane v587]
00:54:462 (2) - Is there a need for this? I don't hear any similar sound in the song. Or at least remove the whistles, soft hitnormal is fine enough :P
01:06:169 (2) - ^^
01:17:876 (1) - ^^ (Same applies for next kiai)
01:52:815 (2) - This really interrupts the calm part of the song, consider removing it
I really like the kiai!

Good luck!
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
m4m as requested

[liangv587]
  1. 01:02:510 (7,8) - I think it sound weird to use low spacing here since (8) sound pretty emphasized there , so maybe try ctrl+g 01:02:693 (8,9) - this ?
    you might need to increase spacing for (10) a bit more too so it will make spacing a bit easier to read
  2. 01:30:681 (5,6) - looks like somehow this jumps maybe a bit too big or something , it like you do low spacing here 01:30:498 (4,5) - then suddenly you increase it a lots at (5) -> (6) so maybe try decrease it a bit so it's a bit more reasonable lol , try move (6) to around x332 y164 ?
  3. 01:31:779 (8,9) - similiar to above , maybe try move (9) to around x345 y237 ?
  4. 01:34:157 (4,5,6) - would be better if these have like similiar spacing so it make flow here a bit better imo
  5. 01:45:132 (3,4) - should use higher spacing since (4) sound really emphasized so it make thing play better imo , try move (3) to around x184 y280 ?
  6. 01:52:815 - idk but maybe too low volume on clickable note like this isn't good , I think 20% volume a bit better here
  7. 02:27:572 (7,1) - I think this should have higher spacing than 02:27:023 (6,7) - so it emphasize the cymbal on (1) better , try move (7) to around x192 y344
  8. 02:40:559 (2) - I think if you move this to around x228 y216 , it mkae flow better lol
  9. 02:40:742 (3,4,5) - high spacing sound weird here cus (4) and (5) don't sound that emphasized imo , try to decrease spacing here a bit ?
  10. 02:48:973 (1,2,3,4) - consistent spacing work better here imo cus I think the beat there just sound all same lol
  11. 03:22:267 (5) - try move this to around x264 y184 ? I think it make flow better

    I think recheck a little spacing wouldn't be bad :D
[insane]
  1. wow looks fine
[zzh]
  1. 00:27:019 (3,1) - use consistent spacing for better flow?
  2. 00:53:181 (3,4) - try this rhythm ? sound better imo
    SPOILER
[kencho]
  1. 02:00:681 (4,5,6) - might be a bit too intense for new player , try this rhythm instead ?
    SPOILER
  2. 02:24:462 (4,5) - similiar to above
  3. 03:02:876 (1,2) - nazi lol stack at (1)'s tail ? so it looks better
gl :)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Karen

Baraatje123 wrote:

M4M
[General]
All clear (just some unneccessary green lines which can be removed (so auto mod gives not errors :P)) will fix it

[ZZHArd]
00:13:857 (1,2,3,4) - This plays really weird imo, the offbeat sliders can't see much difference
03:37:267 (4) - Wow, those whistles are cool!
Nice diff

[Insane]
00:58:486 (4) - Consider making it 1/4, to follow the vocals better vocal isn't important
01:53:364 (1) - imo it gives more emphasis when this is placed under the tail of 01:51:718 (4) - as oppoosed to the head why this needs emphasis here, here is a pretty long break
02:39:828 (10,1) - This low spacing feels a bit out of place, especially as (10) has a high spcing with (9) changed
Great diff!

Good luck!

CelsiusLK wrote:

m4m as requested

[zzh]
  1. 00:27:019 (3,1) - use consistent spacing for better flow? k
  2. 00:53:181 (3,4) - try this rhythm ? sound better imo k
    SPOILER
gl :)
thanks for mods~
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
alacat

alacat wrote:

[Kencho's Normal]
  1. 00:48:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, seems a bit hard for beginners at this part. Please try to reduce objects/sounds
  2. 01:18:242 - How about adding a note to here same as here 02:51:901 (1) - ? also the sound is followed at other difficulties
  3. 01:52:815 (3) - I think it's hard a little to read/play for beginners. So i recommend you to use a new combo to here.
  4. 01:59:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above.
  5. 02:22:632 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  6. 03:13:852 (3,1) - You must move that slider for reading slider's reverse arrow.
    SPOILER

Bara-

Bara- wrote:

[Kencho]
00:52:998 (2) - The offbeat slider feels a bit out of place. Why not remove (3) and add a reverse to 2?
01:07:998 (3,1) - Tiny small little yet visible overlap, please fix
01:39:462 (2,1) - Consider stacking them
01:52:815 (3) - This really interrupts the calm part of the song, consider removing it
02:17:510 (2,2) - I don't hear anything as 3/4 follow vocals
Diff is fine, but I agree with all of Alacat's points (I had 3/6 as well, but removed them as he already said it)

CelsiusLK

CelsiusLK wrote:

[kencho]
  1. 02:00:681 (4,5,6) - might be a bit too intense for new player , try this rhythm instead ?
    SPOILER
  2. 02:24:462 (4,5) - similiar to above
  3. 03:02:876 (1,2) - nazi lol stack at (1)'s tail ? so it looks better
gl :)

No reply=Fixed

Thanks for modding

SPOILER
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 53730
Countdown: 0
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Artist:Jay Chou
ArtistUnicode:周杰倫
Creator:Karen
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Source:
Tags:魔杰座 zhou jie lun liangv587 Kencho ZZHBOY
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liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
T-Mac

T-Mac wrote:

水

[liangv587's Insane]

AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.5AR8.R8.5
CS5AR8，看上去感觉跟7.5没啥区别考虑下
这难度我记得我很久很久以前是摸过的也不知道我有没有记错
00:31:410 (1) - 这一段的几个finish有点难听，事实上我觉得drum-clap就不错，因为根本就没有什么比较明显的乐器的声音ok
我很奇怪为啥第一段kiai的音量是越来越小的，这是要干啥？那个折返
02:03:974 (6) - 这地方听上去有点刺，可能是音量有点大ok
谢摸

Lasse

Lasse wrote:

m4m thing
consider increasing the AR a bit, maybe ~8.3-8.6 as you are using the same as the much easier second insane and some parts like 02:00:498 (4,5,6,7,8) - would be much better to read

00:23:360 (3) - this shape looks a bit unfitting for how calm the song is, how about making it a wave or sth instead?ok
00:24:092 - sliderend here should be clickable for the really strong guitar. It feels so wrong not clicking thisno
00:25:556 (1) - ^same you map those guitar sound to a tap or sliderstart most of the time so it feels really missing to not have a click on the white tick/guitar no
same happesn often during the map, no need to mention it again. I mean it plays fine the way it is but it feels a bit "undermapped" to me, you can easily map those without ruining spread or anything

00:29:398 (3) - is there any sound there to justify a click? imo there isnt, it's just a continuation of the guitar from 00:29:215 (2) -
=> compare with 00:30:313 (5) - which is an actual guitar strumok

00:32:691 (4) - slider starts on barely audible sound but ends on a way stronger one, feels a bit awkward to play
=> this rhythm? http://i.imgur.com/rt1Fb6J.jpgok
00:55:376 (3,4,5) - - ^same sliderstart weaker than end thing, just sth I really dislike personally.
00:58:303 (3,4) - ^same and this happens all the time during this part
It feels so weird when playing since you click a very weak/quiet sound and then you dont click a really strong one :/there is vocal

01:03:608 (1,2,3) - this for example plays much better

01:08:730 (9) - rounded slider would fit better imo. but you seem to like that slider it seems after seeing the whole map and it should be fine to keep, lol
01:37:998 (11) - could look much nicer here
01:40:193 (7) - ^
01:42:388 (4,5) - same shape and fix angle pls. it's even noticeable a bit during gameplay another part

01:43:852 (10) - so here you start using rounded sliders instead? they seem much better fitting for the song, so maybe use them for the parts before too?no

01:51:718 (1) - curve a bit more/change shape a bit to make it harder to break on since that +80% sv change is really unexpected and can be really frustrating no, enough
02:01:413 (9) - maybe reduce spacing a bit? it seems so high compared to the others. I know 02:00:132 (3,4) - is the same spacing, but for that one you can abuse slider leniency so it plays easier no

02:07:998 (1) - /// +a bit before /// +after => you ignore that "bell" sound with hitsounding, maybe hitsound it? it's very audible so that might be nice not understand
02:22:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so many strong beats on sliderends, could play better if you changed that imono

02:28:120 (2,1) - overlap this more similar to 00:54:462 (2,1) - , looks better ok
03:05:803 (9) - doesnt look nice here, round or at least symmetrical anchors?

03:18:974 (3) - maybe try slider more like this? http://i.imgur.com/kgfnYwN.jpg[/notice]not good
thanks for modding

alacat

alacat wrote:

Hello ;)

[liangv587's Insane]
  1. 00:54:096 (1,2) - Please put more spacing or add a new combo to here 00:54:462 (2) - . It will be potentially confusing.
  2. 01:02:693 (8,9,10) - again, add a new combo to here 01:02:876 (9) - or use more distance on 01:03:242 (10) -
    SPOILER
no change but thanks for modding

Bara-

Bara- wrote:

M4M
[Insane v587]
00:54:462 (2) - Is there a need for this? I don't hear any similar sound in the song. Or at least remove the whistles, soft hitnormal is fine enough :P
01:06:169 (2) - ^^
01:17:876 (1) - ^^ (Same applies for next kiai)
01:52:815 (2) - This really interrupts the calm part of the song, consider removing it
I really like the kiai!
no change but thanks for modding

CelsiusLK

CelsiusLK wrote:

m4m as requested

[liangv587]
  1. 01:02:510 (7,8) - I think it sound weird to use low spacing here since (8) sound pretty emphasized there , so maybe try ctrl+g 01:02:693 (8,9) - this ? ok
    you might need to increase spacing for (10) a bit more too so it will make spacing a bit easier to read it's not difficult
  2. 01:30:681 (5,6) - looks like somehow this jumps maybe a bit too big or something , it like you do low spacing here 01:30:498 (4,5) - then suddenly you increase it a lots at (5) -> (6) so maybe try decrease it a bit so it's a bit more reasonable lol , try move (6) to around x332 y164 ? the jump is not so big, 45678they are pentagon
  3. 01:31:779 (8,9) - similiar to above , maybe try move (9) to around x345 y237 ? it's never a big jump between sliders
  4. 01:34:157 (4,5,6) - would be better if these have like similiar spacing so it make flow here a bit better imo ok
  5. 01:45:132 (3,4) - should use higher spacing since (4) sound really emphasized so it make thing play better imo , try move (3) to around x184 y280 ? 23 ctrl +g
  6. 01:52:815 - idk but maybe too low volume on clickable note like this isn't good , I think 20% volume a bit better here ok 30% may be better
  7. 02:27:572 (7,1) - I think this should have higher spacing than 02:27:023 (6,7) - so it emphasize the cymbal on (1) better , try move (7) to around x192 y344 ok
  8. 02:40:559 (2) - I think if you move this to around x228 y216 , it mkae flow better lol ok
  9. 02:40:742 (3,4,5) - high spacing sound weird here cus (4) and (5) don't sound that emphasized imo , try to decrease spacing here a bit ? no
  10. 02:48:973 (1,2,3,4) - consistent spacing work better here imo cus I think the beat there just sound all same lol but i think should be like this :3
  11. 03:22:267 (5) - try move this to around x264 y184 ? I think it make flow better ok

    I think recheck a little spacing wouldn't be bad :D
gl :)
thanks for modding
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