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P A N
KOREAN MODE ACTIVATED.
Giralda
AYY OHHH AYYY
Synpoo
no kraft dinner

[Normal]
01:01:077 (2) - object isn't snapped
01:01:791 (3) - ^
02:02:029 (2) - ^

[Saranghae]
Consider OD6

Euny
you pm me for mod, but i'm bit busy for past requests. so i just fast check for metadata


  • General
  1. tag : add ' You Kyung Min A ' cause you missed that girls. also i guess, seems you need to fix caps and add spacing for members name okay then,
    paste this >> ' Ji Min Cho A Yu Na You Kyung Hye Jeong Min A Seol Hyun Chan Mi 지민 초아 유나 유경 혜정 민아 설현 찬미 '

    here is artist official site >> http://www.fncent.com/AOA/b/introduce/1303

no kds please.
HOT _ ISSUE
seol hyun best pls rank you da best
Topic Starter
Aerous
omg thanks everyone ! I changed metadata and fixed snapping :3

Cherry Blossom

Aerous wrote:

omg thanks everyone ! I changed metadata and fixed snapping :3


awh no you ;w;
Exa
[Easy]


00:50:599 (4,5) - Imperfect blanket.
00:54:408 (4,5) - Imperfect blanket.
01:00:124 (1,2) - Nazi imperfect blanket.
01:15:360 (1,2) - Are you trying to blanket.
01:51:551 (4,5) - Assffsg imperfect blanket. I hate only pointing out blankets because the flow and rhythm are perfect ;w;
02:00:599 (5,1) - Nazi imperfect blanket.
02:31:075 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket.
02:46:313 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.

[Hard]


00:05:361 (2,1) - Mostly for aesthetic reasons, try having the Yaxis of the starting anchor point of (1) equal to the Yaxis of the red anchor point of (2). This will require you to move the horizontal slider up, so fix the DS of the notes before as well.
00:25:599 (6,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:29:408 (5,1) - This might be too hard of a flow for players of such level. It requires diagonal movement towards the up-right, then bottom-right and then up, which might get confusing.
00:30:599 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket.
00:35:361 (1,2) - Oh lol fix that blanket.
01:02:265 - Better not skip that vocalic beat, try using a reverse slider or another slider shape.
01:05:837 (1,2) - Very questionable, might be mistaken for 1/2.
01:05:837 (1,2,1) - The overlaps, it does not affect gameplay though, so it should be fine.
01:24:884 (1) - Ctrl+G that for more user-friendly flow. (Might cause consistency issues so you should alter the rest of the pattern as well).
01:30:122 (4) - Do not treat these like the ones before, it has a different role in the chorus.
01:41:551 (5,1) - You can make a better blanket than this.
02:44:884 (1,3) - Make it so that the tails of these sliders don't touch.
02:46:789 (1,2,3) - Insert creativity. You have used the same thing 3 times already.

[Saranghae]


00:19:408 (4) - Really unfitting. Why not replace it with 2 notes instead? (Not to mention that it starts on random red).
00:26:789 (4,5) - You lower cursor movement while there are clearly vocals going on on the background.
01:05:361 (6) - Better Ctrl+G here for more user-friendly flow.
01:25:956 (4) - This maps absolutely no beat in the chorus.
01:39:171 (3,1) - You can make a better stack on the edgy part of these slider. Make sure the anchors have same coos and you should be fine.
01:50:123 (3) - Ctrl+G, same as before.
02:08:218 (6,7,8) - Finally after 3 times, it's on the left side ;D

[General]


01:02:384 - You almost always skip these beats. Just pointing out they are there.

That's all, amazing map and song. Is it just me or are these girls too pretty o.o?
Topic Starter
Aerous
Exa

Exa wrote:

[Easy]


00:50:599 (4,5) - Imperfect blanket.
00:54:408 (4,5) - Imperfect blanket.
01:00:124 (1,2) - Nazi imperfect blanket.
01:15:360 (1,2) - Are you trying to blanket.
01:51:551 (4,5) - Assffsg imperfect blanket. I hate only pointing out blankets because the flow and rhythm are perfect ;w;
02:00:599 (5,1) - Nazi imperfect blanket.
02:31:075 (2,3) - Imperfect blanket.
02:46:313 (5,1) - Imperfect blanket.

[Hard]


00:05:361 (2,1) - Mostly for aesthetic reasons, try having the Yaxis of the starting anchor point of (1) equal to the Yaxis of the red anchor point of (2). This will require you to move the horizontal slider up, so fix the DS of the notes before as well.
00:25:599 (6,1) - Imperfect blanket.
00:29:408 (5,1) - This might be too hard of a flow for players of such level. It requires diagonal movement towards the up-right, then bottom-right and then up, which might get confusing.
00:30:599 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket.
00:35:361 (1,2) - Oh lol fix that blanket.
01:02:265 - Better not skip that vocalic beat, try using a reverse slider or another slider shape.
01:05:837 (1,2) - Very questionable, might be mistaken for 1/2.
01:05:837 (1,2,1) - The overlaps, it does not affect gameplay though, so it should be fine.
01:24:884 (1) - Ctrl+G that for more user-friendly flow. (Might cause consistency issues so you should alter the rest of the pattern as well).
01:30:122 (4) - Do not treat these like the ones before, it has a different role in the chorus.
01:41:551 (5,1) - You can make a better blanket than this.
02:44:884 (1,3) - Make it so that the tails of these sliders don't touch.
02:46:789 (1,2,3) - Insert creativity. You have used the same thing 3 times already.

[Saranghae]


00:19:408 (4) - Really unfitting. Why not replace it with 2 notes instead? (Not to mention that it starts on random red).
00:26:789 (4,5) - You lower cursor movement while there are clearly vocals going on on the background.
01:05:361 (6) - Better Ctrl+G here for more user-friendly flow.
01:25:956 (4) - This maps absolutely no beat in the chorus. the vocals? but yea idk i might change this later on
01:39:171 (3,1) - You can make a better stack on the edgy part of these slider. Make sure the anchors have same coos and you should be fine.
01:50:123 (3) - Ctrl+G, same as before. on purpose
02:08:218 (6,7,8) - Finally after 3 times, it's on the left side ;D ayylmao

[General]


01:02:384 - You almost always skip these beats. Just pointing out they are there.

That's all, amazing map and song. Is it just me or are these girls too pretty o.o?

no reply = fixed and yes they are that pretty

1k post here :cry:
Shohei Ohtani
thx for the free reaction image

Insane:
00:04:884 (1,2,3) - I'd really prefer this to be more of a circular pattern.
00:18:218 (1,2,3,4) - There's not really a 3 note grouping here so it doesn't really make sense to group your pattern like this.
00:48:694 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:09:646 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Assume for all similar patterns.

Normal:
00:10:599 (4) - make this angle more defined.
00:16:313 (1) - Weird place to end the slider lol
01:55:360 (4) - Either make this a curve or not, it's too shallow right now

It's a pretty solid map, except for some note placement things in Insane.
zyoi
great song >///<
Bara-
Mod thingie

[General]
I personally don't find Saranghae's BG really fitting.
Looking at the other, you can clearly see they are a girlband and such, and here is only one
idk, just do what ever you want
Also, you have 2 unused .wav files, the one for sampleset 32 (as you only use set 31)
Either delete them, or make them get some use

[Normal]
  1. 00:19:170 (3,4) - The flow here is not that good due to the way (4) comes in after (3) ends. Following (3)'s movement, (4) should actually start around the end of current (4) (with correct distance then ofc), why not try something like this?
  2. 00:30:599 (2) - Please make the curve go the opposite way for better flow (to the bottom instead of the top, try grey node at something like y=332)
  3. 01:06:789 (5) - NC this, it feels better as there is quite a big gap between the notes (5/2
  4. 01:12:979 (2) - For better flow, try stacking it with 01:14:884 (4) - (or something like there, it feels better following the movement from (1)
  5. 01:56:314 (5) - Make the curve on the right, instead of at the left, for better movement following from (4) (It also feels better with (6,1)
  6. 02:07:742 (5) - NC, see above
  7. 02:08:695 (1,2) - Why don't you let them blanket like (see screenshot)
  8. 02:23:932 (3) - I think you forgot NC here (end of kiai)
  9. 02:50:598 (1) - Curve a bit to increase flow
  10. 02:53:456 (5) - NC, see above
Nice diff :3

[Hard]
AR 5.5 O.o
6 is already low enough
  1. 00:10:599 (1,4) - Í'm no fan of this overlap, why not stack them?
  2. 00:14:408 (1,4) - This is a rather unreadable overlap, with the (4) being covered by (1). It's rankable, but not recommended
  3. 00:22:742 (2,4) - Overlap, stack please
  4. 00:31:551 (1,3) - ^^ etc. (I'll not list them from now one, but IMO they are rather bad, please fix them (all) for a much neater map
  5. 00:35:361 (1,2) - Blanket is off
  6. 01:11:551 (1,2) - I don't really like how these are the same shape. Consider doing it like 01:13:456 (1,2) - where they both have a different movement
  7. 01:40:123 (1,2) - ^^
  8. 02:02:503 (4) - Due to movement, this note doesn't fit here. Try moving it to something like 292:76
  9. 02:44:884 (1,3) - I know I stopped talking about overlaps, but this is one too, the slidertail of (3) gets covered (a bit) but (1)'s body, move it (and (2) for blanket) more to the right to fix it
Despite the overlaps, it's a really good diff

[Insane]
What does this name even mean? O.o
Consider adding to creator's description
This diff also has quite some overlaps, but they feel better here. You should consider fixing them, but it's not a requirement

  1. 00:15:361 (3,1) - This however is one of the really bad overlaps which really should be fixed (select 00:16:313 (1,2,3) - (to not mess up patterns) and move it so (1) stakcs with 00:15:361 (3) -
  2. 00:38:218 (3) - Not sure if you're aiming for a blanket, but try making it like this to make the blanket better
  3. 00:54:170 (5) - Distance seems rather high here for such a weak/soft sound in the music
  4. 01:08:694 (3) - Consider curving it a little, for flow, and perhaps to avoind an overlap as well :P
  5. 01:31:551 (4,5) - The sharp curves looks kinda bad IMO, please make them straight sliders
  6. 01:37:504 (4,1) - Improve stack please
  7. 01:39:171 (3,1) - ^^
  8. 02:57:623 - Add a circle for vocals
  9. 02:59:884 (4,1,2,3,4) - This feels so undermapped, consider following the vocals here
  10. 03:05:242 - Add a circle for vocals
Here, I have to agree with CDFA, the 3-slider things feel kinda weird (but he already said it, so I won't say it again :P)
For the rest, a good diff
Okay, get at least some more mods before calling me again, some parts feel a bit unpolished (and I don't really want to nazi everything)

Good luck!
Nuolong
From coinz queue

Saranghae
00:06:313 (4) - Maybe you could move this up and to the left a little bit, so that 00:05:837 (3) - points to it. Or you could just curve the slider so that it points to the circle. If you do that, you'll have to fix the three previous identical sliders, too :3
00:06:789 (1,2,3) - This setup is kinda strange. I don't really see a purpose for the placement. Like, you're not blanketing with this slider 00:07:742 (3) - , no triangles, etc. All I see is an overlap from the previous slider. You can ignore this overlap and keep it because it is neat, but maybe you could move 00:08:456 (5) - to the head of 00:06:789 (1) - , and then adjust the curve of 00:07:742 (3) - so that the tail of this slider is equidistant to 00:08:218 (4) - and 00:08:456 (5) - . Then maybe to fix afterwards you can move this 00:08:694 (1) - so the head overlaps 00:08:218 (4) - , idk
00:09:646 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Here is a repeating pattern, but I don't really see hear anything in the vocals that suggest this. If you don't decide to change this, then move 00:11:551 (4) - so that the head is equidistant from 00:11:076 (2) - and 00:11:314 (3) -
00:12:027 (5) - This is awkward to play after the previous slider. Maybe you can ctrl+j and try to blanket 00:12:027 (5) -
Okay this is a long song, let me be less picky lol (next comes stuff I really think should be changed, even tho it still seems picky)
00:17:504 (2) - I think this should be curved to point to 00:17:980 (3) - more, obv keeping blanket
00:19:884 (6) - I would suggest moving this to create a nicer triangle, maybe equilateral
00:24:170 (2) - This has the HEY!, but then in a repeating pattern, 00:24:884 (4) - does not. It feels very empty to play the second slider without a HEY!, so I would change this pattern
00:25:837 (1) - Curve towards 00:26:313 (2) -
00:28:218 (2,3) - Try to place a note on the blue tick, if I hear correctly >_<
00:28:218 (2,3) - Ctrl g this to fix flow, and fix the hitsounds and stuffs
00:40:123 (3) - I would make this less challenging, just so it looks better
00:42:980 (1) - Curve the head so the cursor has a more ovalular (is dat a word) motion during gameplay, gah I cant fudging explain
01:00:600 (2,3) - I won't point this out from now on, but note on blue tick again? to follow vocal (if I hear correctly again lol) and 01:14:170 (3,4) - heh
01:04:646 (3,4,5) - I would replace with reverse slider
01:10:361 (3) - I would flip
01:21:075 (1) - Two circles instead?
01:22:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I love this part
01:31:313 (3,4,5) - Follow vocals more with some long sliders?
01:40:123 (1) - Make this end on red and make a slider starting on the end of 01:40:123 (1) - and ending on 01:40:837 (2) -
02:12:504 (1) - I don't really like how this is initialized, from 02:12:265 (6) - . It is uncomfortable to play
02:38:694 (4) - move to x236, y352 or something, the way it is now is uglee ;w;, no offense hehe, your mapping iz beautiful :3
02:48:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - follow vocals ? like make 02:48:694 (1) - two circles, make this the head of a slider 02:49:408 (3) - nvm, just look at this (ONLY TIMELINE), 1,2,3,4,5,6 violet color. Also change pattern so it goes with the vocals
03:00:599 (5) - Wot I hope this wasn't intentional, shift to the right


Hard
00:17:742 (3) - NC for SV change
Okay, I can't really mod easier diffs ;w; Sorry. Also your mapping style is awesome except for when you make sliders straight and circles after it shifted off a bit. My ocd kills me so I have an urge that I must make the slider point directly in the direction of the circle. ANYWAYS, hard is a nice diff!
00:55:123 (2) - I would just recommend making equilateral triangles more often when you have the chance, like moving this to x455 y120. Okay that's not really equilateral but it does look nicer, yes? :3
01:08:694 (3) - Extend for vocal?
01:16:313 (3) - ^
01:20:122 (3) - ^
So for this diff you could follow my picky suggestions about moving stuff like 2 pixels to make it look better, and following vocals more often. You already do it, but sometimes.. you just dont. 01:12:504 (3) - like here you do follow the ehhhhhh but right afterwards you don't 01:16:313 (3) -



Sorry for short mod ;w; I really like the song! It has been a while since I modded a hawt song, so star!
nice map, good luck~~~~~ ~~~ `~~` `~~ ~ ~
Topic Starter
Aerous
Bar and CDFA I fixed all of your things and I didn't see Nolan's mod when I was doing self changes.. Saranghae ( which meansa I love you in korean ) and the album is about love at first sight. Just looked through your mod Nolan and most of the things you mentioned I already fixed by myself :D !

The vocal parts on hard is fine I think because the 1/4 sliders are still following the vocal
Loughje
Normal
00:39:170 (3) - I think this slider would look better curved down rather than up and flow better.
01:00:124 (1,2) - Could make this a better blanket.
01:19:170 (1,2) - Make this a blanket for a nicer look.
02:08:695 (1,2) - Curve the third point on these sliders more and move the bottom one back for something like this
02:12:027 (5) - NC perhaps?
02:57:265 (4) - I think a regular curve rather than a locked one would flow better here
Hard
Not sure how fitting this BG is.
00:12:027 (4) - Id have this under the start of 00:10:599 (1)
00:21:551 (3) - I think a triple would feel better here and not a reverse slider imo
00:28:694 (3) - A circle here instead of a slider seems like it would match the song more.
01:06:789 (2,3,4) - Select all of these then put 01:06:789 (2) over 01:07:742 (1) and see how you like it.
01:24:646 (4) - Seems a bit close to 01:23:932 (3) consider readjusting.
01:49:646 (1) - Same as before, I think it would be better with a regular curve and not a locked one.
01:51:551 (1) - ^
03:07:742 (1) - ^^
Saranghae
Same BG issue.
Maybe AR: 8.5 and OD: 6
Everything else in this diff is really nice!
Sorry if this seemed like a bit of a nazi mod, I really enjoyed it though and good luck on rankings!
Topic Starter
Aerous

jloughman14 wrote:

Normal
00:39:170 (3) - I think this slider would look better curved down rather than up and flow better.
01:00:124 (1,2) - Could make this a better blanket. k
01:19:170 (1,2) - Make this a blanket for a nicer look. k
02:08:695 (1,2) - Curve the third point on these sliders more and move the bottom one back for something like this i like my current one
02:12:027 (5) - NC perhaps? no not here, but i did fix up my NC later in the song
02:57:265 (4) - I think a regular curve rather than a locked one would flow better here mhm should be fine

Hard
Not sure how fitting this BG is.
00:12:027 (4) - Id have this under the start of 00:10:599 (1) i played it and kidna like this overlap
00:21:551 (3) - I think a triple would feel better here and not a reverse slider imo uh maybe if one more mod mention ill switch all of it to triple because i have it as a triplet in my insane
00:28:694 (3) - A circle here instead of a slider seems like it would match the song more. no its fine as it is
01:06:789 (2,3,4) - Select all of these then put 01:06:789 (2) over 01:07:742 (1) and see how you like it. no thanks D:
01:24:646 (4) - Seems a bit close to 01:23:932 (3) consider readjusting. adjusted this visually
01:49:646 (1) - Same as before, I think it would be better with a regular curve and not a locked one. no its fine here
01:51:551 (1) - ^ ^
03:07:742 (1) - ^^ ^^

Saranghae
Same BG issue.
Maybe AR: 8.5 and OD: 6
Everything else in this diff is really nice!
I don't want AR 8.5 because most DT players DT AR 8 maps ! OD should be okay
Sorry if this seemed like a bit of a nazi mod, I really enjoyed it though and good luck on rankings!

BG should be fine I mean look at xxdeathx's seven song , the BG isn't even related to the song. Atleast mine is a AOA background :cry:

Thanks for the mod !
Zaphkael


Yo, from my queue. Also, this time, Juniorxx13 joins me in modding. He noticed quite a lot O_o

Maybe add a spinner in your diffs? Especially in normal, many people will get the same SS fullmod scores.

You have widescreen support on, are you planning on getting a storyboard? You can put it off otherwise.

Normal
00:20:599 - strong vocal, maybe add a note?

00:35:361 (3,4) - maybe move things around and blanket 4 in 3?

00:42:980 (3) - rather weird overlap, maybe this?

hard
AImod tells you that you have spacing issues. They are not a problem, but most of them can be easily avoided and don't improve the gameplay anyway. Maybe go over them and check them.

00:21:551 (3) - for spread I suggest making this a triple, since you don't use triples here but use quite some in insane.

00:56:313 (1) - maybe flip, make 3 go upwards and blanket 3 in this?

00:58:218 (1,2,3) - spacing is inconsistent and can be avoided by changing the curve of 1

01:07:265 (4) - triple
there are more

01:25:361 (2) - maybe ctrl +g on all of these (the second slider of each pattern) so that they match the previous ones? (previously you did slider up, down, up, and here it's down, down, down)

02:53:931 (4) - align with the next slider?

weird name thing insane
explain in description why you chose that name and why it matches the song, it would help a lot.

There is not a lot to mod here, you basically always do slider jump jump slider, rinse repeat. maybe try variation?
also, at before the last kiai, the song goes slower and less active/loud, maybe reduce the ds there by a bit so the player gets some rest.

good map overall, we didn't find that much. Sorry for not writing much now, I'll give a star as compensation. And really, call a BN after 3-4 mods max, this is nearly ready.
Norman
Hello, Aerous!
Please, resnap all difficulty



these beats are 1ms Unsnapped (yes, it is so little :()
1ms Unsnapped Box
[Normal]
00:13:457 (2) - 1ms Unsnapped
00:13:457 (2)
00:14:171 (3)
00:14:409 (4)
00:53:457 (2)
00:54:171 (3)
00:55:362 (5)
00:56:076 (6)
00:56:314 (1)
00:57:266 (2)
00:57:981 (3)
00:58:219 (4)
00:59:647 (5)
01:00:124 (1)
01:10:360 (4)
01:10:598 (5)
01:12:979 (2)
01:15:360 (1)
01:27:741 (2)
01:28:455 (3)
01:28:693 (4)
01:40:122 (3)
01:42:979 (2)
01:45:836 (1)
01:47:741 (4)
01:50:360 (2)
01:50:598 (3)
01:52:979 (5)
01:54:409 (2)
01:55:360 (4)
01:56:314 (5)
01:58:933 (3)
01:59:171 (4)
02:01:076 (1)
02:02:743 (3)
02:02:981 (4)
02:05:598 (2)
02:05:836 (3)
02:08:695 (1)
02:41:074 (4)
02:42:028 (5)
02:44:647 (3)
02:44:885 (4)
02:46:790 (1)
02:47:743 (2)
02:48:456 (3)
02:48:695 (4)
02:51:312 (2)
02:51:550 (3)
02:54:409 (1)


[Hard]
00:52:981 (2)
00:53:457 (3)
00:53:933 (4)
00:54:171 (5)
01:00:600 (2)
01:01:076 (3)
01:01:552 (4)
01:01:790 (5)
01:20:122 (3)
01:30:122 (4)
01:53:933 (2)
01:54:409 (3)
01:54:885 (4)
02:02:503 (4)
02:02:741 (5)
02:39:647 (2)
02:41:074 (1)
02:42:503 (4)
02:42:979 (1)
02:43:693 (2)
02:43:931 (3)
02:45:598 (2)
02:45:836 (3)
02:47:266 (2)
02:48:693 (1)
02:50:122 (4)
02:50:360 (5)
02:50:598 (1)
02:51:312 (2)
02:51:550 (3)
02:53:455 (2)
02:53:693 (3)
02:53:931 (4)
02:55:122 (2)
02:55:360 (3)
02:55:836 (4)
02:56:312 (1)
03:00:122 (1)
03:00:598 (2)
03:01:074 (3)
03:02:503 (2)
03:02:979 (3)
03:03:455 (4)
03:03:693 (5)
03:03:931 (1)


[사랑해]
00:32:503 (4)
00:38:933 (4)
00:47:503 (3)
00:52:981 (2)
00:53:457 (3)
00:53:933 (4)
00:54:171 (5)
00:54:409 (1)
00:54:885 (2)
00:55:362 (3)
00:55:838 (4)
00:56:076 (5)
01:07:266 (6)
01:07:385 (7)
01:38:933 (2)
01:39:171 (3)
01:43:457 (5)
01:43:695 (6)
01:53:931 (2)
01:54:407 (3)
01:54:883 (4)
01:56:076 (2)
01:56:314 (3)
01:56:790 (4)
01:57:028 (5)
01:57:266 (1)
01:58:695 (4)
01:59:885 (2)
02:01:552 (2)
02:02:028 (3)
02:03:933 (3)
02:04:409 (4)
02:04:647 (5)
02:39:647 (2)
02:42:028 (3)
02:44:409 (5)
00:14:171 (3)
00:14:409 (4)
00:53:457 (2)
00:54:171 (3)
00:55:362 (5)
00:56:076 (6)
00:56:314 (1)
00:57:266 (2)
00:57:981 (3)
00:58:219 (4)
00:59:647 (5)
01:00:124 (1)
01:10:360 (4)
01:10:598 (5)
01:12:979 (2)
01:15:360 (1)
01:27:741 (2)
01:28:455 (3)
01:28:693 (4)
01:40:122 (3)
01:42:979 (2)
01:45:836 (1)
01:47:741 (4)
01:50:360 (2)
01:50:598 (3)
01:52:979 (5)
01:54:409 (2)
01:55:360 (4)
01:56:314 (5)
01:58:933 (3)
01:59:171 (4)
02:01:076 (1)
02:02:743 (3)
02:02:981 (4)
02:05:598 (2)
02:05:836 (3)
02:08:695 (1)
02:41:074 (4)
02:42:028 (5)
02:44:647 (3)
02:44:885 (4)
02:46:790 (1)
02:47:743 (2)
02:48:456 (3)
02:48:695 (4)
02:51:312 (2)
02:51:550 (3)
02:54:409 (1)
Topic Starter
Aerous

inspectorscout wrote:



Yo, from my queue. Also, this time, Juniorxx13 joins me in modding. He noticed quite a lot O_o

Maybe add a spinner in your diffs? Especially in normal, many people will get the same SS fullmod scores. uhh ill consider it but now no

You have widescreen support on, are you planning on getting a storyboard? You can put it off otherwise.

Normal
00:20:599 - strong vocal, maybe add a note? no i like it with the current one right now

00:35:361 (3,4) - maybe move things around and blanket 4 in 3? should be fine

00:42:980 (3) - rather weird overlap, maybe this? the overlap is fine

hard
AImod tells you that you have spacing issues. They are not a problem, but most of them can be easily avoided and don't improve the gameplay anyway. Maybe go over them and check them.

00:21:551 (3) - for spread I suggest making this a triple, since you don't use triples here but use quite some in insane. k

00:56:313 (1) - maybe flip, make 3 go upwards and blanket 3 in this? no its fine as it is

00:58:218 (1,2,3) - spacing is inconsistent and can be avoided by changing the curve of 1 did some self changes

01:07:265 (4) - triple yea i fixed all of them
there are more

01:25:361 (2) - maybe ctrl +g on all of these (the second slider of each pattern) so that they match the previous ones? (previously you did slider up, down, up, and here it's down, down, down) i like the variation

02:53:931 (4) - align with the next slider? no thanks

weird name thing insane
explain in description why you chose that name and why it matches the song, it would help a lot.

There is not a lot to mod here, you basically always do slider jump jump slider, rinse repeat. maybe try variation?
also, at before the last kiai, the song goes slower and less active/loud, maybe reduce the ds there by a bit so the player gets some rest.

good map overall, we didn't find that much. Sorry for not writing much now, I'll give a star as compensation. And really, call a BN after 3-4 mods max, this is nearly ready.

Thanks for the mod ! I fixed the snapping issue and I'll include a summary of why I chose that name for insane later !

edit : i might reduce the distances of some parts before kiai time
Bara-

Bubbled

Lurei
What the...
Bubbled already?

This guy's so fast. o.o
(anyway, good luck)
Topic Starter
Aerous
moya
o ok
Yuii-
Fixed some aesthetics issues, spread, skinning, combo colours, patterns...

Moving on...!

damn logs
2015-08-06 22:30 Yuii-: okay let's add 에이오에이 to tags
2015-08-06 22:30 Yuii-: it seems that "에이오에이" is "AOA" in Japanese
2015-08-06 22:30 Aerous: i cant copy that
2015-08-06 22:30 Aerous: fk
2015-08-06 22:30 Aerous: uhh
2015-08-06 22:31 Aerous: can you post it on pastebin so i can copy it
2015-08-06 22:31 Yuii-: sure
2015-08-06 22:31 Aerous: http://pastebin.com/
2015-08-06 22:31 Yuii-: http://pastebin.com/fGSMQfBy
2015-08-06 22:32 Aerous: kk added !
2015-08-06 22:33 Yuii-: okay, let's get into the map
2015-08-06 22:33 Yuii-: by the way, are you using both hitsounds?
2015-08-06 22:33 Aerous: both hitsounds?
2015-08-06 22:34 Aerous: double checking hitsounds now
2015-08-06 22:34 Aerous: wait
2015-08-06 22:34 Yuii-: sure
2015-08-06 22:35 Aerous: yea im using those hitsounds and chekced if there was any unsued ones Ace of Angels FNC Entertainment Ji Min Cho A Yu Na You Kyung Hye Jeong Min A Seol Hyun Chan Mi 지민 초아 유나 유경 혜정 민아 설현 찬미 에이오에이
2015-08-06 22:35 Aerous: oh shit
2015-08-06 22:35 Aerous: puush : http://puu.sh/jsflP/6f1d86792d.png
2015-08-06 22:35 Aerous: lol whoops ;w;
2015-08-06 22:35 Yuii-: that's nice!
2015-08-06 22:35 Yuii-: okay, let's move on
2015-08-06 22:35 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/754498 AOA - Heart Attack [Normal]]
2015-08-06 22:35 Yuii-: Normal
2015-08-06 22:35 Aerous: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/754498 AOA - Heart Attack [Normal]]
2015-08-06 22:36 Yuii-: 00:16:313 (1) - the fact that you are NC'ing this means a lot, actually, because there's no SV change nor something similar, just a bit of accentuation in the vocals. I wouldn't do it, but I haven't checked the other diffs. If it's your preference, leave it!
2015-08-06 22:37 Aerous: uhh im gonna keep it ;w;
2015-08-06 22:37 Yuii-: oki
2015-08-06 22:38 Yuii-: 00:31:551 (3) - rotate the slidertail by... 30° anti-clockwise would look better
2015-08-06 22:38 Aerous: got it !
2015-08-06 22:39 Yuii-: 00:38:218 (2) - curve this and move it some pixels below would be amazing, something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3497508 !
2015-08-06 22:40 Aerous: kk curved
2015-08-06 22:42 Yuii-: 01:06:789 (1) - there's something that is bothering me a lot about here, and it's not the NC. This is, of course, your map, but you're leaving some serious things in this particular pattern, would you mind doing something like this:http://puu.sh/jsfJT/a381fe3377.jpg
2015-08-06 22:44 Aerous: o
2015-08-06 22:44 Aerous: if i change the rythem i gotta change the other parts too
2015-08-06 22:44 Aerous: uhh
2015-08-06 22:44 Yuii-: that was SUPER nazi, I know
2015-08-06 22:44 Yuii-: though I don't know why you should change the others
2015-08-06 22:44 Aerous: im gonna add it since my other idffs
2015-08-06 22:44 Aerous: have it
2015-08-06 22:45 Yuii-: that's my boy!
2015-08-06 22:45 Yuii-: Anyway, more nazi things have to be done (?
2015-08-06 22:46 Aerous: C:
2015-08-06 22:46 Yuii-: 02:22:980 (5) - imo you are overexteding this slider too much, don't you think? it's covering two different sounds and it may sound bad in some way, would you consider adding a circle in 02:23:694 - as you are doing in other several patterns throughout the map?
2015-08-06 22:47 Aerous: kk
2015-08-06 22:47 Yuii-: 02:29:646 (1) - shouldn't the NC be 02:31:075 (2) - ?
2015-08-06 22:48 Yuii-: I mean, that's were the music changes
2015-08-06 22:48 Aerous: i nc on every 3rd white tick ;w;
2015-08-06 22:48 Yuii-: 02:53:456 (1) - I know what you meant before... but it's only this part too come on ;w;
2015-08-06 22:49 Yuii-: oh, it's okay then!
2015-08-06 22:50 Aerous: i just noticed NC error gg
2015-08-06 22:50 Aerous: fixed it tho
2015-08-06 22:50 Yuii-: cool cool
2015-08-06 22:50 Aerous: do i need to fix this ? 00:21:075 (1) -
2015-08-06 22:52 Yuii-: I am not that sure, the sound is completely different, as you can hear, you could perfectly map some 1/2 serie of circles
2015-08-06 22:52 Aerous: ;w; http://puu.sh/jsgog/142a49f5d4.jpg
2015-08-06 22:53 Yuii-: reverse arrow to (1)? as you are doing with the other 2 parts?
2015-08-06 22:55 Yuii-: also, according to Wikipedia, some tags should be ... shortened?
2015-08-06 22:55 Aerous: oh yea i used wikipedia
2015-08-06 22:55 Aerous: but euny used the official
2015-08-06 22:55 Aerous: site
2015-08-06 22:55 Yuii-: BUT THAT'S WIKIPEDIA! WHO THE FUCK WOULD USE THAT
2015-08-06 22:55 Aerous: LMAOO
2015-08-06 22:55 Yuii-: yup, let me keep searching
2015-08-06 22:56 Aerous: you might die from nosebleed careful
2015-08-06 22:56 Aerous: too hot
2015-08-06 22:57 Yuii-: I'm surprised actually
2015-08-06 22:57 Yuii-: they are all japanese girls
2015-08-06 22:57 Yuii-: and they have boobs
2015-08-06 22:57 Yuii-: WOT
2015-08-06 22:57 Aerous: "korean"
2015-08-06 22:57 Aerous: plzz
2015-08-06 22:57 Aerous: <33
2015-08-06 22:58 Yuii-: FUCK
2015-08-06 22:58 Yuii-: well they have the same eyes
2015-08-06 22:58 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/753915 AOA - Heart Attack [Hard]]
2015-08-06 22:58 Yuii-: Hard!
2015-08-06 22:58 Aerous: LOLOL
2015-08-06 22:58 Aerous: kk
2015-08-06 22:59 Yuii-: 00:17:742 (1) - y u
2015-08-06 22:59 Aerous: o
2015-08-06 22:59 Aerous: LOL
2015-08-06 22:59 Aerous: whoops
2015-08-06 22:59 Aerous: o wait
2015-08-06 22:59 Aerous: 00:16:313 (1) - SV change
2015-08-06 22:59 Aerous: should NC
2015-08-06 23:00 Aerous: 00:17:504 (2) -
2015-08-06 23:00 should i nc *
2015-08-06 23:00 Yuii-: yup, swap -em
2015-08-06 23:00 Yuii-: oh my keyboard is in english wtf
2015-08-06 23:01 Aerous: swapped
2015-08-06 23:01 Yuii-: ññ
2015-08-06 23:01 Yuii-: ah there we go
2015-08-06 23:01 Yuii-: okay
2015-08-06 23:02 Yuii-: 01:07:027 - I wouldn't add this green line here
2015-08-06 23:02 Aerous: o
2015-08-06 23:02 Aerous: i have it on all my diffs ;w;
2015-08-06 23:03 Yuii-: I swear I am not blind ;w;
2015-08-06 23:03 Yuii-: how did I miss it
2015-08-06 23:03 Yuii-: well leave it, it's an inoffensive line anyway
2015-08-06 23:03 Aerous: kk
2015-08-06 23:04 Yuii-: 01:30:123 (4) - why, Aery! 01:26:313 (4,5) -
2015-08-06 23:05 Aerous: ;w;
2015-08-06 23:05 Yuii-: I'd stick to the 2 circles since you do it in 02:02:504 (4,5) - too, for example
2015-08-06 23:06 Yuii-: is the pattern you use the most
2015-08-06 23:06 Aerous: kk
2015-08-06 23:06 Aerous: added
2015-08-06 23:06 Yuii-: 02:07:980 - THE GREEN LINE ADD IT HERE AS WELL IF YOU DON'T WANT TO SUFFER FROM MY...
2015-08-06 23:06 Yuii-: POWER
2015-08-06 23:07 Aerous: ;w;
2015-08-06 23:07 Aerous: ill just leave it
2015-08-06 23:07 Aerous: :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
2015-08-06 23:07 Aerous: ACTION runs
2015-08-06 23:07 Yuii-: wow
2015-08-06 23:07 Yuii-: that was so mean ;_;
2015-08-06 23:07 Aerous: orz
2015-08-06 23:08 Yuii-: okay this diff
2015-08-06 23:08 Yuii-: Saranghae
2015-08-06 23:08 Aerous: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/753081 AOA - Heart Attack [Saranghae]]
2015-08-06 23:09 Yuii-: 00:12:980 (2) - why would you use this when you are making 1,2 parallels during the intro
2015-08-06 23:10 Aerous: wat would u do
2015-08-06 23:10 Yuii-: 00:17:504 (2) - NC honey <3 ily
2015-08-06 23:10 Aerous: im noob
2015-08-06 23:10 Aerous: o ya
2015-08-06 23:10 Aerous: nc;ed
2015-08-06 23:11 Yuii-: you are telling me to help you mapping?
2015-08-06 23:11 Yuii-: you have to be kidding me
2015-08-06 23:11 Aerous: ya im noob
2015-08-06 23:11 Yuii-: http://puu.sh/jshty/65b39ee010.png
2015-08-06 23:11 Yuii-: tell me that
2015-08-06 23:11 Aerous: im still noob
2015-08-06 23:12 Aerous: i flipped this
2015-08-06 23:12 Aerous: 00:12:980 (2) -
2015-08-06 23:12 Aerous: towards 3
2015-08-06 23:12 Aerous: and moved 3 just a bit
2015-08-06 23:13 Yuii-: cool! move (1) some pixels above too
2015-08-06 23:13 Yuii-: so the spacing isn't that much between notes
2015-08-06 23:13 Aerous: kk
2015-08-06 23:14 Yuii-: 00:19:408 (4,5) - personal question! why are you stacking this when in the following section you are literally avoiding every single stack that is in the same combo
2015-08-06 23:15 Aerous: oo
2015-08-06 23:15 Aerous: right
2015-08-06 23:16 Aerous: see im noob
2015-08-06 23:16 Aerous: im gonna change it
2015-08-06 23:16 Yuii-: if you are noob I am...
2015-08-06 23:16 Yuii-: i don't know
2015-08-06 23:16 Aerous: god
2015-08-06 23:16 Aerous: http://puu.sh/jshIu/36927ecf24.jpg
2015-08-06 23:16 Yuii-: what let's put in in the traaaash
2015-08-06 23:16 Yuii-: let me see that
2015-08-06 23:16 Yuii-: 00:42:160 - don't mind this - is where I am
2015-08-06 23:17 Aerous: gg
2015-08-06 23:17 Yuii-: tell me the DS between notes
2015-08-06 23:17 Yuii-: in 00:18:932 (3,4,5,6) -
2015-08-06 23:18 Aerous: 4 - 5 = 1.93
2015-08-06 23:18 Aerous: 5-6 = 1.96
2015-08-06 23:18 Aerous: 6 - 1 = 2.73
2015-08-06 23:19 Yuii-: 3-4?
2015-08-06 23:20 Aerous: 2.18
2015-08-06 23:20 Yuii-: increase distance between 4 - 5 (since there's a clear strong beat there) and reduce 3-4 a bit. Try to make the distance in 3-4 the same as in 5-6
2015-08-06 23:20 Yuii-: I don't know if I explained myself correctly
2015-08-06 23:20 Aerous: k
2015-08-06 23:21 Aerous: increased
2015-08-06 23:21 Aerous: and decreased
2015-08-06 23:21 Yuii-: cool cool
2015-08-06 23:22 Yuii-: 01:07:265 (6,7,8) - i love this
2015-08-06 23:22 Aerous: :DDD
2015-08-06 23:23 Yuii-: 01:31:908 (6) - whistle maybe?
2015-08-06 23:23 Aerous: k
2015-08-06 23:25 Yuii-: 02:57:623 (6) - w
2015-08-06 23:26 Yuii-: 02:59:646 (5) - whistle instead? so you would do something similar to 02:57:265 (4) -
2015-08-06 23:26 Aerous: kk
2015-08-06 23:26 Yuii-: oh nvm 03:05:361 (5) -
2015-08-06 23:26 Yuii-: ONONONOON
2015-08-06 23:26 Yuii-: ignore the last whistle
2015-08-06 23:26 Yuii-: just (6)
2015-08-06 23:26 Aerous: k
2015-08-06 23:27 Aerous: wait
2015-08-06 23:27 Aerous: just 6? 03:05:599 (6) -
2015-08-06 23:27 Yuii-: I mean 02:57:623 (6) - }
2015-08-06 23:27 Aerous: kk lol
2015-08-06 23:28 Yuii-: update aaaand let me press Ctrl+Shift+A and rank :D
2015-08-06 23:28 Aerous: LOL
2015-08-06 23:28 Aerous: kk
2015-08-06 23:28 Aerous: DOUBLE CHECK EVERYTHING?
2015-08-06 23:28 Aerous: IM GONNA CHECK VIDEO
2015-08-06 23:28 Yuii-: THERE IS A VIDEO?
2015-08-06 23:29 Aerous: ya
2015-08-06 23:29 Yuii-: wait let me re-dl
2015-08-06 23:29 Yuii-: because I didn't download the video ver
2015-08-06 23:29 Aerous: let me restart
2015-08-06 23:29 Aerous: osu is gay
2015-08-06 23:29 Yuii-: poor peppy
2015-08-06 23:30 Aerous: updating
2015-08-06 23:30 Aerous: poor pp
2015-08-06 23:30 Aerous: inb4 too many qual righ tnow
2015-08-06 23:30 Aerous: D:
2015-08-06 23:30 Aerous: updated
2015-08-06 23:30 Yuii-: waaaaait
2015-08-06 23:30 Yuii-: spread!
2015-08-06 23:31 Aerous: spreadd
2015-08-06 23:31 Yuii-: Normal: 3 - 3 - 2 - 2 is okay
2015-08-06 23:31 Aerous: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1e7wlqRXsDc
2015-08-06 23:31 Aerous: ok
2015-08-06 23:32 Yuii-: Hard: 4 - 6 - 4.5 - 4.5 ... I wouldn't, especially when in Saranwhatever is almost similar
2015-08-06 23:32 Yuii-: Try 4 - 5.5 - 4.5 - 4.5
2015-08-06 23:32 Aerous: rip
2015-08-06 23:32 Aerous: wait
2015-08-06 23:32 Aerous: for
2015-08-06 23:32 Aerous: hard?
2015-08-06 23:32 Yuii-: yup
2015-08-06 23:32 Aerous: k
2015-08-06 23:33 Aerous: reupdating
2015-08-06 23:33 Yuii-: and for Saranw/e: 4 - 8 (+2.5 for consistency) - 7 - 7
2015-08-06 23:33 Yuii-: all for the sake of consistency, of course
2015-08-06 23:33 Aerous: wait
2015-08-06 23:33 Aerous: im confused now
2015-08-06 23:33 Aerous: so
2015-08-06 23:34 Aerous: change OD and HP to?
2015-08-06 23:34 Yuii-: yup, we have to make the spread fit
2015-08-06 23:34 Aerous: oo
2015-08-06 23:34 Aerous: HP to 6.5?
2015-08-06 23:34 Yuii-: 7*
2015-08-06 23:34 Yuii-: +2.5
2015-08-06 23:35 Aerous: lucky 7
2015-08-06 23:35 Aerous: k
2015-08-06 23:35 Aerous: updaitng
2015-08-06 23:35 Yuii-: update and let's fucking pray for those 6 maps
2015-08-06 23:35 Aerous: double check ;w;
2015-08-06 23:35 Yuii-: of course!
2015-08-06 23:37 Aerous: update
2015-08-06 23:38 Yuii-: WAIT
2015-08-06 23:38 Yuii-: WE ALMOST MISS SOMETHING
2015-08-06 23:38 Yuii-: PREFERRED SKIN: AOA SKIN
2015-08-06 23:38 Aerous: O_O_O_O
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: YA
2015-08-06 23:39 Yuii-: YOU WANT TO CHANGE THAT BECAUSE THERE IS NOTHING IN THE FOLDER
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: P A N gave it to me
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: WAT
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: WAIT
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: wat do u mean
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: its empty
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: o-o
2015-08-06 23:39 Yuii-: there's no file
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: wtf
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: gg
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: i lost it
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: holy crap
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: omgg
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: omg
2015-08-06 23:39 Yuii-: use the default
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: NO
2015-08-06 23:39 Yuii-: and that's it
2015-08-06 23:39 Aerous: RIP P A N
2015-08-06 23:40 Aerous: http://puu.sh/jsiXI/b9cca7dc4b.png
2015-08-06 23:40 Yuii-: yup, that one
2015-08-06 23:40 Aerous: restarting osu
2015-08-06 23:41 Aerous: updating
2015-08-06 23:41 Aerous: kk

Congratulations~
Norman
Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Aerous
NO RIP PLZ

Nuolong
gosh damn tht was fking fast
super sanic doe ;w;
grats
Sonnyc
Disliked [Saranghae]. Notes were just simply placed in wide distances, making me feel stressed. Partially because of my playing skills, but I wouldn't say the map was nice.

From a random hater.
Topic Starter
Aerous
I'm noob
Sidetail
Congrats!
Bara-
I usually don't like speedranks, but this map deserves it :3
Congratz!
Tsuriiko_
KPOP SHALL RULE THE WORLD. :)
Zaphkael
Aerous wrote:
Since my other map got ranked and you told me to post a new map here :

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/340444

yup, I'll try today or tomorrow. Don't speedrank plz.
Nevermind... xD congratz
Bara-
Wait
Skin preferences
I haven't seen that in a while
Perhaps add a download link to the skin in the description
P A N
osu need more kpop.

bubble my map please baraatje, already 3 days old. :D
Cherry Blossom
Gratz :o
Ticketholder.
pkk
wh
Nomination Assessment Team

Disqualification Notice



Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

Normal

Spacing Errors

  • Overly spaced note(s), creating massive jumps, which are inappropriate for this difficulty.
  1. 02:08:694 (1) - A huge increase from the regular 1.0 spacing to a whooping 2.7.
General

Empty sound after Hitsound

  • Considering the fact that the beatmap size is already large, we'd recommend you decrease some of the space after the soft-hitwhistle as it is unneeded.
Insane

Wrong Emphasis

  • You've put wrong emphasis to some objects. Make sure to use appropriate spacing relation between objects when the song should be emphasized. Take these for example:
  1. 00:12:504 (1) - The spacing is not right and provides poor emphasis, the vocals is rather strong here.
  2. 01:58:218 (3,4,1) - The spacing is too small compared to 4 here, please increase it accordingly to follow the song even better

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###AM
Ipas
Ahh D:
Please rank it again :>
Topic Starter
Aerous

Quality Assurance Team wrote:

Disqualification Notice



Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

Normal

Spacing Errors

  • Overly spaced note(s), creating massive jumps, which are inappropriate for this difficulty.
  1. 02:08:694 (1) - A huge increase from the regular 1.0 spacing to a whooping 2.7.
Holy shit I probably misclicked and dragged it out by accident when I updated it


General

Empty sound after Hitsound

  • Considering the fact that the beatmap size is already large, we'd recommend you decrease some of the space after the soft-hitwhistle as it is unneeded.
    I reduced the file size by removing Normal and Hard's background
Insane

Wrong Emphasis

  • You've put wrong emphasis to some objects. Make sure to use appropriate spacing relation between objects when the song should be emphasized. Take these for example:
  1. 00:12:504 (1) - The spacing is not right and provides poor emphasis, the vocals is rather strong here. Even though theres a gap , I increased the distance just a bit ! Hope its fine now ?
  2. 01:58:218 (3,4,1) - The spacing is too small compared to 4 here, please increase it accordingly to follow the song even better
    k I CTRL + G slider 4 and the next slider is right behind it

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###AM
TL:DR - Fixed Everything
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