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Marina And The Diamonds - I Am Not A Robot

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Topic Starter
Mao
Going to apply these later this weekend, thanks guys!
Mafumafu
What is the thing in the BG owo?
It seems like a mooncake lol
Topic Starter
Mao
It's some kind of gear wheel-stuff because of the robot topic :D
Yuii-
The title clearly says "I am not a robot", so why would you use a "robotic" theme? As that doesn't make sense, this map will never be qualified... (?)

Okay, real thing. Checking in the following hours, can you provide metadata until then? I really would like to see if all the initials should be capitalized.

EDIT: After researching for a lot of time (2 tough minutes, I am exhausted) I found that the correct title should be "I Am Not a Robot"; meaning that A should not be in cappital letters.
Topic Starter
Mao
Sure? Her website lists it capitalized o:
http://marinaandthediamonds.com/thefamilyjewels.php
UnderminE
Hello, I love Marina and The Diamonds.

And uh, I have only one suggestion for Hard difficulty. How about something like this for this part 02:38:515 - (and the previous vocal part as wel)



And the last kiai is very long imo. Maybe you should just "flash" the kiai here 02:28:265 - and actually use the kiai starting from here 02:44:265 - to here 03:16:265 -
Sieg

UnderminE wrote:

Hello, I love Marina and The Diamonds.
Snaggletooth
Requested Mod.

  1. kbit r8 m8.
  2. SB: "grb1" dosn't fade out on 01:06:265 same issue on 02:12:265
  3. SB: "grb1" fades in too early on 02:44:265 and 03:00:265
  4. SB: Maybe consider fading "hrt1" in, altho I don't have a reason for it. I mostly
    feel like it would look nice. I dunno.

no kd. I'm far too lazy to fully mod this. Sorry Mao.
Topic Starter
Mao
Going to revive this soon, I'm just too busy >_>
MondoKuma
I love this song too much and it pains me to see it not ranked so i'm modding it just to get it a little bit closer

TR:I'm not a fan of hit sound modding but i'll try to do that as well
(Im bad at hits sound modding so if you don't feel the sound don't work you're probably right)

00:31:765 (2) - Add a finish Hitsound?
00:31:765 (2) - Move this further away from the slider? (not too far)
00:36:765 (2,3,4) - A little bigger jump? Like the ones at 00:52:765 (2,3) -
01:06:265 (1,2,3) - Same here to make a pattern

01:23:765 (4) - This slider should end at 01:23:144 -
01:25:765 (5) - This should end at 01:25:806 - (1 tick shorter)
01:41:765 (4) - Same as above ;3 (Sorry if I get repetitive)
01:49:765 (4) - Again I feel it should be the same as above


Average:
00:31:765 (2) - Add a finish hit sound?
01:06:265 (1) - This slider should last until the next white tick and after that slider there should be a circle every 1/2 tick (until 01:07:765 (5) - )

01:32:015 (1) - ( Just want to say I love the shape of this slider )


Other than that this map is good

Sorry I didn't mod Tough but I'm Busy *_* Sorry!
Auxent
I-it's not like I'm stalking you or anything...I just...
That SB is so sweet ♥ (so is song)

General:
- Add tags: "The Family Jewels" (album), "Lambrini Diamandis" (It's her true name considering that Marina is her first name, there shouldn't be duplicated words).
- You should change the mp3 quality to 192kbps. I've rendered the mp3 file for you so you can download it here.

Average:
- I see you have some inconsistent combos compared with another diffs. Like the new combo is starting after every 2nd or 3rd note, but in others on every downbeat.
- 00:21:265 (2,1) - This blanket is little bit off.
- 00:27:765 (3,1) - ^ (seems like I'm a blanket fetishist but this totally bugs me) Move 00:28:265 (1) - to x:337 y:364.
- 01:12:265 (1,3) - I'm not actually fan of the stacks at the easiest difficulties. It's just a minor thing that bugs me a little. You can try for ex. a pattern like this: 01:18:265 (1,2) - or 01:22:265 (1,2) - .
- 01:27:015 (3,1) - How about redesigning a slider like this?
- 01:31:015 (4,1) - What about removing this overlap by moving the 01:32:015 (1) - ? It doesn't look nice imo.

Tough:
- Enable Widescreen Support
- 01:15:265 (3,4) - Blanket is slightly off.
- 01:27:015 (3,4) - Same thing as in "Average" (Slider)

Twin Robotic:
- Enable Widescreen Support
- It would be great to see the names of mappers in this difficulty since it's a collab.
- I'm speechless, good job over here.

I hope this "mod" will be useful.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Mao
It has been a long time but I hope I will be able to apply all of these mods this weekend!
Myxo
nice
Topic Starter
Mao
Lanturn

Lanturn wrote:

02:23:765 (3) - 3/4 slider like the music says instead of this repeat 1/4? Don't you hear the buildup similiar to 01:37:265 (3,4) - ? o.o

Bonsai

Bonsai wrote:

I found almost nothing major, so basically everything is just suggestions ^^


[Average]
  1. 00:53:765 (3) and 01:01:765 (3) - Since the vocals, which are the reasons you mapped these sliders I guess, are on the tails it doesn't feel like you're mapping the vocals but just that background rhythm which is left out most of the time. I'd either let the previous slider reverse or extend it to 2/1 to enable the vocal to be clickable. Same in the other Kiais Well that's to keep it simple as the 2/4 rhythm is more intuitive for ewer players to play.
  2. 02:30:515 (2,3) and 02:38:515 (2,3) - There's too much background beat left out imo, maybe add some 1/2-sliders, especially since there's also a vocal change of pitch at 02:31:765 / 02:39:765 I wanted to keep it rather simple though :/


[Tough]
  1. 00:16:515 (2) and 00:24:515 (2) - The vocals at the tails of these two are at least as important as their heads, so I'd change the objects there a bit. They feel especially left out since the following notes are (almost) exactly in the extended line of the sliderpaths I didn't want to start right with a circle stack as the first objects as it would a) be much harder to hit and b) feel a bit empty. The second one is there for consistency.
  2. 01:06:265 to 01:38:265 - It feels really awkward to hitsound the drum-finishes and normal-hitnormals when you leave them out so often, especially parts like 01:07:015 (3) where only the first of that pair of finishes is mapped, and on top of that you sometimes put the whistles on the beats where finishes would be. Just my opinion, but I would either don't put those hitsounds there at all or map most of them (although then there would be almost no contrast to the next section I guess), this just feels very random Well they are still in the music and to me it would feel totally empty without them but I also don't want to cluster the whole timeline for such a difficulty thus there was the struggle to either map them or not and I decided for doing so.
  3. 02:31:015 (6,1) - I feel like there's too much of the background-rhythm left out, maybe just add a circle in-between Same as in Average
  4. 02:39:015 (6,7,1) - since there's a vocal change of putch left out at 02:39:765 and 02:40:015 (7) really deserves to be held too I'd suggest something like this I consider changing this if more people mention it.
[Twin Robotic]
  1. 00:24:515 (2,3,4) - imo the sliderends are too much, just putting three circles there fits better, gives the same feeling as 00:22:265 (1,2,3) - the piano is being left out a lot anyways, so it doesn't matter here The slidertails are following the piano and the slight hold of their vocals :/
  2. 00:26:015 (1) - maybe let this slider end at 00:26:515 and place another circle afterwards, or at least do some slider-shape with a red control point at 00:26:515 ?
  3. 00:28:765 (2) - the 'V' of 'love' is pretty audible at the red tic but I guess you don't wanna destroy that pattern / change the first two sliders to 1/2? : \ It's actually lovED
  4. 02:24:265 (1) - The beat of that slidertail has previously always been left out, so I'd do it here too for consistency, feels better anyways imo Uhm the section is getting more intense though and a 1/1 gap would feel really empty like REALLY empty imo. Might consider it though.

MKGuh

MkGuh wrote:

General

  1. You might want turn on epilepsy warning maybe?? Uhm, does the SB even have flashes? o.o

MondoKuma

MondoKuma wrote:

00:31:765 (2) - Add a finish Hitsound? Why? It's just a piano sound o:
00:31:765 (2) - Move this further away from the slider? (not too far) It's an antijump to emphasize the gap between these two notes!

01:41:765 (4) - Same as above ;3 (Sorry if I get repetitive) It's for the emphasis
01:49:765 (4) - Again I feel it should be the same as above ^


Average:
00:31:765 (2) - Add a finish hit sound? Same as Robotic

Auxent

Auxent wrote:

Average:
- 01:12:265 (1,3) - I'm not actually fan of the stacks at the easiest difficulties. It's just a minor thing that bugs me a little. You can try for ex. a pattern like this: 01:18:265 (1,2) - or 01:22:265 (1,2) - . I think this should actually be simpler to hit than spacing in this case and it's something between Normal and Easy so it shouldn't be too big of a problem
- 01:27:015 (3,1) - How about redesigning a slider like this? Changed it slightly to be parallel with the following
- 01:31:015 (4,1) - What about removing this overlap by moving the 01:32:015 (1) - ? It doesn't look nice imo. What's wrong with it? o:

Tough:
- 01:27:015 (3,4) - Same thing as in "Average" (Slider) Kept it here to keep the emphasis of the sound.

Twin Robotic:
- It would be great to see the names of mappers in this difficulty since it's a collab. Well it's how Desp and I name our difficulties and most people should know that already.

Thanks a lot guys. Everything I didn't reply to was either fixed or in Desp's parts! I will update once he has applied stuff :3
Raiden
Standaaaaaard
MondoKuma
Congrats on 12* Hopefully it gets ranked soon!
Topic Starter
Mao
I will contact some BNs once everything is applied properly :3
Topic Starter
Mao
Updated, waiting for Desp until I fix the mp3!
MondoKuma
Can't wait for this to get ranked
Topic Starter
Mao
Still waiting for Desp to reply :/
MondoKuma
Ah :P That sucks.
I hope he answers soon.
If I could help in anyway don't hesitate to ask
Myxo

Bonsai wrote:

I found almost nothing major, so basically everything is just suggestions ^^

[Twin Robotic]
  1. 00:35:015 (2) and 00:43:015 (2) - leaving out the 'claps' on these two white tics seems pretty random since you didn't do that anywhere else it's done for variation.. overall i don't want too much density in this calm part so i intentionally leave out some ticks
  2. 01:09:265 (3,4) and 01:11:266 (4,5) - On the tail of the second slider is a vocal whereas there is none on the tail of the first slider, but since they're both mapped the same it loses its relevance - I'd replace one of them with one/two circles that's really picky. not sure about this, but two sliders work just fine for me especially since i am using circles for more distinct vocals (the main focus is on sliders in this map due to it being a Hard diff)
  3. 02:28:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since there are no lyrics here to emphasize, I would emphasize the two finishes more, feels kinda boring otherwise. Actually there are a lot of places where it's like that in the Kiai, it doesn't really feel like you're really playing that rhythm, but it's hitsounded so it should be important, right I am following the echo of the vocal here. I think it works very well as it is what makes this kiai different from the others.

UnderminE wrote:

Hello, I love Marina and The Diamonds.

And uh, I have only one suggestion for Hard difficulty. How about something like this for this part 02:38:515 - (and the previous vocal part as wel)



Nahhh, while that would work, I really prefer following the vocals in my maps :3

MondoKuma wrote:

I love this song too much and it pains me to see it not ranked so i'm modding it just to get it a little bit closer

TR:I'm not a fan of hit sound modding but i'll try to do that as well
(Im bad at hits sound modding so if you don't feel the sound don't work you're probably right)

00:36:765 (2,3,4) - A little bigger jump? Like the ones at 00:52:765 (2,3) - No, I don't want circles with high spacing here because the section is so calm
01:06:265 (1,2,3) - Same here to make a pattern uhh... that thing is a pattern

01:23:765 (4) - This slider should end at 01:23:144 - It is extended for a reason - in order to stress the vocals here. If you listen closely to the music, this is exactly what the vocals represent
01:25:765 (5) - This should end at 01:25:806 - (1 tick shorter) ^
The rest was either not in my parts or hitsounding, which I'll leave to Mao. Thank you for the mods, I feel bad about not changing anything, however I got my reasoning for these patterns. I tried out the suggestions but they simply didn't work for me or I prefer my current version.
Topic Starter
Mao
Updated with the tags and the new mp3 \o/
Stjpa
Gotta try ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Dein BG ist nicht 1366x768 8-)

Average

00:28:291 (1,2,3) - Denke das hier wäre eine bessere Lösung, da man das Blanket von (1) und (3) nach wie vor behält und dazu noch den Flow von (2) -> (3) verbessert.
00:32:291 (1,2) - Mich triggerts ja etwas, dass eine Silbe auf dem Slidertail von (1) liegt. Evtl könnte man das Pattern in das hier ändern?
00:54:291 (4,5) - Könnte man auch ohne Probleme blanketen. Sieht einfach so viel besser aus. >_>
01:14:041 (6,1) - Bin ich blöd oder sind die nicht ganz gestackt?
01:15:291 (2,3) - Fix blanket, ziemlich visible imo.
01:35:041 (2,3,4) - Das ganze Pattern hier ist von den Transitions her sehr questionable imo. Wenigstens n Blanket wäre cool, auch wenns zu 99% deine Absicht war.
02:52:291 (1) - Vielleicht etwas rotaten und überhalb von (5) platzieren? Triangles sind super! Möglicherweise kannst du dann auch die Pattern danach etwas ändern, weil es so aussieht als hättest du da ziemlich Platzmangel gehabt. :^)


Tough

00:16:541 (2) - 1/2 Slider + Circle wäre meiner Meinung nach passender weil die Silbe auf deinem Slidertail dann besser emphasized wird.
00:33:041 (2,4,5) - Eventuell ein besseres Triangle aus dem Slidertail und den 2 Circles?
01:30:291 (1,2) - STRG + G covered die Vocals viel besser.
02:00:791 (5,6) - Blanket?
02:35:791 (8,3) - Stack? Kann aber auch gut sein, dass mein Client manchmal Stacks nicht richtig anzeigen möchte. >_>
02:38:291 (4,5) - Würde ich aus diesem Zweck eher etwas weiter unten platzieren, müsstest dann nur eventuell den Slider danach etwas rotaten / anpassen, damit der noch reinpasst.

Zur letzten Diff finde ich nicht mal was, was man eventuell verbessern könnte. Rip me. Kann deine Maps wie gesagt nicht wirklich gut modden. :P
Bara-
Hi
[General]
Why did you use soooo many sliderwhistles? They kill my ears

[Storyboard]
Consider adding the collab names in the SB for TR difficulty
Consider making the heart appearing a hitsoundtrigger. So it only appears when the object is pressed. That way, when you miss on the end, you also don't get the heart
Edit: Ermm, what is the point in white.jpg if you use it for the color in the BG. Why does it display five nights at freddy's?

[Average]
01:18:291 (1,2) - Not completely symmetrical
01:30:291 (1,2,3) - As the piano is just 1/1, the polarity here feels really weird. try the same rhythm as you did in 01:12:291 (4,5) -

[Tough]
00:54:041 - Add a circle to follow the "A" in the vocals
00:58:041 (4,6) - Consider blanketing those (properly)
01:02:291 (4,5,6) - Doesn't look nice. Try this
01:06:541 (2,3) - Not aligned properly
02:33:291 (3,4) - The tail of (4) is closer to (3) then the head of (4) is. I hope you remember Magma Dan :P

[Twin Robotic]
00:25:541 (4,1) - Not aligned properly
00:28:791 (2) - Why not Ctrl HJG and move to around 388:40? Seems to flow better
00:35:791 (3) - Silence end?
00:43:791 (3) - ^^
01:23:791 (4,5) - ^^
01:28:291 (1) - I miss a wiggle
01:41:791 (4) - Silence end
01:49:791 (4) - ^^
02:15:791 (4) - ^^
02:36:291 (1) - ^^
02:51:291 (3,4) - A bit too curved. Reduve the curve (Tryo to make (4) blanket with (1), then copy it over)

Call me
Myxo
osu file format v14

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Creator:Mao
Version:Twin Robotic
Source:
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473,193,148791,2,0,P|455:239|419:273,1,98.9999969787599,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
280,264,149291,2,0,P|248:225|237:177,1,98.9999969787599,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,173,149791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
356,173,150041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,337,150291,5,12,0:0:0:0:
193,300,150541,2,0,L|81:318,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
200,204,151041,2,0,L|87:192,1,98.9999969787599,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
231,113,151541,2,0,L|125:72,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
331,62,152041,6,0,P|357:152|449:173,1,197.99999395752,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,60,152791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
449,173,153041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
494,283,153291,1,4,0:3:0:0:
403,358,153541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,294,153791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
332,179,154041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,259,154291,6,0,B|301:228|291:298|203:260,1,197.99999395752,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
117,343,155041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
117,343,155291,2,0,P|69:343|29:315,1,98.9999969787599,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,201,155791,2,0,P|68:173|117:174,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,66,156291,6,0,L|229:214,1,148.49999546814,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,156791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,183,157041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
422,264,157291,2,0,L|435:372,1,98.9999969787599,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,322,157791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
317,322,158041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,172,158291,5,12,0:0:0:0:
307,93,158541,2,0,P|258:90|207:118,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
127,263,159041,2,0,P|154:222|155:163,1,98.9999969787599,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
69,22,159541,2,0,P|90:65|140:96,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,191,160041,2,0,P|293:284|217:338,1,197.99999395752,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,263,160791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
53,356,161041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
45,237,161291,1,4,0:3:0:0:
118,143,161541,2,0,P|127:102|107:47,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,91,162041,6,0,L|255:291,1,197.99999395752,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,318,162791,2,0,P|368:273|377:225,1,98.9999969787599,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
455,135,163291,2,0,P|472:89|464:41,1,98.9999969787599,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
342,26,163791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
342,26,164041,1,0,1:0:0:0:
273,128,164291,6,0,P|180:143|145:57,1,197.99999395752,14|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
27,37,165041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
60,151,165291,2,0,L|111:352,1,197.99999395752,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
224,371,166041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,288,166291,6,0,P|322:241|376:210,1,98.9999969787599,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,248,166791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
452,131,167041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
315,40,167291,2,0,L|221:81,1,98.9999969787599,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,40,167791,2,0,L|18:81,1,98.9999969787599,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,240,168291,6,0,P|24:291|73:314,1,98.9999969787599,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,263,168791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,342,169041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
344,263,169291,1,4,0:3:0:0:
432,183,169541,2,0,L|444:79,2,98.9999969787599,0|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,32,170291,6,0,P|332:83|201:106,1,197.99999395752,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
106,44,171041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
41,143,171291,2,0,P|45:195|82:216,1,98.9999969787599,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,213,171791,2,0,P|241:238|242:286,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,317,172291,6,0,L|327:346,1,197.99999395752,14|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
385,244,173041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
453,341,173291,2,0,P|495:287|466:160,1,197.99999395752,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
358,134,174041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
271,214,174291,6,0,L|196:279,1,98.9999969787599,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,244,174791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
157,152,175041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
3,29,175291,2,0,P|38:61|87:64,1,98.9999969787599,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,47,175791,2,0,P|253:49|289:82,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,246,176291,5,14,0:0:0:0:
366,328,176541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
478,289,176791,1,2,1:2:0:0:
390,208,177041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
390,208,177291,1,4,0:3:0:0:
499,161,177541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,88,177791,2,0,L|325:29,1,98.9999969787599,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,49,178291,6,0,P|157:100|195:139,1,98.9999969787599,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,227,178791,2,0,P|256:278|218:317,1,98.9999969787599,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
113,353,179291,1,4,0:3:0:0:
23,274,179541,1,4,0:3:0:0:
135,234,179791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
135,234,180041,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,356,180291,6,0,P|304:288|292:193,1,197.99999395752,14|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
189,135,181041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
292,76,181291,2,0,B|357:62|357:62|418:91|418:91|483:74,1,197.99999395752,4|0,0:3|1:0,0:0:0:0:
480,193,182041,2,0,P|435:210|411:252,1,98.9999969787599,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,360,182541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,292,182791,2,0,P|220:268|172:276,1,98.9999969787599,0|4,1:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
318,209,183291,2,0,L|293:107,1,98.9999969787599,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,252,183791,2,0,P|435:210|480:193,1,98.9999969787599,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,43,184291,6,0,P|349:84|273:29,1,197.99999395752,14|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
183,107,185041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
70,67,185291,1,4,0:3:0:0:
93,183,185541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,223,185791,2,0,P|210:275|188:318,1,98.9999969787599,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,290,186291,6,0,P|352:344|478:326,1,197.99999395752,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
453,187,187041,2,0,P|416:218|405:266,1,98.9999969787599,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
297,200,187541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,104,187791,2,0,P|383:58|369:11,1,98.9999969787599,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,98,188291,6,0,B|181:106|181:106|122:72|122:72|56:83,1,197.99999395752,14|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
105,192,189041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
59,301,189291,2,0,B|109:311|109:311|153:290,1,98.9999969787599,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,240,189791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
316,345,190041,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,295,190291,6,0,P|451:250|384:133,1,197.99999395752,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
270,124,191041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
339,27,191291,2,0,L|447:12,1,98.9999969787599,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,134,191791,2,0,L|346:235,1,98.9999969787599,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,124,192291,6,0,L|203:37,1,98.9999969787599,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,33,192791,1,0,1:0:0:0:
25,132,193041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
25,252,193291,1,4,0:3:0:0:
90,351,193541,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,338,193791,2,0,L|270:260,1,98.9999969787599,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,313,194291,6,2,P|468:252|449:159,1,197.99999395752,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
327,69,195041,1,4,0:3:0:0:
327,69,195291,2,2,P|308:162|381:223,2,197.99999395752,4|0|14,0:3|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Didn't fix the wiggle, because the vocal are much more clean there than when I used wiggles. Fixed all the silenced sliderends, the rest is not my parts :3 Thanks!
Topic Starter
Mao

Baraatje123 wrote:

Hi
[General]
Why did you use soooo many sliderwhistles? They kill my ears Vocal holds.

[Storyboard]
Consider adding the collab names in the SB for TR difficulty
Consider making the heart appearing a hitsoundtrigger. So it only appears when the object is pressed. That way, when you miss on the end, you also don't get the heart
Edit: Ermm, what is the point in white.jpg if you use it for the color in the BG. Why does it display five nights at freddy's?
The SB stuff is up to Bakari but Desp and I never do SB names if we both collab.

[Average]
01:18:291 (1,2) - Not completely symmetrical
01:30:291 (1,2,3) - As the piano is just 1/1, the polarity here feels really weird. try the same rhythm as you did in 01:12:291 (4,5) - I'm following vocals here ._.

[Tough]
00:54:041 - Add a circle to follow the "A" in the vocals I was considering this but I decided against it as I didn#t want to increase the density any further.
00:58:041 (4,6) - Consider blanketing those (properly)
01:02:291 (4,5,6) - Doesn't look nice. Try this Why doesn't this look nice? Looks alright to me.
01:06:541 (2,3) - Not aligned properly
02:33:291 (3,4) - The tail of (4) is closer to (3) then the head of (4) is. I hope you remember Magma Dan :P

[Twin Robotic]
00:25:541 (4,1) - Not aligned properly
00:28:791 (2) - Why not Ctrl HJG and move to around 388:40? Seems to flow better I didn't want a wavy flow but a more "hilly" one here as she repeats it rather abruptly.
00:35:791 (3) - Silence end? ✓ For all the others as well
02:51:291 (3,4) - A bit too curved. Reduve the curve (Tryo to make (4) blanket with (1), then copy it over) Slider's can't be too curved /w\

Call me

Stjpa wrote:

Gotta try ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Dein BG ist nicht 1366x768 8-)

Average

00:28:291 (1,2,3) - Denke das hier wäre eine bessere Lösung, da man das Blanket von (1) und (3) nach wie vor behält und dazu noch den Flow von (2) -> (3) verbessert. Würde am Flow um ehrlich zu sein nicht viel ändern und das ganze ergibt ein halbes Sechseck.
00:32:291 (1,2) - Mich triggerts ja etwas, dass eine Silbe auf dem Slidertail von (1) liegt. Evtl könnte man das Pattern in das hier ändern?
00:54:291 (4,5) - Könnte man auch ohne Probleme blanketen. Sieht einfach so viel besser aus. >_> Wieso sieht das besser aus? Das ist ein gleichschenkliges Dreieck aus Tail, Head und Circle o:
01:14:041 (6,1) - Bin ich blöd oder sind die nicht ganz gestackt?
01:15:291 (2,3) - Fix blanket, ziemlich visible imo.
01:35:041 (2,3,4) - Das ganze Pattern hier ist von den Transitions her sehr questionable imo. Wenigstens n Blanket wäre cool, auch wenns zu 99% deine Absicht war. Uhm, ist doch eigentlich recht simpel zu treffen o:
02:52:291 (1) - Vielleicht etwas rotaten und überhalb von (5) platzieren? Triangles sind super! Möglicherweise kannst du dann auch die Pattern danach etwas ändern, weil es so aussieht als hättest du da ziemlich Platzmangel gehabt. :^) Der gerade verlauf von 1 ist der gespiegelte Verlauf von dem repeat slider vorher, weshalb ne Art Spiegelsymmetrie entsteht.


Tough

00:16:541 (2) - 1/2 Slider + Circle wäre meiner Meinung nach passender weil die Silbe auf deinem Slidertail dann besser emphasized wird. Das verbindet die Silben des "okay"
00:33:041 (2,4,5) - Eventuell ein besseres Triangle aus dem Slidertail und den 2 Circles?
01:30:291 (1,2) - STRG + G covered die Vocals viel besser. Nice ✓
02:00:791 (5,6) - Blanket? Symmetrie.
02:35:791 (8,3) - Stack? Kann aber auch gut sein, dass mein Client manchmal Stacks nicht richtig anzeigen möchte. >_> Das sieht man ingame nichtmal ._.
02:38:291 (4,5) - Würde ich aus diesem Zweck eher etwas weiter unten platzieren, müsstest dann nur eventuell den Slider danach etwas rotaten / anpassen, damit der noch reinpasst.

Zur letzten Diff finde ich nicht mal was, was man eventuell verbessern könnte. Rip me. Kann deine Maps wie gesagt nicht wirklich gut modden. :P
Thanks for the mods guys. Also changed the mp3 once again! /w\
riffy
Why would I make players miss the heart just because they didn't perform well in the map? the SB is meant to go like that through the song, it doesn't have to be based on players' performance. Also, I don't really see any issues with the bugged preview, but it wouldn't hurt to have it fixed. white.jpg

Thank you!
Topic Starter
Mao
Updated!
Bara-
Okay then
Topic Starter
Mao
Thanks <3
Mekki
yayyyy
Auxent
gogogo! <3
Wafu
[General]
  1. Both iTunes and Marina's official shop call the song I Am Not a Robot rather than I Am Not A Robot, so change would be sensible to keep it consistent. About And/and - both should be correct as she apparently used both.
  2. There could be some tags related to the music. She's arguably Pop singer, so that could be set in Genre, but The Family Jewels is highly indie piece, so "indie" could be added. Also "the" is useless in tags, search will take "the" from artist, so it's just duplicated.
  3. Tough and Twin Robotic diffs should probably have Widescreen Support enabled to give full experience of the storyboard just as Average. Background is 16:9, so why limit it to 4:3 on two diffs.
  4. I won't force anything, but the transparent.png in my opinion could have better resolution because it could be too pixelated on high screen resolutions (and everyone likes smooth stuff). I managed to reduce file size of other images (e.g. white doesn't need full color range etc.) and to make new version of the transparent.png. Additionaly, I made some little optimizations in .osb, like fixing oversized elements that were only increasing SB load (not by that much, but by about 0.8 or so, minor). If you are interested in improvement, you may use this: http://puu.sh/nYgdz/8ad0b7e99a.zip
[Average]
  1. 01:38:277 - The point seems to make no sense.
  2. 00:27:277 - It seems like you missed a whistle and added it on 00:27:777 (5) - instead.
[Tough]
  1. The combos are too long (like most of them are twice as long as the harderst difficulty - both by time and by count), I think you should modify it a little so the easier difficulty doesn't give less HP than the harderst one.
[Twin Robotic]
  1. 00:00:277 - I don't think the point is needed here. You don't even map the part.
  2. 00:28:277 (1,2,3) - This sounds very weird to me. Maybe the volume of slider ends is too loud because they don't end on any sound. I recommend to remake it completely to regular rhythm or lowering the volume on the ends.
  3. 01:27:652 (5) - I sort of understand those 3/4 sliders, like, they don't make that much sense, but at least the voice is prolonged, so you might say it goes with the vocal, but this clickable object doesn't follow anything, but requires you to click. I recommend to remove this note.
Call me back.
riffy
Thanks a lot for your work with the SB, it definitely does look better. Can we please update the strobyboard?
Yuii-

Mao wrote:

Sure? Her website lists it capitalized o:
http://marinaandthediamonds.com/thefamilyjewels.php
Yeah, Wafu. I thought that A shouldn't be capitalized but then Mao linked this.
Wafu

Yuii- wrote:

Mao wrote:

Sure? Her website lists it capitalized o:
http://marinaandthediamonds.com/thefamilyjewels.php
Yeah, Wafu. I thought that A shouldn't be capitalized but then Mao linked this.
Oh w/e. You know, Spotify is retarded - don't get me wrong, it just prompts you to register and stuff before you can see song titles, unless you get a direct link like this. Otherwise when Googling, it would direct me to this. That makes it very uncomfortable and after checking 2 different (and official) pages, I thought there won't be difference.

Thanks for mentioning this. :)
Topic Starter
Mao
So what to do with the title? Anyways, I have applied everything but muting the slidertails as they are a) already down to 5% and b) they emphasize the -ed of "loved". Waiting for Desp to apply something in his part now.
Wafu

Mao wrote:

So what to do with the title? Anyways, I have applied everything but muting the slidertails as they are a) already down to 5% and b) they emphasize the -ed of "loved". Waiting for Desp to apply something in his part now.
Just choose what fits to you, either "A" that is used on official Spotify, or "a" that is used on official shop and iTunes, depends on you.
Bonsai
>waiting for Mao telling me whether I should irc- or forum-mod
>meanwhile another BN comes by lol
well anyways I bookmarked the stuff I wanted to point out but forgot and updated so those are gone, so I'm just listing the few points that I noticed on a quick look before the qualify happens ^^
Twin Robotic:
  1. 01:01:027 (3,4,5) - Did you accidentalli rotate this slider by 180°? Bc right now it flows rather uncomfortable / gives the head a lot of emphasis, but when you rotate it's also blanketing (3) nicely and you then have to drop out of the slider's flow to get to (5) which represents the 'new line' good imo
  2. 01:26:277 (1,2,3) - to me this looks kinda weird, why not make (1,3) line up?
  3. 01:46:027 (4,1) - This is the most emphasized jump in the whole map, since it's the biggest one together with 00:54:027 (5,1) but on top of that there's the sharp turn of direction on the head of (1) which makes it play really harsh, and that together seems bit too much relative to the rest of the map imo (maybe just deleting (4) would work?)
  4. 02:40:027 (5) - NC?
  5. 03:00:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - somewhere in this combo there should be a NC too, kinda stupid since 03:02:027 (4) is offbeat but maybe put it at 03:02:777 (6) - ?
Tough:
  1. 01:56:777 (2) - 02:04:777 (2) - whistle on sliderbodies since there are vocals?
  2. 02:05:777 - hitnormal missing here? same in Average
Average:
  1. 00:34:277 - 00:38:277 - 00:42:277 - Why didn't you put Claps here? o:
Yeah that's all, gz on it basically being qualified :D
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