[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Mari . . .
my left hand broken . . . in fact, i stll can check maps . . . lol

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  [4K Normal]

1. 00:14:056 - reduce 1 note ? . . . like you did on next pattern 00:15:427 - same clap right ? sry,a main sound here :p
2. 00:25:027 - ^ same
3. 00:41:656 - 00:43:027 - 00:44:399 - 00:45:770 - you cann add note here for another sound . . . try that, more get the "feel" imo
4. 00:57:599 (57599|3,57599|2) - i think it's no need 2 LN here, change to single note only . . . and add LN start here 00:57:942 - for express the piano roll
5. 00:59:998 (59998|0) - snap to 01:00:341 - for piano sound . . . and add note here 01:00:512 - for second piano . . . i can clearly hear that in 50/5 playback rate xD
6. 01:10:969 (70969|0) - same as ^
7. 01:13:712 (73712|3) - snap to 01:14:055 - for piano . . . like 01:03:084 -
8. 01:15:769 (75769|2,76455|2,77141|0) - delete . . . for piano "feel" here . . .pls try that, and you can add note here after that 01:17:484 -
9. 01:20:055 (80055|2) - delete . . . and change this to LN 01:19:884 (79884|1) - until 01:20:227 -
10. 01:41:827 - you've missed a note here . . . add note ignore deliberately xd
    
    [4K Hyper]
11. 00:03:084 - why 3 notes here ? . . . it's too much imo, since no cymbal-related sound here strong chord
12. 00:23:484 (23484|1,23484|2) - there's no piano sound here, reduce one
13. 00:56:656 (56656|2) - snap to 00:56:742 - for kick . . . cuz you've already follow kick start in this section 00:56:142 - better for consistency sound
14. 00:57:170 (57170|0) - snap to 00:57:084 - same reason as ^ and then, 00:57:342 (57342|0) - delete that to make those perfectly following kick sound
15. 00:57:599 (57599|1,57599|0) - the long sound is very low, i think no need 2 LN here
16. 01:07:712 - reduce 1 note, no piano sound . . . it just like 01:03:598 -
17. 01:09:169 - & 01:09:427 - add one more note for kick sound :3
18. 01:18:598 (78598|1,78598|2) - why you use 2 notes here ? there is no big sound or piano sound here
19. 01:31:027 - add note in first column,for make it different from 01:31:369 (91369|3) -
    
    [5K Normal]
20. 00:23:484 (23484|3) - delete, there is no piano, or kick sound like 00:24:513 (24513|2) - hithat here XD
21. 00:41:313 - start that, same mod as 4K Normal . . . i lazy to repeat that, cuz i only type with one hand XD
22. 00:57:599 (57599|4,57599|0) - change to single note, and add LN here 00:57:942 - same reason as 4K
23. 01:10:969 (70969|0) - snap to 01:11:312 - for piano , and add note here 01:11:484 - for another piano
24. 01:13:712 (73712|4) - snap to 01:14:055 - like 01:03:084 -
25. 01:20:055 (80055|2) - delete, and add LN here 01:19:884 - like my mod on 4K
26. 01:41:827 - missed a note, add it

i'm sorry . . . only that, i can't type more on this XD
good luck

nowsmart wrote:

hi (sorry for late)
|1|2|3|4|5|

[5K Another]
00:34:970 (34970|2) - move to 4 (drum kit jack)
00:35:142 (35142|4) - move to 1
00:35:227 (35227|0) - move to 4 (drum kit jack)
00:35:399 (35399|3) - move to 1
00:51:342 (51342|2) - move to 4 (why jack here?)
00:56:056 (56056|4) - move to 2
00:56:142 (56142|1,56227|0) - ctrl + j
00:56:142 (56142|3) - move to 5? (drum kit jack)
00:57:342 (57342|1) - move to 4 (no need jack here)
00:57:427 (57427|3) - move to 2 (drum kit jack)
01:03:341 (63341|2,63341|4) - move to 1 and 4
01:03:427 (63427|0) - move to 2
01:03:512 (63512|1) - move to 5
01:03:598 (63598|4) - move to 4
01:08:055 (68055|4) - move to 4
01:08:227 (68227|3) - move to 5
01:08:312 (68312|4) - move to 3
01:09:169 (69169|4,69255|4) - yes, right.
01:15:255 (75255|2,75427|2,75598|2,75769|2,75941|2,76112|2,76284|2,76455|2,76627|2,76798|2,76969|2,77141|2) - re-pattern?
01:18:684 (78684|1) - move to 3
01:24:855 (84855|1) - move to 5
01:24:941 (84941|2) - move to 2
01:30:598 (90598|4,90684|1) - ctrl + j

[4K Another]
there are a lot of unnecessary jacks (don't have a reason to put jack note without sounds that fit the pattern), and no need to make it harder by put jack notes. so i suggest to remove all of jack notes except drum kit sound (some part has drum kit jack sound)
00:46:456 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3656400 (no need jack here)
00:51:770 (51770|3) - delete
00:55:799 (55799|2,55970|1,56142|0) - re-pattern, no need jack. there isn't sound for jack.
00:58:627 (58627|3) - remove
00:59:569 (59569|2,60255|3) - ^
01:03:255 (63255|3) - ^
01:09:598 (69598|1) - ^
01:09:684 (69684|3) - move to 2
01:11:227 (71227|3) - remove
01:14:655 (74655|2) - ^
01:18:512 (78512|3,78598|3,78769|3,78855|3) - what instrument?
01:19:798 (79798|3) - remove
01:20:827 (80827|1) - ^
01:25:027 (85027|1) - ^
01:26:312 (86312|3,86998|0) - ^
01:27:684 (87684|3) - ^
01:28:369 (88369|2) - ^
01:30:512 (90512|1,90684|2,91112|0) - ^
01:32:484 (92484|1) - ^
01:35:912 (95912|1,96598|0) - ^
01:36:769 (96769|2) - move to 2
01:36:855 (96855|1,96941|2) - ctrl + j
01:37:284 (97284|2) - remove
01:37:969 (97969|3,98655|3) - ^
01:39:341 (99341|0) - ^
01:39:769 (99769|2) - ^ (3 notes are enough)
01:42:855 (102855|2) - ^


good luck.

Rumia- wrote:

key : 1 2 3 4 5

[Beginner]
00:31:542 (31542|2,31884|1,32227|2,32570|3) - maybe http://puu.sh/k8mtR.jpg ok
00:56:913 - add ok

[Normal]
00:03:427 (3427|4,3599|3,3770|2,3942|1,4113|0) - ctrl h pitch ok
00:04:456 (4456|4) - ^ ok
00:06:170 (6170|4,6342|3,6513|2,6684|1,6856|0,7199|4,7542|0,7713|1,7884|2,8056|3,8227|4,8570|0,8913|4) - ^ ok
00:24:513 (24513|2) - move to 2 or 4 ok
00:35:570 (35570|3) - snap on red line ok
01:42:427 (102427|1) - ^ ok

[Hyper]
00:23:484 (23484|1) - delete ? dont feel like need 2 note here since u didnt add any of them on other part
00:36:084 (36084|1) - snap on red line no
00:38:999 (38999|0) - move to 4 ok
00:40:970 (40970|3) - delete no
00:56:742 - add a note ok
00:57:599 (57599|1,57599|0) - why end on 1/4 ? ok

[Another]
00:03:084 (3084|4) - why 3 note ? chord
00:10:542 - add a note ok
00:13:113 (13113|3) - whistle move on 00:13:113 (13113|1) - and move this 00:13:113 (13113|3) - up by 1/8 ok
00:17:399 (17399|2,17484|3,17484|4,17656|1,17656|2) - suggest pattern http://puu.sh/k8mWD.jpg ok
00:23:742 (23742|0,23913|0,24084|1,24256|1,24427|2,24599|2) - no sound
01:20:312 (80312|2,80312|4) - i think jack dont fit here , move 1 column left ?
01:43:027 - add

maybe will mod 4k some other time

SanadaYukimura wrote:

阴风
1l2l3l4

Click

[4K Beginner]
00:03:084 - 00:58:969 - 想不到double的理由，因为我听到的音后面都是只有一个 那个“biu”的声音
00:29:827 - 00:24:342 - 00:33:942 - 三个一样啊 好
01:09:598 (69598|1,69941|2) - CTRL+H 不
其他没问题
[4K Normal]
00:35:142 - 漏了个主音，00:34:456 - 这里都有跟 没啊
01:11:484 - 加4，琴
[4K Hyper]
00:23:484 - 不是只有hihat么 好
01:09:084 - img鼓不是全漏了 没抓鼓啊
[4K Another]
太满了看不出来gg gg

gl！
射一发

Sky_Demon wrote:

小摸

4K Beginner
00:35:313 (35313|2) - 砍了 簡單難度放這個太難
00:35:656 (35656|0) - 同時這個放到3

4K Normal
00:12:342 (12342|3,12599|2,12856|1,13113|0,13370|3,13542|2) - 建議改排列 單調
00:24:342 (24342|2,24342|3,24513|2) - NM這樣=作死
00:35:142 - 不建議空著 不是這個加上就是00:35:313 (35313|2) - 砍掉
01:06:169 (66169|3) - 這個不是鋼琴音 你前面沒跟到這個建議砍
01:31:027 (91027|0) - 移到2 好

祝好運

Zan - wrote:

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |

[4K Beginner]
00:29:827 (29827|2,29999|0) - same column?

[5K Beginner]
00:29:827 (29827|3,29999|1) - same column? no
01:09:427 (69427|1) - move this to col2

[4K Normal]
01:02:741 - add one here sry

[5K Normal]
00:46:970 (46970|3) - move to 3
00:52:456 (52456|0) - to 4
00:55:884 (55884|1,56142|0) - ctrl+G
01:02:741 - add one here

[4K Hyper]
01:01:541 - repattern here ok

[5K Hyper]
00:57:942 (57942|4) - move this to col3 better no
01:00:855 (60855|2) - move to col4 ok


[4K Another]
00:13:199 (13199|2,13242|1,13327|0,13370|2,13413|1) - repattern this part ok
01:03:255 (63255|3) - try to move this to column 3
01:19:627 (79627|2,79712|1,79712|3,79798|0,79798|2) - repattern ok

[5K Another]
00:58:627 - 3 here are enough no
01:23:141 (83141|1,83227|3) - ctrl+g ok

shionelove wrote:

1234 12345

[4K Beginner]
00:02:741 (2741|3) - delete,no cymbal or accent sounds there so single is enough imo ok
on the other hand 00:13:713 (13713|1,13713|0) - they are 2 ok
00:23:484 (23484|1) - delete and 00:23:999 (23999|0) - move 4 ok
01:09:427 (69427|0) - 3 ok
01:19:198 (79198|0,79198|2,79884|2,79884|0) - single is enough for me no
[4K Normal]
01:41:655 (101655|0,101998|0) - i don't get point,https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3715914 ok

[4K Hyper]
00:34:970 (34970|3,34970|0,35056|1,35142|2,35227|3,35313|2,35399|1,35484|0,35570|1) - i prefer follow drums,but up to you
00:36:256 - add,there must be sound same as 00:37:627 (37627|0) - ok
00:47:313 (47313|0) - ^
00:50:056 (50056|0) - ^
00:52:799 (52799|0) - ^
00:55:542 (55542|2) - ^
[4K Another]
00:11:227 (11227|1) - delete ok
00:13:242 (13242|1,13327|0,13413|1) - i think you shouldn't follow these sounds this time... ok
00:35:056 (35056|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3720156 imo
00:51:770 (51770|2) - delete,i know it makes inconsistent pattern,but no one notice,and less complain than put jack ok
01:43:198 (103198|1,103198|2) - DELETE PLZ ok

[5K Beginner]
same as 4K beginner,no another issues for 5K(because you made one key diffs and another key diffs following them)
[5K normal]
same as 4K
[5K Hyper]
same as 4K
[5K Another]
same as 4K
especially,01:43:198 (103198|1,103198|3) - DELETE


5K all fixed
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Spy wrote:

Dangerous jiba

Spy wrote:

Dangerous jiba

Spy wrote:

Dangerous jiba