Suggestions
Major suggestions
Aesthetic suggestions
Unrankable issues
when i'm mad i don't notice cute anime girl background baits
normally i wouldn't mention it but that black combo color is exceptionally hard to see for those 100% dim fuckers and even without dim it's pretty hard to see against the monochrome background
Major suggestions
Aesthetic suggestions
Unrankable issues
when i'm mad i don't notice cute anime girl background baits
normally i wouldn't mention it but that black combo color is exceptionally hard to see for those 100% dim fuckers and even without dim it's pretty hard to see against the monochrome background
- 00:30:362 (4,1) - obligatory blanket comment
- 00:42:646 (2,3) - ^
- 01:29:890 (4,1,2,3) - 4,1,2 look like the start of a square pattern but then 3 is way out somewhere. intentional?
- 01:39:339 (1,2) - more blanket comments
- 02:28:000 (1,2) - very close to being a blanket
- 02:28:945 (2,3) - in other parts of the map you take great care to make sure they overlap nearly perfectly. Here you don't. So probably not intended.
- 02:49:260 (9,2) - these are very visibly different despite them being flipped and ctrl+g'd. might want to fix~
- 00:31:780 (4,5) - You could maybe, possibly sacrifice a bit of spacing to let the ending of 4 be centered between 5's start and end while still being slightly off-track?
- 00:40:047 (3,4) - ^ yaeh just an idea
- 01:00:126 (5,1) - these are so close to blanketing
- 01:53:039 (5,1) - ^since its copy+pasted
- 00:28:709 (5) - this slider needs more womanly curves
- 00:32:488 (4,5) - unlike the rest of your sliders that touch eachother (i distinctly remember our mutual friend ziin going "it's only gay if the sliders touch" and now i remember why...), this one isn't perfectly overlapping NOR is it far enough off that it is clearly intentionally put that way. Do one or the other? I think moving it out a bit more would work.
- 01:28:473 (4,5) - these are very close to blanketing
- 01:30:362 (8,9) - ewww the slider ends are touching that's not just gay that's naaaasty